Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2020 07:23 AM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

That was so sweet and beautiful. I laughed at the T-shirt lol that was the best. The gift to Justin was so moving and powerful. Lol Ticky really got an eyeful from his favourite big human 😂😂. This was an amazing story x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2020 07:07 AM · On: What is Most Important

This really touched my heart. I can begin to how that kind of pain of seeing someone who love like that. I could feel Brian's I watched my dad run into a burning building to help save kids while we were on holidays it was so scary. I hope they will be ok. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2020 07:38 PM · On: Gone In A Flash

Omg omg 😱 that's horrible. They must be so frightened. I pray everything is going to be ok 😢😢😢



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the comments, Vicki!  Don't worry;  you know I'll make everything right in the end. XOXO ~Kim

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2020 04:10 PM · On: Reunion at Britin

Still so sad with a touch of happy with Gus and Tricky. I hope things get better soon x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2020 03:41 PM · On: Finishing Up Loose Ends

This made me so sad 😞 I hate fighting and tension like that.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2020 12:23 PM · On: Trust is a Two-Way Street

😢😢 I hate when there is fights like this as it really hurts the heart d84;a039; 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2020 10:48 AM · On: Change of Plans

Lol Maarten is funny I like him and I can't wait to see Jacobs reaction as well. Justin seems so happy painting this and a happy Justin is always welcome. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2020 09:52 AM · On: Baring Your Soul - And Something Else

Maarten is such a lovely kind man and I know how partner is gonna love the painting Justin is doing. This made me smile when I needed it. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2020 07:11 AM · On: Ma Bell Never Thought About This!

They are so cute together even over webcam. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2020 07:14 AM · On: An Unexpected Offer

That sure is going to be an interesting painting to do for Justin. I can't wait for him to move back home x

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2019 12:55 PM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

good one

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2015 06:05 AM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

Really good story showing Justin succesful in NY but committed to being with Brian. So glad he realises he can paint as well, if not in fact better, being back home -happy with family, friends and most importantly Brian. Well written:-)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I liked throwing in a little 'Brian jealousy,' too, in this story.  Tricky means well, but is very eager to please.;)  That's one of the things I love about him. So glad you enjoyed this! Thank you for reading, and for the feedback! *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: AngelLove18 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2014 10:13 AM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

Great story! <3



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for taking the time to comment! I greatly appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2013 10:14 AM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

Tricky is the hero of the day and he can't stay away from Brian very long.  Wonderful story!



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Thank you for bearing with me until I got them back to a happier place.;)  So glad that you enjoyed this!  And thank you for all the wonderful comments, and for reading so many of my stories. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2013 09:59 AM · On: What is Most Important

This is a Christmas story!  It wasn't supposed to be so suspenseful!!!  At least Brian and Justin are back together and Gus, hopefully, is asleep.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2013 09:49 AM · On: Gone In A Flash

I kept expecting Gus to stamp his foot and insist that Brian make up with Justin.  Of course that would have messed up the story line.  A fire!!!!  Tricky to the rescue?  Brian better realize how much his foolishness could have cost him.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2013 09:31 AM · On: Reunion at Britin

Brian is so pig headed.  That is a neat trick Gus taught Tricky.  Even older people have a problem with it.



Author's Response:

LOL!  I got the idea from my neighbor's golden retriever.  He taught him the same trick.;)  So glad you'r enjoying this one! The climax (pardon the pun - snicker) is coming up in then next part. Thank you again for reading. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2013 09:17 AM · On: Finishing Up Loose Ends

Lewis, who I liked btw, was right.  Sadly Brian managed to leave before Justin got there.  But on a positive note I know you've fixed things, cause I saw where you have an Easter and Summer Tricky story!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2013 09:05 AM · On: Trust is a Two-Way Street

Oh no.  I'm afraid I agree with Brian.  Justin should have told him.  Now Brian's romantic plans are ruined.  Or are they?  It was nice that Justin Taylor got to meet Jacob Thomas, though they probably could have met under better circumstances though.  Of course your way makes for a better story.



Author's Response:

I agree with Brian, too.  It would have been much better to be up front about it.  More drama coming up!  Hope you continue to enjoy it. Thank you once more for reading and for all your comments.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2013 08:48 AM · On: Change of Plans

It's good that Jacob had to go out of town.  The nighttime background should be spectacular.  I can't help but feel something is going to happen.  Brian showing up unexpectedly or Jacob coming home early.  I hope I'm wrong.



Author's Response:

Well, you know me and angst!  Nothing ever comes from holding back information...sigh..  Bad Justin!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2013 06:58 AM · On: Baring Your Soul - And Something Else

Love the pics you've added to this chapter.  Really wish I could see the finished sketches.  They sound incrediable.  I wonder if Justin will be able to leave his equipment there so he doesn't have to cart it every time.



Author's Response:

Thank you! It does help to bring the story alive so much more, but it can be time consuming.  I will have a photo of the finished painting in Chapter 6, too.;)  Poor Brian - between Tricky and Maarten, it is not shaping up to be the best Christmas!  But something tells me that is about to change.;) Thank you as always for reading and for all the comments.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2013 06:40 AM · On: Ma Bell Never Thought About This!

"Stud to Princess. Do you copy."  ROFLOL.  And a good time was had by all.



Author's Response:

I'm afraid I'm a closet Star Wars geek - ha! That is where that inspiration from.:)  I'm thrilled you're enjoying this! Thank you!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2013 05:53 AM · On: An Unexpected Offer

Ah, a handsome, well-off, gay man.  That should prove to be a complication. Will Justin tell Brian?  That is the question.  Will he be able to pull it off before having to return to mediate Brian and Tricky the Terrorist?



Author's Response:

Hi, there!  I'm so happy that you're reading this one! Well, let's say Justin's subject is going to cause the green-eyed monster to emerge.;)  And, of course, Brian will misinterpret what is going on, and Justin won't tell him, either.  Those boys!  I do hope you enjoy this one. Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave me feedback.;P  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2012 11:11 AM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

I love the gus and tricky stories,especially the puppy love between Brian and tricky, please keep the humor of the new couple the beast and Brian.



Author's Response:

Hello, my friend! Thank you for reading and for your comments; I'm very happy that you're enjoying the 'Tales of Tricky.'  I do enjoy writing about Brian and his 'biggest fan' - ha!  I'm working on the next chapter of this and have not forgotten it.:)  As soon as  I update "Stallion" again I should be able to post the next part of this.  Thank you so much for taking the time to leave me your thoughts; I really appreciate that.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: COLLEEN (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2012 08:55 AM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

LOVED THIS ONE.  LOVE TRICKEY.  I HAD A YELLOW LAB A FEW YEARS AGO AND WAS VERY UPSET FOR A LONG TIME WHEN I HAD TO HAVE HIM PUT DOWN.  HE GOT REALLY SICK SO I HAD NO OTHER OPTION.



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  I'm so glad you enjoyed this one!  I have had two lab mixes in my life, and they were both such great dogs!  Such wonderful, sweet temperaments.  I also dog sit a black lab mix for the neighbors who is 14 - I know when the time comes I will have my heart broken all over again when he, too, has to depart this world, so I know exactly how you felt.  They become like children to me!  I just adore dogs.:) They really do bring such joy into our lives.

Thank you again for reading so many of my stories!  Tricky, BTW, is also featured in the Thanksgiving story - I can't recall if you've already read that one, though so if you have forgive my overlooking it.:)  Thanks again for the support!  *Hugs* ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2012 07:59 PM · On: An Unexpected Offer

Greetings, and congratulations on turning out another winner!  I really enjoyed this (love me some Predec Gus!) and the entire 'fire' scene was a work of art.  It was particularly well-crafted, even above your usual high-level skills. 

I think I held my breath from the moment Gus decided to visit the studio. From that point, to Tricky wandering the sleeping house and waking up Brian, Justin protecting Gus from the cold then sending him to safety . . . keen and wonderful anticipation! 

The Justin and Gus moments were pure gold.  Having raised a child not born to me, I well remember the euphoria of being gifted with an official 'parental' title.

I also appreciate how you've proven Tricky to be just a dog -- bug, a little dumb, and sweet -- instead of a near-human prodigy pet. (Tricky, are you trying to tell me Justin and Gus fell down a well?  Go rescue them, boy!)  He's the kind of dog many of us have shared  time with and can relate to.

I enjoyed every minute, and hope to read more in this Tricky universe.

Thanks for sharing -- we're lucky to have you. Hope your 2012 is served up with a side order of Amazing!  :-)



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  What lovely comments; thank you so much!  I adore the thoughtful feedback.:)  Just like Fin and Tony in "The Wedding Present" universe, I've become quite fond of Tricky.  And yes, I, too, can relate to a lot of what he does because I have also had a lot of experience with funloving, curious dogs in my lifetime.  They have brought a lot of pleasure to my world.:) 

Thank you, too, for the congratulations; I never know when those will pop up, but they continue to make me both very happy as well as humbled that others think I'm worthy of them.:)

I DO plan on Tricky returning; in fact, I'm toying with him and Gus making a return very soon (perhaps Easter?).  I'll have to see how I can fit them in somewhere soon at any rate.

Thank you again for all the wonderful feedback; I hope you will continue to read and enjoy my stories for a long time to come!:) *Hugs* ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2012 09:55 AM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

I restrained myself from reading this when it was a work in progress and am very happy that I did. Completely enjoyed it ....very beautiful. Just perfect for post christmas. Left a nice Christmassy feeling in the air.



Author's Response:

Hello!  Thank you for reading and for the lovely comments!  I'm glad you decided to read the story once it was finished and enjoyed it.:)  Thank you for letting me know - I love getting the feedback!  I hope you will continue to read and enjoy some of my others; thank you again.  *Hugs*~Kimberly

Reviewer: Lee (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2012 03:19 AM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

BB called, He is at the hospital doing some paperwork to get caught up and told me to name my truck LUCKY DEVIL and never mind what the other names are.  HA HA!  He did say candy, road hog, viper and red beast had been added.  What a riot-can't believe these busy people have nothing else to do.  I probable should tool over there myself to see this list.  I guess there are some drawings on the list as well.  fun fun fun.  luv 2 u



Author's Response:

That is too funny!  Okay, tell Brian that I LIKE his name the best, although maybe it should be RED Devil like the vacuum cleaner....!  Maybe you wouldn't want that, though, because then everyone would go around saying your truck sucks - ha!  He has my vote - I think lucky devil describes you well after you had that close brush with severe injury, although maybe it should be Red Phoenix then because you rose from the ashes like the mythical bird....

In any case,maybe you SHOULD go over there with the truck to provide inspiration so everyone can see the baby in person - let me know what the winner winds up with!  I still vote for an Armour-All car care kit, Rain-X wiper fluid, or a gas card.:) 

P.S. I wonder if all my readers think we're both nuts - ha!  Say hi to all the crazy people you work with!:)  They're MY kind of people...! *Hugs*

 

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 02:18 AM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

Aw! A lovely end to a lovely story. I am glad we'll see Tricky again someday and I am glad that our boys are back together in love & happiness.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Thanks, Sweetie, for the kind words; so glad you enjoyed it.:)  I'm working on Rob and Gus's first date right now for the Elvis story; hopefully I'll have that posted real soon.  Looking forward to meeting you at Randy's play - I listened to his interview yesterday on the radio and it sounds like he's going to be one of two main actors on stage, so I think we'll see a lot of him!  Can't wait!  Thanks again.:)  *Hugs*~Kimberly

Reviewer: Lee (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2012 01:50 AM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

Update!  Got a call from my petition poster with names.  Seems there are alot of people that have signed it.  Well here goes-for your perusal I was told to say.  Have to get all these big words (PERUSAL) right. Ha.  Names are: RED DRAGON,SCARLET,AMBER??,BABE!, FLAME, RUBY, CRIMSON GAL, RED WARRIOR, kind of like that one, TORCH, BUBBA AND LUSTY?  What do you think so far.  Feed back will be appreciated.  luv 2 u



Author's Response:

LOL!  I am having so much fun with this!  What a hoot!  "Bubba and Lusty?"  That sounds like a cheesy sort of soap opera to me - ha!  And I won't even ask why someone would want to name your truck "Lusty?"  Is there something I should know?  LOL!  Not sure about Amber - that sounds more like someone who is goldish-yellow in color.  Although after that last accident, maybe you SHOULD be proceeding with caution, so that might not be all that inappropriate - ha! 

