Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 04:24 AM · On: Take me to the place where the white boys dance...
Hi, Lisa - just wanted to say congrats on all the reviews! Well deserved. I'm so glad you finally posted this on here.;) *Hugs* Kim
Author's Response: Thanks Kim. I once again wanted to say a massive THANK YOU to you for the banner and for reading my story through for me and making huge improvements. THANK YOU AGAIN!!!
Lisaxx
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2013 03:33 AM · On: Take me to the place where the white boys dance...
Good chapter.
But a cliff hanger?? We had accounted for everyone I thought.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: It's not so much a WHO but a WHAT!! There's no new person popping up in the loft :-) Just Brian and Justin. Glad you're liking the storyxx
Reviewer: Silverfish (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 02:34 AM · On: Take me to the place where the white boys dance...
Hi to everyone sending me reviews and all those lurkers out there!!! I just wanted to thank you all for being so kind and getting me to over 50 reviews. I am very proud and so pleased you're all enjoying the story. Lisa xx
Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 02:07 AM · On: Take me to the place where the white boys dance...
Wonderfull chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 12:53 AM · On: Take me to the place where the white boys dance...
I knew Michael was cruel, but this!!! How will Gus be able to see that Brian does care? What did Justin find on his return to the loft? When will we see another chapter? Please!!!!
Author's Response: YumYumPM - you make it sound like something out of Marvel Comics!! Brilliant!! I think Justin is getting used to surprises now - as he seems to be confronted with something new that he has to deal with on a daily basis ...
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2013 12:21 AM · On: Take me to the place where the white boys dance...
Boy! you are ruthless to leave this chapter like that. I know you are probably laughing at leaving us all a twitter to what Justin comes back to. Shame on you! HA HA!. Good one.
Author's Response: Justin is always prepared though. He's like a boy scout!! I could just imagine him in short trousers and one of those neckties!! haha!! Next chapter coming up soon.
Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2013 09:55 PM · On: Take me to the place where the white boys dance...
Ugh! That Michael!
Author's Response: I know he's just a right pain in the xxx!!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2013 09:20 PM · On: Take me to the place where the white boys dance...
All I have to say is...do you know how much I love you for giving Lindsay a backbone lol
Oh btw: I'm still keeping score ;)
Author's Response: Well, she can't be a wuss all her life :-) She's got to stand up to smelly Melly some time haha!!
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2013 03:17 PM · On: A Crippling Blow
Thank you for your story.
Author's Response: Glad you like it!!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2013 07:27 AM · On: A Crippling Blow
Poor Brian! So much pain. At least Justin's there and hopefully things will start getting better.
Author's Response: Might take a while yet though...
Reviewer: jg1225 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2013 06:10 AM · On: A Crippling Blow
Oh Brian, just let Justin take care of you...you know you want to!
Author's Response: Haha!! You know we want him to want to... might have to wait for a sequel for that though...
Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2013 03:26 AM · On: A Crippling Blow
I again want to say: I like your story
Author's Response: Thanks!!!
Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2013 03:24 AM · On: A Crippling Blow
Justin is so sweet :)
Author's Response: I know! He's really trying to help Brian - nothing in it for him haha!!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2013 09:57 PM · On: A Crippling Blow
Score Sunshine-2
Brian-possibly everything he could ever imagine :)
Author's Response: Haha!! Brian won't know what's hit him after the Justin-juggernaut rolls through...
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2013 07:26 PM · On: A Crippling Blow
Jus is an angel--love this chapter, makes one tear up.
Author's Response: Thank you so muchxx
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2013 03:50 PM · On: Everything will be alright!
Awww, Justin is smart, and sneaky! Poor Brian, the cancer arc is so hard on him.
I like where you are going with your characters.
Author's Response: Yep, Justin is definitely a clever guy!! Glad to hear you're liking this Brian and Justin. Hope you enjoy the next installment. It's up now.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2013 09:58 AM · On: Everything will be alright!
Blackmail! The perfect move against a stuborn Brian. Did I ever tell you how fantastic your banner is. Fits this story perfectly.
Author's Response: Haha, how right you are !! All your kind words and congrats regarding the banner have to go to Predec2 who made it for me. I did NOTHING!! Not able to do anything "technical" like that :-( !!!
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2013 08:37 PM · On: Everything will be alright!
God! This is so good. I wish there were at least ten more chapters here I could read. Justin in charge is such a boon---lovin it. He will break down all of Brian's defenses soon and Brian will come to depend on him, much to his chagrin. More soon Pleeeeese.
Author's Response: Hi Linda, the next update will be tomorrow, sorry. Although I also want you all to find out everything, but it would spoil the suspense if you got it all at once!!(Non-related question: Do you ever find yourself reading sentences out loud in a certain accent? I do this sometimes cause I can really relate to them belonging to a certain character - if I'm reading a really good story !! There are so many on here!!!!!)
