Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2014 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 30
I don't know why Justin would feel sorry for Hal, the man doesn't seem to be able to grasp the concept that Justin doesn't want his job and if he did he would have it. It's not a hard concept to grasp. I'm glad Leon told Hal it wasn't Jason who went to HR. I like Mel being the sensible one.
Cheers
Author's Response: I Guess sometimes Justin is just too nice. To me he just feels bad that Hal is so insecure and wishes he would get over it. Thanks for all your comments I enjoy them! Bill
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2014 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 29
Mel and Lindsay seem to be the screw-ups at the moment. Michael seemed to behave himself. That surprised me. LOL I know I shouldn't assume anything as there is still the 4th of July party. I can't wait to see what fun ensues there.
Cheers
Author's Response: I think Michael may have some more screwing up to do. Lindsay sometimes calls Brian "Peter" but Michael is really the one who never grew up or matured. Lots of poeple thimk that just because Brian & Justin make a lot of money they should solve everyone's problems.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2014 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 28
OMG Justin has now become a personal shopper. :D It looks like Gus might be seeing a lot more of his cousins in the near future. I like the way the children are interacting as it seems realistic.
Cheers
Author's Response: Realistic is a very good thing - THANKS.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2014 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 27
I love this chapter. Claire and Joan have been outwitted and Alice makes sure they know where they stand if they try anything like that again. It sounds like Claire might be getting a clue; hopefully. Alice is funny talking to Brian about hugs and getting his hugging needs fulfilled. LOL
Cheers :)
Author's Response: I think there is more hope for Claire than for Joan to become an almost normal human being. I always thought Brian and Claire are two sides of the same coin. They both had a rotten childhood but in their adult lives chose different ways to cope, or not cope with it.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2014 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 25
I must agree with Brian there is way too much food being consumed in this fic. :D Debbie was adorable in this chapter.
Cheers
Author's Response: Brian is always jealous of how much food Justin consumed and now he has two nephews with bottomless pits for stomachs. He is vastly outnumbered.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2014 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 24
How nice for Debbie that Brian invited her. That was really sweet.
Cheers
Author's Response: Brian would hate to be thought of as "sweet" but sometimes he can't help himself.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2014 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 23
Really Claire; Brian should now pay your way. I can only assume the drugs are still affecting her thinking. If I was Justin I would be really cheesed off if I had to explain myself or actions each time Joan didn't like something. Even the boys have been really patience with what the Family Services are putting them through. I know they are covering everything encase there is a court hearing, but it seems an awful intrusion into their daily lives.
Cheers
Author's Response: I think foster care does include a lot of intrusions from officials. I think Justin is secure in who he is so having to explain himself is easy but no doubt still annoying.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2014 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 21
Brian scared of Jenifer. LOL I like Alice taking on the homophobic officers, but I also like the way Justin handled it as to not unset the boys. I also like the reason given, that it was Alice's first encounter with such behaviour. Great touch.
Cheers
Author's Response: I think Brian is happy that Jennifer thinks well of him and he doesn't want to endanger those good feelings. Jennifer has a way of mothering that Brian never experienced and whatever our age we enjoy a mother's love.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2014 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 20
Soccer for John sounds interesting, but Peter's course seems positively dull. I hopethe field trips liven it up for him. Wow, Joan and Claire both seem to be living in la-la land. I like the way B/J keep the boys apprised of what is going on.
Cheers
Author's Response: The summer activities will turn out well for both boys. Glad you are continuing to enjoy the story.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2014 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 19
Looks like Peter is going to be a company man. I like how he talked non-stop in the car on the way home and Justin can now see what Brian puts up with. Classic. LOL Justin is so on to John making sure he acknowledges the farm trip is something he wants to do. :D I am glad John isn't so easy going as he is coming across as being more like Brian and it's more realistic that he doesn't just accept change without hesitation.
