Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 14: Terrorists
Hi I'm ba-ack!! Sorry about before - yes I do know it is FICTION but as some fics do; it just pushed buttons (in fact I had a flash back to an incident I thought I had dealt with - as a teacher we sometimes get to deal with children who have been through and survived (of a kind). One of my most difficult but wonderful children (that I lost) had been through sexual, drug, verbal and physical abuse was the child I thought about. It is not just police and social services who 'know' the details; there are many ripples caused by these occurrences. OK onto my review, cos it was worth while returning and I really enjoyed this 'enhanced' Justin and his solutions to his problems - loved his priorities too! Also love the relationship between Justin and Brian and the rest of the charaters too; especially Craig and the others. I had the fleeting thought that it would be nice to be able to arrest them for the actual crime - homophobia, etc, unfotunately we can't arrest people for what they think - or maybe that is just as well! (If there were rabid conservtives in power - I'd be arrested!! LOL!) Aside from the hiccup I really enjoy this fic - specially the plotline. BTW I was not meaning to criticise you I was just trying to express my feelings as I felt guilty for not reading - not that there was anything wrong with your writing; I do understand you write as you need to write I just wanted you to know my reactions to it! Love your writing and look forward to more soon! :)
Author's Response: You made realize how bad reading about severe child abuse is and I added a stronger warning on the story banner and before the vision. I also took out the blood comment too to tone down the details. My readers dropped by a hundred after the chapter that bothered you so you were not alone. In a way if my writing got such an emotional reaction from you then it was very realistic and a back handed compliment. :)
I'm very happy you enjoyed the rest of the story and the new chapters that went up last night. Mr. Hamster is really in rare form today.
Thank you so much for your comments and for your story I'm also enjoying very much. I'm biting fingernails and sending Brian and Justin a little prayer as they deal with Chris in your story. Love you!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 9: The Offer
It's amazing all that can see Justin in this historic house. The offer made by the head of the FBI is really interesting. They can not refuse. This is an excellent compromise. Back to Pittsburgh yet Justin is a super good job with the FBI and finally, an arrest ... I love him
Great job
Big love
Author's Response: I'm so tired I missed your comments. Justin is my favorite boy too. I also had a weakness for hot blond twinks myself. :P
Big Love Back!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 9: The Offer
It's amazing all that can see Justin in this historic house. The offer made by the head of the FBI is really interesting. They can not refuse. This is an excellent compromise. Back to Pittsburgh yet Justin is a super good job with the FBI and finally, an arrest ... I love him
Great job
Big love
Author's Response: Double clicked; I love it. :) Mess up more often it helps the number count.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 8: Federal Trouble
I love the exchange between Justin and his father. His powerful power works wonder by bringing to the light this terrorist cell. I can imagine the surprise on his face when the caller on the line became known. Wow, Barak Obama in person and he invites them to the White House. I just hope that Justin should not leave his family ... In any case, he can be extremely proud
JT and Mr Hamster, you are a wonderful team too...
Big Love
Author's Response: Hi sweetheart! How's the most beautiful girl and mother in France today?
I would pee my pants if Obama called me. :)
Justin is stubborn and will not leave his home or Brian. Big love back!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 7: Changes
Many changes in the couple's life. Moving into perspective, a family car and a promotion for Brian with the retirement of Carl. Debbie will obviously adore her role as grandma for Gus, certainly for Michael too. I am also delighted that he has no diseases ... Now, it quickly integrates its new family to begin his future life. The cases solved are connected with the help of our psychic but eventually arouse the curiosity of the FBI ... What they have in mind?
Another great chapter
Thank you for all that work done for our happiness
Author's Response: It is the comments like yours that motivates me to write for you; they are my reward. And the rodent stops biting me demanding that I type out his plot ideas. We now have the foundation of the story established with Justin's gift clearly out there. Thanks so much for your review.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 11: Love
(the picture is hot and beautiful!)
I loved it.
Author's Response: I was lucky to find it; it was perfect for the chapter ending; thanks for commenting very much shimayo.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 10: Demonstration
The last paragraph reminds me of Jackie Chan's movie, but no kiddings, kung fu masters can really accomplish amazing physical and mental feat; they even can heal someone by using their inner energy whithout touching the aching part . < I'm sure you already know that, but it's just a small contribution of mine >
Author's Response: An Aikido master feels the energy around him; the number of attackers doesn't matter as the master redirects the energy of them against each other. I studied the art in my 20s and my teacher could take down 40 students at one time and not break a sweat. The art is that powerful. Kung Fu is very close to Aikido as many moves are the same. Thanks for your comment and interest.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 6: Gus
I am a mum too and this case of rape make me sick because I know that some people can be extremely perverse. In the media, we find these horrible news stories that they are sometimes beyond all comprehension ... Yes it’s hard, difficult, but this happens in real life as you report it…
So, despite this terrible case and Lindsay 's car accident, this chapter is wonderful. Gus is safe. Brian and Justin will have to raise the baby but I know they will be wonderful parents for the kid ... Melanie has done well here
I said it…. wonderful
Author's Response: Thank you! I love stories with Brian and Justin raising Gus. I don't like writing child abuse but it's part of law enforcement to deal with it so naturally our boys will run across it in their careers. I try to focus on the crimes being solved to put a positive spin on the horrible cases. Thanks so much for all your chapter comments and ratings too. Love you!
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 9: The Offer
OMG! I will act like you thought of me when you wrote this priceless chapter (coughs) because I'm an Asian woman and bi-racial too...Seriously, I loved the visiting White House part.
