Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2019 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 36: Love you even it hurts

Ilove this story. will you ever finish it

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2017 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 36: Love you even it hurts

Will this story ever continue or end????????????????????

Reviewer: bored88 (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2016 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 36: Love you even it hurts

 

After all this time you're finally back.  Good.

 

So now there's yet another roadblack to Brian and Justin being together. So sad, but then it would be boring if it was too easy.

Author's Response: Yeah I'm back but idn when I'll have a break again it depends on my mood and timetable always up and down ^_^ but don't worry a good story will take years to finish right ;D I have the plot idea until the end already I just need the emotion build up to finish it ^_^ Britin will have a long hard way until the HE but yeah if things are so easy we don't appreciate it right :)

Reviewer: chouchou (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2016 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful stranger

I'm so glad you're back!!!!! I'm sure you'll finish this story, it can't be otherwise for all your faithful reders... Thanks to you for sharing this story with us.

Author's Response: I'm happy and thank you for your support :) yeah I'll finish this very long story but it'll take a long time until we all can see the E word ^_^ maybe 1 year? 2 years idn but pls hang in there with me. We'll go through this journey together unless something happens :)

Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2016 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 35: Heaven is far away

I hope you can update this story very soon

Author's Response:

Hi, it's been so long. Sory for the wait. But i'm coming back with more angts and drama. Sory if it makes you sad cause now I know that I'm into angst and will stuck on it. ^_^

Reviewer: jm c (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2016 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful stranger

i read this story i feel sad for justin and brian i can not wait to read more chapters of this story i hope you will update soon thank you

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading my story :) Sory for the very late reply cause I haven't been in MW for ages.

Reviewer: novis (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2015 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 35: Heaven is far away

So much action.  So much sadness.  

Author's Response:

:( ikr :(

Reviewer: bord88 (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2015 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 34: Love is a curse, black and darkness

This is some kind od seriously big reveal.  Brian has to be devasted that his father is the cause of his great love's misfortunes.

Author's Response:

Yeah. Poor Brian. :( He's in between everything.

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2015 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 33: All roads lead to this

Just wanted to let you know that I still follow your story!:) I just missed so many chapters - and they are so long, I can't find time to sit and read them all in one gulp! I hope to be free at least on Christmas and then I'll be able to comment :) Thank you for still writing! I glanced briefly through this chapter - the ending is incredible, so sweet and happy. I hope Brian and Justin will always be happy, sooner or later, they so deserve it.

Author's Response:

Hey Katrin! Glad to see you back! ^_^

Ah, thanks for still following my story :) Haha you missed a lot. It'll be a lot of read for you :D I know they're heaps long >"< Sorry, my muse just keeps flowing :p

I know that we're all busy at this time of the year right? I also have no time to sit down and read anything. Hey, baby, I saw your new story. Congratulation! I'll find time to read it, hopefully on Christmas time ^_^ I still haven't read your last story :(

Haha you found the ending of this chapter sweet and happy? It looks sad and bitter to me :( Maybe I'm a so dark dark gothic chick so I see anything is so dark LOL. Just kidding, I don't wear like gothic stuff but my soul is dark :p

Brian and Justin absolutely deserve happiness, dear ^_^

Thanks for reading, following and commenting my story :D

Reviewer: bord88 (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2015 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 33: All roads lead to this

I'm glad Chrisis finally dead.  I hope someone lets his sex slave go.

More Ben please.

That's quite a cliffhanger you're leaving us with.  How WILL Brian and Justin get out of this alive?

Author's Response:

Yeah. Chris is in hell. :) I don't know about his poor sex slave. I let you imagine then :D

Sure more Ben Ben in the next chapter ^_^

I'm writing the next chapter and will post asa I finish ;)

Reviewer: bord88 (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2015 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 32: Unconditionally love

I don't like Chris or Derek, but for very different reasons.

 

Glad Ben is getting some backstory.  He's so often brushed aside.

