Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2010 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 77: Prom Night
Sorry to have dropped you with my comments, but we had face this Saturday at an emergency at home... Our old grand-dad German Shepherd fell down the stairs and broke his foreleg. My father and I spent the afternoon at our veterinary... And the house was transformed into a service care for the poor dog...
Anyway, getting back to this wonderful chapter, everything is great. I'm very happy for Gus. His future wife seems like a nice girl. He will be very happy with Judy
I love those passages where we follow the evolution of the family
Superb chapter
And the carot cake was a great success this Sunday :)
Author's Response: I have a dog getting older and I can see her slowing down already. They age way too fast (7 times human years). Did I find a hot Gus or what? :P I'm so glad the carrot cake was successful. It's a favorite in my home too. I was asked today to make the meat loaf again as it's been about a month now since the last one. I love cooking like I love to write.
Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2010 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 81: Show me the Money
Love this JT and thank you for the picture of Corey Haim he was cute …look a lot like randy Harrison and you?
Author's Response: Thank you Meme. I was a cutie when I was younger but not near as hot as Randy was. Even at 32 he's still an attractive man if he gets his morning coffee and a shave in. :) Don't ask me how; I just know. :P
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2010 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 81: Show me the Money
i love it
Author's Response: The hamster woke me up so excited to find review comments today. Thank you!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2010 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 79: The Wedding
Always happy to read when the family get together.
What a lovely night....
Job well done to bring up such a great parent Bri & Jus.
Hugs & kisses.
Author's Response: It's so good to hear from you complicated; glad you liked the chapter. Hugs and kisses back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 78: July 4th Morning
They getting older....
Very good chapter.
Big hugs.
Author's Response: Yes I felt an advance in the timeline was due to keep the story interesting. Hugs back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2010 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 77: Prom Night
another wedding....
love it so much....
Judy is a great girl.
kiss. kiss.
Author's Response: Judy has the model quality about her but I thought my choice for Gus was a knock out! Kisses back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 76: From Russia with Love
Yea...!!!!
I love happy ending...
Genius...
Love you JT, Mr. Hamster.
Author's Response: Can't let the bad guys win! Genius is too kind. Love you Back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2010 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 75: Return the Favor
Whoa!!!!
I like it... I love it....
Excellent.
I miss u Mr. Hmaster?? Did u miss me?? ;)
Author's Response: The hamster was so excited to hear from you today. He sure did miss you very much and now he's a happy rodent again. Kisses !!!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2010 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 74: What the?
hello........
finally... welcome back JT, Mr. Hamster.
What the...???
very good .
Kiss. Kiss.
Author's Response: Yes I've been down with the Texas Crud for a few days but came back with a passion. Woke up today feeling like crap again but I'm pushing past it. Can't seem to shake this cold but I'll not let it interfere with the story. Kisses back!
Reviewer: RAinbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 79: The Wedding
I love it
Author's Response: Thank you!!! :)
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 81: Show me the Money
Wow I just caught up! This story gets more intense by the minute! Love the relationship between Justin and father.
Author's Response: I had a great relationship with my Dad so I used it to mirror Justin and Craig. Thanks for commenting as you know how much the hamster loves chapter hits. :)
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2010 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 78: July 4th Morning
i love it
Author's Response: Thank you! Mr. Hamster says "squeak!"
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 76: From Russia with Love
All's well that ends well ... The Russian government isn’t joking with their black sheeps.
And I hope Senator Anderson has learned his lesson... I'm glad that Allen has decided to retire from business and all his antecedents are erased...
Wonderful story in the story ...
Thank you both of you
Author's Response: Would you believe I almost have the next chapter reading to add? The hamster got his second wind reading your new comments. I had to oil the wheel twice this morning he's going at it so good. After this chapter we move into the future and much happier times for our characters.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2010 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 75: Return the Favor
Justin has more than one trick up his sleeve... I’m happy to find again the kind-hearted hit man. Once more, he plays for the right team and with his knowledge of the Russian mafia, the fate of young Corey is quickly resolved. The boy is now safe et secure with him until they join Justin and the FBI. I love this Allen Cullen (if I had him in front of me, I hugged and kissed him... ;) ). It’s really a good man
Wonderful chapter. You and Mr Hamster, you spoil us so much
Author's Response: I always had a passion to write about Russian spies. :) As a boy I loved the orginial James Bond 007 movies with Sean whats his name. (I secretly wanted to be a Bond girl) :P
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2010 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 74: What the?
I woke up this morning to find 4 new chapters. I’m very happy that you get better. So while taking my breakfast on the terrace (a little cold but warmly-dressed, it’s ok), I scanned these new pages and now, I’m going to comment.
This is a very interesting case and a bit complex for Justin and the FBI ... For now, the rescue of the child is the priority. With his gift, Justin has already been able to locate him. Impossible for me to stop and comment on each chapter as the story kept me in suspense ...
Wonderful chapter! Bravo
Yesterday was THE comeback for Gex. 21 h 15, Biarritz airport... Tomas was already there. Dad wondered how many stops between the airport and our home (30 km) ! My mother hoped her baby would at least make a visit by the big house for a kiss before shutting himself in their apartment... And my other mom and I waited to see if it was necessary to prepare for today the meatloaf, or the ‘Axoa’, Gex’ favorite dish, (at least, the carrot cake was still topical !). Finally, a hurricane came, slammed a kiss to each, left a bag of dirty laundry... and left :D. Currently, we have seen no sign of life ...
Love and kisses to you and Mr Hamster
Author's Response: I could not be more grateful for this review. For over two days we have been writing with very little comments coming in on each chapter. The hamster was starting to have a panic attack and that is not a pretty sight. I laughed as you described Gex's arrival. I give them eight hours tops before the need for fuel becomes a major issue to keep going in the apartment. :P I'm very happy he made it home safe and sound. You have such a beautiful and unique family there and you live in a wonderful place. Thank you for saving the hamster a trip to a mental ward today.
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2010 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 76: From Russia with Love
i love it
Author's Response: :) Thank you!
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2010 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 75: Return the Favor
i love it
Author's Response: Appreciate the hit dear.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 11: Love
I'm glad they aren't going to FBI training. Brian is right, he wouldn't want to miss any part of Gus's life right now...especially since the baby just lost his mother.
