Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2019 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 20
🥰. Excellent. Truly beautiful
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2019 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 20
good one, lousy ending
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 20
now they have to fall in love all over again. agh!!
love the way it ended.
Author's Response: Yeah I know ! Still not sure on reflection that it wasn't a bit of a 'cheat' of an ending! But I am so glad you liked it!! Thanks for stivkin around til the end! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 21, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 20
I loved it..... they made the same decision and get a chance to start over... my question has been answered!!!!!.. lol.... now I ask another question... in the future.. have you any plans for a sequel?? I guess I won't need the bloodhound.. Great Ending. Thanks.........
Author's Response: I am soo glad that you felt your questions were answered! There won't be a sequel (I'm having enough trouble with the one sequel I am finishing!!) Really pleased you were happy with the ending! It felt right to me! :)
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: February 21, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 20
Thank you for the story it was amazing :)
I loved it and can't wait for more of your stories xD
Jill <<33
Author's Response: Thank you soo much! More soon! (I hope!) :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 19
what the hell happened!?
is this their chance at eternal love?
wish more was delved into about their therapy but i enjoyed the entire chapter anyway.
Author's Response: My next fic delves into the nature of therapy a bit more, funnily enough and I can't remember which I wrote first! Thanks for sticking with it fir this long I have really appreciated your thoughts and views! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2010 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 19
OMG..... You can't stop now !!!! .. Please let them end up in the same place... or I will get a bloodhound to track you down... no matter where you hide... lol....
Author's Response: So how close do you live to Australia . . . and will you give me a head start to run??!! No just joking - hope you are happy with final ep! Thanks for sticking with me! :)
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 19
AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
*glances at the clock* Is it tomorrow yet?!?! :)
Author's Response: Ooops Sorry . . . it is tomorrow now! Thanks for the expressive fb! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 18
i think that talk helped alot. hope deb and the others think so too.
Author's Response: Absolutely, honesty often helps - even when (or maybe especially when) it is painful! Thanks again for all your reviews . . . they really are worth gold! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 18
I am glad they talked...but.. I am slightly confused... what exactly is Brian supposed to be helping Justin with... getting back his art, keeping him from committing suicide or proving that he is not crazy like his dad??? and I ask again.... what will Justin do after Brian dies again?? you thought I forgot about that..... lol..... Thanks..
Author's Response: Well Deb being Deb (and God) and ebing omnipresent and omnipotent (love those words!) has many things in mond I think and when Justin does have help I think it will affect all areas - as for his future with Brian . . . . watch this space! (Mwa ha ha ha . . . walks off whistling evilly and twirling moustache!) Hope that has cleared up the confusion (or made it worse?!) Love reading your reviews; you help me clarify my ideas! Thanks! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2010 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 17
Brian speaks!!!! they were having an open and honest discussion... did you have to end the chapter right then?? lol... only 3 more chapters to go... I guess we really are in the Home Stretch.... I miss it already...
Author's Response: Awww that was sooo sweet! Thank you soo much - feeling really tired and that gave me a a great lift of spirits! I'll update in a minute! Thanks again. When this finishes I'll start a new one! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 17
poor justin to live with that fear. was it always there or just after the bashing? i like that brian finally realized that to even try to help he has to be honest. maybe they'll go talk to someone together or at least both do it.
Author's Response: I think it followed the bashing as that is what triggered the PTSD! We all deal with times like that differently - maybe it was his WASP background that encouraged him to 'bury' the feelings! I'm updating tonight so you'll get to find out! Thanks again for the fb! Adore it and you!! :)
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2010 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 4
I'm a bit confused, Brian said on the phone that he will pick up Justin and yet Daphne drove him? :P
Author's Response: Justin is at Daphne's place as he was worried about Brian's reaction to his 'problem'. Hope that makes it clearer - I try to avoid those kinds of errors in continuity - I am not always successful though and do appreciate when it is ointed out to me! Thanks for the fb! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2010 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 16
"That Went Well".... lol.... At least Brian knows what's wrong with Justin... that's a step in the right direction...now all he has to do is "talk" Justin into going to see the Doctor.... this time Brian has to use "actual words" to "communicate" .... that should be fun to watch...