Author's Response:

Haha I guess you dislike Chris because he's a dick (obviously no one likes him in any story) and Derek because he stole a part of Justin's heart. I bet Brian in here will high five with you LOL :D

Ben had an intense past and I have a big plan for him ^_^

Reviewer: Aribritinxoxo (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2015 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful stranger

I think Brian is too weak in here, he gave up and cried easily. It's just my opinion, but when justin declared that brian is his love I'm not entirely sure. compare to the way you describe how justin act towards derek and brian, its like derek is something and brian is nothing. Justin leaving brian so easy but leaving derek was never an option, which is really made me upset. 

I just Have one question for you, will brian and justin end up tgt and happily ever after?? Because if you are not planning on doing that, I dont exactly know how am I suppose to Beg you for their happiness in the end. So please update as soon as possible :)

I LOVE ALL YOUR FIC!! ALL OF THEM.  

 

Author's Response:

Ah, sorry to make you upset, babe :( this chapter is really deep and intense. OK, I'll explain it to you if you're confusing. :)

First of all, Brian is always tough from the outside and soft from inside, opposite with Derek soft from outside but tough from inside. It's just their characters. We had seen Brian cried when Justin got bashed, when he got upset in the show although he tried to act tough. Brian in this story had passed tragedy double double double than Brian in the show. You can see his tough life journey. He's just a human. If he didn't cry when he thought he had 'killed' Derek, he's worst than an animal. My Brian is not like that. He values his friends and family. He gave up Justin not because he's weak. It took him all his strenght to let Justin go because he thought it was the best for Justin. And he was also under the guilt about Derek's death. He had learnt at last love was to set the love one free, not to chain him. If he knows Justin is hurt when Justin stays with him, he will let Justin go. 

 

This is like Brian in the show. :)

Justin is the complicated one. He loves both Brian and Derek. Look at his life, Derek had been there for him for eight years. I just ask you, if you're with someone for eight years, fucking and taking care of each other, will you not love that person? Don't lie LOL. We're human, not machines. Therefore Justin loves both of them but he had chosen Brian because the first love was so strong. He chose to go away to PROTECT Brian, he still LOVE him. He NEVER stop loving him. He sacrificed his happiness for his love's safety. He also felt guilty about Derek's death.

Brian and Justin will always be together until they die. I assure you. But there will be those chapters like this that make you doubt my intention. It's my purpose, dear ^_^ sorry :p

Ah, I'm evil and naughty and I know it :D I'll try to update soon. The next chapter will be extreme. Can't wait to write it out >''< Need free time though :D and some mood and music ^_^ oh, and sweet drink to write about tragedy. Sweetness for the bittersweet, right? ;)

I'M SO SO GLAD THAT YOU LOVE ALL MY FICS! THANK YOU THANK YOU! (Bow Japanese style lol) I promise will work hard for your love. I'll always write Brian-Justin love each other into eternity even my fics will be as dark as the black hole. (I'm growing horns and fangs now haha) 

Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: September 30, 2015 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 31: Debt, revenge, obsession and possession

If much angst for Justin wasn't enough, Chris Hobbs appears into scene. I say it again I don't like Derek

Nice chapter, but please bring some peaceful moments for Justin and Brian, they deserve them

Author's Response:

Hi rainbow! Thanks for reading and commenting *bow* ^_^

All of my little Sunshine Justin's debt in the past has to be solved before he has a future with his beloved man. :) Chris asshole Hobbs therefore has to appear ^_^

I LOVE that you don't like my creative character Derek hehe It means my words affect you. :) Like people hate Loki in Thor because Tom Hiddleston is the best actor. I actually love Loki more than Thor and love Tom Hiddleston, too. I like bad guys. God can't help me. ^_^. Me myself like Derek because he's handsome *blush* (I know I'm hopeless lol), nice to Justin and a devoted man for his love but I dislike him because he's so weak against Sean...he should have more balls...