Author's Response: Girlfriend! You got some chapters waiting for you. Enjoy! Once the thrill of the FBI passed it was no hard question for our blond cop now a father.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 74: What the?
Love how Justin and Brian's empire is growing. A new case! Justin to the rescue again! All these big penises though....hmmm....makes me a bit nervous lol Great chapter JT
Author's Response: I was down with a nasty bug for a few days but I'M BACK!!! This was the first day I felt up to writing again and finishing the chapter. Thank you so much for your comment. The big whoppers is really a gay thing; believe me I know girls don't enjoy them like a bottom boy does. :P
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2010 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 73: A Special Sunday Together
Whoa, I clicked three times on the same comment? Actually it's rainy season and internet is on and off like five times per hour and each time I reviewed it failed, so I clicked again and again. Actually all comments passed, but who am I to complain? lol
Sorry you hadn't recovered from flu yet, If you can stand strong ginger, may I recommend you a very popular Malagasy cold remedy: it's simply a chicken soup made with one handful of sliced ginger ( or half, depends on how big the chicken is), one pinch of sugar, salt. You cook it as long and slowly as you can. It will perk you up , but be warned of sides effects 'cause it's a strong aphrodisiac too :p
About walnuts, in july I have to fly in France so I'll buy them there. It's already on my to-buy list with all Armistead Maupin's "Tales of the city" series, well, only IF I can afford it because I have to buy QaF all seasons's dvd too...and my daughter's Les Paul electric guitar will cost a f***...(sob)
Author's Response: Me and the hamster have no problem with multi-clicking! Hope your Internet is back up to speed. I'm about over my crud bug-cold-flu-funk whatever; I'm still feeling weak without the major symptoms. Walnuts will be cheap compared to the other items on your list. I saw someone sellling QAF 5 year DVDs online once for $98 and free shipping. That's the best price I've seen. On course you need to get the ones that work on your player such as I have to get the USA versions. I know you will get a nice Les Paul copy because the orginials are worth enough money to buy you a house in Dallas with a view! Thanks for reviewing shimayo.
To all my readers I hope to be back real soon and finish a new chapter and complete the answering of all these wonderful comments.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2010 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 18:Dirty Cops
Wonderful chapter!
Enjoyed all the dirty cops getting busted.
Should be interesting while the Chief is away!
Author's Response: I'm feeling better today so I'll try to answer some review comments. Bad cops are part of the job with Internal Affairs. Thanks for commenting and enjoying the story Susan.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2010 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 73: A Special Sunday Together
I hope you get better now?
Happy you replied so quickly to my request, thanks again. Yesterday I tested your carrot cake recipe; Although I had small problem with a specific ingredient (impossible to find walnuts here, I used almond instead), the cake was terrific! Smooth, light, sweet...an angel food! Even my man who'd never been a pastry addict send you his compliments, there is it! Love you and Mr.Hamster.
Author's Response: Thank you for your responses. I feel awful with a cold but I'll live. It may be a few more days before I'm back into the swing of things.
I'm very happy the carrot cake worked out for you. I guess any nuts would work since they mainly provide a crunchy element to the food. I've made this cake for a senior citizen man without teeth and omitted the walnuts altogether, and it was still delicious.
A new chapter was started before this cold/flu bug hit me; and hopefully in a few days I'll get over it and get it online for you good people. Hugs!
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2010 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 73: A Special Sunday Together
Hope you get better now?
Happy you replied so quickly to my request, thanks again. Yesterday I tested the carrot cake recipe, although I had small problem with a specific ingredient (impossible to find walnuts here, I used almond instead), the cake was terrific! Smooth, light, sweet...an angel food! Even my man who'd never been a pastry addict send you his compliments, there is it! ' Love you and Mr.Hamster.
Author's Response: I feel like sitting at the desk and starting to answer some review comments. Glad the cake was successful; it's delicious without any nuts at all.
Sometimes I'll get items not available locally via the Internet such as guava wood for my smoker. I'll buy wood from Hawaii. I bet somebody is selling walnuts online somewhere if you ever want to try them; they're very tasty and a soft nut to chew.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2010 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 73: A Special Sunday Together
Hope you get better now?
Happy you replied so quickly to my request, thanks again. Yesterday I tested the carrot cake recipe, although I had small problem with a specific ingredient (impossible to find walnuts here, I used almond instead), the cake was terrific! Smooth, light, sweet...an angel food! Even my man who'd never been a pastry addict send you his compliments, there is it! ' Love you and Mr.Hamster.
Author's Response: Extra clicks! Thank you! :)
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 73: A Special Sunday Together
The recipes are now translated and on the fridge in the kitchen ... I love cooking (beware, this weekend, I test the meatloaf !). I learned with one of my moms who cooks divinely, mainly
Basque and Spanish dishes (her country) but we are open to all adventures. My dads are the Masters of the Plancha. In fact, everbody cooks here. Gex is the specialist of Pintxos. On the other hand, I want to try your carrot cake recipe. The first time I ate one made by a friend, I didn’t like it but I'm not sure her recipe was the real recipe. I want to try again ...
Wonderful chapter. I don’t know why but something tells me that our friends will become even richer ...
Big Love, my dear
Author's Response: OMG!!! I went to the big city to see a movie and came home to find a shitload of new comments from you that single handedly made this story now the #2 most reviewed on MW passing my story Embraced for that title. I'm wiped out from the movie and driving but will answer these fantastic comments tomorrow.
Realize that meat loaf recipe make over a kilo of food girlfriend. It's really a huge meal if you follow my proportions.
Thank you so much Ihintza for doing this to my story. :)
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 72: Killer Boytoy
I can imagine that Brian would be very tempting to Roy. Unfortunately, he fell in a formidable trap. Now he can no longer kill these poor men ...
Great chapter
Mr Hamster, JT ... Thank you so much
Author's Response: I had hoped to answer comments and write today but a cold has kicked my butt. Will try to get well and back on top of things real soon.
~JTSecrets
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 71: Robert E. O'Malley
Welcome to baby O'Malley ! Congratulations to the parents ... Shannon and Michael are now fathers and Robert Eugene is already much loved ...
Again, I love the moments between Brian and Justin. And to liven a party up, what better than an easy arrest....
