Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2019 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 10

good one

Reviewer: Aga (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2016 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 5

1

Reviewer: Lady Luciole (Anonymous) · Date: May 11, 2011 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 9

The chapters 5, 6, 7 & 8 are empty ! I'm lost in the story : I never read about their engagement or the hearing. I also failed to understand how Jack is finally a good man ? Is it a treachery ? How about the wedding : aren't they supposed to wait Justin got 18 ?

Reviewer: Bill (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2011 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 10

Help!

I can't access Chapters 5-6-7-8.

Can someone tell me what I might be doing wrong?

I'm a QAF FanFiction addict, and I NEED my fix!

THANK YOU!

 

Chapters posted since Feb 7th were lost due to a virus attack on our web server's files. We are trying to inform all authors affected to re-post their work. -Admin

Author's Response:

i know other people have said the same

my computer crashed and i had to take it in to be fixed and some of my files got lost

Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2011 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 9

Just an FYI, you need to go back and repost Chapter 5-8 because of the hacking situation.

Author's Response:

thanks i hadnt realised that yet but now i have well my computer crashed and i had to take it in to be fixed a lot of my files and back ups had been ruined and i couldnt get them back and im afraid that chapters 5-8 were amongst them sorry but a chunk will be missing

Reviewer: letlijah (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2011 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

This seems like a really great story, the idea is very fresh at least. Unfortunately, no matter how hard I try, I never seem to get past the first chapter because I grow so tired of the lack of commas etc., which makes the story difficult to follow.

 

I'm sure you're doing the best you can, but you really should try to find a beta. You can find plenty of betareaders on the internet, and even I could try to help you out if you wish.

 

Good luck with your writing, it does seem a fantastic story.

Author's Response:

thanks for the advice my grammar and sometimes spelling aint great

i havent been writing for long only about 4 months

and thanks for offering to help me out

Reviewer: Lady Luciole (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2011 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 7

This story is very interesting. Quite originals ideas. I have only a little problem : with your style of writing. It took me longer to read your story than usually because of this particularities.
Why not put each new person speaking in another line with or without a dash? It made the reading more fluent. And it is less tiring to guess who's speaking at the time.
Your paragraph are also a little bit confusing : sometimes you change the point of vue during one paragraph.

You have a very great story ! It wouldn't do you any good if you lose some readers in the beginning or along the way because they grew tired of your page setting.

I hope to read you soon with the next chapter ! I'm anxious to know more about the evil plot from Brian's parents and the love romance of BJ.

Author's Response:

thanks for the advice my english and grammar isnt wonderful so i will try and write better

i hope to update tonight or tommorrow

there are still a few chapters to go watch out for a few shocks

i've been very busy so i havent had time to update lately

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2011 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 3

I love when Brian is open and sweet.
He and Justin are so beautiful together.

Author's Response:

thank you

glad you like it

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2011 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great start. Love your stories.

Author's Response:

thank you thats nice to know

i'll try and update soon