Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2020 10:39 PM · On: I've Been Naughty...

Great story.   Brian and Justin were both jealous thinking the other was going to be out enjoying the scene.   They really need to work on their communication - it would just solve so much!!!    But I'm not surprised it worked out in the end.  They really only want to be with each other, even though they'll never admit it.

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2015 10:20 PM · On: I've Been Naughty...

I really enjoyed reading it.

thank you



Author's Response:

Hi, Chandrika! I'm thrilled that you're reading my stories. Thank you for the support, and for the comments! I greatly appreciate that. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2014 02:41 PM · On: I've Been Naughty...

This fic was so fun to read, lol. How refreshing to see Brian being jealous for a change, even though he'd do everything in his power not to let it show. I think it almost would've been funny and certainly added to teh drama if Justin HAD done something with a Liam, Collin, or Brady. BTW: who are the collin and sean that Brian was thinking Justin had been with? Oh, and the line: "My cock missed your cock," was so hilariously Brian.



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah!  Thanks for reading this one, and for your comments.  I'm so glad you enjoyed it; I love a jealous Brian, too.;)  Sean was the name of the guy Justin fucked after winning the King of Babylon contest, and the other names were just ones I threw out that would fit the bill in case Justin got lucky - LOL!  Thanks for reading and for the comments, Sarah; I really appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2013 03:32 AM · On: I've Been Naughty...

A little possessive much?  Justin merely spoke the truth, he does so know someone Irish, after all Kinney's Irish.  lol.  I bet there is going to be a lot of spanking thanks to those underwear.



Author's Response:

LOL!  Those are real, too - I found a copy online.;)  I thought it fit our little blond's situation very well.;)  And yeah, he should have pointed that out.;)  Something tells me they're in for some fun later. Thanks so much for reading and for commenting, my friend!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: NONIE (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2012 03:52 AM · On: I've Been Naughty...

i LOVE THIS STORY AND THE PICTURE.  i GUESS WE IRISH PEOPLE ARE SPECIAL.  THESE BOYS TOGETHERNESS IS REALLY SPECIAL AND I CAN SEE WHY YOU WANT TO WRITE DIFFERENT SCENERIOS ABOUT THEM.  THERE IS SO MANY PLACES TO GO WITH THEM.. I AM GOING TO HAVE FUN READING.  I WAS WARNED THERE ARE SOME THAT ARE SAD, AND TAKE THE READERS TO DIFFERENT PLACES THAT ARE DIFFICULT TO READ,SO I AM READING THE FUN ONES FIRST.  LINDC WILL MAYBE READ MY REVIEWS.  I E-MAILED HER WITH WHAT I HAD READ AND IF MY REVIEWS WERE CREDIBLE.  I GUESS I DID OK. 



Author's Response:

Hi, Nonie!  I'm so delighted that you're reading another one, my dear.:)  Thank you for all the wonderful comments!  Yes, lindc is correct.  Some are pretty angsty.  But I CAN assure you that I'm a big sentimental sap, so by the time I'm done with them they are together and happy.  Sometimes the journey can be a difficult one, though; probably one of the hardest ones to read - but one of my more popular ones, too - is "Remember Me."  That is a real tearjerker, but it's also a very uplifting one by the time the end comes.

"Double Jeopardy" is also very difficult to read at times  - it's the third story in  a series that includes "Going, Going, Gone" and "Secret Admirer."  And "Paper Hearts Killer" is a real roller coaster ride, too.  But again, eventually all will turn right again with these two - I just can't seem to write them any other way.:)

If you're looking for lighthearted, funny ones, I would definitely recommend "Roughing It," "Arms Open Wide" and its sequel, "Payback," and "Justin Taylor:  Man in Tights."  Not too much drama at all in those.:)  Thanks again for all your encouragement, Nonie - and don't worry about your reviews - they're all great!  Give lindc my thanks again for recommending me.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2012 09:29 AM · On: I've Been Naughty...

