Reviewer: jg1225 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 1
Love it, more please!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I just added chapter 5 :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 4
You have to continue this. I want' to know if the Makvins lose. If Brian goes back with Justin, or does he end up staying here. I'm sure Emmett will be happy to take Justin under his wing and can you just imagine Justin meeting Deb? Love that final line. Just right.
Author's Response: Oooh, I didn't think about Deb meeting Justin...oh, that could be fun to write!! LOL
Thank you so much for your comments!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 3
Okay - a glowing orb surrounding them - freaky. But Brian's world turning black!!!
The next chapter is going to be goooood.
Author's Response: Thank you!!! :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 2
I love Justin's fascination with the word fuck. It's so cute. Ted's comment about Christmas in Kinney-land. <chuckle> I have a feeling that Brian's going to enjoy initiating Justin into Earth's version of sex.
Author's Response: Fuck really is the best word ever, you can use it for many different purposes LOL Thanks so much for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
LOL. From the moment Brian realizes that Michael's misled him to where he races back to his loft, there have been tidbits of amusing lines. Michael admitting he embellished the truth, Emmetts excuses for Ben bringing a suitcase, Ted's many questions. I still can't beleive that Brian fell for it. If your muse is working for you this way, I say keep it coming. It's totally enjoyable.
Author's Response: hehehe, thank you! I had fun writing the first chapter ;)
Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 1
More please? I can really see Mikey 'queenin out' over this.
Author's Response: Thank you! LOL Yeah, Mikey has his moments...LOL
Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 4
Okay Okay..... you need to finish the story, that's for sure :D
First, when I read about the alien thing, I was a little skeptically but it turned out very funny :D
Author's Response: I was skeptical about even posting it, so I appreciate you taking the time to read it! Thank you! And I'm glad you liked it! :)
Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 3
"Oh" :D this is so good.... but what happened to Brian?
Author's Response: Orgasm was so intense that he blacked out. That's what happens when you fuck an alien like Justin LOL ;)
Reviewer: NoChaser (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 4
I'm going to quietly whisper... "More?"
Please?
Can't wait to find out who Klutavenish is...
Roni
Author's Response: soon!
hugs,
Snow
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 4
Hi, Julieta! I like it - kind of like the glow in "Cocoon" between Tawny Welch and Steve Guttenberg when they kissed, only hotter.;) I laughed out loud when Brian asked if he could 'keep him.' Hope you continue this - I'd like to see how this plays out.:) *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Thank you, Kim! I'm thrilled to read all the positive reviews as I was really hesitant about posting this. Thanks so much for your comments!
Hugs,
Snow
Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 2
LMAO .... so many hilarious lines here.... :D
Author's Response: Thank you!! :)
Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is totally strange, but I'm laughing so far :D
Author's Response: LOL It is bizarre, isn't it?!! LOL But I'm glad it's making you laugh!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 1
:) Outstanding plot idea.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: NoChaser (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 1
I LOVE the universal translator! I want one!
This looks very interesting and I can't wait to see the... um... fireworks. ;o
Roni
Author's Response: LOL Thank you!!!
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