Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: December 24, 2013 10:28 PM · On: Ch 16 - One Ring
loved the story great reading merry xmass happy new year kim
Author's Response: Thanks. Sorry I'm not seeing the review until now.
All my best,
Jackie
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2013 07:23 PM · On: Ch 16 - One Ring
This was a wonderful story. Loved this Brian better at the end.
Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays.
Author's Response: Thanks. Sorry I'm not seeing this review until today.
All my best,
Jackie
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2013 08:56 AM · On: Ch 16 - One Ring
Hurray!!! They are together with the possibility of going to Italy. It was a long way around but they've finally reached the point where they both need to be. A truly wonderful story! Thank you.
Author's Response: Dear YumYumPM,
I had originally put the Italy mention in the story earlier, at the popcorn scene, but my 3rd beta suggested moving it to the end, so I did. I'm so glad he suggested it. It fell into place better. Thanks for appreciating that.
Thanks SO much for all of the comments. It means a lot.
- Jackie
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2013 08:51 AM · On: Ch 15 - Two for Dinner
Brian admitted he's happy!!! Will wonders never cease? I, too, want to know about their plans.
Author's Response: Dear YumYumPM,
I almost had Brian saying more at that moment, but it didn't seem right ... not then. It does take a lot for him to admit he's happy.
Thanks again!
- Jackie
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2013 08:45 AM · On: Ch 14 - Two Together
John is clearly taking advantage of Brian. Is it a plot to get Brian to move in with Justin? Brian would seem to come out better if he did move in with Justin.
Author's Response: John is in his early 20's and just a gamer on a mission. Yes, he takes a little advantage of Brian, but, all the more reason to have Brian move out, yes?
It was so long ago (months), but I think the reason I had Brian taking care of the nephews was so that Brian would leave the loft for Justin's. Brian wouldn't just move in to Justin's place (being on top, being in control) unless, maybe, he's leaving it to his son or his nephews.
Thanks for all of your comments.
- Jackie
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2013 08:34 AM · On: Ch 16 - One Ring
What a wonderful ending!!! I love that Justin kept Brian's ring all those years. Now they have a fresh start and this time it looks like it's for keeps. :)
Happy holidays my friend...be blessed.
Author's Response: Dear Jazzepoet,
I love the idea of wearing a ring for at least one of them. Justin is sentimental enough to hold onto it. This new start and their solid foundation should last this time. Or, at least, until my NEXT story.
I'm happy that you enjoyed the ending. Thanks for all of your comments! Have a blessed holiday yourself.
- Jackie
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2013 07:30 AM · On: Ch 16 - One Ring
Beautiful, my dear! Loved the ending of this chapter especially. I hope if one of them DOES have the occasional 'fling' that they at least never bring them back to that bed. I like the symbolism of it being for only them.;) Thank you for the lovely story! Merry Christmas and best wishes to you for a very happy 2014! Looking forward to more stories from you in the future. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Kim,
It's great that you enjoyed the ending. I suppose I kind of fell back to a formula that I've used before: "B gets J. B loses J. B & J get back together."... but, this time around it was in answer to Randy's quote. I wanted to show the fandom, that, even if Justin goes off to get married to another A-gay in NYC, he could still end up back with Brian. I suppose it's my little way of supporting Randy because I genuinely enjoyed talking to him and I think he's just great.
It was either I write this or I write that Brian is in the company of "Flashdance". Only RnS Con people will get that.
Thanks again for everything this year. We must Skype again soon!
- Jackie
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2013 07:28 AM · On: Ch 15 - Two for Dinner
Oh I can see where this is headed lol...and I can't wait,good thing I don't have to :D
Author's Response: Dear Jazzepoet,
Yes, your Christmas came early. My gift is the wonderful comments by loyal readers. Thank you, Santa.
- Jackie
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2013 07:25 AM · On: Ch 15 - Two for Dinner
This was truly a domestic scene that years ago, hell, months ago, would have made him gag at the thought. But now he could see himself play over and over again. A bottle of wine. A secure, luxurious home. A home-cooked meal. A loving partner who was his sexual equal. Why have I been resistant to this for so long? A wave of emotion hit him. This is where he belonged. This is where he was happiest ... where someone loved and cared for him.