Cheers
Author's Response: John is more independent and has a good share of Kinney genes. Peter is more dependent and just looking for some love. At least that is the way it is in my QAF universe.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2014 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 18
What is Ben thinking? I wish Ben had a bigger pair in fics, he is always so whipped. LOL I'm not sure why Sidney would argue about the price as his name would command some Goodwill on the books, because of the reputation of the gallery. Just keeping the name would be a benefit. I'm really pleased Jason has made it quite clear to Hal who's side he is on. Nice chapter.
Cheers
Author's Response: RE: Ben, they say that love is blind (sometime deaf & mute as well). There are people who enjoy having someone dependent on them. I think Sidney is happy to have Justin as a partner and sees him as someone who will keep the gallery going. Both Sinder & Justin want the partnership to start out on a positive note, both looking out for the other person. Poor Hal is pretty clueless.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2014 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 17
I can't see why Brian would want Justin to take the boys to see Claire it was like Brian was shirking his responsibility. It must be very confusing for John and Peter with the lies their mother has been telling them. I hope they don't have to return to her at the end of this fic.
Cheers
Author's Response: I think Brian tries his best to avoid his mother and sister and is used to Justin looking out for him.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2014 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 16
I love that John wanted black walls. How many boys go through that faze? I like these little touches. Poor Justin everyone thinks he is sponging of Brian.
Cheers
Author's Response: I had a cousin who had a bedroom with navy blue walls and red trim, it was dark and hideous. I think lots of 12 year younger partners (of both sexes) who have an older established partner encounter people thinking they are a "trophy". I don't think Justin could afford the lifestyle that he has, without Brian, but he would not mnd living more modestly. Brian is really the one who likes to live large.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2014 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 14
You made Hal homophobic. That is just so funny. :D I can't wait for Michael's downfall as he is pissing me off, big time. LOL At least I can read on and see him get his comeuppance; hopefully.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: I had a reviewer give me a hard time over being "anti-Michael" and making it worse by naming the art director Hal. The revewer also said that Michael was not jealous of Justin in the later seasons of QAF, not sure that is true. I did not have a conscious connection between Hal the actor and Michael the character but the subsconcious is a powerful thing.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2014 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 13
LOL you called the Art Director Hal. Priceless. I thought Leon must be getting some bad advice since his original boards seem to show some promise. Leon backwards is Noel. Sorry I know it's obvious, but every time I hear the name that's what I think of. LOL
Cheers :)
Author's Response: I have aunts that had "Xmas trains" that had train cars that spelled Noel, they would set them on their mantle going in opposite directions so the one train always spelled "Leon" instead of "Noel". It always amused me.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2014 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 12
Molly requesting a DNA test;hilarious. Cynthia setting Joan straight then offering to beat the shit out of her was also very funny. :D Leon in the art department sounds like he could be trouble or someone is interfering with his work. I will read on to find out.
Cheers
Author's Response: I think Joan needs as many people as possible giving her a hard time, no one deserves it more. Self righteous people are very, very annoying!!!!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2014 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 11
Well I can see the discussion with Kathy and Michael going well; NOT. Are the two boys on the banner representing Peter and John?
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Nice to have something that you can always depned on, like Michael's poor behavior. That is John & Peter in the banner. Kim offered to make a banner but i couldn't come up with any good ideas whe she asked for my input. Marny, on her own, made this banner and sent it to me. I think it is great and that was really awesome of her to do that.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2014 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 10
Oh well, no surprises with Michael's behaviour. I love that Ted rang to check on B/J. I like the way Justin teased Brian just a little before declaring he had won the contract to paint the murals. :D
Cheers
Author's Response: I think we can count on Michael always being Michael, kind of clueless and immature.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2014 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 9
Having guests stay is exhausting, but to exhausting to fuck? What were they doing with their guests? Enquiring minds want to know. LOL It looks like Justin is about to acquire an art gallery; Brian and he must be loaded. I can't wait for Michael's Memorial Day barbeque as all seems a little strange; the apology was too easy. Maybe I just have a suspicion mind. Okay now I have the Elvis song stuck in my head. :D
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Hope you enjoy the BBQ cahpter, you are right to be suspicious. Glad you are still enjoying the story. Bill
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2014 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 8
I have never heard of a senior day-care; what a great idea. I love the story about the older and younger man as that could be Brian and Justin in years to come.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: They exist. I looked into one a few yeara ago for an older brother who waa having some difficutlies being on his own. Thanks for the nice comments.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2014 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 7
Oh that's classic. Justin sicking his mother on to Michael. LOL Debbie is so gullible and not very astute when it comes to sarcasm apparently. Love it.