This reminds me of how people name their boats - I always get a kick out of reading some of their names.  I can't believe you have so many possibiliies already!  I'll have to stew on this one.  Mmmm....I kind of like "Red Warrior," too - sounds masterful and dominating like the size of your new baby:)   But then again, I think maybe something with the word "Medley" in it - get it?  "Med" and "Lee?"  Ha!

Ack!  I feel like someone at Christmas trying to decide which present to open!  Scarlet is good, too; Babe reminds me too much of the talking pig....Crimson Gal is good, too - see, it IS a SHE - ha!  Told you!

Of course you can always just go with "Big Red" like the gum or "Flaming Star" in honor of my Elvis story!  Or just "Safe-T," although that sounds like the name of a rap star!  Okay - I don't think I'm the one to decide on such a momentous name such as this.  How long is this contest going to run?  I'm know I'm enjoying it so don't hurry it along TOO much!  Let me know what you decide or I might not be able to sleep at night - ha!  And now I am going back to the Elvis story - I have to decide on a song title for that chapter, too!  So much pressure - LOL!  *Hugs*  Good Luck!

Kimberly

 

Reviewer: TeAmo (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2012 06:13 PM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

Love you soooo much!!! You're stories keep me sane!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Sweetheart!  What a wonderful thing to say!  I love YOU and my other readers like you who are so supportive of me!  Knowing I can make others happy with my writing makes ME happy!  Thank you for the lovely comments.:)  *Big Hug* to you.:)  XOXOX  Kimberly

Reviewer: Lee (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2012 11:18 AM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

Just thought you might like to know you started a fire storm here at the hospital.  Seems some person who shall remain nameless for the moment read your answer to my review about a name for my truck.  Now---there is a petition up for a name and sex for it.  I guess amongst all the pain, suffering and angst here they need a little levity.  I will keep you posted as to name and sex they come up with.  Of course I will have the final say so they better come up with something I want.  You are somethin.HA HA!!  LUV 2 U



Author's Response:

ROFL!  Now I wonder who THAT was?  I LOVE it!  Now if it's male truck and since it's red, how about "Great Balls of Fire?"  There's no reason why he or she should only have one name - ha!  And it IS red.  In fact, maybe we should go with something classy befitting the color such as "Titian?"  I still like Loretta for some reason (I have NO idea why!).  Just don't name it "Christine!"  (No offense, BTW, to any Lorettas or Christines out there....we all know what happened in the Stephen King movie, though, with THAT Christine!). 

P.S.  Will you be issuing birth announcements?  Maybe you could take a picture of the 'newborn,' too and put it on the front of the announcement with a title that says, "I've got some WHEELY exciting news!")  Okay, better stop before I get WHEELY out of hand - ha!  You're going to divert me now from writing more of my stories at this rate!  I will be waiting anxiously to see what name you and your 'nameless' campaign manager eventually come up with!  Are you going to give out an Armour All gift pack as a prize for the best name?  Ack!  Stop me - I'm out of control here - LOL! 

(Deep breath....).  Okay, I'm back under control now.  Thanks for letting me know - I'll have something to look forward to now during all the dreary, gray weather we've been having. This is almost as exciting as the thought of going to see Randy again next month in his next play!  Let me know!  *hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Brianna (Anonymous) · Date: January 21, 2012 10:30 PM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

Hi.  It's me again.  Don't know if you remember me or not.  I wanted to read more of your stories but had to go to England for work and while there my stupid laptop bombed.  Am back now with a new one so am reading again.  This story was wonderful, although after the fire I was left a little unsure of the outcome.  So happy at the end.  These two are something aren't they.  Bree



Author's Response:

Hi, Bree!  Of course I remember you!  So great to see that you're still reading my stories.:)  Thank you for that as well as leaving me feedback - that makes me very happy.:)  I'm so glad you liked this one!  I hope you will continue to enjoy some of my other ones.:)  I'm working on the next (I think last) chapter of my Elvis story.  I hope that will give me more time to complete the other three that I have in progress right now (although it will be quite difficult for me to not write at least a one-shot for Valentine's Day for the boys!). 

Thank you again for the kind words; I am very flattered as well as grateful.  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2012 07:32 PM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

I soooooo looooove Tricky ! Tricky can stay! Hope to see him soon again! 

See you soon (139 days LOL)



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  I'm glad you like Tricky!  And yes, I hope those 139 days go by VERY quickly!  Can't wait!  I saw, BTW, the online interview you did with the Observer where they are publicizing the convention  - how exciting and what great publicity for you and the event - congratulations!  I've already bought my QAF tee shirt - ha!  Thanks for the kind words, my friend.  139 days and counting!!  *Hugs*

Reviewer: Lee (Anonymous) · Date: January 21, 2012 01:07 PM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

Thought I'd put my two cents in about the end of this story.  It was a great story and I am glad it ended so well.  I am back to work and it's great.  I got through my first shift very well some tired but not too bad.  Friends had a get together in the cafeteria, gave me some funny gifts.  It was fun.  My truck is running great.  Lindc calls it my gas guzzling safety net.  I guess in a way she's right.  I feel a lot safer in it driving.  Still have a few anxious times, but they will go away soon as I feel better in what I'm driving.  Glad to be back in my little cocoon with the peeps.  luv 2 u.



Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend.:)  So glad that your first day at work went so well for you!  Yes, lindc told me about the gas card - I imagine that vehicle holds a LOT of the black oil stuff - ha!  I think we should have a contest to name your new vehicle.  I like Loretta for some reason (is it a boy or a girl though?) - LOL!  I'm so happy for you that you're back at work with your friends; now you can all meet together again to read my stories as only lindc can do.:)  Thanks for taking the time to leave me your thoughts, Sweetie.  *Big Hug* to you.:)

Reviewer: ScorpioDream (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2012 12:01 AM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

So cute and sexy! I have loved reading this story and am sad to see it end. I think I would have been perfectly happy if you had decided to just keep going, lol! I'm looking forward to reading more of your works, if I haven't already read them. Great job!

Author's Response:

Hi, Stephanie, my friend!  You're so good about always reviewing; that you very much for that.:)  I'm so glad you liked it!  I do intend to let Tricky return at some point; I think even Brian's beginning to like him now!:)  Thanks again and I do hope you will enjoy some more of my stories.  I've got plenty more new ideas in my head!  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2012 11:24 PM · On: An Unexpected Offer

thank you for this great and funny story

i love the dog

reminds me of ours a long time ago

always a wet nose which has to discover something lol



Author's Response:

Hi, Chandrika! Thank you so much for reading and for your comments.  I'm a big lab fan - have had two black lab mixes over the years, and I dogsit another one on a frequent basis.  I LOVE those kinds of dogs especially!  And I have had a lot of the same experiences with dog that I wrote about in this story (well, maybe not that last part - ha!).  I'm so glad you like the story.  Thank you again for the wonderful comments.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2012 06:36 PM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

I think it is very important that Tricky make more than occasional reappearances I loved this story and I want to go back to it lol



Author's Response:

LOL!  Hi, Chris!  I'm glad you've become fond of Tricky - I'm kind of warming up to him, also, and I think even Brian is now, too.:)  I'm definitely plannng on him returning - maybe fairly soon for a one-shot (?).  Anyway, thank you so much for reading and for the comments, my friend.  *Hugs* ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Sasha (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2012 01:14 PM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

Hey! I loved the story. After reading your notes for individual chapters I was afraid Justin was going to do something even more stupid, but luckaly you didn't go there. For a while it felt like watching a train wreck that never came.
Anyway, great story, I love your writing an hope to read something new soon.
Sasha

Author's Response:

Aw..thanks, Sasha!  I'm so glad you liked it, my friend.:)  Thank you for the wonderful feedback; I really appreciate that.  I will have some new stories soon, but want to try and hopefully finish up at least the Elvis story first and get some of my others updated.  Thanks for reading!:)  *Hugs*~Kimberly

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2012 12:13 PM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

I really enjoyed this series.  You always manage to take a tale and fill it with a few wists and some angst but end up sweet and wonderful.  Great job as , always.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your lovely comments, Sandy!  I appreciate that so much; I'm glad you enjoyed Tricky's indoctrination into the 'family.':)  I am grateful for your feedback, my friend; thank you again!  Oh, and congrats on your blue ribbon for your QAF exchange story!:)  *Hugs*  Kimberly

Reviewer: soul1essharpy (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2012 11:54 AM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

Perfection as always, my friend!

Poor Justin - his occupation seems to lean more towards 'damsel(?) in distress' than 'artist extrordinaire', doesn't it? LOL

Loved this one, beautifully crafted and entertaining. Then again, Jealous!Brian is always good spice for a story!

*Huggles*



Author's Response:

Hi, Tammy, my friend!  Thanks so much for the wonderful comments!  I'm delighted you enjoyed this one.:)  I don't know what it is about Justin, but, yes, I do love to show him as the more vulnerable side of the relationship, I think mainly because I love to bring out Brian's protective side and I adore giving him little queen outs from time to time.:)  But I DO like to show Justin defending his man, too, when the case warrants. 

Thanks again for reading and for taking the time to leave me feedback, my friend; I really appreciate that!  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Kym (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2012 11:46 AM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

Ending so sweet and emotional.  Gus and his papa so sweet shed a few tears.  So sweet.  I love the pictures, funny and precious.  I see Hunka will be next.  Will Parent Trap be after? Really hope so--love that one, can't wait for this long awaited reunion.  So be filled with a lot of angst huh??  Isn't awful we readers are so needy.  Pretty bad when we tell the writer what to write next.  I hope you forgive us. So pushy aren't we???



Author's Response:

Hi, Kym!  I don't mind at all; it's when people DON'T seem interested in my stories that I would get concerned.:)  Yes, I really want to finish up the Elvis story - I think I can do that in one more chapter - and then update "Parent Trap" to at least get the boys initially reunited.  But be warned - something tells me that another horrid cliffhanger could be coming up in the next chapter, too!  I'll try not to, though, but I'll have to see.  I will at least try to get them face to face at least.

Thank you for the wonderful comments on this story.  I DO love to show Gus with both of them together; I think it would have only been natural for Justin and Gus to bond by virtue of their mutual love for Brian.  And I'm glad I could find some appropriate photos to place in the chapter.  I really like to do that when I can.:)  Thanks again for all the support, Kym!  I'll be posting another update to one of my stories very soon.:)  AND I may just throw in a Valentine's Day one-shot, too. (hint, hint...).  *Hugs* ~Kimberly

Reviewer: lindc & the peeps (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2012 11:23 AM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

Nice ending to this amazing story.  The pictures are adorable.  That shirt is sooooo funny.  Rather fits them doesn't it. Now where are we going girl..  You are ending a few now are you starting another or are you going to finish more first.  You know what each of us are waiting for tho. So it's your call.  Back to work now.   Read the last chapter to my captive audience so happy to have us all together again-you'll never know.  Had cake and ice cream welcome back for Lee.  Gave him some goofy gifts and a gas card for his gas guzzler truck.  HA HA!!  He loves it  lol



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetheart!  I'm so glad that Lee's first day went so well for him; I know you were all so happy to have him back, and I know he's been anxious to return. The gas card was very appropriate; I can only IMAGINE how much money it costs to fill up those tanks - normally, they're huge (just like Zack O'Toole - ha!). 