I loved it
Author's Response: Here's to answering some comments today; the bug still has me feeling like crap. Here in Texas we call it having the crud; it's something between a flu, cold, and/or allergeries at the same time. All you want to do is take cold medicine and sleep or stay still. Will try to answer more tomorrow. Love you dear!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 70: Road Kill
These horrible people get what they deserve. I am glad to find some light at the end of chapter. Excellent job, JT. This story is really wonderful
Author's Response: I try to find a positive ending to the sad stories sometimes in the plot of a cop series.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 69: Thank God for NARCAN
I am very sorry for Steven. Fortunately, James is there to help and support. Together, they will be able to get over this problem ... And Steven will be an excellent captain instead of this asshole. McKinney is truly an idiot. He tried to hide his error when he knew that Justin had the power to know the truth ...
Chapter intense. The lightness of previous chapters quickly faded ...
Author's Response: In Steven's favor he doesn't remember a thing. With James by his side it will pass and not be an issue for them soon. Hopefully the chapters are balanced from heavy to light at times.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 68: First Day on the Job
Another excellent chapter ... I had a smile on the lips to see Daniel and Shawn happy and then suddenly ... the stress at the end, my heart accelerating .... I want to know what happened to Steven ... I feel something not good
Author's Response: Me and the hamster writing that roller coaster again. *evil grins*
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 67: Shawn Carpenter
I knew that Justin would find someone perfect for Daniel. Shawn is really cute. Daniel will be a happy man.
Good job, JT and Mr Hamster
Author's Response: If only finding lovers could be this easy! I'm granting the rich the latitude to find and keep someone here with more power and a better environment to live in. Finally I felt good enough today to get up for a spell. Will answer some reviews and veg out on the coutch for a bit.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 64: Hall of Fame
Paul has a clever mind... Fortunately, Dan’s explanations are enough for now. I really liked this chapter. Funny, sexy ... I'm sure they can find a cute dude for Daniel.
I love those moments between our lovers
Big kisses for you and Mr Hamster
Author's Response: Forgive me Ihintza for not answering your comments yet. I'm still under the weather. Safe cyber kisses and hugs for you too.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 63: Kitchen Sinkless Meat Loaf
OMG, I love this house... It’s splendid and I prefer this one even if Shannon and Michael’s house is beautiful. Brian and Justin were very lucky.
I'll get into the recipe. I have already translated and I have almost all the ingredients. I will try this week and if I succeed, I would make another meatloaf for Gex
Thank you for all that work ...
Author's Response: YES! I'm back and trying to write today. I'll answer some comments and work on the chapter tonight. Thank you for letting me know the family loved the meat loaf. Another reader was very happy with the carrot cake using almonds.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 62: When More is Better
I think you made a little confusion at the beginning of chapter. You wrote 'Justin' instead of 'Michael'. Is this an acte manqué, the realization of an unconscious desire ? ;)
I had already heard of such an operation in a television report but it involved a man with a micropenis and I did not really follow the topic. Now, thanks to you, I know much more.
In any case, this chapter is interesting.
Author's Response: There Shannon calls Michael, Justin, saying he's psychic now too.
Reminds me of the good old days when we would call a fell gay boy May West if he had more boyfriends than he could deal with. "Who are sleeping with tonight May West?" (When his name is David) Get it? Glad you liked it my love.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 61: Keeping Up with the O'Malley's
Brian and Justin are so wonderful together. I love those moments between them. It was just perfect love and perfect fun
Wonderful chapter
Author's Response: The chemistry between those two is what makes this fanfiction and the show possible. Love you!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 60: The Good Life
Here is a young couple who started very well in life. A beautiful house with indoor pool, a nice car and lots of money ... This house will soon be full of love. I love the relationship between Justin and Michael.
Beautiful chapter, beautiful pictures ...
Author's Response: And the school is only a mile away! Awe.. the good life. If we all could be so lucky. Frankly I think the boys would be happy living in a shoe box as long as they have each other.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 59: The Offer
OMG ... Molly agrees to be the surrogate mother of the unborn baby for Michael and Shannon. The baby will be beautiful. Another wonderful idea from your fertile brain. That is something I haven’t seen coming ...
I’m longing to know the reaction of two future dads.
Beautiful
Author's Response: They will love it once they changet their pee soaked pants from hearing it. Finally I'm up to adding a new chapter tonight and answering some more reviews. Thank you for being patient with me in my time of funk.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 58: Pick on a gay boy you get all the Gay Tribe
I hope they will discover the officer who sold the information. I’m glad that the FBI and Melanie was able to stop the publication. In any case, bravo to the young employee who came to the FBI to reveal this affair...
This story keeps me in suspense more and more
JT, you're really really a great narrator. I read nothing but your story ...
Bravo to this cute little fellow called Mr Hamster too
Author's Response: Correction: I said I was in a time of funk. Well Funk is defined online as something else than what we call it in Texas. Here it means feeling sick like. So let me just say I was feeling sickly for over a week.
You honor me with your wonderful comments. The hamster is at risk of child star syndrome wrecking his life if he gets any more popular. :)
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 57: Scandals
This Senator is an idiot. He should have to think twice before open his mouth... Now the boot is on the other foot ! It's really funny how events turn against him. But there is always an asshole to cause a scandal... Poor Michael, I hope this doesn’t affect him too much ...
Wonderful chapter, both of you. Excellent job
Author's Response: We had a lot of fun writing this chapter!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 55: Cop Killer
These two policemen are of a kind ... A fool and a stupid on patrol ! Thanks to Justin, the story is resolved quickly ... I am sure that all those hot scenes keep my brother on alert ... His return will be explosive !!
Author's Response: Tomas is going to be in such trouble when Gex returns. I'd love to be a fly on the wall for that reunion. :P
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 54: Lovers in Motion
Brian and Justin are finalizing the establishement of their replacements... This is certainly a very good choice and the mayor can be confident... The main thing is that Shannon is appreciated. They may be new to this job but they certainly cope well together
Excellent chapter, I loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so grateful for all these comments you wrote. Allow me some time to catch up with you answering them. I did kick out 3 new chapters last night and now I'm joining the hamster in our queen size bed to get some sleep! I hope he doesn't snore again this morning.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 53: Changing of the Guard
Brian and Justin are going to leave the Police, now Shannon et Michael take over. They will spend more time with their family but I’m sure they will keep a watchful eye on all their little world... I know in advance that our great writer (and his adorable Mr Hamster) have still in store full of stunning developments for us
Wonderful, JT
Author's Response: Justin can still read cases and assist law enforcement; Brian is tired of working and they have money. Now with kids at home they take priority in their lives now. This seemed to be the logical progression of the plot.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 52: The Problem with Money
The two boys are as beautiful as any other ... Molly was very lucky to have Sean now ....
