Reviewer: BritinForever (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2016 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
That was so sweet. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your comment.
I was very glad you liked my story.
A big hug!
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2016 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
Wonderful; very funny and sweet at the same time.
Author's Response: Thank you!
This is still my favorite story of all I've written and I'm very happy when someone like her too.
A big hug! Fatima.
Reviewer: McFee (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2016 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
I LOVE this story.
Author's Response: Thank you!
I am very happy to know that you liked the story.
A big hug! Fatima.
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2015 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
Very clever prequel. Loved it
Author's Response: Thank you, my dear! I'm glad you liked my story.
A big hug, Fatima.
Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2014 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
Awwww this is adorable! Creative and believable, I love four and a half year old Justin's sassy attitude. Thanks for writing. ~Mandi
Author's Response: OMG! One of my favorite authors commenting on my story! Thank you! This is one of the my stories I most enjoyed writing since I was inspired a lot on my daughter when she was that age and I wondered how Justin would be a kid: smart, sassy, and irresistible.
Sorry to be slow to respond to your comment, I was without a computer for a few weeks and could not do it before.
A big hug!
Fátima.
Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: October 07, 2014 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
That was a lovely story.
Author's Response: Thank you!
I'm very glad you liked my story. I'm very glad you read my story and leave your comment.
A big hug!
Fatima.
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2014 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
Hi Fatima!
this one was sooo sweet and funny, and having a four year old son myself, I was just touched by your story. Justin is so cute...
:)
thank you!
*hugs*
~alois~
Author's Response: Hi Alois!
I'm very happy for you like my story. This is my favorite story of all stories I wrote.
I'm very glad you remembered your child because when I wrote this story, I thought a lot in my daughters when they were that age. I think the kids in this age, amazing.
A big hug, my dear!
Fátima.
Reviewer: Aliada (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
Thank you very much for this lovely story! :) I couldn't help but smile, reading it!
Justin is so wonderful child here. I'm completely in love with him :) He is so beautiful, charming and smart. I'm not surprised that Brian was impressed by their meeting so much. Michael's reaction to Justin's words was so funny :) I got a plenty of positive emotions!
And the second part of your story was so touching! I really could see love, tenderness and care between Brian and Justin. I'm very glad Brian remembered that he has already seen Justin. I was hoping for it.
Thank you once again!
Author's Response: Thank you, my dear!
I also have a great affection for the image of a child when Justin. I see it exactly as I wrote it: gorgeous, smart and full of charm. In short, irresistible of all forms. Brian had a glimpse of what their future held.
As for Michael ... I loved describe him as I did and put him in situations that I put.
Certanmente, Brian would remember such a remarkable meeting and realize that Justin was really his destini, your soul mate.
Thanks for the comment Sue.
Much love to you.
Hugs and kisses.
Fatima.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2014 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
Hi Fatima,
Congratulations on the well-deserved blue ribbon!
It's such a sweet fic, one of my favs featuring the boys at very young age. Thanks for sharing <3
Fran K
Author's Response: Hello, my dear friend!
Thank you! That was one of my stories I most enjoyed writing and is still my favorite. I love the image of Brian and Justin meeting prior to episode 101. They live in the same city and could have happened in any way, do not you agree?
Much love to you and your family, my friend!
Kisses!
Fatima.
Reviewer: Teddy Gus (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2014 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
I love your story of 4 year old Justin and teen aged Brian and drunken Mikey. Justin is so delightful and he is exactly as one would imagine him at four, you're really good, and your story is a delight. Love from Jacky M
Author's Response: Oh, Jacky! You're so sweet. That was the story I most enjoyed writing and I'm very glad you liked it.
Thank you very much for your comment.
A big hug!
Fatima.
Reviewer: NicJ (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
aww, that was sweet! :)
Author's Response: Oh, forgive me for taking you both to respond. I'm so embarrassed by it.
I'm very glad you liked my histórria and left a comment.
Gande a hug!
Fatima
Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: October 06, 2013 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
I really enjoyed your story, I always thought it was sweet that Brian's son was named by Justin after his teddy bear. I liked seeing Justin as a young child, so smart a lot smarter than michael!
Author's Response: Hello Vlsope!
I would like to apologize for taking so long to answer your comment so amazing. I feel so evergonhada.
I agree with you about how Gus was named Justin. I always found it so sweet, just like you.
Thank you very much for your comment and for letting me know you liked my story.
A big hug!
Fatima.
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
I really liked this story! :D I think Justin was so cute! *0* And I could totally picture that happening..... Hope to read you soon in another story.... Kisses! :D
Author's Response: Hello, Fatima!
Thank you for reading and for leaving a comment.
I'm so glad you're reading my stories:)
Thank you!
Kisses!
Fatima.
Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2013 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
Sweet story. Amazing! Thanks.
Author's Response: Thanks, Saskya!
Thank you for your attention to the story and for commenting. Glad you liked it.
A hug!
Fatima.
Reviewer: taurus 1958 (Anonymous) · Date: July 17, 2013 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
Very nicely done
Author's Response: Hello, Taurus!
Thank you!
I am very happy with your comment.
Frande a hug!
Fatima
Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2013 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
Such a sweet story. Thanx!
Author's Response: I would like to thank your comment.
I think Brian and Justin are soul mates and really wanted to write a fic that reflected that. I was glad you enjoyed it!
A hug!
FK
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2013 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
Congratulations on the blue ribbon. I love the way you wrote Justin as a child; Michael will never be a match for him no matter what the age difference is. Thanks for the laugh.
