Reviewer: britintaykin (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 04:54 PM · On: Field of Wishes
Please finish this wonderful story please
Reviewer: jacki (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2016 10:30 PM · On: Field of Wishes
Hi! Please continue this story. I don't know if you are going to or not, but please do. It is so beautiful. I am a big fan of your stories
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2015 04:28 AM · On: Field of Wishes
"Maybe he lie now but a puddle for Justin to wade in. " Beautiful and lyrical, as always! Love this stuff.
- Jackie Mag
Author's Response: Thank you Sweetheart, I always look forward to your kind words. Your continuous support of my writing is very appreciated. *Big Hugs* -Mandi
Reviewer: TheGirlNoOneKnows5 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2015 06:39 AM · On: Field of Wishes
Yet another brilliant chapter that was truly enjoyable. I am loving these versions of Justin and Brian :)
xoxo
Author's Response: Hi Cait, Thank you for taking your time to read and review my story. I appreciate your kind words, and hope you continue to enjoy their journey. *Hugs* -Mandi
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2015 01:02 AM · On: Field of Wishes
Mandi, you write so beautifully. No one phrases their descriptions quite like you. I love this gentle fic, and the images you create. Thank you for returning here to share more of your talent with us. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Hi Honey, Thank you for continuing to support my writing. It means so much. The gentle Britin in this fic is definitely far from the norm of these two, but I am enjoying them. I am happy that you are too. *HugsYouBack*
Reviewer: Onlytime (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2015 05:31 PM · On: Icy Hatred & Heated Anticipation
Hey! I enjoy read your fic. Your writing is fabulous you know. Your descriptions of things are amazing. You made me crazy really. I'm completely fond of this fic. Please promise to update very soon and especially to finish this story. And the sooner you can, you will write another story and then another one and another and...you're too amazing and talented for abandon us. OK?
Author's Response: Hiya! First of all...THANK YOU for your incredibly kind review. Supportive readers like you are what inspire me. Secondly...I promise this will be completed. I do have many other story ideas I hope to be able to share. *Hugs* Mandi
Reviewer: GuitarsAndPoetry (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2015 05:07 PM · On: Field of Wishes
This story has some truly beautiful lines, and this chapter didn't disappoint. Glad Brian got to play the role of knight in shining armor, and that Justin rewarded him. ;] still love their innocence and inexperience. This is definitely the first virgin Brian story I've ever read. Lol excited for them to keep taking their bond to new heights together. Thanks for the update! I can hardly wait for the rest.
Author's Response: I'm glad you are loving this, I'm sure the boys are happy to have you tag along on their journey to self discovery. Thank you for supporting this for so long. The end is finally in sight. :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2015 03:01 AM · On: Field of Wishes
Them dandelions sure do work.
Author's Response: Them sure does! :p ~They never worked that for me as a kid lol. I appreciate you Reading & sharing your thoughts.
Reviewer: urugwaj (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2015 01:18 PM · On: Words
Wow! Fantastic story! Why is that I found this only 2 days ago??? I read all of this in those 2 days! Can't wait for the next chapter :-)
Author's Response: Hello! :) I am very flattered you spent two straight days on my words. I started this story ages ago, but until recently was unable to continue it. There are roughly ten chapters remaining; I am trying to get them out in a timely manner. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. I do hope you continue to enjoy it. *Hugs* -Mandi
Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2015 03:07 PM · On: Icy Hatred & Heated Anticipation
I was very confused; at first, you were setting the scene, but then it switched from Justin's pain to Brian's thoughts to Vic's anger, to a short history lesson on the Grassi shop... I couldn't follow who was saying or thinking what? It is best to stick to one point of view per scene, as this creates the strongest writing. Choose who is the most important character and stick to that person throughout. I wanted to know more about Justin, since he was the one being beaten, and particularly about Brian. Arguably, that might come in the next few chapters, but since all I got to learn about him was that he had a strange feeling when Justin smiled. That in itself wasn't bad, but in the context of this whole chapter, the revelation didn't make sense, as I couldn't figure out who was talking. An interesting idea, but the jumbled structure makes it difficult to follow.
Author's Response: Hello. First, thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. I do like to hear how readers interpret my words and any construtctive suggestions. However, I must respectfully disagree with you about alternating P.O.V's defining the quality of writing. Many works from some of my favorite authors show introspective from multiple characters. I personally like knowing what someone's thoughts are before they act. Also,you suggest focusing on the 'Most Important Character'.I must also disagree with this. In my opinion, all characters are important to the ebb and flow of a story.I don't see a point in adding a character just to fill a scene if they are serving no purpose. I only focus on one centric character when I write an entire story in first person narrative. As far as you not feeling there was enough development of Justin's thoughts; this is the very beginning and you will indeed learn more as the story progresses.No argument here. I'm sorry if you found this difficult to follow, I have actually never had anyone have this trouble before.I will tell you now that this is my writing style and it will not change.If you are already lost, it doesn't get any different as far as my structure. If you cannot comprehend my writing style it is probably best that you find a fic that is better suited toward your needs and likes. I believe there is no Best or 'Strongest' way to write a story. Writing is an artform and in it, lives creativity and the poetic lisencsure to make it what you wish it to be. Either way, I do appreciate you giving this a go.~Mandi :)
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2015 06:31 AM · On: Words
Mandi,
Wow. So poetic! "Tiny breaths fought for freedom but were ultimately killed, innocent casualties." Such excellent writing. Please post again soon.
- Jackie Mag
Author's Response: It's always such a pleasure to hear your thoughts on this story, it warms my little heart. :) It's nice that you appreciate the poetic nature of my words, it's the most natural way to write for me. I'm just happy you enjoy it. Thank you for continuing to support this story and take this little southern journey with the boys. I've just started writing the next chapter so hopefully it won't take me too long.~Big hugs~Mandi
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2015 01:19 AM · On: Words
Glad to get an update.
Author's Response: I am glad to finally give you this update. I know this story has taken me forever. It is slow going gettting it out but I am working on it. It has about 10 chapters remaining, I'll try hard to write as quick as I can. I hope you'll see this to the end with me. ~hugs~ Mandi :)
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2015 11:40 PM · On: Words
Emotional upheaval with growth along the way.
The next chapters are going be exciting for both of them.
Exciting. Can't wait.
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to leave your thoughts. I'm always happy when you choose to read one of my stories. I do hope the next few chapters will further deepen their growth and their relationship. I'm excited to give you some excitement! There's about ten chapters left and I'm hoping to wrap them up here shortly. Hope to see you at the end. ~huggles~ :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2015 07:49 PM · On: Words
Does Brian go with his feelings or with his fear that his parents will find out?