Beautiful
And bravo for the straight hot scene, she equaled the hot gays scenes...
Author's Response: I have my straight female readers in mind when I write that stuff. :P
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 51: Welcome to the Family
Wow, the future looks bright for our cute couple... The meeting with the Taylor family is superb and full of surprises. Molly reminds me Gex when our eldest brother received his friends at home... His assessment was always clear, precise and direct. After each reacted according to his temperament, but one thing was certain, Gex didn’t know the word shyness ... or restraint
Mr. Hamster and you are truly excellent. This story is beautiful and as usual more and more addictive
Author's Response: I can imagine Gex was quite the little firecracker when he was younger; the type of boy who knows what he wants and goes for it no matter who gets in the way. It reminds me of someone else when he was young.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 50: Shannon
Michael is really lucky ... Brian had the heavy responsibility to find a soul mate and, with Justin, they have found a great lover for the young boy.. Shannon is really cute.
I am happy for the young Michael. He will make people envious..
Excellent chapter
Author's Response: When I found Shannon I almost fell out of my chair and thought: "Gex will love this guy." I was right.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 49: Two Years Later
Children grow up, are happy together. I love those family moments. And I'm super happy for Todd ... Here is an excellent chapter, I loved it ... Thank you so much
Author's Response: To keep the story from becoming stale I'll make time jumps here and there.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 48: My Kingdom for ...
What horrible murder ! It's horrible ... Fortunately Justin can quickly discover the perpetrators of the killings and put them in jail.
Hey, it's too easy to use his gift to know what baby needs. Infected ears, huh ?... I know it by heart : Txabi, my eldest, is a specialist in otitis (externa, media, interna…All). I'm sure the sight of Justin with his child would be wonderful ! Me too I love Norman Rockwell. The work of this American painter too little known in France are a feast for the eyes. His paintings are tender and nostalgic that you never tire of admiring. Some years ago my husband offered me a beautiful book with illustrations
Mr Hamster is too cute, you too
Author's Response: I'm still writing new chapters and catching up with all your great comments Ihintza. Bare with me as I slowly catch up to you. I believe you would like the chapters more than my comments at this time. Love you guys!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 47: As Time goes On
And now, I cry ... I cry for Charles Peterson, I cry for the two babies Craig Ayden and Charles Cole. Anyway, these days, I cry for nothing. I am very happy with these two little boys, I love when Brian and Justin become parents ... It's so wonderful to have children around ...
I loved this chapter. It’s so sweet… sweet like the beautiful Mr Hamster
Author's Response: New mothers do get emotional I've heard. :) Hopefully the story is balanced with all the elements of fun, love, angst, mystery, crime, adventure, and love. Mr. Hamster sends kisses your way. We can light at the end of the tunnel that is answering all your great comments now.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 46: Name Value
The hostage-taking in Mel’s office is very gripping. Even if Justin had to reveal his secret, I'm sure Mel will keep the secret. Charles and his wife are touched Gus keeps the name of Peterson. It seems that Brian's son will soon be very rich. So beautiful chapter.
Author's Response: Yes Gus will be provided for; in fact any kid Brian and Justin has won't miss a meal. :)
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 45: Life Plans
Oh yes, two babies for our lovers !... JT, you're perfect. A thought for Charles Peterson, however... and a big stress for Melanie. Quick, I rushed to the next chapter
Author's Response: Why get one kid when you can have two for twice the price? hehehe!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 44: Connections
I know a boy who is going to fall on his knees in front of Dan ... Even me, if he was not gay, well ! ... (Ihintza, you are married, girl !!!!! Don’t even think...)
Hey... Kaixo, txipi-neba ! (Hello, little bro !)
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 43: The Truth
Poor Paul, this is not funny (I say it with a big smile on my lips). We can’t imagine worse coming out. Not only the entire brigade knows now he’s gay but he has also been caught in drag... He must follow the advice of Justin, Emmett and Brian ... And tell the truth, lie would only be worse
Super great chapter, my JT
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 42: Rescue
I am very happy for Peter. I just hope he can overcome this nightmare. Fortunately, his parents are there to help him. V. Monroe will pay for this crime.
The last paragraph brought a smile on my lips (if someone looks at me now, he must see me in front of my computer: frown, gawk, laugh, cry, smile, sigh, shake my head, put me in anger ...)
I love your story, I love you, I love Mr Hamster (but apparently his heart is for Complicated, uhm ....)
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 73: A Special Sunday Together
Well, I feel a sudden desire for BBQ ... (I must say that I have nothing eaten since this morning!). I love the atmosphere in the kitchen between Daniel, Shawn and Deb. This reminds me of home (another week and next Friday at this time I'd be on or under my guy - I don’t know yet but I have many ideas and fantasies in my head -)
Their investment project seems very interesting. Can I join them ?? I have a few euros to make it grow ....
Chapter awesome ... Mr Bob and Mr Hamster are really great
BRAVO
Hello Sis !
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 41: Kidnapped
OMG! After the dirty cops, we are now among perverts. And the perverts of high society. I hope the FBI, with the information provided by Justin, will intervene to save the young Peter before it’s to late... I just hope that his money won’t allow this vicious man to get out of trouble ...
I look forward to read more
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 40: Horny Cop
It's pathetic to have abused a young disabled woman, but Justin will deal with this horrible cop and neutralize it quickly. His colleague is well advised to dissociate themselves from him ... He gains a new job, much more rewarding ... I love the discussion with Brian.
You're the best. Mr JT ...
