I just saw this story the other day and have just finished it!!   All I can say is that this one just became one of my favorites!!   From start to finish, I was hooked!!    

fucking Lindsey, never liked her.  She wants Brian for herself

Love it

I like the way you had the guys meet. It was a great start for the story.

Hello! I just wanted to say that I am loving this story. It leaves me wondering more and more about Justin's past and what Stockwell has in store for him. Thank you for posting your work!

Loved it! It's great how you incorporated scenes from the show into your fic but with your own twists!

Loved it!!!

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"But then, fucking tricks is like shaking hands to me" lol so true!!!

I love your Brian!!!

LOL!!! Loved it without any air quotes!!!!!

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Great story I read straight from chapter 1-37!!! without writting any review shame on me!!! Rectifying that right now!!!!!

Loved it!

Loved it!

Don't remember if I commented on this story before, but just re-read it (had my computer read it to me over two days in the art studio) and enjoyed it even more, the second time around!

It's just the right mix of romance, mystery, family matters, and h/c.  Fanfic for the soul -- excellent work, Nightvision55!  :-)

It's always bitter sweet to see a good story come to an end. I loved your take on our B/J story. Thank you!

I really enjoyed your story "Running".

I absolutely LOVED this story, terrific job!! Your Brian and Justin are just perfect :)

Wow -- more than worth the wait!  I enjoyed every word and anticipate the need to read it again.  Congratulations on turning out a real winner! :-)

A delightful read and very entertaining. I may have picked on the amount of canon but not harshly I hope; more as just some friendly advice writer to writer of QAF fan fiction. There were places of brilliance in your twist on canon here, and I very much enjoyed staying up all night to finish this one.

Truly I hope you continue to write QAF stories for us, and that you've found a home here for your craft. You're going to be a popular author as more discover you.

Oh how could I forget. The sex scenes were sizzling hot and extremely well done without over doing it like some writers do (self included!).

Despite the amount of "shared canon", I think this story panel deserves some decoration :)

Author's Response:

Thanks very much for the detailed reviews, and for your very constructive comments.  Now I know how to spell Kinnetik, too!  Most of all, thanks for the decoration - inspite of all the canon! : )

And the plot slowly turns......

This Lindsay is interesting, and Gus is perfect. Lindsay is always calculating something in the show and I wonder if that's the case here. Just thinking out loud as I'm reading.

Shit, I'm too old for this man to start crying. This is by far the best chapters I've read.

Well now you totally have my attention.

“You’re as persistent as genital warts, you know that?”

LOL Good one! Great chapter too.

Stockwell can be far more dangerous than this.

Good direction however and I was hoping for more original plot work.

In the USA we call it baton, what you call a truncheon. Interesting bar scene but I'm more hoping for developments concerning Stockwell.

Canon overload sort of. You can ignore me here; this is a pet peeve for me and in truth it's your story to tell.

I forgot; it's spelled Clio Award, not Cleo Award. I made that mistake too until I looked it up.

HA! Now here you to canon to a new fun level and that was hot.

The legal term you want here is non-competition clause for usually 1-3 years and all major executives sign an employment contract with it in there. They are also forbidden to reveal any company trade secrets for life.

And it's spelled Kinnetik in the show; a common error by many writers of fan fiction. Love the fast pace you're developing here.

Reading on to the finish line if I don't fall asleep on the keyboard :)

OK.....reading on to the GLC event.

Mega - Kuddos for this chapter, the feelings were perfect and heartfelt.

I hope Debbie's place is safe. I'm still not comfortable about Stockwell at all.

I glad you didn't turn that into a betting game like the canon is!

I still fear for Brian and Justin's safety. This stuff is serious.

Canon....but I do see the need for it considering the one in 1,000,000 readers who doesn't know it yet :)

The sub plots are moving forward clearly which is the hallmark of a good writer.

Author's Response:

Wow!  Sorry but I've just logged in and seen all your reviews ... I've only skimmed through so far but I'll answer a couple of points I noticed.

Yes, I'm English, so please forgive any glaring discrepancies in spelling or terminology.  I must also say that I only touched a computer for the first time two years ago, and I'm hopeless at the technical side of things. I really struggle to understand what's second nature for most people, so any tips or help you can give, I'd be very grateful.

As to my use of canon scenes, you're not the first to point it out.  But it was done deliberately; there were many scenes I thought were integral to Brian and Justin's 'relationship' as a couple, and I felt they needed to be included.  I just wanted to bring them about in a different way, or with a slightly different outcome.  It took a lot of weaving into the storyline, believe me!

Anyway, I'm going to go back and read them all thoroughly now.

Thanks for the interest,

Nightvision

Hummm.....there's so many ways you can go from here with this.

Author's Response:

Reading on to see where you take this.....

Now we know what Justin is dealing with, and Brian wants to help him. Usually a story too close to repeating canon bores me, but you have added your original twist to make it very interesting.

Maybe a long drive out of town is in order too.

You description of Hunter is refreshingly right.

I have to read; commenting aside.

Me thinks I know the problem; like Justin saw something and they want to shut him up - for good.

Now what? Will Justin take off next?

Their angst is so teenage like. Brian is so screwed.

I'm known to comment on every chapter and don't expect you to answer each one. I like to raise your review count anyway. And for the record, yes, I like it.

I feel a very sad tale developing - with some drama probably.