loved this chapter but how can you just stop here? :-)) rose

Author's Response:

Um...because I'm evil?  "-)   I'm working on the next chapter now.  Thanks for commenting rose!  So happy you liked this chapter.

first of all lets take a look at genie. going for who or  what she knows will be best for her to make it out alive, gotta give her credit for that. angry at someone who's different from her, what a bitch.

shane, trying to make it easier for josh to be himself. that's great. josh reminds me of 17 year old justin. making a stand for himself to be himself.

duece, yeah seriously has it bad for cujo. if only cujo knew then jake would be number 2 and there'd be another body nobody would want to claim.

big mike, how they gonna take him out of the picture?

now that justin "took out" shane, what's going to happen with "lennie"?

they're plotting to take care of carter behind jake's back. not a good sign for either of them.

frantic sex is hot between them. always was always will be.

my favorite line in all of this:  "No amount of daydreaming about Brian was going to make that happen." if genie only knew.

Author's Response:

Genie is a creature of survival, can't really blame her for that. She's not homophobic like the others, she is just looking out for number one, herself.  I'm glad you like Josh, he'll play a bigger role in the next chapter, and he does remind me of a young Justin too.  I haven't decided what to do about Big Mike yet...   Lucas will be fine, they'll forget about him now. They got much bigger fish to fry.  And so glad you liked the 'raw' sex scene. Some people get offended by it, but hey, it's fiction and it's B/J!  lol

So glad you're back!  *hugs* As always, thank you so much for being such a bigger supporter of my stories!

For someone whose muse is being difficult this chapter rocked. It made me experience a whole gamult of emotions and just as I'm enjoying some hot B/J interaction you leave me breathless with angst about the next chapter.

I hope you are feeling better soon. x

Author's Response:

Thanks cherub68....this flu is kicking my ass, as well as RL. I'm glad you liked this chapter.  I love writing hot raw sex between b/j   :-)   Glad you enjoyed it. next chapter, things come to ahead, and a surprise awaits.  Thank you so much for commenting!

 Those gays are really dangerous but what worries me is what human stupidity can do!

 

Genie is really a little b****! She is the only girl in this group (and a slut) so she know how to play them. What she want she gets  but if she don’t  she will be a dangerous cunt and this will be a big and negative factor in the future…I think. The homophobic element is only marginal because her concerns is the power over the others or what interests her but probably in ‘another  place’ this factor would be useless at this point and she would be the freak/looser.

 

Uh huh...stop with the babbling! :P

 

Great chapter Maria!!! :)

 

I hope you feel better soon!

 

 

 

*BIG HUGS*

Author's Response:

Thanks kika!  You are dead on about Genie, she don't care about any motives other than her own...she wants power, period.  And she is trouble.  And you are also dead on about human stupidy, always a dangerous thing.

This case will be wrapped up in the next chapter, with some surprises. So glad you liked this chapter, thanks for commenting!

 

In the ranking system, 1 is low and 10 is high. Reading your comment I'm pretty sure you didn't intend to rank this story and author a 1 so I changed it.

~JTS, admin

Quite understandable with the delay in chapters but as usual worth the wait. Shit this fic is reaching epic proportions, I just didn't expect all of this Shane's kidnapping and fake murder damn Brian's boy can act the part. I wonder how they are going to play out Shane's death and how Josh is going to react to it? Genie is even more of a danger than Cujo himself, she knows how to play all the fences the dumb ones are always the one to watch out for. Thank god Justin can read her for what she is I mean she is willing to trick someone to hurt someone who is mentally challenged.

Once again Brian shows his love and concern for Justin on so many levels that even go beyond what he thinks he should feel for a person. Damn these two.

 

Excellent Chapter hope you feel better

Author's Response:

Thanks Vision, this flu is kicking my ass.  I'm so glad you 'got' this chapter.  Genie is very dangerous, and who will Josh, and others' react to the news of Shane's death?  Hopefully, it won't be another month before we find out!   Thank you so much for commenting.   This chapter was hard to get out, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

luv, luv, luv this story more with every chapter - though my guts are tied up in knots i'm so worried about the boys !  And what an intense night they had together - beautifully written. Please more soon !!!  :) 

Author's Response:

thank you so much twoells!  I'm glad you liked it.  And yes, trouble ahead!   And some twists and turns. Thank you so much for commenting!

OMG G,,this fic just keeps on getting better & better.

 

The lovemaking was so perfect, so beautiful to read,,brought a tear to my eye & did other weird things to my body *grins*

 

I wonder whats going to happen now,,Im so scared for them both,,I think they've both committed themselves to each other,,they just have to find away to be together again.

 

I give this fic 50 out of 50 loll,,I freakin LOVE it.

