Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For St. James
Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2013 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 9

Ethan Gold he turns me off lol I'm not looking forward for whats gonna happen between justin and eithan 

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2013 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 9

very interesting story.....let's hope the chin rat keeps his distance and that Justin heeds his friends words of caution

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2013 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 9

Oh Ethan; go away. Just leave Justin alone; although I’m a little worried Ethan has already taken advantage of Justin. A sex starved Brian; that should keep Justin away from Ethan for a while. LOL I can’t believe blackmail worked. Seriously though, it’s good to see you are finishing this. Please update soon as I’m sure you are being too hard on yourself when you talk about a very bad chapter, partly written.
Cheers

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2013 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 3

I always get nervous when a story nears the time of prom.

This version was much better. Brian facing Chris and putting him in his place was very nice to see. I only regret the absence of the dance of the two (it's my favorite scene of the show), but I understand that she could not fit here.

The end of the night was perfect.

Hugs!

Fatima.

 

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2013 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 2

Great chapter. The meeting of the two was so beautiful.

It is a pity that circumstances prevented them from fully live her love.

But soon, Justin will be graduating and everything will be easier.

Hugs!

Fatima.

PS: Sorry, but the previous comment where it says "bookshelf" I meant "rest". I am Brazilian and I use the Google translator to write. The errors are all the fault of the translator, ok?

 

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2013 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 1

Discover a great story like yours is very rewarding.

A very interesting storyline to be followed. Making love Brian and Justin forbidden and secret is very unique.

Excited by the history bookshelf.

Hugs!

Fatima.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2013 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 9

Just read all of your chapters in one go and really enjoyed them!  Hope you will be able to update this again when you are able to.  As a writer, though, I certainly know what it means to hit a roadblock!  Here's hoping you will get inspired again very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2013 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 8

I wouldn’t be surprised if Ethan hadn’t arranged the backroom stunt so he could come to the rescue. Justin heed Debbie’s warning. Stay away from Ethan. Are you going to update this in the near future as there are so many teacher/student fics I am currently reading that seem to be left unfinished; please do so if RL allows.

Cheers

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2013 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 7

No not Brian's arch-nemesis Ethan. Justin stay away from him. LOL

Cheers

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2013 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 6

You had me fooled I didn’t realise it was a dream but I should have done as Chris was just too nice. LOL

Cheers

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2013 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 3

What a great ending to prom night, so different from the original and much more pleasant.

Cheers

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2013 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 2

Fingers crossed that it won’t be too long before they are together again even if Brian said it can’t happen. I like the forbidden love angle as these two men are very hard to keep apart.

Cheers

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2013 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow! How long will Brian be able to resist this irresistible student? I love this premise.


Cheers

Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2012 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 8

Update soon

Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2012 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 8

Update soon please

 

 

Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2012 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 8

Update soon please

 

 

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2012 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 8

love the twist kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2012 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 6

Sweet twist on the 10 yr mark.  Nice.

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2012 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 3

Very hot!  Nice job.     - Jackie

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2012 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 7

Anytime I see Ethan in a story I get sick to my stomach. He's always bad news and I love it when a writer bashes the dog crap out of him. Now that I've caught up to this one, I'll be looking for your updates.



Author's Response:

Don't hate me but when Justin started his affair (on the show) with Ethan, I was actually happy.  I was like, "You go, Justin!  You don't need to be shitted on by Brian."  Now I can't stand him.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2012 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 6

I was lucky to be young before HIV/AIDS killed all the raw fun we had. Back then you partied all weekend, went to the health department for a huge shot, and did it all over again the next weekend. Ahh, those were the days.



Author's Response:

Lucky you.  I was just coming to my sexual awareness when HIV/AIDS became an epidemic.  I thought the only thing I had to worry about was getting pregnant.  It wasn't very fun.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2012 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 5

How could he, Brian 'I don't do boyfriends' Kinney be in love with an eighteen year old kid?