Thank you as always for the wonderful comments.:)  I do think I'll work on finishing up the Elvis story first, and I've always got new story ideas in my head.  But I'm going to try my best not to start another one just yet.  I will be out of town for a weekend next month (seeing Randy on 2/18!), so that will cut down a little on my free time.  But once I have the Elvis story finished, I can devote more time to the others.  I DO see a Valentine's Day one-shot on the horizon, though.:) 

Thanks again for all the support, lindc, and for all the recommendations of my stories to others.  You are so awesome!  Take care.  *Big* hug!~Kimberly

Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2012 09:30 AM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

What a treat to come home and find this chapter after a cluster of a day! You packed in so much wonderfulness starting with the title - Jingle Balls - ha! It was clever and witty all the way through.  Brian's reaction to the shirt - hilarious - 'it was probably one of the gaudiest shirts he had ever seen; that is, if you overlooked Emmett’s typical wardrobe.' I went from laughing over that to sniffling at Justin's gift  “My Papa and Me.”  Geez you had my emotions all over the place! Favorite line - "Why waste time later?" Not to nag or anything but Parent Trap next? I saw your comments to linda but figured I'd beg anyway......



Author's Response:

Hello, my friend! I always look forward to your lovely comments.:)  Thank you for the support; that means so much to me.:)  I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this chapter!  Yes, there was certainly a myriad of emotions in this one, wasn't there?  Well, you know Brian - he always tries to be efficient and save time - ha! 

As far as my next story....I suppose my arm could be twisted to write another part on "Parent Trap."  I did leave it at a horrible spot, didn't I?  But....that being said, I've already started on the next part of "Hunka," because I really want to end up another story and I have a good shot at doing that in the next chapter.  So as much as I hate to say it, I'll probably at least finish that one up before I add another installment of "Parent Trap."  I feel so guilty about the other ones, though!  I DO swear I will update the other stories very soon.  RL is getting in the way recently - aargh! 

Thanks again for all the wonderful feedback!  *Big Hug*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2012 09:12 AM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

“Is that you breathing so heavily?”

LMAO!

I had forgotten about Tricky. That was a perfect ending!

Thanks for writing a beautiful romantic story. I look forward to more as well as the updates on the rest of your stories.

:)



Author's Response:

Aww...thank you, Sandra!  You've very kind.  And thank you for all the consistent support and feedback for my stories - that means the world to me.:)  I will be working hard now on updating the other stories; I know a couple of them are sadly in need of some updates.  I do apologize for the delay - I had quarterly grades to do for my students this past week and it is extremely time-consuming to do.  But I WILL keep plugging away on all my stories and will get each of them updated just as soon as I can - promise!  Thanks again for the lovely comments.  *Hugs*~Kimberly

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2012 09:01 AM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

That was “a glorious Christmas Day”, indeed.  I loved the image of the trampled backyard after all that fun.  It was so touching when Brian realized “he owed that overzealous, boisterous mountain of fur a tremendous debt of gratitude.”  The dog has certainly grown on him but I still doubt he’ll WANT to wear that hilarious t-shirt! Thank you for a terrific, sweet story.  I had such a good time reading it!  I hope we can visit them again!



Author's Response:

Aww...thank you, my friend!  Or should I say woof!!  That really IS a tee-shirt, BTW - how perfect was that???  Ha!  I tend to agree with you - small doses of Tricky might work with Brian, but full-time?  I seriously doubt it!  I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.:)  I will definitely entertain the idea of Tricky and Gus visiting again in the future; I'm actually toying with a Valentine's Day appearance, at least briefly, but I'll have to wait and see if I can work that out.  Hard to believe it's only about 3 weeks away!  Thanks again for all the support and comments; I am very grateful.:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2012 07:35 AM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

oh Kimberly - that T-shirt scene is a hoot - made me giggle - I can actually see Brian's disapproving glare, but I just can't help it! ha ha

I couldn't imagine how you were going to close this story quickly  - but you have done a great job as usual

thanks

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response:

Thank you, Charle, my friend!  You know me - I could have easily stretched it out longer - I NEVER know when to stop! LOL!  But it seemed to be a good ending point, and I DO so want to update some of my other stories such as "Heart's Desire" and "Paper Hearts Killer."  They have been woefully neglected lately.  I DO promise my readers to get them updated just as soon as possible.  Thank you again for all the support, dear friend.:)  *hugs*  Kimberly

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2012 11:23 PM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

Wonderful ending to a great story.  Thank you for letting me take this ride with you.  Parent trap next??  Cute pictures by the way.



Author's Response:

Hi, Linda!  Thank you for reading and for your thoughts; I'm so glad you liked it!  That is an actual shirt saying, BTW; I just couldn't resist getting that for Brian because it fit so well - ha!:) 

As for the next story in the rotation, I feel awful that I'm neglecting my other stories.  I certainly haven't forgotten them, and I'll be updating them all soon - promise!  But first I think I'd like to finish up "Hunka" just because I think I can complete it in the next chapter and wrap it up altogether.  Then because of the horrid cliffhanger in "Parent Trap," I'll probably go there next, and then back to my regular rotation  - aargh!  If I can finish the first one, though, I'll only have 3 WIPs to update which should speed things up greatly. 

Thank you again for all the support!  I am very appreciative.  *Hugs*

Kimberly

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2012 10:26 PM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

* sigh * sitting here with a terrible headache feeling sick, but I had to read this last chapter. It's a lovely end. Thanks.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Thank you, Marny!  So sorry to hear about the headache; hope you're feeling better now.:)  Probably a good think Tricky isn't around, then; I think that would only contribute to your condition - ha!  Thank you as always for the kind words, my friend!  *Hugs* to you.:)

Kimberly

Reviewer: Sab123 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2012 09:22 PM · On: Jingle Balls: Conclusion

“Is that you breathing so heavily?”   There was silence ... “I thought that was you.”

LOL. Brilliant. I loved it. Thank you for this story.



Author's Response:

Hi, Sabine! Thank you for reading and for the lovely comments, my friend; I really appreciate that!:)  So glad that you liked it.  I DID enjoy Tricky's involvement in the two stories; he'll probably be showing up again; I already have another thought for a story involving him, so something tells me he'll be back.:)  Thank you again for reading and especially taking the time to leave me feedback.:)  *Hugs*~Kimberly

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2012 09:32 AM · On: What is Most Important

So sorry for this late review. Had family issues.  This was a wonderfully cathartic chapter.  Well written.  Am very happy now.  Saps my energy reading and hoping for the best.  Sorry to be maudlin.  I just get into these stories so deep I lose it a little.  Guess I's just a little foolish at times.  Anyway I love this story.



Author's Response:

Hi, Linda, my friend; don't apologize!  I just hope everything is well in your family again.:)  Thank you for the comments; I'm glad I could relieve everyone's anxiety about Justin and the fire!  I thought it was best for my own safety, too - LOL! 

I consider it a great compliment, BTW, that you get so involved in my stories; I'm very honored by that.:)  I don't think it's foolish at all.  Thank you again for taking the time to leave me your thoughts. I'm working on the last part right now and should have it up with the next few days.  Thanks again, Linda! *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2012 07:50 AM · On: What is Most Important

Yes! The boys are back together, where they belong! Loved, loved, loved the chapter and can't wait for the next update whether it's one more chapter or just an epilogue.

Brilliant story!

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie! So great to hear from you, dear friend.:)  Yeah, after posting that cliffhanger yesterday I thought I'd better go ahead with the next chapter before I wound up getting tarred and feathered!  I hadn't seen such an outcry since Gus got kidnapped in "Paper Hearts," but I LOVE the feedback!  speaking of which, thank you for the kind words.  Couldn't resist Brian carrying Justin upstairs; I LOVE a protective, caring Brian.:)  Thanks again, my friend.  I appreciate you so much.:) ~Kim

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2012 07:29 AM · On: Gone In A Flash

This is what spending the weekend away from my computer gets me - a whole lot of missed stories and a damn cliff-hanger...OMG, what a tense ending!

Great chapter, but you are just killing me. I am SO incredibly glad that there's another one to read, so I won't be fretting the whole evening.

On to the next - yay!  :)

Reviewer: RUDE NATHALIE (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2012 12:40 AM · On: What is Most Important

belle histoire j'avais peur qu'il finit bruler, merci j'ai meme pleurer au debut de ce chapitre a bientot



Author's Response:

Je vous remercie! Je suis heureux que vous appréciez mon histoire. Je vais le finir très vite.:)  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Kym (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 11:30 PM · On: What is Most Important

Whew.  What a relief.  That was a barn-burner (no pun intended.)  Am so happy things will now work out for these two stubborn males.  My god to think Justin has to almost die again for mister grumpy, non-forgiving to get it.  He is such an enigma.  He makes for great reading tho. I have a day off to catch up on my never-ending paperwork.  I guess i procrastinate too much.  An unforgivable trait I must say.  It is easy for me to get bogged down when there are so many other wonderful things to do.  Ha!  Will be waiting for the finale to this one.  Good job!!!



Author's Response:

Hi, Kym, my friend; thanks as always for your kind words!  I know what it's like to procrastinate. BTW; I spent three hours this morning working on quarterly grades, but had to take a slight breather.  I HATE doing grades - yuck!  I'm like you - I'd much rather be on here either reading or posting a story.:)  Thank you so much for reading and for your thoughtfulness.  *Hugs*  Kimberly

Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 11:22 PM · On: What is Most Important

GREAT ENDING TO SUSPENSE.  GLAD ALL WILL BE WELL FOR THEM.  THIS ONE WILL BE DONE SOON TO GO DOWN IN YOUR ARCHIVES.  I AM GLAD I WAS ALONG FOR THE RIDE.  AM EXCITED BACK TO WORK TONIGHT.  CAN'T WAIT TO SEE ALL MY FRIENDS AGAIN.  WISH ME LUCK THAT I DON'T POOP OUT.  HOPEFULLY MY PHYSICAL THERAPY HAS PROVIDED ME WITH ALL I NEED.  LUV 2 U



Author's Response:

Hi, Lee!  I know your return to work was this week, but didn't realize it was tonight!  Good Luck, my friend!  I imagine you're both excited as well as just a little nervous, but you will come through it just fine, I know it.:)  You will be awesome just like you always were no doubt and I know all your co-workers are so happy to have you back!  Congratulations again, dear.:)  Let me know how it goes and in the meantime I'll work on updating another story.  *Hugs*~Kimberly

Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 10:09 PM · On: What is Most Important

Can you hear my happy sigh??!!



Author's Response:

LOL!  Thanks!  It's almost a let-down in a way after all the drama, but that's not necessarily a bad thing.:)  Just wait until the drama unfolds in Paper Hearts Killer if you thought THAT was suspenseful!  Thanks again for all your support; it means so much to me.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 04:34 PM · On: What is Most Important

8:38 .. Sitting here with a cup of tea, kids at school ... finally time to read.

7:15 I saw the update and read little pieces, but I don't have time before the kids go to school "mom my lunchbox ... mom my sports clothes ... mom can you iron my shirt ... my my hair"

 

I love every word you write, thanks. I knew Justin was okay and that Brian knows what really is important, but I'm glad to see it written. 

And for the epilogue: "I’ll make sure both our dicks get fully reacquainted later"

 

* big hug *

 

Why stops the rating at 10 * sigh * ? and why don't you have a blue ribbon for this story? Here I give you one ... 10 minutes later ... aggrrr I give up. I know I did it before, but I can't get the picture up. Sorry. But you deserves one.



Author's Response:

Aww...you are SO good for my ego, Marny!  Thanks for the attempt, anyway; you know how much I adore those little things!:)  What can I say about your wonderful support that I haven't already said, my friend?  It means so much to me, and you always make me smile!  Oh, and I promise in the epilogue that their dicks will definitely get much better 'reacquainted,' too - ha!  Thanks again, dear friend.  *Big* hug to you.:)  I'll get the last part posted just as soon as I can; I have to work on quarterly grades for my students today - yuck!  Would much prefer to be writing these!!~Kimberly

Reviewer: ScorpioDream (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 03:24 PM · On: What is Most Important

Aww! That last little bit was so cute! These past two chapters have just been chalked with excitement! I never imagined you would use a fire to create excitement! To be honest I assumed that you would use the pond that Brian thought about him and Justin taking Gus ice skating on. I cannot wait for the epilogue! Great work!