I loved that part, and I loved this chapter! I think this one is my favorite. It really stirred my emotions. Loved the banter between the two of them, and the vision of them just enjoying the simple things together. Loved it! Onto the next chapter....:)
Author's Response: Dear Kim,
Writing that scene and re-reading it brought a tear to my eye. It's everything that I've always wanted for them. To enjoy each other's company and even the simplest of things.
I keep going back to that passage and reading it over and over. It's SO you to pick up on that exact part.
Thanks for commenting.
- Jackie
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2013 07:19 AM · On: Ch 14 - Two Together
"‘Dessert' first came in the form of pound cake and whipped cream, then came in the form of whipped cream licked off of each other's bodies. "
I have to admit that when I started reading that, I fully expected it to say that dessert came first in the form of pound cake, then Brian pounding Justin's ass.;) But the whipped cream would certainly work, too - ha!
Loved it when Justin asked him to move in with him - sigh... Heading to the next chapter to see if a little rain is about to fall on their parade - tee, hee...
Author's Response: Kim, Kim ... What are we to do with you? I love your dirty thoughts. One of my favorite experiences this year was driving down La Cienega, having you read bad fiction out loud to me and Gloria.
Here the whipped cream is for licking, my dear.
Thanks for making me laugh ... more than once.
- Jackie
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2013 07:18 AM · On: Ch 14 - Two Together
Hmmm...will Brian take Justin up on his offer? Let's hope so ;)
Author's Response: Dear Jazzepoet,
Well, by now, I guess you know the answer. Thanks for commenting!
- Jackie
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2013 08:53 PM · On: Ch 13 - Three Guys Hanging Out
"Yes, after the movie I will be happy to remind you of my accommodations."
Snort! Not sure why, but I got a kick out of that line; that one, and where Brian was telling him to get on with it (so to speak). We must both be thinking the same, kinky thoughts, BTW, because Justin's about to take a little ride in my story, too.;)
Love how Gus was so nonchalant about the idea of watching his movie alone for the 'greater good' (wink, wink). Thanks for the update! So glad to see the boys working things out at last. I'll be looking forward to the rest of this. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Dear Kim,
Some of the part of the scene that you describe were from JustBeAQueen, and most from me. The line about the accomodations is definitely mine.
Posting the last two tonight!
Merry Christmas,
- Jackie
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2013 09:44 AM · On: Ch 13 - Three Guys Hanging Out
Children sometimes know better than parents. This was great and so was the sex.
Author's Response: Dear balrogtweety,
Gus's wisdom shone through the fog in Brian's brain. I'm glad you enjoyed it all. Thanks to JustBeAQueen for her assistance in adding 'steam' to the sex scene.
Thanks for the review!
- Jackie
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2013 08:55 AM · On: Ch 13 - Three Guys Hanging Out
I'm glad that our boys were able to work things out, but I still think it's a mistake for Justin to be working for Gardner Vance. It just seems so wrong and kind of like he is slapping Brian in the face in a way.
I can't wait for the next chapter...what will Justin ask Brian? :)
Author's Response: Dear Jazzepoet.
I think that Brian respects a man (Justin) who does what he needs to do to advance his career. Brian certainly made unusual choices along the way for himself. Vance had to fire Brian, but I detected a regret in Vance's actions ... like he felt he had to. Brian doesn't hate Vance. Now Stockwell, that's another matter. Stockwell attacked Brian's way of life and that of the gay community.
The last two chapters will be out tomorrow. Thanks again for all of the comments!
- Jackie
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2013 07:57 AM · On: Ch 13 - Three Guys Hanging Out
Wonderful! They made up. I bet the question is "Will you move in?" At least that's what I hope for.
Author's Response: Dear YumYumPM,
Yes, they did. As for the question ... that's not a bad guess. But there are so many possibilities. Thanks for reading, and hoping. :)
- Jackie
Reviewer: Cherry (Anonymous) · Date: December 23, 2013 12:00 AM · On: Ch 11 - Two Weeks Away
Hi.
First of all, I like to say I'm really enjoying this story. I check for updates regularly, and the question I'm about to pose to you now is no indication whatsoever that I'm abandoning the story. I'm not. I plan to stay until the very end.
However, this story is canon so I'm figuring most of what happened (up until this point) is what happened in the original QAF series.