I'm glad you feel ok toward this chapter although it's dark. Your wish will be gained next chapter but pls still put in mind that there are more storm before the sky is blue again :)

Reviewer: Aribritinxoxo (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2015 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 31: Debt, revenge, obsession and possession

Holy Shit! Do you really have to put that thing (snake) on this one?? let alone touching sunshine like thattt??? Ew, disgusting! Brian's touch would be more healthy though lol sorry, personally I can't stand a snake. hehe by the way I'm looking forward to the next chapter. don't take too long ^o^ 

Author's Response:

Ah, thanks for your review and extreme emotion on snake lol. I really hate hate snake, too. I'm scare and hate that animal the most, more than anything so I can link myself with Justin. I'm tough and strong and not scare of any bugs, insects etc. but snake, pleaseeeee LOL

Anyway, I'm not a sadist in here but Chris asshole Hobbs is ^_^. Uhm, I know I'm the author, right? but I just want to describe exactly how disgusting and sick Chris is. That man's character and personality etc. :)

Thanks for your review again and your reaction LOl I love it and you really read fast, I can't write that fast. Actually, I just spent around three days to write one long chapter but a month to hang out with friends and family, playing around and lazy to write. Uhm, it's an artist mood, I assume. Anyway, I'll try to sit down and concentrate and write as fast as I can because of your love. ^_^

Reviewer: novis (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2015 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 30: Versions of you

Wow! just wow.

Author's Response:

Hi Novis. Thanks for your emotion. Did I make you speechless? Lol ^_^ 

Reviewer: bord88 (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2015 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 29: Angel with a shotgun

 Now that Brian knows about Justin, what will happen now?

I like Mikey,  but he really needs to get a hobby aside from lusting after Brian.

Author's Response:

Mikey is cute and good in his own way. He's busy with his job but he had lust after Bri since he was a baby. That 's a serious habit it is difficult to forget. ^_^

Oh, you have to keep reading to find out if Brian will report Justin or hates him. Thanks for reading the so long chapter :D

Reviewer: bord88 (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2015 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 28: Les miserables

Good to hear from Mikey again.

It's painful to hear the details of what Justin is going through.

Author's Response:

I'm glad that you're happy with Michael thing. Justin is a strong character and I love him so much :(

Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2015 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 27: Black widow

A long chapter indeed but worth reading.

I don't like the hard cold shield that Justin has put on himself, it's just self preservation, I know. Just hope Brian will melt it as soon as possible. 

Just a suggestion, use more connectors to link the sentences. It's better for the sake of reading so as not to do it so jerky.

Waiting impatiently for the next chapter

Author's Response:

Hi rainbow. Thanks for your comment and suggestion! I had been so focus in linking another thing that I had abandoned writing skills. I'll pay attention in the next chapters. I'm still learning how to write in English :) 

I'm glad that you like the chapter. I like Justin in any self anyway ^_^ I'm crazy in love with him so I might fight with Brian over him. Oh, and fight Derek, too. LOL. Anyway, the next chapter will be on next week (kend) and will be long,too. Thanks for reading and commenting. :D

Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2015 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 26: First love

Nice, but as usually something has to come between Brian and Justin's bliss moments. 

I don't like Derek, he's too young. And I would depict Brian a bit more mature, he's childish sometimes. Anyway, hope the next chapter bring some peace and not so ups and downs, and details. 

Author's Response:

It's life, up and down, especially in drama stories/series/movies. You really need to prepare because this story is very angst. :(

The characters are very young and 25, 26, 27 are just babies. My friends are young aldult like that and they act childish sometimes. It's the age between 'not want to be old but not a teenager either' ^_^ but the characters will grow up from time to time later. 

Reviewer: bord88 (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2015 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 26: First love

Good to hear from Michael again.  

Author's Response:

Yeah but he got shot. Poor guy :(

Reviewer: novis (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2015 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 25: The game we play

B/J is hot.  But Derek needs to go away.

Author's Response:

B/J is hot. But D/J is, too ^_^ and B/J/D is supper hot hehe LOL

Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2015 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful stranger

Craig marries Debbie? Brian marries Debbie, and gets pregnant. I'm in a daze.

Is there a story about Debbie marrying Ted or Emmet that is waiting to be written by someone too? Or Stockwell.

Author's Response:

Ewww Brian marries Debbie? I don't want to imagine it. Does it even have a happy ending? Ewww. Anyway, in order to make Justin and Michael becoming brothers, I have to let Craig marries Deb. He didn't love her. He just married her for money and position in the society. But hey, Debbie in here doesn't look like her image in the show. She's heaps younger. All the parents are (Craig, Jack, Joan, Deb, Jennifer) because their children are young. You can Google the actress played Debbie for her young image. She's sexy. :D

Reviewer: bord88 (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2015 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 24: Too close, too far

Violent and gripping.   But when will we hear more about Officer Novotny?

