Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2013 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 53-Planning a Life In New York
still with you! still like the story. Sad it´s about to end! <3
Author's Response: Thank you and yes it is about to end. Only one more chapter. But there will be new stories and hopefully you will like those too.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2013 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 53-Planning a Life In New York
Things certainly have come full circle for our boys. The upcoming show and pending nuptials are just icing on the cake.
I can't wait for more~JP
Author's Response: Yes- That was the quickest response I think I've ever had to posting. Full circle is a good way to describe it. Last chapter is written and will be posted next weekend.
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2013 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 52- A Night at Babylon
Now if only there was a way to make sure Michael didn't attend the wedding. He sure tries to ruin everything. I will be sad to see this story end, I've enjoyed every chapter. I can't wait to see what your next idea will be.
Lori
Author's Response: That is an interesting idea- Michael not at the wedding- my muse will have to think about that. Thank you for your words of encouragement and for letting me know you look forward to the next adventure. I have no idea what my muses will come up with but I never thought I'd still be writing this story a year after I posted the first chapter.
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2013 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 51- Marry Me
It seems Brian wasn't quite as spontaneous as Justin thought. Looks like there was some preplanning going on. I'm glad Justin is feeling more optimistic about life now. Brian doesn't have doubts, or at least he's not showing any sings.
Lori
Author's Response: Brian is rarely spontaneous when it comes to love- it is a very thought out process. I doubt he would ask Justin to marry him on a whim.
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2013 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 52- A Night at Babylon
This might be one of the best chapters you have ever written. it showed thier love and the hard work it has taken to be together.
Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment. I do believe that they really do love and respect each other and oftentimes that doesn't always come out.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2013 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 52- A Night at Babylon
Thank goodness they finally had a talk about what started this story. I'm so glad things are going well!!!
Author's Response: It only took 52 chapters and lots of angst to get here. Thanks for sticking it out and reading the whole things.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2013 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 52- A Night at Babylon
Just read the last two chapters.
* makes happy dance * a wedding ... aggrr can't wait for that chapter ... hurry.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Thank you. Depending on my RL commitments, you might wait a few weeks for the wedding, but it will come. I'm so happy that you are enjoying the story. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2013 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 52- A Night at Babylon
OMG......What a beautiful chapter. I can't wait for the wedding :)
More soon please~JP
Author's Response: Thank you- I know my readers are anxious for the wedding, but there were a few loose ends to tie up- so patience- it will come.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2013 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 51- Marry Me
I can't wait for the wedding :) I'm sure the family is going to be very surprised
Please update soon~JP
Author's Response: not sure what the wedding will be like- but keep in mind they only have two weeks
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2013 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 51- Marry Me
Leave it to Brian to propose in the most I unromantic way possible and yet somehow make it seem perfect. Great insight into the characters. TAG
Author's Response: yep- Perfect fit for Brian- just casually say I think you should marry me- sounds like Brian to me or at least to my muse.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2013 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 51- Marry Me
Very sweet chapter, Sandy. I like the way that you described their closeness to each other, and how by now they can intuitively sense what each one needs and wants. Looking forward to the rest of your story.:) *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Kim:
I love that you are enjoying the story. AS couples are togheter for a long period of time, the intuitiveness begins to show more often. ( at least from my expeience- going on 29 years with my hubby) There are just a few more things to figure out and then the muses must move on to a new story- sad- I've really enjoyed this one a lot.
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2013 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 50- Life Returns To Normal- or Does It?
Well I can't say I'm surprised by Brian question. Now I think he needs to rework the custody arrangement for Gus. I think Gus needs to spend more time with his Dads on a regular basis and not just as a special treat. I can't wait to see what kind of car Justin ends up with. I'm pretty sure they won't be hitting the used car lots.
Lori
Author's Response: You have given me all kinds of things to think about- ugh- just kidding- we will have to see what happens next.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2013 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 50- Life Returns To Normal- or Does It?
*reaches in bra and grabs a hanky* This chapter is just too romantic for words. Both of our boys finally realize that they really are each other's opportunity of a lifetime.
Lindsay needs to keep her fucking mouth shut and stop trying to fill Justin's head with doubt.
With that being said, I can't wait for Brian and Justin to start planning their wedding~JP
Author's Response: Wow- And I didn't think I wrote romance- We'll see what I come up with for the wedding- Its going to be a challenge.
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2013 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 50- Life Returns To Normal- or Does It?