Author's Response: Hello yoooou...Thanks again for reading and as always, sharing your thoughts. The answer to this is yes he will go with his feelings, naturally. I do intend to make it very much like Brian in canon where he is himself for himself, but may never tell his parents. I do hope you contiune to read and like where I take these boys. ~More Hugs~Mandi
Reviewer: GuitarsAndPoetry (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2015 06:59 PM · On: Words
Mandi, I can't express enough how lovely your writing is. The way you weave words together is pure poetry. No one does introspective like you. Beautiful. It amazes me how much Brian and Justin reflect their original characteristics so far from their canon element. They are perfectly developed for living in your story's time and place. The best thing about this story, for me, is the flow. The slow burn through their struggles and toward their self discoveries. Their shared innocence is refreshing to read. I can't wait for them both to experience making love for the first time together. I love that you don't use a lot of angst to drive your plot; the simple tasks of just living and learning is what a coming of age tale is all about. I am enjoying the sweetness and all of the "aw" moments. This may be your best work yet. I am excited for the rest of this! Thank you again for sharing your words. :]
Author's Response: Tina, WOW. You are always so sweet and kind in your reviews. I can't express enough how lovely your words are. :) I try to keep everyone in character as much I can as far as placing them in the universes I create for them. I know this is slow burn, the slowest. Maybe now is the time for a smidgen of faster fire. :) I'm glad to hear you mention the feel of a Coming of Age tale. I really did try to create that particular world. Also, I like some good angst as much as the next girl but this story is like my fluffy cotton candy lol. I'm starting the next part soon, see you next chapter! ~hugs~
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2015 02:24 PM · On: Words
Another wonderful chapter, Mandi! Loved the idea of the loft in the barn. Perfect place for Justin to sketch. Really liked the part about Justin doubting himself. I am continuing to enjoy this very much. Thanks for the update! *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Hi Honey! So glad you're still following this with me. The barn and loft I visualized were based on my Brother's horse farm. I figured it was time for Brian to see that Justin is not as nonplussed as he thinks. Thanks again for always being so supportive of my work. :) ~Hugs you back~ :)
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: December 30, 2014 05:05 PM · On: Doorway to December
l read this when you first posted it so long ago.
it was nice to reread it. i adore brian awkwardness in what he's feeling for justin. and justin is a go getter who knows exactly what and who he wants and isn't afraid to go after it.
will we be seeing more of daphne? emmetts in his element, michael fits nicely with ben, but why no teddy.
i'm so glad you're back and looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Hello Dear! :) Thank you for re-reading my words. I am sorry it had taken me so long to get back to writing; but I am glad to be back and trying my hardest to get this complete. I am happy you like this Brian, he is so different from canon, but I find him endearing. I feel like writing a confident, go-getter Justin is staying true to his character. Yes, you will see more of the lovely Miss Daphne in an upcoming chapter. :) I know, no Ted, I'm sorry. :/ I couldn't find a spot I wanted to stick him lol. I never have enough Ted, which is surprising since he is one of my favorites. Although he does have a planned mention in this story's epilogue. Thank you again for reading and shairng your thoughts. *Hugs* -Mandi
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2014 12:50 AM · On: Doorway to December
Another lovely chapter, Mandi. I continue to be amazed by your writing style.:) Loved the way you described the ice cubes 'giggling,' for example. You have such a unique way of approaching things.
This story is a little like a trip down memory lane for me. You bring back some things I had forgotten.;) It ALSO reminds me that I need to get my OWN 'country' story updated. Ugh. I'm going to be working on that soon.
Thanks again for the update, Mandi. Great to have you back with us. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Hi Dear! Thank you for reading and sharing your kind thoughts. I am happy you are taking this stroll down memory lane with me. Everytime you compliment my writing style I get a smile on my face, it is very flattering coming from you. There are so many of your stories I want to dive into whenever I can get the time, *Hugsss* -Mandi
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2014 02:40 AM · On: Doorway to December
This look at homosexuality in the days past is unique. More please.
Author's Response: Hello, I am glad you are intrigued with my story, writing homosexuality this way has definitely been an unique experience, since I'm so used to Brian being, well, Brian. Thank you for reading and reviewing, it is much appreciated. I will be updating soon. *Hugs* -Mandi
Reviewer: GuitarsAndPoetry (Anonymous) · Date: December 12, 2014 03:59 PM · On: Doorway to December
How darling is Lula. This chapter was very well described I could picture myself in that kitchen. How devious of Justin to play with Brian like that! Lol looking forward to what transpires in the barn. ;]
Author's Response: I am glad you like Lula, I have thrown in my dear Grandmothers' personalities to create her. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts!
Reviewer: GuitarsAndPoetry (Anonymous) · Date: December 12, 2014 03:53 PM · On: Melt in the Sun
I contintue to love this story! I love how easily your descriptions transport me to the 50's. Their ice cream kiss was delicious. :]
Author's Response: I continue to love how you always support my stories! :) Thank you. *Hugs* -Mandi
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2014 03:20 AM · On: Doorway to December
Love, love, love Lula and how she tells it like it is.
Author's Response: I'm happy you like how I have created her. She basically a bit of both of my lovely late grandmothers combined. She certainly loves her Emmett. Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: lili59 (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2014 03:26 PM · On: Icy Hatred & Heated Anticipation
Bonjour,
J'aime beaucoup l'histoire ainsi que son contexte, continu surtout.
Ce serais bien si tu faisait une parution par semaine, mais surtout va jusqu'au bout de ton histoire.
Lili59
Author's Response: Hello Lili59 :) Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. I am happy you're enjoying it. I am trying my hardest to get this one complete. I have a tendency to write my chapters out of order, so it takes me a bit to get it together. *Hugs* ~Mandi
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2014 05:17 PM · On: Almost More
Sounds like their friendship is back on track.
Author's Response: Indeed. :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2014 05:52 AM · On: Peace Offering
This chapter goes perfectly with your picture. So do the words.
Author's Response: Thank you. I really appreciate you reading and reviewing every chapter. You're amazing. :D
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2014 05:48 AM · On: Wishes. Make-Believe. Bullshit.
Justin knows Brian pretty well.
Author's Response: I always like to think so. :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2014 05:41 AM · On: Mind Trip
I am so glad Brian challenged Hobbs. The only way to keep him safe is to keep him close.
Author's Response: Protective Brian in action. I love him.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2014 01:23 AM · On: The Final Time
Now we know that won't be the last time. You can run but you can't hide.
Author's Response: Exactly. Justin is in under the wire, theres no escaping now.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2014 12:56 AM · On: Candlelit Memories
Now that's a good question. I can't wait to hear how he answers it.
