Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 69: Thank God for NARCAN
I'm really liking this story JT! Great chapter. My heart went out to Steven, but he'll be fine with James by his side. Loved James response when Steven said they ganged raped him. "So now I can top you?" It was a very good comeback. It showed Steven that it didn't matter to James. It only 'mattered' if Steven let it matter. A crime was committed against him but that doesn't mean he has to be a victim. I really like those two.
Glad McKinny igone.
Author's Response: That was a hard chapter to write since I really like Steven; however, undercover cops live in danger constantly and can find themselves in very bad situations. He's going to be as good as new in no time though. Thank you Gina for commenting. I cherish your reviews.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 45: Life Plans
Justin and Brian soon in diapers, babies bottles, etc… Cancer is a nasty disease. Poor Charles ... Hey, what happens to the pitbull ? Go Justin, go Brian…
Great chapter
Author's Response: Justin's maternal instincts are kicking in. I don't understand the pitbull question. Thanks for all your wonderful comments Gex.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 44: Connections
Oh fucking shit !... JT, what are you making me ? I’m alone here and Dan is super hot. Fuck ! I'm trying to drag the sheet with my finger but it doesn’t work. I can’t see what is hidden underneath ... Too much beta ...
But now, I know what I'll do next. 1 Close the laptop (because if I stay here to drool, I'll flood my keyboard) - 2 Take a cold shower to get the pressure down - 3 Get me to bed - 4 Take my phone and call Tomas ... Happy night !!!!!!
Author's Response: "...Too much beta..." I had to reseach this from a psychological vantage point to figure you out.
Beta movement, a perceptual illusion whereby two or more still images are combined by the brain into surmised motion.
All this grad study is warping you brain boy! Don't hurt yourself in the shower; save some for Tomas. He's hungry too. Let me catch a bite to eat and I'll answer your latest comments. Thank you so much for taking the time to write us. It's fantastic what a handful of faithful chapter commenters can do for our review count! It's readers like you who make Mr. Hamster a star which some day he can cash in for sex once he figures out which sex he likes. :P
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 43: The Truth
ROFLMAO… I shouldn’t… As a gay boy, I should be supportive, compassionate but tonight I can’t…:D. Poor Paul, it’s such an embarrassing situation. He’s lucky to have Justin, Emmett and Brian by his side. Where have you idea like this, JT? ...
Author's Response: Mr. Hamster couldn't stop laughing as he came up with Paul's storyline. He's the brains of our team and he works for cookies and reviews.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 42: Rescue
I feel that the history with this poor Paul will be quite funny even if the situation is pathetic... What coming out! Already, it’s not at all easy to do it voluntarily and I can imagine the shame he must feel. But I know that Justin and Emmett will be able to help him. I look forward to reading more... I laughed at the end. Nothing too serious, or sarcastic, but it feels so good
Author's Response: I had to shift gears to a light hearted direction for a change. Paul will be fine and soon very happy.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 41: Kidnapped
Rich and perverse ... It's the worst. They think they can do what they want with their money and that this money offers them protection but money can’t buy everything... Justin, for example. All the money in the world wouldn’t change anything when the life of a kid is in danger…
Good chapter
Author's Response: Without Justin on the case he could have gotten away with it and surely kill the kid when he was done using him since the boy could ID him.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 40: Horny Cop
Super chapter. I love this story that keeps me company now in my hotel room ... Luckily elsewhere !! The situations are impressive and are linked together so great. As you know, I love roller coasters ... Another cop rotten to get out of the way. Again, Justin knows how to conduct negotiations with Brian. It's so easy ...It will be hard with Tomas because even if I imposed a restriction, he would be able to withstand a bit… Me, much less, I'm too greedy ;)
Good job, Mister…
No, Mr. Hamster... The technique is not the good one. The carrot should be held straight... Believe me, I'm pretty good on the carrot and if you want I can give you a lesson. A big rabbit has taught me that some years ago.
