Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2019 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 3
Such a passionate and powerful chapter, fantastic work x
Author's Response: I am delighted you enjoyed this part of the story. Your reviews are very heartening. Thank you so much for taking the time to give me feedback and encouragement on each chapter.
Cheers
Flossee
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2019 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 2
I can see how embarrassed Brian was about the conversation in the dressing room and how uncomfortable Justin was at the dinner. The tension was strong. I do hope they fix what's wrong because they are meant to be.
Author's Response: I am relishing the fact that you can clearly see the emotions in this fic. Thank you again for your insightful words.
Cheers
Flossee
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2019 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
So tender and loving. I love how open Brian is and it shows us his raw inner self which is fantastic.
Author's Response: Brian doesn't feel the need to hide from Justin. It must be very liberating for a man like Brian to allow himself to let go of the persona he has built up over the years. Raw inner self is so true.
Cheers
Flossee
Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 3
Brian may have won me over even more in this chapter, and I didn't think that was possible. Is there any way to clone him? I'll take two if there is.
Enjoying this series so much!
Author's Response: Clone Brian. What a lovely thought. Well, if that was possible you will have to stand in line behind me as I'll take half a dozen. LOL
Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed this series. :)))
Cheers :)))
Reviewer: AstorI (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 2
I am enjoying reading how Brian is talking about topping and bottoming. I like that he is willing to do either, but his preference is topping. The things that man is willing to do for love. *sighs into my ice cream*
Author's Response: Ice cream. Not fair. Now I want ice cream. Oh wait, you have me thinking, ice cream comes from cows (well milk/cream) so now I am picturing Justin in a cow print onesie. Thanks for putting that picture in my head. LOL
Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
'and because of that, I think I should top from now on.' I think I love this too much already. Justin on top give me life! Poor Brian probably choked hearing him say that. Lol
Author's Response: Haha I like that; and I guess you are right as Brian certainly wouldn't have slept easy. LOL
Reviewer: steff (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2015 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 1
I love your "Define"-Series! Found it yesterday and already read parts of it twice. "Define my Brian" might be my favorite, but I can't quite decide. They are a joy to read and I thank you for sharing them!
Author's Response: OMG, thank you, thank you, thank you. How nice to say you only just found the series and you have already read some parts twice. That is such a thrill to hear. I'm not sure if I am supposed to say this, but my favourite is "Define My Brian". I hope that doesn't sound pretentious coming from the author. LOL I truly appreciate your very kind words. Thank you.
Cheers :)))
Flossee
Reviewer: steff (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2015 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
Your Justin is SO sweet and cute! The end of that chapter made me llaugh :-) :-)
Author's Response: Hey Steff
I apologize in advance if I have this wrong, but I think this may be the first time you have reviewed for me; it's lovely to converse with readers and it is absolutely delightful to meet new people, so thank you very much for taking the time to comment. ‘Sweet and Cute', I like that description. Justin is my favourite character, but I'm sure you guessed that. LOL I love it when people tell me what made them laugh and I really enjoy it when I find someone that gets my sense of humour. This review has definitely made my day. Thank you so much.
Cheers :)))
Flossee
Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2015 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 3
Good for Brian for telling Justin how important it is for them to talk. Loved this sugary sweet chapter. Such a great story!! My fave Brian/Justin series.
Author's Response: Thanks for saying this is your fav B/J series. I'm happy you liked the sugary sweet chapter. I do think the warning was necessary though. LOL Thanks again for reviewing each chapter, I really appreciate it when people take their time to do that.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2015 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 2
Justin needs to know that Brian doesn't care if he tops all the time. He just wants to be with him any way he can. Also, the onesie is too cute!!
Author's Response: The onesie is just my personality taking over. I can't help it. I tried not to put in to many humorous parts and spoil the ambiance of the fic, but sometimes they just sneak in there. LOL You wouldn't believe how many times I took pieces out because humor wasn't my aim. I'm glad you thought the onesie was cute, as cute doesn't denote overdone. Thanks heaps. :)))
Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2015 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
I think toppy Justin may be one of my favorite thingo. I love that Brian wanted him to top.
Author's Response: Justin; what a man; willing to be the top to bring Brian pleasure. LOL
I am enjoying how you are pointing out things like, Brian wanting Justin to top. It is so nice to see parts referenced, and liked, that are so AU.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2014 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hahaha! Yeah right, like Brian would agree to that. I can just imagne his eyes going wide when Justin declared that last. The thing I love most about this story is how you have Justin integrating his life into the modern world and with Brian, and yet you don't lessen his belief system or change who he fundamentally is to suit the world of Liberty Avenue. Some how you make all of his modesty and his quirks work, maintaining Justin's character the way you created it!
