Reviewer: rude (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2014 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 13: Who's Afraid of the Big Bad Ben!
Assister excellente histoire de la suite
Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2012 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 13: Who's Afraid of the Big Bad Ben!
Interesting...great update on the whole :)
Author's Response: Hi, RiCa20, love:
So glad to hear from you...missed you. And, I apologize for not checking out your work lately but I guess you can relate to me regarding the hectic demands of school. It's a miracle I find the time to even write here. In fact, although it's Saturday, after I answer these reviews, I'm off to school.
Thanks again for commmenting... and you know already how much I appreciate it.
And like Brian Kinney would say: Later!
Briana ~ Delores
Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2012 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 12: He's Being Difficult
loving this story and it's so creative too! thanks for updating it.. this story made me smile...a lot ! :)
Author's Response: Hi, RiCa20:
And, I smile back at you :).... and regardless of how gloomy of a subject matter I might write about, I try to put some humor and livliness into the story, to prevent anythng I write here from taking on an overall depressing mood. The originial QAF always played close attention to that as well, espeically with the little tidbits with Emmett, like the whacky Westside story bit... among other goofy scenes in the original series.
Talk to you again... later... Brianawriter ~ Delores
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2012 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 13: Who's Afraid of the Big Bad Ben!
I hope he gets his memory back soon. I don't like Brian portrayed as a small child amnesia or no amnesia.
Author's Response:
Hi Linda:
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment – it is so much appreciated.
“I don’t like Brian portrayed as a small child amnesia or no amnesia”… I thank you so much for that constructive criticism (and I mean that sincerely). I appreciate all readers who take the time to comment and as long as they are not cursing me out or being outright rude, I value their comment.
However, your comment really stands out with me (and in a very positive way). Because even though you say with convention that you don’t like my Brian, I’m still in awe of your criticism because still you stayed with the story (thus far) and I’ve noticed you gave me 5-stars regardless that you don’t like my Brian. That is saying a lot in a very positive way, and as an author, I live for comments such as yours.
Thanks again and I sincerely hope I can maintain your interest all the way to end; and I wouldn't mind one bit if you continued to give me feedback in the way of constructive criticism. I take any comment seriously in the way of trying to improve myself as a writer and to better entertain you guys (the readers at this site).
Oh, in response to the other part of your comment: “I hope [Brian] gets his memory back soon” The answer is yes, subsequent chapters have already been written, whereas Brian doesn’t stay amnesiac for long. So, I sincerely hope you stick around for that.
Thanks again for that great comment/compliment; and please overlook my long-windiness.
Briana ~ Delores
Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2012 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 11: Fantasy Brian (Part II)
HILARIOUS!
Author's Response: Lol! You like that scene, huh? Thanks for letting me, know. Talk to you later off to school now. Bye
Brianawriter ~ Delores
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2012 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 13: Who's Afraid of the Big Bad Ben!
ok, I am so hooked.....just waiting for the next update.
Loving it!!
Author's Response: Hi, Reader, dear:
'ok, I am so hooked... just waiting for the next update'... thank you so much for such flattery; and I'm still eating up your comments on the Ageless BK story, especially what you said about the ending. Thank you so much for that!
Off to school in a minute or two, so bye for now and I hope to update as soon as demands of the university allows me.
Briana ~ Delores
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2012 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 3
Although its a serious matter, Brian's amnesia. Its just adorable how he and Justin is interacting.
Author's Response: 'Its adorable how he and Justin is interacting.' Thanks for that, I try to come up with a variety of ways that Brian and Justin interact. I try hard not to appear to be writing the same story everytime. Although I do have a pattern of writinig about unacquainted love alot and about doubles. For some reason, many of my stories are about twins/dopplegangers/imposters, etc. Wow! I just thought of something... I'm Gemini... and that is the sign of the twin. Although I don't really believe in that kind of stuff... it sort of gets me thinking now, lol! I hope I don't sound too weird here.
Briana ~ Delores
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2012 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 13: Who's Afraid of the Big Bad Ben!
short but sweet kim
Author's Response: 'short but sweet,' thank you so much. However, we will know sooner than later how accurate Ben's thoughts/concerns are.
Thank you, Kim... for taking the time to comment so often... it's very much appreciate. Catch you again... sooner than later, I hope.
Briana~ Delores
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2012 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 2
Justin is so creative...painting,stories...very creative(wink)...........
Love how Justin is handling his life.It's not perfect but he is handling.
Author's Response: Yeah, poor Justin... to lose so many loves one at once... and he was kind of going through something even before that happened (when his father was unwilling to accept his son's homosexuality), and since he hadn't met Brian yet and had his influences, Justin just allowed his father's opposition to suppress his sexuality. Shows what a difference Brian can make.
