Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2012 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 19: The Expose
I SAW YOUR STORY FOR THE FIRST TIME TODAY,AND READ IT ALL, IT WAS WONDERFUL. IT TOOK US IN A DIFFERENT DIRECTION AND I WAS GREATLY PLEASED, I MISSED GUS IN THE STORY JUST BECAUSE WE SEE A GENTLE AND LOVING DADA WE ARE NOT USED TO SEEING, I DID LIKE 'MAL' AND EVEN BRIAN ENDED UP LOVING THE GENTLE BEAST. I THANK YOU FOR YOUR STORY AND HOPE TO READ MANY OF THEM IN THE FUTURE!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I started writing this story just after I finished with the first one, and toward the end I got total blockage or creativity! I am so glad I managed to finish it and that people can read it all the way to the end.
Thanks again!
Raine
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2012 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 19: The Expose
THIS STORY WAS DA BOMB!!! SO GOOD. LOVED IT IMMENSELY.:)
Author's Response: Thank you :)) So glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2012 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 19: The Expose
Thanks for finishing this story for us. TAG
Author's Response: It was for me as much as for the rest of you :) I want to finish what I start. Now I see I ran out of batteries last summer, but I am OK now :)
Reviewer: Irene (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2012 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 1: Time Flies
I think you write very well, but I'm not sure about the story. I think Brian wouldn't like knowing that he had been lied to, despite the fact that Justin is doing this in order for the two of them to reunite. I think he'd feel foolish. I don't see him running to Justin's arms when he finds out that Justin isn't really with someone, I think he'd be a bit angry at the subterfuge and rightfully so.
Author's Response: Thanks for your words. I can only say I base "my" Brian almost completelly on show's Brian and I know, by watching the series, how he loves Justin and how he longs for love. So when the oportunity presents itself to be with the one person he truly loves, he would forgive his infidelity or deception for that matter. I always remember how he can never be on a higher level with Justin, just because of the nature of their relationship. Brian spent years making deals with Justin, so he can keep him and have sex with other men at the same time. I really think that secrets won't be an issue for him.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 18: Destruct and self-destruct
What is Justin up to? I can’t wait to find out.
Cheers
Author's Response: I'm so sorry to keep you waiting, but I just got back and I tend to start writing immediately
Love, Raine
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 18: Destruct and self-destruct
Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank a lot :)
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2012 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 18: Destruct and self-destruct
Quite the tease, this chapter. Hope you finish traveling soon so we can sovereign the mystery of how Jus is gonna work this ! TAG
Author's Response: Well, I'm done travelling. Now I just have to start with the writing :)
Love, Raine
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2012 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 16: An Early Guest
The conversation between Mikey and Brian was hilarious.
Author's Response: Thanks! :))
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2012 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 15: Late Hours
I love the image of Justin and the dog together. He didn't respond to Brian's query about the dog. I wonder what that is about.
Author's Response: Justin likes to keep Brian in his place, so to speak. Demonstrate power, but not over Brian. Over his life decisions. And that included having a dog. Thanks for your review :)
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2012 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 17: A Fair Game
When you write Robert Grant it is so close to Robert Gant I think of him when I read this. I am really enjoying the story; however, it looks like I will be waiting a little longer now for a Brian and Justin reunion. I can’t wait, update soon please.
Cheers
Author's Response: Haha, never thought of it that way, but now when you mention it, yeah, Grant-Gant... I'm so glad you like the story. It's the toughest part for me now, but I'll try and write it in the way I stay true to the characters.
Kisses,
Raine
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2012 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 17: A Fair Game
I'm starting to wonder if Brian and Justin will ever get to be together. I'm kind of seeing Justin doing the photo-op for the better good and pushing Brian further away. One can hope he won't.
Author's Response: It is hard even for me, but at this point I'm giving it all to the character. At the end Justin will do what he thinks is right. But don't give up on him and Brian just yet :)
thank for your review, Raine
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2012 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 17: A Fair Game
I know what Justin should do - he should go straight to Brian and kiss him violently until he feels all better! That's exactly what he should do - that's what I should do too! See you later - off to find my own solace! TAG
Author's Response: You always find great solutions to all the problems :)) I am thinking hard about the next chapter. Justin is both eager for pleasure and utterly compassionate person.
Stay tuned,
Raine
Reviewer: Anno53 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2012 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 17: A Fair Game
Don't do it Justin!
Author's Response: :) That would be my first reaction too. I'm carefully thinking about his next move.