Author's Response: The hamster gets food everywhere when he's eating and could care less what he looks like as long as he gets to eat. He's really putting on the ounces lately. Glad you liked the chapter and so glad to hear from you again.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 39: Todd Sanders
Hey, it's not just ! Justin has an advantage over Brian with his gift ... Oh well I would love to enter in the thoughts of Tomas ... Mmmmm !! In any case, the description of the scenes is pure genius. Here is a great chapter, very powerful. It is difficult to hear the boy offered his services ... He did not know anything. Ben and Hunter accepted the challenge. Todd will finally discover the simple joy of being a beloved child but it will not be easy
Great job, dear
Author's Response: It's a challenge getting inside the head of such an abused child but that was the attempt writing this chapter.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 38: Ice Ice Baby
Ah, sweet Nurse Griffin... Is there someone who can show her the exit? That's where it leads to wanting to be so superior ... The dealer had no chance either. Throughout the restaurant, he goes for the sole policeman (and who is also the one who handles perfectly handcuffs)... Love Brian and Justin at the end. J
Author's Response: I like using that name in my story. Griffin reminds me of many such people hung up on their authority and power. The dealer thought Justin was a high school student.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 37: Playing Hooky
Hot .... Me too, I'll take a few days off when I finish my internship. I need it
I like the discussion between Debbie, Carl, Brian and Justin ... Too funny!
Super Chapter
Author's Response: Debbie's great getting people to relax around her. After your internship you deserve some time off to regroup and reclaim your man. On the bright side you have it behind you now.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 36: Nuclear Tramps
This chapter is very very sad... The situations described here are horrible... and yet so realistic. For their doses, some are willing to worst meanness. And I think I know already how Brian is going to help Justin to get these images out from his head ... : ) « Brian could reach under his robe and play with his beautiful blond lover getting smashed » Wow !
Author's Response: Love conquers all! Yes Brian knows how to bring his blond lover down to earth and erase the bad memories with new good ones.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 35: Key West
I want to go to Key West. ... ! Tomas, after New York, I want to go to Key West. ... !
Brian and Justin seem to have a great time. Justin want a house there, he will have a house there… Sap has been suicided in his cell… It’s a good news
Author's Response: I've been to New York but never to Key West; I've heard a lot about it however and knew someone who once lived there.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 34: Killer for Hire
Sap, you're dead! The worst idea who might cross your mind is trying to kill Justin. And hire the only killer with heart and brain who must exist on earth, you are really jinxed ... JT, you have terrific ideas. Who can think about introducing in this story a killer with feelings ?? Beautiful
Author's Response: I could never let Justin get wacked like that. He's took good for that. Glad you enjoyed the plotline.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 33: The Aftermath
These guys are sick.... It's disgusting to attack a child. Such methods are unacceptable. This guy has no right to mercy. And when you think this is not a fact out of the imagination of an author, it is very very sad ...
This story is really beautiful. It is a great pleasure to read ...
Author's Response: Sadly children die in drive by shootings in North America every day. The boy in that photo really did die in a drive by shooting but that's not his real name. Since it's a police story this needed to be in there.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 32: First Kill
Between the two eyes, no chance for the cop... Justin has an impressive self-control. And then, he had no choice. Psychologically, it can be hard and Brian is right to ask him to take a few days off because Justin hasn’t had the aftershock ...
Great
Author's Response: Justin is so well centered he'll be fine. Thanks Gex.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 31: Gay Espionage
That's the difference between Brian and Justin ... Justin is willing to let their chance to th Captain and the Detective in narcotics but Brian would be more intransigent. Now, maybe Gwen and Carter deserve this second chance ... In any case, the boys did an excellent job. Bravo James et Stephen. Again, the FBI appealed to Justin. The espionage case seems very interesting ...
I want to go to New York !
Good job, JT
Author's Response: All the crap was going on in Narcotics before Carter became the captain and they hid it from him. Gwen knew about it and started the investigation without putting his family at risk. NY is very expensive so bring lots and lots of money! Thank you so very much from me and the hamster for all your wonderful thoughtful review comments Gex.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 30: The Wrong Prostitute
Here, Brian set the fox to mind the geese ... Now, it's just a matter of time before these rogue cops fall. Brian and Justin will spring-clean this department. Certainly, among those of both narcotics and patrol officers completely sick, they still have much work before making a clean sweep in their police
Great chapter from a great storyteller
Big kisses
Author's Response: I know that working in narcotics messes up lots of cops; it's a very hard assignment with barely any victories worth while.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 69: Thank God for NARCAN
That was so heavy. Poor Steven; at least he has a strong attitude about it. He can make it and not let this destroy him. Making him the captain is a wise more for the department and his recovery I think.
Author's Response: He's a tough man; he'll be ok. And he'll be an excellent captain too.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 29: Undercover Rookies
I find Randy weird on this photo... It just may be me but I find him much more cute in QAF. I don't know....
In short, the chapter is still great. Guys of narcotics are going to have big troubles. In addition, I am confident that Brian chose two excellent detectives for the job.