Author's Response: Hey Sarah.
I truly appreciate you reviewing this and letting me know you enjoyed Justin's little declaration.:D Thank you for your very kind words and telling me what you like about this fic. Justin trying to balance his beliefs and life with Brian has given me so much leeway which has made this extremely enjoyable to write. "Somehow you make all of his modesty and his quirks work, maintaining Justin's character the way you created it!" Thanks, that is nice of you to say; I really am gratefully you have taken the time to share your thoughts as they are very encouraging.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: sln188 (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2014 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 3
enjoyed this second installment. The characters you've written are so different from most BJ fics. But you seem to have kept their 'cores'. Nicely done. Yes, you should absolutely put up your third segment.
Author's Response: Hey sln188. Thank you for letting me know you have read both fics and I appreciate you taking the time to leave such a nice review. "you seem to have kept their 'cores'" I'm glad you think I was about to do that. I appreciate you saying you want the third part to this series, thank you.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2014 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 3
I don't even know where to begin, I better wait for the insulin to kick in. That was maple syrup, cotton candy, taffy apple sweet. I think Brian had his red hot sexy blood replaced by pure cane syrup. I demand you continue with this story, I won't be able to sleep till I know what happens. The pain poor Justin is dealing with shouldn't be allowed to go on. I think it's perfectly clear that this new Brian will refrain from his back room behavior and treat his husband as he deserves. Maybe they will have to find an Amish community with relaxed rules and join so Justin can keep his well learned behaviors intact. Or, Justin could wise up and realize he's not really Amish, he was just hidden there to protect the family from mistakes/crimes his parents were mixed up in. I bet there would be a good therapist at the area who could help him work thru some of those issues. I doubt he'll ever get over his conflict about Michael, that's just impossible. I'm sure if Mel was kept out of sight most of the time some of those bad reminders of Brian's past would go away too. I'm afraid Brian's bad language will always be a problem. The same thing happened with a cockatoo we had, once he learned the bad words he couldn't be trusted around christian people. I'm sorry my reviews are late, I hate being tardy but my lack of computer time continues...
Lori
Author's Response: I'm sorry you had to self-medicate. :) I just had a thought; maybe since my taste buds have changed and I can only eat a very small amount of sugar then this is my outlet of something sugary, or maybe my brain has just turned to mush. LOL Well learned behaviours, we probably all have them. Especially when it comes to religion. We probably all grow up believing in what our parents believe in, and once we become adults we may question it, but when times are tough what do most of us revert back to? Justin's religion and the Michael conflict; are you saying a little Bible bashing is in order? Okay, did I go too far with that comment? Oh, do you think Justin should meet this cockatoo in the next fic???? LOL I do worry about your computer access sometimes, however I'm happy to know you have eight-track cartridges for the car, two tin cans with string and the iceman visits regularly with blocks of ice for your icebox (cold closet). Seriously; I really appreciate you taking the time out of your limited internet access to review for me and thanks for the laugh.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2014 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 2
I have a quick shot of insulin close at hand to be prepared for another chapter of the love fest. This chapter had enough Amish humor to keep it from being too sweet. I was so happy to see the pic. of the cow onesie, I'm sure Justin felt right at home in a bovine inspired outfit. I do think the Amish community would frown at such a exotic outfit, something like that would be too flashy. Even tho it does fit the color regulations, the pattern is sure to lead to the wearer feeling proud and that is not allowed. So do you think Justin is going to give up all his Amish ways and embrace the new world and it's wild ways? I mean, Brian can't keep kissing him all the time to keep him quiet and he does need to wear some fancy zipper clothes if he's going to blend in. I'm worried that Brian is going to snap from all the changes he's made, how long can he go on with being a devoted partner?
Lori
Author's Response: 
I'm disappointed, I gave the Jeep such a large role in this chapter and not one comment; you haven't mentioned the colour change or the technologically challenged Justin who couldn't open the door. :( Maybe I should have added a RED kayak on the roof rack as that might have harvested some attention. :)
Would I have redeemed the cow onesie if it was a Jersey or Aussie Red print? Okay, I admit I was only going to write Jersey here as they are usually just one colour, and that‘s a light brownish colour, but how can you resist a cow that is called an Aussie Red? LOL Thanks for letting me know the Amish humour kept you from self-medicating. LOL I really do appreciate you taking the time to share a laugh. :D
Cheers
Acknowledgement: Photo by BigPaw. Sorry I couldn't resist using it.