Later, Raine
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2012 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 17: A Fair Game
Poor Justin. I am looking forward to what he decide to do.
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm thinking really hard about the next chapter. It needs to be good!
Raine
Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2012 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 17: A Fair Game
be still my life...WHAT about Justin's life; this angst is to much! PLEASE...more soon! thanks
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! :))
Raine
Reviewer: Irene (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2012 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 16: An Early Guest
Interesting story, but "Mikey", not "Mickey".
Author's Response: Thanks, and you're right! I've corrected it .)
Raine
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2012 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 16: An Early Guest
Great chapter. I wonder what this Robert wants? Looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Thank you! Ah, yes. I'm afraid Justin isn't quite done with the whole Washington politics conspiracy...
Kisses,
Raine
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 19, 2012 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 16: An Early Guest
Ooohhhhhhh. Mysterious leather clad stranger! Nice touch. TAG
Author's Response: Thanks :))
Raine
Reviewer: Dilia (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2012 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 15: Late Hours
  
Later.
Author's Response: Back at you :)
Raine
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2012 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 15: Late Hours
Come on Emmett - a fruit bowl? What a fruity idea! Wonder what Brian will bring as his house warming present? TAG
Author's Response: Our Emmett is who he is :) But I think he would bring a present that by its ornaments resembles more ancient Roman feast than North Pole, if you know what I mean :)))
Thank again for reading!
Love, Raine
Reviewer: javitxu (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2012 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 15: Late Hours
Wonderfull as always. You are really an amezing writer, so please don't stop creating.
Hope we will hear from you soon.
A big hug from your fan Myriam.
Author's Response: Myriam, thank you so much! I wouldn't consider myself amazing :) but I do love to write and I hope everyone finds something that they love to do as well.
Kisses,
Raine
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 15: Late Hours
Great chapter.
Author's Response: A big thank you :)
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 13, 2012 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 14: What I need
Yay! They meet again! TAG
Author's Response: Yes, they do :) I'm about to finish the next chapter. And it's going to be difficult. I'm chosing my words carefully :)))
Raine
Reviewer: javitxu (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2012 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 14: What I need
great chapter, already missing you.
Thanks Myriam
Author's Response: Thanks a lot :))) New stuff coming soon...
Raine
Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2012 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 14: What I need
be still my heart.......think you left a cliff hanger??? more soon, please. Thanks!
Author's Response: Soon, I promise :) So glad you like it!
Raine
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2012 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 14: What I need
“Because he needs to work for it."
I think Phillip is right. Brian never seemed to care for things that were too easy. Michael would have been easy for him.
It’s your business, for heaven sake! I thought you were smarter! But obviously that’s not the head you’re thinking with…
So true, but I wonder if Cynthia would have felt the same if it were Justin in the office with Brian.
Even the dog likes Brian.
Good chapter!
Author's Response: I know. Brian understands and values difficult more then easy. Thank for you review :)
Raine
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2012 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 14: What I need
Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank a lot, really!
Raine
Reviewer: Lyn (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2012 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 14: What I need
Far too short a chapter for my liking..
Awww a sunshine smile for Brian
Mal likes him as well...
really enjoying your story..
Author's Response: Thanks, Lyn :))
Raine
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 13: The lucky one
this is so good - I love the way you have the guys dealing with each other - and can't wait to see how Justin pulls this off - its gonna be a hoot - and then its gonna get hot!!!!!
Charle
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) Oh, I like it hot so don't you worry.
Kisses,
Raine
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2012 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 13: The lucky one
“Do YOU really belong here?” Phillip was slightly pushing it.
Whew! I thought Phillip and Brian were headed for the backroom. I glad Phillip pointed out how Brian didn't belong there.
Author's Response: Phillip is wise for his age, and has some tricks up his sleeves.
Thanks for your reviews!
Raine
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2012 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fire Away
Oh, I love Phillip!
Author's Response: Me too :)))) Raine
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2012 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 11: 6 months, 10 days, 22 hours
She made a mental note to give Brian a peace of her mind.
I feel the same way. Maybe Justin finding someone else would not be a bad idea at this point.
Author's Response: Ah, Brian and his old tricks. I see him loosing a battle with this one :)
Raine
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2012 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 10: What To Do
Of course, Phillip had a plan to make Brian work for it a little more, and presenting himself like the other half of the owners would produce a much needed perspective on the whole scene.
That Phillip is a good friend. And it's good to see Justin geting the dog for himself, regardless, if Brian likes them or not.
