Reviewer: Robstatic73 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 35: And We Meet Again
This was great! You did a very nice job. Neat that it really could have been canon. :)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 35: And We Meet Again
I really enjoyed your story and liked how you pulled it all together at the end. It was funny, and heartwarming and very very nice!
I hope I didnt bore you with my long rambling comments.
Oh, and I think you should make sure you change the status of your story as COMPLETE. I know you intend to write more, but then you can update the story to SERIES. I had no idea it was done, and it was only chance that I even read your story at all. I dont like reading works in progress because there is no gurantee they will be finished. I have no less than ten stories Im waiting for the authors to update. I only trust a few authors to read their WIPS only because they seem to be as obsesed by these fictional characters as much as I am and couldn't stop writitn if they tried, LOL.
Who knows, maybe someday I'll write my own story. I have a Journalism degree and I also produce portraits that I draw for commission. Maybe I'll have an illustrated story, lol. HA! maybe that will be a good excuse to have to study in detail the show so I can draw them NAKED. LOL LOL!
Well, as a first fic, it was very very well done. I hope you do keep writing, either this story or other gap fillers. Your gap fillers were particularily good. Stuff I would have loved to see happen.
Congratulations on completing the story, that is a real accomplishment and I admire you for it!
Michelle
Author's Response: Hi Michelle,
I apologize for me to reply just now... been busy for two days now with my new work.
I'd really really appreciated your reviews and I love it very much when you do it in details. I got apprehensions first to follow it in canon because somebody suggested not to.... but I have the story plots (especially the ending) in my head long before I've decided to write it down.
This is my first attempt to write something because I have never ever written any story in my entire life and english is just my second language so you will notice mistakes in my grammar (lots of it!). It took "Brian & Justin" for me to have a drive to write. Believe me when I say that it still amazes me that I was able to write something and this long :-D
I actually had no intention to write story with long chapters or in WIP (but I have nothing against it really). And I am just like you, I prefer to read a completed story bacause I just cannot wait for its ending and get the feeling of happiness and satisfaction at the end of each story.
I tagged this story already completed but I will create short stories/plots based on Sunnyboy and I'll post it individually. QAF has 5 seasons and a lot of good plots to be used and gap fillers to make, I just need to watch it again LOL!
I hope you read my other story, although its not yet finish I already have the story lines and the ending and it will not take longer waiting period to be completed. Also I have other stories in my head that is bugging me to get out (call me crazy but I guess I unleashed the monster in me).
Again thank you very much for your reviews it's very heart warming.
mery
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 34: Acceptance
I LOVE you leaving the bear and the letter!
I hate that they separate at this point, but It also has to happen. Justin needs to be on his own to complete his journey into manhood. He has never had to be fully independent. He was a spoiled little boy whose parents loved and coddled him - until he came out. Then he was loved and adopted by Brian and his family. None of them would ever allow him to go without. Time and distance really was needed. Although, I think they could have gotten married and had a commuter marriage if they wanted. Either way, NY is not far from Pittsburg, and kinda between Pitts and Toronto. Brian could easily pass by Justin's and take him along to see his son. Lindsay and Brian could visit NY and reunite with Justin that way, too. It was never The END.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 33: Violin, Posters & Plastic Ball
That is a tender gap-filler with both with Vic and Brian at Kinnetic and then Brian and Justin at the loft.
You sure are flying thru the story. I guess if you didn't you would end up writing a novel or two just going thru each important scene.
I just love certain scenes: the first time they made love after the bashing, Pride, Justin drawing on the computer Brian bought him, the reunification after Ethan, the cancer story line you just touched on, the pink possey (which should have come after) particularily focusing on Brian's fear and Justin's growing masculinity and sexual dominance. Okay, okay, yes Im thinking of Chair!Sex. Damn that was hot.
To be honest, I dont know exactly what comes next or in what order. I stopped watching the show. What I do know is thru fanfic and youtube short videos people made of their favorite scenes.
