Reviewer: Placedo (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2011 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Healing
Great story ! They're so great together...*sigh*, this ending would have been perfect for the show !
Thanks for writing it!
Author's Response: Dear Placedo,
Glad you liked it. Yes, I think it would have been a perfect ending for the series. Oh well, that's why we write ... to give our own versions.
Thanks,
Jackie
Reviewer: Lucian (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2011 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Healing
Lovely, Nice ending it was very romantic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep it up.
Author's Response: Dear Lucian,
Gotta go for the romantic ending!
Thanks,
Jackie
Reviewer: Dujae (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2011 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Reunion
The new summary works much better.
I find it helpful to think of a summary as a kind of a cover picture. What, in a good one, arrests the attention of the reader? Most likely I'm riveted by the character(s) in the interesting setting central to the story. Your new summary consists of these very things.
Author's Response: Dear Dujae,
Thanks for the constructive comments, really. I appreciate the helpful input. I have to start thinking of my summary words as being as enticing as my banners.
Thanks,
Jackie
Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Healing
First of all you're very welcome for betaing... anytime hon! You already know what I think of the story. Second... I LOVE the banner you made, it's perfect! Keep up the awesome work - both stories and pics! <3, Laura :)
Author's Response: Laura,
Thanks for writing/reviewing. I'm enjoying making the banners. Let me know if you need one for your stories. I was just reading your "Great God Kinney.. Achilles" story, Ch. 13. Great stuff.
Take care,
"Jackie"
Reviewer: Dujae (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2011 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Reunion
Not bad for a reunion story, better than most of them in fact.
However, in the summary you lead the reader to expect a story in which the reunion might not happen, but I find that theme too weakly delivered. The tension is lacking. I knew all the time that they would end up together. So, you end up misleading the reader. I suggest that you revise the summary.
Author's Response: Dear Dujae,
Glad you liked the story OK. I have to work on my summaries, I guess. I changed the one for this story to end with: Brian can't just take Justin back after all that time. He needs time to heal. How will they reconcile?
Does that sound better?
Thanks,
Jackie
Reviewer: Cristiane Couto (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2011 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Healing
Wonderful, Jesus you write very well, I loved!
Author's Response: Dear Cristiane,
I'm flattered that you like the story that much. Look for my other stories, too.
Thanks,
Jackie
Reviewer: Cristiane Couto (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2011 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Reunion
I love this fic, but why Brian had to go through another surgery?
Author's Response: Dear Cristiane,
Brian needed another reality check, I thought.
Actually, my husband had similar surgery, so I was writing from experience. Fortuneately, they both came out OK. :)
Thanks for writing,
Jackie
Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Healing
This story was beautiful :o) Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Dear ColorLet23,
Thanks for reviewing! Glad you liked it. :)
Jackie
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2011 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Healing
love this story. the banner is beautiful. he is a gorgeous man. love him to bits.
Author's Response: Dear Linda,
I'm having fun creating the banners. I try to give a new spin to photos I'm sure we've all seen many times. He is gorgeous!
Jackie
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