Cheers
Author's Response: Debbie so often flew to Michale defense that I thought it was a noce idea to turn the tables on her. I smiled to think what Jennifer's face would have looked like when she got that call from Debbie.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2014 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 6
This sounds familiar, could I have read this fic elsewhere. I remember a tennis match and Michael not being happy. Maybe I'm wrong; still I love an unhappy Michael so I can't wait to read more. LOL I can assume this is an anti-Michael fic, right?
Cheers :)
Author's Response: It was on FanFiction before I was persuaded to also post on here. Updates now posted same day on both sites.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2014 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 5
Emmett the voice of reason. I like that. Yay, barbeque time and all the old gangs invited.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: I have always thought Emmett was flamboyant but basically sensible. Thanks for all the nice reviews. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2014 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 4
Well its good they have realized Claire is the one wanting the money. I like the way Father Bolton dealt with Joan, especially the part where he said he is going to call his parents. Just so I'm clear it is Father Charles Bolton is that right. I can't wait to read on.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: you caught my mistake. He is "Father Matt" in Chapter 4 but somehow later becomes "Charles Bolton". My bad!!!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2014 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 3
I really appreciate that you are writing Father Bolton as a down to earth guy. Fingers crossed for Justin winning the $200,000 contract. I assume he does or it wouldn't have been mentioned, but I also know things aren't always simple in QAF land. I shall read on and see if you have put some road bumps in his way. LOL
Cheers :)
Author's Response: not too many road bumps in this feel good story. I like Fr Bolton would like him to reappear later but I'm not sure how or when.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2014 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 2
Hello Bill. I can only apologize once again for my tardiness in reading your fic. I know I welcomed you some time ago, but I have been unable to keep up due to illness and the system problems earlier this year. I'm trying really hard to read and review all the new authors and the authors who support me before any others. So now I have started this I am looking forward to reading all the chapters I have waiting for me. So on with the review.
Where was Justin when I needed him? LOL He is so attentive. Brian must have been feeling really bad to pee sitting down. I liked that titbit. :D I love the way you are writing Jennifer in this fic, however I was a little surprised at how Justin spoke to Claire when she came to the loft, still it looks like she is up to no good.
When you write "this is my first QAF story on here" does that mean you write somewhere else?
Lucky me; so many chapters so I will read on.
Cheers
Author's Response: this story is also posted on FanFiction Archive site. Hope you continue to enjoy the story
Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2014 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 31
love the chapter lindsay dose not like peter, john i like jen and tucker in this chapter thanks kim
Author's Response: Happy you enjoyed this chapter, I enjoyed writing it. Lindsay is not acting very nice, we'll see what happens there. Thanks for taking time to review.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2014 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 31
Lovely chapter, thanks.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to write. Bill
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2014 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 31
What a wonderful chapter! I love how everyone continues to try to Come together and make the family unit stronger. Now if only Lindsay would get over herself and stop being a bitch, things will continue to get better.
Author's Response: Happy you wnjoyed the latest chapter. Lindsay does semm to be out of step with the majority. Thanks for being such a loyal reviewer. I always lok forward to your comments.
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2014 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 31
I absolutely loved this chapter!!! :D I loved how cute Gus was, helping Emmett with the party >0< I also very much enjoyed how Alice, Jennifer, Tucker and Brian all put the munchers in their place, it felt so good!!! Haha! :P I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Hope to read you soon! Kisses!