Author's Response: We all know Brian doesn't like to express those pesky feeling things aloud, he is more a man of action. ;)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2014 12:08 AM · On: Twisted
Darn and I was hoping they would rush into each other's arms
Author's Response: LOL, Maybe this needs a rewrite. *Chariots of Fire begins to play* Your reviews always bring a smile to my face, Thank you. :D
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2014 12:02 AM · On: Messy
At least Brian helped Justin instead of turning away. And we get closer to the problem and possible solution?
Author's Response: Brian will always protect Justin, even when he 'hates' him. You're not fooling us Kinney. Brian stays stubborn for a bit longer, but he gets there. ;)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2014 10:38 PM · On: Dripping Wet, Wagered Bet
Trust Emmett to catch on. A haunted house, how spooky. The superman comic takes me back. Looking forward to where you take us.
Author's Response: Emmett is old and wise. (Please don't tell him I called him old lol) The boys come to some revelations in the haunted house. :) Hope you continue on their journey.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2014 10:29 PM · On: Considerate
Well, Justin saw Joanie's true colors. I image the reason Brian is hateful to Justin is because of Emmett and he is trying to deny to himself that he too is 'fruity'. Love the Elvis pic.
Author's Response: Brian is definitely in denial of himsellf. Thank you (Elvis voice:Thank you very much) for continuing to read my story, your support means so much. *hugs* -Mandi
Reviewer: TheGirlNoOneKnows5 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2014 12:37 PM · On: Melt in the Sun
I am absolutely loving where this story is going! I discovered it about two days ago and have read every chapter in that short space of time. The very first chapter got me hooked. It is a very intriguing, addictive story.
The way you write is also very beautiful. They metaphors you use and the way you describe things, from the way the colour of the sky looks, to the emotions a particular character is feeling, makes this an absolute pleasure to read. Keep going with this story, you've got me excited to see how it all turns out.
I would like you to know how much I enjoy reading this. Very well done my dear ;)
xoxo
Author's Response: Wow, It is very flattering that you spent two days straight reading my words. I am very pleased you are enjoying it and do hope you continue to do so. Thanks for complementing my writing style, it means everything to me as an author. *Big Hugs* -Mandi
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2014 05:51 PM · On: Melt in the Sun
Glad this story is back.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're glad. I am sorry for making you wait, but I am working hard on trying to get this out. Thank you for reading and reviewing. :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2014 01:21 AM · On: Yesterday's Friend
I like that Claire and Brian get along. I have a feeling that we'll get to the story behind their estranglement soon.
Author's Response: I truly believe these two would be close considering their parents are less than there for them. And yes, the reason behind their distance will be revealed. Thank you for reading and reviewing. :)
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2014 12:29 AM · On: Melt in the Sun
Wonderful story telling! The description of the kiss was as delightful as the ice cream tasted.
Keep it coming.
- Jackie Mag
Author's Response: I am happy you enjoyed this chapter. I promise to keep them coming as quickly as I can. Thank you for continuing to support this story, I appreciate it immensely. Hugs-Mandi :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2014 12:27 AM · On: Icy Hatred & Heated Anticipation
Don't know how I missed this story, but I must have. I like how Justin is friends with Ben and Emmett. He's gonna need them. I hope that somehow you manage to let the truth come out, though concidering the times it will take a while. Looks to be an enjoyable story.
Author's Response: I am glad you found it, I hope you enjoy it. :) Yes, the circumstances and era will definite take Brian even longer than canon (if that's possible lol) to realize his true self. ;)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2014 10:55 PM · On: Melt in the Sun
Hi, Mandi! Finally took the time to read the chapters I hadn't had time to read before, along with this new part. What a tender, bittersweet, poignant fic! Being from an Appalachian background, I can identify with so many elements - and speech idioms - here. I had to laugh at the 'tarnation' word - LOL! Love the idea of Vic and Debbie working the general store; I can remember these 'all-in-one' general stores. In fact, we have one old-time drug store in town that still has the old, metal, milkshake machines, and the old fountain counter. I kind of wax poetic over the more gentler times...
I have really missed your writing, and I'm delighted that you are back! I will be looking forward to more of this. And in the meantime, I think I'll go back and read your "Egg Snogging" story in time for Christmas. That is still one of my favorites.:) *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Hiya honey! I'm always happy to hear from you. Glad you are taking the time to read this one. I long for the simplicity of another time. Half of my family are from Ky, AL and TN so I have much love for Southern living. Also...Man, now I want a milkshake! lol. It's cool as peppermint (Holidays make me extra cheesy) that you continue to read Eggsnogging for Christmas. *Squishy Hugs* Mandi
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2014 04:59 AM · On: Beautiful Blasphemy
please please please update this one next.
Author's Response: Hello sweetheart, you'll be pleased to know that this week I'm going to go through all of the notes I have for this and rearrange my chapter outlines. That's half my personal battle, then I'll start writing. :) I'm glad that you are still interested in this story as I have kept you waiting so long. I do know exactly where I m taking it and it will be 16 more chapters. Hold hope. I will get this out I promise. :) ~Mandi
Reviewer: HMG621 (Anonymous) · Date: May 21, 2013 10:39 AM · On: Beautiful Blasphemy
Wait... WHERE'S THE REST?!?!?! Please write more I love this!
Author's Response: I'm sorry to have left this in limbo for so long, but I am back to writing now and hope to finsih it in a timely manner. I hope you continue to read. Thank yous and hugs-Mandi
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 01, 2013 08:20 AM · On: Beautiful Blasphemy
Just read this and have to say it's a 'peach'! So quaint and sweet. I really hope real life lets you finish this one. TAG
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing Tag! Real life is finally giving me some time to myself to write. :) I hope you continue to read this one. *hugs*
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2012 12:52 AM · On: Accepting & Misguided
Thanks for posting the Martin Luther speech. I loved them all swimming togethere and glad you brought Daphne into the story.
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed this chapter. I really felt the speech needed to be included, being such an important piece of American history. Miss Daphne absolutely deserves a role in this story. Thank you for continuing to read Jon. :)
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2012 12:01 PM · On: Yesterday's Friend
This reminds me of West Side Story:
Good night...tonight...
Sleep well, and when you dream...dream of me....
Tooo...niiiggghht!!
Author's Response: I love west side story, all musicals really. And now I will have this song in my head for the rest of the day. Thanks for that. ;)
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2012 11:44 AM · On: Icy Hatred & Heated Anticipation
OMG, all I can say is....Is that real? There really is a Hazlehurst?
Author's Response: It Is! LOL a very tiny town with a population of about 4000. Thanks for reading. :)
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 09:31 AM · On: Beautiful Blasphemy
I believe this was your best chapter. I loved your description of Emmett. You have him down to a T as far as i'm comncerned. I also loved Brian's musings in the church.