Author's Response: Absolutely, glad you agree with me! I loved Brian's dry wit in the series and wanted to incorporate it in this fic if I could! Thanks again for your wonderfully consistent, thoughtful feedback! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 16
seems like it's been tried before which is why justin knows the name. sounds like an uphill battle for brian.
from sheer happiness to outright anger in the blink of an eye. yeah i think he needs to talk to someone.
Author's Response: Absolutely and it is also one of the many symptoms for PTSD! Little did I know when I first wrote this that I would find out the 'symptoms' first hand! Talking does help! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 15
how will he ever learn to live with this 'problem'? what exactly is he to do for justin? get him to talk? get him to feel good about himself so his paintings are better? what?
Author's Response: Glad I got you wondering! You are too good at guessing sometimes!! LOL! Thanks so much for your wonderful fb! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2010 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 15
OMG.... at least it's not a permanent condition... lol.... now Brian has no choice but to concentrate on helping Justin.... if he ever wants to "communicate" again..... this fic keeps getting better and better...
Author's Response: I am so very glad you feel that way! It was such fun to write that I am pleased it is being enjoyed by readers too! I love getting you ideas, gicves me a real happy! :)
Reviewer: cherub68 (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2010 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 15
This chapter has made me laugh somewhat. I dont mean to belittle Justins feelings but Brian is hilarious!
You can almost see the lightbulb turn on above his head at the end.
Thank you I am so enjoying this x
Author's Response: I know the feeling it seem so mean to laugh at Brian but irresistible at the same time! I am sooo glad you are enjoying this! it was fun to write! :)
Reviewer: cherub68 (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2010 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 14
I just love a panicing drama queen Brian!
Author's Response: Nothing quite like it is there?! Such fun writing it too! Thanks for the fb! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 14
so in order to work on the problem at hand(justin) he's not allowed to work on the problem 'in' hand. hahahaha. poor brian.
Author's Response: As usual succinct and accurate! Yeah it is one of those laugh and squirm moments in fic isn't it! Thanks for the great fb! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2010 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 14
OMG... I am sure once he goes to Babylon and sees that he can "communicate" with everyone except Justin... Brian will realize exactly what the consequences of his actions are... at least now they will be able to talk without any distractions.... lol...
Author's Response: Well at least once he gets over his shock! LOL! Glad you realised it was the consequences of his actions! Thanks for your response! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 13
what did or didn't he do?
their sex was hot. their dance was hot.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! There was a reason! Sorry no update for a little while been very busy! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2010 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 13
I know Brian always said.... actions speak louder than words....But... sometimes you need to... SAY THE WORDS.... now Brian has to face the consequences.... I wonder what Serene and Gabriel have in store for him... BTW... you still have not answered my question.....
Author's Response: He's not going to have a choice soon! IO know I didn't answer your question, but I do appreciate it being asked! Hope you enjoy the next ep! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 12
great great chapter. the way brian is going about the beginning of their "partnership" (can't say the r word. how funny) is certainly the right way. get to know him first.
Author's Response: Had to make it seem like he was kicking and screaming (even if only in his head!) in his way into the R word! His intentions are good! Thank you sooo much for your comments I really look forward to reading them! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2010 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 12
OMG..... I don't hate you.... but.... your muse is starting to get on my nerves... lol.. as they said in one of my favorite movies... Cool Hand Luke... "What we have is a failure to Communicate"...
Author's Response: Thank you fir not hating me!! AS for my muse well I've tried talking to her . . . and shaking my finger severely at her . . . but she will have her way! I thought one of the recurring themes was 'the failure to communicate' and frequently wanted to hit their heads together in frustration! (So just as well I wasn't directing or writing the scripts! LOL!) So this scene just seemed to fit! Thanks for the great comments - they made my day! :)
Reviewer: cherub68 (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 1
Didn't think the wings were turning white I thought there were less feathers until there would be none and he would stay with Justin. Have I got this entirely wrong, well whatever I'm certainly along for the ride.
Brian saying we must talk then silence.... who would have thought.
Author's Response: I could say you are on the right track . . . maybe! So happy you are sticking around! Glad you got the impact of the 'talk' too! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 11
so justin was sent to save him as he was sent to save justin. i think it's working, but to get through to the darkness in justin's heart and banish it. going to take alot.