Author's Response: Really happy you liked this chapter. Gus wants to be sure that his Daddy's party is the best. Lindsay and Melanie are out of step with most everyone else. I think Alice and Jennifer make a formidible duo. Thanks for taking time to write such a nice review.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2014 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 31
Wonderful chapter Linds being put in her place by several family members and Brian being shown again how much of a great father, uncle man he is
Author's Response: Glad that you enjoyed it. I think Lindsay deserved everything she got. Thanks for reviewing, I appreciate and always enjoy your comments. Bill
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2014 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 31
Good chapter!
Little kids love to help out.
Author's Response: They usually do and like to be treated like an adult, especially at the advanced age of 7! Thanks for taking time to review, you are so faithful about commenting and I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2014 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 31
This is truly a wonderful chapter. Brian and Justin are so considerate. Lindsay on the other hand was a pill and I was pleased to see how many people called her on her bad behavior. Mel appears to have mellowed which is a nice change, but I cheered when she was called on how she talks in front of Gus. I think she'll watch herself more than Lindsay would. Emmett was so much fun with his assistant. Lovely.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this chapter, was a fun one to write. Everyone getting ready for the big barbeque. Thanks as always for your review, you know I am always on the lookout for it. I really appreciate your support. Bill
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2014 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 31
Love the interaction between Gus and the nephews! TAG
Author's Response: That was very fast reading and reviewing. Glad you enjoyed the new chapter. As always I apprecite all your comments. Thanks, Bill
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2014 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 30
I loved the chapter!! :D I loved that Justin defended Brian and his right to have visitation with Gus, for a moment I thought that they would get away with it, but I'm glad that Justin was firm in his resolve and didn't give in..... :D However, I'm very worried about the situation, because I feel that Lindsay and Melanie will not be true to their word in the end..... :S Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Hope to read you soon! Happy Easter! :D Kisses!
Author's Response: Really happy you loved this chapter. I was feeling a little unsure about it. Had a couple revisions which is what took me so long to post. It has gotten positive reviews so I am feeling better about it. Thanks,as always, for being nice enough to take time to review. Hope you have a great Easter.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2014 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 30
I'm glad that Melanie is being reasonable. Boy, Lindsay is up there with Brian's mother and sister when it comes to expecting something for nothing. Let's hope that Lindsay truly has stopped gambling. Now that Hal is aware that Justin isn't after his job, maybe things will get better in the art department. Wonderfully done chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review. Wasn't sure about this chapter so I am happy it is getting positive reviews. You know I always look for your reviews but at least I didn't hunt you down this time, I just patiently waited a couple days. Working on 31. Brian sure does have trouble with a lot of the women in his life but he has Cynthia, Alice & Jennifer looking out for him. Thanks again for being such a loyal reader & reviewer.
Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2014 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 30
great chapter im not a lindsay fan happy easter to u and yours kim
Author's Response: This was a good chapter for a non Lindsay lover and I think there might be a bit more Lindsay issues coming. Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it. Hope and yours also have a nice Easter. I have had some peeps getting stale & chewy in a high cabinet for about a month. Looking forward to them on Easter. Bill
Reviewer: Shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2014 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 30
Why do I want Lindsey to really fuck up and Brian to take her to court. Somehow this does not feel completely resolved.
I wish I could talk you into writing faster I start checking every day after a new chapter.
Author's Response: I feel your pain about not updating soon enough. I hate that with stories that I read. I have no real good excuse. I know what I am going to include in each chapter, it is the sitting down and writing it that causes the delays. I will try and do better. Happy you are enjoying the story and thanks for the review. I appreciate knowing what readers think about the story.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2014 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 30
Well,well,well...The zebra has started to show all of her stripes. Brian was very well justified in his suspicion concerning Lindsay. Why can't she just be happy that Gus' fathers are agreeing to help them in any possible way they can? Mel on the other hand seems to better understand the severity of their situation.
Maybe once the fact that Gus is more in the know than she thinks, Lindsay's attitude will change.