Reviewer: bamamary (Anonymous) · Date: April 23, 2014 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 3
Yes, please bring on the next installment. This is a well written, good story. I like your AUs and hope you will write many more.
Hope you are well and doing better.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the well wishes with my health; I really appreciate that.
I don't know what drugs sent me in the direction of writing AU's, but now they won't leave me alone. LOL I'm happy you like them. :) I will publish the next instalment once my beta has betaed the first two fics in this series. Yes, I have a beta now. Happy, happy dance. It's really hard to dance when you are typing. Sorry, I hope you don't mind a little silliness in your reply. :D Thank you for letting me knows you have read my "Define Normal" series and for your very kind words.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2014 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 3
I was happy to see that you continued the Define Normal
universe in this story. Dealing with Justin is not going to be
easy. It is so hard to figure out what he is thinking. Poor Justin,
dealing with Brian is also not going to be easy. Two very
different people coming from very different environments trying
to have a relationship.
What I like most about the story are the characters. You can’t
help but root for them, together and separately.
Thanks again for the story.
DavidR
Author's Response: "Two very different people coming from very different environments trying to have a relationship." I like the way you phrased this as I'm sure that is something most of us can relate to. I love that you are rooting for the characters. I am ecstatic that you have read the continuance as I am using something you said as my guide when it comes to these characters, "In our minds we saw the future", and I don't want to ruin that by giving it my own conclusion. I have one more addition to this series and I thank you for your reviews and your insight.
Cheers
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2014 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 3
Very sweet and at the same time quite profound. TAG
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words, I truly appreciate them. I'm so pleased you like this fic. Thank you also for taking time out of your creative rush to read this story and give me your thoughts.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2014 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 1
Love Justin's logical conclusion! LOL! TAG
Author's Response: Hey I'm glad you have let me know we shared a laugh. Poor Justin, being top-notch at topping didn't land him the top position. :D
Cheers :)
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2014 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 3
'...as he gets comfortable he reaches up and holds Justin's hand in his."
This is where I got the bucket, but only to catch the tears. That was so touching. It's the little things that make the difference. I could just picture that scene and tears came to my eyes. Beautiful.
"You not only satisfy me, you fulfil me."
I loved the heartfelt talk that was long overdue. This is why I love AU stories as much as canon. I loved the sonnet quoted in Tagsit's story but you have written some pretty words here too.
Loving this. :)
Author's Response: Hello. :) I am so very happy you think the little things are what make the difference as I feel the same way. "you have written some pretty words here" thank you for this comment. You are the first person who has admitted to using a bucket and I love your reason, thank you for sharing that with us. I am touched by your words.
Okay I say this jokingly, but you are making my life hard. I have been unable to catch up with all the fics on MW and I am currently reading two of Tagsit's four WIP's, but I don't think they are the ones containing the sonnet, so now do I leave the two I have started to begin another one. So many choices. LOL I will look forward to discovering the fic with the sonnet.
Thank you for saying you are loving this. :)
Cheers
Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2014 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 3
Hi Flossee, I apologize for the late review. This chapter was very touching, Brian and Justin are so much in love and you did a really good job of bringing their pain out into the open. Here Brian is thinking Justin is really ticked off at him and Justin is thinking he’s unworthy of Brian and that he doesn’t “add up” so to speak.
Loved the spousal operating manual reference, LOL, I think we all could use one of those from time to time. The last sentence in Justin’s little speech “Look into my eyes and you will find me. Look into my heart and you will find you. Your true self, your very essences, a kind, caring, gentle soul, that defines you, that defines MY Brian”….Just beautiful!
I would love to read the next installment : ) Hugs ~ Janet
Author's Response: Hello Janet. Thank you so much for helping me out with some incorrect wording. (I appreciate the way you did that). Don't apologize for the late review as I am just ecstatic if people give me their thoughts. I will tell you, as soon as I posted this to MW I couldn't access the site, even after several hours of trying, and then today we had our family gathering for Easter as we aren't able to get together on Sunday, which means I didn't get time to write replies, so I should be the one apologizing.
Spousal operating manual; I too would be standing in line to buy one if they existed. LOL "you did a really good job of bringing their pain out into the open" thank you for saying that and thank you for the lovely comment on the last line.