It won't be easy to break down Brian's defences though - you know what he's like :-)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2013 08:19 PM · On: Everything will be alright!
Score: Sunshine-1
Brian-0
Now to see if he gets back in. And how much longer before the gang knows the truth?
Please hurry back with an update :)
Author's Response: Hi Jazzepoet! I'm still not sure about the rest of the story. I don't want to get into "whiney mikey" territory, which is inevitable if the gang are to find out, so I don't know how I'm going to and when I'm going to end this story. This is really just a story between Brian and Justin and the emotional maelstrom of their lives as they get irrevocably and unconditionally intertwined. The main question is, will he have to get Debbie or not!!!
Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2013 07:56 PM · On: Everything will be alright!
Oh, blackmailing! Justin has balls. :) Can't wait for an update.
Author's Response: Haha!! more than Brian - no that was mean - "slap wrist now"!! But yes, Justin will try everything though...
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2013 07:50 PM · On: Everything will be alright!
Nice story so far, always looking for an update. Interesting AU.
Keep on the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words! I am so pleased that this story is getting such a good response.
Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2013 07:29 PM · On: Everything will be alright!
I LOVE this story, though I usually hate any stories about anybody having cancer.
Thank you so much!
Author's Response: Pleased to hear that you're enjoying it!!! I just didn't want to sugar coat anything, but also maintain a sense of Brian still being Brian and not just a disease! I have done volunteering at hospices in the past and have experienced many different things. Some very funny, some heartwrenchingly sad... but it definitely made me a better person for doing it!
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2013 08:25 AM · On: Read my mind
Lovin this story soooo much!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. That's great to hear :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2013 07:04 AM · On: Read my mind
An e-mail relationship. I like. But it seems like Brian really needs some one on one help, so maybe when Justin goes back? Please!!!
Author's Response: I'm sure it'll happen YumYumPM :-) one-on-one has always been Justin's speciality haha!!
Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2013 03:24 AM · On: Read my mind
Justin is so adorable! :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I do my best!!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2013 10:31 PM · On: Read my mind
Justin is so cute when he's being tenacious. TAG
Author's Response: Haha!! But I have to love Winston and Gus in your story. Anyone who knows cats and small children... knows there's more than a grain of truth in your writing haha!!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2013 09:47 PM · On: Read my mind
Seems like our stubborn stud's resolve is slowly starting to fade and is finally accepting a bit of help
Author's Response: Slowly, slowly he's being whittled down... but he won't give up without a fight, even in his condition...
Reviewer: Klaudia (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2013 07:07 PM · On: Shadowplay
i can't wait to read the sequel!!!
Author's Response: I don't know if there will be a sequel to this - I don't think so, but I have a great new story in the pipeline, so as to speak :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2013 10:58 AM · On: Shadowplay
I wonder what Brian's going to do when he gets the note. Nice chapter.
Author's Response: In the previous review it should be "persistent" E not A!!!
You know what Brian's like... he might take a bit of time to warm to the idea that Justin's looking for him!!
Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2013 03:45 AM · On: Shadowplay
Justin is so sweet!
Author's Response: I know :-) And persistant!!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2013 12:41 AM · On: Shadowplay
Oh no you can't leave us there....in any case Justin is getting closer to reaching his goal.
Author's Response: Justin's definitely coming closer to his goal!
Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2013 02:24 AM · On: Somebody told me...
I hope, that Justin didn't believe them and is going tto look for Brian. And the gang is nasty as ever... :(
Author's Response: I'm sure that Justin won't give up that easily haha!!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2013 10:39 PM · On: Somebody told me...
Wow, this is a good reminder of how well the gang really knows Brian and how completely fucked up and accusingly judgemental they can be.
Author's Response: Yeah, I hope you're all feeling the vibes of the gang!! They are basically all a nasty bunch of xxxx (insert your own word at leisure :-) )
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2013 10:15 PM · On: Somebody told me...
Looks like Justin's tenacity paid off. He was lucky that Deb described Brian Kinny. Now he has a lead. I agree that with friends like Mikey who needs enemys. All they seem to do is whine.
Author's Response: You're right. Mikey's such a whiney guy. He needs to grow up a bit!
Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2013 08:21 PM · On: Somebody told me...
Sheesh, with friends like that....!
Author's Response: I know. Poor Brian...
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2013 12:52 AM · On: For reasons unknown
So the blond is slowly but surely worming his way into Brian's attention. Something tells me things might start looking up, maybe not a lot but you never know.
Author's Response: Slowly, but surely. I'm sure :-) You know what Brian's like when he's hurting...
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2013 10:32 PM · On: For reasons unknown
Seems like Justin's persistence is about to pay off in a big way, and Brian is about to get the support he needs whether he likes it or not...although something tells me he won't mind one bit, even if he won't admit it ;)
Author's Response: You're definitely right about Brian needing the support, but will he let Justin help him or not?? I mean we all know how pig-headed he can be!! We'll have to see...