Author's Response: I so wanted to write about that dog. Not because of me, but because it represents Justin's freedom and gain of control over his life. If Brian loves him, he will accept him completely.
Love,
Raine
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2012 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 9: Coming home
“It looks great, Justin. Can’t wait for you to come…”
Now we're geting somewhere. :)
I loved Emmett's speech.
Author's Response: Emmett is a great character. Underestimated and clearly so much fun.
Kisses,
Raine
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2012 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 8: A new place
Thank goodness, Phillip and Justin didn't sleep together and remained just friends instead.
I see theres a possibility of Brian and Justin getting together again.
Author's Response: You and me, my friend. Those possibilities are what keeps me writing. I just love those boys so much! :)
Raine
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2012 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 7: Heaven and Hell
AARGH! I can't believe Ted did that. He thought all Brian needed was another blond body?
Author's Response: Even closest friends make errors and are blind to the real needs of that person. Although they now one thing, Brian always acts differently.
As always, thanks for you words :)
Raine
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2012 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 6: A change
I love Phillip and Justin as friends. If only Brian would man up and ask Justin what's going on, but at the same time, he did break up the relationship.
Author's Response: Thanks! I like them as friends as well. Brian will always remain on the edge of his courage when it comes to admiting his feelings.
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2012 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 5: Mess
I was just passing throught but stopped and noticed this story. I couldn't remember the summary, but I love this story. I have to finish reading it, LOL.
Author's Response: Thanks for stopping by :)
Raine
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2012 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 13: The lucky one
your story has no power to it, from Chapter 11 to now, loses strength in wording!!! you so focus on Brian fucking and acting immature for a man of his age, like in the last couple of lines of chapter 11 (That was when Cynthia closed the door, still waiting outside so no one would come looking for him. And it pissed her off. It was one thing to have a little fun when the building is empty but it was 10 o’clock in the morning and EVERYONE was there! She made a mental note to give Brian a peace of her mind. But still she stood there, drinking his coffee, being slightly disgusted with herself, not knowing Brian felt the same way) (that there should have carry over to the next story where Cynthia confronted Brian about his action) you don't provide strong detail wording where needed. Like the conversation between Phillip and Brian was like duh what point did it really make. This is a nice story but it could be better.
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stop putting Justin in the role of the man not boy next door that not him, that Michael job
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from what I got from the first three chapter Phillip is funny and Straight to the point what happen in chapter 13?
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You make Brian act and sound like immature whore.
Author's Response:
OK, look, I like that you read my story in order to write an review, but you are not my editor. If you don't like it, stop reading it and move on. To say it can be better proves what exactly? That because of that I need to take your advice, and your advice only? If I correct it the way you like it, would you tell me what to write next? Your tone is very patronizing and I didn't invite you to read my story (if you've ever written something you'll know what I'm talking about) so you could position yourself above me or any other reader for that matter. Think about it.
As for your points 1-2-3 I don't understand what are you saying, at all. But you do realize that point being of this site is to write and make characters as YOU like them to be, because it serves YOUR vision of the story. And a reader (myself included where other writers are concern) chooses to read the stories, and if he/she finds them to be too much... or not enough he stops reading them...
I do think you would made a valid question regarding Cynthia, if you would stop being whatever you are trying to pull here, and I then I would give you the answer why I postponed their conversation to some later chapter.
But, since I'm not your sister nor your teacher, I'm done educating you about good manners.
OFFICAL NOTICE:
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Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2012 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 13: The lucky one
Silly, noble Brian. Pretending that he's okay with Justin being with someone else. Although almost everyone can see through him so easily. TAG
Author's Response: Couldn't say it better myself. Don't you just want to hug him? :) He feels insecure where he feels he gives his all, you know? And to draw a parallel with real life, most people who experience abuse in early age feel like this, being not worthy. It's just one of the little details I love about him.
Kisses,
Raine
Reviewer: Lyn (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2012 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 1: Time Flies
ah Phillip Phillip Phillip, your playing with fire playing with Mr. Kinney.. oh dear.
Does Justin really know everything that Phillip is up to@?
This is going to go one of two ways.. but hopefully Brian got the hint..
Its going to explode in Justins face... and hes going to get hurt
or Brian is going to come through and they are going to live happily ever after .. well after Justin gets his way that is..
Nice chapter enjoyed it..:)
Author's Response: Thanks :)) It can really go either way. It won't be an easy reunion, that's for sure. Although I want to make Phillip a paintfully good guy, so he really doesn't have any secret agendas. He just want's Brian and Justin together as much as everyone does.