Author's Response: Considering Justin stopped a terrorist attack worse than 9/11 he deserved a dinner and night at the White House. Thanks for commenting shimayo; I love to hear from you.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 5: The Touch
Wow, I love the gift of Justin ... It's a good chance he has this power. This will certainly help a lot in their investigations and even their lives ... But this first demonstration is pretty bad with the description of the death of Michael, the abuse suffered by Brian ... Luckily, this gift allows him to solve some cold cases. Some visions are difficult but Justin is strong. I loved the early morning between boys ...
Beautiful chapter in a beautiful chapter
Mr Hamster deserves a very nice kiss from me
Author's Response: Ihintza; you're my 100th reviewer! The next chapter is dedicated to you.
Mr. Hamster loves your kisses! :)
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 4: Michael
I am extremely happy for Michael ... He deserves a wonderful life. By staying with the parents of Justin, he also keeps in touch with the beautiful blonde who will be a caring and protective big brother. Justin will be also a wonderful model for the boy ... But more importantly, that Michael makes a complete break with his father. This man doesn’t deserve to wear the title of father ...
Great chapter
Author's Response: Michael will do great now with Justin's parents and our blond will take a very close interest in the boy too; so will Brian. Yes Michael's dad is real piece of work. He's going to regret letting his son go. :)
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 3: Operation Escort
Poor little boy ... It's terrible to find him in the hands of these bastards. I have difficulty with pedophiles, if one dares touch my children, I think I could kill (but making him suffer much before). Brian and Justin are a great team and their perfect pair allows the arrest of the 'Sap' ... Fortunately, the chapter ends with a cheerful note ... Brian, Brian .... tsss
Big kisses dear
Author's Response: I like writing cop stories; and I always hated Sap with a passion. Brian was glad to loss truth be told. :P
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 8: Federal Trouble
And yes, Justin is definitely a national treasure. Thanks for this incredible chapter.
Author's Response: This was a fun chapter indeed. Justin is very powerful as the story will show. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 2: Breaking in the Newbe
I updated my readings but I have a little trouble with my comments because I have some difficulty typing on the keyboard (a bad fall, my arm in a sling, and only one hand available ... Pfff )
Well, this story has already made me addictive and it’s only the second chapter ... Justin and Brian are always so hot together. Your scenes are always so sexy, beautiful
Go on, I love ... And the idea of telepathy makes the story even more fantastic
Big hug
Author's Response: I'm so sorry to hear you got hurt. Don't feel you have to over do it on the reviews; short comments are just a precious to me. I'm pushing it on the telepathy but it's interesting. Hugs Back!
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 7: Changes
*thumb up*
Author's Response: Two thumbs up to you for commenting!
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 11: Love
I am glad they decided not to go to FBI school..... Justin is right..they go by the book about everything...even if it's a situation that calls for making a decision on the spot..... which both Brian and Justin do everyday on the job... am I glad that they would rather be with Gus and watch him grow day by day... Great Chapter....
Author's Response: The FBI lost a 1000% of respect in Justin's eyes; he trusts his father's judgement over anyone regarding the law. They will spend every moment they have with their Gus. Love you!
Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 2: Breaking in the Newbe
i love all your fics and i think iam going to love this too.
Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: Thank you Buffytess. I love to hear from you and I'm delighted you like the new novel. Hugs Back!
Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 11: Love
i love it
Author's Response: Me and Mr. Hamster loves you too!
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 10: Demonstration
OK..... let me get this straight.... are you just saying this for the sake of the story... or is it possible that anyone that knows Aikido...can do all that to 26 men who are bigger and have weapons????? I don't think even Bruce Lee could do all that....
Author's Response: An Aikido master feels the energy around him and redirects it; he makes the attackers--attack themselves. Even with a pile of men on top of him he can redirect their group energy and repell them off of him. I once studied the art and saw my teacher take down 40 students at one time and not break a sweat doing it. Thanks for commenting and for your interest.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 11: Love
Wow interesting look into law enforcement in the states although terriotorial power struggles probably happen in all countries. Enjoying the fic thank you :)Chris
Author's Response: Thank you Chris. Sometimes different groups of law enforcement let egos get into the way with disasterous results. Each group wants the bragging rights of solving a case or taking down a suspect. It's human nature at its worse. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 11: Love
great chapter...i find it funny that you had to put the child abuse waning up... in a way its a complament to youe writing skills that your fans would actualy think that this story is real or realy happened woooow ;)
Author's Response: It's a horrible subject and I tend to write graphicly with gorey details. I don't blame anyone who doesn't want to read it. I cry writng it. Finally with this review I've caught up with all these wonderful comments that came in while I slept last night and today. Now I'll start the next chatper(s). Love you!
Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 10: Demonstration
i love it
Author's Response: Thank you Rainbow very much.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 6: Gus
One more thing about how realistic this story is.
I was an EMT-2 for over 7 years on a private ambulance and I saw it all. Also I did shifts in the local ER of my city. Much of my story details come from real lfie dramas I've experienced during my medical career.
Author's Response: I've saved many lives, and I've watched people in the drain, and saw the light leave their eyes when they died. I guess it made me have a thick skin about horrible details.
Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 6: Gus
sorry - I am a mum, teacher and really could not hack that original description! So I have to stop reading! A pity cos I really like your style and I will try to read it a bit later - go for some distance maybe and I will certainly watch out for anything else you write but I really can't read this!! All the best; I know many others will cotinue to read and review. Look forward to reading other fic of yours! :)
Author's Response: I'm very sorry if my fictional story upsetted you. Police details are gory at best. I did give the warning of child abuse in the story caption. I know real psychics have endured seeing such horrors in visions (and worse) to solve cases as a very good friend of mine has the same gift Justin has and she worked for law enforcement often. I don't plan to repeat crimes in the story and can promise you that is the last case of young child abuse of that nature. There is a case later of physical abuse of a little boy by his father but not too bad. These are very realistic cases from stories I find online about real crimes to make this story factual and not too extreme in the imagination range. Thank you very much for reading.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 10: Demonstration
justin is one dangerous guy i hope no one gets him realy mad.... oo let some one hurt gus and brian watch out bad guys lol
keep them comeing
Author's Response: I studied Aikido in my 20s and it's the most powerful martial art a person can learn. You redirect the attacking energy of your attacker(s) and the harder they attack you the harder they get taken down by their own energies redirected against them. There is special holding and grabbing techniques to make it happen. My teacher could take on a class of 40 men and kick our asses. Thanks Nicole for your comments.
Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 7: Changes
Hello again, JTSecret!
I love it with Justin being a psychic and solving old cases. I love to watch cold cases and this story reminds me of that snow. Plus, I love the show Forgotten and maybe Justin and Brian can solve a Jane Doe or John Doe murder.
Howeve, I just want to say this story is GREAT!! You are truly a gifted writer.
Keep up the GREAT work!!!!
Debbie
Author's Response: Hi Debbie! I love that show too. Thanks for the kind words. If you guys keep up the chapter reviews the hamster makes me write for you lightening fast. Love you girl!
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 9: The Offer
Wow..... it seems as if Justin is a one man police Department.... if he went to Law School in his spare time..he could prosecute the people after they were arrested... one question who will be watching Gus for 4 months while they are both going to the FBI Academy ???
Author's Response: Justin's mental skills are best used in law enforcement solving crimes; not in a courtroom. When they do go to FBI school Carl and Debbie will get Gus during the week, and the boys fly home on a private jet each weekend. Thanks for your interest BluvsJ.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie
Oh good another series from you I enjoy your fics so much, this looks to be a very absorbing fic
Author's Response: Welcome back! I'm having a lot of fun with this novel and so far it's very popular. Please comment each chapter so Mr. Hamster know you love him and he works hard for your future chapters.
Thanks for commenting bksbracelet! :)
Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 9: The Offer
I know the hamster needs some encouragement and possibly a new wheel. ;) I'm definitely enjoying your new story as much as I enjoyed the other two. Keep the chapters coming as this is definitely a bright spot in my day. Thanks!
Author's Response: Even though the hamster hasn't slept in almost 2 days finding 12 new reviews to answer has motivated him to make at least one more chapter tonight. We just finished our responses and will now go back to writing the next chapter moving months forward. I'm so honored to brighten your day! Thank you so much for commenting.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 9: The Offer
Wow, two queers getting it on in on of the White House bedrooms! LOL Although, somehow I wouldn't put money down on it being the first time. *g*
I can just imagine Justin on visual overload at all of the historical things he touches there. With his talent he could rewrite some of our history books, I'm sure!
Well, I'm excited for the FBI opportunity offered to both of them. Although 17 weeks away from Gus...as a one year old he's at the stage when all the wonderful things start happening (first steps, first words, etc). Sigh! Such is life I guess.
Another great chapter!
Author's Response: Wow back! I leave for 2 hours and have tons of reviews to answer. I feel so blessed right now. Mr. Hamster is all gitty too. The boys can go to the FBI school anytime; even a year or two away. It's an open invitation. They will fly home every weekend and be with Gus too. Thanks so much for commenting and rating!
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 8: Federal Trouble
Talk about developments!
If I was Brian and Justin, I wouldn't worry overly much about what the offer is. It's still a free country and Justin has a talent that is very much in demand, however secret. They will do whatever Justin wants to get it, even if that means he wants to stay in the Pitts. In addition, to separate Justin from his family and friends (his touchstones) wouldn't be beneficial for him and could possibly be detrimental to his gift.
Hurrying on to the next chapter! Hugs to you and Mr. Hamster *g*
Author's Response: You are a wise reader and they do make it possible for Justin to help them in Pittsburgh next chapter. But imagine a call from the president on your private cell line unlisted. They did a lot to find you and want you. He's 18 years old and Uncle Sam blows smoke up his ass! :) Glad you're enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 9: The Offer
great exciting chapter! Fucking in the white house? lol. You are soo bad! I don't think there's ever been gay sex in the White House! Though there are those rumors about Lincoln and his 'gentleman' friend...hmmm..
Justin is so hot when he's all bad ass.
Author's Response: I think it's happened since I know gay couples have slept overnight in the Obama White House already. Truth! Justin is a cop; being a bad ass is part of the job. Love you! Still looking for an update on your story too!
Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 9: The Offer
Great chapter.
Author's Response: And you're a great reader for commenting! :)
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 7: Changes
You introduced the telepathy element earlier in the story (i.e., cops used it all the time). Other than the first 'conversation' between B/J establishing the telepathic link, we've only had the one other communication between Justin and his father regarding Michael's potential adoption. Hopefully, you will reintroduce this aspect.
So far, Justin has been the wonderkid in everything (even when it comes to Gus). Not that I really mind, lol, I just hope that Brian will get some equal balance.
I'm glad that Debbie will be caring for Gus, she and Carl will make great grandparents. Initially, when she and B/J were talking together about Babylon, and Deb said she had a secret, I thought she was going to reveal that she and Carl were going to buy Babylon, LOL. I actually thought it was a novel idea. *g*
I'm glad that Michael is doing so well, he has a bright future to look forward to now.