Mr Hamster seems surprised to have this huge carrot, but he deserves it so much.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 39: Todd Sanders
Todd is really pitiful to me. Poor child, he has a hard time understanding that Ben and Hunter do not want anything other than give him a normal life ... This will not be easy for them but they will be OK. I love this little boy. I want too to help him
Oh how I love that story, JT ... It is so involved and full of surprises
Author's Response: I would not add a story like Todd's without sending it to a positive conclusion later in the story.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 38: Ice Ice Baby
I hope that James will be fine. In any case, Justin knows how to use his connections to get what he wants. The nurse wanted to make smart, too bad for her. The dealer was not clever either ... He misjudged the client. Now, Kiki can contact Justin without arousing suspicion
Superb
Author's Response: James got roughed up but he will be ok. The nurse reminds me of someone just like her in my past. Justin's youthful looks are perfect for undercover work; no one suspects him to be a cop.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 37: Playing Hooky
Aah ... Light, joyful ... sexy ... It feels good ... And then they take advantage of this day off to visit their friends.
So good
Author's Response: It was due time to lighten up the plot a bit.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 36: Nuclear Tramps
OMG ... This is a very difficult chapter, very strong, very sad ... Fortunately Brian is there for Justin ... And this chapter ends on a lighter note ....
Very well written, JT.
Author's Response: It was a hard chapter to write too. However; this is a cop story.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 35: Key West
Brian would do anything for his love. Sap is dead. Justin should stay away from Pittsburgh for some time. They will enjoy their time together in Key West... I don’t know why but something tells me that Justin will have his house ... a86;
Author's Response: Justin doesn't ask for much and usually gets what he wants. I would like to see Key West some day.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 34: Killer for Hire
Wow, a killer with a brain ... I love it. Justin is saved and Sap will soon feel the implications of his plan
I take my hat off to you, Mr. Hamster and Mr JT…. I take my hat off
Author's Response: He will be in the story again!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 33: The Aftermath
It's horrible for this little boy. The man who killed this kid is a real sick to take an innocent life just for revenge against his father... I'm glad they stopped him... I loved Justin here. He's right... I think I will go to prepare myself a little drink too...
Chapter very addictive, light and yet firmly rooted in reality ....
Author's Response: Sadly I find my plot ideas for this cop story with real life stories I find online. At least with Justin on the case nobody gets away with it.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 9: The Offer
Wow, dinner with the President, FBI agent and all this before turning 19!
Author's Response: The FBI will only be a part time series of events for our boys after this case. Thanks Kat!
Reviewer: Alec Frazier (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2010 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 44: Connections
Hi,
I'm loving the new story! One thing though: Officer Paul Michaels' picture in chapter 44 does not load.
Alec
Author's Response: Thanks Alec for letting me know the photo vanished. I get them from Google Images and sometimes they go off-line. I couldn't find a suitable replacement so I omitted the image completely. Thank you for enjoying the story and commenting.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 6: Gus
Poor Lindsey, but I'm glad Brian will be taking care of Gus. Justin is good, David didn't see that coming at all.
Author's Response: I wanted Gus with Brian and Justin so this is how we did it for this story. Yes, Justin is very good arresting people.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2010 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 73: A Special Sunday Together
As I don't know how to contact him, may I use your space to send a message to one of your reviewer?
< Hi Gex, thank you for the translation, reading JT's fics is really "joindre l'utile à l'agréable" >
Our fish marinade recipe is the same, I just use olive oil instead, but I'll try yours. Ahem... I know I push a little,but if I could have the real american carrot cake recipe, it would be heaven. I tasted it once and I tried all recipe I can find in internet but obviously it's not the same taste. Thank you already
Author's Response: This is my favorite carrot cake recipe; it's a huge cake too.
Ingredients
- 6 cups grated carrots
- 1 cup brown sugar
- 1 cup raisins
- 4 eggs
- 1 1/2 cups white sugar
- 1 cup vegetable oil
- 2 teaspoons vanilla extract
- 1 cup crushed pineapple, drained
- 3 cups all-purpose flour
- 1 1/2 teaspoons baking soda
- 1 teaspoon salt
- 4 teaspoons ground cinnamon
- 1 cup chopped walnuts
Directions
- In a medium bowl, combine grated carrots and brown sugar. Set aside for 60 minutes, then stir in raisins.
- Preheat oven to 350 degrees F (175 degrees C). Grease and flour two 10 inch cake pans.
- In a large bowl, beat eggs until light. Gradually beat in the white sugar, oil and vanilla. Stir in the pineapple. Combine the flour, baking soda, salt and cinnamon, stir into the wet mixture until absorbed. Finally stir in the carrot mixture and the walnuts. Pour evenly into the prepared pans.
- Bake for 45 to 50 minutes in the preheated oven, until cake tests done with a toothpick. Cool for 10 minutes before removing from pan. When completely cooled, frost with cream cheese frosting.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2010 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 73: A Special Sunday Together
Totally loved it! And can I join Debbie watching Daniel and Shawn f*ing too? lol
Author's Response: I don't think the boys would mind at all. :P
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 73: A Special Sunday Together
Gosh.....
Just reading all the recipe make my mouth water...... yummy....
I love BBQ... sadly not my mum...
Hugs & kisses JT, Mr. Hamster.
Author's Response: Check out the carrot cake in the comment above this one. It's delicious. Hugs and kisses back!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 2: Breaking in the Newbe
On to their first case, hope everything goes ok.
Author's Response: Justin will be fabulous I'm sure! Thanks for reading and commenting Kat.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie
Well this should be interesting! And what a twist, Craig gave Justin to Brian!
Author's Response: Welcome to the new alternative universe with our boys being detectives and more. Enjoy! Thanks so much for commenting.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 73: A Special Sunday Together
Lots of money flowing, and lots of good recipes! New ones for me to try out!
Author's Response: No one in this household from the hamster on up has complained about my cooking. Next to writing I love to cook. I've been doing it since I was able to stand up in the kitchen and help. Thanks Gina!
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2010 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 72: Killer Boytoy
It kills me that I have absolutely no time to read your story. I still have to read the last 30 chapter. god, I hope mr hamster doesn´t hate me for that. :-)) rose
Author's Response: Mr. Hamster says he totally understands and is very happy for your comment and continued interest. :)
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 72: Killer Boytoy
Roy Ticer is neutralized. The trap worked perfectly. No surprise here, Brian and Justin are a great team ... Great job
Big kisses for all these chapters
You saw, I did it ... I caught all my late ... and now I'm going to sleep ...and dream
Author's Response: Good Job Gex! Now me and the rodent have to answer comments and work tonight on a new chapter(s).