Smiles. Wish Brian Kinney was MY Irish man ;o)



Author's Response:

Ha! Me, too!  I never noticed how attracted Justin was to Irish men before I started rattling them off - LOL! Thanks for reading and for the comments, Yvee.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2012 11:16 AM · On: I've Been Naughty...

Very cute. I really liked all the Irish names you used. I always enjoy holiday stories but this one just seemed to have a bit more depth and detail than usual. Talent like yours sure elevates a shorter quick read into something that will linger in my mind for days and even call me back for a reread soon. Thanks for helping me celebrate the holiday!
Lori

Author's Response:

Hi, Lori!  What lovely comments; thank you very much for that.:)  I'm glad that you enjoyed the story.  I never thought about all those Irish men Justin gravitated to until I wrote this!  But 'Brian" is by far the best one!!  Thanks again for taking the time to leave a comment, Lori, that means a lot to me!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2012 05:08 AM · On: I've Been Naughty...

I'm exhausted and about to take a nap but had to get another review in first.

He reached down to try and extricate the sketch from Justin's hands...

Awww. I thought that was so sweet.

...how could you surpass the ideal lover? he had wondered.

In this fic, both are still tricking. It seems they may be coming to the conclusion that it is a waste of time. It is a  shame that on the show, Justin came to that conclusion first.

It simply wouldn't do to tell Justin he was really checking to see if someone else had spanked, fucked, or rimmed him tonight.

I love the a jealous Brian. I woke up in the middle of the night and read Bon Appetit again. I still enjoy so many of your stories.

I'm happy that Parent Trap will be updated soon, but I'm just as anxious for My Heart's Desire and Tame the Wild Stallion.

Thank you for providing such quality entertainment for free.



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetheart! Thank you for all your support of my stories!  That is so motivating for me!  And it means a lot to know that you enjoy my stories enough to reread some of them.:)  I do love to make Brian jealous, don't I - ha!  It WOULD have been nice if Brian would have realized what he had in Justin; perhaps he did, but his 'extra-curricular activities' were such a part of his life I think he would have been hard-pressed to stop.

I am very honored that you are enjoying all of my WIPs and that you entrust me with completing them; I promise not to let you down!  I may have to divert in a few weeks to write a short story about Tricky "the Wonder Dog" - ha! for Easter.:)  But rest assured I will update all of these stories regularly.  Thank you again for all your support and feedback - that means the world to me!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: March 19, 2012 01:43 PM · On: I've Been Naughty...

Great story!!! It's always a delight to read about jealous Brian and Justin was just so adorable.... *0* Hope to read you soon!! ^^ Kisses!



Author's Response:

Hi, Mafita!  Kisses back to you, too, my friend, for the lovely comments!  I do adore a jealous and insecure Brian, although he only seems that way around a certain blond.:)  I'm so glad that you liked it, Sweetie!  Thanks again.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Windrider1967 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2012 11:02 AM · On: I've Been Naughty...

How did I miss this baby - soo perfect !



Author's Response:

Hi, Trish!  Thanks for reading and commenting, my friend; glad you liked it (although I suspect it was the banner photo and the thong that got your attention - ha!)  And congrats, BTW, on all the comments for your OWN story!  Great plot idea to combine the two shows together!  Thanks again for all the support!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2012 10:57 AM · On: I've Been Naughty...

this was a sweet treat for the day - short and satisfying - and of course I am more than anxious to see what comes next in PT -

Happy St Patty's Day!

Charle



Author's Response:

Hi, Charle, my friend!  Thanks for spending some time with my holiday fic!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.:)  Yes, I imagine (at least I hope!) a number of readers are anxious for the next installment of "Parent Trap."  I am working on it right now and hope to have it up shortly.  You know me, though, and my epic-length novels.:)  It may take a few days to write in everything I want to cover, especially since I have 4th-quarter grades for my students this week.  BUT...I also have next week off (yay!), so hopefully in between seeing Randy again in "Red" next week in Cleveland I should have a little extra time to write, too!

Thanks for all the support as always, my friend!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: March 19, 2012 08:12 AM · On: I've Been Naughty...

what a thong!!! ha ha ha.....love it....