You have been a massive help to me and I can't thank you enough. Thank you so very, very much.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2014 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 3
Very happy and relieved that they are okay. Love this story. Please add the next installment of this story. Everyone needs a love like this.
Author's Response: Hello Lorie. You give such nice reviews and encouraging ones. I love the fact you tell me how you feel for the men and where the fic has taken them. "Everyone needs a love like this" what a lovely sentiment and I couldn't agree more. Thank you, thank you so much for your kind words.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2014 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 2
Poor Justin. So unsure of what Brian is telling him. They really do need to have a frank talk. I'm surprised at Emmett for carrying tells.
Author's Response: Hello YumYumPM. I love Emmett, but I do think he might gossip, just a little, sometimes. :) Well maybe just this OOC one does. LOL I have posted the conclusion so I hope you like the way they resolve their misconception of the situation. Thank you for your support with this fic. I hope you know how much I truly appreciate your reviews. :)
Cheers
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2014 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
Gotta say I just adore your banner for this story. I haven't had a chance to read this yet (juggling four WIPs now - eeeek!) but I will soon. And in the meantime I get an extra special treat every time I see that hot sexy kiss you used. Thanks! TAG
Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback on the banner. I am trying to make my own and since Justin takes the lead in this fic I wanted a kiss where it looks like he is in control. I'm glad you can enjoy the boys when you see the banner. I know you have several fics going and I haven't been able to keep up. I am part way through two of them and I haven't been able to start the other two yet. Once you get an idea in your head you seem to be a prolific writer so I hope you will forgive me that I have been unable to keep up-to-date. Normally I would be the one saying, faster, write faster, but with the health issue I'm saying wait for me. LOL I know I will catch up; it just might take a little while. I hope you enjoy this fic when you get time.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2014 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 3
Sooo sweet - and I want more! :)
Author's Response: Hello XP0787. Thank you so much for taking the time to review and for leaving such a sweet comment. I am thrilled to hear you want more and I appreciate you taking the time to let me know. :)
Cheers
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2014 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 3
The pure love that is felt by Justin and the way Brian is willing to change is refreshing and different to read. I'm not much of a romantic but I'm enjoying this series as a different B/J combination. I hope you do post the next series.
Author's Response: Hello Sandy. "The pure love that is felt by Justin and the way Brian is willing to change is refreshing" what a lovely way to describe how you feel about this series and I'm so happy that someone who isn't a romantic is enjoying the story. I now consider myself a romantic, but I didn't before I started writing this; the way it just poured on to the page was insane. Thank you so very much for leaving this review it is truly appreciated. :)
Cheers
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2014 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 3
More...more...more, please and thank you ;) I can't wait to see where they go from here.
Author's Response: Hello Tamara. Thank you, thank you, thank you for wanting more, more, more. LOL I really appreciate the support you give me, especially with your busy work schedule. I see you have also managed to update another fic, which I will be reading very shortly; I can't wait. :D
Cheers
Reviewer: FF (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2014 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 2
I forgot to add. Please hurry with the final chapter as they need to talk and work things out and I need a conclusion.lol I love your OOC romantic Brian and Justin. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying my OOC B/J. There are two authors that seem to be vying for their fics to be recognised at the moment so I was going to hold off on adding the final chapter; then I thought, no I won't do that as I have to consider my readers, so I hope to have it up soon. Thank you for your very kind reviews and letting me know we have some romantics on the site. LOL
Cheers :)
Reviewer: FF (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2014 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 2
cop a feel. lol That is typically Brian. :D The onesie was very funny and I like how you balanced it with the romance and the last line was perfect emotion.
Author's Response: "Cop a feel". I love how you have picked up on subtle phrases I slipped in to the writing. I am ecstatic about this review and the previous one as it means the little nuances I have adding have been noticed. Happy Dance. :) "you balanced it with the romance and the last line was perfect emotion." I'm so happy you think I have been able to get the balance right and thank you for the "perfect emotion" comment.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: FF (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2014 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 1
Justin leans in and kisses his man while once again nudging him to roll over.
I like the way you are adding pieces of the original show.
lol that last line was unexpected :D
Author's Response: I'm so pleased you picked up on the subtle parts of the show that I tried to include; I chuffed. Thank you. Justin wanting to be the top; I'm really glad you were surprised by that and it gave you a laugh. :D I can see you have read on; thank you very much for taking the time to leave these reviews as I really do appreciate your support.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2014 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 2
"Take me my Brian."