So, with that said, I kind of have to question the credibility of Gardner offering Justin a job. I'm assuming (since this is canon) that Brian and Justin worked for Vance in the past and he fired both of them behind the Stockwell incident. So, for two reasons I don't see Gardner trusting Justin enough to rehire him.
One is because Justin and Brian betrayed Stockwell and Gardner fired them behind the incident; and two, (in the current day), Gardner and Brian's companies are in direct competition with each other. So, why would he hire Brian's partner to work for him? Isn't that both bad business sense and a rather big risk for Gardner to take?
It's hard for me to imagine that Gardner would offer Justin a postion with his company. Or, I feel that at least you should devote at least a sentence or two explaining why Vance would take a risk on Justin.
Thanks.
Great story still. Enjoying lots.
Author's Response: Dear Cherry,
I know I was taking a chance with Gardner offering Justin a job. I figure that Gardner chalked Justin's actions up to the impetuousness of youth. His beef was more with Brian, not Justin. This is years later and he needs a man with flash/web experience for his firm. He might even think that he's stealing Brian's "talent" out from under him, leaving him with a void in his staff. (But Justin makes sure Kinnetik gets a good new person.) Gardner might not even know that Justin is Brian's partner. If he'd asked Justin, he might have gotten a 'none of your business' response. Justin did, after all, graduate from the Brian Kinney way of doing things. :)
In retrospect, I could have had Justin get a job with another company, but then the dialog about going away to ensure a job with Gardner would have had to be left out. And I love that part.
Thanks for the comments. I hope you continue to enjoy!
- Jackie
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2013 10:39 PM · On: Ch 12 - Twelve Year Old Gus
Hopefully the words will sink in-he can really be a shit sometimes. Conversation is not his strong suit- for heaven sakes,Brian, ask questions just don't go off the deep end and hide inside.!!!
Author's Response: Dear linda,
Yes, he can really be a shit sometimes. If he didn't display those qualities every now and then, it wouldn't be a proper Brian story. :) Sometimes when watching the show, I find myself talking to the screen. "Just buy the damn flowers, Brian!"
Thanks for the comments!
- Jackie
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2013 09:57 PM · On: Ch 12 - Twelve Year Old Gus
Let's hope that the expression 'out of the mouths of babes' holds true here. They both need to understand the other's position.
Author's Response: Dear Jazzepoet,
Ah, the wisdom of youth. Not always evident, but Gus is Brian's son, after all. Maybe it'll help Brian understand. Thanks for the review.
- Jackie
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2013 09:48 PM · On: Ch 11 - Two Weeks Away
Wow...doesn't Justin understand the implications of what he's just done? He certainly has a right to pursue his career anyway he chooses, but him going to work for Gardner Vance was a very low blow.
I want to call Brian an asshole but honestly, his being upset that Justin is leaving Kinnetik to work for the competition and travel constantly out of the country is completely understandable.
Author's Response: Dear Jazzepoet,
Justin didn't want to have that conversation with Brian, but he really feels that he's getting opportunities that he can't get working for Kinnetik. There will always be competition in the ad business and I don't think that working for Vance vs. any other makes a lot of difference. This is many years later, after all.
This was my device to bring some conflict to the rebuilding of their love story. Once we got past the first date, it can't all be downhill from there. That'd be boring. Don't worry, there's resolution ahead.
Thanks, again, for the comments!
- Jackie
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2013 09:25 PM · On: Ch 10 - Fifty Thousand
You just love teasing us don't you ;)...that's why I keep reading.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2013 07:44 PM · On: Ch 12 - Twelve Year Old Gus
Ahh....the wisdom of youth, unhankered by petty, 'grownup' thoughts.;) Loved these two chapters. Typical Brian; on the outside so confident and arrogant, on the inside distinctly vulnerable and uncertain of himself. And I like how Justin pursued his goals and what was best for him, despite the circumstances. Such stubborn men! I'm confident that Brian is slowly beginning to understand.
Very entertaining story, my friend! Looking forward to the rest of this. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Dear Kim,
Sometimes it's good to hear that "you're making this more complicated than it needs to be". Brian is certainly a fantastic combination of arrogance and uncertainty, that's what makes him so fun to write about. Justin is confident here, and is standing up for himself. Thanks for saying that it's entertaining - that's what I was going for :). Thanks for the review.
- Jackie
Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2013 04:27 PM · On: Ch 11 - Two Weeks Away
Why in hell is Justin working for Vance of all people?? I can understand Brians reaction. I hope, Justin will come to his senses.