Love
Author's Response: I'm jumping up and down seeing you back Gex. Your sister told me about your field work. Actually this is Randy Harrison's natural hair color; he bleached his hair for the show.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 28: Drunken Cops
Alcoholism is a strong addiction and withdrawal is often difficult. However, it’s easier if the patient is accompanied socially and medically. Policemen aren’t immune. I recently read a book by a union officer, Daniel Dabit, which applies to acknowledge the ravages of alcoholism in the police so these patients can be treated and, once cured, fully reinstated. This lucid story is crossed by great humor and a joie de vivre communicative. In any case, Brian reacted the right way. He is right to give a chance to this policeman. Now, if he relapses, it will be another story ... ..
Excellent
Big hug
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked how Brian handled this case. You almost have to give them one chance to recover and like you said if they fail it's on them.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 27: Dumb and Dumber
Wow, what a tongue Mr Hamster ! I'm impressed
I loved this chapter. It is light, funny .... This makes a very nice little break
Great job, Mr JT
Author's Response: We had a lot of fun with this chapter!
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 26: First Night on the Job
This gets off to a great start ! But who has a grudge against Brian ? In any case, Brian is too great ... And Justin also ... Ted and his boyfriend had some bad times in Pistols Fortunately, the injuries are not too serious
Super chapter ... I spend some quality time with this story
Author's Response: Nobody in particular has a grudge for Brian; just that he's gay and the chief. North America has a lot of haters for gays here.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 25: I Swear
He really thinks a lot of himself, the guy ! .... With Taylor’s departure, he will be again the World’s ruler, the Big Boss. Nay, he must be joking ! I loved it. Brian is an excellent chief. But, what a start for him ...
Superb as always ...
Author's Response: Yeah but Brian didn't ask for the job. And he will get tired of it soon enough. Love you dude!
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 24: I Do
Too cool, Emmett .... I loved how they make fun of the mother and the sister of Brian (who obviously have no sense of humor). Then leave them with Kiki too good aswell.... I can imagine their stiff faces, with the thin-lipped smile.
Very fun chapter ... You had to split your sides laughing and I can see Mr Hamster on his back, nearly died laughing too….
Great job
Author's Response: Don't you know Emmett, and gang tag teamed on the straight people for fun! They figured they might be Brian's relatives and that he didn't care much for them was well known. The boys kind of look like him too. Thanks Gex!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 68: First Day on the Job
Steven is so handsome for a man. I thought his eyes were gray until I saved the picture and blew it up to find them a shade of green. Really hot. I hope he is ok. Almost caught up with you again.
Author's Response: He'll live which is a miracle for what happened to him. And he'll be ok in time.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good Funny Money
Hey Bob,
I haven't forgotten you, nor Mr Hamster. Again 15 days and I finished my internship... FINALLY ! Not that it wasn't interesting, but I was away and I haven't had the opportunity to return home on weekends, so... 24 days without Tomas... Hard ! I worked a lot on my Master's thesis also because I want to discuss about this with my tutor on my return to university. Now I have a little time and I'm going to comment on all the chapters that I read ... Maybe not all in one go, but I'll at least start...
Too cool how the guy falls into the trap. I love Kiki also. Anyway, the guy, he'll think twice next time he will follow a young boy in the restroom... Rex can resume his career. It's great. Thugs can not be quiet when Justin is in the corner ... If they hoped to quietly counterfeit money, they failed
Excellent, JT
Author's Response: I beat it's just as hard on Tomas as it is for you. He's going to tear you up when you get together. Would I love to be a fly on the wall the night you two get back together. You're both so hot to begin with; go almost a month without and .... well I hope the bed is sturdy enough. :P I'm so happy you took the time to write us some comments Gex; sis told me you were gone and still reading and I know how hard college can be for a grad student. You're going into a great field and can help a lot of young people. I take my hat off to you my man. Love you! Give that hunk of yours a hug from JT when you get the chance.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 67: Shawn Carpenter
Daniel looks like a top and Shawn looks like a bottom boy. Justin hits a home room matching them together. The photos really do add to the story.
Author's Response: You got it; they're hot in their own way and role. I'm very much impressed with each one.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 64: Hall of Fame
I wonder what their first house is selling for. You didn't say.
Author's Response: I'll mention it in a future chapter.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 63: Kitchen Sinkless Meat Loaf
Their house is a palace. The recipe looks good. Now I'm hungry.
Author's Response: It's a fantastic meat loaf or I wouldn't have posted it in the story. I make it about once a month and my tribe loves it.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 69: Thank God for NARCAN
Poor Steven, fortunately he has a great lover to stand by him.