Author's Response:

Aww...thanks, Stephanie!  Actually, I hadn't even thought about the pond/lake - that might have been a good idea; wish I had thought about that - ha!  But I may be able to use the fire in a roundabout way for my Valentine's Day one-shot hopefully (hint, hint...).  I'm so glad you enjoyed the story - I promise to get the epilogue posted just as soon as I can; I have to break off for a day or so to work on student grades for school (yuck), and then work on the next chapter probably of "Parent Trap."  And of course I have to get back to my other stories - Ack!  So much to do, so little time!!  Anyway, thanks again, my friend, for all your support.:)  *Hugs*  Kimberly

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 01:04 PM · On: What is Most Important

I can't believe you updated so quickly!  Thank you!

They would have to work at improving their open communication with each other, perhaps - BOTH of them needed it; but tonight, he was more concerned with taking care of his partner and letting him know that no matter what happened – or what WILL happen in the future – his love for him would never change.

This was perfect. Brian had to finally put things into perspective. They both made mistakes.

Wonderful story! This will go under my favorites with most of your others. :)

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you as always for taking the time to comment, my friend; I will always look forward to that, and you know how much feedback means to me.:)  I'm so glad you liked this one.:)  I promise to get the epilogue up just as soon as I can, but at least everyone knows the boys are okay now.;)  *Hugs* to you.:)  Kimberly

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 12:44 PM · On: What is Most Important

waited up to read as you said you would post this chapter.  i must say i feel whole lots better.  i knew things would turn out for the best but wanted to see it written.  thanks for a wonderful happy chapter.  now i can get some sleep. lol



Author's Response:

Tnank you, dear friend.:P) You're so good to me!:)  I'm honored that you waited up, but I think you did it, too, just so you could comment this time before Lee did - ha!  Thanks for all the kindness you show me, lindc; you're very special, my friend.  *Hugs* ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 12:29 PM · On: What is Most Important

Thanks for putting this up so quickly, now I can sleep tonight!  Such a dramatic rescue!  Little Gus’ "Wake up, Papa," he crooned softly. "It's time to wake up"  made my heart melt. I loved Brian’s realizations and how carefully he took care of Justin.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the kind words, my friend; I'm so glad you liked it.:)  I adore Gus treating Justin as his 'other daddy.'  (Sigh...).  I know - sappy sweet!  But I love it anyway.:)  I will get the epilogue up as soon as I can.:)  Thanks again - *Hugs* ~Kimberly

Reviewer: NATHALIE RUDE (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 09:35 AM · On: Gone In A Flash

C est une tres belle histoire j'espere que ca ne va pas fini par un drame pour justin.



Author's Response:

Ne vous inquiétez pas. Il sera très bien. Merci pour vos commentaires et pour la lecture!:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 07:42 AM · On: Gone In A Flash

you are in so much trouble leaving us hanging like this.  i am so anxious to see how this is resolved.  gus is so sweet trying to make justin feel better.  i love how this is all intertwined.  these boys need to grow up and forgive and forget.  had they come to some kind of an agreement this would have never happened -but that is how a so so story becomes a great story, and a so so writer becomes a great writer and we all know you are the latter.  i see my sneaky friend beat me to the punch here.  he is a little imp in more ways than one.  he will be coming back to work next week.  can't wait to have us all together again-it has been way too long especially when we didn't know if he would recover fully.  someone up there was looking out for him and he knows it.  lol



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie!  LOL- Lee said you'd be surprised to find out that he beat you to the punch - ha!  I would SO love to meet all of you - you sound like such a great group of people; I'm jealous of your special comaraderie.:)  (Hope I spelled that right - LOL!).  I am so glad to see Lee going back to work next week - how great is that?  Just wonderful and I'm so happy for him - for ALL of you. 

I'm working on the next chapter of this right now; I will do my best to get it posted tonight.:)  Hope you all have a wonderful week.  Tell Lee I'll be thinking of him.:)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 07:41 AM · On: Gone In A Flash

I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU DID THIS! I didn't know you had a mean streak. LOL

Fabulous chapter! You have outdone yourself! I had no idea it was leading to where it is now.

Justin was doing the right thing in giving Brian his space and time to cool off. Unfortunately, Gus sensed things were not right between them and tried to patch things up. 

That fire was totally unexpected. It look like Christmas is ruined, but thank God Justin woke up in time.


Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Thanks for the wonderful comments!:)  I'm so glad that you liked it.:)  I DO like to involve Gus with the boys.  I'm glad I kept you in the dark and was able to give it an unexpected twist.  I'm working on the next chapter right now; don't worry - I won't hurt Justin.:)  *Hugs* ~Kimberly

Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 07:09 AM · On: Gone In A Flash

I zoomed through this chapter! Can't wait for more. In fact, I'd like to see a Valentine's Day version. Just saying......



Author's Response:

Hi, Dear!  Thanks so much for the lovely comments!  I've got an idea for a one-shot for Valentine's Day, so don't worry - I think I'll have something for that day.:)  Not sure if I can work Tricky in there, though; he might have to wait until Gus's spring break - ha!  Besides, I don't think Brian would want him intruding on their 'special day.'  Thanks for reading and for your ongoing support - I'm working on the next chapter of this now.~Kimberly

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 07:07 AM · On: Reunion at Britin

That was so scary!  I am so worried about Justin!  Poor Gus trying to get help.  Hurry with the rest!

Reviewer: kfan (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 06:57 AM · On: Gone In A Flash

I just want you to know that you're responsible for me losing my voice and going bald, for two days now i have been screaming and pulling my hair out at the end of your cliffhangers. First Parent Trap and now Framed. As good of a writer that i know your are you're killing me girl, killing me. LOL. Can't wait for the next chapter to either story.



Author's Response:

LOL!  I don't know whether to be flattered or go into hiding - ha!  You're so kind to comment on my story; I'll have to remember to write another cliffhanger with either Brian or Justin in mortal danger the next time reviews start to lag - ha!  I'm working hard on the next chapter to this right now.  I'll do my best to get it posted tonight.  Thank you again for the kind words.  I also promise to update "Parent Trap" again after this one so I don't have anyone put out a hit contract on me!:)  *Hugs*~Kimberly

Reviewer: Lin-Anne (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 05:53 AM · On: Gone In A Flash

Hi!  I am a surgical resident in house of a reader of yours.  His name is Brian.  He said to mention him in my review.  I think he is a little vain, but a wonderful teacher and quite handsome.  Don't tell him I told you that.  Sorry, I guess if he reads here he will see it.  I'm quite outspoken by the way.  It takes perseverance, a big ego, and lots of study and hopefully some greymatter to land where I and my co-residents are.  I am the only female in this little group.  So I feel relly lucky to be here.  Now on to my review.  This story has everything anyone would want in a story, happiness, sadness, angst, and sex.  I think you are very talented.  Brian told me you are a teacher.  I hope you teach English and writing.  You are so good at it.  I wish I could write stories, I have a hard time with the mound of paperwork I have to do at the hospital.  Just thought I'd introduce myself and say how much I am enjoying this wonderful story.  I now have to read Parent Trap.  it's on my required reading. 



Author's Response:

Hi, Lin-Anne! Thank you for the wonderful comments!  Yes, Brian mentioned yesterday that he had suggested you read some of my stories; I understand you're a fan of Gale's - such a gorgeous man, isn't he?  I'll get to see him this June at the QAF convention in Germany - can't wait!  Congratulations on your residency, BTW - that must be a big honor.:)  The hospital you are training at sounds very special - I can tell from the comments that Brian and his co-workers leave for me that they are very compassionate and dedicated at what they do; we should ALL be so lucky to be patients in that kind of institution.:)

Yes, I am a teacher, but not of writing or English; I teach a full-time adult ed class having to do with preparing for front-office medical asistant work, but thank you for the wonderful words of support; I get so much motivation out of comments such as yours, so I do appreciate you taking the time to introduce yourself and to read this story.:)  I hope you will enjoy reading "Parent Trap," and some of my other stories as well.  Thank you again for the thoughtful comments!:)  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 05:41 AM · On: Gone In A Flash

LOL ... do you need a flashlight !? think it's pretty dark under your desk.

Aggrr your tonight isn't my tonight ... here it's already tonight! Maybe one hour and a half and then I'm going to bed. Hurry !!

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

No pressure, huh?  LOL! Can I eat my dinner first?  Justin can wait for a few more minutes in the fire, can't he?  I know, I know - I'll do my best!:)  Drink a lot of coffee - maybe that will keep you awake a little longer - ha!

Reviewer: Kym (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 05:28 AM · On: Gone In A Flash

I really should give you a 20 rating on this chapter.  And, by the way, you really should be hiding under your desk. tsk,tsk,tsk, leaving us foaming at the mouth.  Bad girl, but on the other hand, that's what makes you such a good writer.  I really hope you jump out of your rotation and put up another chapter of this story and parent trap.  Those two seem to be the eye-catchers at the moment.  Twisting your arm.  SO GOOD!!



Author's Response:

Aww....thank you, Kym; you're very kind.:)  Yes, they do seem to be the 'buzz' stories of mine at the moment, so I may just do that.  I really hated to leave "Parent Trap" where I did, too, but at least Justin wasn't in mortal danger at the time - ha!  Thank you so much for the kind words; I am very flattered and it makes me so happy to hear them.:) 

I will do my best to finish this up later tonight; I have about 4,000 words of it written, but you know for me that's too short - LOL!  *Hugs* for taking the time to comment, my friend.~Kimberly

Reviewer: Tiff (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 05:27 AM · On: Gone In A Flash

I hope we don't have to wait too long for the next chapter after this cliffhanger.

Really good!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Tiff!   I know - horrible place to stop, wasn't it?  I will do my best to get it updated again sometime later this evening.  Thank you so much for reading and especially for the encouraging feedback; that means a lot to me.  *Hugs* ~Kimberly

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 05:22 AM · On: Gone In A Flash

You naughty little minx!! I don't want to get yelled at about my cliffhangers ever again! Haha.

Sweet little Gus always brings things into perspective. Poor little tyke in between such stubborn heads - most particularly a certain brunet force of nature. :D

I'm so glad to have taken the time to sit down and get caught up on this engrossing tale. I have no doubt things will work out in the end. I'm holding you to that, my dear. Excellent chapter & story as always, my friend. Looking forward to the conclusion. :)



Author's Response:

Hi,Sweetie!  I'm waving from under my desk at the moment, but if you look really hard you can see my hand - LOL!  I'm so happy to see you reading along, although I don't know how you're doing it with the type of schedule you're keeping!  But I'm glad you are.  Yes, I suppose we are competing with cliffhangers, but I can't leave poor Justin in that burning studio for long, I guess - ha!  I'll try my best to get this posted later tonight if I can buckle down and finish it up.  You know how it is - I always feel both a mixture of sadness but relief when I finish a story.:)  Thanks so much for all your support, my friend.  *Hugs* ~Kimberly

Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 05:09 AM · On: Gone In A Flash

WOW THIS WAS A GOOD ONE.  YOU REALLY NEED TO ASK IF WE WANT YOU TO PUT UP THE NEXT CHAPTER OUT OF SEQUENCE.  WHAT A CLIFF-HANGER.  I GUESS I'LL ADD MY NAME TO THE TWIST YOUR ARM LIST. HA!  ALL WILL BE WELL IN THE END, BUT WE STILL WANT THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON.  JUST LEFT BB AND LINDC.  WE WENT TO LUNCH AND SAW WAR HORSE.  TALK ABOUT AN EMOTIONAL ROLLER-COASTER.  WAS A GOOD FLICK.  OF COURSE LINDC CRIED AND CRIED.  CAN'T BELIEVE I FOUND THIS NEXT CHAPTER BEFORE HER.  I'M THE MAN.  GAVE THEM A RIDE IN MY NEW WHEELS.  SHE WILL BE A TAD UPSET I BEAT HER HERE.  THAT'S LIFE, YOU SNOOZE YOU LOSE.  HA! LUV 2 U



Author's Response:

Hi, Lee!  You had me laughing and grinning ear-to-ear with your comments!  I can just see lindc at that movie all emotional and teary-eyed; from what I heard about it, I would have been exactly the same way, though.:)  So you all went out to the movies and you played chaperone with the fancy new truck, huh?  That's great!  I'm so happy you're doing so well.  I believe you go back to work this week; I'm sure everyone will be so happy to see you back!  I'm sure lindc will check in later; I promise not to tell her that you beat her to the punch - ha!  Stay well, dear friend, and hope you have a wonderful week.  *Hugs* you tight.~Kimberly

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 04:53 AM · On: Gone In A Flash

Yeah yeah hiding under your desk ... coward. Aaggrrrr do you need to ask what we want !??? * sigh * Post whatever you have !! NOW. You're unbelievable ... please ... Kim ... please

 

* hugs *

 



Author's Response:

Marny, my friend, you always make me laugh with your comments; thank you for that!  LOL!  Okay.....you persuaded me! But I still want to write a little more of it first, though.  (Hiding back under desk now...).  It's kind of hard to write under here, but I DO have a laptop, though - ha!  I'll do my best to get the rest written and posted tonight - don't want to risk having a contract put out on my head (Just kidding....I think...!).  *Hugs* back to you, my friend...