Author's Response: Dear XPO787,
As i responded to others, I'm hoping to show that Justin is going for opportunity where he can. He and Brian will continue to work on this ....
Thanks for the comments. I hope you enjoy the resolution.
- Jackie
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2013 12:51 PM · On: Ch 12 - Twelve Year Old Gus
It's terrible that Brian broke up with Justin again but I think Gus will get them back together. I hope. Great update.
Author's Response: Dear balrogtweety,
Brian had his reasons, but Justin is sticking to his guns and desired career path. Gus is an influence on Brian, so .... we'll see.
Thanks for the comments!
- Jackie
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2013 11:21 AM · On: Ch 12 - Twelve Year Old Gus
Hmmm, Gus is smart. But Brian is smarter so I think Gus's words will sink in. So much good story in a short amount of time. Wonderful!
Author's Response: Dear YumYumPM,
Now that Gus is old enough to speak intelligently to Brian, maybe he'll listen to him. It's great that you are enjoying the story. Thanks for the comments.
- Jackie
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2013 10:45 AM · On: Ch 11 - Two Weeks Away
It seems like Brian can't get a break. He's hurt because Justin more or less decided to go work for Gardner and sure sounded like he had his mind already made up. I don't see getting past this for Brian. Maybe Justin's new job won't be all it's cracked up to be? Enjoying this muchly.
Author's Response:
Brian has to learn the difference between Justin's wanting a new job and Justin leaving him. One might happen, but not the other. I like to write Justin confident and 'his own man', because, after all, Brian always told him that you have to look out for yourself ("You're the only one you've got ... the only one you need.") I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I'll post 2 chapters tomorrow and 2 the day after, which will complete the story. Thanks again for the reviews!
- Jackie
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2013 11:23 AM · On: Ch 10 - Fifty Thousand
Brian is sooooo lucky. It could have been much worse. Glad that Justin was able to sell his painting for the agreed upon amount. Now who is going somewhere that would possible threaten their new found relationship?
Author's Response: Dear YumYumPM,
Justin is taking another path and it might affect their relationship. I'll be posting 2 chapters a day to get this completed before Christmas.
Thanks, again!
- Jackie
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2013 11:17 AM · On: Ch 9 - Two Fortunes as One
That 4 poster bed is coming in handy. What accident? Just when they're coming together you give them an accident?
Author's Response: Dear YumYumPM,
I think the bed will certainly be used a LOT. Yes, an accident is ahead ... read on. (Gotta make this interesting.)
Thanks for writing!
- Jackie
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2013 10:38 AM · On: Ch 9 - Two Fortunes as One
Very,very,Hot chapter my friend ;) it's good to see our boys reconnecting with each other. The ending question is very ominous though...I hope neither of our boys get hurt.
Author's Response: Dear JAZZEPOET,
Thanks! (My beta JustBeAQueen assisted on the 'steam'.) There are more bumps in the road ahead, but no one is seriously hurt. Thanks for the comments!
- Jackie
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2013 03:53 AM · On: Ch 8 - Eight a.m.
I like the give and take here.;) I love how Justin went above and beyond what he had to do to help Brian, both at the apartment and with his nephews. It's nice to see their relationship maturing in this way. Lovely story; I'll be looking forward to the rest.;) *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Dear Kim,
Thanks. I'm trying to show maturity on both their parts. I just posted 2 chapters tonight, so I hope you continue to enjoy. Thanks SO much for the comments. You know how much they mean.
- Jackie
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2013 01:48 PM · On: Ch 8 - Eight a.m.
It sounds to me like Brian owes Justin more than dinner. Good chapter!!!
Author's Response: Dear YumYumPM,
Yes, I think he does owe him more. Always ... more. I posted 2 more chapters tonight. I hope you continue to enjoy!
Thanks for the review!
- Jackie
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2013 11:27 AM · On: Ch 8 - Eight a.m.
Fortune cookie says...the start of a passionate love affair is on the horizon :)
Author's Response: Dear Jazzepoet,
My working title for this story was 'Same Fortunes', but then it became more about the bed. I think that's where your mind is, yes? :)
Thanks for reading and comments!
- Jackie
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2013 03:04 PM · On: Ch 7 - One Thirty a.m.