Author's Response: James is so in love with him it doesn't matter; his man is alive from a situation that could have ended his life. Steven is strong and will get over this quickly. So happy to find your comments today shimayo.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 62: When More is Better
LMAO! This is so wild but I believe you. Women spend money to improve their bodies so I guess men can too.
Author's Response: This is the real deal. You can research it online too. If a man has the cash he can find a doctor who knows how to do the procedures.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 61: Keeping Up with the O'Malley's
I love it
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 68: First Day on the Job
So, Daniel and Shawn are a few procedures away from heaven? Lucky men!
Steven Arnold has an incredible look...
Author's Response: They have the procedures already completed by this chapter. Steven's a very hot man no doubt.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 60: The Good Life
Lucky Mike to get all that money. Life is good.
Author's Response: I like to spread the wealth around in my stories.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 67: Shawn Carpenter
Daniel is really handsome and Shawn looks like an angel, trust Justin to match the best pair.
smiles,
Author's Response: Yeah I can just see them two going at it. One looks like a great rider and the other one a great ride!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 59: The Offer
I wondered about this but didn't really see Molly do it.
Author's Response: I didn't give any clues so it's ok not to foresee it coming.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 58: Pick on a gay boy you get all the Gay Tribe
Good for the gay boy for stepping up and cheers to Mel for making it stick.
Author's Response: She's a real pit bull lawyer for her friends and family.
Reviewer: anon (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 57: Scandals
That senator is such an idiot to do this with his hidden life. This was very funny until the end. Got to read on and see where this is going.
Author's Response: I don't drag out a cliffie; the next chapter will basically resolve the issue.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 69: Thank God for NARCAN
That was intense. I'd be mad too if I was Steven. Giving him the promotion might help his mental state to get over this. Good job Mr. Hamster.
Author's Response: Sadly sometimes being an undercover cop has its dangers.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 68: First Day on the Job
Holy shit! A chiff hanger. Steven is a hot man.
Author's Response: Good to see you back reading and commenting Dave. Hang on for the ride.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 67: Shawn Carpenter
Good job Jus.
Brilliant.
The boy is beautiful.
Hugs & kisses.
Author's Response: Daniel is very happy with him too. Hugs and kisses back!
Reviewer: mira (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 40: Horny Cop
sending my love to Mr. Hamster from Israel.
Author's Response: Hello mira in Israel; you're my 700th reviewer so the next chapter is dedicated to you girl!
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 67: Shawn Carpenter
You find the hottest men JT. Daniel is a hottie and Shawn is a little angel. He looks like he would be fun ride.
Author's Response: A fun ride is a high compliment to a bottom boy!
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 67: Shawn Carpenter
I love it
Author's Response: Thank you! We love you 2.
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie
aw this was great. Wow you killed Michael. Never saw that coming.
Author's Response: I was sick in the head to make Michael and Brian lovers in the past but this is an alternate universe and I only had to mention him. I needed a way to have Debbie and Carl in the story.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 48: My Kingdom for ...
Yesterday something bothered me all day long, yet I know with shame what was it about! It's Norman Rockwell , not Stockwell, I have no lame excuse but I was so excited and jumped all around when I discovered the picture and so was my brain...
*very red and humble face begging for forgiveness*
Author's Response: That's no big deal! Don't sweat the small stuff. I knew who you meant. Love you!
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 64: Hall of Fame
Michael sure likes a big one delivered rough too. Fun read.
Author's Response: You're gay; you know the score dude. Why is it no twink will lay down for a queen to take him? We want a man honey!
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 63: Kitchen Sinkless Meat Loaf
That mansion is a palace.
The recipe looks very interesting and has a lot of things in it. I'll have to scale down the proportions and make a smaller one.
Author's Response: Cut everything in half for a 2 pounder or don't use the pork. It will stay fresh in the ice box for a week.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 62: When More is Better
I heard of this procedure to enlarge a penis but didn't know the details how it was done. Very interesting chaper JT.
Author's Response: It's the real deal. You have to go to a big city to find a doctor who performs it however.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 61: Keeping Up with the O'Malley's
The banter between Brian and Justin was so much fun. They are so well matched for each other.
Author's Response: Their mental relationship is just as magical as their physical one.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 60: The Good Life
I can see them swimming naked in that huge pool. The house is beautiful.
Author's Response: That is a great swimming pool; imagine it heated in the dead of winter in Pittsburgh. Priceless!