Author's Response: Sorry I haven't gotten a chance to respond until now, but please know that every reader and reviewer is important to me. It is support like yours that keeps me motivated to keep writing. Very happy to hear you're enjoying this. *Hugs* Mandi
Reviewer: GuitarsAndPoetry (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2012 01:59 AM · On: Beautiful Blasphemy
I am very happy to see you've returned to your wonderful stories. I've missed your writing immensely. There is something so special and poetic about your style. This chapter was nothing short of lovely. The theme of it flowed like a poem. Quite Beautiful. I love your take on the infamous Aunt Lula, I can't think of many fics that include her. She sounds like such a doll. I am super excited to follow along as this tale unfolds. Again, Welcome back, you've been missed. :]
Author's Response: I myself am happy to see you returning to read my stories. I apologize for the long wait, but I am really trying to complete these Wips. I'm glad you find Aunt lula to your liking, I'm sure she'd call you a Doll right back. She a mixture of a lot of traits, I sadly think there just isn't enough of in the world anymore. There is going to be more of her in the chapter after then next. And so very much more country boy sweetness, after that. I'd say thi sstory as of now, is right at or a little over, only the halfway point. I'll honestly try to share it all very soon. *Warm hugs from me & summer scented hugs from Lula*
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2012 08:23 PM · On: Beautiful Blasphemy
I read this story and Kiss Me Deadly when I first started reading fiction. I wasn’t really knowledgeable in knowing what was important before reading a fic and it wasn’t until I had read the final posted chapters I realised they were both unfinished. I was so disappointed as I thought they had been abandoned, however, I am so excited to see a new chapters and that you are going to finished them. Thank you for the update, I love this story line. Now I am off to KMD.
Cheers
Author's Response: Hello, I'm very sorry to have dissapointed you.I know that none too happy feeling when you get into a story and find it incomplete. I promise you that though I was unable to write both of these stories for so long, they've played out many times in my mind. I sincerely hope to get those scenes out of my brain and onto paper as soon as possible. Sooner even. :) I will never leave a story unfinished and forgotten about forever. I'm so grateful for you taking your time to read my words both when you first started, and especially now, again. Kiss me deadly has, i believe 6 remaining chapters. This story, though it is going to be quite a bit longer, at least fifteen more chapters, I plan to get them to you quickly. Thank you again for taking another chance on my stories. *hugs to you* Mandi
Reviewer: Hannah (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2012 07:10 AM · On: Beautiful Blasphemy
so glad you're back and updating. i am new to the fandom and only started reading fanfic recently and your stories are amongst my favourites :D wonderfully written and such great premises!
Author's Response: Hello Hannah, I'm quite glad that you're glad. :) It's always nice to hear when someone has found this amazing fandom, even after so many years. I really hope you enjoy the rest of this. My plan is to wrap it up, Type it up, and share the Britin love as soon as possible. Thanks for sharing your kind thoughts. *hugs to you* Mandi
Reviewer: kimi (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2012 01:40 AM · On: Icy Hatred & Heated Anticipation
I love love this fic!!! Your prose is so wonderfully descriptive and unpretentiously evocative, i feel like i'm experiencing the emotions that these characters are going through myself!!!
i just love the premise, the whole young and innocent first love combined with the BJ dynamic is truly endearing, not to mention extremely hot :)
Can't wait to see where you're taking this story :)
Author's Response: Hello Kimi, Wow. I can't get over this review. I always worry about the dreaded 'purple prose', but your words have soothed my fretting on that matter. I've only every written poetry before this fandom, so I don't really know any other way to write. I am beyond grateful for your lovely, supportive words. *Hugs* -Mandi
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2012 09:53 AM · On: Distortion
I am always blown away by your poetic prose. Loved the mirror analogies. Brian Kinney is definitely a faceted character. Wonderful chapter. -Benny
Author's Response: I cannot thank you enough for all the kind words about my writing, it's humbling, truely.
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2012 06:37 PM · On: Distortion
I LOVE THIS STORY! They are so cute with each other. I don't think I have read a story where they are both so inexperienced, great stuff.
Author's Response: I really wanted the challenge of a virgin Brian Kinney, I hope I can do him justice. Thanks for reading and reviewing. *Hugs*
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2012 08:38 AM · On: Predictions & Revelations
Gus is just perfect for valentine!! Love how Gus made his appearance.
Author's Response: I truly appreciate your time spent reading and reviewing this story. Gus the bear really wanted to be in this, so I allowed it, lol. Happy you liked that little touch. The next two next chapters up soon, I hope you'll like them. *hugs* ~ Mandi
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2012 04:50 AM · On: Predictions & Revelations
I love this story....!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm super excited to hear this from you! :D Thank you very much for letting me know your thoughts. I hope you continue to love it until the end. *hugs to you*~Mandi
Reviewer: Missn31 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 02:39 PM · On: Icy Hatred & Heated Anticipation
There is something gripping about this story, when I read it I feel like I have been transported to another time and place. Beautiful writing as ever. Looking forward to more xxxx
Author's Response: Hi there! Thank you so much for spending your time on my words. I truly appreciate you stopping by to leave a review. It's great to hear that you are feeling transported, I'm certainly giving it my all to make it feel that way. There's much Southern Lovin' to come. Can't wait to get it out and share it with you. *hugs to you* Mandi :)
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2012 11:11 AM · On: Predictions & Revelations
Happy to see Lindsay take the truth so well. Loved Gus the bear, these two boys have me feeling like a school boy with my first crush all over again. :) -Benny
Author's Response: I'm very glad that you are feeling the 'school-boy crush-iness' with this. That's exactly the feel I'm trying my best to deliver! Hopefully I can continue it. Thank you for your unyeilding loyalty with reading and reviewing my stories. *hugs* Mandi :)
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2012 11:08 AM · On: Spoonful of Secrets
This chapter made me nostalgic for the fair times of my childhood. The way you write just pulls me in, I can almost smell the cotton candy. :] Can't wait to read what Mysterious Marilyn has to say. -Benny
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2012 10:29 AM · On: Predictions & Revelations
Ahhhh, this story continues to enchant me. Poor Brian. The heart wants what the heart wants. I think he's beginning to see that. It's always an amazing journey to watch.
Incredible chapters as always, my dear. I am so looking forward to more of this! ~Hugsss~
Author's Response: Sorry for the delay in response, but I just wanted to thank you for reading this one my dear. I appreciate you. *Hugs* :D
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 09:24 AM · On: Predictions & Revelations
OOoohh, the hall of mirrors. Could be fun. Nice chapter. Keep 'em coming.