Author's Response:

Hi, things are happening in Japan so when they are back to America, we'll see Mister Novotny again ^_^. For a tiny spoiler, in three more chapters, he'll appear again :D

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2015 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 21: A man's heart

Justin has a very interesting life now, despite the difficulties he’s been through!

Though it’s not really that good. Poor Justin. So much time has passed :( At least I’m happy Brian doesn’t forget him. He probably never will.

Author's Response:

I love to write Justin with Derek as much as Justin with Brian. But Derek is not Justin's soul mate. He is Justin's best friend but Justin's man is Brian. Sean is just a dick with manipulation skill and know how to take advantage of miserable abandoned kids.

Justin and Brian won't forget each other. Same for Justin and Derek won't forget their times together. :)

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2015 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 19: The late remorse

I loved reading from Brian’s POV. Things got a little clearer, though he still pisses me off – very much! At least he still cares about our blond.

I loved how Brian found the necklace, it was a beautiful and touching moment.

The whole chapter was so emotional, I loved it! It’s heartbreaking.

 

Author's Response:

Brian broke up with Justin because of misunderstanding and idiot mood change. He still loved Justin to dead. Ego, jealousy and hatred had blinded him for a while but when he took that nameless trick to their hotel room, he reazlied his true feeling. But it was too late. And he felt guilty the whole time.

I loved to write the raw emotion/feeling stuff and I loved that you love it! lol. Love you! xoxo

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2015 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 17: Hello, summer!

Wow, this was truly a story itself, not just a chapter!:) It’s sooo long!

I loved the beginning, you know how to pick beautiful phrases and comparisons :) L.O.V.E was a great idea.

I loved how protective Brian was, he even defended Justin against Daphne :) Even though it wasn’t necessary.

I think you showed the summer atmosphere very well, I could totally feel it. It was palpable.

The beautiful picture made me want to go right there, right now! What a place…

Other photos are brilliant as well, where do you find them?:)

I loved this summer chapter, it was great!

 

Author's Response:

Ah, thanks for your comment, again :D I love to write this chapter a lot. I had a very nice day out with my hubby and L.O.V.E idea came up :p

I love to have Brian secretly protected Justin as Justin did the same with Kip in the show. ;)

I got the photos from the internet. Some photos I made myself, like the dresses and Sean's naked photo ^_^

I'm very glad to bring the great summer time to you and other readers :)

Reviewer: Len (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2015 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 21: A man's heart

Your story is interesting but to be honest I have to agree with reviewer Gabby who said there are a lot of mistakes (in both grammar and spelling). When I start a chapter I quickly find myself focusing on all the errors instead of the plot which I’m sure you don’t want your readers to do. Also your characters often sound much younger than they’re supposed to be. For example, in chapter 8, having Michael say “If you go out, who will play with me?” makes him sound like he’s six rather than sixteen (if you meant playing as in computer games then the words ‘computer games’ should have been added to the sentence). Also having the characters use words such as ‘yummy.’   

 

I’m guessing that these things are because English is not your first language, however all these things could have been corrected by a good beta-reader. Since it sounds like you do have a beta, while I understand that it’s fun to post the chapters right away, may I suggest waiting until they’re corrected before you post, even if that means waiting longer. That way your spelling and grammar will add to the story, not take away from it. Like Gabby, I hope I haven’t heard your feelings. I wouldn’t have written at all if I didn’t think your story has potential.

 

Author's Response:

Hi Len. Thank you very much for your opinion. I really appreaciate it.

I'm having coffee with my friends at lunch time (it's lunch in Sydney) and a friend told me I had your review on her phone and I read it. I understand what you said very well. I also have my own thinking and asked my friends' thinking and I replie you before I go to work ^_^

Thanks to say that my story is interesting. You're very kind. Other readers see it like that, too and some sent me emails, chat and call to talk sometimes that's why I have encourage to write so fast like this. There are two types of readers: One really care about grammar and spelling etc. and the other just care about the plot, story and characters.