Great way to end this chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you. It just seemed right.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2013 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 49- In New York, We Go Shopping
Ah yes.....a lovely revisit to our boys adventure in fuck testing sofas ;)
I'm looking forward to the next chapter~JP
Author's Response: thanks- later today- I promise
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2013 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 48-The Critic
Sorry, my friend; I just realized I neglected to review! I'm glad that Brian was able to get his point across to the critic without resorting to drastic measures. And I'm glad that things are finally coming together for the boys. Very entertaining story, my dear. Looking forward to the rest.:) *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: No worries- I'm sure you are busy writing the Parent Trap- (shrug) but Justin would have been one angry man had Brian resorted to drastic measures. Jsutin is still pretty freaked out. Now off to write the next chapter- a writer never rests.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2013 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 48-The Critic
I like the professional banter between Tim and Brian. Both men were able to clearly state their intentions without becoming hostile with one another.
I'm really surprised that Justin opened up to Carol the way he did. Kudos to him for getting over his fear and getting on with his career.
Can't wait for more~JP
Author's Response: Brian knows how to be professional and it was important that he get his message across.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 48-The Critic
Thanks for the update.
* hugs *
Author's Response: YOU're welcome. At least this one only a week since the last chapter.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2013 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 47- The Explanation
Silly Justin, getting all worked up over nothing. Glad that Brian is being Mr. Problem Solver again. Now, onto this fabled show . . . TAG
Author's Response: Drama Princess is his middle name so he has to live up to it. :-)
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2013 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 47- The Explanation
Wow, Brian sure is prepared to go to the ends of the of the world to make Justin comfortable and secure and LOVED. I hope this worked and now Justin can do the work he needs to do. I can't wait to hear what happens during Brian's interview with Mr. Callen...I don't think it will be pretty. Brian will do what ever it takes to protect Justin and I think this interviewer will give up his stalking ideas. Great Chapter, always a pleasure to see your banner pop up.
Lori
Author's Response: Lori:
Thanks- as you can see RL has bitten me and I'm not posting as regularly as I'd like, but I will finish the story- promise. The interview will be interesting. Brian as caveman in protective mode is always fun to watch- as Justin says in Season I- you sooooo love me.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 47- The Explanation
Oooh, interesting point to stop this (I won't say cruel - ha!). After all, I have had my share of cliffhangers as well, so I have no room to talk. I am more than confident that Mr. Kinney can handle this jerk quite well, so I will definitely be looking forward to their 'conversation.'
I like the way that Brian is supporting Justin in this chapter, as well as relieved that Carol wasn't angry with Justin. Very enjoyable story, my friend; thank you for sharing this with us. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: You see as a cruel writer, I want my reader to want to come back and find out what happens next. ( hahah) But it seamed a good place to stop. Brian can handle anything and anybody that has Justin involved. I try to stay in character and I hope that my stories do that. I've been rewatching the series and I'm at 512- just finished watching. I haven't watched season 5 nearly as much as I've watched the other seasons but am finding Brian and Justin's relationship very interesting in this season.
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 47- The Explanation
Talk, Justin, talk and you will be helped. What good does Brian again for him. Hopefully Brian gives Mr. Callen the five-cent treatment!!!
Author's Response: Well this time Brian is his voice and it seemed to work.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 47- The Explanation
Still loving this story.
Aggrrr why do you stop writing ... you're a tease. I want to read the talk between Brian and Mr.Callen.
* hugs *
Author's Response: I am cruel- no really I want to leave the reader wanting more- soemtimes there is a resolution, but you want your reader to come back so I leave a nice little cliff hanger. Thanks for writing and glad you are enjoying.
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 47- The Explanation
love it - really good chapter!
Charle
Author's Response:
Thank you- thanks for continuing to read.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 47- The Explanation
Oh man, Brian's little meeting with Cullen is going to be very interesting.
I can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: I hope my readers like the meeting. Now the pressure is on to make it very good.
Reviewer: Bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2013 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 47- The Explanation
Wow at last Brian seems to be getting through to Justin he is such a complex man himself yet he does not allow Justin to accept anything but the best. Brian's unwavering commitment to making Justin the best homosexual he can is amazing :)
Author's Response: Brian is amazing and he always wants what is best for Justin. I love how he took the bull by the horns and called Carol, realizing that he needed intervention.
