Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

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Reviewer: aplb85 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2012 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love this story yu need to write another chapter PLEASE i can't wait!

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2012 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

OMG sorry, didn´t read her Bio! Terribly sorry to hear that! Best wishes to you from Germany!

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2012 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was very dreamlike. Seems rather out of character for Brian, this languid, measured, silent lovemaking. But OOC or not, it is lovely nonetheless.

Cheers,

Vin

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2012 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 1

what a beautiful meeting between the boys....

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2012 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hello Susan,

I really liked the story, around this special time in both their lifes.

The only thing I would do in your case is get a beta to reread your sentences as some just change POV in the middle of a sentence or you just change POV without warning from one sentence to the other, which is hard to follow.

I don´t say that to discourage you, just a little tip from my side. Keep on with the great plot bunnys!

The story is very enjoyable!

Author's Response:
Susan passed away January 24th, 2012

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2012 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

A geeky fairy waved his magic wand here :)

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