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 59: The Offer
Molly is the perfect choice to carry Shannon's child. Super plot hamster.
Author's Response: No doubt they will make one beautiful baby.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 58: Pick on a gay boy you get all the Gay Tribe
I read ahead and will now leave short comments.
Great how a gay boy stopped the publishing of the photos. Good picture of Mel too.
Author's Response: You and another reader named George do the same thing. We're grateful for the chapter comments very much. This way you tell potential readers the story is worth their time. Thanks so much Dave.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 64: Hall of Fame
I can easily visualize the pool scenes, so much tenderness there.
Say hi! to Mr.Hamster,
Author's Response: I should write more family stuff; it's very popular I noticed. Thanks for telling me.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 63: Kitchen Sinkless Meat Loaf
And I forgot to thank you for the recipe, I'll try it one day after I finished converting all US weight into french. It's a delight to read a good novel and have a recipe in it, French people would say" c'est la cerise sur le gâteau!", how would you mean it, "the cherry on top" ? < sorry if I badly translated it >
Author's Response: I made that meat loaf the day I wrote that chapter and my gang at home tore it up! It really is very delicious and full of flavors. It was my mother's recipe and all the ladies at church had to have it.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 63: Kitchen Sinkless Meat Loaf
The house Brian and Justin had bought is really beatiful! There is something appealing in it.
And there will be a big change with their body too; it's like Justin want to be ripped in two, how can he handle a bigger one, Brian is mule enough! lol
Author's Response: I loved that house too. An adult male can take 15-16 inches anally without passing the bend in the large intestine. There really are men born that big. A bottom boy loves a big one too! Actually the small ones can really hurt you.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 62: When More is Better
It's the first time I heard that, you can safely double the length and make thicker a penis? Then, as it's "useful", it should be a free of charge surgery :)
Author's Response: In the USA this is considered an elective surgical procedure and insurance doesn't pay for it unless it is reconstruction following an accident or disease. Thanks for reading and all your great comments shimayo.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 61: Keeping Up with the O'Malley's
*fan self* when Brian is playing it rough, omg , need a glass of ice-cold water to cool off! With his 11 inch thick tool, It's a wonder Justin didn't bleed, but once again, it's BRIAN damnit!
Author's Response: Hehehe! Justin came easily hand much more than that.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 60: The Good Life
I loved the banter between Justin and Michael, the mention of Michael feeling like a royal prince living in this huge house reminds me of a certain someone who bought a mansion for his prince...
Nice :)
Author's Response: You caught me using canon metaphors in the story. I try to stay true to canon without being boringly repetative.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 59: The Offer
You left out all wedding details purposefully, I guess?
Can't wait to see the boys's reaction hearing that Milly accepted to carry their child.
Author's Response: When I wrote this chapter I was awake 2 days and tired; I just wanted to get out another chapter without concentrating on the details. Weddings are like strip joints, you seen one, you've seen them all so to speak.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 58: Pick on a gay boy you get all the Gay Tribe
Who could be this foul officer at the Pittsburgh police station? He has to do his prayer soon!
Author's Response: As you will learn in future chapters it's a rookie redneck cop in records who messed up.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 57: Scandals
This Senator Vitter guy is like a drunkman who call the police, so dumb!
Author's Response: Me and Mr. Hamster had a lot of fun writing this chapter and making it funny.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2010 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 48: My Kingdom for ...
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I'm speechless (for the first time in my life), I'm so happy, you send me the Norman Stockwell's painting... I bow down with gratitude *grin*
One day if you travel by this part of the world, let me know, I'll make you some home made guava juice, and for Mr.Hamster a whole jar of cookies. Deal?
Love you back!
Author's Response: You got a deal; my passport could used some new nation stamps in it. Norman Rockwell is one of my favorite artists.
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2010 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 64: Hall of Fame
i love it
Author's Response: Muchos gracis!
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2010 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 63: Kitchen Sinkless Meat Loaf
I love it
Author's Response: Danke!
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 64: Hall of Fame
Hot chapter. Loved the scene around the pool with the kids.
Author's Response: I wonder if straight parents have such interesting lives. hehehe Hope you like the next chapter months later!
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2010 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 55: Cop Killer
Shannon and Michael start well, it's cool from them to share the laurels.
Author's Response: Shannon and Michael's love rivals Brian and Justin's. Why write one hot gay couple if you can have 2 or 3? :D
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2010 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 54: Lovers in Motion
Sex scenes are always hot between our favourite men...
Author's Response: Gay boys just want to have fun!