I dont know if I will ever watch the show all the way through. There are too many fanfic I love and dont want to have overshadowed by cannon. Have you read Reverberations and Homecoming by Wren over on Moonshadow Tribe? If you haven't, you just have to get over and read it. It is what really happens. Well, what I have decided is the cannon. It covers season five and invents its own season six over the next six or so months. It is amazing.
Gawd. I surely do talk a lot, don't I? I must be lonely or bored, LOL
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 32: Bad as New
I always hated that no one told Justin of Brian's visits to the hospital. Im a mom and can understand her wanting to protect her son from what she no doubt thought of as a bad influance. But I would also see my son hurting both mentally and physically. I couldn't do a damn thing about the physical aches but if it was in my power to help him feel better about himself and his self worth and value to his family, friends, and yes, lover, I would have told him. (She had later admitted to Brian the night nurse told her of his visits).If Vic knew, I see him as too much of a softie not to tell Justin.These little secrets are what ruins everything!BUT, and this is one occation I have to admit the writers got it right, if he knew Brian was visiting, Justin most likely WOULD NOT have worked so hard in physiotherepy and improved as much and as quickly as he did.Its so complicated! Yet, that's what made this such a good piece of writing.I thought by now in the story everyone had already made fun of Justin and his teddy bear named GUS. Wouldn't that have clued in Mikey, or Jennifer - who was the one who mentioned it at the GLC? Now the comic book hints. Someone should be cluing in and letting Justin in on the secrets.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 31: His Darkest Nights
"I just want to make him happy" Brian said in a very sad voice.
Vic thought he looked fourteen again.
"I know you do."
"I shouldn't fucking came. I make everything bad to him. His parents kicking him out, him ridiculed at school and now this. I should fucking stayed away from him."
"But you didn't because you love him."
"Just proven that it gives nothing but pain and trouble."
I think you have this exactly right. If asked this would be why Brian chose to continue to resist Justin for the next two seasons.
It also makes sense why he'd visit at night. The push Brian and criticise him for not visiting Justin during the day, but I believe Brian would have feared two things: One, hurting Justin's mom and Two, Justin's mom hurting him by telling him things that he already believes the truth - that it is all his fault.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 30: déjà vu
I wish in canon Brian would even consider taking Justin with him. Honestly, I think Justin would have followed him, probably manipulating him, saying he will have to hustle or work as a go go dancer to survive. That he would never be able to afford school and therefore never have much of a future. Justin is not really an angel, he just looks like one. ;-P
It would have really been an interesting take on the story of Brian and Justin. I always thought Brian's ambition was too big for just Pittsburg. He would have pushed to greater heights needing bigger more prestigeous agencies to work for. I love he founded Kinnetic, but its very rare someone so young would be able to pull of an internationally recognized company. I do believe in time he will succeed to amazing levels with Kinnetic, but it will take time.
In cannon I dont think he could have followed Justin to NY until in his fourties. It takes years to build a company's reputation and even more years to afford the capital to found an agency in the biggest most competitive city in north amearica. Thinking this, it would have been more likely for themto be together if they left to new york in season one. Brian undoubtedly could have manipulated Lindsay to come to NY as well bringing his son. Mel is also ambitious, and despite her hate (probably really more just jealousy) of Brian, she probably could have been lured with the promise of Kinnetic putting her on retainer no matter what law agency she eventually signs on with.
Jeeze. You must be getting sick of my comments by now. Sorry they are so long! Its raining here and Im stuck inside laying around because of a bad back feeling all philosiphical. LOL. Please take it as a compliment that your story obviously lit a spark in me and makes me want to analyze my favorite couple and their relationship. I really do like your take on an alternative meeting and am interested in seeing in what direction you will tke it.
Im almost done readng up to where you left off and hope you will continue to add to your story so I can keep reading it!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 29: Recognition
Brian did seem so different when he came into the Novotny's that night. Sure he was relieved and probably happy his friend Ted suddenly came out of his coma. He probably was a little relaxed because of the sex he'd just had. But the way he smiled and seemed to share a secret with Vic fits so well with your back story.
