Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For RUNNING
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 14

The best laid plans of mice and men.....

Reviewer: ducana (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 45

Another great chapter.  It keeps on getting better and better.

Reviewer: ducana (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 44

great chapter. 

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2011 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 45

Now here we go!  Taking on Stockwell, I can't wait!

Reviewer: Sab123 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2011 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 45

I am following this story from the first chapter, because it has a great combination of angst und humor. Brian's remarks and thoughts sometime crack me up.

Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2011 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 44

I love this story! The lawyer and Brian won't get along as they are too much alike, I see many confrontations in the future, LOL

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: October 10, 2011 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 43

Finally !! I was a little frustrated that Justin didn't say what he thought during diner. But when he asks Debbie to go play with Gus... I knew. And it was awesome. You don't know how much I'm thankful.

Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 43

Go Justin! Woo hoo!

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 43

That was awesome how Justin handled Lindsay.  She so richly deserved it!

“It was raining, and blowing a fucking gale.  I slept in a shelter in the park.  I had one of Debbie’s lemon bars I’d been saving for an emergency; I stuck a match in it for a candle.  It was kind of stale, but at least I had a cake.”  Heartbreaking! 

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 42

Big awwww, Brian manned up and went after Justin!  Deb cracked me up!

Reviewer: ducana (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 43

Good chapter.  I'm glad that Justin stood up for Brian.  

Reviewer: ducana (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 42

Love it.  I can just picture Justin's face as Brian told him what happened in the backroom,

Reviewer: ducana (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 41

great story

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 42

Absolutely loved this chapter! First of all, Brian going soft in the backroom is priceless, especially when it is because of it he comes to realize and acknowledge how much he misses Justin. I love that while he stays in character, with all his insecurities, fears and emotional walls, he goes to Justin, and lays his feelings out, leaving himself open and vulnerable. For me, Brian learning how to love, and let himself be loved is what makes this show irrestible. In this chapter, there is passion and fun amongst the sadness and grief, and it was all nicely written and thoroughly enjoyable to read. - thanks - This story has left me anxious for the next chapter since the beginning, and after more than 40 chapters, I find that has not diminished at all. Keep it coming!

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 42

The backroom fiasco was hilarious! If anything was going to get Brian to stop and think about changing his tricking habits it would be his dick! ROFL! And then in this chapter when he thought it upset Justin but he was actually laughing was priceless! 

I love this story!  :-D   Hugs, Cindy

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2011 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 42

Sweet! ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2011 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 41

That's right sometimes you have to go after what you want in life!!!

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Cherie (Anonymous) · Date: October 08, 2011 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

After being taken to task for being lazy and not reviewing....I really really like all your stories. I remember the first time I read a chapter I went back and hunted for more that you had written. When I see a new chapter of running I smile and dive in. Thank you.



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Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2011 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 42

Excellent chapter, I was pleased to see that Brian folded first, LOL

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: October 08, 2011 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 41

“What have you got to lose, Sunshine?  He can only say no.” And isn't this the truth!!!! However... He can always say yes! If we stupid people realised that there are more than one answers and took our head out of ass then, maybe just maybe, life would turn out differently... Ahhh what is it they say about hindsight?

This was a very nice update though a bit too reminiscent for me, and many more I suspect, and let me tell you I have found myself in both Justin's and Debbie's shoes more times than I can remember.

Cant wait for the thoughts of Brian when he returns to the loft and realizes that Justin left, will he harden his heart again or go after him?

What about some suspence with Stockwell, nothing like a good scare to make Brian pull his head out of his ass.

I suppose we will have to wait and see how that will play out.

Marla

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: October 08, 2011 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 41

 “What have you got to lose, Sunshine?  He can only say no.” Debbie, are you crazy ? It would be the end of the world ! Justin have to talk to Brian but Brian is an idiot, too. GRRR !!

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2011 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 40

Hmmmm, that's Brian Kinney for you I guess, though the blast came out of the blue here, but then again the subject is quite volatile soooo...

However, I foresee a Stockwell moment in the imminent future of the boys, when Justin is not gonna be living at the loft and Brian will blame himself [so Kinney-esque] for the troubles of the blond twink.

We have to wait and see what you have them do for the next update.

Marla

 

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 40

Not to woory, I trust you... yeah angst B/J :o)

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2011 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 40

Oh, I'm not worried! I got kind of a kick out of the chapter actually!  Brian has no idea how funny he is when he's clawing that last inch to hang on to his "I don't believe in love" motto!  He was really angry when he stormed out!  He must really love him a lot!  :-)

Excellent chapter!! I'm very much looking forward to the next one!

Hugs, Cindy

PS - One more thing ... Lindsay, honey, get over him, you're never going to have him!  UGH!  You're annoying!  LOL

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2011 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 40

Wow, issues Brian?!  I think Justin held his own pretty good there.

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2011 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 39

It's good to hear the gang supporting Justin.  Especially nice to hear Debbie stand up for Brian and their love.  Six weeks my ass!

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2011 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 39

Gawd I hate bull dykes!

Loved the chapter though and that Brian is actually showing his colors even though he hardly recognizes it himself.