Well, the solving of 42 cold cases in two days would certainly not escape notice by anyone. Hopefully, there won't be a jealous backlash against them by their coworkers, especially if Brian does get promoted and it is known that he and Justin are partners (personal and professional).
Another good one, looking forward to the next!
Author's Response: The telepathy is there but they rarely need it. They're so in tune with each other no words are needed. Debbie and Carl buying Babylon is a great idea but I have another plot in mind. Michael will be amazing; nobody has a clue how the cases are solved since the undercover department is a very secret unit anyway. Brian would be promoted without Justin; he's the best detective with the most experience and education. Love you!
Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 8: Federal Trouble
Cute. A new way for them to get rich. Please keep them safe.
Author's Response: They're cops; danger's part of the job. I can say they won't get killed in my story. Love you!
Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 7: Changes
Every kid should have a big brother like Justin.
Author's Response: He's amazing huh. I love a Justin wise beyond his years. His faith helps him to have the right words for the situation. Love you for commenting!
Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 6: Gus
Great chapter. Love your hamster.
Author's Response: Ahhhh... you made him blush! :)
Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 5: The Touch
Love Justin's 'gift'. Hope it doesn't put them in too much danger.
Author's Response: If you think about it; he is much safer because of his skills and how he can read people's thoughts by a touch. They are very safe for now. Love you!
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 9: The Offer
gooo justin... do you know how hard it was for me not to think and try to read your updates at work today....uuuhh i had to stop mid chapter so my cell dattary wouldn't die. came strait home to finish up the chapters.
heres another treat for mr. hampster for a job well done
Author's Response: Reading from your cell phone? I'm honored the story has you so hooked. :) The rodent ate it up too. Thanks!
Reviewer: nickie (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 9: The Offer
Thank you love the chapter
Author's Response: I'm very grateful for your chapter comment nickie.
Reviewer: alison (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 9: The Offer
Brilliant!! loving it!!!! can't wait for more :-)
alison
Author's Response: Thank you alison; I'm writing as fast as I can. Nobody updates on MW faster than I do. I live to entertain and your chapter reviews are my only reward.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 6: Gus
Ok, you've addressed my concern in my prior comment regarding Justin's ability to handle the awful stuff he'd undoubtedly 'see' on the job. It's one thing to read in printed reports about the horrible things humans are capable of doing, but totally another to see it playing like a movie in glorious technicolor inside your head. *shudder*
Wow, so many changes for Brian and Justin to absorb so quickly. Their relationship, moving in together and now a baby. For Brian there's also the loss of another close friend and the mother of his child. I just hope they can manage all of these stresses to their fledgling partnerships (personal and professional).
Another criminal in the bag, was there any doubt? *g*
Great, on to the next!
Author's Response: It helps that Justin does not know the people involved in his visions. Their relationship is anything but fledgling! They are the strongest team possible and completely compliment each other perfectly. Tons of sex helps. :P
Losing Lindsay is hard for Brian but he has Gus and Justin to keep him centered and grounded. Thanks so much for your faithful reviews.
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 9: The Offer
Wait, you mean I have to turn tricks to get you to post more chapters?!?
Oh, nevermind. You said WITHOUT being tricked... :D
Author's Response: LMGAO !!!
Reviewer: r (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 9: The Offer
i love it
Author's Response: Love you back! Thank you!
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 5: The Touch
Had to smile about houseboy Justin, liked reading about their physical and verbal interplay before heading off to work. *g*
In this age of rampant media/electronics I enjoy reading about people with 'gifts' not understood by science or the mainstream. The people that are truly gifted and desire to help others are what give me hope for the future.
At first, I was concerned about Justin using the gift for his job. Would what he would see psychically make him too cynical or jaded? However, his job would no doubt do that over time whether he was psychic or not. He was fairly unemotional about reciting the details of Michael's murder, especially knowing who he was to Brian, so maybe I'm worrying unnecessarily...
Great chapter, looking forward to the next!
Author's Response: Justin's very well centered in his faith and it gives him the maturity not to let the visions harm him. He is still a boy with all his boyish charm and joy, and a new man growing every day in the love of Brian that makes him stong. Thanks so much for your chapter reviews cakdg.
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie
sorry, it's Mr hamster but not "the" hamster,could he forgive me? <Tell him not be mad at me, I was too eager to comment and clumsy is my middle name>
Author's Response: No problem! He only makes me call him Mr. Hamster. He would be delighted to hear from you if you call him a rat. :)
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 6: Gus
Hello, it's me again! I saw new postings here so I jump in to tell you how great both you and the hamster are. *pet him*
Author's Response: I'm delighted to hear from you; please comment again. I wrote more chapters for you!
Reviewer: Ptitprof (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 7: Changes
Hi from France !!
Amazing as ever. But how or where on earth do you get such great ideas into your head for your plots ? I'm really impressed.
Author's Response: I have a pet named Mr. Hamster who is my plot bunny. He spins on his wheel and chirps the ideas to me and I type them down. He loves chapter reviews and works very hard to deserve them. He's really cute but he bites me if we don't get reviews on each chapter! Thanks for commenting very much and I'd love to visit France someday. I have other fans there too. :)
Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 8: Federal Trouble
i love it
Author's Response: Thanks beautiful!
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 7: Changes
i love it
Author's Response: Love you back!
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 8: Federal Trouble
OMG..... Justin is going to be a CIA or FBI Agent ..... and Obama invited him and Brian to the White House for dinner!!!! Amazing..... LOL...
Author's Response: Obama can shit in one hand and wish in the other and see which one fills up first.
He has no idea how stubborn Justin can be. :) hehehe
Thank you so much for your chapter reviews!