- Jackie
Author's Response: It feels nice to actually get this story out to you, it makes me smile to know that you appreciate each chapter. Hopefully I can get the next two up soon. Thanks you as always sweetheart! *hugs* Mandi
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 09:21 AM · On: Predictions & Revelations
This story just keeps getting better and better.
Gus the bear has made his appearance...awwww!
Cheers,
Vin
Author's Response: I'm so happy you are continuing to like this story, I'm trying my best to get it complete. Theres still many more chapters to go, I'm pretty positive it's going to be 32 chapters in total. It's nice that you notice and appreciate the little original story things I try to incorporate. I try to put some in every fiction just to keep a grounded tie to the show we love so much. I send a massive Thank you for always taking the time to read and review, I'm truly So so SO grateful. *hugs to you* ~Mandi :)
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 08:58 AM · On: Spoonful of Secrets
I love how you weave elements of OS into the story, the Jambalaya, the Culpeppers (though Calvin only appeared for like 5 seconds in OS) and, last but not least, Mysterious Marylin.
Love it!
Cheers,
Vin
Author's Response: Happy your are enjoying it. :) I always like to throw in some OS elements, it's fun when reader's take notice. *Big Hugs* -Mandi
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 08:20 AM · On: A Race & An Ideal Place
"...trembling lips constructed a kiss." I can't even describe how much I love that description. It's so vivid and so perfect for the situation you described. It's probably my favorite line in this chapter, except perhaps for the last sentence. I loved that one too.
So glad there are two more chapters to enjoy!
Cheers,
Vin
Author's Response: Hi Vin! Thank you for continuing to read this one, and thank you for telling me your favorite line, it's always enlightening as a writer to know what lines stand out to readers. :)
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: January 29, 2012 09:46 AM · On: A Race & An Ideal Place
This is so a sweet story.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read and review this story. I'm glad you are enjoying it. :)
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 29, 2012 02:20 AM · On: A Race & An Ideal Place
Loved it, the way you describe their feelings etc...Great writting
Author's Response: Hi there! I appreciate you taking the time to read my story and share your thoughts. I'm super happy to hear that you are enjoying this, & hope you continue to do so. More to come soon. *hugs to you*~Mandi :)
Author's Response: Hi there! I appreciate you taking the time to read my story and share your thoughts. I'm super happy to hear that you are enjoying this, & hope you continue to do so. More to come soon. *hugs to you*~Mandi :)
Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous) · Date: January 29, 2012 01:19 AM · On: A Race & An Ideal Place
I love this story!!! especially Brian! Update please!!!!
Author's Response: Glad you love it, thank you for taking the time to let me know. It makes me smile! :) There's a lot more ahead for these boys, next chapter is almost finished. Hope you like it.
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2012 10:56 AM · On: A Race & An Ideal Place
"Only shaking surrender shared their air." LOVE IT. More more....
- Jackie
Author's Response: It's always nice to hear from you! Happy you are still liking this. I'm trying my best to get the next chapter finished, More soon I promise. :D
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2012 10:51 AM · On: Accepting & Misguided
The boys are thrown together, eh? Can't wait to see what happens next.
- Jackie
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2012 12:29 AM · On: A Race & An Ideal Place
Who doesn't enjoy a good dripping wet kiss? ;) You continue to impress with your poetic words. I am enjoying the way you are writing Brian's inner turmoil. -Benny
Author's Response: Who doesn't indeed. :) It's good to hear you are liking this Brian. Though Mr. Kinney's always a challenge, he's a challenge I love to attempt. Thank you always my dear!
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2012 12:26 AM · On: Accepting & Misguided
Wow. What a Powerful chapter. Seeing hate through the eyes of the innocent is really something to read. I loved the line about the whole world going in the wrong direction. For some reason its not letting me copy/paste. Happy Daphne got at least one afternoon of unprejudiced fun. -Benny
Author's Response: I really wanted to touch on this subject because it was such a intergral part of this story's era. I thought no better way to do that than through little Miss Daphne. Glad you enjoyed it. :)
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2012 12:11 AM · On: Almost More
Ah, I remember being sixteen and wanting a motorbike. Sadly I never did. This chapter is a good step in the right direction for the boys. Great stuff. - Benny
Author's Response: My brothers both had motorcycles in their teens, and adulthood. Now, my husband. Lol I get my kicks vicariously through them. :) Thank you kindly for the reviews. They always make me smile. *hugs*
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2012 10:22 PM · On: A Race & An Ideal Place
This continues to delight me. I love the pace of this story... and simply everything about it. I was so pleased to see this update. Anxiously looking for more! Thanks for the update!! :)
Author's Response: You are very welcome! I'm so thrilled you continue to like this story. I've been a little apprehensive about the slow movement, but it is a coming of age story,which generally set a nice, smooth pace for emotional develoment and building romance. I'm happy it's working out (thus far). This story is going to be 32 chapters long. Gahh, I need to hurry it up! So much left for these two to experience and explore. Can't wait to share it all. :)
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2012 09:01 PM · On: A Race & An Ideal Place
I love it, especially the ending for obvious reasons! Xxxx
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you love it. Hope you continue to like the boys' journey. :)
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2012 09:00 PM · On: A Race & An Ideal Place
I love it, especially the ending for obvious reasons! Xxxx
Author's Response: I'm happy you love it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :D
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2012 09:15 AM · On: Peace Offering
It's so nice to catch up to this fic. I love the beauty of the young B/J and your writing is very poetic, great imagery.
Author's Response: Thanks! It's nice to have you catch up with this as well. This story missed you, It told me. :D There is still sooo much to come for these sweet southern boys.Hope you'll like it. :)
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2012 10:21 PM · On: Peace Offering
Thank you for updating this sweet chapter to the sweetest story. Their innocene is a refreshing new direction in the fandom. Not many have an inexperienced Brian. It works. Enjoyed your apple tree analogy.Brilliant. - Benny
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I was a little hesitant in the concept of 'ridiculously innocent', but I swallowed those reservations and decided to give it a go. I'm thrilled you like it. :)
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2012 12:10 PM · On: Peace Offering
I love this version of Brian and Justin. I clap my hands when I see an update on the story. More!
- Jackie
Author's Response: *Smile* It's awesome that you like my story, I do hope I can get your hands clapping more often! There's much to develop with these sweet mississippi boys! Thanks as always for reading and reviewing. :)
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2012 12:01 PM · On: Peace Offering
Awwwww. This just made me melt. I simply adore this story, my dear. It's so wonderful to have you and your amazing use of the written word blessing our eyes once again. Amazing & poetic as always. :)
Author's Response: You are so good to me, lol. Thank you very much for such nice words. Your reviews always make me smile. *hugs*
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 09, 2012 09:55 PM · On: Wishes. Make-Believe. Bullshit.
