Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2015 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 2
I'm glad to see Brian actually confront Justin about what Ted had told him instead of just lashing out as he has been known to do. I'm also very glad to see that Blake and Ted communicated. I was always a big fan of their relationship.
Author's Response: I love Ted and Blake's relationship too (as well, also). Okay, now I am just being a little silly; "too", is apt wording there. Confusion did reign in the Kinney/Taylor household for a short while; well, until Justin asked the hard question.
Thank you for taking the time to reviews. I really do appreciate that.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2015 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
Briand became such a source of strength for Ted. I love their friendship.
Author's Response: I enjoyed Brian and Ted's relationship as it blossomed. Is that the right word, or is that such a girly thing to say? Maybe, flourished. Okay, that is just as feminine. LOL Thrived, grew, prospered, I will let you pick any appropriate masculine term. LOL
Cheers :)
Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: December 23, 2014 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 2
I love Brian and Ted's friendship the last two seasons of the show. You captured it beautifully.
Author's Response: Haha I should have read this review before I answered the first one. It seems we are of the same opinion. :))))
Thanks heaps for saying I was able to capture their friendship.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: December 23, 2014 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
Blake and Ted both struggling with temptation to relapse is very canon. I'm excited to see where this goes.
Author's Response: I love Ted and Blake's relationship. I thought as the series progressed they would have been a better friends couple to Brian and Justin as they would have had more in common.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2013 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 2
excellent-Ted/Blake and Brian/Ted. I like both these relationships and the way you have portrayed them here.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the combination of this fic, Ted/Blake and Brian/Ted, as I really enjoyed both these relationships during the series, since they seem to have more depth to them than some of the other minor characters. Thank you for reviewing, it is really appreciated.
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Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2012 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 2
Delightful........very different and really enjoyed. Thanks.........
Author's Response: Delightful........very different; thank you I liked Ted and Brian’s relationship. The fact you said it was different was a real thrill as I just write what pops into my head. Scary thought I know. I am very pleased you really enjoyed it as that sort of comment is the reason I keep writing. Thank you very much for the lovely review.
Cheers
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2012 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 2
Nice one! And a good antidote to the crying jag your wonderful death!fic subjected me to.
Cheers,
Vin
Author's Response: I’m glad you read something different after the death!fic. That was my intention hence I posted them together as I had an emotional time with the MCD one myself. Thank you for reviewing I’m glad you like it.
Cheers
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2012 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 2
So Blake was the real flaw in this plan, he didn't even take the time to fill Justin in on his lie. I bet if Gus had been in on it all he could have smoothed out all the little pit falls and added a supper cute element with a drop of drool...in my dream world there would be a big dog but I think this additional chapter put a good finish to the story. Brian was the hero, always looking out for the best interest of his friends. The blond boy was just worried about his hungry tummy and something right below it. I'm sure Michael was in some dark alley plotting an evil plan to lure Brian into his bed. I loved the way Ted and Brian were trying to out play each other. Ted always seemed to know just how far he could push Brian. I'm sure you're exhausted so get a nap in, use a pillow, not your keyboard!
Lori
Author's Response: BIGPAW sssshhhh. I have been so attentive to you; writing a chapter to conclude this story and not putting Michael in the last four pieces I have written so you must play nicely and not tell my secrets. A horny Justin that Brian didn’t pounce on what was I thinking? You must now make it up to me and get that image out of my head of Michael and Brian. Wait a minute…Brian…shirtless…..perspiration droplets, oh yeah I’m good, thanks. The keyboard was so uncomfortable so I took your advice and got 40 winks although I wasn’t awake to count, it could have been 39. Thank you for the review even if it is stuff nightmares are made of.
Cheers
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2012 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 1
Awww how sweet. I'm so glad Ted wised up and got over that sick obsession he had for Michael in season one. What a waste of time that was. Thank god Blake tried to kill him and make him wake up and see the light. Great story, but I am worried that Justin in now going to start lying to Brian about his plans. I am always keeping my eye on him, you never know when he might run after another Ethan type weasel.
Lori
Author's Response: I know I should probably call you Lori but I just like calling you BigPaw so I hope you don’t mind. You may have just pointed out to me my error in this story so thank you. I was thinking Ted had used Brian as an excuse and Brian would never have known if he hadn’t happened by. Therefore, I thought since Ted used Brian and they were going to the club then Blake would use Justin as his excuse thinking Justin probably wouldn’t be with them if they went straight from work. Justin wouldn’t know anything about it. So I thought the conversation between Brian and Justin when Brian got home would have been quite weird as Brian would be asking when Blake was picking him up for the movies and Justin would be dressed to go to a restaurant. Silly me.
Maybe I over thought the title too as I based it on a card game which I think some countries might call Heart Attack but we call it Snap. It’s when two cards of similar value are placed on top of one another. I thought since Ted and Blake were have the same problem, were tempted with the same solution (drugs), came to the same conclusion of dealing with said problem and ended up in the same place at the same time, Then the same value in what they did could be attributed to each one.
Do you realise this is my longest answer to any review and I think I may be rambling. I thought the whole Michael/Ted thing was stupid myself. I like Justin though and won’t make him the villain in any of my stories. Young and naive maybe but haven’t we all been there. Thank you again next time I need to be clearer in what I write.
Cheers
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2012 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 1
really nice - I love that you explore the relationship between Ted and Brian - and the two meeting up that way - priceless
good job - I would love to see these two get more fan-fic
loving life,
Charle
Author's Response: I know it sounds silly but even though Blake put Ted in a coma I still wanted them to end up together right from the start. I liked watching Ted and Brian’s relationship unfold and the mutual respect they had for each other. Charle I really enjoy your writing and your review is very much appreciated so thank you so much. Sorry I muddle up replying to your review of ‘An Unhappy Truth’ but I think my computer has Gremlins, either that or the truth, I just stuffed up.
Cheers
Reviewer: Iani (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2012 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 1
Nice start. Now point me to the rest of it! ;D
Really, your interesting theme deserves a more extensive story.
Author's Response: Thank you Iani for your review. Unfortunately I’m still getting my feet wet. I have however been encouraged enough with the feedback I have received to take the plunge into a multi-chapter story. Maybe when you read that you will be telling me, less is more. LOL
Cheers
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2012 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh that was good it was really believable POV about Ted and Blake and a lovely ending
Author's Response: Thank you. I am going to try a multi-chapter story soon so I hope you will stick with me. Cheers
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2012 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
:)
Author's Response: I tried to thank you on your review of ‘An Unhappy Truth’ but I am still learning the ropes and I stuffed it up. So thank you for all your help. Cheers
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