A drunken late night visit, a blowie, and a hand job might be enough for now...but getting through the night and early morning is another story. There is still opportunity for that much desired late night fuck, not to mention the need to shower ;)
Author's Response: Dear Jazzepoet,
There's always that temptation, I'm sure. And I considered writing it that way, but ... well, see what I wrote in today's installment. Don't worry, there will be more contact soon! Thanks for all of your comments.
- Jackie
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2013 02:55 PM · On: Ch 7 - One Thirty a.m.
Can they sleep together without fucking?
That s the million $$ question :D
Author's Response: Dear "E" (reiselust161),
That IS the question. I have to have something to spark the reader, right? Thanks for reading and commenting!
- Jackie
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2013 11:31 AM · On: Ch 7 - One Thirty a.m.
Interesting how Brian insists on being taken to Justin's. Me thinks that the problems Brian's having with his accounts are easily fixed once Justin gets his hands on them. Hopefull tomorrow brings happiness to both men.
Author's Response: Dear YumYumPM,
Brian has decided at this point, (whether conciously or not) that he's ready to pursue Justin in a sexual way. As far as Brian's accounts, Justin DOES have the magic hands ... as for their bodies, I think both have magic hands. Thanks for reading and comments!
- Jackie
Reviewer: meclarayoda (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2013 02:44 AM · On: Ch 6 - The Four Poster Bed
Great chapter - but you somewhat left us in a lurch (again - lol) you nasty wench! Please update SOON, I want to see what the police want with Justin. Maybe it has something to do with Hobbs? Jane
Author's Response: Dear Jane,
I must entice the reader to read on, mustn't I? (I LOVE the title "wench", by the way.) Another reviewer thought it might be Hoffa, you think it might be Hobbs ... Hmm. Nope. More soon ....
Thanks for the comments!
- Jackie "Wench"
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2013 06:57 PM · On: Ch 6 - The Four Poster Bed
Justin???...Police???...is Peyton dead or suing him or did he finally singlehandedly find Jimmy Hoffa???...I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter to find out.
Author's Response: Dear Jazzepoet,
Yeah, the Hoffa thing. LOL. No, I wouldn't do that. Payton is out of the picture at this point. It's great that you're looking forward to more of the story. More soon...
Thanks!
- Jackie
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2013 06:55 PM · On: Ch 6 - The Four Poster Bed
Really liked this chapter, my friend! For a brief moment, I thought maybe Brian would show up at the gym and get jealous of Justin talking to Ben.;) And I liked Justin's explanation as to why he wanted the four-poster bed. And I laughed when Debbie looked on the front porch for Brian's date.;) Funny! Looking forward to the rest of your story.;) *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Dear Kim,
I like showing a friendship between Ben and Justin, partly because I enjoyed talking to Robert Gant at the Con. (swoon) Justin's desire for the solid foundation of the bed became the title for the story. As for Deb looking for Brian's date - yeah, that kinda happened to me once, so I've always wanted to include it in a story.
Thanks so much for the comments.
- Jackie
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2013 11:10 AM · On: Ch 6 - The Four Poster Bed
Hahaha! Debbie's reaction to their arriving together was hysterical!!! But what's with the end notes. Now I have to wait to find out? No fair!!!!
Author's Response: Dear YumYumPM,
That part of the story was based on something similar happening to me. My boyfriend (at the time) told his mother that he and I was dating and she didn't believe him because we'd been friends so long. As for the end notes ... updating soon. :)
- Jackie
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: December 16, 2013 10:11 AM · On: Ch 5 - Ten Pins
I'm really enjoying seeing a restrained Brian and a more mature dating duo. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Dear sfscarlet,
I'm sure it's difficult for Brian to hold back, but he's managing to do so. Maturity is evident in both men, thankfully. Thanks for commenting. More tonight...
- Jackie
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 14, 2013 10:58 PM · On: Ch 5 - Ten Pins
lovely.....
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you enjoy the rest.
- Jackie
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2013 07:37 PM · On: Ch 5 - Ten Pins
Liking how they are taking their relationship more slowly this time. I think it shows that both of them are serious about getting it right and making things last. The bowling was a good idea for a date! BTW, always wondered about the "grasshopper" reference, because I have seen Brian say that a lot in fanfic. Did he ever call Justin that on the show? I can't recall but would love to know where if he did.
