Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2016 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 1
I loved this!!! :D I love that Brian is so secure on his relationship with Justin. His way of demonstrating his love for Justin was very Kinney-like, and something I would expect from him. XD I felt a little bad for the whole situation, however. Not because I don't love seein this kind of PDAs from our boys, but because I feel like Debbie somehow ruined the rutine between Ben and Justin. I think that those two never talked much during the show, and I liked seeing that there was a real friendship growing here, nothing sexual about it. In any case, a very lovely fic! :) Hope to read you soon in another one! Kisses!
Author's Response: Hello Fátima :)))
Oh, I like your observation that Justin and Ben never talked much during the show. I agree with what you say as I also think they could have had a very close, platonic relationship; both men were portrayed as intellectuals' and given they were both creative it would have seemed logical. I really enjoyed hearing your view on Ben and Justin relationship as it isn't something I have seen explored much.
I like the way you put this; "demonstrating his love for Justin was very Kinney-like". I'm so glad you think that is the case.
Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know you have read this fic. I can't tell you how much I appreciate your very kind words.
Cheers :))) and kisses
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2016 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2016 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 1
Actions AND words - how could anybody beat this :)
"Intimacy in its creation."
Indeed.
Author's Response:
Brian was always a man that let his actions speak louder than his words. Thank you for noticing he got the opportunity to do both in this fic.
"Intimacy in its creation." I love your wording. Thank you so much for such a lovely review. I really do appreciate people who take the time to let me know they have read and enjoyed my fics.
Cheers my friend :))))
Author's Response: Review lost due to the system being put back to the 14th of March 2016.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2015 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
<3 Beautiful BJ romance!
Author's Response: Eureka this was my first dalliance into writing sex and I wanted it to be more than just physical so I love that you used the word romance. Truly, thank you, I really appreciate the time you have taken to leave such lovely comments.
Cheers :))))
Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2015 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 1
Impressed with how secure Brian is with Justin. Very well written!!
Author's Response: I would love to think Brian could be so open with his feelings. They were always evident, but obviously more subtle, a lot more subtle. LOL. I enjoyed writing this as I wanted to express my version of Brian's true feelings, even if the extreme display of affection is just a fantasy for me to enjoy. LOL Thank you for saying it is well written; I am confident with my ideas being original, but I am not confident with the way I express them, so I really do appreciate that type of comment.
Cheers :)))
Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: December 23, 2014 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
I am all about jealous Brian. I'm glad he accepts that Justin and Ben are creating. It's nothing like what he has with Brian.
Author's Response: I enjoyed writing the back and forth between Debbie and Brian in this fic. She would suggest there was something between Justin and Ben, and Brian would point out what she was seeing was innocent. I 100% agree with you; although I think creating is a rush, I definitely would not rate it over what Brian and Justin have. Physically or emotionally.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2014 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 1
Beautiful- very hot and very true- sex or love making between two people in a committed relationship is indescriable
sfscarlet
Author's Response: Oh, I love what you have written here about two people in a committed relationship and I agree wholeheartedly with it. Thank you so much for the great comments. Beautiful and very hot are immensely special as this is the first time I wrote anything with sexual content. I really appreciate your support Sandy and thank you for taking the time to review for me.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2013 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow!!! Hot!!! I love it everytime Brian is showing how much he loves Justin! :):):) {{{Hugs}}}
Author's Response: I agree with you, I too love it when Brian shows how much he loves Justin and I’m sure there were many faces in the diner that were shocked to witness this PDA. LOL. Thank you for taking the time to review and for those wonderful words Wow!!! Hot!!!
Cheers
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2013 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 1
OMG. That was so hot. I think I need a shower. I want to sit in that diner forever just to watch them.
*****
Author's Response: Thank you so much Lorie for supporting my fic. I watch the read count go up but it is nice to know who is reading it and that they enjoyed it. Actually wanting to be there is such a lovely compliment.
Cheers
Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2013 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow! That made wish I had actually been in that fictional diner! Just to witness that.
Author's Response: OMG Al thank you so much for saying that as it is one of the nice compliments an author can receive. I really am delighted you have left reviews to let me know how you feel about my fics; so thank you very, very much for such a lovely review.
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Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2012 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 1
this is good ,really good
Author's Response:
Hey wellreadbunny I see you have found one of my older pieces. Thank you for the compliment saying this is good, I really appreciate it. I also appreciate that you took the time to leave a review. Thank you so much.
Cheers
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2012 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh- Jealous Brian and interferring Debbie- what a wonderful mix of creativity. And I do agree with Ben- creating is a rush.
Author's Response: I’m glad you like this; again it is another first for me as I hadn’t written any sex until this piece. Thank you Sandy I very much appreciate your reviews.
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Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2012 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 1
Brian has an interesting way of showing that he's okay with Justin and Ben spending time together. I liked how he pointed out the reasons he wasn't worried. Wonder just what Michael thought in the end. Was he pissed, since he probably resented Ben giving Justin a peck on the lips even though he'd done exactly the same with Brian. Mikey needs to get a life.
