Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2016 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2016 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 1

This one is a real gem!

Did I tell you how much I love your sense of humor?

Making Michael to walk out without another word - how I wish to see him behave like that in the show...

 Author's Response:

Hey there :)))

I am so happy you enjoy the humour in my fics.

Thinking about your Michael comment; I did have him in character all the way up to that point.LOL  Now I wish I had seen him behave that way in the show also.

"A real gem" thank you for such a lovely comment.

Cheers :)))

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Review lost due to the system being put back to the 14^th of March 2016.

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2015 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

Cute fic! I love that Justin chose Ted. I always thought he was cute. I also love that Michael got that Justin is Brian's partner.

Author's Response:

OMG, could you imagine a Justin/Ted pairing.  My mind is a little warped at times, but I think the reason behind it here is justifiable.  I did love Teddy, and I think he would make a very gentle and caring lover.  Yep, Michael got the message, loud, yet not so clear since Emmett had to repeat the premise of the game. LOL  Thanks heaps for the cute comment.

Cheers :)))

Reviewer: Twinkminded (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2014 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

:)  Funny.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the smiley face and the" funny" comment.  I am so happy my first attempt at writing fic or anything (that's anything longer than an email.  Okay, it's not that much longer, lol) has been well received.  Thanks heaps for taking the time to comment and for leaving my favourite type of review.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2013 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 1

Funny. Really nice. Thanks.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my fic and the lovely comments; funny and really nice.  Welcome to MW; I hope you continue to enjoy this site as much as I do.   

 

Cheers

Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2013 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

I thought this was great! I am not a fan of Michaels, so I thought this was funny. I would have liked for the story to be longer otherwise great first try!

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to let me know what you thought of my first attempt Al. The first one is always the scariest to post but it doesn’t get much easier with time. LOL I really appreciate you leaving a review. Thanks also for the funny comment; it’s one of my favourite words in a review. Cheers

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2012 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

...Emmett had implied that Justin was Brian’s partner.

This was very clever. I didn't catch on, initially.

Author's Response: I’m so happy you admitted you didn’t catch on initially as I like it when what is perceived to be a throwaway line is the crux of the writing. Thank you for the clever comment as this was my first piece of writing and it was as scary as all hell to post. Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2012 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

What an adorable story. I love a anything that ruins a meal for Mikey! I don't know why Justin had to try and shield him from the cold hard facts. I think it's a nice kick in the teeth that Brian would pick Ben over Michael, I mean really, of the two who in their right minds wouldn't...I'd pick a half dead maggot infested rabid wombat over Michael....Oh wait, I don't want wombats to get rabies, lets give rabies to a bucktoothed badger with rickets and lice. I still think that would be a easy pick over Michael. Now I am assuming this would just a one poke, one time only in the dark, no lights, no conversation, just a Slam, bam, thank you man type deal. I can't see them actually wanting to form any type of lasting sexual relationship with their picks. I mean, can you picture Justin and Ted meeting up for weekly encounters, I don't think so. Justin would not allow Brian to be so busy with 2 additional men to service, that might cut down on his ability to provide tip top performance that Justin is so used to getting.

I think this was a wonderful jewel, I can't believe it's your first work of art. You have the talent and a wonderful unique way of looking at the boy. I can't wait to see what you're going to come up with next. I have hope I can lead you to a wonderful accidental death for icky Michael.
Lori with her BigPaw

Author's Response: Well thank goodness Australia doesn’t have rabies so our wombats are safe, but yes anything over Michael is preferable, maggots, flees anything you may need a penicillin tart for. The only reason poor Justin got Ted was because I needed Ben for Brian and the only other options in their group were Michael, already discussed, EEwwwww, Emmett but I really wanted him to select Brian and not be the centre of the story, and Carl. Yes you forgot Carl didn’t you, excuse me for a moment I think I just threw up in my mouth a little. He may be straight but it was hypothetical so they could choose him. I am so pleased I put that picture in your head. Thank you for the great review BigPaw plus it gave me a good laugh. Cheers

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2012 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi, You said this was your first story, I really liked it, wish it had more chapters.  A good start, please keep sending out stories. Very entertaing. 

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I hope to post another story tomorrow but as you can see by my attempted reply to some reviews I don’t always know what I am doing. Cheers

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2012 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

Cool game!  I'm glad you included everyone's reasons for their choices. 

If I was hooking them up, I would agree with all your choices except I think I would have Justin choose Ben, because Ben's hot, hot, hot!  Give me a couple of seconds to visualize that....... Oh, yeah, he and Ben would be a good hook-up.  LOL.

All the best,

Laura

 

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Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2012 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was very funny especially as it has a unhappy Michael lol

Author's Response: Thank you Chris I am stoked that a fellow Aussie is reviewing my work. I lived in Adelaide for awhile and loved it. Cheers

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2012 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hello!  First of all, welcome to the site!  I found this very interesting - it reveals quite a bit in such a short amount of words.  And I still think Michael will always have some residual, unrequited feelings for Brian, despite his marraige to Ben. I always thought his and Brian's relationship was kind of weird, anyway, but maybe that's just me.:)

This reminds me of the episode where Justin and Brian were dueling with their forks at the booth - ha!  Thanks for sharing this - looking forward to more stories.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Author's Response: Thank you Kim for taking the time to review this. I am astounded at how you wrote exactly how I felt about the Michael/Brian relationship, it was kind of weird. I enjoy your writing and now I have joined I will leave reviews. I especially like your series, Going, Going Gone and A Little less Conversation. Cheers