Reviewer: Taire (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 46- Whispered Words of Encouragement
I just started reading this and love it. I get excited when I see that I can hit next for the chapter (except for this one). I can' wait for more. It really bugs me when Michael and Linds give their stupid opinions on how Brian and Justin live their lives. So mad.
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story. RL has not been easy but I will be updating this weekend. I'm rewatching the series and am on 512- I just hate on LIndsay manipulated Brian into letting Gus leave the country.
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2013 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 46- Whispered Words of Encouragement
Great chapter. Hot sex scene.
Author's Response: thanks- always wonder whenI write those sex scenes- glad it worked.
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2013 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 46- Whispered Words of Encouragement
still reading - still enjoying - still looking forward to each new post
great chapter - loved it! I love tender, loving Brian - and I love take charge, totally in control Brian - and here ou give us the best of both
thanks
Charle
Author's Response: Good to know that folks are still readind and enjoying. I do love tender Brian and in charge Brian- thanks
Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2013 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 46- Whispered Words of Encouragement
im loving the story r u going to bring justin and brian to face the critic thanks kim
Author's Response: No previews for the next chapter- just have to wait till the next one gets posted. thanks for letting me know you are still enjoying the story
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2013 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 46- Whispered Words of Encouragement
Hi, Sandy - yes, still reading and still enjoying this journey. I like the gradual progression you've made here from the time Justin lost his memory, to their reuniting, to their deepening love for each other. Not to mention that this chapter was hot! I've thought about doing some type of BDSM, but I always chicken out.:) But you did great! Looking forward to the rest of this. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Wow- glad you liked the little"Session" it was mild but I think it got the point across. Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2013 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 46- Whispered Words of Encouragement
Don t worry, we are still with you. Beautiful chapter. Keep it running :)
Author's Response: Smile- good to know folks are still reading and waiting for the final resolution.
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2013 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 46- Whispered Words of Encouragement
It looks like Brian waved his magic wand pretty darn good, but I do think he'll need to use it more often to keep Justin on track. He sure is a full time job. It seems Brian is willing to spend all the time and energy it takes to support Justin. I sure hope the meeting with Carol goes well, I think if she shows the slightest bit of worry over Justin's latest work he will really fall apart and no magic wand of Kinney proportions will be enough to get him back.
Lori
Author's Response: I love the reference ot his majic wand. Brian is using his adept skill set to assure Justin. Let's hope that he continues to be successful.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2013 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 46- Whispered Words of Encouragement
I rather like Brian's method of reassurance, it would definitely help boost my confidence ;)
I hope Brian's instincts are right and the meeting with Carol goes well.
Update soon please~JP
Author's Response: Brian has good instincts and he usually is right when it comes to Justin. I would love to have been Justin too. Giving over to my partner would be the ultimate assurance.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2013 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 45- Drama Princess
I really enjoyed this chapter and I can’t wait to see what Brian has planned for his drama princess. Hurry back please.
Cheers
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2013 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 45- Drama Princess
Great chapter, Justin sure is lucky to have such an amazing support team backing him up. I can't wait to see what Brian has in mind to get him over this hump. I'm sure it will be a cure. I'm so glad this story shows no sign of being over. I have enjoyed every word and hope it never ends.
Lori
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the great comment and support. Eventually all stories end and this one will end, but not sure how soon. But rest assured, when it ends, there will be another one to follow. Justin is a very lucky man indeed. don't we all wish we had this kind of support.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2013 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 45- Drama Princess
LOL! Loved that last paragraph, and so true about Justin. I always got a kick out of Daphne's 'no-holds-barred' talks with Brian on the show, so that was my favorite part of this chapter. Still enjoying this story very much; looking forward to how this continues to progress. I like the way their relationship and love for each other have slowly evolved during this process. Thanks for sharing this with us. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Thank you. I loved Daphne and Brian's relationship and even in first season she was not scared of Big Bad Brian, going to tell him off when Justin skipped town for New York. I'm glad that you are enjoying it.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2013 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 45- Drama Princess
Hmmmm.....what does our beautiful brunet have up his sleeve? Whatever it is I'm sure that Justin will spend a great deal of time thanking Brian for it later ;)
Please update soon~JP
Author's Response: Oh, I think everyone will enjoy Brian's idea- but we'll see.
Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2012 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 44- What Happens in New York Doesn't Stay in New York
I like this story, it has a good plot, develped well and has been long enough to get involved. Can't wait for the next chaper.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. The next chapter will be posted after the New Year.