Uhm, in my own opinion, I'm also a reader and I usually don't care about perfect English writing stuff and care about the deep and plot of a story. I had read some stories with very bad English writing but the plot is so interesting it pulls me in and ignored the one very good English writing but not interesting (to me). I read good stories with good English, too. 

So, you see, readers' thinking is very different. Like art, music and movie, some people like this kind of stuff and other like another stuff. Each human is individual. We can't argue with people when it comes to creation and imagination stuff. It's very abstract. That's why I understand readers didn't post reviews sometimes beacause they were scared of discussing. I did it, too when I read other's stories. But I welcome anyone's opinion so I can think and look how people think.It's nothing about brave or not in posting your review. It's a freedom world and you can do anything you want. I won't get hurt because I can think deep about what readers think. I always reply readers' reviews, I never ignor you guys :) We're all grown up people, right? ^_^

I had put the notes in the beginning of every chapters that they're raw and if readers don't want to read raw version, pls wait for the beta version. But I can see from the number of reading that readers just end up reading them anyway, because of curious? ^_^

About the words I use, I know I'm not native English speaking but I had watched a lot of American and British movies ( the types I like) as well as listening to songs, watching youtube videos of people joking and even gay videos of young teenage boys talking and acting to learn how they talk/ interact with each other. It's entertaning for me and I learn something, too since I'm writing about boys/men love. I think what Michael said is not wrong because he didn't only ask Justin to play computer games with him (and it's play station, not computer. It's PS3). Two teenagers can just sit down, eat and drink something and talk for hours or they can play at the pool, play anything they want. There are so many things so Michael just said 'play' in general for shortcut. Adding 'computer games' sounds more six years old for me and sounds like the 90's (no offend, just my thinking because the story happened in 2015 and will go to the future). And the word 'yummy' is nothing wrong. I heard Channing Tatum used it all the times in some movies he was in. 'Delicious' or 'yummy' have the same meaning and people can use it formal or unformal.

So you see, thinking and opinion are really different in each person. That sentence Michael said was in the chapter that had been beta already. And the beta is British citizen so I pretty sure she had looked at it and kept it because she didn't mind that.

Thanks very much for your opinion. I really love your view. There are so many different views that make this world interesting. At the end, this was a fan fiction and the website where people can find fun after a long day tired of working etc. I don't get any money from writing this and my real name won't be famous throughout the world so I just love to write for myself and make other people having entertainment. Some readers really can't wait long for a story so I'll put the notes in every chapter. It's a freedom world and they can choose in between keep reading raw version or wait for the beta version.

I hope I can make you feel better about why I keep posting story and how I use my words. Thanks a lot for your review and pls remember I always appreciate your thinking. I have nothing against you or other readers who post their opinions. I love to read them and discuss about it. I'm very glad that you read my story. Please wait for the beta version. My lovely beta is busy with uni now so it'll take a long time for fixing the story. I won't tell you to stop reading the raw persion if you're curious about the story line. You have many choices and do what you want :)

Regrads, Meo xoxo

Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2015 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 20: Crimson path

Thank you very much for your explanation.

I suppossed then that Brian and Justin's current state of affairs is just a phase and they eventually find a way out.

Now, I am much positive about this story after you've said that Justin has to meet other men in order to know who's best for him, I only hope that Brian be. But, please, don't take too long.

I really appreciate your imagination to present the different events. Good point!

Author's Response:

I'm glad I can explain it to you ^_^ Oh, did the respond come up 3 times? I think it's the system error lol

Yeah Justin'll have experience with other men. I present them because of some reasons. I actually write things for reasons if you can see all the hints and preparation from the previous chapter, everything has reasons. Their appearances influent our boys' life but you have to find our  so it's more interesting than I tell you the whole story here. I know posting every chapter will let the readers confuse about the plot. You have to read until the end so you can say: "oh, it is that " :D

Brian and Justin will be always together. They're destined to be together. Being apart will make them miss and love each other more. The more you're hungry, the more you eat, right? ^_^

Agony still comes to make them strongers and this story is about men love so it'll be tough and full of action. Definitely not 'The note book' lol

I can't reveal the story here so there is no fun. I hope you'll be okay with it although you might feel scared, sad or nervous when you read the story. I don't want to write a fast food story so the events are long or short depend on themselves :)  I need to describe the characters' emotion. When I watch a movie or read a story I love to focus on the plot and expecially the characters' mind/character  so I don't want to just write an entertaining story.