Author's Response: Yup, you got it!! Loved hte way you put it too! only a few more eps to the end now! Thanks for all your wonderful fb! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2010 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 11
Ok... let me see if I have this straight..... Brian has to help Justin with his state of mind..as well as his painting... and everytime Brian does something to help him his black wings start to turn white.... so that would mean when they turn completely white... he is then able to go to heaven.... is that correct?? .. but... that still doesn't answer my question..... I guess I will have to wait for further chapters.... how fast can you type??? lol...
Author's Response: a. . . .s. . . .d . . . in other words really slowly!! LOL! But these are already done and I just check them then post them! As for what will happen in the end a few twists and turns then you find out!! Thanks for hanging in there and I love the way your mind works! :)
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2010 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 10
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the fb! More on the way!! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 10
well that went exactly as he planned didn't it? nice how justin took control.
Author's Response: Do things ever go as planned!? (Not in my life!!) Yeah I love it when Justin sometimes turns the tables! Thanks for commenting, you are sooo wonderful as you always give great and thoughtful fb! HUGS!! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2010 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 10
It's funny the way they both "communicate" with each other..and never say a word.... lol... I know you probably won't answer... but... what will Justin do when Brian "dies" again???
Author's Response: Well yes I will answer . . . I just won't give the answer you might wish for! LOL! I am glad you brought that up as it would have an impact wouldn't it? Thanks soo much for your comments, so gald you got their unique way of communicating! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2010 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 9
I am glad that Lindsay introduced Justin to someone... that's worse off then him... and can still paint...that was a great idea!!!! and I love how Brian kept changing his mind about calling Justin... the way he was going back and forth... I felt like I was watching a tennis match... lol.... You should be glad that your someplace hot... we've had plenty of snow and 20 degree temps.....
Author's Response: I think it might be a case or greener on the other side! There is sweat running down my nose!! I would really like some cool at the moment! There have been bad storms in other states but the clouds keep passing by! OMG a breeze!!!! YAY! I had to smile when you described brian in terms of a tennis match! Love the analogy! I really liked that wheelchair bound painter in the series and wanted to include her in the fic! So thanks! :)
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2010 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 9
Hot and humid? It's snowing outside right now! Still good. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Believe it or not, in Adelaide today it got even hotter, 38 C (not sure what that in in F) and the storm hasn't broken yet so it is still humid! Snow sounds really good right now! LOL! More on the way - thanks for reminding me of cooler temps and the fb! :)
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2010 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 8
This is interesting. I'm enjoying it, please update soon.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 9
brian's fighting a losing battle and justin's has begun.
Author's Response: Once more you have hit the nail directly on the head! Absolutely, but I am not sure Brian even knows what he is battling yet! Thanks so much for your response! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 8
lindsay taking justin to the gallery is a great idea.
brian, i don't know what they're doing there but he's scared as hell and taking the defensive.
Author's Response: I thought it was in the series - that was why I used it here! I agree - when Brian is really worried he takes the offensive by being defensive! Thanks for your continuous fb, I love it! Sweltered in the heat today so it was nice to come home to this! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 8
I hope Brian is not in too much trouble..for "Helping" Justin...
Author's Response: Well . . . there's trouble and then there's TROUBLE!! Personally I love the way he is 'helping him'! Thanks so much for the fb you made a hot, hard day sooo much better! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 7
debbie knows something. gave justin the leeway to move into the family.
been thinking about this story. brian started out with black wings. if he helps justin as he will when it is time for him to die, would his wings become white?
Author's Response: Very perceptive for the first and as for the last . . . well that would be telling wouldn't it!! LOL! Thanks for the great fb! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2010 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 7
I see that Debbie reminded Brian of his "duties".. I am glad she guessed wrong.... lol....
Author's Response: Yeah I think Brian might be relieved too! Thanks for the fb! :)
Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2010 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 6
I love this story. Please update fast.
Author's Response: It is mostly finished so I can usually post it each night! Hopefully I'll conitnue to do that! Thanks for the enthusiastic feedback! :)
Reviewer: cherub68 (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2010 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 1
Another wonderful chapter.
I'm rather liking 'Angel Brian's' way of helping!