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2012 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 44- What Happens in New York Doesn't Stay in New York
Oh can it really be that easy to wipe away all the lies and danger? I won't rest easy till the stalker is dead or behind bars....can't wait to see what happens when he interviews Brian.
Lori
Author's Response: Oh it is never that easy- at least with the angst queen as the author- Lol- more to come soon-
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2012 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 43- Home Sweet Home
Thank god for Daphne, she can usually get him to do what's right. I think he's nuts to have even talked to his stalker/critic. I'm glad he was wise enough not to give out his phone number.
Lori
Author's Response: Daphne is always a good friend to Justin- jsut hope that she can convince him to do the right thing.
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2012 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 44- What Happens in New York Doesn't Stay in New York
Maybe his life would be ok?? Don't count on that Sunshine. The best is yet to come.
Author's Response: LIfe has its ups and downs and Justin just seems to have more of each. Thanks for your comments.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2012 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 44- What Happens in New York Doesn't Stay in New York
I’m so pleased Brian made Justin talk to him. I like his tactics; not going to work until he talked. I also like the fact it wasn’t the sex alone that alerted him to Justin’s problem. I can’t wait to hear all about the punishment Brian gives Justin. LOL Please hurry back.
Cheers
Author's Response: Brian knows Justin and while the sex did alert him I think the lack of talking is more telling. More next week.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2012 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 44- What Happens in New York Doesn't Stay in New York
Now the truth is out about Justin's fanboy........Yeeessss!!!! Will Tim try to ruin Justin's career or blackmail him into a date by threatening Brian? I can't wait to find out
Update soon JP
Author's Response: Will it be door number 1 or door number 2 or door number 3- next week - or maybe the next will tell. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2012 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 43- Home Sweet Home
Man up Justin and tell Brian. Justin’s stalling tactics seem to be a very Kinney move; nice. I like the small details like where Brian came looking for Justin, it makes things so normal. Hurry back please.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thank you. I think the little details are what make a story. The story moves along as if you were watching the characters in person.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: December 15, 2012 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 43- Home Sweet Home
Dam the chapter ended again lol Come on Justin hurry up and tell Brian!!
Author's Response: lol- It is my sneaky way of getting the readers to come back. thanks for commenting and have a great weekend.
Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: December 15, 2012 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 1- New York, Here I Come
love the story sad it come to a end i wont to wish u a merry xass and a happy new year thanku kim
Author's Response: - Thank you. I appreciate your well wishes. the story continues- not quiet finished yet.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2012 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 43- Home Sweet Home
Oh no.....right before he tells him you leave us on the cliffs edge lol. Hurry with an update or we'll all go stark raving mad haha.
Looking forward to more JP
Author's Response: Justin really doesn't want to tell Brian so we have to wait just a little while longer.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2012 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 43- Home Sweet Home
Hi, Sandy - I have thoroughly enjoyed this story.:) The boys have really progressed a long way since Justin's anmesia, and I'm glad that Justin has decided to tell Brian the truth (after a marathon round of sex, though, I noticed - ha!). I'm sure together the two boys will manage to unite as one to take care of the pesky stalker. Thanks for the update; I'll be eagerly waiting for the concluding chapters. Hope you're feeling much better now. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Kim:
thank you for your kinds words and continued feedback. It has been a long journey and its almost over- :-( . Not sure how many more chapters- but 2-3 maybe 4 at most. but then it is on to the next story- just not sure what that one will be about.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2012 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 42- The End of The World Or Is It?
Oh, this is soooo going to backfire, I'm afraid! Hasn't Justin learned by now NOT to keep secrets from Brian? I would hate for him to totally change his and Brian's dream because of fear over this man. I'll be looking forward to seeing how this gets resolved! *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Justin made have finally learned his lesson, but we will have to wait and see.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2012 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 42- The End of The World Or Is It?
Oh come on Sunshine, Daphne isn't the one you should be discussing this with....TELL BRIAN THE TRUTH ALREADY!!!!! He can be there for you in a way that she can't.
More soon please JP
Author's Response: absolutely- Justin needs to talk to Brian - but the question is how will it happen or go down - will there be repercussions/- we will have to see.
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2012 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 41- The Interview
Oh No, how in the world could the stalker end up being an art critic??? You sure know how to come up with twists totally out of the blue. Will Justin be able to sit calmly and talk to this horrible man? Will he bolt and ruin his career before it really starts? aggghhh, the tension is getting to me.
