Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2018 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 40
Great story. Your writing really shows all the emotions of Justins and Brian's snarkiness. Terrific job. Off to start reading Guilt Management.
Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2017 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 21
Lol. I loved Michael's melt down. So funny. And finally someone tells him that's it's time to let Brian go.
Great chapter. Hopefully Lindsey is next
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2016 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 40
Loved this sequel. Looks like both guys had some growing up to do in order to get where they are. But how long will their happiness last? I guess the next story in the series will reveal the guys don't get to have an HEA yet.
Author's Response: This is an on going story and the next story will share with you some of their continued relationship. Glad you enjoyed the story.
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2016 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 30
I have been enjoying this story. You have put Brian through it. He can be soooooo trying! And then he'll say or do something sweet for Justin and then I feel bad for wanting to drown him in the shower.
Author's Response: Thank you for telling me your thoughts and sharing your enjoyment of this fic. This was the first long fic I ever wrote and to this day, I still think it is one of my favorites. Glad you are enjoying it.
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2016 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 40
What an end! And Vic quoting Brian with “In your dreams.” and saying he's proud of him.
Beautiful story!
Thank you.
Author's Response: thank you- so glad you enjoyed it
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2016 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 39
Counting the minutes... Almost screwed up on both sides. For once, thank you Michael!
Author's Response: I love that Brian knows how long until he sees Justin
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2016 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 35
Wow, monogamy? Wheels have been running in Brian's head lately...
Author's Response: Brian understand the way Justin thinks and he is ready
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2016 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 33
Michael is still bitching...
Author's Response: yes, he doesn't like the way things are
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2016 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 32
Maybe Brian is finally getting the message from Vic; one can hope...
Author's Response: I love using Vic to make Brian think
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2016 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 31
I'm surprised Lindsay didn't push Justin more than that. Maybe she's learning to keep her mouth shut.
Author's Response: I don't think sh eis learning but she realizes when she is beat
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2016 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 30
This last sentence is very Brian. Which dream is he talking about? Painting or being in Pittsburgh with him?
Author's Response: Probably a litle of both
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2016 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 20
Not good: Michael can't be in charge.
Author's Response: Justin and Brian won't let Michael be in charge- just wait and read some more
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2016 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 19
Broken leg now: the bad luck goes on for Brian.
Author's Response: Brian has some healing to do but more importantly he has to realize that he's not invinsible
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2016 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 18
I hope Lindsay won't act on what she heard.
Author's Response: Lindsay's a bitch
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2016 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 14
I was waiting for chapter 14 on KD and I found out that this story was here and complete.
I'm very happy to be able to read it till the end.
Author's Response: Sno:
Before I posted on KD, I asked if folks wanted me to post since so many readers have read the story in other places- I got a consensus that I should post it. Glad you found the story intriguing enough to search it out and not wait, but I will miss your comments on each chapter.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2016 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 40
Omg so many ups and downs and twists and turns. You hit every emotional bone in my body with this whole story. You did an incredible job
Author's Response: This story was started as a challenge for a H/C on QAF challenges. I wrote the first 7 chapters for the challenge and left it hanging with the intention that I would continue the story if it got noticed. Well, I think this is still one of my best stories. It stil gives me thrills when I read it. Thank you for commenting and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. BTW - did you read the prequel " Falling off the Cliff". It kind of gives a back story.
Author's Response: This story was started as a challenge for a H/C on QAF challenges. I wrote the first 7 chapters for the challenge and left it hanging with the intention that I would continue the story if it got noticed. Well, I think this is still one of my best stories. It stil gives me thrills when I read it. Thank you for commenting and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. BTW - did you read the prequel " Falling off the Cliff". It kind of gives a back story.
Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2013 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 2
In chapter 2, you need to fix this error. The doctor is describing dialysis and he talks about "Brian damage" and "Brian waves." It's quite distracting.
Author's Response: thanks for pointing this out- I'll fix it right now.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2012 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 40
I was browsing and found this older fic of yours - what a GREAT story! So well written and you got the characters down perfectly. I really enjoyed it. I'm off to read your sequel next. TAG
Author's Response: Thank you- There is a prequel to the story- Falling Off the Cliff- that can also be found here.
Reviewer: Annjeela (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 40
Excellent story. I am very much looking forward to reading your sequel.
Author's Response: thank you. It was a hard story to write at times but I enjoyed the process. thanks for writing
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 40
wow what a wonderful story * runs to the sequel *
Author's Response: thanks- hope you like the sequel as much as the first story.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2008 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 40
Such a great story! I'm gonna check out the sequel as well.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the story. Sorry it took me so long to respond. I haven't looked at my stats for awhile.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 30
Michael is an idiot, but what else is new! Brian was sweet to order those supplies for Justin!!
Author's Response: I dislike Michael and it really comes through in my writing.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2008 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 18
Good for Justin telling Lindsay to mind her own freakin business!
Author's Response: I always thought Lindsay pushed too much in to their world
Reviewer: Tina2705 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2008 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 40
i loved it!!!!!
Author's Response: thanks- the sequel- Guilt Management can be found at this sight too.
Reviewer: Memo (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2008 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 28
OMG, Brian is so annoying in this chapter! If I was Justin, I would wheel him up to the bedroom and take away the ramp. ;) The wounded animal metaphor really fits!
Author's Response: Thanks- Brian can be very annoying and he is hurting. he takes it out on Justin as he is a close target. thanks for commenting.
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