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 71: Robert E. O'Malley
The handcuffs master strikes again ! Jacob Finley have made a brief appearance at Woody's. Too funny ... He won’t even have time to discover the atmosphere, or even get a drink... Hello, turn round, thank you, you’re under arrest…
Welcome to Robert Eugene, the little new in family
Great chapter
Author's Response: Justin can handcuff me anytime. :P In a bedroom I hope.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 70: Road Kill
Rapists have exactly the punishment they deserve. Justin has done well to take things in hand ... The chicken legs seem delicious. I haven’t eaten and it makes me hungry
Great chapter
Author's Response: All the recipes I put in a story or my very own that I cook with myself. Future recipes are red wine pot roast, Hawaiian beef spare ribs, scratch chocolate pie, and others if people like to see them. There are three guys in my home that eat like six. Leftovers are a rare endangered species here.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 69: Thank God for NARCAN
"So now I can top you?" ... James has an unconventional way of approaching the problem but just as it is unconventional, it can work. He shows that rape does not change anything for him ... It's a great idea. The promotion will also allow Steven to regain confidence in him and move forward ...
Superb
Author's Response: Justin foresaw that if James knew ahead of time he could better handle it and help Steven with it as well. And yes the promotion is wise for the best choice and to help him overcome the ordeal he went through.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 68: First Day on the Job
Shit, what happened to the wonderful Steven?
Excellent chapter. Light then suddenly I can feel Shannon’s anxiety... I love when you play the card of suspense... I love roller coaster
Author's Response: Well it still is a cop story and we need cases now and then. Steven is a good looking man too.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 67: Shawn Carpenter
Not bad at all ... Shawn matches very well with Daniel. I can see that sex between them will be perfect ...
Brilliant
Author's Response: Nothing like a hot butch big top and a cute pretty little bottom boy to match perfectly! :P
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 64: Hall of Fame
I love the banter between Brian and Justin. They are terrible. Another hot well written scene
... Magnificent. I go to call Tomas !!!
Author's Response: Just a few more days and you will be in his arms again. Both of you will be so happy.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 63: Kitchen Sinkless Meat Loaf
Oh, I know what I’m going to eat at home.... Kitchen Sinkless Meatloaf (I’m happy the sink doen’t go in it because we have a stone kitchen sink. A little heavy for a meal…)
For Shimayo, 'la cerise sur le gâteau' is 'the icing on the cake' in English.. Beautiful house. They have great taste. And as usual, Justin got what he wanted (why am I not surprised?)
Beautiful
Author's Response: Five stars for mother's meat loaf; I cook it every month and it's a favorite meal in this household. And five pounds is a lot of food but it sits well in the refrigerator. Thanks for letting me know a recipe is of interest to you. I can do more of them and all of them are special meals I've cooked myself and know they are good.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 62: When More is Better
Penis bigger, wider... I know this procedure because one of my friends wanted to try it but it was still quite expensive and as the United States, not repaid if purely aesthetic. Personally, this isn’t an act I would do... I'm happy with my Pee-Pee and Tomas also (and vice versa) ... However, I believe that sex between our lovers will be even hotter, rough and dirty.... Sigh
Excellent chapter
Author's Response: I knew the procedures were $5,000 each about 3 years ago in Dallas. I don't know how much they are now; maybe cheaper. You want to get a doctor who knows what he's doing since he is shaping it for life. We are so happy to have all your wonderful comments Gex.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 61: Keeping Up with the O'Malley's
And you say we like it rough and dirty ... just sometimes ...! I thought it was all the time ... ;). My brain is totally free-wheeling with this superb scene between Justin and Brian ... OMG, I hope that Tomas will be in great shape when I come home...
Superb chapter
Author's Response: Hehehe....If I told the girls reading here all our fun secrets they would be so jealous they aren't gay guys too! So I throw in some romance to make it go down easier for them; when in fact romance is who makes coffee next. :P
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 60: The Good Life
Wow .... Very nice house with indoor pool. My dream ! It’s really classy... I'm sure Shannon and Michael will be very happy here... In addition, money will not be a problem ... I love
Super Chapter
Author's Response: I love writing about wealth; one of my favorite fantasies. They make such a beautiful couple their home has to reflect that.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 59: The Offer
The cop is arrested and the story will not be revealed. Bravo.
Jennifer and Craig make a weird proposal to Molly and Sean. Even if the two young lovers accept the idea of conceiving this baby, there still remains if the two boys feel ready to start a family
I want to know ... ..
Author's Response: Funny you mention that; I wondered about the weirdness factor when I came up with that plot. I wanted them to have a kid and the gene combination was so right I had to write it. Besides this is North America and if your kid wants a million bucks by God she has to earn it!
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 58: Pick on a gay boy you get all the Gay Tribe
The FBI takes this job in hand. Melanie moves to establish a federal civil lawsuit. She won’t let it go until she got what she wants ... (hence her nickname… Pitbull)
And I hope that this story doesn’t come out again. I would rather agree with Michael though. Pull the rug from under the feet of jounalists revealinf the story could be beneficial
Good job
Author's Response: Anyone who breathes this story is living on counted breaths. The FBI is one group you do not want on your ass.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 57: Scandals
« There are only two things infinite, the Universe and human stupidity... but for the Universe, I don't have yet an absolute certitude » [Albert Einstein]
When you have yourself some skeletons in the closet, you shut your mouth. This man is a perfect idiot. A fool such, he should be put in formalin. He could be used to create an antidote to the stupidity. It is a bomb this chapter ... I loved it.
Now, instead of that detective, I would leave the country, I would live as a hermit on a mountaintop, far away ... In short, I would try to make me forget. When Brian, Justin, Shannon and others will find the story in this rag ... anger may be very strong!
Author's Response: I think he also said:
"The universe is abundant with hydrogen and ignorance with far less hydrogen." ~Albert Einstein (I loved that guy)
The hamster and I had a blast writing this chapter!
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 55: Cop Killer
Hey, you know I have just my hand, my phone and my imagination in my hotel room.... and 27 days without f*****g !!!! Service personnel must wonder why I take so many showers. I'm sure I must monopolize the supply of towels to myself ... not to mention my phone plan ...: D
This cop is a big idiot .... His colleague is no more intelligent! Too stupid ...