Off to bed,,love ya,,Jx

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for this lovely reveiw Jackie!  You are right, are boys are committed, they just need to find a way to be together. But first, they have to deal with this assignment and all the trouble up ahead!  Glad you're liking the story!  And thank you for taking the time to comment!

This school is so messed up and how did it get this far. Cujo must feel like a little shit having been upstaged by a nerdy teacher. Justin and Brian boy they just have to be different "I don't love you" even though I get what they are saying it's just so them. Fucking Raw is a big step and yeah I am worried about everyone involved in this situation it seems bigger than anybody expected so far.

 

Excellent chapter

Author's Response:

You're right about this assignment being more dangerous then they anticipated.  Lots of angst coming up, and twists and turns.   sjmpets said the school reminded her of the school in blackboard jungle and I think that's a good comparison.  No one is going to come out of this unscratched, but you know me....our boys will triumph!  Thanks for commenting Vision, so glad you liked this chapter.

Fantastic  chapter - very intense!
I really love this: A great story line with a well thought plot and a great descritpion of characters  - some parts of Justin in this chapter really made me shiver and he's walking on dangerous grounds in trying to get as close as possible to Cujo, his family and his friends. I'm not looking forward to that.
And I wonder how long Brian can keep up this role - it's  just so not him at all and I guess that as soon as someone is bullied around, treated unfair or attacked he'll have even more trouble staying in character - Brian isn't someone who keeps his mouth shut and looks the other way when trouble's coming. And trouble sure is coming, right? 

So, I always enjoy reading your stories and I'm already looking forward to the next loooong chapter. Thanks for writing and sharing!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for commenting bine07!  I'm glad you liked this chapter, (and my stories!)  And yes, trouble is comming up!  But never fear, in my stories at least, love - or in this case - not love lol, conquers all!

OH MY GOD.  That was incredibly hot - in some spots, and incredibly scary in others, and I have to wonder if you actually have experience at such a school, because it sure sounded like the voice of experience.

Can't wait for more, and you sure deserve that ribbon.

CYN

Author's Response:

Ditto   :-)

First impressions:

1) The dashboard is fan-fuc*ing-tastic. Pure genius.

2) Geeky Brian is exactly what I expected, even I don't know yet how he managed to keep his cover up. Getting Cujo and the gang out of the classroom before he started his 'invective' was a good move, though;

3) The skinheads are a little bit stereotyped, but I guess there was no other way to make the story go quicker. Whatever gets us through the plot, right? No problem, it works. Deuce is gonna be sooo bad news...

4) the scene with Shane scared me in a way I'm not sure it would be polite to report here. The idea of Coke bottles was an other great hint, I was restless until Justin blew that plan off successfully. It truly gave me the chills, I sighed in relief shortly after.

5) *polishing my broken crystal ball* I didn't predict such an intense and desperate night between Brian and Justin so soon. I've noticed that the chapter is slightly shorter than usual...Of course you must be busy, and you sure stomped the throttle on feelings. Since the last sentence, I'm afraid for the guys. The blond tends to give it the old college try every time...

I'm slow as far as writing reviews is concerned, however...You don't deserve my laziness.

You did very well.

Thanks for updating so fast.

 

P.s. Sorry for any mistake, unfortunately English isn't my first language (hopefully I'll learn it properly, one fine day...)

 

With 'no love',

 

 

 

 

Kora

 

Author's Response:

OMG Kora!  I wasn't going to reveal this, but that dashboard is from RL!  My husband had that written in magic marker on his dashboard when he was a teen. Swear to God! lol   It read just as I quoted..."Gas, grass or ass...no one rides for free."  lololol.  Of course his was more just for 'show'.   :-)

You hit it right on the head about Deuce, he is going to be trouble, and though the skinheads are sterotyped, unfortunately I recently met one who visited from down south.  He was the brother to a neighbor of mine. had a tattoo of the confederate flag and a noose on his forearm. I was shocked.  He made no apologies for himself and didn't bother to talk to me, (I'm dark skinned, I think he thought I was mexican.  Don't think he likes brown or black people)  My neighbor and his brother, (the skin head) obvously dont' get along, but he tolerated him because of their mother.   Unfortunately, these type of people do exist.  Most of what I write comes from some RL experience.   Even, the blood play.  Which brings me to the sex scene. I'm glad you liked it.  because it was so quick, (thier getting to that kind of closeness so quickly) I had to make it intense.  That kind of 'recklessness' comes from a passion so burning hot it's out of control.   I hope I explained their shared 'desparation' well.  If it weren't for the circumstances surrounding them, they may not have jumped in so quick, and so deep.  But each is very aware how dangerous this assignment is, so they just 'grasped' the moment, and went with it, thinking it might be their last.  The chapter is short because what's coming up next would be too long to add to this chapter. In this chapter I wanted to set the stage, and solidify B/J relationship because it will be tested.  I hope you like what's to come.