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2012 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 11: Fantasy Brian (Part II)
im happy to see it updated love it poor justin kim
Author's Response: Hi, Kim:
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment and tell me that you love the story. Stay w/me and hav lots of fun. Thank you U gain so much.
Briana ~ Delores
Reviewer: RiCa20 (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2012 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 10: Fantasy Brian (Part I) - Do me, Justin…
Haha loved this chapter..and thank you for etching a bouncing naked Brian in my mind..lol :D
Author's Response: Oh, RiCa20, I forget to answer the second part of your previous question, so I'll answer it here.
How many websites do I post stories at? Actually two: this site and the Mightier Than the Sword site (that site I gave you a link to earlier). I used to post at a site called BJFIC.net but I don't think it exists anymore (at least I haven't been able to locate it lately). However, it was only one or two stories I posted at the site and both those stories are posted either here or at the Sword site, so nothing is lost.
'Thanks for etching a bouncing naked Brian...' I'm trying to think where it was that I acually saw a naked man bouncing up and down on a bed. Oh, snap.... maybe it was my last boyfriend or somebody, LOL!
Reviewer: RiCa20 (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2012 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 9
Wow..you must have researched quite a bit to write this chapter..and just a small question how many websites do you post your stories in?
Author's Response: Hi, RiCa20:
Actually, I didn't do much research. I did briefly check the NET to determine whether not a stranger fondling another stranger was a felony, or if fondling a minor was a felony. And, the answered shocked me... going into my reasearch I assumed an adult fondling another adult was a felony; but surprisingly many states consider it a misdemeanor and usually give the prepetrator a fine or community service, and if any jail time at all is usually a very short period like maybe 30 days at the most. And in state that do consider it a felony, they will often reduce it to a misdemeanor if the accused pleas guilty to the crime.
However fondling a child is a felony because it is classified under child molestion or abuse... which is definitely a felony.
All that other crap about lovers fondling each other (during their sleeping), date rape, etc... just came straight from my imagination and the moral philosophy class I took last semester, LOL!
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: January 21, 2012 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 10: Fantasy Brian (Part I) - Do me, Justin…
i lke the bed bit the bouncing balls funny kim
Author's Response:
My god Kim, and I certainly like you too; because that has got to the most direct and AMAZING comment I ever received. Love you and you made my day! I’m be laughing until tomorrow. Hope you stay with the story and continue 2 hav fun!
Thanks again.
Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2012 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 8
Hey again..two interesting chapters...and Brian's dick is lifeless..amazing..lol..and poor Justin he thinks that Michael and Brian are a couple :(
oh and I'll actually be starting uni this year..I was so nervous for the past two days because last night was when all the students would know about which Uni they would get accepted into. I actually didn't get what I wanted but I got the second best thing. :)
Anyways I will always be looking out for your updates! :))
Author's Response: Good luck in your studies, RiCa20... trying to have fun.
And, I agree poor Justin has to think whatever because under the circumstances he definitely cant' ask Brian what is the deal between he and Michael.
Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 6
Hmm..Interesting chapter. Funny how Justin tells Brian to remember on his own when there's practically nothing to actually remember in the first place..L.O.L..and weird thing was that I actually didn't get a notification that you replied to my review (very weird) and when you updated I thought to myself "She ignored her greatest fan" LOL..anyway I read your replies just now..and yes writing block does SUCK..but yes I will finish those stories one day hopefully thanks for the encouragement really need those reminders...and talking about stories thank you for reading my story and yeah I guess it was pretty lucky I chose her as my beta, I did that completely on a whim.
And I'm sorry to hear about your damage,I can imagine how hard that must have been trying to adapt to the new changes, you sound like a really brave person after having read that you're accepting it and moving on, I definately have something to learn from you. I hope you'll stay as strong as ever :)
And take as much as time updating it, no worries but I sure hope you'll finish your old stories too! and talking about college, mine's gonna start soon too..!
I'm actually writing a new fic..it's a crack fic..so I'm having incredible fun with it but not sure how readers will take michael cooked as a stew as a joke but anyways..haha..and make Brian eat it..(insert evil laugh). See you later then! ^^
Author's Response: Hi, RiCa20, nice to hear from U as always. Nice to hear you are a college student as well; however, are you a new student or returning from the next semester? I'm a junior and should have been graduated but I had my share of set backs; I'm hopeful that that's behind me now and if so, I just might graduate this year but no later than the spring semester of 2013.