I decided not to review when I'm sleep deprived, but that ended up not reviewing much at all so forgive me if I don't make sense. I love a romantic story if it's done well, which means not overly mushy. I love this Brian and Justin. This Justin is innocent to ways of the world and Brian's patience, tenderness, and kindness toward him
is palpable.
I'm happy you explained the onesie. I kept thinking of my kid's outfuts as a baby, but I imagined nothing like that picture. Brain had to truly be in love to go out with Justin in that, LOL..
Author's Response: Thank you, that is too kind; "Brian's patience, tenderness, and kindness toward him is palpable". I'm so pleased you decided to review even if you are sleep deprived as I always appreciate your encouragement and the wonderful way you have with words. You really need to write Sandra as your reviews show how comfortable you are with the genre of writing.
I'm glad we shared a laugh with the onesie. They are like a baby onesie just bigger and this one was a cow print. LOL I agree Brian must really love him as I don't think to many people would have partners that will be seen with them in a onesie. :D
Oh, I just realised you said kid's, plural. So writing probably isn't something you have time for. I absolutely appreciate you taking the time to writing this review and I hope you like the ending. As to what you have written "I love a romantic story if it's done well, which means not overly mushy", I hope now I have managed that in the final chapter as I know there can be a fine line between balanced and going too far.
One, two three; okay the sheep are imaginary. I'm just trying to help you get the rest you missed out on while writing this very much appreicate review. LOL
Cheers :)
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2014 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 2
Loving this story, but right now my stomach is in knots and I am crying because they are both scared and upset about what happened. They need to talk and figure out how to fix this, they love each other and belong together.
Author's Response: Hey Lorie. :) I'm absolutely thrilled if my fic can have your stomach in knots, not because that is a good thing but because it means you are involved with how I have written these OOC B/J. Thank you for taking the time to give me your thoughts in a review as it really is appreciated and very encouraging. I hope you like the remaining chapter.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2014 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 2
The cow print onsie was hilarious ROTFL...That Damn Mel, why couldn't she keep her fucking mouth shut for once. Actually, the whole fucking family could have kept their pie holes shut...oh and Cody too. This was the biggest problem in their relationship imo, too many people having voting privileges when Justin and Brian's were the only two that counted.
I hope they can patch things up...
Author's Response: Hey Tamara. :) I'm so pleased you like my fashion-challenged Justin. LOL I agree with you whole heartily; the family were never going to let Brian's past stay in the past, or allow the men to have a private life. So let's hope any damage that has been inflected will all come out in the wash, just like the black spots on the cow prints onesie. :D Thanks for reviewing my friend and letting me know we have shared another laugh. :)
Cheers
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2014 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 2
thanks for explaining a onesie- poor Justin - wish he was more comfortable with tlaking to Brian and saying what is on his mind
Author's Response: Hi Sandy. :) I hope the picture of the cow print onesie shows, maybe you know them by a different name. Thank you for noticing Justin is keeping things close to his chest. I think he may need a little time to understand Brian's behaviour. However, I won't give him too much time as this fic only has one chapter left. LOL
This is the absolute truth: I only turned on my computer to leave a review on "A Man's Gotta Know When To Ask For Help". I had been spending my energy on trying to keep up with the new authors and smaller fics because I tire easily, however when I saw your review the other day it spurred me to start your continuance and I must say I am glad I did. I have only read two chapters so far and I admit I had forgotten how gentle your writing is. When I say gentle I mean easy flowing, plus I like the way you move a story along. I will give you my thoughts in a review.
Thank you for taking the time to review. :)
Cheers
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2014 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 1
I'm glad you continued this story; it is so unique. I love to read the bond between the two men.
Author's Response: Hello Sandy. I became very nostalgic when I saw your review as I looked at the people who reviewed this fic and they are all people who have been active on this site since I started with MW. They are people who have given me great support and encouragement; hopefully I have been supportive of them also. This is just like an MW family gathering for me. I know that's being sentimental so I best move on. Thank you for letting me know you are enjoying the continuance and you find my AU unique. I truly appreciate you taking the time to review and your kind words. :)
Cheers
Reviewer: NoChaser (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2014 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 1
Brian knows if he still thought about his top one hundred fucks Justin wouldn't even make the list, as fucking is not what he and Justin do. Conversely, if he had a list of the times he made love to another man, the only one on that list would be Justin.
This is just sooo sweet! I love the way you phrased this. Perfectly.
"I'm so happy you enjoyed bottoming for me and that it gave you so much pleasure, and because of that, I think I should be the top from now on."