I understand totally why Brian wouldn't want to have a real relationship with Justin. He would undoubtedly get hurt. Justin is so young and requires many life experiences to grow and become a man. While having a much older lover when you are in your teens is common, even the ideal in gay life, not all the older men are so very much in love with their 'son' and fearing every moment until the kid decides he wants something better.
When upstairs Justin saw the picture of the Brian he knew, with "scoot" the kid next door from his old babysitter. I think Justin would possibly remember Brian = being artistic I think his visual memory would be advanced, as well as his soft artistic heart.
I like your gap filler, on what could have possibly happened when Mikey left with Justin and his mom. It would be an ideal time for Brian and Vic to have a talk. I do believe that no one knew Brian better than Vic before Justin came along. Being an older man and father figure in his life, I think Brian would confide his scary feelings to Vic. And Vic, coming so close to death recently, wouldn't have any sympathy for Brian's fears, thinking time is too short for those kind of excuses and delays.
The scene in the car in canon is funny. The smirking Justin trading looks with Mikey. It works well with your story - just like when he was only three, it seems like Justin is still more mature than Mikey and can see right through him - possibly knowing Mikey's hearts desire better than Mikey knows it himself. LOL.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 28: The Repercussion
I figured it was the following weekend. Most people spend at least one night in the hospital after giving birth. Justin probably rode high in spirits all week feeling good about picking such a hot stud as his first. Of course its easier to try to get with Brian again than risking finding a new lover. Justin's not dumb. I think he knew the risks he was taking, but he was determined. Now he knew a stud, and he wanted to try sex again. It felt safer to go back to Brian - and he likely had a little crush with his first.
I think Brian would be a tad bit embarassed to have a stalker. He's a sophisticated man, and to have something so highschool happening would be awkward. And his friends would tease him mercilessly. He would need to get everything back to normal as soon as possible. Using your story idea I think he wouldn't want Justin to use him as an example of what being a homosexual was all about. Brian knows his relationships are shallow, and his behaviour would only be hurtful to Justin. Besides Justin was so young, he knew that Justin would move on and leave him hurting when he left.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 27: Goal Accomplished?
Poor Brian. I just bet he woke up with all sorts of confusing thoughts. But, as always, paramount for Brian is self protection. He was gentle and sweet with Justin thru the morning and all the way to school, but he did try to end it = rather gently and sweetly, but end it all the same.
Stupid man. We are talking about Justin here. He always gets what he wants.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 26: The Mission
I loved the Jeep ride back to the loft. Such clever dialogue considering he was high as a kite. I think it is the only time in cannon you ever see Brian attempting to GIVE a blow job. I can imagine how Mikey must have felt. Seeing that must have nearly blown his mind!
I can't imagine all the antics Brian must have gotten up to to have trashed his place the way he did! Im hoping it was very playful with lots of laughter. I think laughing in bed is a very romantic form of foreplay.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 25: Meet Sonnyboy
I like how your take on the story meshes so very excellently with the hospital room scene. It's like Brian is testing Justin's knowledge, trying to confirm who he thinks he is.
I never really got the roof scene. It seemed really stupid to me.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 24: Complication
"Well, I guess we're all a little scared our first time."
Such a simple thing to say, but it reaveals for the first time that this Stud is capable of compassion.
Oh how I wish that a blow job was the furthest they went in that shower. And it was just as Brian told it = HE was the Lolita seducing the teacher. Not that this makes it in any way OK, just that it wouldn`t be outright RAPE and being his choice not so much a psychological injury.
Dorky Mikey about to get laid? I can see why Brian would encourage him to continue on and not bother to come to the hospital. I mean, Brian himself was just interupted from what was probably the most interesting sex session he has had in who knows how long - and he's a guy after all. He was probably mentally high-fiving Mikey over the phone!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 23: The Solution
Awww. I think that Justin`s appeal to Brian was that his natural fear made Brian feel strong in a situation he normally avoided because of his own fears. I think Justin`s determination made Brian feel less responsible for Justin`s choices and actions. Justin`s maturity made him capable of taking care of himself so Brian didn`t feel pressured. Their personalities were perfect for each other in that moment.