Thanks for the quick updates! Something tells me the boys just might be heading toward a deeper relationship here (pun intended - ha!). *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Kim,
I don't think 'grasshopper' was used during the show, but I figure Brian is old enough to get the teacher/student reference from the show "Kung Fu". Justin might be too young, though. One of my betas thought that bowling was an unusual date, but he didn't watch the whole series. And, yes, they're moving closer. More bumps in their future, though.
Thanks for the comments! *hugs*
- Jackie
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2013 11:36 AM · On: Ch 5 - Ten Pins
Oh my friend you pose a very good question indeed ;) but how long can Brian hold fast to his rules concerning Justin
Author's Response: Dear Jazzepoet,
It's fun to pose the questions ... of course, I already know the answers. (Giggle). Brian is working his way toward trusting Justin.
- Jackie
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2013 10:32 AM · On: Ch 5 - Ten Pins
At least Brian is actually having fun - no hidden agenda! Can he trust Justin? Should he trust Justin? I hope so.
Author's Response: It's important for them to have fun and really enjoy each other's company. He'll trust Justin at the right time. Thanks for the comments.
- Jackie
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2013 06:24 PM · On: Ch 4 - Four Bedrooms?
I can't believe it...Brian turning down a night of passion with his Sunshine? This is going to be even better than I thought :) And oh yes, I can see the little green-eyed monster peeking around the corner, but the question is which one of our boys is making it appear?
Author's Response: Dear JAZZEPOET,
I'm sure turning Justin down is difficult for Brian, but he's guarding himself right now. There's a little jealousy in the next chapter. Just enough to entice the reader, I hope. Thanks so much for the comments.
- Jackie
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2013 06:24 PM · On: Ch 4 - Four Bedrooms?
Nice start to your story. I like seeing Brian be the cautious one who's not overly eager to just jump back in bed. Maybe he wized up over the years? TAG
Author's Response: Dear Tag,
I suppose it's a bit out of character for him, but I feel that 'this' Brian is being cautious in this situation. Wized up? Sure, that sounds good. :)
Thanks for the comments.
- Jackie
Reviewer: taurus1958 (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2013 11:33 AM · On: Ch 4 - Four Bedrooms?
I like the way the story is going so far. Continue please.
Author's Response: Dear taurus1958,
It's great that you're enjoying it. More in the next couple of days. Thanks for the comments.
- Jackie
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2013 11:29 AM · On: Ch 4 - Four Bedrooms?
I thought Brian did amazingly well. He could have gotten carried away, but he's not willing to put his heart on the line and I don't blame him. Most enjoyable chapter.
Author's Response: Dear YumYumPM,
Yes, Brian is guarding himself. He knows that sex will mean more than just a casual thing, and he can't risk it. I'm glad that you're enjoying the story.
- Jackie
Reviewer: oceanreign (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2013 06:12 AM · On: Ch 3 - First Date
LOVE IT. Need more. LOL.
Author's Response: Dear oceanreign,
Thanks! I hope you enjoy the rest as well. YAY!
- Jackie
Reviewer: ME (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2013 02:52 AM · On: Ch 1 - Prologue
I don't understand why if the story is complete, why you're not posting it all at once? I, as a reader, would rather read it all at once and not in spurts. Sometimes RL gets in the way and you might never finish posting the whole story. I have seen it happen before where a writer said the story was complete, but never got around to posting the whole thing because of RL. It's not fair to the readers to wait in between. Just thought I would share my point of view. For me in dosen't build supense in wanting to finish the story, it makes me not even want to start reading it until, it as a whole is all posted. Hope you finish posting it all before too long.
Author's Response: Dear ME,
I understand what you mean about people who start stories and then never post the rest. What you have to look for is a story that says "THIS STORY IS COMPLETE", like this one is. Trust me, I've finished it. Ask my beta's. I have witnesses. LOL I usually post the story all at once, but sometimes I do it one chapter at a time to get more reviews and get comments along the way. I'll post another chapter tonight.
Please review along the way and let me know how I'm doing.
Thanks!
- Jackie
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2013 07:51 AM · On: Ch 3 - First Date
This was wonderful. Glad they are taking it slow. Great update.
Author's Response: They NEED to take it slow this time around. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Thanks
- Jackie
Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2013 03:36 AM · On: Ch 3 - First Date
The story is interesting, but it doesen't seem complete.