How much angst are we supposed to expect in the future of the boys?

Cant wait for the next chapter.

Marla

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2011 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 39

I liked the little chat between the gang about recent changes of Brian's behaviour. It's good that Michael is able to see it without denial like Lindsay does. I hope she won't try to manipulate Justin by introduce him to Ethan. Because Ethan is bad news for Brian and Justin relationship. Melanie was great in this chapter. Her pregnancy allow her to put Lindsay in her place. As soon as she opens her mouth, Lindsay tries to silence her It would frustrate me too if I was in Melanie's place. I would love to see Brian tell her to leave him alone, that is no/kind of relationship with Justin is none of her business. She's not his mother and if he need one he would go to Debbie. If he begin a relatioship with Justin, it would be between the two of them. Not three. If it's grow to three, it would include Gus, not Lindsay. I hope Melanie can makes St-James, Hobbs and Craig pay for what they did to Justin.

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2011 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 39

Two updates since I last checked, thanks for the new chapters I'm loving this story...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2011 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 38

Nice celebration!  It's a relief knowing the Psycho's gone but they shouldn't let down their guard with Stockwell still out there.  I am worried about the statement Justin is going to make!

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2011 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 38

"Many of them were taking bets on the world ending by morning." I loved that line!

I wonder if the boys are gonna confront Stockwell at the deposition or later and how that is gonna come down...

Great work sweetie *hugs* Marla

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2011 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 37

I just read all 37 chapters over the last couple of days and I'm loving this story!!!

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2011 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 37

Love it!  He sure does care.

Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2011 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 36

Ahh Brian, self realization is a bitch, LOL.

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2011 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 35

I foresee a short life for Reikert, dont you? What now? Cant wait for the update

Marla

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2011 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 35

Ken and Jim give me chills!  Great chapter!

Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2011 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 34

Great chapter! I like the conversation with Gardner, very revealing of both characters. I really like Horvath's response to Brian as well. Great character and plot development!

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: September 18, 2011 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 34

Great update sweetie

Marla

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: September 18, 2011 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 33

I see this is going very close to the canon with it's own AU reality, and I can't wait to see what you have cooked up next for the boys.

I would like to see Stockwell and Reikert to go after another boy and our boys will get them photographed or something. All that of course with Hunter's help and that other guy that helped Justin. That ought to give this a nice spin with some suspence and some angst, but hey that's just me.

Great work sweetie *hugs*

Marla

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2011 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 31

Oops, that was me :)  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2011 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 31

This is a great story!  I've been reading it straight through all weekend and really enjoying it.  You write very well!

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2011 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 30

Stupid kid that Jason Kemp in this story, and Justin...and that homophobic prick craig taylor...what can I say!

Cant wait for the follow up, because this was a tiny update sweetie. I need to know how Stockwell (though I have a feeling I already do) got wind of Justin's involvement and what is Brian gonna do to help his...Sunshine *grinning like a madman here*

Marla

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2011 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 29

Yay!  I feel better now that Brian found him.  I was worried.  Love that Brian is jealous.

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2011 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 27

We got our three chapter update *hurray* and we have not moved in the story at all. Where did Justin go, is Brian gonna find him and explain to him that he is not "in bed" with Stockwell and will Justin believe him (I mean come on, of course he will believe him...eventually!) I foresee an GSW in the future of the boys, I would say in Brian's future, nothing like a bullet to pledge your faith huh? (just suggestions here, dont mind me)

And Michael, please someone shoot the bastard and be done with him (I REALLY REALLY do NOT like that whiney ungrateful asshole). Seriously I do not understand how is possible for Ben to be Michael's partner, I dont!

Great work sweetie. Keep'em coming. *hugs*

Marla



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Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2011 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 27

Can't tell you  how much I am loving this story. The bits and pieces of canon that you hint at, all the while telling a new and completely unique story, full of intrigue and anticipation make this a must read! This story would be comletely enthalling for those who might not be familiar with all the details of the show (ig there are any of those around - lol - what an aswful thought) - but for all who know and love the boys and their story...well...I can't wait for the next installment!

Looks like we might be finding out more of the clues soon, as well as fun with Brian and Hunter (that little hustler was always looking to find a way into the jeep - lol) - and possibly a reunion with Mikey as a result.

Can't wait until Brian and Justin come face to face once again - there is bound to be sparks flying in more ways than one!

Thanks so much for this story!

loving life,

Charle



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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2011 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 24

Hmm. And where would that be, I wonder!  I'm glad you posted today.  I've been waiting and checking for the newest chapter.  I really like this story.

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2011 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 24

OK I get it you are set on giving us a hard time here, even with the three chapters, I still need MORE!!! LOL

Great story and with enough angst to satisfy the craving, so to speak.

Cant wait for the next (three *hopeful here*) updates. *hugs*

Marla



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Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2011 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 21

Ohhhhhhh I was expecting Justin to make a run for it, but for some reason, not so fast... But I guess we are getting close to the good part, so I cant wait for the coming updates.

Great work sweetie.

Marla

Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2011 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 21

more..................