Impatiently looking forward to the next chapter 'Parent Trap'.I have read over the last chapter quite a few times, once was not enough.

Its just amazing how you created a masterpiece from a classic. Thank you.



Author's Response:

Aww...thank you so much for those kind words!  That means a lot to me!  I'm glad you enjoyed this story - I saw a photo of that thong and knew it was the perfect one for Justin - I just wish it had come in a sort of sparkly green color - ha! 

And thank you for letting me know that you're enjoying "Parent Trap!"  I did strive to make my version of it different from the standard one, at least after the intial premise, so I am happy that you think I've accomplished that.:)  And I'm delighted that you're looking forward to the next chapter. I am working on it right now; I have a good part of it done, but you know me and my long chapters - this one is shaping up to be just like the others, because I have a lot I want to say in this one.:) It shouldn't be completed very soon, though.:)

I am going to enjoy watching the girls scheming to keep their fathers together, and something tells me that Brian won't mind one bit - LOL!  Thank you again for reading my stories and having faith in me to complete my WIPs.  I won't let you down and I promise that they WILL be completed.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: March 19, 2012 05:45 AM · On: I've Been Naughty...

Loved it!!! thanks!



Author's Response:

Hi, Sorcha, my friend!  Thank YOU for always taking the time to read and especially review!  I am so grateful for your support, and I'm very pleased that you enjoyed this.  I hope I can entertain you with a lot of my stories for a long time to come.  Thank you again.:)  *Hugs*  Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2012 04:10 AM · On: I've Been Naughty...

Cute bit of Irish fluff!  Nice.

- Jackie



Author's Response:

Yeah, not much substance in there (oh, wait - are we talking about Justin's thong?  LOL).  Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment, my friend.:)  *Hugs*  Kim

Reviewer: Missn31 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2012 03:22 AM · On: I've Been Naughty...

I loved it, I love Brian when he comes across as jealous and wanting Justin to himself  - clearly indicating his love for his man. Thank you xxxxx



Author's Response:

Thank you, Kate, for reading and for the comments!  Like Justin said, he's on to him...and he knows exactly what to say and do to get what he - and Brian - wants!  I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story.  Thank you again - I am now off to "Parent Trap."  There's a couple of men that need a wakeup call to get reunited - with a little scheming help from two little girls:) 

*Hugs*  Kimberly

Reviewer: ergenie (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2012 03:21 AM · On: I've Been Naughty...

OOhh... this is so lovely!!!!... Put a smile on my face!!!!... Love it!!!.. Thanks for writing this. cheers, E



Author's Response:

Aww...thank you, Erni, I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!  I couldn't let St. Patrick's Day go by without a little loving for our sexy brunet.:)  Thank you for reading and for the wonderful comments; I really appreciate that!  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2012 11:00 PM · On: I've Been Naughty...

update!  BB didn't dance he drank his green beer and sang-off key I might add.  The more beer you consume the better you sound, "to yourself" it was funny.  He's in a walking boot now but dancing is not allowed yet. Lol



Author's Response:

LOL!  Thanks for the update; I wish I had thought to put that part about the off-key singing in my story.:)  I'm glad he's progressed to a walking boot.  At least he'll have an excuse the next time someone accuses him of having 'two left feet' - ha!  Would love to hear him sing karaoke some day.  I have got to find a way to meet all of you in person some time - I feel like I already know you anyway!  Tell Lee if I ever do, I expect to be shuttled around town in the "Lucky Devil," but only after he puts the flames on!  Maybe I should start calling HIM the "Hunka, Hunka Burnin' Love" now because of his fancy wheels!

Take care and hope you all have a great week!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2012 07:57 PM · On: I've Been Naughty...