LOVE LOVE your sign off!   "with no love"   :-)  Thank you...

Gina Marie

What a great update. the waiting was worth it... loved it :-)) rose

Author's Response:

Thanks rose!  *hugs*

EEEEk you do the hate thing so well it is scary! I can't help but feel a little sorry for these guys though as they always seem to be sooo very miserable in their hate even their 'jokes' have a mean edge to them and as I believe somewhere no matter how well hidden there would be a small voice saying 'this is wrong' the enjoyment would have to be tainted! How awful to live a life filled with hate and the celebration of truly stupid, illogical ideas! Nearly as bad as being a victim of the hate maybe? Another fantastic ep! Especially loved the end of the ep. It is a cold night but the temp in my room definitely just increased! Adore this fic and look forward to more soon please! :)

Author's Response:

hmmm....I don't know if that's a compliment or not!  lol .  but yeah, my muse is taking a very dark turn.  hate breeds misery, and is born of misery and ignorance.  Unfortunately, though my story is made up, there are people, kids, like this in our society.  Your analogy is interesting, and has truth to it.  Living with that kind of hate, that eats at you every day, is 'nearly' as bad as beign the vicitim of it. In a sense, they are victims of their own hate. 

So glad you are liking this story!  And I'm glad the 'darkness' of it, (including the sex at the end) came across well. Thank you so much for commenting!

Congrats for the Blue Ribbon! :)

 

Wow! This chapter is very hard but I like it!

 

Ignorance is a bad thing! This chapter is the result of your imagination but unfortunately, such people are real! *shake my head*

 

ciao

kika

 

 

 

Author's Response:

Thanks kika!  I was shocked to see the blue ribbon, and very pleased!  *smiles*  I never expected it!   yeah, this is a story from my imagination, but like you say, unfortunately there are very evil people in the world like this...

In my stories at least, good defeats evil and love endures!  Thanks for commenting, so glad you enjoyed this chapter.

omg woman where is your muse taking you?

the beginning i kept thinking "blackboard jungel" with a sickening twist. brian was never one to let hate stand in his way and yeah he almost blew his cover. which i happen to think is brilliant. cujo, like the rabid dog he's named after, certainly lives up to his name. the poison spewing out of his mouth is going to be the cause of someone's death. it won't be justin's although deuce would love to try and take care of that himself. i can see a confrontation coming where justin is going to cause so much mental pain for brian and himself that it's going to be hard to remember it's all in the line of duty.  all in the name of doing his job. if they make it out in one piece and still together they're going to need a long long vacation just to get their heads on straight. i just pray they come out it all unscathed.

lucas is going to have his work cut out for him trying to find the inside aid to cujo's gang and i feel that whomever it is is going to be a shocker. the least expected person.

as for brian and justin. once he tasted blood i knew raw sex was next. but my god it was so worth it. no, what they feel for each other is deeper than meer love. so physically and mentally connected.

amazing update gina. thank your muse for me. it was so worth the wait.

Author's Response:

You know why I love you sjmpets? you so get me!  blackboard jungel was exactly what I had in mind when I wrote that classroom scene!  And you are right, Deuce is going to  be trouble.  He already hates Justin for 'stepping in his shoes', Cujo takes a serious liking to Justin!  Both B/J will be so immeresed in their roles it will be VERY hard on their relationship. They will be forced to do things, (in the name of saving lifes, children's lives) that will test their love..um...non love :-) for each other.  The 'insider' helpin the boys is a surprise, (like you said, least expected) and another unexpected hero will emerge to help the boys out.   Ok, without giving too much away, lets just say there's pleanty of angsts, twists, turns and yes, sex coming up!  lol

My muse is taking me in very dark places, but I'm liking it!  I was worried people would get offended by the blood sucking, and raw sex (since it is ooc for Brian) but I feel in this AU, it is IC for Brian...like he says, 'life is unpredictable'.  he would have NEVER considered such a thing with anyone else...but then again, who could have predicted someone like Justin, his Sunshine, would come into his life and turn his world upside down!    :-)

Thanks for commenting!  So glad you liked it!

I really enjoy this story.

 

But – sorry,  I do not forgive Conrad and Mark.  Yes, it sure

looks like Brian has had his closure and that is good. Actually, that

is all that is important. Soooo time to move on.  However, I just

wanted to state my feelings – they were shitty to Brian, and I don’t like it.  Enough!                                                                                                                               

 

As I stated once before, this new assignment just feels like big

trouble.  As last we heard I assumed the Justin would play the

part of some weak gay boy and be bait.  Brian and Co would

protect him and have  those who would hurt him be arrested.  I just

felt – no no no no, that was too dangerous.   So now what? 

Justin is going undercover to get close to the leader of the gang. 

That is worse!! 