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 04:31 AM · On: Gone In A Flash

Shut the door!!!  you have to post the next chapter soon.  the others can wait a little longer.  i am twisting your arm.  can you feel it.  worry, worry, worry, justin in the fire, brian out in the snow with trickey, and gus out in the cold.  my god girl--this is horrible.  will the fd get to the house before it too catches fire.  i know they will come through this look what they have endured in the past.  it is just so hard to read and be left waiting.  you really are something.  your writing is so good.  pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese more soon. lol



Author's Response:

Ooh....you know just how to twist my arm, too, with flattery - ha!  Seriously, thank you for the kind words, Linda; I am so honored by them.  I am working hard on finishing the next chapter right now; I will do my best to get it finished and posted tonight.  Thank you for reading and for the comments, my friend.:)

Reviewer: Sam (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 04:27 AM · On: Gone In A Flash

Sorry, I meant to say I really want the *next chapter. I was thinking about something else when I wrote that.



Author's Response:

Hi, Sam!  That's okay - I know what you meant.:)  And I appreciate the kind feedback; thank you!  I will be working hard on trying to finish it up tonight.  I'm *this* close.:)  Thanks for letting me know you're enjoying the story - I appreciate that more than you will ever know.:)  *Hugs* ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Sam (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 04:11 AM · On: Gone In A Flash

I really want the right chapter. I know with you nothing bad will happen permenently, but I still don't like the suspense.

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 04:10 AM · On: Gone In A Flash

Are you kidding me? Of course I want the next chapter RIGHT NOW....lol

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Mariana, for letting me know!  I will do my best to get it done tonight and get it posted.  Thanks for reading.:)

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2012 02:44 PM · On: Reunion at Britin

Lol... the "Gus" card. I think parents at one point or another pull the cards out... Good to see tricky is still around and being the best pal dog ever! I am forever a "Brian gal" and will always come to his defence, so it's no surprise to see me cheering his on as he stands his ground. "...it all came down to the fact that Justin had chosen not to be completely honest with him, and that hurt.  A lot." Big badass Brian needs to be stroked a couple of time and all will be well. Good to see Justin at the manor... I can't wait for make up sex by the way :o)



Author's Response:

Hi, Yvee!  Thanks so much for the comments!  You're all caught up now.:)  I will be updating this one very shortly. 

Yes, I'm glad to have the boys together again, too, so they can work on their issues.  I think we all know that despite outer appearances, Brian feels things very deeply - it just manifests itself it different ways for him.  He won't just give in too easily, but we ALSO know that Justin will break through that shell shortly (along with some help from the 'other' boys at Britin - LOL!).

Thanks again for reading and for the feedback - that means a lot to me.:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2012 02:23 PM · On: Finishing Up Loose Ends

Okay! You have done it... I forgive Him. Damn, you have a way with words that just gets me teary eyed everytime... Glad to see Justin undestanding of Brian's actions and view/feelings. I feel bad for wanting to hang him when I read the end of the last chapter :-/ Brian will forgive Justin, no worries there. Hoops will need to be jumped, but I've got a feeling they will work it out :o)



Author's Response:

LOL!  Thank you for the compliment about my writing - that makes me very happy.:)  At least Justin didn't take too long before he realized what he had done and he DID try to correct it; too late, though - I see some more angst coming up first. Something tells me that Justin's not going to keep getting whipped, though; I think he's going to start pushing back just a little.  I mean, a man can only take so much whipping (well, I guess it depends on what KIND of 'whipping;' after all, he seemed to get off on spanking - ha!).  Thanks again for the comments, my friend.:)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2012 07:31 AM · On: Reunion at Britin

aren't  justin and brian grown ass mens I don't get it??????????????????

Oh I do like this story it's just don't get me wrong I guess you did I can 't stand their nosy friends that all.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for clarifying that.:)  It was okay if you didn't - everyone has their own likes and dislikes.:)  But I admit I do feel better that you like the story, though.  I know writers are supposed to have thick skins, but mine never quite grew to the right thickness apparently  - ha!  I actually agree with you about the girls, BTW; Lindsay always bothered me how she stepped in and pressured Justin to go to New York.  I'm still not convinced he really wanted to do that.  Too often I think we do things because others expect us to do them and not because it's what we really wanted. 

It remains to be seen just how much information Justin will give them...I happen to think it's best kept between the two of them.:) 

Thank you again for taking the time to clarify your comments.  I do appreciate that and I hope you will continue to enjoy the additional chapters.~Kimberly

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 03:50 AM · On: Reunion at Britin

This actually made me cry a little because my mother's dog Gretchen died of cancer this past Tuesday. She couldn't do tricks like Gus's Tricky, but his other personality traits reminded me strongly of her, especially when she was still a puppy. Actually, Gretchen was 10 + years old and still acted like a puppy most of the time. RIP, my dear Gretchen. In a strange way, this chapter almost feels like a tribute to her and makes me feel a heck of a lot better, because I loved that dog. So thanks for that, Kim.  :)

Other than that, lovely chapter. Can't wait for Brian and Justin to come to their senses and fall into each other's arms, forever happy and in love.

I love this story.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

I'm SO sorry about Gretchen, Vin!  I'm a huge animal lover, especially of dogs, so I know only too well the heartbreak of losing a beloved member of the family.  I've never had kids, so each dog I've had has become my surrogate child, and it makes it all the more sorrowful when you have to say goodbye to them.  So I know only too well how that is.  My thoughts and prayers are with your family; I know exactly what it feels like!  I'm sure she brought a lot of pleasure to both of you.:)

I'm happy this chapter seemed to help a little; perhaps it's Gretchen's way of telling you that she is at the Rainbow Bridge, happy and waiting for both of you to eventually see her again.  (I know - I'm a sap - but I can't help it.  That's the way I like to think I will see my dogs again, too...). 

Thank you for the lovely comments, my friend.  I won't let the two stubborn partners stay apart for too long. And Tricky will have a hand indirectly in reuniting them eventually.  Take care and thanks again.:)

 

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2012 03:31 AM · On: Reunion at Britin

Justin.  He sighed.  Damn little shit

LMAO!

No, it all came down to the fact that Justin had chosen not to be completely honest with him, and that hurt.  A lot.  He had thought they had long passed the point where he had to worry about whether Justin could be trusted. 

I thought Brian had gotten over it by the time Justin arrived. That was a sad reuion.

This story gets better with each chapter! I hope it doesn't end soon.

 



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Yes, Brian can be quite stubborn, can't he?  I think Justin may be about ready to start pushing back, though; we know he can be stubborn as well as feisty himself!  My personal favorite line in the story, BTW,  is the one about the flesh-colored paint; I could definitely see Brian saying that in my head - ha!  Thank you as always, Sweetie, for taking the time to read and especially comment.  You're so faithful about that and I really DO appreciate it. 

As far as it ending, I'm not sure how much longer it will go.  Perhaps two, three chapters?  That would be my guess.  I'm so glad you're enjoying it, though, and I will definitely be updating very soon.  Thank you again for all your support of my stories.:)~Kimberly

 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2012 03:15 AM · On: Finishing Up Loose Ends

Well, something had blown up all right - or SOMEONE – and as he stood there fingering the hard plastic card in his hand he realized he had no one to blame but himself.  

 

That is so true. He should have had more faith in Brian. It's all Justin's fault!



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Thanks for reading and for the comments.  Yes, I think Justin realizes now that he should have just told Brian the whole story.  And he deserves a little of the cold shoulder as a result.  But I have a feeling eventually he's going to get aggravated by Brian's refusal to forgive his half-truth and he may just start pushing back just a little.  Brian's not the only one that 'has balls;' or should I say 'ball' - ha!  I will be updating this story very soon - thank you for reading and taking the time to leave me feedback - I appreciate that.:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 01:14 AM · On: Reunion at Britin

  Great to see Tricky again!  You describe him so well that I feel like I got to play with him myself.  Brian grudge holding is delicious.  Justin has some major mending to do!  It will be an interesting visit for the girls!



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie!  Thank you as always for taking the time to read and comment!  I think Tricky and Brian's relationship will be an evolving one during the visit; and Tricky may just play a part in bringing these two stubborn boys together.:)  Thank you for all the support on my stories - I appreciate that so much.  I will get this updated just as soon as I can.  I need to at least get "Parent Trap" updated first, though; I'm working on that one now. Thanks again.:P)~Kimberly

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 12:41 AM · On: Reunion at Britin

thanks, it's wonderful.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Dear, for taking the time to always read and review.  I hope things in your life will take a decided upturn soon.:)  Take care, my friend.:)

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2012 12:00 AM · On: Reunion at Britin

i saw where he was playing in RED.  is that the musical or is a different one.  i'm not sure.  wish i could go, but the coffers need replenishing.  family had some money issues, so i have to refill my back-up.  i really would love to see him. i am such a fan. tsc was good this week.  love, love, love that man.  he is so beautiful looks like he has kept his same shape.  gorgeous. lol



Author's Response:

Yes, that's the play.:)  I can't remember where exactly you are located, but I thought it might be close by.  I would LOVE to go, but I would have to do it by myself and I know nothing about that area so it would be kind of intimidating to me.  It would be great if we could maybe meet and go to the play together, though, wouldn't it?  Maybe you AND the peeps, too.:)  I would just come up for a weekend and then go back home.  I think the scariest part is just traveling around alone, though.  Last time in D.C. I met another fan at the airport, we rode in together and stayed together, so it was a lot less scary.  I guess I can be patient, though, if I know I'll be seeing him again in June anyway.:)  Did I tell you that I actually bought an issue of "Rage" so I can have Gale and Randy autograph it?  I am officially obsessed now!  Ha!


And yes, I saw Gale in the ep of TSC the other night.  He was featured a LOT in that one - yum!  He is SO gorgeous!  I still think he doesn't quite shine in any show as much as he did in QAF, though.  He almost seems too soft-spoken and less commanding in his subsequent roles for some reason.  I think the role of Brian was so perfect for him!  Did you know he's in the latest issue of TV Guide magazine?  I think that is where he stated he would like to do a comedy; I would LOVE to see that!  Talk to you later.:) 

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2012 10:22 PM · On: Reunion at Britin

not surprising the non-welcome he received.  grow up brian and talk about it.  he is such a jealous baby.  i'm sure justin can tame the savage beast or is it breast once again.  good chapter.  brian will eventually come to like tricky as he does most thing thrown his way.  am feeling better, will go back on monday.  i hate being sick, especially when i take extreme care to be well.  talked to peeps on the phone.  they send their love. lol



Author's Response:

Hi, Dear!  Sorry to hear that you're still under the weather, but I'm glad you're doing better!  Yes, Brian is being a jerk, isn't he?  But not to fear - something tells me that Justin will soon have enough of that treatment and let him have it!  And something will happen to straighten out Brian's priorities in a hurry.:) You're correct, too, BTW - something tells me that Brian and Tricky will continue to bond.