Lori
Author's Response: Yep- the twist that means he can't really get away from the man- I am very evil- lol- Let's hope the tension is resolved soon.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2012 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 41- The Interview
Great cliffhanger. What will the mysterious stalker do? Can't wait. TAG
Author's Response: Thank you- cliffhangers are only as good as they make the reader want to come back- I guess I succeeded. the stalker will be interesting
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2012 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 41- The Interview
good twist.
Author's Response: thank you
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2012 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 41- The Interview
Can't say I didn't see this one coming. Justin should've been more forthcoming about his would-be stalker with Brian and Jake, now he might be finding himself in a situation he can't get out of.
Please update soon JP
Author's Response: Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to deceive.- Shakespear said it best.
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2012 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 39- Who Needs Enemies With Friends Like These
premonition it is!!
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting- We will have to see if Justin's dreams pan out.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2012 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 39- Who Needs Enemies With Friends Like These
I hope Brian surprises Justin and turns up in New York. I’m still worried about the stalker and Jake. Is Justin safe with either of these men???? I hope Jake is the friend Justin thinks he is, especially if Justin falls asleep at his place and not Carol’s office. Please update soon as the suspense it too much. Great Chapter, I’m really enjoying your work and I have caught up on a few more of your fics.
Cheers
Author's Response: Dear Flosee:
I so appreciate your comments each chapter and on my other work. It is always helpful to a writer to know folks are enjoying their work. Brian is busy; he' has a full plate of things including being with Gus for his break. Justin will haveto show everyone that he can handle himself in New York, otherwise no one will treat him like the grown man he is.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2012 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 39- Who Needs Enemies With Friends Like These
Very sweet chapter, my friend; Michael and Lindsay were particularly annoyiing and not very clever in this part, though - ugh! And why do I have the feeling that some shoe is about to drop? Things seem too happy at the moment; something tells me that stalker is hiding somewhere, ready to pounce! At any rate, I'll be looking forward to the next update. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Kim"
As always, thanks for commenting. Yes they are not very clever, but Michael has never hid his feelings from Brian- be they good or bad. I just don't think he is clever enough. Lindsay is too transparent and I've always hoped that Brian would eventually see through her ministrations. The story has comefull cirlcle= Justin is back in New York, but we shall see how the muses talk to me. I can't reveal anything otherwise you wouldn't come back and read next week.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2012 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 39- Who Needs Enemies With Friends Like These
Nice foreshadowing. I've got goose bumps already. TAG
Author's Response: :-) I have to keep my readers wanting more. As a writer you know that if you answer all the questions, no one is beating down wanting more quickly. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2012 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 39- Who Needs Enemies With Friends Like These
Looking forward to the premonition..........who is this stalker?
Author's Response: thanks for commenting. The story will unfold and it will be revealed.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2012 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 39- Who Needs Enemies With Friends Like These
I don't think it's safe for our Sunshine to go to ny alone. Brian should by some miraculous twist of fate, just happen to have a client meeting around the same time. What.....things happen ;)
The 'family' needs to back off once and for all, that's always been the problem in the first place too many people in B/J's relationship.
Please update soon JP
Author's Response: Unfortunately Brian has to let Justin go to New York alone. Justin would have a fit if he had to be chaperoned, even if we want him to be. Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2012 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 38- The Truth Hurts
Uhoh, where are you taking us with this? As always I do love the depth of the relationship you let us colive with the two.
Keep on the good stuff, I might not be commenting every time but I am still reading :)
Author's Response: I'm glad that you are still reading and enjoying. YOu will have to keep reading to find out where it's going - lol.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2012 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 38- The Truth Hurts
I read this while waiting for surgery to keep my mind occupied and you left us knowing something is going to happen to Justin which was even more distracting. LOL Please hurry back to let us know what it is. I also had time to start another one of your fics, however I didn’t get time to finish it but I will review when I do. Thank you so much for the fic and the timing of the update which I really appreciated.
Cheers
Author's Response: Sorry to hear about your surgery- hope everything went well. Well Justin is going back to New York- the place it all started.
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2012 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 38- The Truth Hurts
What a perfectly wonderful chapter, right up to the last sentence. Just had to throw a dark hint of what horrible things are in store for our favorite couple. You sure know how to write! I can't wait to find out what trouble is brewing.