Justin was looking for a beautiful Stud to take his virginity. He wanted an experienced man, but not too old, and definately HOT. He was a beautiful boy offering up a once in a lifetime experience: for someone to take him for the first time. He knew his worth and wanted the best. Brian`s arrogance only made him seem that much more of a worthy Stud.
Of course, Justin is also sexy as hell. I can imagine Brian seeing him walking thru the steam from the gutters, like a movie specifically lit to get his attention and emphasize any feeling he might have had that this meeting was special.
Some of Justin`s dorky comments probably endeared him to Brian. (I mean really - look at the dork who is his best friend!). It took something far more profound to touch Justin`s heart: Being a part of Brian meetng his son for the first time, seeing Brian`s awe and his heart being rarely revealed. Justin stood their and saw this arrogant, hot, sexy stud fall in love. It was beautiful.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 22: Under the Streetlamp
You know, I really think Brian WAS bored. I mean he was simply going for one mindless orgasm after another. There wasn`t any kind of challenge in it for him. Guys lined up to service him. Tricks were just mastabatory tools used to get off. I think he was beginning to long for something more, an actual connection, although he would NEVER admit that to himself being totally fearful of taking such a huge risk with his heart - which had been so sorely abused in his formative years.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Lost Boy & Wendy
This was a most depressing chapter. :o( I made me very very sad.
Im only glad you made time fly so fast. I could imagine weeks of Justin asking to see Brian. Maybe wondering if he had been hit again. :o( And being very sad to have lost his bear B. When my daughter lost her stuffed rabbit she didn`t forget about it forever - she is 17 now and still remembers it from when she was about three or four.
Poor Brian pulling into himself. He is right, I know both physical and mental abuse, and the physical is so much easier to handle. Really, its just pain. You know deep in your heart that your parent(s) dont care for you properly but you survive. The emotional abuse, cutting up the bear, hearing such hateful words, these hurt so much deeper and cant be healed up with a bandage. These wounds may never ever heal. :o(
I wish Justin`s parents thought to go to Linda`s to see if the stuffed animal was there. I went to every store in the mall, looked into every single garbage can inside and around the outside of the mall for my daughter`s stuffed bunny. It wouldn`t take much to drive by, learn she moved, have Debbie recognize them, offer to babysit, and reunite Brian and Justin ====But that is just my wish for a perfect world.
Lindsay seems so clingy already. Honestly, I didnt like her the moment she started to give unasked for advise that went against B and J`s relationship and seemed to be given for her own benefit. I couldn`t care less about her relationship with Melanie - we all have the right to fuck up our own relationships. But meddeling in another persons` relationships is just awful.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 20: Only Time
So sad really.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 19: The Return
Aw geeze. Well I hope the Taylors would have to return to at least pack up to move permanantly. I hope Brian isn`t too upset. I imagine Justin will be quite hysterical once he realizes he wont be at Linda`s to see Brian.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 17.1 Self Knowing (Missing Chapter)
I jumped ahead to read this part, still a bit late but wanted to make sure I had it in context of the story.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 18: Vic Grassi
Im glad Brian has Vic to ask questions, even glad that Mikey is gay too, so neither of them have to feel alone.
Its cute that he misses Justin so much.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 17: New York
Stubborn Brian! Has to do everything for himself. Already willing to be perceived as being an asshole if it protects his friends from the fallout that will surly occur when his parents get hold of him again. :o(
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 16: Mother
YAY Linda!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Runaway?
Oh Brian, I hope your parents wont be too rough on you when you get home!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 14: Later Sunnyboy
So very precious. Linda is very trusting. Its true, that kind of affection could be viewed as perverse because Brian is so much older. But, then, Justin is very exceptional. Gifted to read and draw like he does at only three he is clearly very special.
For some strange reason these two people who have no ties to each other, no reason to even know each other, have felt their lives touching and are realizing hey cannot accept not being in contact.