Author's Response: I didn’t give Michael a bigger part in this as I don’t think he would have grasped what was really happening but I’m sure Ben and he had words afterwards. I think Brian would always try to find logic where others would assume things without really knowing the full story. I just wanted to show him letting his walls down allowing others to get a glimpse of what Justin and he have together. Thank you so much for taking the time to review.
Cheers
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2012 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was really great. Keep writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the encouragement galenut. I’m so pleased you enjoyed it and took the time to review.
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Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2012 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 1
Totally hot!! And I love how jealous Brian gets hehehe :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the ‘Totally hot!!’ comment. Brian Kinney certainly has his own way of dealing with jealously doesn’t he? Not that he would ever admit to the emotion. I really do appreciate you taking the time to review this, thank you.
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Reviewer: kim (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2012 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 1
hi i have read this 3 times i say u should try another one this story is very good so go 4 it kim
Author's Response: Thank you Kim for taking the time to review this. I have two other stories posted ‘An Unhappy Truth’ and ‘Snap’ I would be honoured if you wanted to read them. Thank you so very very much for the encouragement it is really appreciated.
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Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh my! This was really wonderful! (I have to admit the "baby" threw me for a second coz' that's like a squick factor for me but then you explained it so it made it kinda okay. :-)
This really did have an intimate feel to the words. I just loved it!
Hugs, Cindy
Author's Response: Thank you Cindy I am so pleased you like this. I am really trying to watch my wording and ‘baby’ is something I would never use as where I am from we are more likely to use ‘Babe’ or other terms of endearment but I am trying to use language more acceptable to the masses.
This really did have an intimate feel to the words. Do you know how flattering this sentence is? Thank you so very much.
Cheers
Reviewer: jane (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2012 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 1
wow & WOW
Author's Response: wow & WOW…Jane what can I say, thank you, thank you so much. I really appreciate your review and since I only write small stories my review count has never been in double digits so thank you again as you are review number 10. You have made my day.
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Reviewer: Ceci (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2012 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this - thank you for writing! I hope you write more!!!
Author's Response: Ceci thank you for your review. I do have two other stories ‘An Unhappy Truth’ and ‘Snap’. I would love your feedback if you get a chance to read them. I am really pleased you liked this as I must say I was very nervous about posting it.
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Reviewer: charlotte taylor (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2012 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 1
WELL that was so hot.Also had the ahhh factor in there too.I just love the stories that put the others in their "gang" well and truly in their place.Well done.
Author's Response: You are to kind. I’m pleased you found it hot but saying it had the ahhh factor makes me ecstatic. I can see the gang that are in the diner having well and truly been put in their place. Wouldn’t it be interesting hearing them explain it to the other? Thank you so much for reviewing this Charlotte.
Cheers
Reviewer: meme$veryrich (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2012 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
love this very much a touch of sexy class... (BIGPAW) you go girl hahaha like mother like son Debbie and Michael both ASS's
Author's Response: A touch of sexy class... What a wonderful thing to say. Thank you so very very much. I can see you are a fan of BigPaw too, isn’t she hilarious. I like your reviewer signature meme$veryrich.
Cheers
Reviewer: Sisa (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2012 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great fic! Just shows how people tend to get into BJ business :) and just can see the scene in the diner:)
Author's Response: Sisa I am so pleased you could see what I was trying to convey by Brian answering Debbie’s questions in a way to convey she was making a mountain out of a mole hill but I’m sure she got that message loud and clear by the end. I really appreciate you taking the time to review this, thank you.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2012 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is well written. True to the characters. Also very hot.
Author's Response: Thank you a thousand times. Lorie this was the first time I had written anything with sex in it so to say it was hot is a great compliment but then to say it was well written I am just so very flattered.
Cheers
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2012 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great Story! I could tell Ben was just begging for a freaky accident to happen to his boring pick of a partner. I know he regrets the day he tied himself to Michael. I bet if he'd just give up that silly vegetarian diet he'd get the nerve to leave Michael and find a worthy mate. I think the lack of protein made him foolish enough to think he could make a play for Justin, come on, did he really think Justin was interested in him? And don't even get me started on Debbie. She needs to keep her red wig out other peoples business. She is the cause of Michael and deserve a huge dose of blame... I really did love this story, I just wanted to turn it around and find a way to vent my feeling about Michael since another certain author won't killer off for me!! and you happened to mention you enjoyed my comments.
Lori
Author's Response: Lori please, don’t hold back, tell me what you really think. LOL I love your comments; you have such a great sense of humour. If there was a page dedicated to your comments it would be the first thing I read when I sign on. Thank you for the review, I have reread it a couple of time already.
Cheers
Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2012 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 1
way to go. I enjoyed your story. The closesness of Brian and Justin is always my kind of story, not just the sex, but of the heart.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed this. I am extremely pleased you got the fact it wasn’t about the sex as I wasn’t sure if I conveyed that point enough. Thank you for the review.
Cheers
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2012 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was great. Loved how Brian showed them he loves Justin.
Author's Response: You are really making me feel so welcome here by letting me know you enjoyed this. Thank you Jane.
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Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2012 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was good. very well written. Very different. Loved it. GOOD JOB!:)
Author's Response: This is the best compliment I could ever hope to receive that you think my work is well written. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for once again encouraging me with your lovely review.
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