 

As you can see, I am involved with this story.  Take that as that

complement it is meant to be.        

 

As always, thanks for sharing this story with us.

 

DavidR

 

 

 

 

Author's Response:

It's easy to forgive a past hurt from a lover, when you've found your true soul male.  But I know how you feel.  Mark and Conrad did Brian wrong, they could have handled it better, Brian was just a kid, but Brian's moved on and let his anger, anger that was holding him back, go, and that's a very good thing.

As for the assignment, I thought my original plan, Justin going undercover as the weak gay boy as bait....too 'weak' as a plot.  You know me, I need more angst!  lol  And I think Justin, my version of Justin in this story, will play this part well. He's a tough cop, trained, and will infiltrate this gang with ease.  I've some great scenes in mind for him.  I love 'tough' Justin.   And I like switching things up and having Brian play the 'geek' chem teacher.  :-)   Don't know how it's all going to work out, but I'm excited to find out!  I'm so glad you're liking this story DavidR!  Thank you so much for commenting!

I'm always looking for you honey, no matter how long it takes, you can count on me. Great chapter I love the p'ly in the office, Im worry about the new case and Brian fears.Great job

Author's Response:

Awww.... thanks luisa  *hugs*  You've always been such a wonderful supporter of my stories. I always love hearing from you.   This chapter was 'set' up for what's to come.  Haven't figured all the details out yet, but I can assure you, there will be angst!  Thanks for commenting!

A PRECINCT is a district marked our for a governmental or administrative or police protection. 

PRESCIENT means foreknowledge, and is an adjective for the noun PRESCIENCE.

This was not the only spelling error. Misspellings can interrupt the flow of the story, and annoy the reader, so, might I suggest that a beta for this fiction would help it tremendously.

 

Author's Response:

I actually have a beta for this story.  But thanks for pointing it out that she is not up to par.   I'd be more than happy if you would consider being my beta for this story.   I'm sorry if the miss spelled words are taking away from your enjoyment of this story.  I'm not a professional writer, or editor, and I do appreciate the help. Perhaps you can send me some of your work to study from?

Thanks for commenting.

I'm still reading too, don't worry ;)

a beautiful update, if I can say so, I hope you're fine dear and I hope your business is doing well too.

Hugs.

Author's Response:

Thank you minami77....I am on the mend (I think, it's one good day, one bad...*sigh* back to chiro on Tues)  Glad you're still with me!  :-)

so great update. loved it and missed it :-)) rose

Author's Response:

Thanks rose! I'll try not to take too long to post the next chapter.   Thank you for commenting.

Damn these two are such practical jokers. What amazes me the most about this story is that the family is more willing to accept Brian and Justin being together and even so uch as talking it out with him and actually seeing this is a good. Like Brian said yes Justin could hurt him but he doesn't want to live with what if's.

 

I am also really worried about this case and it seems that it is going to get worst before it gets better. Brian carrying Gus to Chuck E Cheese is a sight I would love to see.

 

Excellent Chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks Vision!  Brian is more emotionally open in this AU, but as you can tell by the end of this chapter, he still has baggage from his childhood that's going to fuck with his self image, and that might affect his relationship with Justin.  His past abuse is part of the reason he's such a good dad. He swore his son would never suffer like he did.  And if that means Chuck E Cheese, then that's what Brian will do. though that would be a sight, wouldn't it? lol

As for his family, in all my stories, Mikey is his best friend and their relationship is flawed, but special. They are truly like brothers.   Brian's 'adopted' family (the gang) will be very supportive of him having a 'real' relationship. They were concerned he wouldn't ever open himself up to being loved, and to love.

Angst coming up!  lol   I'm worried too!   Thank you so much for commenting. So glad you're still with me!

That was so good!  I thought the story was done, I forgot about the whole high school problem.  From reading your previous stories , I have a feeling this one is about to get really intense and maybe even a bit scary.  I'm glad you're continuing with this one, I absolutly love it. I really enjoy reading your work. It's so descriptive, and intense, and sometimes heartbreaking. But I can always feel the connection and love that Brian and Justin share. 

Please update soon!!

Colleen

Author's Response:

Your feeling is right Irishlass76!  Things are going to get scary.  I'm very happy you like my stories!  Thank you for this wonderful comment.  It means a lot to me.

i'm reading and everything seems to be under control. all bases covered. then, bump i fall off my seat.

"And do you know why I call you Sunshine?” Brian asked.Justin shook his head, “No,” he answered wary of where Brian was going with this.“Because I can’t draw,” he said." i think it's so much better getting that from brian than an 'I love you".

poor aggy dating a bigamist. all these little twist that you add to a story makes it so much more interesting.

i knew he was going to get his hair cut, but the tats and piercings. way undercover, and brian has every right to be fearful. something bad is going to happen. i just hope they make it out intact.

great chapter as usual gina.