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2010 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 53: Changing of the Guard
Can't wait what next chapter will bring, now that Brian and Justin are leaving the police stuffs.
Author's Response: They will still have interesting lives and sometimes aid law enforcement. Love you!
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 54: Lovers in Motion
Great chapter!
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 43: The Truth
Yep, I think Brian's right. Although embarrassing, the truth is the only answer for Paul's situation. Taking the vacation and dropping out of sight until the whole thing can blow over is a good thing, too. He's lucky that B/J and Em were there to catch and support him.
Another good chapter!
Author's Response: It's going to all work out in Paul's favor. Having gay supervisors made a big difference for how this went down.
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 55: Cop Killer
Sex with Michael is smoking off the chain. Hot!!!!!
Author's Response: He's a horny and kinky little devil yeah. :D
Reviewer: deb (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 55: Cop Killer
i find it interesting to hear about the different cases.
Author's Response: Thanks deb; I hope to keep it interesting for you.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 55: Cop Killer
The JT roller coaster plot again. All that hot loving and then a brutal murder. Michael is such a happy bottom Shannon could tear him up bleeding, and the boy would beg for more. He has to be a wild ride. Thanks for all the chapters tonight.
Author's Response: A wild ride would be a major understatement! :P
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 54: Lovers in Motion
You actually made sense why Shannon should be the chief. This is one hell of a plot JT. Only one more chapter to go and I catch up with you.
Author's Response: Way to go trooper!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 55: Cop Killer
Michael really likes it rough. It hurt just to read how hard Shannon gave it to him this time. Are gay boys who bottom really that into pain? You hinted the time he was sexually abused at 12 made him this way perhaps. Real intense material here. I must be a little sick too because it was a turn on. "grins* :-)
Author's Response: How do I answer this? Being a bottom only sounds and looks painful; it's actually very pleasurable to receive. Many do love their tops to be real rough but they aren't really getting hurt by it. Does that make sense? Imagine the joy of being taken by a real strong powerful man; it's a major turn on for a lot of bottom boys. Thanks for the question.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 53: Changing of the Guard
Your longest chapter yet JT. Plenty of info and plot holes filled in. I wonder how a rookie can be the chief though. That is above the bullshit line I think.
Author's Response: Next chapter holds the answers.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 52: The Problem with Money
Sean is as hot as Shannon. Molly was smart to move on him and hook him up. I'd eat that boy alive. Great pic.
Author's Response: He sure is a hottie huh!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 54: Lovers in Motion
No doubt Shannon is well liked; men and women alike would like to get in his pants. His fucking hot!
Author's Response: I believe he's one of the most beautiful men I've ever seen.
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 55: Cop Killer
I love ti
Author's Response: You know we love you 2!~
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 51: Welcome to the Family
Nice reading here. Molly is fun and interesting wanting a Shannon of her own. Nice to marry money as Shannon is finding out. Tired but have to catch up with you.
Author's Response: Thank you for being a dedicated reader~!
Reviewer: mary (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 53: Changing of the Guard
Thanks for a long chapter with a lot to learn. Got to sleep now and get up tomorrow. You write faster than I have time to read. Good job JT and a peck on the cheek for the hamster. XOXOXO
Author's Response: We'll be looking for your return mary. Thank you for all your comments.
Reviewer: anon (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 52: The Problem with Money
The boy with the hair dryer deserves a hit comment by his self.
Author's Response: Ha! Thanks! :)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 53: Changing of the Guard
Long and very informative chapter. There is so much going on with the plot and subplots. It will be interesting how Shannon becomes the chief. He's cute enough to make me confess to anything! *grins*
Author's Response: Some might confess to crimes they didn't commit just to be with him! :)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 51: Welcome to the Family
Michael sure likes it rough. I see changes coming for the police dept.
Author's Response: Yes, many good changes in the air.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 50: Shannon
I had to go cool off my body after reading this eposode. Shannon is with out a doubt the hottest man I've ever seen. Michael is pretty cute too.
This was some of your best smut JT.
Author's Response: Smut? This is called detailed erotic gay writing. Can't you tell the difference? :P
Reviewer: mary (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 52: The Problem with Money
Molly is so lucky. That is one yummy boy. The straight sex was steamy hot.
Author's Response: Glad it got your juices flowing dear!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 51: Welcome to the Family
Michael is such a sucker for sexual punishment. It's a turn on though.
Author's Response: It's not punishment if it turns you on!
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 49: Two Years Later
Kids grow up fast in your story. Todd is doing very good too.