Author's Response: I don't think Lindsay will be too happy too soon. Thanks for the comments and taking time to review, I appreciate it. Happy you are still enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2014 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 30
Geeze! You'd think Brian was just an elaborate ATM machine the way everyone always just expects him to shell out $ for their lives. Poor Brian. TAG
Author's Response: With Justin's help Brian has learned he doesn'y need to supply everyone's financail needs. Lindsay still thinks she is dealing with the old manipulatable Brian. Thanks for taking the time to review, you know I really appreciate knowing that people are enjoying the story.
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2014 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 30
I love this story , it is so layered and detailed. Great!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the nice feedback. I love hearing that readers like the story. I appreciate that you took the time to let me know you are enjoying the story. Hope you continue to enjoy it.
Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2014 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 30
I don't thinkthat problem will be solved. I never liked Lindsay and her attitude with money. so I'm looking forward how this will go on...
I like your story very much.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I always thought Lindsay was a little too needy, so I agree with you. I appreciate your really nice comments, always happy to hear that readers are enjoying the story.
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2014 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 30
Please tell the administrator that the numbers for the security code do not always work, and I only try so many times before I stop trying to give a review.
This was an interesting chapter. I never saw the gambling coming. It was a nice twist that Mel was the reasonable one.
Author's Response: I did pass your comment along to Bob (Administrator). Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for perservereing to leave a review.
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2014 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 29
It's a nice chapter, I enjoyed reading it. Poor Gus. I can't wait to see what Brian has planned for the girls. How could they go broke with as much support as I am sure Brian has been sending them?
Author's Response: Happy you enjoyed the chapter. Just posted a new chapter which will let you know what Brian & Justin plan for the girls and gives us some understanding of how they got into such bad financial toruble. Hope you enoy the new chapter. Thanks for taking time to review, I appreciate that!
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2014 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 29
I just loved the chapter!!! :D I'm so glad that Gus likes John and Peter :) And I'm glad that the munchers are temporarily put in their place..... :S I'm afraid they'll try something, though... wouldn't put it past them..... Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter to be up! Hope to read you soon! Kisses!
Author's Response: Really happy you are still enjoying my story. I think boys Gus's age are really happy when older kids pay attention to them. The munchers are going to try and cause trouble for sure. Thanks for taking time to review, you are always so loyal about that and I appreciate it a lot!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2014 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 29
Oh my...What are the girls up to now? They are really pushing their luck at the moment.
Author's Response: They have got themselves in to quite a financial hole. Thanks for taking time to review. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2014 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 29
I loved this chapter it was full of love and also so poignant with Gus's revelation, but I hope it galvanises Brian into getting his parental rights back
Author's Response: Thanks for the really nice review. Brian is on a "mission" I think the girls will have to give in to his requests. Glad you are enjoyingmy story.
Reviewer: Shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2014 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 29
Can't wait for that meeting I think it will be explosive
Author's Response: I hope I won't disappoint you. There will certainly be some fireworks in that conference room. Thanks for taking time to review, I realy appreciate it.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2014 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 29
What will Lindsay and Mel do at the meeting? I'm glad that Brian called them on how they were treating his nephews. Gus seems very happy to be with them.
Author's Response: There will be some revelations about L & M's financial problems. They won't have a lot of options. Happy you are still enjoying the story. Always look forward to your comments, Thanks! Bill
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2014 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 28
I loved the chapter!!!! I think Brian and Justin are too generous with Melanie and Lindsay, they keep blackmailing Brian into giving them money... I just hope that they don't get away with it, they have to know that their actions have consequences and that they cannot expect Brian to save them all the time... But anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Hope to read you soon! Kisses!
Author's Response: More information to come about the Melanie and Lindsay's financial mess. I don't think Justin will let Brian get too badly taken advantage of. Thanks for taking tim to review and all your kind comments. Working on Chapter 29.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2014 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 28
Sounds like there is a full house. I like Justin's plans for the girls moving into the loft, lets hope they go for it. This story line just keeps getting better and better.