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 7: Changes
Wow.... Things are starting to get better for everyone..... Brian may get to be captain... Justin keeps solving cold cases...and they bought a new car and a new house.... why do I get the feeling something is going to go wrong??
Author's Response: Imagine the theme music to Jaws thumping in the background.
...thump thump thump thump thump thump...
Keep reading; shit happens. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 6: Gus
OMG..... poor Lindsay.....it sounds like she is brain dead..... I am glad Melanie did the right thing and let Brian and Justin raise Gus... the one bright note was Justin catching that Cuban Psycho so quickly... Amazing...
Author's Response: I'm sorry about Lindsay too but shit happens. We have only scratched the surface of Justin's abilities in law enforcement. Thanks so much for your precious chapter review!
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 5: The Touch
Amazing....Justin is Psychic !!!!... he has so many skills for someone so young... what he saw of the way Michael died was terrible... and now he is helping to solve cold cases.... Amazing...
Author's Response: A good female friend of mine has that skill and often worked for the FBI. It is a real gift from God. Thanks so much for your review BluvsJ.
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 7: Changes
Careful Justin - don't blow your cover (only Brian!) :D
Author's Response: LMGAO! :P That was too funny. Read on since he is too good for just Pittsburgh! Thanks so much for your chapter review HalfTime1030.
Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 5: The Touch
Augh! What will poor Justin see!? Liked the psychic turn very intriguing and open to lots of possibilities. Also loved the hot but tender action in the shower too! Can't wait for the next ep! :)
Author's Response: Hehehe...give me 2 minutes and it will be posted. The timeline moves about three weeks forward now. Thanks so much for commenting dphysh.
Reviewer: nickie (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 7: Changes
love the story
Author's Response: Thank you so much for making a chapter review. It helps me write for you.
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 6: Gus
OMG this story only gets better and better xD
Jill <<33
Author's Response: Thank you! Mr. Hamster is spinning out the plot details faster than I can type.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 6: Gus
PS. Heres a treat for MR. Hamster .... for another fabulouse story.
Author's Response: And the little rodent is eating it up! Thank you! New chapter just got posted.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 6: Gus
ok your goooood you had me at first i thought gus was mulesting jr.
poor lends :'( .... i'm just a little confussed how can justin arrest david for a florida murder in pitts...unless i missed something he did in pitts... or was he america's FBI most wanted?
Author's Response: In America, if a criminal is anywhere with a warrant against him; any cop has the duty to arrest him. Crooks would run wild if the cops could not arrest them in another state. We have federal marshals that can make arrest in other countries too; all the nations using INTERPOL have such an agreement.
"...gus was mulesting jr." I don't understand this. Please explain it to me. Thanks for all your comments. Love you!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 6: Gus
I really love this story. I love how this story shows the love between Brian/Justin and also the diffrent cases that they have to work on. A love story with drama and adventure, Love it. Keep up the great work. :)
Hugs,
Carlina
Author's Response: Welcome to my universe Carlina and thank you so much for commenting. I post new chapters fast and love to get chapter reviews; they motivate me to write. That is my reward for the hard work. Hugs back!
Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 6: Gus
Oh JT you never cease to amaze me. Love it already.
Author's Response: Thank you very much sweetheart; I have a new chapter up for you right now.
Reviewer: alison (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 6: Gus
ooooo am loving this already !!!!!!
it's really good to have you back writing for us again, cant wait to see how this story develops.
love ali
Author's Response: Thanks alison. Please comment on each chapter to raise my number of reviews. They are my motivation to write. A short "loved it" will do for each comment. Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 5: The Touch
ohh what is he going to see???
LOved the chapter, and thanks for updating so often i hate to wait like two weeks for an update xD
Jill <<33
Author's Response: Finally someone gave me some stars in a rating! Thank you! The next chapter is have done and on the way tonight some time.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 5: The Touch
Justin a psychic Nice touch! no pun intended lol
Author's Response: It's the perfect pun anyway! hehehe I personally knew a psychic with that skill and she twice gave me my future for 10 years coming and it always happened like she said. She's an amazing woman now retired and living in Canada. Thank you so much for the chapter review Gina.
Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 5: The Touch
i love it
Author's Response: I love you for loving it! :)
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 5: The Touch
goo justin... get the bad guys..i just hope carl and brian don't abuse his powers.
Author's Response: They love Justin and will never do anything to hurt him. This skill of his must be a very guarded secret forever. Thanks for commenting nicole very much! :)
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 5: The Touch
yeah!! Another great chapter, enjoyed it, thanks!
Author's Response: You're very welcomed shimayo. Thank you for the chaper comment very much. I'm working on the next chapter right now.
Reviewer: indigo556 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie
I'm going to try to start from the ground floor for this story, so to speak! A very interesting plot and you perfectly capture the spark between them. I hope I can stay caught up with the story; it's off to a marvelous start!
Tiffany
Author's Response: Thanks Tiffany; so far the readers love it. I plan to update new chapters often and you can count on me to finish the story as I only write one at a time. Your chapter reviews would be very appreciated even if a short "loved it" is all you say.
Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 4: Michael
As usual another great chapter. I like that both of Justin's parents are good and understanding in this story, they will need a new kid with Justin leaving. Why did you just skip over Justin winning the bet? Did he top? Did Brian like it?
Author's Response: Thanks Lorie for commenting. Justin won and took his prize. I have to be in top form to write sex scenes and I was up 2 days when I added chapter 4 "Michael" without a sex scene. I wanted to give my readers one more chapter before crashing. Brian loved it and we will see it again in the story with all the smut you desire. :P
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 4: Michael
Fantastic.... I am thrilled that the Sap got exactly what he deserved in prison..and that little Michael is getting the help he needs at the Children's Institute.... I can't wait to see what happens next.... update soon... Thanks...