Ask anybody in Hazlehurst and they'd tell you that Brian Kinney was a confident, no, an arrogant kid without a care in the world. He was fine with that. He'd Let them think what they would. What he'd shown them.-Poor kid. You always do a perfect portrayl of Brian in every story. It's amazing. Jack Kinney is not even half the man his sixteen year old son is. Great Chapter. -Benny
Author's Response: Thanks Benny, your thoughts are always so appreciated and loved. I really do put a lot of effort into trying to keep Brian in character as best as possible. His character is beautiful the way it is, which is why we love him so much. :)
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2012 01:03 PM · On: Wishes. Make-Believe. Bullshit.
Love this story. Hope to read more soon.
Cheers,
Vin
Author's Response: A gigantic THANK YOU for always taking the time to read and review my work. It truly is appreciated and makes want to give you hugs. :) I hope to write this story in an acceptable amount of time, though it still has a ways to go. Our boys are excited to share thier southern journey with you. :)
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2012 03:33 AM · On: Mind Trip
Please add to this story. I want to see where you're going with this.
- Jackie
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, it makes me smile. Ask and ye shall recieve ! lol You have great timing, I posted this mere moments before I was ready to post. I know it's been too long. This journey is still set to be a rather long one (20 chapters to go!)...hope you hang on for the ride. :) *hugs*
Reviewer: Claypool (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2011 10:40 PM · On: Icy Hatred & Heated Anticipation
Hi there I was just wondering if you are gonna finish this story? I have all your stories and LOVED them all and have read them more than once believe me they are awesome :). But I don't like reading a story that's not finished or hasn't been updated in while cuz then I get into it (which I'm sure with yours I will) and it be left a unfinished you know so just want to know before I start it. Thank u :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading my stories. I am happy that you like them. YES i will be completing this as soon as I can. I've had some unavoidable issues keeping me away from my writing, but I promise I will never leave a fiction unfinished. I do hope you'll read and enjoy this upon completion. thanks again. *hugs*
Reviewer: Natalie (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2011 02:19 AM · On: Mind Trip
'Evidently, Brian was taking him on a mind trip, and he'd packed his emotional baggage.' lol, so clever! If Brian needs anyone to tag along on his trip to self discovery, it's definitely one, Justin Taylor. :) Loving this so so much! :)
Reviewer: Natalie (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2011 02:16 AM · On: The Final Time
This chapter was so intense! I just want to give Brian a Debbie sized hug! Poor boy, he is really confused. I love the way you write, especially the way you create such emotion through few words, amazing! :)
Author's Response: Thank you Natalie. It is always an amazing feeling when a reader compliments my writing style. It means so much to me. :) *Hugs*
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2011 02:11 AM · On: Mind Trip
As Justin tried to ignore the boy ignoring him, he played half-heartedly with a yellow yo-yo from the counter display.
He watched the toy go up and down.
It mimicked the continuous back and forth that Brian Kinney had been pulling him.
A blond toy, dangling on a heartstring.- This was wonderful, Brian definitely kept Justin at arms length, and dangling from a string in the earlier seasons. Very complex, that Kinney. ;) Although Brian thinks Justin is hard to understand, because he can't see that Justin loves him. I can't wait for him to realize Justin's feelings, as well as his own. Magnificent story, as always. -Benny
Author's Response: Much gratitude for all your support. *hugs*
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2011 10:00 PM · On: Mind Trip
This story is so wonderful and sweet. Loved the heated, mad, passionate kiss in the manor and the fact that Brian invited justin to go bowling, I'm excited to read more! :)
Author's Response: Thank you Sara. I hope you continue to enjoy it. :)
Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2011 08:47 PM · On: The Final Time
"'How could anyone love him?' Especially someone like Justin Taylor.
He gathered all of his loose threads and tucked them into bed with him, where he dreamed about the taste of Justin's kiss...
...for what he swore would be the final time."
Heartbreaking. Excellent chapter!
To find a old abandon house with all the memories should be a child's rite of passage. Beautifully done.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. *Big Hugs* -Mandi
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2011 08:28 AM · On: Mind Trip
Too wonderful, Brian defending Justin and inviting him. Just love reading this, it's a perfect Summer reader and reminds me of childhood long past. Just lovely.
Author's Response: Hi Laura, I just noticed I never replied to your reviews, I am sorry. Thank you for reading and reviewing, I do hope you continue to enjoy it. *Hugs* -Mandi
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2011 08:18 AM · On: The Final Time
Such a sad, moving chapter. Very poetic.
Author's Response: Thank you, I am pleased you were moved. :)
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2011 08:07 AM · On: Candlelit Memories
Just catching up to this fic, love these tenders moments between the boy. Justin looks so beautiful through Brian's eyes, it's lovely to read.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. *Hugs*
Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2011 06:57 AM · On: Mind Trip
Whew! Awesome! I love it! I usually prefer more dialogue, but you have all this internal dialogue that's just brilliant and so fitting the whole story. can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you are enjoying this my dear! I always worry myself when I dont have a lot of dialogue. I have tried a few times and end up scratching it all out. I just can't help myself, It's easier for me to write thoughts and feelings. I have so many strange writing quirks lol. Nevertheless, It is very wonderful to hear that you like the final product. *hugs to you*
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2011 06:51 PM · On: The Final Time
Poor Brian's inner turmoil, I feel like I'm struggling right along with him. You are portraying the emotions of his self discovery flawlessly. Also, the yearbook reasoning was brilliant! -Benny
Author's Response: I'm very happy that you think I'm doing a good job with the turmoil. Not ever having been a teenage boy struggling with his sexuality, I'm a little nervous writing it. :p Thanks as always for sharing your thoughts. *Smiles* Mandi
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2011 07:03 AM · On: The Final Time
Grrrrrrrrrrreat!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, I'm sooooooo glad you think so. :)
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2011 09:15 AM · On: Messy
Love the unique storyline. Enjoying reading this so much. Too bad Hobbs is still such an asshole to poor Justin, even in AU land. Looking forward to your next chapter!
Author's Response: It's always a pleasure to hear from you, I'm glad you're enjoying this. Next chapter soon. :)
Reviewer: Natalie (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2011 05:18 AM · On: Candlelit Memories
Wow!! beautiful! I believe you've written yourself a blue ribbon worthy story with this chapter! :) I loved the old love letters, and of course I am extremely anxious to find out what Brian's response is going to be. :)
Author's Response: Thank you Natalie, what an amazing review. :)
Reviewer: Natalie (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2011 05:14 AM · On: Twisted
'Nothing could hurt him quite like the boy with the bi-polar eyes.'-I don't know what it is about this line, but it really stands out to me, I love it!
