Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2013 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 8

I loved this story. I like how it revolved around Brian and his feelings. A couple of comments about the story.

1- I was really lost at first because of the jumping around in the timeline. I feel it would have helped if you would have put a year or some type of dating, so it was easier to follow.

2- I found a lot of grammatical errors and duplicate wording. When I read that stands out to me and it distracts from the story.

Otherwise, good story!

Reviewer: marietta (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2012 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm so sorry that Susan passed away, I missed her stories when the MW started the new site and I'm glad that Cheryl saved her stories and that you repost it. Thank you for that, I'm sending her family my condolences. Metka

Reviewer: RUDE NATHALIE (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2012 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 8

C EST L UNE DES PLUS BELLE HISTOIRE QUE J AI LU ET J ESPERE QU IL AURA D AUTRES CHAPITRE

Reviewer: Sranda (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2012 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 8

Wow - what an amazing story. I love your writing style. You are very talented & I can't wait to read more. Beautiful!

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2012 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 8

this is an incredible touching story. a lot of tears shed. so beautifully written. really loved it. :)

Reviewer: neetaskita (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2012 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 8

Thank you for this sweet story. Really enjoyed.

Reviewer: carlou (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2012 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 8

That was awesome.The last part of the story should have come with a warning "this part will require that you have kleenex close by ".Thank you for letting my mind escape on a cold winter's day.

Reviewer: Morgan (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2012 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 8

wonderful story.... well done :)

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: January 29, 2012 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 8

it was a beautiful story thanku kim

Reviewer: Morgan (Anonymous) · Date: January 29, 2012 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh, very nice... a joy to read.

Thank you :)

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2012 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 8

i love this story i hope you write a some more chapters wonderful job writting this story

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2012 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

:)

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