Author's Response: I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Justice is served in my stories and I always love happy endings. I'm very much enjoying this new novel. I will update quickly too. Thanks so much for each chapter review.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 3: Operation Escort
OMG.... That Poor kid.. 12 years old !!!! Thank God... Justin helped lock up.. that Crazy Sick Bastard Pedophile Sap..... 100 years in prison is not enough for that Son of a Bitch...
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know you got a reaction from the story. Remember no little boys were harmed in the creation of this piece of fiction. :) Thank you so much for the chapter review BluvsJ.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie
I really like this fic.... but... I never heard of an 18 year old detective even if his father is chief of police... I guess they do things very different in the Pitts...lol....
Author's Response: Sometimes they do move a new rookie to junior detective especially in narco and undercover work, and it depends on intellegence. Beat cops can work their way up. Having your dad as the chief probably helps too! :)
Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 4: Michael
I love it
Author's Response: And I love your chapter reviews too!
Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 2: Breaking in the Newbe
I love it
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie
I love it
Author's Response: Thank you for each short wonderful review hit adding to my total number. It motivates me to write for you.
Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 4: Michael
That was great!! Especially the solution for Michael and the way they worked together - makes you wish fiction were fact!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks dphysh. That's the joy of fiction; we can make a story go where we want it to go. Please comment again; I love to hear from you.
Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 4: Michael
I love this story. I really am liking how you incorporated Brian and Justin being a working partner as well as a loving partner when not at work.
It was very clever on how the bust of Sap went down.
Please keep up the great writing. You are truly a gifted writer.
Thanks again the for great story.
Debbie
Author's Response: Heah Debbie! Thanks so much for your comments. More great mysteries and cases to come for our boys. Love you! :)
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie
Hi, you're back! I'd like to comment on each chapter but I would not because of lack of english skills (well, french-english dictionnary is my best friend) , I would like to tell you many many things and want to discuss with you about how christians deal with homosexuality but .. instead, I only can repeat "you are amazing, I do love your writing style, I do love your stories, thank you so much for sharing and spoiling us". I mean it and don't mind repeating it again and again. Bye!
Author's Response: Heah a quick "loved it" would be great on each chapter comment. It still adds to my number of reviews; a very important thing to my motivation to write for you.Your English is excellent too. I really appreciate all your comments; short or long.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 4: Michael
My mom always says things happen for a purpose and although you don't wish circumstances that Michael found himself in on anyone, much less a 12 year old boy, he'll be adopted by Justin's parents. A good exchange, considering the attitude of his father. Some people should just never be parents, but then again, if they didn't Michael wouldn't exist either...
It also sounds like Michael will bring some closure/healing to all those feeling guilty surrounding the death of the older Michael too. A win-win all around.
What a great picture from The Children's Institute. Love the smile on that cowboy! *g*
Another great chapter!
Author's Response: I'm enjoying this fictional universe very much cakdg. Thank you so much for commenting as you know I love to hear from you and know I'm entertaining you. We will watch Michael grow up too. When researching the pictures for that hosptial that photo grabbed my heart too. Love you! :)
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 3: Operation Escort
Loved how the undercover op went down. Doubly good to get vermin like Sap off the streets, although sad to say there are probably more just like him waiting in the wings. I think Justin is the perfect undercover agent. Who would suspect him?
The outcome of the wager was funny. I had a suspicion with his defensive training, that Justin would nail Brian. Lol. And it's probably a good thing it happened, because Brian got to know first hand how adept Justin is at taking care of himself. I'm also not forgetting about the payoff of the wager either! *g*
Great chapter!
Author's Response: That was a great first case for our boys and Justin is perfect for undercover work; he is so disarming in his demeanor and doesn't act like a cop; he's young and beautiful thus easy to like, and brilliant when people would think he's a dumb blond. Justin has more abilities that will come out later in the story. Yes, Brian is relieved to know his lover can handle himself hand to hand. Love you! :)
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie
Oops! I'm out of practice, forgot to rate the first chapter. Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks for the hit; love you very much !
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 2: Breaking in the Newbe
Interesting element with the telepathy. Understand that a level of intelligence would be required to utilize the ability. Are you born with the ability or is it like a skill/language, which requires training to learn? Is a thought transference only from one person to a lone individual or is there ability from one to many people? Inquiring minds want to know...Lol
Very hot B/J action, an unforgettable initiation for both of them I think!
Hmmm, wonder who will win the wager? *g*
Hurrying on to the next chapter to find out!
Author's Response: I can't say too much about the skill as it is a secret. :) Let me say it is strongest with two people in love and the spirit realm decides who to share it with; otherwise people would think they are going crazy hearing voices. Never doubt the ability of an Akiedo master! That is an amazing martial art.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie
Hey JT, I've been away from the internet for quite awhile, RL has been a true bitch of late. My dad, who is 81, was seriously sick during the fall, and then went through multiple rounds of testing and biopsies with different specialists, to ultimately find out he has lung cancer. He started undergoing chemo & radiation this month and we are keeping our fingers crossed and hoping for the best (so far so good, 3rd week down). I've been spending most days at my parents' house (hence no internet), and up until now was pretty much wiped out when I did make it home. I had just enough energy to take care of my house and bills, but not much left other than to sleep. I'm sorry to have missed finishing your wonderful story, Forever Yours (maybe I'll catch up on it someday).
