Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
Thanks for the dedication! I'm sooo glad Carl is ok! A double wedding? YES! I don't like what's going on in prison. I got a bad vibe...
As usual, great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks Gina Marie and you are most welcomed to the dedication. I"m honored that such an amazing writer as yourself is reading my work. Reading your work inspired me to try writing you know. Brian will be on top of the situation to protect Justin.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
Bravo Brian to punch him on the nose. Michael's really a stupid man. I hope Angel is the reflection of his name and he has the patience of a saint to handle him. I love Jennifer too.
Well, I know it's recurrent now but I say it even so : You're a great writer, you did a really good job.
I go to the bed too but I don't feel sleepy, I think I'm going to wake up my partner (*grin*).
Good night to you
Big hugs
Gehexan
Author's Response: Thank you very much Gehexan for reviewing this chapter; I'm always looking forward to your review each chapter. You motivate me to write more for you. I smiled at the mention of your partner; I love those moments too.
Hugs Back!
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
sounds like angel got snookered by bid ed a long time ago. hope angel goes straight, not too concerned abt mikie... he still doesn't get it.. angel pegged him right. good though what brian and justin did for mikie.
interesting abt taylor elec, wonder how the recession and all will hit him long term. perhaps brian and justin need an elec store? LOL
great chapter as always. look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much alys for your review and comments. Angel only knew Big Ed but didn't work for him; they just happened to be in jail at the same time. Angel is a good character in the story and central keeping Michael in line. Taylor Electronics is on the verge of going under and our lovers couldn't care less; they might help Craig but not the way he wants them to.
Justin wanted to save Michael's life but Brian wanted to get him away from Big Ed before he got Justin killed. I hope to write the next chapter tonight.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
Excellent ! I'm glad for Carl and Debbie. I hope he's going to retire now. I love Justin dazzles Craig. Yes, man, your son is wealthy and happy. He's a great gay. You disowned him, how idiot can you be. Go, Jennifer, ram the point home !
Great job
Author's Response: Thanks Gehexan very much for this review. You might like the start of the next chapter too.
I have to sleep now and write tomorrow.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
Loved this chapter! I can't wait to read more. Looking forward to the next chapter. I know this might seem evil, but I kinda hope Mikey fucks up because I would love to see Brian kill him. I'm evil I know, but I would like angel spared of course. He seems like a good person.
Sweet dreams!
Author's Response: Thanks VG24 for commenting and reviewing. I feel you about Michael, and Angel's cool. They will be a side scene from time to time but not center to the story for a while. B/J have good things going on. Gotta sleep tonight.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 9: Family Part Two
Shit, Carl ! And you stop right there ! It's a good thing I mustn't wait for an update. I hope for Debbie he gets over it.
It's a super good chapter, as usual. (The whole story is brilliant). Joan and Claire have got some nerve after all they have spat in Brian's face. And Craig (grin)... No, really, I love it
You have a great talent, Jt
Gehexan
Author's Response: Carl almost finished his career without getting shot. Thank you for the compliment; I appreciate your comments.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 8: Family Part One
Between visiting hours in ICU and looking after a small 6 years old boy who doesn't understand very well why he can't see his ‘ama' (mum in basque) for the moment, the time flies. Well, tonight, he's with his daddy and tomorrow, with my brother and my fathers (good luck, men !) so I can have a break and make up the delay... Hey, 4 chapters (marathon reading and marathon comment for me).
It was a pleasant update. I'm happy for all the good news. I can't wait to see what happens next, so I go on with the story
Great job,
Thank you for this
Gehexan
Author's Response: Just woke up and found your review; thank you! Glad your free and can read and I really do appreciate the chapter comments very much. The story is getting a life of its own now.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
Nice.. I love the way Debbie went Lorena Bobbit on Carl.. and how Jen rubbed it in to Craig about how much money Justin and Brian really have... I have mixed feelings about Michael... but.. I guess he doesn't deserve to die for being.. a F@#king clueless, whiney, pain in the ass, big-mouth sex-offender......
Author's Response: HA! I love your comments; I had forgot about Bobbit until you mentioned her; Michael has a long way to go before he deserves to be free and he isn't the brightest lamp on the porch.
Reviewer: Sandy (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
Just started this story, but love it already. Wonder if Brian and Justin are making enemies as they go. Michael and Todd are both mad as wet hens. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you; enjoy the story.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
take a nice nap Jt. Loved the new chapters. stupid michael never learns to keep his big mouth shut.. at least carl will be okay. this story is getting really exciting now...
Author's Response: I had a great nap and will sleep tonight too. I need more sleep still. Yes, the story is warming up.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
michael isn't worth the money that brian spent, but justin is too important to brian to let anything happen to him. brian is a better friend than michael ever could be.
angel is lucky, he better do good.
Author's Response: Very well said sjmpets3 on all counts. Brian was very concerned about Michael saying the wrong things to very bad people. You're right; it was about protecting Justin. Thank you for reviewing very much.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
justin is so evil sometimes. to have jenn talk to craig and rub justin success in his face. yay.
glad carl is going to be fine.
Author's Response: The conversation between Jenn and Craig just happened; honest! hehehehe
Carl is going to be fine and get into the grandfather business now full time. Thank you very much!
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
hilarious how nice craig is being, obviously an act for the tvs sale. hope Angel isn't too nefarious to plan to hurt justin or the gang.... no idea where else you might take this line. love how you're continueing mikie in jail although except for him accepting his lot or instigating bad things I don't know where you could take this. can't wait to find out how everything evolves. glad carl is okay.
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting alys! I can say Angel is ok. I hope to hear from you in the next chapters that answer your question on the plot direction.
Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
i just read 10 and 11. both were great.
Author's Response: Thanks darkraven for telling me. I have to sleep for a while and write again later today.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
wow...jennifer REALLY rubed it in...mikey, mikey, mikey what can i say. why am i getting the fealing he's going to be stupid enough to try something while in hideing.