You write great
Big hug
Author's Response: Rare but true there are bad cops who believe they are above the law until caught. The rookie is a different matter however. Thanks for the hug; hug back!
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 54: Lovers in Motion
Always hot scenes ... It's great! I don’t see why Shannon’s long hair are all speak. The image of the Police will be rejuvenated and young people will feel more in tune with this new image ... The mayor is right to let him a chance, but he also knows he can trust Brian and Justin
Beautiful
« The first one awake gets the cock. »… Good idea I’m going to apply when I’m home
Author's Response: That was a favorite game with an old lover my mine many moons ago. You would have to visit the USA to find out how anal retentive and conservative the cops are here.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 53: Changing of the Guard
I love the exchange between Justin and Michael. Too funny! And communicative ... I called Tomas ...
Super Chapter
I’m longing to know the new life of Brian and Justin
Author's Response: It was one of those situations you didn't want to stop your lover but you had to answer the phone; something was bound to come of it. :P
We are shifting gears into the future now with different lifestyles but they'll still be involved with law enforcement.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 52: The Problem with Money
The O'Malley brothers seem as hot as any other ... Wow! Sean's not so bad ... Well, he is beautiful (but I still have a soft spot for his brother). I must really be missing if a heterosexual scene requires me to take a cold shower .... Tssss
Big love
Author's Response: Straight sex scenes can be a turn on for a gay guy if you just think what the dude is enjoying.
Big love back!
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 51: Welcome to the Family
Ah, you've introduced the pineapple juice in the story !! Currently, seen all the fruits I eat, Tomas will soon have a great multivitamin based kiwi / litchi / banana… ;)
I didn’t have to present Tomas to my parents, as my brother’s best friend, he was already one of our family. No, the great moment of surprise was when my father saw him leave my room in the early one day and not my brother's room where he normally slept... Strangely that day, everyone was present at the table for breakfast (my 2 fathers, my 2 mothers, my brother, my sister and his lover... and even an aunt !) Fortunately, Tomas knew the family dynamics and knew what to expect
Wonderful job, JT… You two Mr Hamster. I enjoy so much your hot scenes.
Author's Response: "Good morning; yes I'm banging your baby boy and he's wonderful. I hope you don't mind." That had to be a funny morning.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 50: Shannon
Dan on even days / Shannon odd days... That, my program is done...
Shannon is wonderful. Michael was really lucky. Your sex scenes are fantastic
I think I'll go take a cold shower because you raised the temperature of my hotel room by several degrees ...
Mr. Hamster and you are both awesome..
Author's Response: Now I can toot my horn since I've answered all your wonderful comments. We write to please and it means so much to us for you to take the time to comment on each chapter. That motivates us to create more for you. Love you good buddy!
Reviewer: mary (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2010 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 64: Hall of Fame
Good chapter. I liked the talking with Brian and Justin at the end and the sex.
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: mary (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2010 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 63: Kitchen Sinkless Meat Loaf
Nice house and I printed the recipe. I'll try it without the pork though.
Author's Response: You can cut out the pork and cut the other items in half.
Reviewer: laura (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2010 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 3: Operation Escort
awesome story so far
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2010 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 72: Killer Boytoy
This Roy Ticer scares me, so cold, so smart.
Author's Response: Oops! I missed answering this one yesterday. He was a male black widow killing lovers but now he's just another punk in the joint.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 72: Killer Boytoy
Nice work! Reminded me of that rl killer many years ago (before our time) baby face something. Can't think of his name. Does anyone know?
Author's Response: Roy is like a gay male version of a black widow. He won't be killing any more men now after Justin gets on his tail.
Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2010 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 71: Robert E. O'Malley
I was wondering if you were ever name one of the kids after yourself. Great chapter.
Love and kisses to the hamster and to you too.
I will review the other chapters too, I've just been very busy.
Author's Response: Robert and Bob are very common names in the USA. Thanks so much for commenting Lorie.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2010 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 72: Killer Boytoy
Genius Mr. Hamster.
What a great chapter. Brian as a rich daddy god what a scene to watch for.....
Kiss for you JT.
I count all the kisses you blowing my way Mr. Hamster.
Big hugs for both of you.
Author's Response: He does his little hamster happy dance when he sees your review comments. Big hugs back! Kisses 2!
Reviewer: rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2010 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 72: Killer Boytoy
i love it
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2010 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 71: Robert E. O'Malley
welcome to Bobby <3
Author's Response: Yes we have a mini Shannon to watch growing up. :)
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2010 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 71: Robert E. O'Malley
Ahh..... very nice when you have a place to relax.
Love the scene at the bar, very funny.
Welcome to the world Robert Eugene O'Malley what alucky boy you are.
Hugs & kisses.
Author's Response: It's good to balance the chapters with some family fun. Even older Justin can still make a scene in the bars; Brian too for that matter. Bobby O'Malley hopefully won't be too spoiled with so much love around him. Hugs and kisses back! Mr. Hamster blows you a kiss.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 71: Robert E. O'Malley
Ah a new baby! Love the name. And loving Brian and Justin's interplay in the bar. Great chapter.
Author's Response: They love to cut up when in public. A hot murder case is about to follow bringing our favorite lovers back into law enforcement to help them out in Pittsburgh.
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2010 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 71: Robert E. O'Malley
i love it
Author's Response: Thank you sooooo much! :)
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2010 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 70: Road Kill
Loved it JT.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2010 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 69: Thank God for NARCAN
James was perfect answering Steven after he admitted being raped. The needle picture made me cringe up. I don't like needles.
Author's Response: James was strong for his man. I don't care for needles either and believe me that photo was mild comparied to others.
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2010 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 68: First Day on the Job
Who could hurt such a beautiful detective like Steve?
Author's Response: Knowing Justin who ever did is going to regret it.
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2010 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 67: Shawn Carpenter
Shawn is very pretty.
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2010 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 64: Hall of Fame
Fun chapter with talk between B and J. Loved the sex with Shannon and Michael at the end.
Author's Response: With more than one hot couple we get to read more fun!
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2010 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 63: Kitchen Sinkless Meat Loaf
Beautiful mansion. Nice meat loaf too.
Author's Response: Best meat loaf in the world; mother's recipe and it was always a winner anywhere.
