Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2015 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 8
Hi, Vonnie! Been so busy I had to play a little catch up.;) I'm really enjoying this story! Unique plot here, and I love how Justin has changed Brian, although we always knew he wasn't as cold-hearted as he appeared. And I love how Justin was willing to give everything else up, just to be with the man he loves.
I'll be looking forward to reading the rest of this. Thanks for posting! *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Hi Kim,
Thanks so much for the review and for reading. I was worried about how this chapter would go. I had a few ideas but decided this one would be best to go with. Justin has changed Brian, helping him break down those walls around his heart that he put up himself due to how he was treated by his parents. It must have been awful for him. Justin stil has a few more things to fix (not necessarily for Brian though) before the story makes it's finale. I have enjoyed writing this a lot. I haven't enjoyed writing a story this much since Still Painting You.
Hugs - Yvonne xx
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2015 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 8
This was nice. Brian forgave the people who hurt him the most. Joan's reasoning for changing her heart were right on. Looking for your next chapter.
Author's Response: Hi hon,
I like the thought of Brian being able to forgive, even his parents who hurt him most. I wanted him to sort things out with his mom, that was important to me for some reason. Working on chapter nine as we speak so it should be up soon. Justi still has a few things left to do to make changes in other lives as well as Brian's.
Huge Hugs x
Reviewer: Tuneesha (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2015 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 3
Wow... that dialogue & the kiss though... septic peg was so hilarious & so brian...hahah...
Reviewer: Tuneesha (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2015 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 2
Omg!!! This such a great twist... little sunshine have visions & our hot sex maniac brian didn't fuck with justin...
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2014 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 7
Yvonne! A cliffie? You are so bad! I thought this was a finished story! Darn it! I don't read unfinished stories anymore but now I'm hooked on this, so you better update soon!!!
Well done my dear, you deserved hunderds of comments and all good! I wish you godspeed on writing your next chapter and I look forward to reading it.
All my very best,
Laura
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2014 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 6
Intense, my dear. So good, gotta read the next chapter because I don't know who is dreaming or not anymore! So intriguing.
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2014 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 5
Wow, I can' wait to see what happens after the guys 'get together.' Loving the build of the mystery.
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2014 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 4
Lots of turns and twists, and love the leperchauns! When I read about the boy with a bruise, I knew instantly that it was a young Brian. Ugh, his mother is smoking near Gus. Sooooo enjoying this!
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2014 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 3
No, no, no! Gus! Loving this. So, a banshee gave him the momentary third eye, cool idea my friend. This is so original, love that it's not the kind of story that is normally posted on this site. Going onto the next chapter.
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2014 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 2
Really and truly loving this! I'm worried about the nurse stealing Gus, noooooo! This is a real winner of story!
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2014 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 1
Yvonne, I don't think I ever read this before it's wonderful! I love Justin the psyche and how he saved Brian's life. I'm off to read the rest, great start!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2014 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 7
Okay, now I'm up-to-date and I can't wait for more. I'm unclear on what type of beings Justin and Daphne are, but I'm sure that is intentional, until you want to reveal it. Hurry back please, as inquiring minds want to know.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2014 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 6
"Was it to Melanie?" OMG, that is so funny.
Well that's a unique way to have same-sex marriage become legal; I love it. LOL
Cheers :)
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2014 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 5
Okay I didn't get my wish, a chain smoking, alcoholic, nutso person did have Gus. LOL Brian and Justin are going to change the world, that's going to be some intense love making.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2014 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 4
Yay, I remember being relieved when Justin admitted to his vision and they now know where to find Gus. I love the leprechaun, very funny.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2014 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 3
This chapter always brings back memories for me. If there was an awful singer in church we always called them a banshee, because of the banshee scream. I know, I'm a terrible person. LOL
I always love MM, she/he is priceless.
Should I be frightened for Gus? I just hope a chain smoking, alcoholic, nutso person doesn't have him. LOL Thanks for reloading this so quickly as I am having so much fun since I'm not afraid of the outcome now.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2014 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 2
Hey Yvonne
Don't apologize for having to reload your fic. I really feel for you, and from my point of view it has been fun reading this again. I remember this chapter well as I was thinking, tell him Justin, tell Brian about Joan. LOL You had me almost shouting at the screen, but this time I was more subdue, since I knew the outcome. LOL
Cheers :)
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2014 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 7
OK, I'm very confused with this twist. I need more info. So...is Justin a banshee....an angel?...something else...etc? Where were they transported to? Exactly how long was Daphne peeping tomming them and did she get off on it? And what about this other AU when Brian died?