Author's Response: I love Jennifer very much. Craig deserved her reading his beads. You are very perceptive about Michael but Angel isn't stupid and it will be fun to watch how it unfolds.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
WOWWWWWWW!
This is your best story JT. Shit is getting intense big time!
Author's Response: Thank you Dave. One has to wonder if Michael fucks up or not. Hummm.........
Reviewer: benfam (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 8: Family Part One
l'm sorry, but that stuff with Jerry just ticks me off. Anyone, gay or straight who thinks they are in a monogamous relationship is going to be outraged to discover their partner is being unfaithful. So Brian's patronizing 'wives won't understand it' comment is ridiculous. How would he know? Does he have a wife? He didn't take it too kindly when Justin was running around on him with another man, l'd like to see his face if it was a woman. Jerry's comment ' l love my family' Rubbish..Have the decency to tell the woman, the mother of his children the truth. Let her make an informed choice of who she is sleeping with. l thought Justin and Brian were all about 'Truth and not hiding" l feel this chapter lost me. Good with Michael and Lindsay
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
Great chapter... Carl will be ok and Craig got to feel like two cents..... one question.. why would Brian be Carl's emergency contact..doesn't he have 2 children ???
Author's Response: Carl's kids live out of state. He didn't want Debbie to get the call first. He trusted Brian to handle it wisely informing friends and family. Thanks for commenting BluvsJ.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
yes carl will make it...... lmao about craig... let him have it jennifer. :D
Author's Response: Nicole, you're going to love the next chapter. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
The part with Craig had me LMAO.
Boy you can write a story. This is uber fun man.
Author's Response: Thank you very much Dave for your review and compliment. I'll write more this weekend.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 7: Black Dumpling
Due to your comment, I went ahead & read the reviews instead of waitng until tomorrow.
Hmm, I was a little bothered by the prison scenes w/ Michael but it was supposed to be unpleasant. Brian & Justin just seem to be more in character w/ the show than a lot of other stories. Justin & Jerry didn't bother me at all, completely understood.
Wow, I'm more surprised w/ some of the reviews......
You just keep doing what you do and once again, thank you for sharing it w/ us!
Author's Response: Thank you very much Susan for your great review. Michael had to pay; it could have been with his life. This chapter did create one major shit storm for me and my first one star rating and several eights. That's new for my stories. The irony is, that chapter also won the blue ribbon award too. Thanks so much for supporting my plot and understanding B/J helping Jerry out.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
Hee hee!! Craig must feel like the biggest heel in the world next to Michael! Being a mean old shit to his son with his snide remarks and come to find out his kid made 4.5 million dollars in one day!
I'm glad Carl is going to be ok. BUT, I hope nothing happens to Justin. I'm afraid of what that Angel person is thinking.
Author's Response: Thank you oh so much for your review Kat. Later you'll find out Craig has major money problems now. Angel didn't get that nickname making bad things happen. You'll see his idea next chapter.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 8: Family Part One
Nice chapter, glad Brian & Justin will now have Gus. Also like the name change.
Author's Response: Thank you very much Susan. I promised happy chapters for a while.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 9: Family Part Two
Dude! Not Carl!! He has to be ok, this is just too much for poor Debbie to handle.
OK, I was lmbao when Michael got that scanned copy of the Marvel million dollar check made out to Justin. That was hilarious!!! I had to read it twice!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much Kat for your review. Read on and see how things turn out. I don't leave cliffies up very long. I loved the check scene too very much; (evil grin as I typed it) :P
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
Glad Carl is ok. Brian really know how to handle Debbie. Yiipeeeeeeeee!!! I can hear wedding bell!!! (very soon, I hope).
Hahahaha, suck to be you Craig.
What is Angle going to do to Sunshine?!! Fasten your seat belt, coz it is gonna be a bumpy roller coaster ride.
Bravo. Hugs & kisses.
Author's Response: Thank you very much complicated for your review. Craig is stompted into the ground mentally now. There is a reason his nickname is "Angel".
Hugs Back! xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 7: Black Dumpling
Interesting chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you very much Susan. If you read the reviews you'll see the major shit storm that chapter caused. It also won me the blue ribbon award for excellence in writing. Thank you so much for being my reader and reviewing each chapter. Much appreciated.
Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
Nice! A much better ending then the last chapter! I love stories where Brian and Justin are a power couple you know on top of the world no one can touch them <3 update soon!
Author's Response: No problem Ashley; after catching up answering reviews I'm starting the next chapter tonight.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
Oh my god! Excellent chapter! I'm glad that Carl is going to be ok. I hope Angel doesn't get Justin/Brian hurt.
XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: Thank your very much VG24. Angel has a good plan; next chapter you'll see how.
Reviewer: BlindDreamer (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
Damn that was fast,lol! Sweet sweet revenge on Craig, am seriously loving it!
Its good to see Michael accepting responsibility for what he's done, even if it is way too little way too late.
Now shoo! Go get some sleep,lol.
Author's Response: Danke BlindDreamer for your review. I try not to leave my readers with a cliffie for very long. Craig's in debt up to his eyeballs and not worth shit financially. I can't sleep now; slamming extra stength 5 hour energy drinks and on a writing marathon now. That's my way and I'm known for very fast updates and writing novels in record time. It's my style.
Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2009 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 5: Here Comes the Judge
Wonderful chapter. A tissue warning would have been good so I didn't have to stop in the middle of reading to go get them. Write fast please.
Author's Response: Thank you very very much Lorie! A call for a tissue warning is a high compliment. I created strong emotions in a reader and I'm honored you felt that way. I may have to sleep for a day and then write the next installment. I hope you know I only write one novel at a time and give it ALL my attention. I wrote "Embraced" in under 3 months and it's the longest novel on MW.
Reviewer: ali (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2009 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 5: Here Comes the Judge
BRILLIANT!!!!!!!! no need for me to say owt else.
waiting with baited breath for the next bit
ali x
Author's Response: *Takes a bow to his audience* Thank you for letting me know. These reviews are really important to me to write more.