Author's Response:

So glad you commented on Brian's comment on why he calls Justin Sunshine.  But then again, you've always gotten the meaning in my stories.  :-)   Bad things will happen, you know me.  I'm just not sure what yet   lol   I play it by ear as I'm writing, letting my muse guide me, but I got a feeling 'she' is going to make things very angsty before they get better. T hanks for commenting hon, so glad you liked this chapter!

Hi:  Generally I don't start unfinished stories, but I trust your promise in finishing always.  This one is no different, I'll be there til the end.  It is wonderful and a much secret pleasure of mine.  Thanks.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for this lovely comment serena333!  I'm glad my story is your secret pleasure.  ;-)

Hey Gina finally I got to read this fic and caught up! Sooo very glad I did! Still brilliant especially the hot hot hot scenes. But all the emotional scences too! Loved it all!! So how will it finish? They are much to good together to part! More soon please! Hope your business and you are both doing well! :)

Author's Response:

Hey dphysh!  So glad you  caught this story, and you're enjoying it!  Business is rough, and I'm working all the time, but hopefully it will pay off.  As it is though it leaves me very tired and with very little time to write, but you know me, I WILL finish this story!  lol  Don't know exactly where it's going to end, or which direction I'll take, but you know me (now I'm repeating myself lol) I will not abide anything but a happy ending!  Thanks for commenting! 

Well, I have to tell you I loved this story. B/J are my favorite characters and I loved how they are written in the story. I hope you will write more, I will be watching for it. Great job, thanks.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like this story, but please don't stop reading, it's not over yet!  B/J are on to a new adventure in the next chapter.  They are going undercover in a high school to break up a gang of kids who are bashing gay kids.  Thank you for commenting, and stay tuned!

Amazing..... this chapter was definetly worth the wait.... Brian  met face to face with Conrad... and was finally able to have some closure.. for all the emotions and hurt feelings of the past that he had for "Connie"...but...more importantly... Brian realized that he actually has "Sunshine" in his future.. lol... Good Luck and Success with your new business....

Author's Response:

Thanks Bluvsj!  Bus. is slow so far, but I'm hopeful.  I'm so glad you liked this chapter!  The next one starts the new assignment at the high school. I've got some idea's I'm working on I hope you like.  Thank you so much for commenting!

Wonderful story.  Very entertaining, new, and refreshing.  Well done.

Author's Response:

Thanks Bigdogz09!  :-)

wow gina.

cal and hal thought they could pull one over on the two sissified private detectives. they were so so wrong, and what fun brian and justin had proving them wrong. that was one of the best comfrontation scenes ever. even if there was a bit of lying involved. brian better talk to justin soon since he realized that justin has the ability to go back to ny if he wants. although i think the fuck chain said alot to and about both of them. that was so hot. what an imagination you have woman! whew!

justin knew as soon as brian referred to conrad as conrad and not 'connie' that things were going to be okay between them.

brian and his healing powers are miraculous. conrad memory came back as soon as brian came onto the scene. brian didn't tell him about mark being in the hospital though. guess he was saving that for the way home. gave them something to talk about hahaha.

as for the flowers, nice. sure that gina's one true love loved them. now that that case is solved it's back to school for them. that case won't be as easy i'm sure.

Author's Response:

hey sjmpets! I'm glad you like the backroom scene.  :-)  It was fun writing. And yes, now that Brian knows Justin can go back if he wanted, it might make him work harder to keep him!  That backroom scene was Brian's way of 'staking a claim' on his blonde.  And I'm glad you caught the 'conrad/connie' thing.  Justin is always sooo on to Brian.  That end part was my way of showing some love to my husband of 25 years for putting up with me, my store, my hours of craziness, and for taking my free time, (which I should be giving to him) and following my 'other' passion.  writing. I made him read it, he laughed. lol

Next chapter is in the works. As always, LOVE hearing from you!

I LOVE IT. WORTH WAITING FOR.....

VERY GOOD JOB.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much complicated!   So glad you enjoyed it.  This story is not done.  I've one or two more plotlines to explore.  :-)  Thanks for reading, and commenting!

"He and Justin had just returned from the compound where Gina, the owner of the dinner..."

This name seems familiar ...  :)

 

"First let's make one thing clear. Yes, you were just fourteen.  A fourteen year old Lolita!" Conrad yelled.

He can justify himself but does not change the fact that Brian was a too young and at that age an infatuation is lived very intensely and remains in the memories. Good or bad experience, it influences the years to come. Btw. Brian as a Lolita is perfect!!! *lol*

Wonderful chapter! I don't think this story is over...you have something unexpected in your sleeve. Don't you? :P

Take care of yourself!

