Reviewer: Who (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2015 07:15 PM · On: Our Little Secret
Can't wait
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2010 01:35 AM · On: Our Little Secret
nice story, and a very emotional brian, we are not used to this image of him, but i have to admit when i get to a story depicting bri more in contact with his emotions and actually expressing said feelings, ...well i get a kick out of it.
good job, cant wait for the third story :)
Reviewer: Murgy31 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2010 02:26 PM · On: Our Little Secret
This was lovely!
Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2010 12:04 PM · On: Our Little Secret
beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanks........
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2010 03:39 AM · On: Our Little Secret
I loved the story but it was to short! I'm glad you added that the next mini story would reveal the secret. I thought everyone but me would understand the painting. Actually, I thought I woudl understand the painting until I looked at it.
I think that you should write a longer story or series and I would hope it would be in the category of Hurt/Comfort; which is my favorite.
Anything you write (that is finished) I will read - and comment on.
Author's Response: Thank You Very much, I'm so glad you like my writing.
I am in the process of writing 3 long stories, one is nearly finished, i choose to write it all and then post it because then i won't leave it unfinished.
Thanks Again
xxx
Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2010 03:36 AM · On: Our Little Secret
I loved the story.
I am glad you still have Brian and Justin together.
Michael has and always will be not one of my favorite character but he still is so dumb when it comes to BJ's relationship.
Please keep on writing because you are a gifted writer.
Thanks for the great story!
Debbie
Author's Response: Thank You, Thank You
nobody's ever called me a gifted writer before!
Yeh I Don;t really like Michael he annoys me! lol
Thank You again for yur kind words
xxx
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2010 12:19 AM · On: Our Little Secret
into brian's darkness (his lonely life) came his ray of sunshine.
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