Well, without a doubt, Justin is one of the most beautiful boys ever, and he's very smart (for a blond). And if you ever saw the ass on that boy without clothes on you would understand how a man could fall in love with him. And that's just the first things to come to mind. Like...duh?



Author's Response:

Agreed!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2012 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 4

That was an interesting chapter. I like how you changed the canon to be your own story here. Now I must wonder which direction you're going to take us to next.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2012 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 3

Good, we have the beginning of a happy relationship starting up. Now we need to decide on PIFA for school, and move into the loft and become that man's houseboy/sex slave forever!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2012 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 2

What the heck? Justin will soon graduate and then it's game on!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2012 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very cute story; I like the original plot idea you have here.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2012 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 7

Ethan brings nothing but trouble.

Nice update.
Lori

Author's Response:

He will definitely be someone to throw a wrench in the mix.

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2012 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 7

love it i like the way u keep it going   kim



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2012 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 6

great chapter love it    kim



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2012 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 6

My goodness... for a moment I thought I was lost in the woods... Thank God i wasn't! :)

Author's Response:

I figured I would put a little twist on the story.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2012 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 6

Oh that was so cute, just adorable :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  It makes me want to continue to write.

Reviewer: 087bue (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2012 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 6

nice little twist there

Author's Response:

I thought I would mess with the readers a little.

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2012 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 5

li can not wait to read the next chapter of this story i like brian and justin together i can't wait to read more soon

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2012 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 5

Sweet and hot!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it.  It makes me smile.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2012 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 5

Great Chapter! You really have a talent for writing. The moment I start reading I am swept away.
Lori

Author's Response:

That is very sweet of you to say.  I'm really having a great time writing this story.

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2012 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 5

great chapter update soon kim

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2012 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 4

I really like this story, but I do feel much better now that Justin has finished High School.

Some thing tells me Craig will not take Justin's news well.
Lori

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2012 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 4

Another great chapter. Really enjoying this! :)

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2012 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 4

i can not wait to read the next chapter of this amazing story i like it very much

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2012 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 4

im realy enjoying this update soon kim

Author's Response:

Thanks.  I should have an update in a day or two. :)

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2012 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 3

I absolutely love this story! It's so different. I can't wait to see where you take it next!! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I'm happy that you are enjoying it.  Writing is my passion.

Reviewer: taurus 1958 (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2012 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 3

Love it!!



Author's Response:

I'm happy you love it.  Stay tuned.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 3

Not hard to guess where Justin will be going to college.
Great story.
Lori

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.  It keeps me going.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 2

Justin is not thinking about Brian. He should have been willing to wait till after graduation. I know Brian is very tempting but if he ends up in jail will it all be worth it? Neither one has a drop of will power to resist the other..I guess boys will be boys.

I do love this story.
Lori

Author's Response:

LOL!  You're right, "boys will be boys".  Not for nothing but if I had a shot at being with the hot teacher in my high school, I wouldn't have thought twice about it.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

Brian would sure make school "the" place to be!
Lori

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 3

I am really enjoying this story alot! Very cute - good job. This chapter was just delicious! Hmmmm...wonder what c omes next? Can't wait for the update!

Charle



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I like that "just delicious!"

Reviewer: lili (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2012 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

love that story!!!! update soon!!!

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2012 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 2

good chapter update soon kim

Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2012 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 2

I looooooooooooove this!! 

I am desperately awaiting the next chapter. haha



Author's Response:

I have a bunch of chapters already written, so the wait won't be too long.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2012 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

absolutly loving this so far

cant wait for your next installment



Author's Response:

I'm happy you are enjoying the story.  It's encouraging that people are reading my work.

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2012 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

great like it so far update soon kim

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2012 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was just adorable! I hate chris Hobbs can you make him die from plague? or anythinf painful? Please update soon



Author's Response:

LOL!!  Nice suggestion. :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2012 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 1

:)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. :)

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