Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2019 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
LOL good one
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2018 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
Very entertaining read.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2018 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
Lucky Brian. His Sunshine is back! But to have his desert in such a public place? That's a nono.
Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2018 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
NIce! Sexi! Thank you!
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2018 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
That was EXCELLENT ....PERFECT....AMAZING...THANK U for sharing....LOVED IT.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2018 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
OMG poor Gus it must not be easy for a teenager to be the son of Brian a father so sexual !! I like the episode of ice cream and you can make it even hotter and sexy. Thank you!!
Reviewer: KinneysBitch (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2018 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
I thoroughly enjoyed this very sweet and very hot thanks for sharing
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2018 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
Lol I can imagine having having Brian Kinney as your dad would be mortifying as a teenager. But again Gus also knows Brian has his back all the time
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2018 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
Great story. I don't know how I will ever eat ice cream again without thinking of this story. Very good writing and I didn't really notice any mistakes.
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2016 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
Excellent and soooo funny; I love how Brian can make Justin so ashamed after all these years. Poor Gus, too much to see.
Author's Response: Poor Gus!
I understand your embarrassment. I think it must be very difficult to have a father, so open sexually, as Brian. He will learn a lot from their daddies during the summer and I'm sure Melissa will love all the action.
Poor Justin, too! Imagine how embarrassing, his son and his girlfriend get him in full action with her husband.
Brian is the only one to have fun with the whole situation, but I'm sure Justin to make him pay, with all pleasure, all embarrassment later in the safety of your room. Let's wish for good mental health Gus that the room has acoustic coating.
Thank you for your comment. A big hug! Fatima.
Reviewer: Marcia Malone lives here (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2016 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
Let me guess.... we have another convert to gay sex voyeurism. You go up to the room Gus. Now, where we boys?
Author's Response: Poor Gus!
Now that Justin came home, he better get the rest of the summer in your room and make it count all the tradition of Kinney.
I'm sure Melissa will approve this idea.
A big hug! Fatima.
Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2015 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
Funny and hot!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
I'm very glad you like it.
Thank you for your comment.
A big hug, Fatima.
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2015 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
Another entertaining story. So true that this is still how teenager's react to any hint that their parents still "do it" - some things just never change, whether gay or straight you just don't want to know, let alone see, the "oldies" in action. Great :)
Author's Response: Yes. Teens and sons generally do not want to know "do it" on their parents. I am very glad you liked that story too. I had so much fun when I wrote.
A big hug, my dear, thank you for all your comments.
Fátima.
Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2013 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
so funny
thank you for sharing
Author's Response: I am very glad that you liked. Had great fun writing.
Thank you for your comment.
Hugs!
Fatima.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2013 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
That sex scene was hot enough to melt ice cream and Gus discovering the scene with his girlfriend was priceless!
Great Job!
Author's Response: Hello, Sandra!
I'm very happy that you found the hot story and fun.
Thanks for reading and commenting on fic.
A big hug! Fatima.
Reviewer: QAF4ever (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
I liked it very much. This is one of the hottest stories I've ever read.
Author's Response: WOW! QAF4ever!
How happy I am with it!
Thank you for your comment. I am very happy with it!
Hugs! Fatima.
Reviewer: Nina (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
I want ice cream!
Author's Response: Hello, Nina!
I also want ice cream with them. Thanks for reading and commenting.
A hug! Fatima.
Reviewer: Karen (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2013 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
Love it!
Author's Response: Hello, Karen!
Thanks for reading and commenting.
A hug! Fatima.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2013 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
Now that is a welcome home surprise. Along with the ice cream kisses. Poor Gus! Great fic.
Author's Response: Hello, Jane!
Justin had a perfect team to get home, right? I loved writing it and incorporate the cream. I agree with you: poor Gus! With these two around, he will constantly be ashamed.
A big hug! Fatima.
Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
I can't stop giggling while imagining the reaction of Gus seeing his Daddies in a moment that you describe as "B/J trying to recover from their earth shattering climaxes"! That was really so embarrassing to imagine not to Brian but I know for Justin! Nice story you have made for the challenge. I will always love a B/J sexcapades! ;) ;) ;)
{{{Hugs}}}
Author's Response: Hello, Blanca!
I so enjoyed writing this story! I believe that was the funniest story I've ever written. I just could not stop laughing, imagining the situation.
Brian has the ability to embarrass Justin always, even when he does not intend.
I also love the hot encounters of the two.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
A big hug!