Kisses,
Raine
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2012 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fire Away
I get the feeling this plan is gonna backfire on Justin? TAG
Author's Response: Not necessarily ;) For me it's about the amount of pressure Brian is under and what it will make him do in the end. It's always better to release the stress by doing something positive, don't you agree :)
Reviewer: Dilia (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fire Away
   .RedRose.Later.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm so happy you like it. Writing for me is just another form of positive energy I can't keep inside, so I have to let it out. Thanks for taking it in.
Later, Raine
Reviewer: Lyn (Anonymous) · Date: July 07, 2012 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fire Away
aww poor Brian is so jealous.. and bad bad Justin winding him up...
enjoying your story.
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
I enjoy writing them. And I hope I get better with every chapter and every review :))
Love,
Raine
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 07, 2012 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fire Away
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Author's Response: I can only presume this review is both rich and comprehensive as your imagination. Obviously you had the urge to share that with the rest of the readers.
By all means do that, you have my permission.
Raine
Reviewer: javitxu (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fire Away
hello raine, I am really enjoying this story, so i hope we will hear from you soon.
This is the first time I have written a review, even if i liked your other story "NEXT TIME" a lot too.
Hopefully you will keep writing new adventures about brian and justin.
Best regards; Myriam
Author's Response: Dear Myriam,
thank you so much for your kind words. I hope I can live up to your expectations.
Kisses,
Raine
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 11: 6 months, 10 days, 22 hours
nicely done - seems just the way he would handle it
I feel kinda' bad that Brian is hurting while he misunderstands what is to come - but them again... it is his doing that they are apart...isn't it?
looking forward to what comes next
Charle
Author's Response: Thanks :) I'm glad you feel I didn't go too far from Brian we all know.
Next chapter coming soon :)
Reviewer: RedRose (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2012 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 11: 6 months, 10 days, 22 hours
It's realy a beautiful chapter..jealous Brian is to die for. Thank you so much for updating    and    OH.. and that Anonymous who said *why Justin is wasting his time with Brian*, I'm telling him *what are you doing here in this site,LOL. if B&J won't end up together in the end, so why bother reading their journey in the first place*
Author's Response: Thanks, honey :) I knew some of the readers might not like it, but I felt it needed to be done this way. When he is hurting, Brian mostly hurts himself, no exception here. And from here the elevation begins.
I can understand that one who's not a fan would say "why waste the time" but because I'm such a sucker for true love, I'm gonna gently push them so that they can say "why not" :))
Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2012 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 11: 6 months, 10 days, 22 hours
Tell me again why Justin is wasting his time with Brian who is acting like an immature whore, I like Phillip and Justin they should fuck they are good together.
Author's Response: Ah, an universal question :) Because we think he's sexy, and smart and unique, 'cause he's proven to be equaly gentle and cruel, but in the end we all know who is his life's centre, his one true love... And the thought of being loved like that, even when it hurts, it's something that motivates people, to seek that in their own lives... and to write fanfiction :))
Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2012 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 11: 6 months, 10 days, 22 hours
Brian's little spy - paying in blow jobs, too. What's Justin gonna say when he gets back? TAG
Author's Response: Well, knowing their history, Justin wouldn't probably be all that surprized. Brian's gonna pull a hell of a fight before he finally admits his desires. Those proud men...
Thanks for your review :)
Reviewer: Anno53 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 11: 6 months, 10 days, 22 hours
If Brian's not disgusted with himself, I am!
Author's Response: Me too. I know some of the readers might not like "this" Brian, but I wanted to show how low he can go. Thanks for the review! :)
Reviewer: Anno53 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2012 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 10: What To Do
Justin will make a comeback and I hope Brian makes an idiot of himself when that happens. :)
Author's Response: Oh, I'm sure he'll try. He's not so subtle when it comes to jealousy :))
Thanks for reading!!
Reviewer: feet526aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2012 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 10: What To Do
this whole story has had such angst and I have waited on baited breath for each chapter...can't wait for the rest! Thanks so much.
Author's Response: You gave me too much of a praise, but thank you! With every chapter I try to be a better writer and storyteller. SO glad you decided to follow my story.
Love, Raine
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 23, 2012 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 10: What To Do
Aha! A cunning plan - just hope it doesn't backfire. TAG
Author's Response: Indeed. Lots of things can sudently become a catalyst for an unexpected result.