Cheers
Author's Response: I am very happy to have received the blue ribbon. I feel very honored by this and at the same time I feel increasingly at home in the MW. I did not expect to be so well received by the people of the site. I am a foreigner who does not speak the language and was so well accepted and welcomed by all of you what moves me deeply.
Thank you from my heart to you and especially Predec2, who with his generosity was willing to translate my fics and create beautiful banners of my stories. I would never be able to thank her for that. Predec2 is a person who currently has all my affection and admiration :)
I usually do not write stories like fluffy Teddy Gus, but she never left my head and I had to write it. Today is my most beloved fic.
As for Justin to be more intelligent and able to stand up to Michael, even with 4 1/2 years, was something I could not resist writing. I also laughed a lot while writing the story.
Thank you!
A big hug!
Cheers!
Fatima.
Reviewer: Dainty Jugheads (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2013 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
Thanks for a brief and beautiful read. I always enjoy your stories
Author's Response: I do thank you for reading my stories. I'm very glad you like them, that to me is a great encouragement to continue writing.
A big hug!
Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2013 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
very clever and just delightful!! Thanks for this little treat.
Author's Response: Thank you!
I loved writing this story and I'm very happy that you enjoyed.
A hug!
Reviewer: jacky m (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2013 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
This is a delight. Thank you so much.
I really don't think you should worry about your English, it's better than quite a few native speakers. But the reason I'm writing to you is that I think you should write more of your delightful fics. Love Jacky M
Author's Response: Thank you, Jacky.
I have a great translator (Predec2) helping me. The merit of the written English of my stories is hers.
I have other fics posted on the site. Please, if you come to read them, would be very happy to know your opinion.
I'm very conten you enjoyed this story.
A hug!
FK
Reviewer: lilsis13 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2013 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
Love the story, it mad me laugh.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I like to use humor in my stories. I am very glad you liked it.
Thank you for your comment.
Sorry an error. I use Google to answer my comen ments.
Reviewer: crazykitty (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2013 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
nice :)
Author's Response: I am very happy for your comment.
I'm very glad you enjoyed my story,
Hugs!
Reviewer: Taire (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2013 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
really nice. short and sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you!
This is one of my most cherished stories.
I appreciate the comment.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2013 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
oohhh wonderful written, thanks.
* hugs *
Author's Response: hank you!
I am very glad that you liked the story!
Sorry an error. I use Google to answer.
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2013 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
This was very funny and well written . I love a smart sassy Justin but he is super great at 4 1/2 years old.
Author's Response: Thank you!
I am very glad you liked it!
For professional reasons, I have lived with children with average intelligence between 4 and 6 years of age and ability of expression and consistency of them is surprising.
As Justin was portrayed in the series as very intelligent and very mature (at least intellectually) to his age, I decided to qualify it with an intelligence above average and actually be smarter than Michael, is not a great feat.
Hugs!
Sorry an error, I use Google to respond.
Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2013 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
OH so sweet.
I love Justin reaction to Michael even when he was 4
Author's Response:
Thank you, Mariana!
I could not lose oprtunidade to make the little Justin was smarter and insightful than Michael. There is a question that I do not like Michael, my feelings towards him are dubious means.
I am very happy that you enjoyed.
I appreciate the comment!
Hugs!
Sorry an error, I use Google to respond.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2013 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
This was very sweet. I love how Justin reacted to Michael even when he was little.
Your writing is very good. I know people that have spoken English their whole lives and can't write that well.
Author's Response: Hello, Lorie!
This story is one that I like best from the ones I've done.
I could not help to make this baby Justin a lesson in maturity in Michael.
Thanks to the wonderful Predec2 translation and all the attention and dedication they have given to my stories. So credit for writing good English is that it made r03;r03;the translation.
I appreciate the comment!
Hugs!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2013 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
Very sweet! TAG
Author's Response: Hello, TAG!
I'm happy with the attention you give to my stories and your comments.
Thank you!
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2013 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
Loved this story-so sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you!
I like to imagine a child and Justin have something already written him with Daphne.
I appreciate your comment.
Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2013 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
Awwww! Sweet story :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
I'm very glad you paid attention to the story and enjoyed.
Reviewer: ME (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2013 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
Great story. You need to add more, maybe with Brian telling Justin the story and seeing if Justin rememebers.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment.
I am very glad that you liked the story.
I honestly never thought before making a sequel to this story. Maybe I can eventually make some attempt.
Grateful for the suggestion.
Sorry an error, I use Google to respond.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2013 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
Wonderful so much fun loved the fact Michael got intellectually sucker punched
Author's Response: I always thought that Michael is totally child and loved to cause a very young Justin, was able to confront him and see Michael being beaten by a baby so easily was hilarious.
I also like to imagine that the mutual antipathy between Justin and Michael were as old as love Brian and Justin.
Thanks for the comment. Sorry for my mistake, I use Google to answer.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2013 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
I loved it
Author's Response: Thank you!
Your comment made r03;r03;me very happy!
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2013 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 1 Another Episode
Wonderful Story, the only thing that would have made it better (for me) would be if Michael had actually died from his naughty behavior in the park. I've always been fond of Gus the bear.
Lori
Author's Response: Poor Michael! Only Debbie and Ben can understand it.
I also always liked the image of a baby Justin, who loved both his teddy bear, who did not hesitate to nominate a child from the name of his favorite toy.
This fic is the result.
Thanks for reading my stories. It makes me very happy.
Hugs!
FK.
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