I am absolutely delighted to find that you have started another story! I just got home a little while ago and decided to log in to the site for the 1st time in months (I think last time was back in Oct..?) How did you know that I would need this fix so badly? lol.
I love the premise of this story. We know that Justin is younger than Brian, I'm assuming that the age difference is similar to that in the show? I'm having a hard time imagining Michael making the grade as a cop, much less as Brian's lover (eewwww!), however this is an AU and I digress. *g*
As always, the chemistry between B/J is sizzling. I enjoyed how Cynthia, Deb and Carl were introduced (can't wait to see who else shows up!) and pleasantly surprised about Craig. I really like that Justin is an indedpendent and strong character, too.
Very much looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: God I'm so sorry to hear about your dad. I helped to care for my mother fighting Cancer the last two years of her life. She arrived in 2007. I really know what you're going through. I really tried to stop writing a while but Mr. Hamster wouldn't stop biting me until I began a new novel. :) Justin is 18 and Brian is 29. Michael wasn't smart enough for detective work but for Brian they let him do it; one of the mistakes made ending of getting him killed; the second mistake was putting Michael on a case without Brian that ended his life. This is the guilt Craig Taylor feels. I hope to write quickly and make another great novel. Love you dear!
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 4: Michael
Wonderful chapter. This starts badly for the poor little Mike, but finally, with the help of Brian, Justin and Taylor parents, he will have a great future ... I hope his asshole father will live to regret it. Justin is great with the child.
This story is more brilliant ... You do a great job to please us.
Now, time to go to bed ;)
Big kisses and thank you for these great moments
Gex
PS: I read your 'PS' on your comment to my sister ... Thank you for the appreciation
Author's Response: Your predictons are spot on for Michael and his dad. I sure hope this story is successful.
P.S. You and Tomas are foxes! I can just see the love with you both and imagine you two are as hot together as B&J are. :P
Thanks so much for your comments Gex.
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 4: Michael
Hahaha awsome loved the end of the chapter xD
Jill<<33
Author's Response: Thanks Jill! I had fun writing it too.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 3: Operation Escort
I love ... It's full of bounce, good surprises ... The 'Sap' was arrested on a high note but it's disgusting what he did with the kid ... I like the bet between Brian and Justin. Justin is a world champion for handcuffing someone. Too bad for Brian ... He will have to submit. Bah!
Super Chapter
I jump on the next chapter and then to bed after that because from what I see, someone has started without me ...
Big hug
Author's Response: That bust of Sap is exactly how those things really go down in the USA. The kid will be ok in time. Give that fox of a lover you have a hug from me! :)
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 4: Michael
I've a feeling Mikey will have a happy life.
Good job, and I can't stop smiling....
Love you.
Author's Response: The kid will be dazzling growing up. I'm so happy to see your reviews and know my fans are enjoying this new novel. I'm having a ton of fun writing it too. Love you more! :)
Reviewer: nickie (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 4: Michael
Thank you wounderfull chapter
Author's Response: My pleasure to give it to you as well! Thanks so much for your comment; they are important to me.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 2: Breaking in the Newbe
Three chapters now waiting ... You’re fast
Wow, this is hot ... Or is me who is hot? I finished my evening on 'I gotta feeling' of the Black Eyed Peas and really ... it could not be more true .... 'I gotta feeling that's tonight's gonna be a good night' ... With such scenes so perfect that I feel rather cramped in my jeans and I can not wait to join my boyfriend in bed (especially since Christmas .. Yeah, JT, no more barriers)
You write sublime sex scenes ...
LOVE THIS ONE TOO
Mr Hamster is back in top form
X kisses
Author's Response: When a story gets in Mr. Hamster's head it flows like a waterfall. The mental part of sex is just as hot as the physcial too. The rodent woundn't stop biting me until I started a new novel. :)
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 3: Operation Escort
Love it so much.....
This is why I love your story so much... it's very entertaining, so fresh, a lot of plot & I love it...
Big hugs.
Author's Response: Plot and smut; the fans go wild! hehehe Big hug back dear. Mr. Hamster throws you a kiss.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 4: Michael
ok soooo loved this chapter! Nice touch with the pic. Love craig and jen for what their doing for 'mike' I'm sure lots of things are going through Brians thoughts right now.
Author's Response: That picture really grabbed my heart too. Michael will be a wonderful boy later on and his future is very bright. Brian is dealing will many issues but a certain blond butt is very theraputic for his problems. :P
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie
It is too great. Damn, you come back with this new story. Wow, that's so cool. When sister sent me the text message, I jumped like a madman ... You couldn't stay too long away from us
Already, I knew I loved this story. I just come back (we were in our club) and as I am still moderately sober, I turned on the computer to read the first chapter. Not disappointed, as usual .... I LOVE IT SO MUCH! And there are also two other chapters that are waiting for me ...
Great job, JT .... Great great job, you, marvelous
Big Love
Author's Response: Heah Gex! So happy to see you with me again. You and your sister are among my favorite readers. I wouldn't write if I didn't have fans like you who comment so faithfully. I sure hope this story proves to be a good one. Love you back!
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 4: Michael
aaawww mike...ooo i can see it now mike gets better Craig rasies him he becomes a dr. or a lawyer and has to help his father hehehe. the stroy just gets better and better.
rest now but keep them comeing.
Author's Response: Mike will be fine; I won't reveal yet his future but it is bright. You're right about the rest and I did go to sleep and woke up to all these wonderful reviews. I'm catching up answering them and will write a new chapter tonight. Love you!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 2: Breaking in the Newbe
HOT!!!! HOT!!!! HOT!!!!
Loving it. Excellent!!