Reviewer: inkedkelt (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 5: Here Comes the Judge
Yeah! Nothing like a good dose of vengance!
Author's Response: Thank you inkedkelt! I'm glad you like it. It was a major chapter with many many hours to produce.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 5: Here Comes the Judge
wow, sap sings....
wonderful that justin woke up and remebered everything. hope deb, ben and hunter do okay and recover from michael's betrayel
Author's Response: Thank you very much alys. Sap is so stupid when he gets high. He braged about it. The family won't miss Michael but his nightmare has just begun.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2009 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 5: Here Comes the Judge
WOWWWW talk about an exciting chapter.. i love this story.. i'm glad michael got what he deserved, i have a feeling he has something to do with that poor dead boy.. i'm glad justin is alright...
can't wait for some more....
Author's Response: Thank you Lesley. I'm totally faged out with writing. I have to sleep. Next chapter in about two days perhaps. I'm glad you liked it. I worked very hard on it.
Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
wow, dramatic, i love the story and look forward to reading more
good work, thought Justin has to be one of the least luckiest guys on the planet
Author's Response: Thanks for the review siren. Justin's luck will soon be way better than he bad luck by far. Good times are coming.
Reviewer: . (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
love reading this story so much. even though it is is cery sad these things are happening, i hope u will still make it all right in the end. cant wait for great chapters to come thanks again
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm known for a wild roller coaster of a story with happy endings. The goods times are just around the corner.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
Ooh wauwww this is so good.
Poor Justin not in a coma again, please.
Author's Response: Marny, your my 100th review so the next chapter is dedicated to you! I promise a happy ending to an intense chapter going up later today.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
OMG!! Poor Justin! It'll take every cop in PA to keep Brian from killing Michael.
Author's Response: Yes it does Kat. I'm working on the next chapter and my beta will have it done about 12:30 Pm today Central time zone USA. My research is making the writing slow but good. I'll need these hours to write the next chapter. I want my medical facts and laws right; this is as real as life gets. I promise an intense chapter, many bad guys go down, and a very happy ending; the beginning of a wonderful high period for our lovers.
Spoiler Alert!: Have no fear. Justin is strong but he'll barely make it.
Reviewer: Raya (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
I didn't know he had to cum to pass on stuff, I thought pre-cum would spread them too so thanks for answering that, you learn something new everyday, lol.
Author's Response: There is a very small risk. Oral sex with a positive man is safe if he doesn't cum in your mouth and you swallow it. There is very little virus in pre-cum usually and the mouth is very hostile to the virus. If Justin has no torn tissues in his anus there is not risk at all. Thanks for your interest. I have many friends who are HIV positive and several in magnetic relationships (+ and -). In truth it's very hard to catch HIV. The positive person has to have a high viral load too for serious exposure. They can clean sperm and the man can be father.
Reviewer: Raya (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
I hope Justin wont catch anything from Michael, they really didn't need to let him put Justin at risk to prove he is a psycho. Hopeing Justin will be ok.
Author's Response: Since Michael didn't cum Justin is safe from HIV infection; maybe Herpes which I can say Michael doesn't have. This is not the end of the legal wheels or arrests tonight. Michael's rats on everyone who knows.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
crap mikie had to swing....
anywho love how mel is coming home, deb is watching the kiddos, kinnetic is working together rather than internal fighting. can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you very much alys for your review. I'll post the next chapter ASAP.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
OMG! My head is spinning! I swear no one tells a tale like you! I just caught up on this story and WOW! So much going on, I don't know where to begin! I'll just say this, Love Justin working at Kinnetik, fuck Lindsy, fuck Michael, and God I hope Justin is ok! Another great story!
Author's Response: Thank you Gina Marie. I'm doing my best to earn another Blue Ribbon Award. I truly believe this story will be better than Embraced by a country mile. I have tons of ideas for this story and I'm very motivated to write a masterpiece. I'm working on the next chapter now.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
Love it! Thanks for fixing some of the mistakes. It looks better now and I can totally picture Gus saying those things.
Author's Response: Thank you Vikinglass24. I might sometimes post a chapter and repost it with corrections so my readers get an update as soon as possible.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
Oh my god! What is with the cliffhanger? I loved this chapter though.
Author's Response: What can I say? I'm an evil writer for doing a cliffe. Writing the next chapter now and hope to post it later tonight. Thanks for your review VG24.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
So far it is...i can't wait fro the next chapter.... you have officaly got me hooked..
Author's Response: Thanks nicole; I'm writing the next chapter now.
Reviewer: Yaz (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
Evil Evil Evil person. I hate cliffhangers. Brilliant, fantastic. No wait Fucking fantastic more please. :) sorry for the language :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review Yaz. I promise a fast update.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
fantastic chapter... ohhh michael is in shit deep trouble now...can't wait to see what happens now..
Author's Response: Thank you very much Lesley for your review. I'm creating the next chapter tonight.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
OMG....run michael run....i think i'm going to reach though my computer screen.
i think this comes in close second place to Embraced of all the stories you have writen...and little Gus aaaawwww :')
Author's Response: Thanks nicole for your comments. Michael is finished. Justin's in a coma from being hit again in the same place on his head. I hope for this story to be better than "Embraced". I believe I'm off to a great start.
Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
I've just finished reading Forever Yours and I just wanted to say how brave I think you are to take on a subject like child abuse and treat it in such a sensitive and positive manner.
When I read the part where Justin talks to Gus about what has been happening to him, using his little leather bear, I found it really moving and I found I had a lump in my throat all through the various scenes.
I am waiting to read the next part to see how the story develops and how Brian reacts to Justin's confession that a similar thing happened to him when he was a young child.
Thank you again
Eileen
Author's Response: Thank you Eileen for your review. I did a lot of research for that chapter on child abuse. It wasn't an easy chapter to write but it was important to set up the stage for the story. I hope to have the next chapter posted tonight.