Author's Response: Thanks I think Justin liked Brian's way of 'helping' too! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 6
brian certainly knows how to take justin's mind off his hand.
Author's Response: Yup! Just put it other places!! LOL! Thanks for your comment! Love it!! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2010 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 6
Wow..... Brian Kinney.. part-time nude model, hot guy, Guardian Angel and Dead Duck... if Debbie happens to be watching how well he's .. "HELPING"... Justin..... lol....
Author's Response: Beautifully put! In a nutshell! Glad I made you smile! Thanks for your wonderful comment! Loved it! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 6
Have some stars to make your morning happy! :)
Author's Response: Your reviews are the stars in my firmament! LOL! Thanks!! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
As soon as I get caught up writing I'll try to read and review your story.
Author's Response: YAY! I look forward to knowing what you think! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2010 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 5
I didn't notice any mistakes...lol..... Poor Justin... Brian has his work cut out for him.... hopefully Lindsay can give him a hand in helping Justin..
Author's Response: So glad you didn't notice any glaring errors! Yes Brian does have his work cut out for him but we all kow he loves a challenge - I borrowed a bit from canon for the next part - you may recognise it from the series! I remember loving it - so I suppose it will be my homage to that part! Loving your fnb and you for doing it!! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 5
brian's reaction to justin is hysterical.
now he knows what to help him with. if he can find him.
Author's Response: So glad you thought that! Thank you so much for letting me know your reaction! I thought it would be good if even only in AU Brian went after Justin for a change! Thanks again for the great fb! :)
Reviewer: Cherub68 (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2010 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 1
Loved the image that the last line left.
You showed both faces of Brian here, but as he's been sent back are we going to see more of the soft, caring Brian?
Author's Response: Absolutely, but I can't let him get too mushy!! That would be tooo OOC even for me! Thanks for your review, and so happy you liked the last line - I did too! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2010 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 4
Daphne is right... it looks as if they are rescuing each other.... one question can an Angel get a hangover??? lol...
Author's Response: I wouldn't exactly say Brian was an angel yet! He certainly still has a very 'earthy' side to him. (Great thought though - I like my wine and I really hope if and when I get to heaven there are no hangovers and no allergies! Thanks for taking the time to read and review! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 4
i liked it. don't know how jen found out about "this brian" but i'm glad daphne approves.
brian bringing home a blond trick, hahaha. justin's on his mind, um. love when he's so caring.
Author's Response: Gald you liked it! I did too! And Justin is definitely on his mind! I also love when he is caring, but he is also good at hiding it! Thanks sooo much for reviewing! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2010 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 3
This is getting better and better.... Brian is trying to help Justin and keep his distance at the same time..... I don't know how he is going to do both... and I totally agree with Brian...picturing Ted in a nightie trying to seduce Emmett would make me lose my lunch.... LOL ... update soon
Author's Response: You just made my night!! Thank you so much! I had to think of the most dreadful think Brian could think of! Hope I hit it!! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 3
inviting him to the loft? boy is he asking for trouble. and justin is it's name.
Author's Response: Yep, they both have a long way to go but fun and games should ensue for all! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2010 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 2
Wow..... I see they have met.... I think Brian will be more than happy to "help" Justin all he can... lol....
Author's Response: Yeah we all know Brian takes pride in his 'helping' abiity! LOL! Thanks for the response! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 2
oh boy is he going to have fun. so glad the regular model was sick.
Author's Response: I think 'fun' should be had by all! Thanks for the review! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 1
looks like it could be fun. i'm game.
Author's Response: YAY! Glad you think its fun, that was the whole idea, originally, but sometimes serious things just kept croppin up! LOL! Thanks for the great review! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
I Loved it.... I can't wait to see what happens when they meet... update soon... Thanks...
Author's Response: Will update tonight! So very pleased you liked it. Thanks for your inspiring review! :)
Reviewer: ... (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2010 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow awesome can't wait to read more
A xD
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much! Will update tomorrow - I wrote this a while ago and so I'm just polishing then posting! So glad you like it! :)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2010 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 1
this start sounds really good, i hope you have more updates soon...
feroza
Author's Response: Will update tomorrow! Glad you enjoyed my start - I like to try to hook you in from the beginning! Thank you so much for the great fb! :)
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