Author's Response: Hopefully a long novel stays very interesting if the time moves forward rapidly.
Reviewer: mary (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 51: Welcome to the Family
I liked Molly in this chapter.
Author's Response: She's being a typical Taylor here.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 50: Shannon
HOT! One of your best chapters ever.
Author's Response: Thank you! The eye candy helps.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 47: As Time goes On
The plot thickens.
Author's Response: OH YEAH!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 49: Two Years Later
Todd a piano student; good plot.
Author's Response: A true diamond from the rough.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 48: My Kingdom for ...
JT you wrote like 7 chapter in less than 3 days. I'm not complaining but do you sleep? This is an incredible amount of product you produce.
I loved the gee mister banter. very funny
Author's Response: Several chapters are in rough draft and I polish them off and post them when I have time.
Reviewer: mary (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 50: Shannon
The boy with the long hair is so beautiful. His eyebrows are fantastic. This chapter was too hot for the Internet.
Author's Response: Yeah, he's a real cutie that one.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 48: My Kingdom for ...
good stuff
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: mary (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 49: Two Years Later
The jump in time keeps the story interesting.
Author's Response: That's our plan!
Reviewer: mary (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 48: My Kingdom for ...
I like how George read the chapters and then answered reviews. That is a easy way to do it and get to read on without stopping. Love the hamster photo.
Author's Response: We're very happy to get the comment hits adding to our count; short or long; all reviews are precious. Do it however your comfortable mary.
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 54: Lovers in Motion
I love it
Author's Response: We love you more dear!
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 54: Lovers in Motion
This explained the logic making Shannon the chief. He will be the hottest looking chief in the nation thats for sure. The sex at the end was great too.
Author's Response: I know I'm pushing the realistic line here but an administrator only has to be able to organize and delagate.
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 53: Changing of the Guard
I was curious how you would pull off such a young rookie cop as the next chief. Very interesting developments in this chapter.
Author's Response: Answers are forthcoming.
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 52: The Problem with Money
That picture is one very hot boy. Wow! Molly should worship him forever.
Author's Response: He's just as beautiful on the inside too.
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 51: Welcome to the Family
Changes are coming, and loved how the family accepted the new lovers. Molly was so funny in this chapter.
Author's Response: She's a Taylor kid; and now in season and ready to play!
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 50: Shannon
This was a very hot chapter. I've seen Shannon somewhere before. Is he a model?
Author's Response: Yes, Todd Hudson, a New York model worth tens of thousands an hour.
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 49: Two Years Later
That's a cool car track.
Author's Response: It excited the inner boy in me too.
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 48: My Kingdom for ...
I have read all the chapters so now I leave you quick short reviews for each one so you will reward the hamster for a job well done. The prezel picture is so cute.
Author's Response: Thank you so much sir! I'll make the hamster very happy today just for you and my reader complicated who he's in love with.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 42: Rescue
thanks that this chapter ends with laughing and this Monroe guy being arrested!
Author's Response: I try to balance the story with plot, details, angst, love, hate, suspense, mystery, and humor.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 41: Kidnapped
please make them arrest this sick pervert very soon, it's dreadful...
Author's Response: With Justin on the case his hours are numbered.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 40: Horny Cop
I loved the banters between our guys!
< the picture of Mr.Hamster with the carrot is priceless, wanna hug him!>
Author's Response: Lovers have such an easy way to talk with each other. Mr. Hamster loves hugs and reviews, and cookies, and carrots, and pretzels, and kisses too! Thanks so much for all your comments shimayo.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 39: Todd Sanders
<There is something very sad in this little guy's eyes, he looks like a little boy but his eyes are " old and exhausted ", sorry I don't know the appropriate words but you surely get what I mean.>
Don't think I'm finicky, but the Ben/Hunter pairing as lovers sounds weird to me, but if you decided to do it this way, I'll just make up my mind and follow.
And it's great from them to accept Todd as their child, this kid deserves some happiness.
Author's Response: When I found Todd's photo I knew he was perfect by his eyes. This is an alternate universe and without Michael I can see Ben and Hunter espcially since they are both HIV+. Ben makes the perfect top and Hunter looks like the perfect twink bottom. Todd becomes a very gifted, talented and nice young man with them in time.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 38: Ice Ice Baby
looking forward to next chapter with a horny Justin and handcuffs...
Author's Response: I've had sex with handcuffs before and it hot to do it that way. Justin loves Brian and trusts him totally. The sex next chapter is mostly mental in description; I hope you like it.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 37: Playing Hooky
cool chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I wanted to lighten up the plot a bit.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2010 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 39: Todd Sanders
You are playing with my emotion......