Reviewer: BlindDreamer (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
Loved it! I do hope that Mel at least stays in contact with Gus, hes gonna need all the support and love he can get :( An added boon would be if JR and Mel really became a constant in BJ and Gus' life...nothing, well almost nothing, would frost Michaels cookies more than his daughter looking at Justin as a parental figure, I can just imagine his reaction,lol.
I hope that Lindsay doesn't try to get off with a psyche defense, crazy bitch though she may seem, she knew what she was doing,huh.
Was definitly not expecting that from Justin, though given his active and healthy sex life with Brian its clear that he dealt with it and put it behind him. I think it would be a good idea to have Gus at least meet with a couselor, though Justin can relate and help Gus tremendously, the big difference is Justin was abused by a cousin, not a parent. Not that what happened wasn't awful, but they are two different situations.
Will there be any fallout from the art department situation?
Great chappie, can't wait to see what you have for us next!
Author's Response: Thank you BlindDreamer for the detailed review. I'm getting very excited about this story myself. The response has been amazing for me and very inspiring. I almost have the next chapter ready for my beta and should get it posted later today.
Reviewer: Maddy (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
This is a really interesting story. I'm glad Larry called Brian rather than go along with Michael's plan. Not to sure about Justin's revelation that he was sexually abused at Gus' age, but it will be interesting to see where you go with it. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thanks Maddy for commenting. Justin understands what Gus has gone through and was best able to handle it during the discovery phase and later with his recovery.
Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
i love the story so far, very dramatic and real-life, good work
Author's Response: Thanks siren for your comment. I do appreciate knowing readers are affected.
Reviewer: Poppieshaze (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2009 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
Wow, it's getting uglier each time, but i can't stop reading! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Thanks Poppieshaze for your review. Next chapter will be very soon as I'm writing it now.
Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
Wow angst overdose. I'd love to see some major daddy sonnyboy bonding time soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks Tiffany; your wish shall be granted real soon.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2009 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
Didn't see all this coming. I just need to stop being surprised/shocked with your stories!
Before I get to the serious stuff, truly enjoyed the new, refreshing working environment in the art department. Very nice.
Now, Linds as lost her mind but I know she'll be taken care of, yet another thing I enjoy about your stories; JUSTICE.....Looking forward to Michael getting what he deserves as well.
Gus is so cute & sweet. Thankfully, kids do have an unique ability to deal w/ & move on from things. Gus should get evaluated w/ a professional just to make sure. You're right though, not everyone needs counseling. He may however, once he's older & completely understands the magnitude of what his mother has done. Then, w/ how he's going to be raised & deal w/ it now & along the way, he may not. So many variables come into play.
Now Justin, goodness, totally wasn't expecting that. I really can't see either one of his parents doing that but certainly not Jennifer, if you're including the sexual abuse. I can see Craig getting physical though.
My head is still spinning, can't even imagine what it was like trying to write this installment.
Thanks once again for sharing with us, and all your time and effort it takes.
Just make sure you're taking care of yourself. I get worried about you.
Author's Response: Thank you so much Susan for such a detailed long review. Your right about Gus and spot on to how I plan to deal with it in the story. Justin was sexually abused by an older cousin who was still a kid too; more like experimentation extreme since they were both children. Justin will reveal more later on about it. I hope to have the next chapter up later today;I've already started writing it.
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
Hey, this story is shaping up really well. I like it a lot. On a critical note, I've read some of your other two novels posted here, and your writing style and technique is really improving all the time. Kudos on the personal growth. (Please please take that as the compliment intended and not that I'm being a condescending bitch, ok? thanks.) Looking forward to more, and super happy that you tend to update impossibly fast!
Author's Response: Thank you very much Kate! That's a true compliment and I do appreciate it very much. I hope to have the chapter done later today.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2009 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
OK... Give us a baseball bat and Lindsey !!! She's completely sick...How can a mother sexually abuse her son ? Gus is so adorable, so smart. Justin is very perceptive (and apparently, he knows what he's talking about...and you, you just stop here.. !!!)
Michael completely screwed up too. We can't wait to see what happens to them. It's so good.
It's a heavy chapter, so heartbreaking but extremely well written...You did good with this part. Really, bravo
Big hugs
Ihintza & Gehexan
Author's Response: Thank you very much Ihintza and Gehexan. I warned you it was a heavy chapter but remember it's only fiction. I really appreciate you detailed review very much.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2009 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 2: Leather Bear
From Ihintza
I blow you a sweet kiss, my dear. A big thank you for your support... Oh, Jt ! You should have seen the mess. I was in tears when I saw the dedicace. Gexan gave me a Kleenex box with your text, I wondered why... OMG, you are so nice
So, I'm a mom and as such, I react very badly to an abusive mom. She's cracked... Poor Gus, fortunately he has two wonderful dads for him.
Excellent chapter and a beautiful banner
Sweet kisses
Author's Response: With so many reviews to answer somehow I missed this one. Thank you Ihintza for your comments. Lindsay has gone nuts and will be out of the picture soon totally. Thanks for your compliment for the banner too. You have a good delivery and wonderful future.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
Wowww I'm glad your back writing a new story. I read all 3 chapters at ones. Great chapters.
Pfff I wanna slap Lindsay and Michael in the face grrrrr. Poor Gus. And please update soon I wanna know who abused Justin as a child.
Author's Response: Thanks Marny for your review and comments. I've revealed in review answers that Justin's cousin, also still a kid, did it to him many times. Justin will go into it more with Brian in the story. Thanks for reading and letting me know you liked it.
Reviewer: Rie (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
Wow so much is happening in this story. I hope Lindsey gets life, I really hate the character in this story. Too bad Mel did't see what was happening. I hope she stays in Gus's life.
I am also glad that Michael will get in trouble. I am looking forward to Debbie's reaction about Michael's crime.