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2010 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 62: When More is Better
This was funny and sounds painful at the same time.
Author's Response: This is the medical truth. Men do this procedure every day.
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2010 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 61: Keeping Up with the O'Malley's
Long chapter with lots in it. Already read the chapters so now here comes a string of comments.
Author's Response: Thanks George; we're very happy to get the comments for each chapter.
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2010 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 60: The Good Life
Thank you for the dedication JT. I really like it that Michael is getting a break. He and Shannon will have a wonderful life not having to worry about money. We should all be that lucky. I'm going to give each chapter a short review hit for your count total. Feed Mr. Hamster a reward.
Author's Response: I'm breaking him a new cookie as we speak. Thanks!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2010 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 32: First Kill
Hey, I saw that Bro has shown signs of life .... I am happy because I asked him to take a little time to comment. But sometimes some of his comments made me blush. Gex has always been the more outgoing of the three of us ... He has no problem expressing his feelings. Sometimes I envy him ... I showed the messages to Tomas.
Well, my comment now. Wow, I loved it ... Justin has always been as great in his role. And the second part of the story ... OMG. Luckily Justin has sensed the danger. He is great and extremely talented at shooting... A chapter a little stressful but wonderful ... And Brian is really attentive to his man ... Beautiful
Mr JT et Mr Hamster, in your field, you are… unequalled !
Author's Response: Thanks Ihintza; I was so happy to read Gex's comments. I love to hear from both of you and miss you when RL gets in the way. Sorry about the baby getting sick and hope that's over with.
I'm cooking right now and will answer all comments after we eat tonight.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2010 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 70: Road Kill
love it
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2010 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 31: Gay Espionage
There was two days since I came back home. Again I have to spend a few days in hospital with my baby. She redid an episode fever that reached 40°C (104° F) but this time without mouth ulcers and lymphadenopathy as the last time. However my baby was completely asthenic and me in total panic and crying despite the help of my mother who’s a nurse… Fortunately, the medical team has been super great. They placed my Maïa under treatment which interrupted quickly the fever. In fact, she has a periodic fever syndrome. It’s mild but very annoying.
And meanwhile, my favorite author has continued his great story and now I am more and more behind... I love the moments when they are in family. It's adorable. Now I wait to see what Justin can do to help the FBI. Just so brilliant, JT
If I could, my rating would be 10*10*10*10*.......infinity
Love
Author's Response: Very sorry to learn your baby was sick and surely hope it has passed now. I was one to worry my parents as I always had very high fevers if I had one at all. 104 degrees + was normal for me. We're so grateful for you and Gex writing here when you can. It's readers like you that make writing worthwhile. Love you back!
Reviewer: mira (Anonymous) · Date: February 26, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 48: My Kingdom for ...
kisses for Mr. Hamster. Love your writing.
But honestly i didn't like name Craig for their baby. I know, that Craig is a good father in this universe, but i don't like his name now ((
Author's Response: Sorry mira if that bothers you. It common in North America to name a baby for older relatives especially if they pass on like Charles Peterson did. They decided to use both grandfather's names to match. Maybe they can start to call little Craig by his middle name: Ayden. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 26, 2010 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 70: Road Kill
As bad people have to taste their own cook, the rapists got exactly what they deserved. Will McKinney have his share too? I liked the small talks between B/J and Shawn.
Author's Response: McKinney lost his captain's position with a significant loss of pay. He now has to start over in Robbery at the bottom of the barrel and could lose it there too. Remember they want to keep this a secret so they couldn't make a big deal out of punishing McKinney. Thanks for commenting very much shimayo.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 70: Road Kill
Job well done Steven, James, Justin, Shawn & Daniel.
Brilliant.
Kiss. Kiss.
Author's Response: Thank you! Many kisses back at you.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 69: Thank God for NARCAN
Shit!!
I could kill the stupid captain or gang rape him so he knows what it feel like.
Wish all the best to the new captain..... I know he can do it. He is strong.
Hugs & kisses JT, Mr. hamster.
Author's Response: Considering McKinney lost rank and $33,000 income off his captain's salary he got slammed pretty good. Hugs and kisses back.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 68: First Day on the Job
So happy for Daniel & Shawn.
Such a good looking stud Steven is. Gosh He is so handsome.....
Very good JT, Mr. Hamster.....
Off to the next Chapter (my hearth beating so fast...)
Author's Response: He is a handsome devil. I hope you enjoy the chapters to come.
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 70: Road Kill
i love it
Author's Response: Thank you Rainbow. I have to sleep now. I'll answer comments tomorrow. Thank you all!
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 49: Two Years Later
Hey, the years pass quickly ... It's true that it keeps rhythm with story. Very good initiative ! I had almost the same race car set my godfather had given me in my youth but my brother and his friends were playing with it more often and I had to wait. So one day, a angry Gex kicked it very hard, smashed it to bits (and he was heavily punished for it)
Super Chapter
Ah, Tomas calls me back.... I'll stop for tonight
Good night !!!!
Author's Response: Funny story about you and your race car set; the brothers should have included you in the playing. Give Tomas a hug from JT when you can. Pleasant dreams Gex.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 48: My Kingdom for ...
Wonderful shower scene ... You will notice that I am currently focused solely on the sex scenes. I think I'm missing it ... I read the review from Lorie. Pineapple juice? I am puzzled ...
Sweet chapter here ... Right now, my kingdom for Tomas
Author's Response: You only have a few more days to go and then you boys can tear each other up!
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 47: As Time goes On
Great chapter ... Welcome to the two little boys in the family ! Really, I increasingly want to see Key West, enjoy the beach just as the two couples. (Sigh ...).
I want to know what is this unusual call ! So, I go straight on the next chapter
Author's Response: Key West is a very nice place and at least 35% gay. They do get nasty hurricanes though sometimes. The weather other wise is always warm and good.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 46: Name Value
Exciting, the hostage-taking ...
Sex without condoms, it's really great unless when you're away from your guy and you can't have a quickie around... Shit! And especially when an author puts in front of your eyes the picture of a beautiful male or that you imagine this beautiful male bottoms for you .... And not for Paul .... : P
Ok… I go again in my 1-2-3-4 method
Author's Response: Dan is a sweetheart; I love that photo. Soon you and yours will be united once again. :P
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