Author's Response: Glad to see you are chimeing in at the appropriate time and I will not need to hunt you down for your comments on this chapter. Thanks for the kind words, happy you are still enjoying the story. Bill
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2014 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 28
Good job! Very enjoyable chapter, with plot development and characters.
Author's Response: Thanks for the really nice review. Glad you are ejoying the twists and turns of the story. I appreciate you taking time to review.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2014 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 28
My goodness, couldn't the poor uncles get a breather...lol. I agree with our awesome duo that there has to be more to the story of why the merry munches are broke. And big kudos to Brian for putting such stringent conditions on his ability to help them out.
Author's Response: It would be a boring story if things settle down too much. More to come on what happened in Toronto to bring about financial ruin. Thanks for taking time to review and I am happy you are enjoying the story.
Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2014 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 28
This is the beginning of some changes.....the nephews get along well with the little ones(???); Brian gained confidence in his abilities as a caretaker and father and needs more time with his son, Justin gained strength in his new role as some kind of nephew protector.
Just add Gus (and JR?): Will there be a new family around the corner ? Will Mel&Linds like it? And lots of lots chapters to come? hehehehe, as I always say: Can´t wait ......
Author's Response: Thanks as always for your comments, I appreciate you taking time to let me know you are enjoying the story. I still have ideas for many more chapters as long as reviewers let me know they are still reading. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2014 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 27
I loved it!!!! I'm sorry I couldn't read this before now, but you know how it is when life gets in the way... :S Now about the chapter, I loved how Justin handled the whole situation with Claire and Joan, I'm glad that they weren't able to do anything.... :D And the comments about the munchers gave me the chills, it's like there's a storm coming..... :S Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Hope to read you soon! Kisses!
Author's Response: Real life can be so annoying at times. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. As always I really appreciate your comments. Should be posting the next chapter in the next day or so. Thanks.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2014 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 27
This has to be one of your best chapters yet. Love the confrontation with Joan and Claire. Alice is tops for defending the boys. Nice that Ted is getting stuff together for Brian to have a weapon against the girls should they try and keep Gus away.
I usually get a notification when you post a story and didn't get one this time. I was away in Japan for a week with limited internet access. While I had a wonderful time it seems I missed some wonderful stories. Thanks for letting me know. : )
Author's Response: Happy to hear from you. This is what happens when you are such a faithful reviewer, when I didn't hear from you I was genuinely concerned. Hope you enjoyed Japan. Glad to have you back. Thanks as always for your positive comments. Bill
Reviewer: missy (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2014 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 27
I am really enjoying the story!
Thank you for sharing :)
Author's Response: Thank you for taking time to let me know you are enjoying the story. Hope you continue to enjoy it. Working on chapter 28 which should be posted in the next couple days.
Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: March 22, 2014 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 27
weel, now that Justin has set Claire and Joan into their places, he might do that to the next two women soon to arrive.
Mel and Linds will make eyes as saucers when they learn about the boys temporary well-established family.
Can´t wait for the next chapters - a new one always brings up the mood. (I hope my english is ok, I go on commenting nevertheless..;)...)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I am so glad that you are still enjoyng the story, your English is great! You might be correct about Mel & Linds. Working on Chapter 28.
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2014 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 27
Thank you for posting. I continue to find this an enjoyable read.
Author's Response: Glad you are still enjoying my story. Thank you very much for letting me know when I don't hear from anyone I think the story has gotten boring.
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2014 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 27
I may not comment a lot, but I wanted to let you know that I really enjoy this story. I love the way Justin handles both Joan and Claire. Alice is wonderful.
Author's Response: Happy that you are enjoying the story, really happy you let me know you are enjoying it. Working on 28 hope that you continue to enjoy. Thanks for taking time to review!