Love, Raine
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 10: What To Do
great chapter - really sets the scene for what's to come - and I can't wait - this part is going to be really good- I can tell!
thanks
Charle
Author's Response: Thank you so much :)) I'm looking foward to writing it and giving the boys some personal space to "communicate".
love, Raine
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 20, 2012 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 9: Coming home
Next chapter, next chapter, next chapter . . . (Reader sitting in lotus position chanting new mantra in hopes of speeding up author). TAG
Author's Response: I better speed things now, cause I don't know if medical insurance covers falling from lotus position :D
Thanks, honey, for all your great words!
Reviewer: Anno53 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2012 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 8: A new place
Ruh roh ... the plot thickens!
Author's Response: It does. Stay tuned :)
kisses, Raine
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2012 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 8: A new place
Does this mean Justin's moving back to the Pitts? Yay! Then it'll only be a matter of time till Brian finds him. Squee! (reader going little happy dance!). TAG
Author's Response: Reader makes writer go happy dance also :D
Thanks for enjoying my story.
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2012 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 7: Heaven and Hell
Oh yeah, that was angst and then some more. Poor Brian. I think Ted was trying to do all he could to help. Justin is the only thing that will make things better.
Lori
Author's Response: Glad you liked it :)) Yes, from the very moment in season 4, I really liked the friendly-honest relationship between Ted and Brian. So, naturally, when he saw that something was wrong, Ted tried to do what was the most natural thing, to get Brian a hot new bed buddy. But no one really knows (except us maybe :))) how deep is Brian's love and devotion.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2012 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 7: Heaven and Hell
So is Justin hiding in back waiting to see what happens with the blond trick? I can't take - bring me Justin. Now! TAG
Author's Response: I'm afrad it was just a beautiful deception :) Justin is still in New York and Brian is still in pain ( an extension from the pain Brian felt that last scene together in season 5, ep 13).
as always, glad you like it :)
kisses!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2012 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 6: A change
Poor confused Brian! He should just suck it up, admit his feelings and talk to Justin - but then where would all the angst go? TAG
Author's Response: I don't know about you, but a love some brooding Brian before the final act of reconciliation :)
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2012 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 6: A change
I still can't believe Justin has not caught on.
Please update soon.
Author's Response: Well, deep down, I believe Justin thinks we would always love Brian more then Brian would love him. That will keep him from connecting the dots, which we have no difficulty doing.
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2012 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 5: Mess
Phillip sounds like a good friend. I like their relationship.
I
Author's Response: Thanks for saying so. He really is :)
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2012 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 4: Blow
“Don’t talk to me like you’re my agent. Talk to me like you’re my lover”
I love this persistant Justin. It is forgotten in a lot of fics how determined Justin always was.
Author's Response: I know! I always make that sound, like "oh, I see" when I start reading a good story, but then Justin starts to behave like a slave to Brian. It's not who Justin grew up to be.
Thank you for the review. As always, you're most helpful :)
Reviewer: Anno53 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2012 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 6: A change
This story is great. It's not the same kind of break up stories as others have written. Brian's a wreck, Justin isn't pining away and he has a friend. I'll be interested to see what happens next! :)
Author's Response: Thanks, honey :)) I really want to write what I believe in and that's this: Brian is a wreck without Justin (remember first 7 episodes of season 3?), Justin is smart enough to pick himself up, there are lot of great characters that can fit into every story, you just need a little imagination and not every guy Justin meets is a new "Ethan" :))
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2012 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 6: A change
Thank you for the new chapter. I like this story. I hope there is some hope that our boys can find their way back to love again.
Lori
Author's Response: :) thank you for the review. I'm always writing towards happy end!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 30, 2012 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 4: Blow
Cruel cliffhanger - next chapter, please! TAG
Author's Response: :) Thanks for liking it :) Soon I hope, the next chapter will be ready and set! xoxo
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2012 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 4: Blow
This is such a good story in the rip your heart out sort of way. The only way I can stand the pain is my hope that it will have a wonderful ending.
Lori
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely words :) I hope I can measure your expectations and I already have an ending in mind that I like a lot :))
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2012 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 3: Break
Is this taken from (NEXT TIME) if so you left out some information in the summary leading up to this story,?
Author's Response: No, this is an entirely different story. Next time was a gap filler at the end of season 1 and I ended it just before the prom.
This is how I imagined post 513 with everything that happened during the seasons as I watched them.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 1: Time Flies
:)
Author's Response: Back at you :)
Reviewer: GC84 (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2012 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 1: Time Flies
=D i like it already!!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad! :) Thanks for sticking by!
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2012 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 1: Time Flies
good beginning:)
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
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