Reviewer: B/Jfanatic (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2011 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 18

uhmmm, me thinks Sunshine doth protest too much about not caring. Interesting twist, that Brian is the one feeling disappointed. Can't wait to see what direction this goes!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2011 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 17

This is so enjoyable.

I just finished The Great Divide, and Metamorphosis, and zipped through the 17 chapters of running.

I'm really enjoying all your work and will patiently await your next chapter.

I found your work through a posting in the GetItHere community on LiveJournal.

What a gem!

And nice joib, especially on this chapter - close to cannon, but you own it.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much.  I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2011 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 17

yup!!  this was a good one.

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2011 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 17

I have really been enjoying this story - and this chapter was positively delicious! I'm loving the combination of canon mixed with freshness, and I always love those moments of a tender Brian - nothing is hotter!

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: B/Jfanatic (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2011 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 17

I am reading and sorry I haven't left more reviews lately! I've relished every chapter of your story.

Your writing is really a treasure, I am very impressed with the quality of it. And it is becoming my favorite on MW.  And the way you can write the sex!! I think this is the best, hottest B/J first time I've read in several years. I think you really captured the way Brian felt about Justin his first time with him, including the need to be his mentor and protect. A great mix of originality and canon.

 It's rare to read a writer who can make the B/J sex fresh and new, and who can go beyond the mechanics of the sex act. Excellent work overall, thank you for writing!!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  It's a difficult subject because the mechanics have been done to death in such explicit detail, it's hard to come up with a fresh way of describing it.  I try to concentrate more on the emotional aspect of B/J sex ... after all, that's what made Justin's appeal unique for Brian in the first place!  Glad it seems to have worked.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2011 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 14

I am addicted to this fic! I get so excited everything I see an update.  Looking forward to seeing all of the pieces coming together, including the looming  Craig piece.

Reviewer: Joanna (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2011 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 14

Awesome, awesome story!

Reviewer: jules (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2011 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 14

Awesome story! Can´t wait for the next update!

Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2011 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 13

Super cute chapter! I love Emmett so much. More of him please!

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2011 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 11

yup he does chicken-only a matter of time.  good one.

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2011 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 10

I loved this chapter! There was just enough of the sarcastic wit to make Brian Kinney and the walls around his heart recognizable and familiar, with glimpses of warmth and affection that just have to make 'ya smile! Sitting on the sofa with Justin, watching a movie and laughing heartily - now that's hot! There is very little quite as sexy as Brian allowing life to bring him joy - whatever form it comes in. (wink wink)

loving life,

Charle

 

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2011 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 10

right!!! indeed!!`great chapter.  loved it.

Reviewer: Joanna (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2011 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 9

Really, really lovely story! Can't wait for the weekend!

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2011 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 9

did i tell you how much i love this story???? so good.  these chapters can't come to quickly for me.  good job putting new chapters up fairly often.  i love reading and wondering what is going to happen next.



Author's Response:

I'll post new chapters every weekend until we're done.  There are a few twists to come yet!

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2011 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 8

good chapter, more things revealed. getting to know one another.  do you not respond to your reviewers??? might be nice so we will know you read them.



Author's Response:

I'm more than grateful that anybody takes the time and trouble to write a review, even more than that they're reading the story in the first place!  I'm happy to know you guys are enjoying it, too.  Usually I thank everybody at the end of the story, although I always try to answer any queries raised at the time.  But thank you now, for both reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2011 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 7

Good update and reading about Brian's growing feelings for "Jay."  So enjoying this fic.

Reviewer: Joanna (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2011 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 7

Thank you for sharing! I am so loving this story! Can't wait for the next installment and the boys to wake up in each other's arms.

Reviewer: Joanna (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2011 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 6

This is a lovely, moving story. And Justin does have this quality about him that makes you want to help him. Even if you are Brian Kinney.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2011 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 6

Love this fic!  I like it when Brian goes against his own nature because of his budding feelings for Justin.

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2011 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 6

cudos to you!!! this is a fabulous story. brian better take care of his charge.  he can work from home and take care of him.  hopefully, jay will let him.  can't wait for more chapters.  soooo good,

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2011 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 5

This chapter was way too short!  I'm addicted, please update soon!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2011 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 4

Great update.  Love how Brian is fighting his budding interest in Justin.  And poor Justin, life has been tough, I hope it gets better for him.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2011 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 4

Haha!   Brian is not going to be able to resist this teen headache.  Loving this story.

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2011 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 4

still loving this story.  brian!! you need to fatten that boy up!!  waiting for more kind of patiently..

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2011 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 3

Ohh getting more and more interesting! I like the way you interweave canon with your plot, very believable! Looking forward to the next chapter :))

Reviewer: B/Jfanatic (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2011 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 2

Verrrry interesting concept and I agree it's intriguing!  Please continue!

Reviewer: Q_A_F_fanfic_addict (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2011 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 2

I hope you update soon. I love this story! :D  I like the idea of this story. I wonder what's going to happen next.

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2011 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 2

i love love love this story.  i just read #3 over there.  soooo!!! good.  it's going to be a winner.

Reviewer: charlotte (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2011 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 2

this is a good one. i love it--and so it begins!!!

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