Fatima.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
Well I guess that's one way to embarrass your child lol....but oh what fun it must have been doing it ;)
Author's Response: Hello, Tamara!
Actually, being around the boys can sometimes be very embarrassing.
I had great fun writing this story imagining the reactions of Gus, Melissa and Justin.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
A big hug!
Fatima.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
Ice Cream kisses so romantic. Good thing Justin came home and shared his ice cream, but I think Gus' girlfriend may have seen a bit more then was good for her. lol.
Author's Response: Hello, my friend!
I love when Brian and Justin share anything. :)
Really, Melissa will never be the same after spending a summer alongside the boys. And, not Gus!
A big hug!
Fatima.
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2013 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
As soon as Justin showed Brian the ice cream, I knew that Gus would catch them! LOL. Brilliant. I love the way Brian teased Gus about the camera and then the ice cream. Gus' reaction reminded me of my nephes. This was a fun read and I eally liked it.
OMG - I just checked and saw that you were reviewing a story of mine after I started reading this. Another of many coincedences that I've been having lately.
All the best,
Laura
Author's Response: Oh, Laura!
Thank you!
WOW! It really is a great coincidence.
I love the image of Brian as father and pr Gus, being a teenager with Brian Kinney as a parent, should not be too easy.
The scene of the ice cream with the boys in the show is a favorite of mine and when I read about the challenge just thought it. The rest of the story came together.
A big hug!
Fatima.
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2013 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
I liked it! It would be great if you could consider doing a sequel of sorts, I would just love to see what would happen after that.... :D Anyway, great job! Hope to read you soon! Kisses!
Author's Response: Hello, Mafita!
Thank you for reading and commenting :)
Maybe I will consider a sequel for the future, but now, unfortunately I will not be able to do it. Thank you for your suggestion.
I am very glad you are reading my stories and commenting. Please continue to do so, if possible :)
Kisses for you, too!
Fatima.
P.S: Forgive me for any fair error. I am Brazilian and I use the Google translator to answer.
Reviewer: Bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: July 20, 2013 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
OMG hot and fantastic
Author's Response: Hello, BKsbracelet!
Thank you!
I liked muitodo your comment!
Brian and Justin are always hot for me! Much more on a summer afternoon.
A big hug!
Fatima.
Reviewer: MeganElisabeth (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2013 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
Sunshine came home at just the right moment! (: And I found it really sweet/hot that Justin caught him with his name on his lips as he came. Glad you found a way to incorporate the infamous ice cream kisses in this story!
Lmfao oh gosh the ending of this was so perfect!! Bashful Justin trying to hid in Brian's shoulder.. so cute. Haha, by the way I love Brian as the teenage Gus' Dad in this fic. (: I feel like a lot of Justin (such as his easy embarrassment) has rubbed off on Gus, too, which I really really liked. I truly enjoyed this fic, great job! :D
M.
Author's Response: Hello, Megan!
Thank you!
I am very glad you liked it.
I agree with you that Justin influenced somehow Gus. He is the boy's life since the day he was born.
I love the scene of ice cream and kisses always wanted to write something about it.
Brian as being a father of a teenager ... Poor Gus!
Sorry an error, I use Google to answer the comments.
A big hug!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2013 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
I get excited to see challenge fics and I wish you good luck as this is very clever Fatima. Every time B/J have sex outdoors I wonder if they will get caught. Had Justin and Melissa met before; as that would have been some introduction? LOL Thank you for writing this, it's very well done.
Cheers
Author's Response: Oh, dear, thank you for your comment and for their fans.
I had great fun writing this story.
Brian and Justin would not be stuck here because they are in the pool to your home, but if it should happen, I believe that having Justin with him in jail, Brian would not mind.
Justin did not know Melissa personally. When she arrived in Britin, he was in Milan Really, this is an unforgettable way to know a person, do not you think?
Thanks for your reading and attention!
A big hug!
PS: Sorry any fair error if occurred is translator because I was still recovering from the trauma.
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2013 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
hahahahahaaaaa this is so perfectly hilarious!! Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you!
I also enjoyed myself when I wrote!
A hug!
Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: July 14, 2013 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
lol! too funny! :) that was great!
Author's Response: Hello, Snow!
Thank you!
I really enjoy writing, imagining the reaction of Gus. It should not be easy for a teenager having Brian as a father, do not you think?
A big hug!
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 14, 2013 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 1 Summer Britin
cute! loved it.
Author's Response: Hello,Linda!
Very obigada!
I also loved to write.
A hug!
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