*fingers crossed for your business*

*hugs*

Author's Response:

Thanks kika, and you're right. That didn't excuse Conrad's behavior, he was still older and should have known better. He admitted this towards the end of his rant.   When he said, everything I just said may be true, but it's bullshit...I was still older, I should have handled the situation better.  He knew that, but he also knew Brian woul  Thadn't accept or respect that kind of apology.  Brian respects honesty, and balls.  In more ways than one lol.

Of course this is not the end!  lol  Next chapter we start a new adventure.  Remember the highschool bashing case cynthia brought to them? That starts in a week, Justin goes undercover to flush out a gang of kids who have been bashing gay students.  It will bring up painful memories for him.  (his last undercover assignment in NYC was exactly the same situation, and HE got bashed!)  So they'll be issues to deal with there...and some danger...  And there is so many questions left to answer. Though we 'know' our boys love each other, it hasn't been 'solidified' yet. It will be tested again.  :-)  You know me!  lol  So glad you liked this chapter!  Thanks!

Hey!

So I read your last chapter yesterday night. I like it -of course-. Your lemons are always perfect, so there's nothing to say about it, except I'm rather incomfortable with Brian being topped -it's so not like him!-. Anyways, it was very well-written, feelings starting to grow ... I love how Brian can not admit to himself he's in love, it is SO fucking cute.

And the waitress was great, too. At first I thought it was Shane again, but then I saw she had your name ... I like her. Will we see her again lie in the next chapter? The ending is excelling, I can't wait to read more ! But I fear the reunion with Conrad, I have this feeling like it's going to turn catastrophic ...

Well, what can I say more? It's great, as usual, and I love your long long chapters, and I hope you'll update in no time though -after what I read- it's highly unlikely, but still, I'm hoping ... And, as usual, your dialogues make me want to laugh and cry at the same time ... I even opened a file where I put all the best lines of BTWYTWY, I hope you don't mind, it's just sooo funny.

Well, thanks, and update soon!

PS : As usual, excuse my lame english ...

Author's Response:

First, I'm so flattered that you have a file with the best lines of BTWYTWY!  I'd love to see it, if you don't mind. You can email it to me at ginamariestimelesscafe@gmail.com.  That is such a compliment!  :-)  That story was my first, like my first born, and holds a very special place in my heart.  I often go back and read it myself.  A friend of mine is going to fix the chapters for me, (correct the grammer and mistakes) and I'll be reposting it one day, hopefully it will read better the second time around.

Second, I know how you feel about Brian being topped, I feel the same way. I like my alpha 'top' Brian!  But I felt it's important that in his relationship with Justin that he bottomed to show the growing love and respect, and most of all, trust between them.  Of course, in every relationship there is one person that's more dominate sexually then the other and in my B/J relationship,  Brian is most definately the more domininate one!  Justin becomes a 'slut' lol, for Brian's dick. Can you blame him?

Thank you for this wonderful review! I'm so happy you are enjoying this story. And yes, you will be seeing more of Gina.  At least that is the plan, unless my 'muse' takes me in another direction.   I'll try to update soon.

Gina

PS-your english is just fine!

I love your story, it's exciting!

Author's Response:

Thank you shimayo!  I'm so glad you're enjoying it.

Oh My God! just tell me Conrad isn't the bastard it seems reading this chapter please, I'm beginning to feel sorry for Mark if that's the case :(

btw I loved Brian and Justin lovemaking; Justin insecurity are so sweet, I'd want to hug him and tell him it will all be alright ♥

Author's Response:

Not is all as it seems minami77!  :-)  The plotline will thicken in the next chapter, and Justin's insecurities will grow .  :-(  But it WILL be alright in the end.   Thank you so much for commenting!

OMFG I ADORE this fic.

 

he actually "feasted on his ass"..like GUH!!!!!

 

Yay a break through,,this could be just what they need.

 

BTW THE BEST Justin "topping" sex scene I've ever read, I fell off my chair 3 times lol.

 

You are amazing & yay  for Gina working at the diner *wink wink*

 

I love this,,hugs jx

Author's Response:

Thanks Jackie. That's a huge compliment  coming from you!  :-)

Uh! Conrad is alive?!?!?

There are only two reactions when you meet your first love again. The first is to remind him/her with affection (maybe more) and the other is 'what I saw in her/him'!

 

Great chapter!

Author's Response:

You got that right kika!  Which reaction will Brian have? Hmmmm.....  So glad you liked this chapter!

OMG.... I love this chapter.... Justin was so jealous and insecure about Brian still having feelings about Conrad...and Brian wanting to prove to himself that he could be with someone else for the first time...since Conrad left him.. and the biggest surprise ... Conrad is alive and well and probably living with Tim in some kind of Amish -like  Religious Cult.... I can't wait to see what happen's next.....Good Luck in your new business... I hope we have a heat wave this summer... can you deliver 10 Gallons of Rock Road to Bklyn???  LOL.... 