Thanks so much for all your support, lindc.  It helps so much to offset some of the negativity at times and helps motivate me to keep going when I doubt myself.:)

BTW - how close are you to New Brunswick, NJ?  I would LOVE to go see Randy in his new play next month, but I don't think it will happen.:(  Just wondering if you might be going, though.  Take care and talk to you later.:)

 

Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 08:30 PM · On: Reunion at Britin

I loved this chapter! Starting with the wonderful first paragraph  - you captured Brian's mood perfectly. Lots of great lines too - my favorite was Brian asking if Justin ran out of flesh colored acrylic. I just had to laugh at that! Now the waiting for the next chapter. Hopefully a short wait?



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! I'm so glad you liked this chapter!  I really need to update "Parent Trap" desperately first!  But I promise as soon as I get done with that I will update this one again.  With it being centered around Christmas I feel like I need to finish this one up earlier than some of the rest; hopefully my readers will understand.  And once it's finished I will have more time to devote to all the others.  Plus the Elvis story should be wrapped up very soon, also.  Thanks so much all the wonderful feedback and for reading!:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 07:03 PM · On: Reunion at Britin

OMG I want to slap Brian stop being a jealous petulant baby. LOL next chapter please :-)



Author's Response:

Ha!  I have a feeling Justin may feel that way at some point, too!  I will obviously be featuring the two warring lovers much more in the next chapter.  Thanks so much for reading and commenting, Chris!  *Hugs*

Kimberly

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 03:19 PM · On: Reunion at Britin

Who are you trying to fool, Mr Kinney...that blonde is the one that you never can resist...it won't be long now...you'll be back in each others arms...

can't wait...thanks friend for another great story

loving life,

Charle

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Charle!  You're so wonderful about reviewing - I've noticed you do that for a lot of writers. THANK YOU for that, because as a writer yourself I know you realize how much that means to me.:)  Yes, we all know it's just temporary, but then I get to write about the make-up sex afterward (wink, wink...).  Thanks for reading and for all your support, my friend.  I really do appreciate it.:)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2012 01:44 PM · On: Reunion at Britin

aren't  justin and brian grown ass mens I don't get it??????????????????



Author's Response:

Well, I suppose that doesn't mean they can't act like babies, too, at times under the right situation.  I'm not sure if you're indicating that you don't care for this story in your comment, but if you are, I thank you for giving it a chance anyway. That's the beauty of this site - if one story isn't your cup of tea, there's always a different 'flavor.'

Reviewer: ScorpioDream (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 01:34 PM · On: Reunion at Britin

I want to thank you responding to each of my reviews! I love hearing that my input on a chapter is helpful! Now, this chapter was very interesting! I loved the interaction between Tricky and Brian and the end with Justin was great! Well, no it wasn't great that they were acting that way, but I could feel Brian's anger and Justin's embarrasment. I really liked the way we got to see into Brian's thoughts throughout the chapter. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response:

Thank you, Stephanie, for all your kind comments and your consistent support.  It takes a while to comment to reviews, but those that take the time to leave comments are very special to me, so I figure the least I can do is take the time to respond in kind.:)  We all kind of knew that Brian wouldn't just sweep Justin up into his arms as soon as they met, but we ALSO know that he can't resist for long.  There's that alpha male for you! (Sigh...)  BAD Brian, BAD!!  (Maybe we should try the same tone of voice with him that Gus is using on Tricky - LOL!)

I'm glad I could finally get the boys at least back in the same house.  Now I can work on getting them back together!  Thanks so much for all the comments, Stephanie.  It's very encouraging to me when I'm feeling insecure. (Which happens a lot! - ha!).  *Hugs*

~Kimberly

Reviewer: Mediana (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2012 01:15 PM · On: Reunion at Britin

Sorry, but Brian is acting likea an ass :) Thanks for the update. I really enjoy this story.



Author's Response:

Hi, Mediana! Thank you for taking the time to comment.:)  And I agree; I think he's milking Justin's guilt for all it's worth.  Something tells me that Justin's about reached the end of his rope, too. I mean, the guy has tried to bend over backward to apologize, and Brian also has a role in some blame here, too.  I WILL say that something's going to reach a head soon where Brian in particular will have to figure out where his real priorities lie and that will help get the boys back on track.:)  Thanks for the feedback and for reading - I really appreciate that.:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: ScorpioDream (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 10:41 AM · On: Finishing Up Loose Ends

Oh! So much emotion! I wanted to cry when Justin got back to the hotel and found Brian had already gone. That was so heartbreaking! Like always I'm looking forward to the next chapter! You did very well on this chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you, Stephanie!  You're so good about reading and reviewing - I really thank you for that.:)  I've been feeling a little on the lonely side lately.:( 

I have the next chapter written, and I'm just waiting for a friend of mine to look it over.  It should be up either tonight or tomorrow, and features the triumphant return of Tricky at last!  (Along with Gus and the Munchers, too...).  Justin also makes an appearance, but it is a rather short one, sad to say.  Suffice to say, though, that he will definitely be featured greatly in the chapter after that as the two boys work through their problems.:) 

I'm so glad you're enjoying the story, my friend.  Thank you again for taking the time to leave me feedback - that is the only confirmation I have that anyone is actually enjoying what I write, and it means so much to me:)  Hope you have a wonderful weekend, Sweetie.  *Hugs* to you.:)

Kimberly

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2012 12:02 AM · On: Finishing Up Loose Ends

WOW I love a jealous Brian.  This story is great. I'm so happy Justin is making a name for himself as an artist.  Can't wait for the make up sex....lol .



Author's Response:

Hi, Mariana!  Thank you for your kind words.:)  Now why would you think there might be 'makeup sex?' (wink, wink)....  I should be posting the next chapter very soon - I have most of it written already.  The story will be focusing more on Britin now and the famous Tricky will finally be making an encore appearance.  Thanks so much for the feedback, Mariana - that is so meaningful to me.:) ~Kimberly

Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 08:26 PM · On: Finishing Up Loose Ends

This was one of those chapters that just left me wanting more. Right away!



Author's Response:

(Sigh...) I know, but it was necessary to set up the next ones.:)  I promise the subsequent chapters will be more centered on Brian and Justin.  The next one, in fact, will reintroduce Gus and Tricky particularly to the mix at Britin, as well as Justin, although he will show up toward the end.  But now I can start working on getting the boys back together.  Thanks so much for reading and commenting - I really appreciate that!  I hope you will continue to enjoy the story.:)  *Hugs*

Kimberly

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2012 11:57 AM · On: Finishing Up Loose Ends

what a beautiful picture.  this chapter was so sad.  poor justin-damned if he do damned if he don't.  he must remember who he is dealing with in keeping that info away from him.  brian has a big jealous streak, he would have been jealous even if jus had told him, but maybe not quite so violent.  am home sick.  had a flu shot and got a touch of the flu.  go figure.  hospital gave them free so we all got one-but i'm the only one sick at the moment.  got to take meds and try to get some sleep. lol



Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend! So sorry to hear you're under the weather!  Obviously flu shots aren't always a hundred percent effective, are they?  Sorry to hear that you were the exeption!  You're very sweet to take the time to read and especially review when you're not feeling well, so I thank you for that.:)  I hope you are feeling better very soon.:)  I'm sending you a big *hug* and a big bowl of chicken soup!  I should have the next chapter of this up hopefully no later than tomorrow.  Hope you can some rest in the meantime.:)

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 11:18 AM · On: Finishing Up Loose Ends

Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you, my friend, for the encouragement.  I really appreciate that.:)  I'm working on the next chapter right now - probably won't be posted, though, until Saturday.  But it DOES feature Gus and Tricky at Britin (finally!) and Justin's appearance, although he comes in toward the end of it.  The next chapter, though, obivously will focus more on the boys trhying to reconcile.  Thanks again for reading and especially leaving feedback. *Hugs* to you.~Kimberly

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 07:48 AM · On: Finishing Up Loose Ends

Poor Justin!  He's so sorry for the way he handled things.  I loved his frantic dash to catch Brian, "just in time to see the tail lights of a taxicab pulling away" Ack!



Author's Response:

Hi, Kim!  Thank you for reading, my friend.:) Yes, you probably had an inkling I wouldn't make it quite that easy on him.:)  I almost have the next chapter ready where Brian has returned to Britin.  Gus and the 'famous' Tricky are about to arrive with the girls, with Justin not far behind.  I hope you will continue to enjoy the story - thank you for taking the time to comment; I really appreciate that.:) *Hugs*

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 06:49 AM · On: Finishing Up Loose Ends

Thanks for the hugs and kind words.

 

A few words from me ... Yes I did read it ... poor Justin * sighs *

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie; thank you for taking the time to read and comment, especially in light of everything going on in your life at the moment.  I will continue to keep you in my thoughts and prayers, my friend.  I'm sending you a big *hug.*

Reviewer: megawords19 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2011 11:55 PM · On: Trust is a Two-Way Street

Hi,


 


I hope you had a great holiday!! I'm glad to be back and have the ability to read and review this latest chapter. I hope you don't mind if this review has a bit of a critique in regards to Brian's physicality.


 


In the show I saw Brian's reactions very differently than in this chapter.


 


I only associate Brian with demonstrating or threatening physical violence when the lives of the people he loves are in serious jeopardy e.g. Brian hitting Hobs with the bat just after Justin was attacked, and Brian being angry at the doctor when Michael needed blood after the bombing.


 


When it came to Brian coping with a perceived or actual betrayal and/or personal pain he tended to turn the punishment in on himself and/or in private. E.g. over indulgence in drinks and drugs, wearing the scarf after the bashing, hiring the  blond sex worker etc.


 


I'm glad you had Brian at least attempt to call Justin out on his not so innocent part in all this. Justin knew he was doing wrong by not telling Brian, otherwise he would not have felt  conflicted and apprehensive up to this point. I just hope he can get that through his thick artist's skull sooner rather than later. Returning to his work like that at the end of the chapter was such a cop out. I hate seeing Brian going away like a kicked puppy.


 


I hope you don't mind this review. I am a HUGE fan of your writing and I'm looking forward to Justin and Brian's makeup.


 


~ Megawords19


 



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - thank you for that thoughtful review.:)  As far as Brian goes, there WAS the one time where Michael made the comment in Season 3 at Mel & Lindsay's party - something to the effect that they would have been better off to have left Justin for dead in the parking garage at the prom and Brian punched him out, so there WAS at least moment in the series where Brian used that same outlet to express his anger.  So there is a little precedence for it, although I agree with you.  Normally when he was in some sort of emotional pain, he tended to demonstrate that by punishing himself - either drinking too much, taking too many drugs, using one trick after another, etc.  I might suggest, though, that over the course of time as his feelings deepened for Justin that he could possibly manifest his emotional distress in this manner.  And I DO think it was typical of him to speak first and think later.  Many a time he had hurt Justin by what he said or did, only to regret it later.

As far the 'kicked puppy' part, I think I would respectfully disagree on that.  Brian DID point out that Justin fucked up and he threw the card down  in anger.  He is hoping for Justin to 'man up' and admit that he was wrong, which I happen to agree that he was.  He stomped out, not passively like he had his tail between his legs.  At least that is what I meant to convey.  I wrote that he 'tromped' out the door and banged it open, and 'spat' out his words to Justin.  I don't think that's the sign of someone weak at all.  I think rather that he had made a somewhat romantic gesture (just like when he bought the house 'for his prince') to spend some time with his partner and was placing the onus on JUSTIN to make amends and apologize, not the other way around.  Hence the "Trust is a Two-Way Street" name for the chapter.  Justin should have had faith in Brian's love for him and trusted him that he would maybe not be happy about his newest project, but that he would understand nonetheless.