'Funny... Jusitn tells Brian to remember on his own when there's... nothing to actually remember...' That's his safe way of preventing tripping himself up as well as avoiding complex answers. Because when it really comes right down to it, he has little answers for Brian. However, the one answer he does have is the most eccential one; but he fears that would put Brian permanently out of his life. Keep in mind he still believes that Brian and Michael are a couple. And, although he doesn't know himself where he's heading with this charade, he certainly wants Brian by his side. Eventhough, he might not have consciously acknowledged that to himself yet.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 6
I see the pieces are beginning to fall into place. Wonder what Brian will think when he finds out his last name is not Kennedy. I love the childlike Brian. Looking forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response: 'Wonder what Brian will think when he finds out his last name is not Kennedy?' Kennedy... is so close to Brian's real last name it that it's very unlikely he might struggle with that much. However, can you imagine how shock they both might be when they discovers that Brian's last name is really Kinney and how close Justin actually came to getting it right... they are both just liable to think that is some kind of amazing omen or something.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 5
It just goes to show that Justin doesn't really know Brian or he wouldn't be worried about enjoying Brian's body. A limp Brian??? Gotta be a first<chuckle>
Hmmm, I wonder how long will it take Justin to connect Brian to Gus? So many questions and I'm looking forward to the way your answer them.
Author's Response: Thanks YumYumPM for commenting on this chapter, I was kind of apprehensive about writing it... afraid readers would think I was going too far with the fondling thing.
And about the Brian, Melanie and Gus connection. I have to agree with you there... that will prove quite interesting.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 4
Short chapter, but interesting.
Author's Response: Yeah, that very well might keep Michael from worrying about Brian for maybe a couple of seconds at least.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 3
I always thought that underneath Brian's bluster there was a needy person...you've just proven that. I'm not sure Brian's old friends would recognize the polite Brian, but I like it.
Author's Response: I figured back when Brian was four or five, there might have been a nice little well behaved little boy somewhere in there.
Thanks so much, YumYumPM for taking the time to comment and so often.
Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2012 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 5
Contrary to the warning..I found that quite hot..and Brian's character is just adowabull!! So cute! Will be looking forward to the next chapter.. :)
Author's Response: Brian's adorable... how sweet. I'm glad u r enjoying the story.
However, I'm returning to school next week, so I don't know how often I'll be able to update again.
I used to be like a golden-girl and outstanding with multi-taskinig but I've been suffering from slight brain-damage since my late 30's (appox. twenty years ago), so I'm extremely slow at doing most tasks and get confused and disorganized a lot these days. However, I'm improving though; it was really bad at one time. I used to get extremely frustrated and cry a lot about it. But now I feel really good, take it a day at a time and just accept it as an unfortuate thing.
Thanks again... talk to you later.
Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2012 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 4
Yes, that's right Michael leave Brian and Justin alone..we don't need your intervention.. ;)
Author's Response: For now any way, lol.
Hi, there RICa20, I revisited your 'meow' story; and I'm really impressed with that outstanding editing job your beta did. Wow! You really lucked out to find someone with just good editing skills. Good luck on progressing with your stories, but don't rush yourself or become anxious. You'll eventually will finish a story... I suppose we all get writer's block; and some of us sooner than others as well as how long the block persist varies. It just such a personal thing and when you get the block, try not to worry about it, just sit it out as long as it takes and then when the writing bug returns to you, just get going again. I had stopped writing here for almost a year once and thought I'll never come back but when the writing bug bit me again.... I was right back here.
Good luck with the two stories you are working over.
Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2012 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 2
Wow..that was a really good chapter and what a twisted plot (I love it!) and tt was so frkin hilarious in the end.I really can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hi, RICa20, glad 2 C U jumped aboard this 1. I hope to add a couple of chapters before the day is out.
Thanks again for taking the time to read and tell me what you think. Later.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2012 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oddly it seems I hadn't read this chapter. Makes a big difference. Sorry to hear that Daphne was killed in the crash. So Justin knows Melanie? It explains why Justin doesn't know Brian's last name. lol. I'm assuming that the IT FINALLY HAPPENED is Gus' birth? Really, really looking forward to more on this story.
Author's Response: Hi again. that's strange how did end up readig 2 before 1. Oh yeah, U guessed right... It finally happened is Gus's birth. See u later.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2012 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 2
What are the odds?? Justin finding Brian with Amnesia at an atm machine. Me I vote for the getting to know each other then taking him back to pittsburg and the diner. That part could get a little messy though...what with Michael involved.
Love this
Author's Response: Hi, YumYumPM:
LOL, Thanks so much for commenting. I'm so glad U R enjoying the story. Catch U later.
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2012 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 2
wow this is a page turner. love it. more soon????:)
Author's Response: Wow! Thank U... it seems readers like my child-like Brian. Thanks for taking time to comment.
Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2012 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hi, Andromeda:
Somehow the response function got screwed up somehow, so I have to respond to you this way.
Thank you so much for taking the time to respond and letting me know you like the story. It always good to hear from a reader for the first time.
And, yes, I too love a vulnerable Brian.
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2012 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 2
Hi
What a promising story. It's so refreshing to see a story where Justin is not the one suffering from amnesia. Brian looks so vulnerable, that's too cute. Please update soon.
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