Hey!  St. Paddy's Day evening a lot of fun.  We hired a limo to go out and to take us home after the festivities.  Had a blast danced sang and had some bubbly.  No one over did thankfully.  BB said we were mature adults--PFFFT--what a laugh!!  I'm so glad you took my little suggestion and composed this story--sooo good really enjoyed it.  Brian at his best-little green monster.  So adorable.  The thong is cute-I have something similar-will leave that up to your imagination.  I'm up early as I have to take my aunt to the airport.  She came for a working visit.  Am anxious to read next chapter of Parent Trap. This one will be a doozy I have a feeling. lol



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  I'm so glad you all had such a great time!  I would have loved to have seen Brian cutting a rug after injuring his foot - ha!  Hope it's doing a lot better now.:)  At least he could drink sitting down (or maybe he was LYING down - it probably depended upon how many drinks he had - ha!).  Glad you all had a great St. Patrick's Day!  And thanks as always for your feedback; I don't want you to ever wonder about how much I appreciate that because I definitely do.:)  All of your support of my stories, along with the other readers, are what keep me motivated to keep writing, so I thank you (and all of them) sincerely for that.:)

I'm working on "Parent Trap" right now; and I do think it will be a good one.:)  Lots of interaction with B & J and the girls, too, who will continue to be little schemers for a long time yet.  Only this time, Brian (and Jennifer/Daphne/Emmett/Debbie) will all be ganging up on poor Justin - ha!  Hope you enjoy it.  It will probably be a few days yet until I can update it, because I have to compile quarterly grades for my students this week, which is EXTREMELY time-consuming - yuck!  And grass-cutting season has arrived here, which means at least 3 hrs. per mowing - aargh!  But I will faithfully keep plodding along and will get it updated soon.  Thanks again, Sweetie; you are all great!  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2012 05:58 PM · On: I've Been Naughty...

Lovely thong ! Lovely little fic. And I love it that you're working on "Parent trap".

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

LOL!  Yes, it would certainly get Brian's attention, wouldn't it?  And I thought it certainly fit - it more ways than one - ha!  Yes, I've started on the next chapter of "Parent Trap," but it will probably be a few days yet.  If it's any comfort, I see it as another long chapter; after all, the boys have a lot of talking to do (before they eventually get to the good stuff (wink, wink...)).  Thanks Marny for the kind words, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2012 02:57 PM · On: I've Been Naughty...

That story was so fun! And so creative with the dialogues. Loved it :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, my friend!  So glad you liked it!  I had to let Brian 'play' just a little on 'his' day.:)  And BTW - LOVING your new story!  Absolutely enchanted with it!  I adore those types of historical, "Brian as a prince/king" fics and Justin's feistiness!  Looking forward eagerly to the rest of it.:)  Thanks again for reading and for the comments.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2012 11:54 AM · On: I've Been Naughty...

This was very naughty indeed.  Great work.



Author's Response:

LOL!  Well, we know both boys 'love' naughty - ha! Thank you so much for reading and for the review!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2012 11:07 AM · On: I've Been Naughty...

Aww... that was so cute! I could imagine that the boys would have fun on one of the most popular drinking days of the year (I am currently enjoying a beer on the holiday of my Irish ancestors... not green beer, though). Brian knew that Justin never tricked as much as he did, and I'm sure that Justin would not want to on St. Pat's, when his Irish lover was out of town.

Cheers!! xoxo



Author's Response:

I agree - but I never noticed how many Irish 'admirers' Justin had before I started naming them off - ha!  Thank you, Nancy, for reading and for the comments; you know how much I appreciate that.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: ScorpioDream (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2012 09:27 AM · On: I've Been Naughty...

Well... I really want to be Irish now! Lol! Adorably naughty! Great work as always!

Author's Response:

Hi, Stephanie!  I just had to write something for Brian on his 'day' before I returned to "Parent Trap."  Thank you as always for your support of my stories and for taking the time to leave me a comment.:)  I do appreciate it more than you know.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: kfan (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2012 09:00 AM · On: I've Been Naughty...

Just finshed reading Kiss---Irish, great job as expected. You know sometimes i wish you would write a bad story once just so we know you actually from this planet. (NOT!). Again great job. :)

Reviewer: Sasha (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2012 08:55 AM · On: I've Been Naughty...