The love scene is.... HOT!!!! Love it, like it........
That boy deserve to a normal life as he can get with all the love & support.
Brilliant plot.
Kiss. Kiss Mr Hamster.
Hugs JT.
Author's Response: If I get an emotional response from a reader it's a high compliment that my writing is working on you. Mr. Hamster loves the kisses and hugs very much.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2010 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 38: Ice Ice Baby
Kinky!!!
Like it... like it....
The title make me play the song over and over in my head. lol...
Hugs & kisses.
Remember to bring along the cuff Mr. Hamster...;)
Author's Response: There really is a form of speed-meth called Ice. They smoke it in glass pipes and get major wasted on it. Yeah I though of the rap song too when I decided on the title for the chapter. So happy to see you reading. Mr. Hamster blows you kisses.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2010 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 37: Playing Hooky
Hiiiiiiiii........
Thank you for the dedication. Loving it!!
Life not so good for me right now. I undergo some minor surgery last saturday and haven't have time to read your wonderful story.
I miss Mr. Hamster so much, and you 2 JT.
Excellent as always.
Kiss. Kiss.
Author's Response: Soooo Gooood to hear from you today!!!!! Welcome back to the anti-real life world. I know you can catch up quick; Mr. Hamster missed you very much. Kisses back!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2010 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 30: The Wrong Prostitute
Well, that's why I stopped suddenly my comments yesterday evening ... I am miserably asleep on the couch before the fireplace with the laptop on your knees ... At 2 am, my husband came to wake me so I will reinstate the marriage bed
This poor little girl must have the fear of his life ... Justin is a master to handle such situations. Steven and James played well as their side
Superb chapter
Author's Response: I'm alway very happy to hear from you Ihintza. Take care of your self girl! Enjoy the future chapters.
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2010 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 53: Changing of the Guard
i love it
Author's Response: Love you back!
Reviewer: anon (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2010 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 48: My Kingdom for ...
I forgot to hit this chapter for Mr. Hamster.
Author's Response: Far out! Thank you!
Reviewer: anon (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 51: Welcome to the Family
I love where this story is going. Michael sounds so submissive but I bet he's like Justin and has more control then he lets on. These two new lovers are too hot for fandom!
Author's Response: They are pretty cute huh? Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: anon (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2010 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 50: Shannon
OMG!!! This chapter and the photos are sooooo hot! This needs a tissue alert and not for tears. :D I really want to learn more about these boys.
Author's Response: They are going to be major characters in the story, and good friends of Brian and Justin.
Reviewer: anon (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2010 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 49: Two Years Later
Fantastic jump in time. The boys are darlings. I see more of Michael coming up.
Author's Response: Michael is grown up and coming back into the picture. First, he needs a man...
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 50: Shannon
Oh my...The hottness in this chapter....whew...I need a cold shower! lol nice job..
Author's Response: The boys are pretty tasty aren't they? Hehehehe! Glad you're still with me in this wild cop tale.
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2010 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 50: Shannon
i love it
Author's Response: We love you more!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2010 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 29: Undercover Rookies
Wow, There's lots of things in this story. Now it is the narcotics cops who are in the spotlight ... This story is really great. I'm sure these two boys hired by Brian will make an excellent job
You make an excellent job too and Mr Hamster is really marvellous
Author's Response: Mr. Hamster has packed on a few ounces with all the cookies and the prezel we gave him for such good work. Thanks Ihintza for commenting very much!
Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2010 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 50: Shannon
Beautiful. Hott. Love all the pictures. seems like a new kind of arranging a marriage, but with thought and great results. Love this.
Kisses for you both.
Author's Response: Actually some gay boys come out this way; they saved their virginity until they find a potential lover forever. It's actually more common than most folks know. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2010 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 28: Drunken Cops
Oh, I know this anxiety ... And strangely, fever often happens the night (when it is so easy to have a doctor, to have help...). I'm glad Gus is OK. Brian takes perfectly the problem of alcoholism for this policeman ... Alcoholism is a real pain !
Excellent job, dear
Author's Response: It was the cop's first offense and he has a family depending on him. His future now is up to him. They still get his paycheck while he's in rehab. Glad you're enjoying this story.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2010 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 27: Dumb and Dumber
So funny chapter... It feels good to laugh a little. Thank you for that, Bob
Big kisses
Author's Response: I know that sometimes police work can be very funny. Kisses back!
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