Author's Response:

LOL I wish I could!  I grew up in Manhattan, born and bred...city  girl at heart.  :-)  And I hope your wish comes true and we have a long hot summer!   I'm kind of nervous about this year.  This is the year that will decide if I stay open, or close. It's tough where I am...(small town upstate)  Not much traffic or  tourist and the economy doesn't help.  But I'm staying positive, and I got my boys (B/J) and my story to escape to!    So glad you liked this chapter!  It advances the story's plotline.  Next chapter we find out what happened to Conrad.  All is not as it appears.    Life is never easy for our boys are they? lol.  Justin is jealous, Brian is cautious.   But, as we know, through it all, they'll survive and be closer for it.  Thanks for commenting BluvsJ!  

loooove your long chapters and of course your story. but what a way to end this chapter :-)) more please :-)) rose

Author's Response:

Thanks rose!  I don't post every week (sooo busy right now with reopening the store) so when I do get a chapter up I  want to make it 'meaty'.  Glad you like the long chapters, and the story!  Thanks for commenting

I'm a so lovin' this story. It's drama, romance, and mystery all wrapped in one. The investigation about Conrad is getting really intresting. I also love the relationship between Brian and Justin, their just so perfect together. Keep up the great work, can't wait until the next update.

Hugs, :)

Carlina

Author's Response:

Thank Carlina!  So glad you enjoyed this chapter.  The plotline will thicken, and B/J's budding relationship will be tested..  I'm glad you're liking their relationship.  Coming from an AU perspective, I wasn't sure if it would be believable since we are so use to Canon B/J.   It's nice to know it's coming across well.  Thank you for commenting!

Ooooohhh! The plot thickens!!! Fantastic chapter, thanks for updating!

I love the way you write the interaction between Brian and Justin, the instant connection they had and how they are both struggling with that given their pasts. It's tangible and heartbreaking and tender and oh so real... very well done! :D

Author's Response:

Thank you for this lovely comment!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it.   And I'm VERY glad you liked the interaction between the boys.  I struggled with this chapter, not sure if I was 'connecting'.  It's nice to hear it came across well.   Again, thank you!

They are perfect for each other.

Great job.

Author's Response:

I agree. They are perfect for each other.   :-)

I like it so much.

Please more.

another great chapter, and I hope you're fine hon ♥

Author's Response:

Thanks minami! I'm getting there...*sigh*  meds worked, but side effects are doing me in.  :-(    Doc will probably adjust.  I'm glad you're liking this story!

Great Chapter. I am glad they snatched Creepo. Justin did a good job. The kiss between Brian and Justin left me breathless. *sigh*.

I'm dying to know how our two boys spend the night in the LOFT. I so hope they get a chance to come closer to form a friendship. The weed should help.

Author's Response:

I think our boys will be bonding over pot and pizza at the loft. Some 'truths' may come out...(your right, the weed will help. lol)  So glad you enjoyed this update!  And so glad for your feedback!

I don´t have the right words to describe how much I loved you update :-)) rose

Author's Response:

I think your words were perfect rose!  *hugs* Thanks so much!  I'm so glad you're enjoying this one!

Usually I don't read AU stories. I read only one in the past and didn't like it much either. But your story sounded interest from the summary so I gave it a try. Once I started the first chapter, I couldn't stop. I'm loving it. Your characterization of Brian and Justin is great, I can't wait to learn more about what's in their respective past. I'm loving their banter and the sexual tension.

I'm curious to see more of Lucas, he looked very promising to me.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your feedback manuela!  I'm very glad you're liking this story. It's a departure from my normal writing style, but I'm having fun with it. As for Lucas...hmmm...let's just say he's not there by conicidence... Stay tuned!

justin likes to take chances. certainly going to be keeping brian on his toes. glad they got that creepo, it was a close call.

the kiss sparked something deep in both of them. i hope it continues into the night. either is't going to be a relaxing night or one filled with sexual tension. can't wait to find out.

glad you're feeling somewhat better.

Author's Response:

thanks sjmpets!  The loft chapter which comes up next, will have our boys bounding.  I need for them to establish an emotional connection as well. they already have a sexual connection! lol  They just haven't had sex yet.  Mainly because they 'really' like each other and don't want to fuck it up with sex because each has this rule about not getting attached to sexual partners. And they are already attached.

The upcoming chapter will have them high, and sharing personal stories.  I need their emotional connection to be strong so when Brian faces his past, (john doe in country hospital) he'll feel comfortable leaning on Justin.   So glad you're liking this one!

Loved this story.  Cool and refreshing in its originality.  Please update soon! 