Reviewer: jg1225 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2013 09:45 PM · On: For reasons unknown
I love 'stalker Justin'! Poor Brian isn't going to know what hit him!
Julie
Author's Response: Me too! That's Justin's at his best! Glad you're enjoying the story.
Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2013 08:52 PM · On: For reasons unknown
Gotta love a persistent Justin!
Author's Response: haha!! Yeah!! He's not going to give up easily!!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2013 12:15 AM · On: It's the end of the world as we know it
Hate seeing Brian so sick and depressed. I hope Justin can cheer him up just a little! TAG
Author's Response: It's going to take some time for Justin to work his magic I'm afraid... if he's able to, that is... who knows...
Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2013 10:18 PM · On: It's the end of the world as we know it
Interesting way for them to meet :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I thought it would work well and set the scene.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2013 09:40 PM · On: It's the end of the world as we know it
Darn, you are not going to make it easy on us. Their first meeting wasn't a nice one, but one typical of a hurting Brian. When do we get to find out more?
Author's Response: No, I'm not, haha! This story is not a "happy" one, but an in-depth study of emotions - and Brian is hurting a lot right now and will be for a long while. Next installment tomorrow.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2013 09:38 PM · On: It's the end of the world as we know it
Keep up the pace my friend, you have definitely scored a new fan with this one ;) You have captured Brian beautifully here. He would absolutely loathe pity from anyone....even the doctors. I can't wait for the next installment.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words! Great to have received such a good reception on MW!
Reviewer: jg1225 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2013 09:14 PM · On: It's the end of the world as we know it
Enjoying your story, look forward to seeing where you go with it!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read it!!
Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2013 08:04 PM · On: Smile like you mean it!
That's promising to get a really good story. Hopefully a long one...
I'm looking forward to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks! Not sure how long it'll be yet. Should I finish at approx. 25 chapters where it could end naturally or go on and write a LONG story, but would it maintain the interest and appear realistic or contrived??? And I've also started another story as well which is very different in tone to this story and looks as if it's going to be rather long and already has LOTS of raunchy bits in it!!! haha!!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2013 10:44 AM · On: Smile like you mean it!
It is interesting to see how Justin got to where he is. Now I'm curious to find out how he and Brian meet!
Author's Response: You can read about that very soon!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2013 05:16 AM · On: Smile like you mean it!
A bit of patch adams here huh....I like it! Now let's see how long it takes Justin to notice our Armani clad handsome brunet ;)
Author's Response: Won't be long now :-)
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2013 04:28 AM · On: Smile like you mean it!
Nice first glimpse of Justin. TAG
Author's Response: Yeah, I hope I managed to convey his frustrations and desires adequately.
Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2013 04:24 AM · On: Smile like you mean it!
What a great chapter. I really feel for Justin. I'm thrilled to see you had updated so quickly! Looking forward to more... soon?! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Glad you like it!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 15, 2013 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 1 Kill Me Now
Very sad but compelling start. TAG
Author's Response: Thanks for your input!!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 15, 2013 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 1 Kill Me Now
A new author to join our ranks! Welcome. We are so glad to have you. There is no such thing as too much B/J fanfic! Can't wait to start reading! TAG
Author's Response: Thanks for your comments! I love your work :-) Sent you an e-mail with many ideas for a sequel to your brill m-preg fic "Prego-Stud" LOVED IT!!!! It was so funny haha!! This will not be very funny - only in parts. The general theme is not a laughing matter, but hopefully a compelling read nontheless.
Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2013 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 1 Kill Me Now
Hmmm...Very interesting start. Seems he's in the perfect position for some TLC from Justin. :) Can't wait for them to meet. Oh and welcome aboard! <3
Author's Response: Thanks! Justin "Florence Nightingale" Taylor to the rescue :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2013 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 1 Kill Me Now
This sounds like it's going to be really good. I'm glad you've already got a lot of chapters written cause I can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you like it! I'm already writing more :-)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2013 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 1 Kill Me Now
Welcome to Whispers :) I can't wait to see more of this~JP
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Next chapter is up!!
Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2013 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 1 Kill Me Now
This is a really great start. I look forward to reading more chapters!
Author's Response: Thank you so much Snow! I feel honoured that you're reading my work.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2013 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 1 Kill Me Now
Hi, there! Welcome to the site! And you're right; I did think you would never publish this - LOL! Believe it or not, I was just thinking about this story the other day. So glad you decided to put it on here! BTW, let me know if you need a beta beyond the 18 chapters you have, or if you want a banner. I'll be glad to help. Good luck with your story! *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: LOL!! I thought you'd think that. Well RL got in the way - 2 kids to be exact :-) and now I'm back! I'd love you to beta for me. Thank you so much. And a banner would be amazing. I spent all evening just trying to get the first chapter uploaded. I'm useless at anything technical. Thanks for your kind words. A fab new story from you would also be great. I absolutely love your writing Lisa xx
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