Will there be a sequel?
Author's Response: Dear LNG,
The story is complete, I just haven't posted all of it yet. It's about 26000 words in all. Look for another chapter tomorrow.
Thanks!
- Jackie
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2013 03:12 AM · On: Ch 3 - First Date
Hi, my dear - I'm playing catch up on stories. I really enjoyed their date, and how they're taking it slow this time. It was kind of sad and poignant when Justin asked Brian who was taking care of him; I think that was my favorite part, though.;)
I think both of them have evolved over the years and can now hopefully start fresh with a meaninful and long-lasting relationship. I'll be looking forward to the rest of this. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Dearest Kim,
Thanks for mentioning a passage from the story that you liked. That makes the reviews so sweet. (I know I should do it more, myself.)
This story was fun to write, but, at times, laborious. It was hard to get out from under such an emotionally rough prologue. But, then again, it makes the ending sweeter somehow.
Thanks for the kind words. All my best,
- Jackie
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2013 01:05 AM · On: Ch 3 - First Date
Love that they are taking it slow and steady. It seems like a perfect time for making a fresh start for both of them. Enjoying this story!
Author's Response: Dear YumYumPM,
I'm glad that you appreciate the timing in their lives ... for a new love or the rekindling of an old love. Great that you're enjoying this.
More tomorrow!
- Jackie
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2013 06:24 PM · On: Ch 3 - First Date
This is like a good soap opera lol, I think their decision to take things slowly is very important here. I can't wait for the next installment :)
Author's Response: Dear JAZZEPOET,
The whole series was a soap opera of sorts, so why not make the fiction similar, eh? :) Taking it slow here, might be painful at times, but, yes, I agree, necessary.
Thanks,
- Jackie
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2013 03:46 PM · On: Ch 1 - Prologue
Still have to read the story itself, just wanted to comment on your storynotes. The quote is in fact from Randy itself and was given to us as answer to some questions we sent him before the convention in Cologne. Elke
Author's Response: Dear Elke,
I heard that it was from Cologne's convention questions. There was another longer one that was too anti-B/J that I didn't include (that I'm not as sure about being authentic).
I like Randy and I don't want to get him in trouble all over again. :) In fact, this story is a way to showing that, even with a turn in the B/J story, they could recover.
Thanks for the postcard and the comment!
- Jackie
Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2013 02:21 PM · On: Ch 3 - First Date
I like it that they start all over again and take it slow. :) Nice story.
Author's Response: Dear XPO787,
Thanks so much for the positive review. I hope you enjoy more ... tomorrow.
- Jackie
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2013 04:34 AM · On: Ch 1 - Prologue
I like the fresh beginning feel this story has. Maybe it will be easier this time, now all the cards are on the table Please keep posting updates and thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Dear Jane,
Thanks for the kind words. I hope this will be a different 'take' on their story. It was fun to write. Posting more soon....
Thanks again,
- Jackie
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2013 02:38 AM · On: Ch 2 - Start from Zero
Talk about Deja Vu. I like this starting out fresh approach. No telling what will happen. I also like how Brian is taking care of his nephews. Shows a side of Brian that Justin doesn't remember.
Author's Response: Dear YumYumPM,
Had to start anew with the guys. Yes, I wanted to show Brian helping the nephews to show a caring side. Thanks!
- Jackie
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2013 02:27 AM · On: Ch 1 - Prologue
Love this look at what's been happening to everyone. Hopefully Brian and Justin can start over again and I look forward to seeing where you take us on this journey.
Author's Response: Dear YumYumPM,
It was fun coming up with a back story. I wanted to establish that Justin was, indeed, back in Pittsburgh.
Thanks for the encouraging words.
- Jackie
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2013 06:41 PM · On: Ch 2 - Start from Zero
Very interesting premise, it will be interesting to see Justin work to get Brian back.
Author's Response: Dear Jazzepoet,
I know the idea of rebuilding has been done a hundred ways, but this particular journey will take a while. At least, that's what it seemed like when I was 3/4 of the way through it! :)
Thanks,
- Jackie
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2013 01:50 PM · On: Ch 1 - Prologue
This was wonderful for them to start all over again. Great fic.
Author's Response: Dear balrogtweety,
Thank you. Yes, it's just something I'd been meaning to write for a while.
Hope you enjoy the rest!
- Jackie
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