Rie
Author's Response: Thank you Rie for commenting. You will learn Debbie's take on it next chapter real soon.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
Oh my god! I really want to kill Lindsay now. I also can't believe the same thing happened to Justin when he was Gus's age. Was it Craig or Jennifer? I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you Vikinglass24; it was Justin's cousin who was still a kid too, going down on him during babysitting sleepovers. I've revealed this in review answeres.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
That was intense! I never expected Lindsay to be sexually abusing Gus. She needs to put away for life!! I'm glad she'll never get near Gus again.
Thank goodness Larry called Brian, Michael needs to go down too!
Author's Response: Thanks Kat ! Next chapter is just around the corner in cybertime.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
you did good on the abuse part..i liked the way justin got him to use the bear to show him what happend.. gus is one smart child.
Author's Response: Thank you nicole; it was a hard chapter to write and took much research into a difficult subject.
Reviewer: inkedkelt (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
Great chapter! I'm really looking forward to Mikey and Lindsey's demise!
Author's Response: Thanks inkedkelt for your review and all. They are going down hard.
Reviewer: ali (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
Wow that was intense but extremely well written......well done!!!!
I'm really loving this and cant wait for the highs to come :-)
ali x
Author's Response: Thank you ali for reviewing this chapter. The highs are coming; I promise you. Right after we take out the family trash.
Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Thank you darkraven for the review and inspiration.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
OMG... can i pleeeease beat the crap out of Lindsay....or better yet lets put her in a prison reeeealy butchy woman..and tell them what she did. :)
I can sooo see mikey getting caught and saying "but i'm your best friend brian" or spilling the beans about keeping justin's money. thinking nothing of it... laaawd
warning my addiction has officaly kicked in. I am hoooked lol
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing nicole; this was a difficult chapter with loads of reserch first. I'm happy your hooked.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
oh holy crap.. i loved this chapter... can't wait to see michael and lindsay pay the time for their crimes, especially lindsay.. she's just plain sick that women..
Author's Response: Thank you very much Lesley for the review and all. I won't disapoint you.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
OMG.. how sick is Linday to sexually abuse Gus.. because he LOOKS SO MUCH LIKE BRIAN!!! Life in prison is too good for her... and who abused Justin when he was a kid.. Craig??? OMG...
Author's Response: Thanks BluvsJ for posting. Read the review before yours for the answer. It's just another:
"Family Secret"
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
i loved this chapter. any story where michael and lindsay get it gives me so much pleasure. i liked how you used leather bear to tell gus' story. what i can't grasp is the last line.
“I can help him; ….. Brian, the same thing happened to me when I was his age; a lot of times.” who did that to justin?
Author's Response: Thank you very much sjmpets3 for your comments. It's a small detail so I'll let you know it was his older cousin who was also still a kid himself.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
sad but excellant chapter. glad that mel and brian dropped the snarky act w/ each other, she's a great character, always thought linds was the sandpaper between mel and brian's friendship.
you dropped a little bomb there w/ justin at the end.
looking forward to see how these messes are resolved. how mel and ben cope and move on, hopefully w/ new better relationships.
oooooh my what will deb say now abt her precious child? hope she keeps her head and stands by the boys, mel, ben.
Author's Response: Thanks alys for your comments. My stories are a wild roller coaster. The highs are coming soon.
Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
That was heartbreaking :-((((( she's a psycho!!! send her to prison for life
michael is f*cked up as well.
Author's Response: It will be hundreds of moons before either one sees a star again in the night sky. Thanks for reviewing monica very much.
Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
Lindsay is one very sick fucking bitch and Michael isn't much better.
I really like this story.
Author's Response: Thank you edom. I'm going to really give it my all to make this novel good. Thanks for your suggestions. I have a beta but sometimes we miss things. I'll write another chapter real soon.
Reviewer: complicted (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
UWAHHHH!!! I cry my eyes out. My heart go to Gus. KILL HER, KILL HER, KILL LINDS!!! For what she done to Gus HER OWN SON she MUST DIE. Take him down, take Micheal down HARD & FAST!!! What a day for Brian & Justin, so much heartache & so much hurt to deal all at once. Why oh why can't Linds & Mikey see what they doing is hurting so many people all around them. What a stupid fuck.
What with people slamming you down? To me if they does not like your story, what the fuck they reading it at the first place? And like what you said WHATEVER!!!
Thank you for making my day ( although i cry). Keep up the good work & don't forget to take care yourself. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review complicated. I cried too writing it and often had to take a break and compose myself. I promise though, the story will soar as high as the lows are low. Once the two people obsessed with Brian are out of the picture; the happy times begin. I'm known for writing a wicked roller coaster with evil cliff hangers at times. The length of each chapter represents an eposide of the show. Justin will make Gus well; the boy will be fine.
Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 2: Leather Bear
im so angry right now!!! stupid lindsay
Author's Response: Wait until you read chapter 3. Thanks monica.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
Ok... You are as quick as lightning !!! I'm going to print this one, and read it with Ihintza this afternoon... ;)
Later
Author's Response: Fair warning this is a very heavy chapter.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 2: Leather Bear
Thank you for the dedicace. He, he ... I know someone who is going to cry her eyes out, later. I have printed the second chapter, the banner and its description. Nickie did a really great job. Checking your update, my first thought was 'wow, beautiful banner'. With the explanation, my second thought was 'No really, it's a remarkable banner'. Bravo, Nickie
Be a drunk abusive mom suit Lindsey...And the other little creep, Michael, who doesn't even realize he might lose everything with all his machinations, Ben, Hunter, friends, his store... Those two make quite a pair. Make Brian angry isn't the best thing to do....
In the series, I've never been a big fan of Michael and Lindsay ... B & J aside, I preferred Em and Ted but, especially Vic (I like him best) ... For now, this story is all right for me. I know that you're not going to disappoint me with these two ... I am impatient to read more ... I love B & J here
How is the hand ? Take some break if you are in pain, please
Gehexan
Author's Response: Thank you Gehexan for your detailed comments. Give your sister my love. The hand is not bothering me at all. The next chapter will tell much more and will blow you away probably. It took many hours to write it and many tears.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 3: Family Secrets
what do you mean it happend to justin a lot of times.... :-)) rose
Author's Response: Justin went through the same sexual abuse at that age. For Gus he's facing his memories to find the strength to help their son now.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 2: Leather Bear
oh my god... another great start. what is lindsey up to now?? and micheal, little shit. lindsey slapping gus... well, she won´t see gus for any longer.... :-)) rose
Author's Response: Hello rose; thanks for commenting. You must read chapter 3 for how truly bad things are.
Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
Not started to read chapter 3 but i have to say it first............
LOVE, LOVE UR BANNER!!!! ......................
Thanks.........
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 2: Leather Bear
Love Justin's ideas for the art department. You can already feel a huge change in the atomosphere. This is so true to life, one person can really make a difference, good or bad, in an office.
Wow, so Lindsay is the one hitting Gus Gus! Brian is going to flip out when Justin tells him about this. Justin is such a wonderful "step-daddy" to Gus.
Michael is a fool, I'm glad Brian knows him well enough to know he's cookin' something up in the pea brain of his.
Author's Response: Thank you Kat for your comments and review. The next chapter will blow you away.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 2: Leather Bear
Just went through some of the other reviews, I like to see others' thoughts & views once I leave my review & I forgot to tell you I LOVE the banner.
I read the description of it & didn't realize how much thought goes into them. She did a great job.
The banner gets a 10!
Author's Response: Thank you Susan. I'll let Nickie know what you said. She's the best and very talented.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 2: Leather Bear
Mouth hanging open....... Wow, did not see that coming, I should have known it wasn't going to be simple.
This is SO good......
As always, looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks Susan; the next chapter is much worse; words fail me.....
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
LOVE, love, love, love, love, LOVE!!!!! Just what I needed! I'm am going to enjoy this story. SO happy to have you back.
Just make sure you take care of yourself & don't do more than you should. I hope you're feeling better.
Author's Response: Hi Susan! So glad to hear from you and thanks for your rating and comments. This story will be amazing if I do say so myself. I just got an a fantastic banner to match it too. Working on the third chapter tonight and it's blowing me away. INTENSE!!!!!!!
Reviewer: inkedkelt (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 2: Leather Bear
Excellent chapter! I hope you plan on giving Lindsey and Mikey exactly what they deserve! A good buttkicking! Keep it up, I can't wait for updates!
Author's Response: Thank you inkedkelt for commenting. Lindsay and Michael are going to be in a world of hurt soon.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 2: Leather Bear
great chapter.... sounds like both linds and mikie are still 180 from nice. drat. love how deb was helpful in the dinner about dealing w/ gus and the truth. soooo sorry for gus that lins is sooo lying. hope nothing more comes from mikie..... fat chance, excellant how ben put his foot down about bailing out the store.... can't earn 90 a day.... bad manager/owner!
Author's Response: Thanks alys for reviewing and your thoughtful comments of key details. Next chapter is almost done and it will be shocking.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 2: Leather Bear
I love the new banner and if I was Justin I would bitch smack Lindsay as soon as I got a hold of her.
Author's Response: I promise you that's the least you'll want to do to her. Thanks for the banner compliment.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 2: Leather Bear
loveing the banner... what is that a picture of behind gus's picture?
Author's Response: NIckie is the best. I'll post her discription from an email to me.
Green Apples – green apples symbolizes the promise of well-deserved reward and shows the achievement of harmonious balance in your life.
Apples and apple trees are symbolic of the guarantee of immortality in Irish tradition (Brian), and the apple tree is universally esteemed as a holy tree.
Apples also symbolizes love and sexuality. + then the simple fact that Brian loves his apples green (which of course isn’t a coincidence to start with).
Golden Gardenias – Well, you know that one. Justin wants them for their wedding in season five. There is a Chinese legend that says if you lover inhales their scent he’ll/she’ll love you forever.
The swirls and title of the fic together forms an infinity symbol. Infinity, forever… Well, that one was a given if you see it.
I gave the banner a bit grungy edges to symbolize their past. The green in it (the apples) symbolizes a new beginning.
White is as you probably know symbolic for the absolute beginning and black for the end, so the background is light gray (a blend between white and black) to show that they’ve started their journey in life as a couple, but are no where near the end.
The drawing in it is one of mine that I’ve made and scanned. It’s from the “nipple fuck scene” in 107, to hint to the passion and heat that’s been there from the start.
Gus, Justin and Brian are there just because.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 2: Leather Bear
Yipeeee!! Fantastic, more, more, more, I want more. I want to slap Michale so bad!! Hate that man. Glad Gus is back, hope I can dunk Linds head into the toilet bowl, how dare she do that to Gus. Bicth!! Thank you for the excellent job & for make my day.
Author's Response: Thank you complicated for your review and rating. I needed it since some people felt like slamming me down a peg. Whatever. You're going to want to kill Lindsay next chapter.
Reviewer: Raya (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 2: Leather Bear
As if Justin is going to fall for Mikeys crap and do anuthing to betray Brian. Mikey is going to be so disappointed when he realises there is no way to break B/J up.
Considering Brians childhood, I can't see Brian ever forgiving Lindsay for hitting his son.
I am so happy Justin is working at Kinnetik, and that Gus is back.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and for your comments Raya. We have only seen the tip of the iceberg about both Lindsay and Michael. Next chapter tells all.
Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 2: Leather Bear
Love ur story!!!!!!!!!!!!
Brian knows Michael too much and hope Justin will not fall in Michael's evil intention..............
Thanks and more to come.......
Author's Response: Thanks patheticgal. I'm working on the next chapter now and hope to post it tonight.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 2: Leather Bear
lindsay's doing the hitting? omg. and she's back with sam.
micheal is cheating justin out of money and is going to try and get brian to throw him out because michael is going to set someone that looks like brian to go after justin. try to get justin to cheat on brian and then tell brian about it. what an asshole.
love how they work so well together and the way justin is bringing the art department together.