Hug & kisses for Mr Hamster & you JT.
Take care.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it; a virgin Justin is just too hot! Mr. Hamster is blushing now; it's so cute. I'm honored to have you back. Love you!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie
You BACKKKK!!!!!!!!!
I am so happy!!!
1st chapter & I love it. Can't wait for more...
Oh Mr Hamster Miss u so much & u r brilliant as always.
Kiss. Kiss.
Author's Response: The little rodent would not stop biting me until I started a new novel. Thanks so much for commenting and being my fan.
Kisses back!
Reviewer: Nicole (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 3: Operation Escort
ooo... new chapter comeing soon to a computer near you... lol
Author's Response: LOL!!! Your review is music to this writer's ears. Thank you so much for joining in the fun.
Reviewer: nickie (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 3: Operation Escort
So happy to have a story from you again I have missed your storys love this one thank you
Author's Response: Thank you! Working on the next chapter right now!
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 3: Operation Escort
Awesome chapter...
Yay Justin-1 Brian-0 xD
And that kid in the picture looks like my cousin only he has darker hair :)
As long as you write I will review every chapter
Jill <<33
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much Jill. I'm really pathetic waiting for a review :)
If my readers only knew how much it inspires me to write for you they would review more.
If a chapter gets few reviews I wonder how I messed up and lose faith in myself.
hanks so much for commenting. I hope to get at least one more chapter done tonight.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 3: Operation Escort
uuh ooh now brian will be the sore one.. very good chapter keep them comeing
Author's Response: Your wish is my command! I'm starting a new chapter now. Thanks so much for your chapter review nicole.
Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2010 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 2: Breaking in the Newbe
YOU are the best JT, this good
Author's Response: Thank you so much meme. Please comment often and encourage me to write good, fast and long (like Brian fu*ks :P)
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2010 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie
your back :D woo hooo...
great new story, let the fun begen.
Author's Response: Thank you so much nicole; please comment each chapter and help me make this one a big fu*king success too! I'll work my gay ass off to entertain you.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 2: Breaking in the Newbe
This is good JT. Really good. A police saga with a healthy dose of porn. Love 'virgin' justin. lol. I don't think they'll be any loser in that wager. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks Gina! We're going to have a lot of fun with this story. Brian thinks that since he's about 9 inches taller and 30 pounds heavier than Justin he doesn't have a problem. hehehehe (grins with evil planning)
Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2010 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie
Yes, you're back. I was hoping that you couldn't stay away. It's nice to have a writer that can be counted on to update quickly. Love the first two chapters, you write great sex scenes.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm a whore for attention and would love a short review on each chapter. That motivates me to update very fast. I hope this story entertains you and can be better than any of my previous works which is a daunting task to accomplish.
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2010 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 2: Breaking in the Newbe
hahaha yay a new story :P
Now I can follow this story from the beginning xD
Great chapter I loved it.
There was one thing that vas sort of weird and that was that Brian used to be with Michael...
but maybe I think it's weird because I really really don't like Michael.xD
Anyway can't wait to see what's going to happen next.
Jill <<33
Author's Response: Thanks Jill; Michael is dead and won't be mentioned again in the story much. This is totally the Brian and Justin Show 5-0. Please review every chapter a little bit and help me raise my numbers quickly. That makes me type new ep really fast for you.
Reviewer: waytotheend (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie
Oh I LOVE stories where Justin and Brian are cops so I already loved the plot of this fic. Now that I've read the first chapter, I can say it for sure! It's very well written and I like the idea of them working together! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! You're such a gifted writer I'm honored by your comment. The wait is short as the next chapter is going up right now!
Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2010 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie
SO THRILLED ARE BACK!!!!!!!!!!! YOUR STORIES HAVE BECOME A MANTRA, WHICH I MISS TERRIBLY WHEN NOT AVAILABLE! THANKS FOR SHARING YOUR TALENT OF DIFFERENT LIFE EXPERIENCES FOR AND ABOUT MY FAVORITE CHARACTERS
Author's Response: A mantra? I'm very flattered to hear that. Thank you so much for commenting and please share your thoughts wtih each chapter. The next one is going up right now!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie
Uh ... I jump for joy. I'm doing a happy dance around my office. I just do my accounts and purchases on the net and without thinking I made a visit to the site before joining the family for dinner and what do I see ? A new story from my favorite author ... Oh, lovely day ...
This story is really promising and I look forward to read more. I already love these two great officers and I love this introduction ....
I sent an SMS to Gex. They are currently with my husband and my son in the neighboring department where takes place this weekend a motorcycle race on the beach. They come back tonight, I know he will jump on the computer as soon as he comes back...
Big kisses
Ihintza
Author's Response: I just thought I was done writing for a while; I can't stop! When the hamster gets started I have to spin the story for you all. Since I knew gay cops in my lifetime I have a good reference of facts for the story. A new story is always scary to do fearing it won't be as successful as the other works I've done. I'm so honored to have you and Gex's support as you know the reviews are so important for inspiration and motivation. Thanks you so much Ihintza for commenting.
P.S. You, your husband, and Gex are so beautiful! Tomas too.
Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie
HI! Loved the first ep and can't wait for the next! Loved all the interplay between Brian and Justin and the easy way they already accept each other! The kiss was hotttt too! Also liked Deb's attitude! More please soon! :)
Author's Response: Brian is starving for love and virgin Justin is dying for his first love too. I'm working on the next chapter now at the loft as both of our boys end their lonelyness together and begin to mold their relationship personally and professionally. Once these two get into sync the crooks are going to be so fu*ked! Stand bi!
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