Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Broken Dreams
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2021 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 10

I had this one on my favorites list, but never had the chance to read it until now.   This was a great story, from beginning to end - I loved it!!!

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2020 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 10

did read it again

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2018 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 10

great story.  Always hated LIndsey

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2017 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 10

I am going t!o give this one 5 stars because I loved this story and I am going to add it to my favorites. 

Reviewer: Lisajean (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2017 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi Jules

 

Awe poor Sunshine! I am looking forward to reading the rest :) Sad, but Great start!

 

Lisa

Reviewer: Jacky M (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2015 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 10

 Thank you do much for this lovely fic... I've read it more than once and it is so worth it. You appear to always finish your stories, I love that becuase I don't like to read unfinished fics. Anyway please keep writing about Brian and Justin for all our sakes.

Love from Jacky M                                                                            

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2012 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 10

Oh Jules I love this story very much. Are you going to write a sequel?

I'll definitely want more.

 

Reviewer: Windrider1967 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2012 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 10

Nicely done. True to the characters and well written - thanks for sharing it

Reviewer: Windrider1967 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2012 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 4

Your voices are so spot on to my head!canon - so many people fail to realize the complexity of Brian Kinney and take him either sappy or cold. And manic!Linz - god season 4 and 5 made me feel like I have MY bipolar WELL controlled

Reviewer: Anno53 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2012 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 10

This was a wonderful story! Thank you for writing it!

Author's Response:

You're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Sasha (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2012 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 10

Hey!
I loved the fic. Thanks!
Sasha

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 10

i can not wait to read the next chapter of this amazing story wonderful job writting this story



Author's Response:

That was the last chapter, but I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 10

ha ha - only you could make me get teary eyed over Mel - I could feel her heart breaking...and it made her soft and vulnerable enough that I actually could feel for her -

this was a really nice story - thanks for sharing it with us

Charle



Author's Response:

Lol... Thanks! Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 10

love it

Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 10

Thanks for this terrific story.  I really didn’t see that much


gloom.  Sure Lindsey is gone, but now Brian has Justin


and two more little Justins (Sam and Eli), and he now has


his parental rights to Gus back.


 


Justin has Brian, Tom gone from his life, and two sons to


raise.  For the most part, things turned out really good.


Even Gus still has one mom and two dads who love him,


and two younger brothers plus JR.


 


Again, thanks for the story, I enjoyed reading it.


DavidR

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2012 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 9

love it

Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2012 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 8

i like this story i can not wait to read the next chapter good job writting this story



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2012 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 8

After that last chapter, I did wonder where you could possible


go from there.  What more could happen?


 


          A volcano could erupt in back of Britin. 


                    Nope, worse.


          Vampires would circle Britin looking for blood. 


                   Nope worse.


 


What happened?  Geeez, Tom, happened.  I really never


thought of that.  I had assumed we had finished with him.


 


Nice going!  Thanks for the chapter.  I was fun reading – well


sort of as I wonderful if that napkin is a legal contract.


 


DavidR


 



Author's Response:

Hmmm, I guess we'll find out if it's legal!

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2012 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 8

love it

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2012 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 7

I love men with wedding rings. There is something about a hand with a wedding ring.



Author's Response:

That is true.

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2012 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 7

Terrific story.  The changes from chapter to chapter have been


amazing.  We start off with Justin being abused, and only a few


chapters later to him moving in to Britin with his two sons.


Wow!  Then to top it all off, Melanie and Brian, though


probably only temporary, are going to live under the same


roof. That deserves a double Wow!


 


Now B & J just signed partnership papers, and had their own


private commitment ceremony.  Geeez, what is next?  Of


course you should not answer that question as I will simply


wait to find out.


 


Thanks again, to the story.


DavidR



Author's Response:

Lol... I wasn't planning on telling you anyway :P

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2012 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 7

love it

Author's Response:

thanks

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2012 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 6

love it

Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2012 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 5

love it

Author's Response:

thanks

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 5

It's so nice to see Brian & Justin back together and moving into Britin.  Looks like it's a fortunate move since Lindsay had twins--Justin's sons!!!!  The hard part will be waiting to see how Brian is going to take to Justin's desire to keep his sons close.

Brian's a take charge kind of guy, so I'm hoping there will not be any problems.

When does the next chapter go up?



Author's Response:

Tomorrow morning. I post everyday. Glad you like the story. I do love to see Brian and Justin making a family together.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 4

Oh-  this is not good-  no more chapters and I want to read more.  Update soon.  I love this story and I want to find out where the two babies came from and why LIndsay has a nurse and oh so much more.



Author's Response:

Next chapter just went up, so you'll be able to read it now!

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 2

This story has really caught my attention.  So glad that you didn't drag out the beating from Tom.  Can't wait to read the other two chapters.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I've never been a huge fan of graphic violence, so I tend to just hint around things like that. Let the readers use their imaginations.

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 4

Well - that was quite an unexpected twist! This story is delightful, and now I am on the edge of my seat waiting to see what comes next! Thanks.

Charle



Author's Response:

Thanks! I love twisting things up a little bit.

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 4

I finally had a chance to catch up and am
now up to date. The first few chapters
were kind of difficult, but then Brian came
to the rescue. That was great.

Although the situation is often serious,
some of the dialogue between B & J
are really funny. They finally seem to be
enjoying each other. It appears the Tom
incident has not affected either B or J’s
sense of humor.

Anyway, I see we are going to have many
highs and lows. Sam and Eli, that should
be interesting. It sure looks that this story
can go just about anywhere. I am looking
forward to it.

Thanks for the story, I am enjoying it and I
keep wondering – where to next?

DavidR

Author's Response:

Glad  you got a chance to catch up. I have a hard time making anything too serious. In life or in writing. I always feel the neec to make joke or little remark to lighten the moment. *shrug*

As for Sam and Eli, you'll learn all about them in tomorrow's chapter. Promise.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 4

Now we've got some excitement going on. Lindsay appears to be wackadoodles and two tiny babies pop up. Still in love with this.
Lori

Author's Response:

Lol... I love tht term. Wackadoodles. I may have to use it in a story sometime.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 3

Why did you pick the name Tom, seems like there has to be a story there. It just makes me think it's too John Doe not to mean something.... I'm always just sucked into your stories.
Lori

Author's Response:

Lol... Tom was a man I had recently broken up with because he was a jackass. It seemed appropriate to use him as a bad guy in my stories.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 2

Wow, this is moving at a fast pace, my mind is racing with all sorts of things that might happen. I can't wait! Does it get too boring to keep hearing me say how much I love your work?
Lori

Author's Response:

No, that's never boring! Lol!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

I'm know I'm going to like this one.
Lori

Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: taurus 1958 (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2012 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 3

Are more chapters coming? Keep on writing. Love it.



Author's Response:

yeah... I'll post the next chapter now

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2012 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 3

Love this story as I love all your stories.  Please put Goodby Hello over here too-thaat was one of my favorites.



Author's Response:

I promise I will. I think I'm going to have a new fic finished soon, so that may be next.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2012 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

:)



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2012 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 1

great start to this story, even tough I can barely stand when Justin gets hurt!

all the other abuse stories that I have either been Michael or Ethan - so I am looking forward to whatever other twists and surprises you have in store

Charle



Author's Response:

Thanks! Like i said, this was an early story in my QaF writing and has a few cliche moments. I still like the story, though.

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