This chapter was really cute, and I'm happy to see that they'll be staying in the same room. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you, :)
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2011 10:32 PM · On: Candlelit Memories
Once again you have amazed me with the poetic soul you infuse in your words. Beautiful, what else can I say? You have a writing style all your own. -Benny
Author's Response: Your kind praise humbles me beyond words, thanks dear. :)
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2011 10:28 PM · On: Twisted
A wave of wonder crashed over him. Continually, he struggled desperately to keep his head above water. Not to drown in his sea of thought.-What a wonderful way of explaining Brian's struggle.
Shickle manor definitely looks creepy enough to stir up some crazy tales lol. This chapter was great. -Benny
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2011 07:30 PM · On: Candlelit Memories
Wow! Your writing is so amazing! George's suicide letter was so sad but still so touching. I can hardly wait to read Brian's reaction! to Justin's million dollar question! More soon please?! :)
Author's Response: THank you for reading and reviewing, I do hope you continue to enjoy it. :)
Reviewer: Kemma (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2011 10:18 AM · On: Candlelit Memories
This story so far is great! I particularly love the time period and the setting -- definitely unique compared to all the other QAF fan fiction I've read so far! I also love the use of the pictures to add to the narrative -- where did you find that one of the 2 sailors? Now I'm really curious about the "real" story behind that photo -- however, the story you created about them is intriguing and I like how you wove in George's character into this plot. I'm dying to read more -- the sexual tension is about to kill me! Oh, and I can completely imagine Justin and Brian lying side by side as little boys as Justin reads out loud to Brian -- I love, love, love stories where B/J are younger. Thanks -- I look forward to more!
Author's Response: It is wonderful to hear from you! Thank you so much for taking your time to read and review my writing. I try my best to come up with unique and creative story lines. If I can ever get them all out, I have tons in my head. :) I found the photograph just on google images, I think those two men belonged in this story :) There are going to be 32 total chapters to this story, (i'm pretty sure lol). I do hope you will continue to read and enjoy. *hugs to you* Mandi
Reviewer: Emma (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2011 09:54 AM · On: Candlelit Memories
I like it, really. You are very acute
Author's Response: Thank you Emma. *Hugs to you* -Mandi
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2011 08:08 AM · On: Candlelit Memories
The visuals really helps with the classic setting. Can't wait to find out about Brian reaction to Justin.
Author's Response: THank you, I thought they'd be a fun touch. :)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2011 07:56 AM · On: Candlelit Memories
So many emotions swirling around in this chapter. I like the way that you are slowly moving the two boys together and how they are starting to become more comfortable with each other. Loved the idea of finding love letters between George and his male lover and the photos you found for them were spot on! I can definitely see Justin as the sentimental sort, lovingly running his fingers across the spines of old books and reading those love letters - that would be so like him! As always I am so impressed by how much you convey and the emotions you evoke with such a small amount of words. I will be looking forward to the rest of this, my friend.
P.S. I still haven't forgotten about the circus, though - LOL!
Author's Response: Hello friend, thank you for such kind words, I appreciate your support of my story. :) As for the Circus, LOL, I have not forgotten. It's just taking a while to come to town. :P
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2011 07:47 AM · On: Twisted
LOL! I see once a PSA, always a PSA - ha! This chapter is so cute - love the photos you're coming up. And "Shickle Manor" - reminds me of a poor cousin to the Bates Motel - ha! Glad to see two chapters up - moving onto the next one.:)
Author's Response: I just realized how many reviews of mine I've never responded to, :( I am sorry. Thank you for supporting this story. *Big Hugs* -Mandi
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2011 01:29 AM · On: Messy
He'd spilled that damn smile of his into his life and never cleaned it up. It ran rampant, spreading. Seeping into nooks and crannies Brian couldn't reach.
Justin was messy. Brian was a terrible housekeeper.-I really enjoyed this analogy.
I noticed on my last review I spelled manor as manner, that was really not my morning. :P Anyway, I am still very engrossed in your story, and looking forward to the night at the manor. ;) -Benny
Author's Response: Lol we all have those mornings, Hell, I have those weeks. :P It always makes me curious and happy to hear which parts people like in my stories. Thank you for always sharing your opinion with me. It means the whole wide world. lol :)
Reviewer: Natalie (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2011 10:40 PM · On: Messy
I love this story! It's refreshing and rare to read a story where Brian isn't always so self assured. I just want to hug him, I am anxious for him to admit to himself what his real feelings are. I hope we find out soon what Brian knows that Justin doesn't. EVERYONE SHOULD BE READING THIS STORY! LOL
Author's Response: Thank you Natalie for such a wonderful review. I wish everyone would read this too, lol. Though i'm content with those that are. I appreciate every reader. Thank you for taking your time to leave your thoughts. *hugs*
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2011 09:19 PM · On: Messy
What a wonderful chapter! Brian helping Justin was so sweet. He really is having trouble hiding the fact that he truly cares about the blond dream bringer. :) Loved the bandstand reference, takes me back. Excited for more!
Author's Response: Thakns for your thoughts, it means a great deal to me to hear form readers. Happy you like this story, more soon. *hugs*
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2011 08:12 AM · On: Messy
Hi, my friend - still trying to play catch up from being away on my "Randy" trek - ha! As always, you have taken a unique approach to writing about the boys - I continue to be amazed by the story concepts you weave so delightfully and the pictures you evoke in my mind as I read. And I appreciate the time you take to find photos that enhance the story. So great to see you writing again regularly! As always I will be looking forward eagerly to your updates.:)
Author's Response: A Randy trek sounds like a fabulous trek to be on! :)I'm so excited for you. I have so many storyline ideas, I wish I could right lightening quick, my mind's getting overcrowded. :P I haven't had time to catch up on reading in too long, I hope to soon. Glad you're enjoying this, updates soon.
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2011 07:15 PM · On: Dripping Wet, Wagered Bet
I really liked the way you wrote Brian's reaction to a very, truly, completely naked Justin; especially that the sun follows him to learn the secret of his light. You really do have the heart of a poet. Wonder what happens at the manner, I can't wait to find out. -Benny
*Please feel free to delete my mistake ridden review, I hadn't had my coffee yet. lol
Author's Response: I'm so happy you continue to like my writing, I try. Me & this little poet heart of mine.:p
*Consider it erased. :) Lol I completely feel ya on the coffee front. It's truly a neccassary measure I take daily for brain function. :D
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2011 03:50 PM · On: Dripping Wet, Wagered Bet
Just read all 4 chapters, what a lovely story, thanks
* hugss *
Author's Response: Oh!! It's wonderful that you have found time to read this, I'm happy you like it. More soon. :) *hugs back*
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2011 10:49 AM · On: Dripping Wet, Wagered Bet
This is just so delightful. I love the story and young love aspect and now the scary mansion. Can't wait for the update!