Brian feels very paternal of Justin - proud of Sunnyboy. It feels almost like Justin feels maternal towards Brian - worried and so caring and tender. Its not perverse, just unusual. Then again it would be rare, at any age, to have a battered boy be so willing to be vulnerable; or see a young boy who should be selfish toddler yet be so protective, sympathetic and connected to another person.
I guess it is fate, or they are ment to be, or they are soulmates. :o)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Plan
I wonder what the plan is?
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 12: Family of Bear
OMG! I dont care who Mr Jack Kinney thinks he is, I would so beat the shit out of him or die trying!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 11: Gus
I love that you have Brian giving Jusitn all his favorite memeories!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 10: Handstand & Juggling
I think Clair might have been likeable once.
Im glad Brian still gets to see Sunnyboy - and he's getting him a present!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 9: Yellow Submarine
Its Brian who first shows Justin the Yellow Submarine!
Mikey is a dork.
Im sad that Brian and Justin wont see each other for a while. =O(
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 8: Green Lantern
Sunnyboy is shocked to hear Brian gets beat up, and wants Brian to grow up and hit back! LOL. Brian is already non violent and would rather get his revenge by being successful and never looking back. Smart boy.
Justin gives Brian a smooch!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 7: Lasagna
Aww. A thumb sucking Justin resting his head on Brian's shoulder. And Brian doesn't just hand him off to Linda, but carries him home for her.
Wow, looks like Justin was born drawing!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 6: Big Mama
Awww. Debbie just met Sunshine. I wonder how long it will take her to nickname him?
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 5: Friendship
Oh Brian. I love you already!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 4: Daddy
I hate Brian's childhood. It is awful. I really wish Debbie found a way to take him from his parents to live with her and Michael.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 3: The Bench
Such a charming little boy Justin was. His pleading already wearing Brian down, but Brian already knows never to promise. :o)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Comics
Such a smart little boy! Cute how he cant say his R's, but manages to read Supe-al-man. I love how he thinks Mikey's name is Scoot, and because he thinks that, when he says good bye to him, he basically says "get lost".
Brian is already charmed by Justin, and Mikey was aparently born an ass. LOL.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Babysitter
Awww. JB is very sweet, and his daddy is really proud of him! That is nice to see.
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2010 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 35: And We Meet Again
That was such a delight to read. I've been jumping back and forth between bjfic and here to read the story. I'm enjoying your other story, the one about the cruise. Your imagination is exceptional and your writing is very enjoyable.
Looking forward to other stories in the future.
All the best.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I do have other stories to make so watch out for it.
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2010 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 35: And We Meet Again
wonderful ending. especially liked that you bought linda back too.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you like the ending.
Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2010 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 25: Meet Sonnyboy
thanks for the update!!!!!!!!!! but ...........
can u update again, soonnnnnnnnnnnnnn?????
thanks
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2010 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 25: Meet Sonnyboy
i hope it doesn't follow canon from here on out. i really would like for brian to be happy that his sunnyboy is back and that justin remembers.
Reviewer: lora (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2010 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 25: Meet Sonnyboy
hii........... Ilove this story very very very beautiful........... more more please
Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2010 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 22: Under the Streetlamp
pleassssseeeeeeee update soonnnnnnn!!!
thanks.........
Reviewer: lora (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2010 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 22: Under the Streetlamp
very beautifullllllll ..... Iwant more please
Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 22: Under the Streetlamp
yaih they are finally meeting when they are all grown up *glaps hands*
more please??
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2010 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 22: Under the Streetlamp
i adore this story. i couldn't comment for a while but i have been reading all the updates.
absolutely loved this chapter. the thoughts of justin, the bear gus. the kid he picks up to help him forget. ha that's a good one. i can't wait for his reaction.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2010 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Lost Boy & Wendy
awww u stopped when this was gettin sooooo good lol please update soonnnn
Author's Response: will do ...don't worry
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Lost Boy & Wendy
please don't let Lindsey talk him into getting married (**horrified look**). You are doing a great job with this story I really like the way you are writing about Brian as a kid and young adult. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. of course there will be no weddings...we all know that. thanks for reading.
Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Lost Boy & Wendy
THANKS FOR THE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
and can't wait for the next update - when brian and justin will meet again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! when this will be???????????????????
Author's Response: soon. under the lamp post of course (-;
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Lost Boy & Wendy
This is such a wonderful story. Thanks.
* hugs *
Author's Response: thank you
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Lost Boy & Wendy
i love it
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 20: Only Time
i love it
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 19: The Return
i love it
Reviewer: RunningWithTheDevil33 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Lost Boy & Wendy
oh I love this story, it's so good! Can't wait for Brian and Justin to meet again, please update soon.
Reviewer: stephanie (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2010 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 17: New York
Hi
I just wanted to say I love this story. I hope you will continue the story and update often.
Thanks
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2010 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 17: New York
Very interesting story, well done! I love AUs that are different from the norm. i hope you finish this.
PS: So glad to see Joan scared. I always wondered why Debbie didn't turn in Brian's parents...
Reviewer: marietta (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 17: New York
This is geting better and better, I hope that Brian is not going back home and that Linda will play a large part in that. Keep going, I love it.
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 17: New York
i love it
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 16: Mother
Go Linda, Wish Debbie had done that in the show. I love it.
Author's Response: I wished that too. Thank you.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2010 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 16: Mother
get her linda... if only debbie would have showed up...
good work.. i need more jb and brian :D
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: RunningWithTheDevil33 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Runaway?
So Brian is going to see Justin on Monday....of 2000? :)
Just wanted to say that I'm really enjoying this story, can't wait for whatever comes next.
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 14: Later Sunnyboy
Such a sweet story. I hope it continues and maybe Brian finds a safer place to live. It is so nice that Brian has someone who loves him-but doesn't idolize him like Mikey- and that he feels safe with.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2010 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 14: Later Sunnyboy
aaawww i love it.. i need more.. were is Blaian going? when he comes back on monday will he only stop to see jb and mikey?
Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2010 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Plan
whewwwww!!!
i read all the chapters in one seating and i cant get enough more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
what a cute, nice, beautiful love story of brian and justin!!!!!!!!!!
please update soon and thanks.........
Reviewer: qafcrazy (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 10: Handstand & Juggling
i like this story alot but you need a beta if you need one i'll be happy to help
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 12: Family of Bear
Maybe its time for Brian to go to the police? Debbie would have taken him in.
Author's Response: You will find it out on chapter 15.
Thank you again for reading.
Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 12: Family of Bear
You're getting better with each chapter you write ;) Can't wait to see how or if they'll meet when they're older. Will they continue seeing each other until then or will the contact break and then they'll reunite?
Update soon again please
hugs
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're following this. The next chapters will be harder (for me) to write, I cannot seems to put it in words.
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2010 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 12: Family of Bear
he would go with vic and stay in ny if he could. how is he going to get away for the weekend?
Author's Response: Glad you're following this. You'll find out soon what will happen.
Thanks again for reading.
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 9: Yellow Submarine
So cute! Look forward to more.
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2010 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 9: Yellow Submarine
what a charming story.
so when do they meet again?
Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 8: Green Lantern
It's a cute plot and you're really fast with updating ;)
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 4: Daddy
Very nice start, what a sweet story.
* hugs *
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 3: The Bench
Aww that is so cute!! Look forward to more soon.
Author's Response: More to come. Thanks for reading and review.
Reviewer: marietta (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Babysitter
Good start, good plot, I look forward for the developing on this interesting story. I always thought that the meeting under the street lamp was not just random meeting.
Author's Response: Thanks, I will not going to give it all out yet but that meeting will be essential on this story as well, as it always does on any BJ stories.
Keep reading, cheers!
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2010 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 3: The Bench
verey good..its soo sweet...please continue..
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: Sissi Parker (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2010 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 3: The Bench
Sweet! I love little Justin. Can´t wait to read more about Brian and Justin.
Author's Response: Thank you, don't worry more to come.
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