LOL! And isn't our little Justin such a good Samaritan? The sacrifices he is willing to make. ;)
Roni
Author's Response: Oh Roni, that last line in your review made me laugh. :D Thank you, as it's such a great way to start the day. I'm ecstatic that one of my favourite authors likes the way I phrased something; I really appreciate your encouragement and your very kind words. Thank you so much for taking the time to review.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2014 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great chapter. Love Justin's comment about being the top from now on.
Author's Response: Hey Lorie. :) Will Brian just roll over, so to speak, and let Justin be the top??? I won't hold you in suspense very long as I hope to have the remaining two chapters posted quickly. Thank you for your support with the "great chapter" comment and for letting me know specifically what you enjoyed as that really helps me. I'm glad you are enjoying the continuance. :)
Cheers
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2014 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
WOW, that sure was syrupy sweet romance. I think it would make a certain rock hard appendage fall off the cannon Brian. I do like how Toppy Justin has decided to claim the crown and declare himself the only top in the family from now on. I just hope he doesn't also think Brian should now wear a bonnet and give up zippers. I am so happy to see another of your stories posted here. They bring such joy into my dull boring like. I'm also thrilled to know you are nearly done with the extensive overhaul, I'm a little afraid I won't recognize you with all the new parts and accessories. Now back to the story, will there be an update on Justin's family back on the farm? I'm still worried about the girls and their parasite problems. Will Brian buy a pretty blue Jeep for Justin to cruise around in? Will Justin look for work or school to keep himself occupied? I think he's much to proud to be a kept love toy for long. I hope the crops are doing well on the roof, I'm sure he is tending them daily. I bet getting the plow horse up there in the elevator must have been delightful to watch.
Lori
Author's Response: "Syrupy sweet" Should I have given a warning to diabetics or maybe a bucket to the romantically challenged. :) That would be a yellow bucket as that is the colour that seems to be close to my skin at the moment. Okay if you insist, a red bucket it is. LOL The jeep will return in the next chapter. I gave it an extensive part so you can enjoy the beautiful red, orange, yellow, green, blue, indigo and violet make over. Daphne's family and Molly purchased a microwavable curry and rice meal, but since they didn't have a microwave they placed the meal in the sun to thaw. For forty days and forty nights they had food poisoning so they will not be featuring in this fic. I will however, send them your regards. LOL The follow up fic to this, which is only one chapter, will let you know where Justin is at with his education and the crops on the roof. LOL It is always lovely to wake up to your humour as it makes for such a nice start to my day; thank you my friend. :D
Cheers :)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2014 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
Flossee my friend I hope you are in good spirits and getting better with each passing day :) I absolutely love this, Justin's continued innocence is so endearing here. I also love his willingness to make sure Brian is happy...even if that means he takes the lead more often ;)
Author's Response: Thank you Tamara I am well and in good spirits. Doesn't that just sound outrageous having your body go through so much, but I always remember there are people in worse situations than I am. Just as long as they don't accidently remove my funny bone in the next operation then all is good. :D I'm so happy you are enjoying this. It has been such fun writing an innocent Justin and an attentive Brian. "I absolutely love this" thank you for such lovely words they are truly appreciated my friend. :)
Cheers ;)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2014 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 1
LOL. I don't think Brian was expectingJustin to want to be the top from now on. How is he going to get around that? I love that Justin calls him My Brian!!!
Author's Response: Hey YumYumPM. "How is he going to get around that?" Good question. LOL I'm glad you like the words "My Brian". I am telling you this because you are an author; I first wrote ‘my Brian' because I didn't want to write ‘my love' over and over again. As an author you will know once you write something it can take over a fic and it did, even becoming the title. LOL Thanks for mentioning it as I was a little worried about letting the phrase get away on me. Thank you for the lovely review and the LOL.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2014 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hi Flossee, This was sweet, I really liked it, plus I laughed at Justin’s declaration at the end. But, it’s going to send Brian right back to his old ways, it will be interesting to see how Justin deals with that.
I like a toppy Justin, BTW ; ) It's good to see you back ; ) Hugs ~ Janet
Author's Response: Hey Janet. It's good to be back and this time I am going for slow and steady as I know I will eventually catch up with supporting other authors. I like a toppy Justin too and I wasn't sure if I should put a warning. I'm glad you had a little laugh at the end as they are very few and far between in this fic; however, being me I couldn't delete them altogether. :) Thank you for the review, the hugs and your kind words.
Cheers
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