Who was the mysterious woman figure? you said she was "familiar" Was it Kerry?
Inquiring minds wanna know :P
Author's Response: Justin is not a banshh or an angel in our world (your's and mine that is) what Justin is doesn't excist (as far as I know anyway.) Brian and Justin have been transported into Justin's world. Daphne is what Justin is. Since they were best friends on the show I wanted the same in this story but her memory wasn't wiped as Justin's was because she went a long with him to giude him I think. She will decide what will happen with who Justin really is if he decides to go and sty on earth. Brian dieing at the start was Justin's vision. Since Justin was a human then he had to react quickly and save Brian which he did. Everything else will be revealed in the next chapter.
Thank you for reading and your comments - Yvonne xx
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2014 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 7
You had me scared there. So Justin isn't really what he seems. Me thinks his choice should be easy. He wants Brian!
Author's Response: I'll let you in on a secret....he's staying with Brian. I don't write fics where that does happen anymore. Nope, Justin is another kind. Not angel nor banshee but above them all. All should be revealed in the next chaper.
Thanks for reading YumYum - Yvonne xx
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2014 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 6
My goodness. I did not see that coming. I mean I saw them falling in love, but I didn't see Justin falling. Now I must move to the next chapter to see what you planned for this.
Author's Response: I love to keep you all in suspense lol _
Thanks for commenting - Yvonne xx
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2014 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 5
I like the way you returned Gus. In the real world the police would have taken the child away and put him in protective services. Your way was better. Now we have to find out what happens when they join together.
Author's Response: I have a feeling Lindsay and Melanie would take Gus there themselves to get him checked over anyway, just to be safe.
Thanks for commenting - Yvonne xx
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2014 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 4
Leprecauns! That makes sense. It's a good thing Justin had a dream vision. So the greyhaired lady was Joanie. How did she find out about the baby?
Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2014 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
For me I'm actually glad you deleted this story Because I wouldn't have known about this story cause I really enjoyed it. Can't wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2014 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 7
So by staying with Brian, Justin will lose his sixth sense? Oh no! But please let them be together.
Author's Response: *Winks* Of Course - Yvonne xx
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2014 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 3
Well that answered that question. Love the visit with Mysterious Marilyn, but now they don't know much more than they did before. It does explain why Brian has no trouble believing Justin. Banshee's being Irish and all.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2014 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 2
Glad to see this again. I notice that Justin forgot to mention to Brian that someone might steal Gus. It's rather surprising that Brian has no trouble accepting that Justin has visions. I glad that he doesn't. Those pills weren't tylonel were they? I'll have to go to the next chapter, because I've forgotten.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2014 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh Yvonne, I'm so sorry you lost your reviews on this. I just started reading this without looking at the description, although I thought, oh, you are using the same banner twice. I didn't get very far and I knew I had already read it. Haha Silly me.
I'm looking forward to more of this fic and more "Falling For Justin" when you can.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Sorry you are reading this twice. I have the next chapter ready for posting and will have it up before the end of today.
More Falling For Justin very soon, thanks so much for your support - Yvonne xx
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2014 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh my...what happened to the other chapters? Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Hi Jazzpoet, I accidently deleted them. I have to upload them again. Chapter seven is being fixed by my beta and sgould be posted very soon depending on how long it takes her to get back to me :)
Thank you for the support - Yvonne
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2014 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love stories about the supernatural (paranormal). So Justin is psychic? Has he met Mysterious Marilyn?
Author's Response: This is a re-upload, I accidently deleted the first six chapters and have the post them again. Justin isn't a physic as such, I guess in a way he is.
Yvonne
Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2014 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 1
It's not a new story.
You've started it a long time ago and never finish it.
So what changed?
Author's Response: Hi Mariana, I had re-upload this because I accidently deleted it today. I have sent off chapter seven to be beta'ed and when it comes back I will be posting that. I'm sorry for the wait.
Yvonne
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