Hey,
I loved it. It was realy cute. I loved their dinamic.
Thank you for writing and posting.
Sasha

Author's Response:

And thank YOU, Sasha, for reading and taking the time to comment!  That means so much to me.  And thanks for all your ongoing support of my stories!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Kym (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2012 07:32 AM · On: I've Been Naughty...

I was hoping you would do a St. Patty's Day story.  I think someone mentioned you should write one.  This was cute. I love a jealous Brian, as if Justin would be that naughty.  Cute picture.  They sell all kinds of dirty little things in certain stores for all holidays and special days in the year.  Good one. loved it.



Author's Response:

Ha!  Thanks, Kym!  I saw this advertised and when I noticed the "spank me" part of the phrase, I knew I had found the perfect match for our playful, saucy little blond - LOL!  Of course, we all know who has captured Brian's heart already, but it doesn't hurt to remind him from time to time that Justin could have his pick of admirers, too (why they couldn't find someone better than the chin rat for him on the show, though, is beyond me - ha!).  I adore a jealous Brian, too, although I don't think he ever had anything to worry about.:)

 Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review, Kym!  I'm working on "Parent Trap" right now, BTW - I should have that posted in a few days.  Thanks again for all the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2012 06:43 AM · On: I've Been Naughty...

Geeez woman, slow down! LOL  I'm never gonna get caught up on your stories if you keep posting!  J/K

Another good one.  I wanted to slap some sense into both our silly boys, but it was funny and well written.

Brian, Brian, Brian, when are you gonna learn that Justin wants you an only you?  He's not interested in any other Irishman but the one he already has in his heart and in his bed.

And Justin!  When are you going to learn not to antagonize Brian?  The man loves you.  It's obvious!  But you know he has a jealous streak ten miles wide, and when you tease him like that his imagination runs wild!

Great job, Predec2!  Gonna try to get some reading done on The Wedding Present soon.  I kinda got sidetracked with RL. 

Nita



Author's Response:

Hi, Nita!  And here I thought I wasn't posting fast enough - LOL!  At least this one was a one-shot, so it won't need to be continuned.:) I just couldn't let this Irish holiday go by without the proper acknowledgment.:)

I'm down to only 3 WIPs now, which is low for me.  I'll probably have a short series or a one-shot with Tricky for Easter, but except for that I'm trying hard not to start a new one for a while so I can keep posting a little faster.  Thanks for stopping to read this one, and I completely agree with your comments! I never realized the fixation that Justin had for men with Irish names before, though - ha!  But you're right - there's only ONE man who his heart belongs to.  Thanks for reading this one and for the wonderful feedback; hope you enjoy more of "The Wedding Present" when you get a chance.  Thanks again.  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2012 03:56 AM · On: I've Been Naughty...

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks, my friend - oh, and while I have your attention - can you add "St. Patrick's Day" to the tags for me? Just taking advantage here.   LOL!  I didn't see it anywhere - thanks, Bob!:)  Kimberly

Done! ~Bob

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2012 03:46 AM · On: I've Been Naughty...

Phew. Is it hot in here or what!? :)

I was taking a break from writing a long sex scene in 'Addiction' to pop over here to find this. LOL. This was hot and perfect, my friend. I do love it when Mr. I don't do jealous Kinney does exactly that in grand style. The examination was just priceless. Loved that! Well done, my dear. I really enjoyed it. :) *Hugsss*



Author's Response:

Thanks, Dear - glad you enjoyed Brian's unique way of figuring out whether Justin had been 'wandering' - ha!  *Hugs* back to you - Happy St. Patrick's Day, BTW!  ~Kim

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2012 03:45 AM · On: I've Been Naughty...

Yay, the Parent Trap! *dances like a loon in glee*

OK. Back to this one-shot - very cute indeed. I enjoyed it.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Ha!  Yes, pay attention, okay?  LOL!  I know - you're not alone in wanting that one updated (at least I HOPE not).  Thanks for popping in here, though - now I'm off to write the greatest reunification since the separation - ha!  Thanks, Vin.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

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