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2014 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 27
I love how Justin kicks arse with Joany and Claire. The boys feel safe and secure and love the attention they are getting and they are responding to it. Brian has at last learned how to give and receive love
Author's Response: Someone needs to keep Joan and Claire under control. Justin knows how to handle them. Glad you are still enjoying the story. Thanks for taking time to review, I always appreciate your comments.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 19, 2014 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 26
I really like seeing that the nephews feel secure enough to start making some new friends. That's huge. Still enjoying. TAG
Author's Response: Glad you are happy with how the story is progressing. Thanks for the encouragement
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 19, 2014 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 24
Sorry I've fallen behind in my comments. What with the site problems and my own WIPs I sorta lost track of your little gem of a story. But, now that I found it again, I started over reading from chapter one all over. I'm finally caught up to where I was before. Still reading and still enjoying. I really like your characterization of a caring Uncle Brian. Great job! TAG
Author's Response: Wow started iver from the beginning, that's imprressive. Glad you are still enjoying the story. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2014 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 27
Mooooorrrrreeeee!!!!! ;)
Author's Response: You seem a little greedy! Just read the new chapter and already you want more. LOL Thanks for reading and reviewing. Really Happy that you are still enjoying the story. I am working on 28.
Reviewer: Brandee (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2014 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 26
I really like this story and enjoy the way you write it! Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Really glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks for taking time to write a review. Finishing up chapter 27 which should be posted later today or tomorrow. Thanks again for the review.
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2014 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 26
Thank you for anew and interesting chapter.
Author's Response: Glad you are still enjoying the story. Thanks for taking time to review. Working on Chapter 27.
Reviewer: Lanie08 (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2014 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 26
I'm really enjoying this story. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking time to review my story. Happy you are enjoying the story. Working on Chapter 27. I really appreciate all reviews, Thanks again.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2014 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 26
Have I told you that I am in love with this story ;)
Author's Response: Seems to me you might have mentioned that before but I never, never get tired of hearing it! Glad you are still enjoying my story. I always worry that each new chapter I post will be the one where everyone decides the story is stupid and porrly written. So, of course, I like hearing from my loyal readers that it has not all turned to crap. Thanks so much for being such a faithful reviewer. Bill
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2014 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 26
What a delightful chapter. Things are going well with the exception of Lindsey and Melanie's attitude. I wish my kids would fix me breakfast. Keep these chapters coming.
Author's Response: Always so happy to hear from you. I think you might be my 100th review for the second time? I had just gotten over 100 reviews when we had the wesite issues and it seems to me you took me over that milestone. The backup dropped some chapters and reviews and now I am back where I was. Just over 20K readers and 100 reviews. Glad that you were the one to take me to 3 digists of reviews because you are so faithful about reviewing and I truly appreciate you. Lindsay and Melanie have some surprises in store for us but nothing that B&J can't handle together. Thanks again for all your support, Bill
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2014 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 26
I loved this chapter!!! :D The fact that Justin used Brian and the soccer practice with the kids as inspiration for his painting was really cute! :) I loved how well Justin managed the meeting with the prospective client, and also the idea he gave Brian about how to deal with the munchers if they start giving them too much trouble.... I'm so looking forward to those two idiots going to Pittsburgh to see how good Brian and Justin are for their nephews so that they can keep their f*ing mouths shut about them already.... But anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! :D Hope to read you soon! Kisses!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, you are always so faithful about reveiwing and I appreciate it. Glad you enjoyed this chapter. The idiots will have some surrising news to share when they arrive. Working on 27 now but won't be posting as quickly as the last time you asked. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2014 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 26
Love the update! Let's hope Lindsey and Mel keep their bitchiness to a minimum.
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review, gald that you liked this chapter. I think Lindsay and Melanie have some surprises in store for Brian & Justin.
Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: March 11, 2014 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 26
As always I enjoyed this chapter so much.
I hope there won't be a throwback, now that everything is going so smoothly and they are so happy....?
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying the story, it has been fun to write. There might be some drama coming but nothing too serious. Thanks for reading and reviewing, it is great to read what people think of my story.
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