Author's Response: Thank you very much sjmpets3. Lindsay is much worse; next chapter tells all. Michael's plan is meaner than that but catching Justin won't be easy but he's determined. Hopefully I'll give you another chapter tonight if my hand stays good.
Reviewer: BlindDreamer (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 2: Leather Bear
Somethings rotten in the state of Denmark, :( Poor Gus, I can only imagine the kind of partnership that Brian Justin and Mel could form for the kids, especially since Mikeys being such an ass. ow nig of a part do u expect Mel to play in the story? Its funny how Linds was accusing Mel of being an abusive mother, yet picks up her life and leaves JR with the "abuser", without expressing any concern or hesitation at all. That definitley sends up some major red flags, neither Brian or Justin is stupid. I really liked Gus' interaction with Justin in this chapter too, just awesome.
Author's Response: Thank you BlindDreamer for your detailed comments. You are spot on with your vision of the story. The next chapter shows so much more about Linds and Mickey.
Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 2: Leather Bear
Oh, shit. I smell trouble brewing. Lindsay slapped Gus? Fuck, Brian is going to fucking freak.
Michael is a little trouble maker, I hope Brian or Justin stops him before his plan can go anywhere.
Loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you
Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 2: Leather Bear
great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you darkraven. I appreciate your comment very much.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 2: Leather Bear
OMG..... run Lindsay run...i can't wait to see when brian finds out ooo baby ... run Lindsay run
Author's Response: Thanks for the review nicole. You know how much I love to hear from you. If Ted can be a crystal meth addict in canon, Lindsay can be a drunk abusive mom. Brian's not the only one who's mad.
Reviewer: kinneydu (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 2: Leather Bear
Very good. Its nice to see a story where Mel doesn't appear to be the baddie. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks kinneydu. In my story Mel is cool. Lindsay's a mess; a train wreck in the making.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 2: Leather Bear
thank god brian is on to michael, bloody asshole that he is.. michael is in for a rude awakening hopefully... great chapter..
Author's Response: Thank you Lesley. Michael might make the biggest mistake of his life!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 2: Leather Bear
Love it! I can't wait to see what Brian does.
Author's Response: Brian will be in fully protective daddy mode now. Shit will hit the fan.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 2: Leather Bear
Excellente! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you. Let me us this post to tell my readers I have to put up a new chapter in sections so watch for the ending.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
I just come from hospital with a message for you (word for word) : A very nice start, I already like this story. It's a really pleasure reading this chapter. So happy you are back but so sorry for the CTS. Do you use a rigid splint to keep your wrist straight ? Our granny puts her hand alternating 1 minute in hot water and 20 seconds in iced water, during 10 minutes and ends with the iced water. At bedtime, she puts a poultice of clay on the sore and keep it during the night. (I know, it's just an old-fashioned remedy but she says it relieves pain !)... And take some frequent breaks !!!! All my love. Ihintza
Ah, Mother Ihintza (alway on natural, or alternative, or herbal medecine) ;) ! So, No twins for her (luckily), just one but with a lot of serious obstetric complications and this situation needs to be monitored in hospital until the birth (officially for end of August). A major stress for each of us because for the 1st, mom and baby have been put in intensive care unit. Ihintza is the queen of stressful deliveries. Ob, family, medical team, we are all ready.
Gehexan
Author's Response: Thank you Gehexan for bringing me Ihintza's comments. I'm about to post the second chapter now. I'm so sorry to learn about the complications and will send her prayers (my way) for a safe delivery. I guess i assumed twins when she said their were complications. I know hospitals are no fun but it's good she has the constant care. Give her my love and the next chapter. It's dedicated to her.
Reviewer: ali (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
Yay a new story, loving it already!!!
Its good to have you back writing us another story, really looking forward to reading it.
ali
Author's Response: Hello ali! Thanks for the comments. I hope this story entertains you. The next chapter is almost ready.
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
I like this, so far. I'm looking forward to your crazy fast updates!
Author's Response: Thanks Kate for your comments. My left hand is giving me trouble and the chapters will be longer like episodes of the show. Compared to many other writers I'll be quick still "if" my hand lets me.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
Great start.... It was nice seeing you start a new fic so soon... If you ever decide to write a sequel or prequel to Embraced that would be also be wonderful......
Author's Response: Thank you BluvsJ for the review and comments, suggestions,etc. Embraced was the lengh of three books! My heart is in this story now. I only write one novel at a time.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
Nice start, looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
Michael's a prick and Todd is a tool!
Author's Response: Thank you Kat for your review. Michael is just getting started being a prick. There's more about Michael next chapter. Todd's history but he might try to start problems later on. Season Six stories are always a favorite of mine so this plot was spinning in my head for months. No vampires, blood, space, alien insects or trillions of dollars this time; just good old gay loving by our favorite boys and kick ass business successes as a fab team together. Kinnnetik will change for the better with Justin on board and Lindsay will return in the next chapter too. Trouble exists in Munchertown.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
YEA! You have made my wkend!! On my way to bed, & I see on someone's Facebook that you have started a new novel!
Want to welcome you back & let you know it is an extremely wonderful & delightful surprise that you have returned to us so soon!
I will start reading this tomorrow but just had to welcome you back & I AM rating your "sooner than expected" return a 10!
Work/life has been SO crazy, you just don't know how perfect your timing is!
We know how you are, so don't overdo.....
Author's Response: Thank you Susan for your comments. My life has settled down so I'm able to write again. I'm humbled by the response of the first chapter and to find I have so many great fans reading my work. Embraced will be a tough act to follow but I will do my best and try not to over do it; carpel tunnel in my left hand will slow me down some but it can't knock me out.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
Cool. Cool just e-mail me at my g-mail account. I look forward to helping you.
XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: I don't have your email anymore. Please email me first.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
oook so far so good loveing it loveing it... keep it comeing. :)
i need another story addiction.. lol
Author's Response: Hehehehe...glad you like it. Thanks for reviewing nicole.
Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2009 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
Hi JTSecrets!
I loved this story.
You are truly a gifted writer. So, I am going to read more of yours too!
Please keep the story going.
Have a nice summer.
Debbie
Author's Response: Thanks Debbie; I have carpel tunnel syndrome in my left hand from typing the first chatper. That might slow down updates a little but it won't stop me. I appreciate the compliment very much.
Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
great first chapter. hpe you update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks darkraven; I will.
Reviewer: kinneydu (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2009 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
Hey, good start. I am looking forward to the second chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you kinneydu; I'll be working on # 2 tonight.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
Oh my god! I love it! Keep up the great work! My Yahoo! is back up and running if you would like help.
XOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: Good to hear from you VG24. I missed you girl! I hope you like the plot concept and I"d love to get the help.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
I can't believe my eyes ! YOU ARE BACK ! Yeah for the happy dance ! I'm already hooked. I love this start.
Intza is going to jump for joy when she will know it. She's currently hospitalized. I'm going to print the chapter and bring it to her tomorrow. I am sure she's going to have the baby straightaway
You made my day. Thank you so much for posting this
Go JT, you're the best !
Many, many, many, many hugs
Gehexan (so happy)
Author's Response: Thank you Gehexan for the comments and review. This plot was spinning in my head even when I was writing Embraced; I hated how they ended the show. Give Intza my love and best wishes with the kids. Twins right? I hope to have a second chapter up soon but my left hand is killing me with pain so it might slow me down a bit.
Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2009 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
i love your new story JT.
Author's Response: Thanks monica; I hope you enjoy all the novel.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2009 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
so glad to see your back writing. love this story. brian stood up to mikie right away, deb even stood up to mikie. love the whole kinnetic work saga. always new brian was a great boss. looking forward to further chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you alys. In my story they will be an amazing couple on the job and very successful. Together Kinnetik is about to really grow and produce fantastic advertising.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
i love this story already. nice to see you back jt.
Author's Response: Thank you sjmpets3 for your review and rating. I'm glad to be back too. I believe you will like this story.
Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
Hey there Mr. Bob - I knew you couldn't resist writing again - good writers can't stop and you're good - love this one. - Elsa Rose
Author's Response: Hello Elsa! Thanks for commenting and you're so right; I'm driven to write and this plot was spinning in my head months ago. It just made good sense for Justin to head the art department at Kinnetik for the company to do well. I hope you like this story.
Reviewer: inkedkelt (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
I'm so glad you're back!! I loved Embraced and I really enjoyed this first chapter!! I will be looking forward to future updates. Keep up the excellent work.
Author's Response: Thanks inkedkelt for your comments and review. "Embraced" will be a tough act to follow but I'll do my very best to entertain you folks.
Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
That was great. I love the whole idea.
Author's Response: Thanks edom; I like it too and always thought Justin should be at Kinnetik.
Reviewer: Intrigued (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
I only read completed stories, so will wait to start this one. Just had to say how much I appreciate that you can be counted on to actually complete your QAF fics. That's an admirable trait in the QAF fandom, where so many stories are either abandoned, unfinished, or drag out for years before completion.
I'd much rather read one completed, satisfying story than to dip, willy-nilly, into 6 or 7 unfinished ones.
Many, many QAF writers should take a lesson from your shining example, and also from Elsa Rose (our Queen!) who also can be counted on to finish her wonderful pieces.
I'm grateful for the hard work of all our writers, but would like to remind them that a story, by its very nature, has a beginning, a middle, and an end. With no end, there is really no story, at all.
So, thanks for all the creative effort you put into this fandom, and I very much look forward to reading (and enjoying) this new offering!
Author's Response: Thanks Intrigued for all you comments. I'm older and perhaps with more drive to finish what I start. I prefer concentrating on one story at a time and giving it my all. If my first two novels are any example your wait won't be very long. I hope to make this story like separate eposides of the show and each chapter will be fairly long to do that. If it's successful perhaps I'll do a season seven too.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
First chapter and i already love it. thank god justin came home to brian where he belongs. it's about time that brian more or less kicked michael to the curb. i never could stand michael or lindsay for that matter....
can't wait to read some more....
Author's Response: Thank you Lesley for your rating and review. Michael bashing is a favorite pass time of mine and I'm not done putting that whinny man in his place. Lindsay will rear her ugly head and get it handed to her in due time. Kinnetik will become very successful and powerful with the team of lovers in charge. The plot will follow known canon and be a true continuation of the show. No lesbians will be seriously harmed in the creation of this story. hehehehe
Reviewer: stellakinney (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
I have always hated Lindsey and Michael, thank you for having has been brought my boys favorites, love them is, and... Welcome back (I hope that your hand towards soon)
Author's Response: Thank you stellakinney. My hand is good tonight so I should create another chapter soon. I can feel it but typing answers to all these reviews wasn't hard to do so I think I can type a chapter this evening. I hope you enjoy season six of QAF the way I wanted them to do it.
Reviewer: boltgirl426 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
YAY! So excited to see a new story from you! I'm already loving this one and cannot wait to see how it progresses. More soon please? :)
Author's Response: Thank you boltgirl426 for commenting. Just as soon as my damn left hand stops cramping from typing the first chapter I'll write some more real soon. The success of Embraced will be a tough act to follow but I'll do my best.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
OMG!!!!! LOVEEEEE the story. I am having so much fun reading it. This gonna be my fav. I can't wait for the new chapter.
Love you so much, your story always make my day.
Author's Response: Thanks complicated for your review very much. I promise to write often and hopefully very well for you. This is how I think the love story of Brian and Justin should have gone. They will make an amazing team in advertising.
Reviewer: Sky (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
Only one Chapter and i alredy love this Story, please update realy soon!
Author's Response: You got my review cherry for this story! Thank you for commenting. My left hand is killing me so I can't write more today but I do post chapters really fast and only write one novel at a time. And I always finish a story so don't fear reading as I write it. I love your penname too (Sky).
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