I appreciate the time you took to phrase your comments and take it in the manner in which it was given.:)  I DO hope, though, that you will give the next chapter a chance where Justin realizes shortly after Brian left that he made a big mistake.  Thank you for taking the time to read and especially comment!~Kimberly

 

Reviewer: BROODING BRIAN (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2011 11:03 PM · On: Trust is a Two-Way Street

SORRY I HAVE BEEN VERY REMISS IN MY REVIEWING.  I GOT BLASTED FROM A CERTAIN CO-WORKER WHO SHALL REMAIN NAMELESS.  THIS STORY IS A BIT DIFFERENT HAVING MR. STUD BE THE JEALOUS ONE.  JUSTIN WEARS HIS HEART ON HIS SLEEVE, BUT MR. KINNEY TRIES IN HIS PROTECTED WAY TO BE NONCHALANT ABOUT MOST THINGS AFFECTING HIS LIBIDO.  NOW HE HAS TO GET BACK IN JUSTIN'S GOOD GRACES AND BACK IN HIS BED.  I'M SURE YOU WILL WEAVE THIS PATH IN YOUR OWN SPECIAL WAY.  THINGS CRAZY HERE.  SUPPOSED TO BE SOMEWHAT QUIET OVER THE HOLIDAYS, BUT I THINK THEY DIDN'T GET THE MESSAGE.  IT'S OK THOUGH PEOPLE NEED HELP ALL THE TIME.  SOON OUR GROUP WILL BE BACK TO 100% STRENGTH WHEN LEE COMES BACK.  I GUESS AROUND JAN 15 WILL BE OUR DAY TO CELEBRATE.  TAKE CARE AND HAVE A SAFE NEW YEARS.



Author's Response:

Hi, Brian!  Yes, lindc can be quite demanding, can't she?  LOL!  She takes such good care of me.:)  I'm honored that you took the time out of your busy schedule to review, my friend.  I know how dedicated and compassionate you are all toward your jobs, but it WOULD have been nice for you to have had a little down time this week.  I'm delighted you had a chance to read this latest chapter, though.

I'm beginning to think that Justin is the one who needs to do the groveling this time; yes, Brian did fly off the handle in an appropriate manner, but if Justin had been honest with him the results would have at least been less violent - ha!  In the next episode, Justin will need to find a way to make it up to his partner, but it will be quite chilly for a little while at Britin.  The next chapter will wrap up the NYC part and move both men back to their home for Christmas Eve. 

I just posted the next chapter of "Paper Heart's Killer."  It's more of what I guess you would call a transitional chapter until Carruthers is questioned in the next instalment, but I hope you get a chance to check it out, too.  Thank you again for all your support and encouragement this past year with my stories - that means so much to me.  I hope you and your friends and family all have a safe and wonderful New Year's.  *Hugs* ~Kimberly

Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2011 09:07 AM · On: Trust is a Two-Way Street

Sorry I haven't been reviewing for a bit.  I went away for awhile, then went to see some friends to hang out.  Am starting to get my so called life back a little.  I guess baby steps will eventually become giant steps.  This chapter was really great.  Brian punching Maarten was priceless--you go Brian.  He was trying to protect his own, very understandable.  I think most men would react the same way, gay or straight if they thought their partner was being compromised male or female.  Brian has a really jealous streak that is really cute to me.  I think Justin should have been more forthcoming with his plans, but the alternative makes a better story with more angst.  Good chapter.  I guess he will be home for Christmas.  That will be a great chapter to see how the eventual make-up will happen.  Will be waiting.  I hope my fav will be coming soon.  luv 2 u.



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie!  So great to hear that you're out and about!  I have no doubt that you will come back bigger and better than before!  I'm sure you're itching to return to work, and I know they're excited about your return as well.:)  I couldn' resist Brian's jealousy coming to the forefront, but I agree - Justin should have just told him the whole story and it would have saved a lot of angst and grief along the way.  But you know how much I love to write that into the story so I can have them make up later! 

I will be updating this one very shortly, because being a holiday story I want to wrap it up quickly.  But I'm working on the next chapter of "Paper Hearts" right now, and then it's onto the Elvis story.  And then Parent Trap!  So it may be a little while before the smear campaign returns in "Heart's Desire," but I'm typing as fast as my fingers will allow - LOL!  Thanks for all your encouragement and support this past year, Lee - I wish you nothing but the very best in 2012!  *Hugs* to you, my friend!:)

Reviewer: Kym (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2011 08:16 AM · On: Trust is a Two-Way Street

OH OH!  A fighting Brian!!  A little out of character, although he did hit Mike once in qaf.  He'll go the long mile for Justin, but needs to think before he acts.  Poor Maarten didn't know what hit him.  Good thing he and Jacob are understanding.  The boys are going to have to come to a make-up session but they are quite stubborn to concede defeat as they both think they are right.  I think Justin should have taken the plunge and told him what he was doing.  It would have at least been out in the open to fight about first.  Great chapter==will be waiting for updates, hopefully soon.



Author's Response:

Hi, Kym!  Thank you for the thoughtful comments! I agree with you - Brian still wouldn't have liked it - but at least Justin had been upfront about it (no pun intended - LOL!) and if Brian then went off the handle it would have all been HIS fault alone.  I don't think Justin really understands how much his leaving him for Ethan tore at his heart. 

And yes, both men are incredibly stubborn, aren't they?  But I think a little boy and his trusty dog (cue theme from "Lassie" here - ha) will help to set them straight.  I will be wrapping up the NYC segment in the next chapter and Justin will return to Britin as he promised Gus.  Then I will get to work on these boys making up (and we all know the best way for them  to 'make up,' don't we - yum!).  Thanks for reading so many of my stories, Kym, and for your continuing encouragement.  I am so grateful for that!  I hope you will enjoy reading them for a long time to come.:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 03:42 AM · On: Trust is a Two-Way Street

That was terrific!  What a dramatic way for Brian to find out! LOL  Now I feel sorry for the guy. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Kim!:)  I know - I feel sorry for  Brian after the trouble he went to and the hopes he had of surprising his partner.  They really both mucked it up, didn't they?  And they're SO stubborn!  It seems their relationship, though, has been full of misunderstandings and unspoken words, so this shouldn't be inconceivable.  Don't worry, though - I will take care of them with the help of a certain little boy and "Cujo!"  LOL!  Thanks for all the support, Kim!  I will get this updated very shortly.  I'm working on the next chapter of "Paper Hearts Killer" first.:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2011 12:27 AM · On: Trust is a Two-Way Street

"Cocking his right arm back, Brian promptly delivered a sound punch to the man’s chin as Maarten reeled backward in pain."


This chapter did not disapoint.


Brian is hot headed when it comes to Justin and not willing to admit to a mistake easily. The impass at the end was still disheatening, though. I wonder how Justin could paint after that.



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Thanks as always for reading and for your thoughtful comments.:)  I think both of them share blame for what happened.  And I think soon they will realize that.  I chose the chapter title for a good reason - trust IS a two-way street, and they both need to concentrate on trusting in their love for each other.:)

I hated to end this chapter on such a down note,  but I can assure you it will be temporary.  And yes, I agree - after that I think it would be hard for Justin to paint, but since he has most of it done and only the background left that will help.  I plan on showing the completed photo of his painting in the next chapter, BTW.  I should wrap up the NYC segment in Ch. 6, also, and then the action will be moving to Britin where someone's little boy and his dog will have their work cut out for them!  Thanks for all the feedback on my stories this past year; I am very grateful for your support!:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: December 26, 2011 10:05 PM · On: Trust is a Two-Way Street

OMG!!  i love jealous brian.  i can see and understand how he would jump to conclusions tho--it was laid out perfectly.  good job.  now he has to eat a lot of crow before justin will calm down and be forgiving.  am off for a few days to get some much needed rest.  this place is crazy and zoo-like.  it's usually fairly calm for the holidays, but not this year.  hope you had a nice, peaceful christmas.  now you can let yourself have fun for new years.  we all are going out to celebrate and have fun.  lol



Author's Response:

Hi, lindc!  Glad you'll be able to take a few days off!  I'm sure you could definitely use it.:)  Christmas was nice - spent it with the extended family on Christmas Eve, so yesterday was fairly quiet.  I'm kind of a wet blanket when it comes to New Year's Eve celebrations - LOL!  But I know next year will already be an exciting one because of the convention in June!  Can't wait! 

As far as the story goes, I think both boys need to do some apologizing - Brian for not trusting that Justin wouldn't be unfaithful to him, and Justin for not having enough trust in Brian's love for him that he would understand about Maarten.  That's not to say that a certain brunet still would not have been jealous and come to New York to find out for himself, but at least Justin could have let him meet Maarten and hopefully reassure him that it was all innocent.  Now they both need to do some major apologizing, but which stubborn man will break first?  I'll sure have fun with them in the meantime, though - LOL!

I want to take the opportunity to thank you, Brian, Lee, and all the others that you've sent my way for your support.  There have been times when I have doubted my ability to write and you have always been there, along with a lot of my other readers, to encourage me.  For you and those who have gone out of their way to do that, you have my heartfelt appreciation.  I hope you have a fantastic New Year's celebration with your friends and a wonderful 2012!  I will look forward to all your wonderful comments in the future.  *Big hug*  Kimberly

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2011 09:00 PM · On: Trust is a Two-Way Street

oh - what a deliciously naughty place to leave us - not for the first time in your writing you have left us poor voyeurs hanging with several possible outcomes - some more enticing than others...it's a very good thing we know that you love our boys as much as we do and they won't be estranged for long

great job as always

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response:

Hi,Charle! Hope you had a wonderful Christmas!  Yes, I know - I'm a very bad girl!  But I was already up to about 11,000 words and I know I'm overdue for my update on "Paper Hearts Killer."  I AM working on that one, BTW, for those waiting to read it - I should be posting that in the next few days. 

You know me well, though - you know I won't leave them estranged for long - in fact, I see them being reunited at Britin in the next chapter, but I won't just throw them together - it's still going to be quite frosty there for a while until a certain little boy and his dog can help to change that!  Thanks for all your encouragement with my stories, Charle - I noticed consistently review a lot of them, not just mine, and I'm sure all the other writers that you take the time to do that for appreciate it as well.  *Hugs*~Kimberly

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2011 05:27 PM · On: Trust is a Two-Way Street

Uuhhhoowww and they are both so stubborn !

Great chapter.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

(Sigh...) I know - such ridiculously stubborn men and SO in love with each other!!  Thank you not scolding me over the cliffhanger - ha!  I WILL get back to them shortly - in the meantime I have to take a detour over to "Paper Hearts Killer" and finish that chapter up first.  Hope you had a nice Christmas with the girls, my friend.  And I hope you're still considering coming to Cologne - I noticed it's very close to the border of the Netherlands (hint, hint...).  *Hugs*  Kimberly

Reviewer: ScorpioDream (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2011 02:33 PM · On: Trust is a Two-Way Street

Whew! Excitement! I can't believe...well, actually I can...Brian punched Maarten! Now our boys are fighting! Oh! What a delicious conflict! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Great work!

Author's Response:

Hi, Stephanie!  I'm glad you like the scuffling - ha!  Brian just loses it where his man's concerned, doesn't he?  At least he didn't go too overboard, though....although both men share part of the blame for the outcome, I think. 

In the next chapter, Justin will finish up his project and, mainly due to his promise to Gus (at least that's what he tells himself), he WILL come home for Christmas.  But it will take a while to thaw out the boys' chill...but then that makes it all the more delicious when things heat back up (yum)...Thanks for the comments, my frend; hope you had a great Christmas!~Kimberly

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2011 02:31 PM · On: Trust is a Two-Way Street

Oh, noes! I don't like the boys being mad at each other right before Christmas... :(  I can't wait to read the next chapter where they work it out and are happy together again.

Good update though - love the action packed angst!  :)

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Vin!  I know - I'm evil.:)  But I think we all kind of saw that coming.  Don't fret - Justin will keep his word and come home for Christmas, and they will get straightened out.:)  Thanks as always for your comments, my friend - hope you had a great Christmas yourself!~Kimberly

Reviewer: Bridget (Anonymous) · Date: December 26, 2011 01:46 PM · On: Trust is a Two-Way Street

Oh Brian and his pride haha I am very glad to get my confrontation.  I get the feeling you love Justin as much as I do.  He is my favorite character actually.  I hope Justin realizes Brian got so jealouse cause he loves him so much.  Keep up your great writing.  I always love your stories.