Author's Response: Great that you find this delighful my friend. Yes, I figured every good young love scenario and childhood neighboorhood has as 'scary house'. :P I know mine had all kinds of tales in the air. :p Updates soon I promise.
Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2011 10:20 AM · On: Dripping Wet, Wagered Bet
Loved this:
Tiny rainbows reflected sunlight in each shimmering drop. His blond hair darkened by wetness, his blue eyes darkened by anger. The sunlight danced on his skin.
Brian's eyes were transfixed on the view.
Justin appeared to follow the sun rays as he walked. 'No.' The more he watched the more Brian became convinced, it was the sun that followed him.
I don't understand how Brian and Justin are going without the rest of the gang.
Are they taking turns in groups of two?
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that, I wished I could've seen it myself. The respective 'leaders' of the groups are going in, the rest of the boys will be camped outside to make sure neither Brian or Justin 'Chicken out.' Hey, I needed a way to get them alone...:P.I do hope you'll enjoy what happens. Updating soon. Thanks as always for spending your time on my words. I truly appreciate it. :)
Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2011 10:15 AM · On: Considerate
"Damn it, you make it near impossible to be nice to you."
That was always Brian's problem with Justin. He was always afraid of returning the sentiment.
I love the pictures. It gives the story a nostalgic feel to it.
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2011 12:35 AM · On: Dripping Wet, Wagered Bet
This story is as sweet as an icecream soda. I love it. Excited to see what happens next. :)
Author's Response: Aw, what a fun description. Now, I want an icecream soda. lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing, more soon. :)
Reviewer: Natalie (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2011 10:08 PM · On: Dripping Wet, Wagered Bet
This story is so great, I feel like I'm watching an episode of the Andy Griffith show in my head. I love the southern, sweet, innocence of this. Such a marvelous idea Emmett, I am exicted to see what happens in The haunted house of Hazlehurst! :]
Author's Response: Thank you for sharing your thoughts, It's so nice to hear how much you are liking this. I really want the sweet innocence of first love to shine through in this story. I too enjoy the giddy southern innocence of the era. Hope you continue to enjoy the read. :)
Reviewer: Emma (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2011 06:45 AM · On: Dripping Wet, Wagered Bet
I like it, very much. I even can see it with your descriptions!
Author's Response: I'm pleased you can really envision this, I was hoping for that. Always wonderful to hear your thoughts. Thanks for reading . *hugs* Mandi
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2011 09:39 AM · On: Considerate
OMG, I used to read '16' magazine, but it was in the 70's and David Cassidy was all the rage. There I go showing my age. I love this fic. So sad about Joan, but she is what she is. Looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you for lovely review. *Hugs*
Reviewer: Natalie (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2011 06:05 AM · On: Considerate
Poor Brian having to have Joan as his mother, she's awful. I absolutely adored Justin sharing his lunch, very in character even in this unique story setting. Also, I really enjoyed the Elvis references, I actually have that '16' issue from 1957, I've almost ground mine back into tree pulp too. lol :)
Author's Response: LOL, I hear it was a very poular issue. :) Thanks for continuing to read.
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: July 22, 2011 06:38 PM · On: Considerate
Waking up to your story update is a great way to start my Friday. A very well constructed chapter, After seeing joan, Justin shared his lunch, he's a sweet little shit isn't he? I am very much looking forward to the encounter at the swimming hole. :) -Benny
Author's Response: Thank you for continuing my story. :)
Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: July 22, 2011 05:41 PM · On: Considerate
Thanks for the quick update! Another great chapter. I loved the adorableness of Justin splitting up his lunch! :)
Author's Response: Thank you sara. Justin is always considerate.
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2011 11:00 PM · On: Icy Hatred & Heated Anticipation
Love the whole concept, it's new, refreshing, and love the time and place of this fic. All so very original. I'm on for the ride!
Author's Response: Yay, I'm happy you like this one. Hope you enjoy the ride. :)
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2011 10:59 PM · On: Yesterday's Friend
I love this fic! I love the hate/love between the boys and like the nice Claire. Looking forward to seeing this play out.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. :) I enjoy writing love/hate, I may have to do it in future fics as well.
Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2011 11:09 AM · On: Yesterday's Friend
"She nodded and began piling catfish onto a plate. Passing over the greens, Brian snagged a hush-puppy from the inviting bowl and took a seat at the table."
Brings back memories of my childhood.
I love what you are doing with this story!
Author's Response:
Rereading that lin eis making me hungry. lol Glad to hear you're liking this one, thank you as always for your time to read and review. I hold my reviews close like hugs, they make me warm and fuzzy.
Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2011 11:02 AM · On: Icy Hatred & Heated Anticipation
Excellent begining!
It's unusual reading about Brian and Justin being enemies.
I'm on to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I thought I'd try a new dynamic, but we all know they wont stay enemies for long. ;)
Reviewer: Natalie (Anonymous) · Date: July 20, 2011 11:21 PM · On: Yesterday's Friend
Cornbread, pinto beans, catfish, greens, and hush-puppies. My lordy, Ms. Paula Dean would be so proud of you! Sounds delicious. LOL This chapter was great, loved the inside look at the boys' home lives. Very realistic. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: It's always such a nice treat to hear a reader's perspective, I'm pleased you're enjoying it. Update coming soon.
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: July 20, 2011 07:52 PM · On: Yesterday's Friend
He paused at his door to adjust one of the many family portraits that had fallen crooked.
The angle was appropriate in Brian's opinion. Much more fitting than the pristine, shiny frames that displayed their lies. Beneath most of the photos, rested holes in the drywall, the exact size of Jack's fist.
This glimpse into Brian's home life is really powerful yet in a subtle way. We'll done. Don't worry about updating KMD. I am just glad you are sharing your stories with others like myself. -Benny
Author's Response: I am glad when I am able to share my stories as well. There's so much Britin crowding my brain, it's always a nice relief when any of it manages to come out on paper. Thanks again for always taking your time on my words. :)
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: July 20, 2011 05:28 PM · On: Yesterday's Friend
I am already addicted to this story. I am thankful that Claire is sweet in this, I feel like that's how it would be, the siblings looking out for each other, while the parents stay selfish. This is great and I may be more excited than the boys for the first day at Grass's.
Author's Response: Yes I felt like Claire would be loving in this situation. I am so happy you are excited and enjoying this story. Thank you for taking the time to review, it means a lot. :)
Reviewer: Robin (Anonymous) · Date: July 20, 2011 09:35 AM · On: Yesterday's Friend
Only chapter two and I'm hooked. I can't wait to read this whole thing. Teenage Brian and Justin make me happy, especially with the wonderful jitters you've created.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm excited to give you jitters. ;)
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