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you're enjoying it, and thank you for commenting. I'm working on chapter 3 as we speak

Thanks for the fast update. "Broken Open" is my new passion or should I say my guilty pleasure. *ggg*

It was a great pleasure when Justin marched in Brians office and told him to hire Lukas. About Lucas I'm not sure wether I like him or not.

I love the chemistry between Brian and Justin and I can't wait for their first kiss and more. *wink*

Author's Response:

oh that first kiss.....lol  I can't wait either!  I'm so glad you're enjoying this one Meggi!  It's fun writing, but I really have no idea where I'm taking it!  I'll just have to let my muse guide me.

I really like this story so far and Brian and Justin interactions are very good and funny.

Lucas is an interesting character too, and Em just make me laugh all the tim lol, now I'm really curious to know more about the past of each one of them and of course I hope Brian won't have problem with the police!

Next one soon? LOL this is why I usually don't read WIP I'm going to be a pain in the ass, sorry ;)

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying this story minami77 and very glad for your feedback!  I'm working on chpt. 3.  I'll try to get it out as soon as I can. I'm dealing with medical issues as well. But as you know I always finish my stories. I won't leave you hanging...(bar some catastrophe in my life...God forbid)  I'm really enjoying working on this on and soo happy you're enjoying reading it.  Thank you so much for your comment.

gina, just want to let you know that you have made carl jewish. not that i mind but just wanted you to know. lol

Author's Response:

I made Carl jeiwish?  how?  oh, is it the spelling of his name? I didn't know how to spell it. I'll change it.  He's not jewish, not that it matters, but he isn't. do you know the correct spelling?

Well this ragtag team of misfits is amazingly funny and smart. The introduction of Lucas is going to cause some serious mischief amongst the regulars I'm familiar with and thank you for that. This murder mystery is going to get crazy soon especially with this new mugging case and having Private Dicks card in their pocket ay be another issue. Also damn the sexual tension between B&J is at such a peack that I can't take it much more and the story has just started.

 

Excellent chapter as always

Author's Response:

Thanks Vision!  I'm starting to have fun with it.  Can you guess who the man in the hospital is?  Talk about Pandora's box. When Brian finds out, his world as he knows it is going to change, as will some of his well honed conceptions of his life up till this point.  Justin will be there to help him navigate through this time in his life.  And in the process, Justin is going to learn a lot about himself.  i'm so glad you're enjoying this story!

a relly wonderful first chapter, hope to read more soon ♥

Author's Response:

Thanks minami77!  I'm glad you liked it.

Hi Gina Marie!

I'm so happy...your're back with a new amazing story! I love it already!

I can hardly wait to see how good they work together and how far the sparks between them fly.

 

Author's Response:

Thanks Meggi!  So glad you're along for the ride on this one! I always love your feedback!

This is fantastic of course as it is by you but I am too tired to review properlt tonight - I'll try to do more justice next time! Which will be soon I hope!! :)

Author's Response:

Hey dphysh!  Get some sleep! lol.   I'm just so glad you're with me on this one.  It's a departure from my usual style.  But I've got some good ideas.  There will be mysery, angst, humor and yes, sex.  lol   I hope to get another chapter up soon.  I've been a bit under the weather.  Going to doc's today.  Hopefully I'll be full functioning in no time!  Thanks for taking the time to comment.

I like it very much!!!!!

More soon!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks identity!  I'll be working on the next chapter this week, hopefullly.....  Hope you continue to enjoy the story.

 FUCK!! That was AWESOME!!!!!!!!! I hope you write more soon!!

Author's Response:

LOL!  Thanks Melissa!   That's just about the most encouraging feedback I've gotten so far!  LOL I hope you continue to enjoy the story, and continue to let me know what you think!

this story is amazing!!! I hope to read soon more =)

Author's Response:

Thanks waytotheend!  I hope you continue to like it!

off to a fantastic start gina, and i'm glad to see shane making a reappearance in this story. whew boy are sparks going to fly between brian and justin. i'm just going to sit back and enjoy the ride. emmett going to bed with the clients. what a hoot.

who is this 1:00? have a feeling he'll be causing some friction.

 

Author's Response:

Hey sjmpets!  So glad you'll be on this journey with me!   As you can tell, this is a bit of a departure from my normal style.  A bit off cannon here, but definately cannon influenced. There will be angst...there will be mystery...there will be...dare I say it....love? lol    And of course, new and interesting (I hope) characters.    So glad you're on board!  *hugs*

Great start.... it looks as though they both met their match ..  I can't wait to what happens when they work "close" together... lol...

Author's Response:

Thanks BluvsJ!  Yes, in this one, Justin is definately a match for Brian!  There's sure to be sparks with them working together. 

I love the story,can´t wait for more,please soon.

Author's Response:

Thanks Luisa!  I'm glad you're enjoying it.  And very glad for your feedback!