Author's Response:

Hi, Bridget!  Hope you and your family had a wonderful Christmas!  I know it's 'wrong,' but I DO enjoy tormenting the boys just a bit - LOL!  And yes, you're correct.  In the long run I suppose I do identify more with Justin's character than Brian.  I always adored the protective side of Brian toward Justin and could identify with Justin's vulnerability, sensitive and romantic side.  I feel both of them are to blame for what happened here, but we all knew a showdown was inevitable.  It also shows what happens when you are not totally upfront with your partner, even if the reason might seem valid.

Thank you for your compliment about my writing - I appreciate that more than you know!  You're very kind.  And thank you for your ongoing support over the past several months - as long as others enjoy what I write I will be more than delighted to keep writing them!  Take care and hope you have a wonderful 2012! *Hugs* ~Kimberly

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2011 01:04 PM · On: Trust is a Two-Way Street

Knew something along these line was going to happen... But I'm sorry, I totally agree with Brian on this one. Yes, Brian shouldn't have acted the way he did, but Justin's rational/defense is very childish. "And poor stupid Brian Kinney would have been none the wiser…" If He had just told Brian what was taking place, none of this would have happen. Yes, Brian would have been jealous, but he wouldn't have needed to go "spying" on Justin. They are in an adult committed relationship... “Is that the way you define honesty, Sunshine?” In my book, Justin better be getting ready for giving big apologies big time! Especially when they did talk about "no more secrets" between them and his loving partner just come in to surprise him and found him in someone else's penthouse with wine and lack of cloth. I guess trust is a two way street... More please :o)



Author's Response:

"Wine and lack of cloth" - LOVE that!  LOL!  Actually, I agree with you; Justin brought a lot of this on himself by not telling Brian from the start what was going on.  I think Brian would have still been jealous and may have found a way to come to NY to 'check' it out, but at least if he DID act irrationally then he would have had no one but himself to blame.  So I feel both men need to do some apologizing here.  Of course, they're both stubborn as hell, too, which won't help.  But it WILL make for an interesting time at Britin when they DO eventually make up.:) 

Thank you, Yvee, for reading and commenting on so many of my stories!  I appreciate that so much!  I will ge this story updated very shortly, but I have to complete the update on "Paper Hearts Killer" first.:)  Take care and hope you have a great New Year!~Kimberly

Reviewer: ScorpioDream (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2011 10:37 AM · On: Change of Plans

Great chapter! But you are keeping me in agonizing suspense about how Brian will react to the nude portrait! I need to know!!! Lol! I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Hi, Stephanie!  Hope you have a great Christmas!  I am hoping I might be able to post Ch. 5 tonight, and Mr. Kinney is definitely in this chapter.  I can tell though, that this story is not 'sweetness and light,' at least not yet.  He is not a happy man!  But I will get them straightened out shortly.  Keep your fingers crossed that I can get it posted tonight!  If not tonight, then it will definitely be tomorrow.  Thanks so much for reading and for all the support.:)  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: December 25, 2011 10:52 PM · On: Change of Plans

But he also knew that whenever Brian sensed some sort of perceived injustice being done to him, his protective mode came to the surface in a heartbeat.

 I love that about Brian. That is so sweet.

In the ten days that they had been meeting daily, Justin and Maarten had become good friends. 

This seemed to be mostly about the carmaraderie between Justin and Maarten which, surprisingly, I enjoyed. I have a feeling that friendship is going to cause problems in the near future, though.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend; I suspect you are correct; in fact, that friendship will be playing a big part in the next chapter when it is prompty misunderstood by a certain possessive brunet.:)  Thank you for reading and for the comments!  I have most of the next chapter already written, and am hoping to get it posted later today.:)  Thanks for all your support of my stories this past year, also; that is greatly appreciated and very motivating.:)

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2011 07:09 AM · On: Change of Plans

Why am I nervous that Justin didn't come clean?  I'm not worried about you  finishing this by Christmas – because I don't particularly want it to end! – But I hope Justin makes his deadline to be there with Brian, Gus and Tricky.  Merry Christmas Kimberly!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Kim!  You, too!:)  He WILL get home for Christmas because he promised Gus he would, but it WILL be a frosty reception for a while.  But a certain dog and his owner will be working overtime to get them back together.  Ah, the joys of makeup sex - LOL!  Thanks so much for taking the time to comment, my friend - I hope to post the next (tumultuous) chapter sometime tomorrow.:) 

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2011 06:34 AM · On: Baring Your Soul - And Something Else

Eek, nekkid Maarten!  LOL  Poor startled Justin!  Well, at least he seems pretty nice (and gorgeous, hee).  I appreciated his outrage on Justin’s behalf when he heard about the bashing.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I had to throw that in, didn't I?  And it's going to stir up some big-time trouble soon, too!  Maarten IS on the level, BTW - but it's still going to be big trouble.  I LOVE to make Brian jealous (hee,hee...).  Thanks for all the feedback!

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2011 06:12 AM · On: Ma Bell Never Thought About This!

Hot stuff!  “Brian was lying unclothed in the semi-darkness, his legs crossed at the ankles as he took a drag from his cigarette before drawling, “Stud to Princess, do you copy?”   Heheh, I loved that!



Author's Response:

Hi, Kim - Yeah, I thought that was pretty humorous if I do say so myself.:)  Sorry about the confusion in my first comment, BTW - I was referring to the next chapter that I was going to be posting tomorrow (Ch. 5).  Thanks for reading along on this one.:)

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2011 05:59 AM · On: An Unexpected Offer

I think Maarten's plan could mean trouble!



Author's Response:

Hi, Kim!  I have a feeling you're right!  (Oh, I forgot - I'm writing this - Yes, then it's going to be a problem - LOL!).  And it will explode in the next chapter, which I should have posted by tomorrow.:)  It's going to be very chilly at Britin for a while.  But I will get them straightened out, I promise! 

 

Thanks so much for leaving a comment, Kim!  And Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you, my friend!  I hope you will continue to enjoy my stories for a long time to come.:) 

Reviewer: Kym (Anonymous) · Date: December 25, 2011 05:38 AM · On: Change of Plans

OH! OH! We all know what his nibs is thinking and where he's going.  Could be dangerous for a blond haired angel.  Brian too worried about Jus working his hand too much and skype just not doing it for him.  Things are going to get angsy.  Can't wait.  This is a GOOD one.  Have a Merry and a Happy.



Author's Response:

Ha, ha!  You know me too well!  You're exactly right - in the next chapter a certain brunet decides he needs to see his partner in person and boy, does HE get a shock!  And what will happen when ANOTHER man's partner comes home early?  Uh, Oh....!  Can you spell T-R-O-U-B-L-E?  LOL!  But that's the fun part for me!  Throwing in some angst and then giving them a chance to make up later (makeup sex - yum...!). 

Thank you so much for your ongoing support of my stories, Kym!  Feedback makes me very happy.:)  I have most of the next chapter written and will post it shortly.  And for those readers interested in "Paper Hearts Killer," I haven't forgotten you!  I'm working on that one as well.  I hope you have a wonderful Christmas, Kym, and a peaceful and happy New Year!~Kimberly

Reviewer: megawords19 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2011 04:26 AM · On: Change of Plans

Hi,

Thank you for updating before I leave my computer for a few days.

It was nice to read an interaction between Martin and Jacob.

Now about Brian’s idea all I can say is UT-oh (I’m not sure if that is the right spelling for the sound but hopefully you know what I mean) Sorry I won’t be able to read and review the next chapter for a while. I wish you and yours a very safe and happy holiday!! Thank you for writing such GREAT fics that have made 2011 such a wonderful year for the fandom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Your friend,

Megawords19



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Thank you for those kind words!  I wish you the same!  And I will be looking forward to the continuation of your own stories as well.:) 

And, yes, I know EXACTLY what you're saying, and you're right - "Ut-Oh" it is!  LOL!  Brian's idea to 'surprise' his partner will turn around to be a surprise on HIM when he finds out who Justin's subject is, and it's coming up in the next chapter.  And it's not going to be pretty - ha!  But don't worry - I'll fix them up (eventually) with the help of a certain little boy and his trusty dog (why do I hear the theme from "Lassie" playing in my head at the moment?  Ha!).  Have a wonderful and safe Christmas and thank you again for your kindness - I am very honored as well as grateful.:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2011 01:25 AM · On: Change of Plans

Lovely chapter! Poor Brian, he's all alone.... wish I could transport myself into the story and keep him company (in a totally platonic way, of course, me being a woman and all... lol). And that concludes my silliness quotient for the day!

Can't wait to read the rest.

Merry Christmas!

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie!  Thank you for leaving me a comment over here.:)  Well, the boys will see each other in the next chapter finally, but I'm afraid it won't be a very happy reunion at first - as Ricky Ricardo might say, "Justin, you've got some 'splaining to do!"  Ha!  Yes, I would more than happy to "console" Brian, but I don't think he would really appreciate it.  Never fear - I will get them back on track eventually at Britin, but you know me!  I have to spread a little angst into the mix first.  Thanks again, Vin - Merry Christmas to you, my friend.:)

Reviewer: kfan (Anonymous) · Date: December 25, 2011 01:13 AM · On: Change of Plans

The anticipation of what is to come in this story is exciting and driving me crazy. I could almost skip time with the family just to read your story (almost=D&gt; applause=)) rolling on the floor). HAPPY HOLIDAYS!&gt;:D< big hug&lt:-P party 



Author's Response:

Ha!  LOVE the icons, by the way.:)  Thanks so much for those kind words.  If I'm ranked almost up there with Santa Claus, I truly am honored - LOL!  Yes, things are going to turn a little rocky in the next chapter.  The boys are about to have a little 'tiff,' and until a certain little boy and his dog intervene, it's going to be quite chilly at Britin soon and not because of the weather! 

I'm so glad you're enjoying this.  I will try my best to maybe get the next chapter posted later today, but our extended family celebrates Christmas the night before, so it might not be until tomorrow.  Thanks again for all the kind words - that means so much to me!  And I wish you a wonderful Christmas also!~Kimberly

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: December 25, 2011 01:13 AM · On: Change of Plans

I won't get to read this to the peeps til after Christmas.  They will probably read on their own, I know Lee will.  This is just the best story.  I don't care if it's finished by Christmas.  The holidays last til Jan for me.  We all want to wish you a Merry, Happy, and Healthy Christmas and New Year.  You will never know how much entertainment your stories have given us during the past year.  We have down days and these wonderful stories are here to pick us up and let us go on with our work.  Thank you so much for that.  I hope you can understand how much we all care about you. lol



Author's Response:

How wonderful your words are to me, my friend!  They mean so much to me.  I can assure you that as much as my stories might mean to YOU, your ongoing support of all my stories, as well as your encouragement means just as much to ME.  I, too, wish you, Brian, Lee, and all the others you have come over to read my stories the very best Christmas and a wonderful coming year.:)  Knowing that others are enjoying what I write means more than you and everyone else will ever know.  Thank you! 

I would so love to meet all of you one day.  I can't remember what part of the country you are in (Northeast, I think?) but if I ever get the chance I will make a point of stopping in to say hello.  Maybe Randy will be back at the Colonial next year after the convention.  If so, we'll have to try and arrange to go to the same show and out to dinner beforehand.  That would be so great!  Thanks again, my friend.  *Big* hug back to all of you.:)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2011 12:36 AM · On: Change of Plans

Oh my I knew you would ask that, that's why I've been hiding under the desk ... hmmm * think ... think *, another word for darling is lieverd or schatje (sweetheart).

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

LOL!  Okay, I think I'll pick the first one; no, on second thought I'll go with the second one, because the first one looks too much like "livered."  Ha!  Thanks for the help!  *Hugs*

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