Lori
Author's Response: lol- I've always believed that a good writer leaves the reader wanting more and to turn the page - so I guess I did my job. Next chapter is written but I jsut have to review my beta's comments- so it will be posted this weekend.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2012 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 38- The Truth Hurts
Really enjoyed this chapter, Sandy, and the love and tenderness between the two of them; a rather ominous ending, though, but that just means there will be more to this story before you complete it, so that's a good thing!
Looking forward to the next installment.:) *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Thanks for all your comments, Kim. Yep- more for the story- not ready for the tale to end- but there is an end- jsut not necessarily right away.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2012 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 38- The Truth Hurts
Oh my, do I smell trouble ahead for our beautiful duo? Is Justin beginning to have second thoughts?......guess I'll just have to keep reading this wonderful story to find out ;)
Update soon please JP
Author's Response: Yep- you smell some trouble but you'll just have to read to see what will happen. thanks for reading and your great comments.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2012 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 37- Family # 2
I read the first thirty chapters in one sitting and tried to keep up with the updates (usually through automatic notification) but somehow I missed seven updates and now I'm all caught up.
Debbie is absolutely right in telling everyone to mind their own business as to why Justin decided to move back to the pitts. Justin is doing what is right for him and no one else, Brian is key in keeping his artistic drive alive.
I can't wait to see how things develop for our boys now that Sunshine is back for good. Update soon please JP
Author's Response: Thank you. Like you, I try to keep up with the udates, but RL gets in the way and I don't always get to post every week- try. Debbie has always been supportive of Brian and Justin; they are her sons by proxy. Brian has always supported Justin, now only if Justin would only let Brian be the totally supportive partner- ie tell him secrets.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2012 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 37- Family # 2
Team Britin; I love it that they have each other backs when the family are being difficult. Sometimes Justin is too nice, he should just tell them to _ _ _ _ off. Brian hesitating over an offered blow job as he is eager to get to Deb’s for dinner. Sandy that was too funny. LOL We can go shopping and you go baby; those words are so Emmett that you can’t help but love him. This fic is so worth the 100 reviews you have received so congratulations.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words of encouragement. Justin can't let go of his country club manners- although sometimes I really think he should. I love Emmett- he is quite fun to write. (Shamless plug here- The World Revolves around Brian Kinney is a nice one shot that you might enjoy- found here.)
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2012 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 37- Family # 2
How blind can Justin be? That crazy stalker is going to find him again and he will be sorry he didn't tell Brian!! Hey maybe the stalker can meet Michael and they can hook up and run away together, that will improve things a lot. I'm afraid Justin won't be getting a car from Brian now that his toll for a ride is so pleasing to Brian. It could cut into home much needed togetherness if Justin has his own transportation.
Lori
Author's Response: Hadn't thought of Brian not wanting to buy him a car so he can charge by the blow job- great idea . Justin is naive- the stalker isn't going to go away jsut because he wishes it
Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2012 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 37- Family # 2
Linds and Michael always the same jealouses...lol
Author's Response: They don't wantPeter Pan to grow up. So sad
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2012 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 3- Party Time
:)
Author's Response: :-)- thank you
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2012 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 2- The Photo Shoot
:)
Author's Response: thanks
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2012 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 1- New York, Here I Come
Sorry to hear about deleting this story. Don't bother to answer all these smiles; just giving you back some of the review count you lost.
:)
Author's Response: thanks- I had about 70 responses so that sucked that I lost them all- I appreciate the thought
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 02, 2012 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 19- Twenty Questions
Great job so far - need next chapter asap! TAG
Author's Response: Next chapter will be posted on Friday or Saturday- but I need some time to write- RL has been super busy
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2012 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 1- New York, Here I Come
Im just finding this now,im very interested in it :) xx
Author's Response: Glad you found it and find it interesting. Hope you enjoy it.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 02, 2012 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 2- The Photo Shoot
Surprise Brian! Interesting start! TAG
Author's Response: This should be interesting
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2012 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 1- New York, Here I Come
I am still really enjoying this very different look - almost a roll reversal of sorts - Brian trying desperately to write the Taylor operating manual as he goes...while being head over heels in love and wracekd with pain and doubt...
good writing - thanks for posting
Charle
Author's Response: I never thought of it that way- role reversal, but you are correct, Brian is trying to figure out the Taylor manual. Thanks for writing
Reviewer: Lyn (Anonymous) · Date: June 02, 2012 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 14- Reunion
really enjoyed this chapter. its a good story..
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you are enjoying the story.
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