Thanks for your reading and review. I hope the respond won't come up 3 times again ^__^

Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2015 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 18: Tears of an angel

I used to enjoy reading this story so much. With this unexpected twist I'm not so sure. I hope it would be just a Justin's nightmare. Anyway, I'll keep on reading it because there's have to be beautiful things for Justin and Brian, if possible, together in the end.

Author's Response:

Hi ^_^ I'm glad that you enjoy the happy part of this story. :) But now life turns to tough shit. It has to be like that so our boys can be stronger, more mature and love each other more ^_^. The end is what you wish ;) But I'll not reveal all. You have to keep reading to find out the truth. I'll post the next chapter tonight. Thanks for reading and comment :D

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2015 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 17: Hello, summer!

Good times for all!

 

So Brian just says ger naked and everybody does it?

 

Hilarious that Michael thinks his likeing Brian is a secret.

 

Too bad about the boat.

Author's Response:

Haha thanks for your fun comment ^_^ 

About the gang getting naked, I let you guys fantasy about it. Think it like this: the boys and girls were high (with all the alcohol and drugs they had) so when Brian dared them, they could have gotten naked themselve, or the other took off each other clothes. They could have all chased each other screaming and pulling each other clothes lol.

We all know Michael is deadly in love with Brian haha but the group in this story thought he had got over it. Michael was a 16 high school boy with no other big secret than he liked Brian so much so to him, it's a secret LOl. When I wrote this part I chuckled because of his idiot naive confession. Anyway, I need it to prepare for the future :p 

The boat is gone. I assure you that hehe :D

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 10, 2015 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 16: How I fell in love with you

Justin and Daphne havinf sex. Gotta say what I said when it happened in the show, Ewwwwwwwwwwwww.

Author's Response:

Haha I want they showed more in the show but they didn't so I just had to fantasy it in my fic ^_^ I love to see Justin with a girl, at least once :p Daphe and Justin were kinda cute when they did that in Qaf. ;)

Reviewer: Katja (Anonymous) · Date: May 06, 2015 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 15: It's ridiculous romantic

Every chapter is like a story itself! So long and so interesting. I loved the Prom dresses, very beautiful, I'd love to have some myself!))

Poor sweet Justin, he always has to go through so much... but Brian is with him at least - for now. I hope they stay together!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm happy you like the chapters and the dresses ^_^ I love to have my prom back so I can wear dress again but now I can wear dress to adult parties :D

Justin's fate is really... uhm, yeah lucky Brian is with him- now. Thanks for reading this story :D

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2015 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 13: It's the best weekend ever

It is good to see the boys altogether like that

Author's Response:

Thanks ^_^ they really had good times.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 09, 2015 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 12: Inspire me

Very sweet.  And very cute.

Author's Response:

Thanks ^_^ I love cute Brian and Justin :D

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2015 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 11: I only see you

I love it.  

Author's Response:

Yeehaa Thank you :D

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2015 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 10: Britin

Beautiful chapter, I enjoy reading about our boys' ordinary life that is full of adventures and events. Brian is falling more and more for Justin! The last bit was sad but also funny. Truck rental :) Hah! Thanks for another long chapter!

Author's Response:

I'm glad that you enjoyed the story and this chapter :D Brian is a prisoner of his own heart lol. Truck rental. I think Brian got that number when he wanted to move his whole band to tours with him or move out of Jack's house later haha.

Thanks for reading my long chapter :)

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2015 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 8: You make me so agitated

Aw, I love how playful and 'together' Brian and Justin were in this chapter! So many thigns happened, as always. They managed to fight and to make up - I love moments like that! I still like Michael - he's naive, it's a good thing he has Justin now. That old man creeped me out. Brr. Who knows what could happen.

Great ending! So sweet and peaceful.

Author's Response:

Woa, I'm glad that you're happy with the chapter. Britin fought then made up as every couple. They're cute even they fought in the show. I love to watch them and write them down is really fun haha. Michael is a nice boy if you get to know him, play with him. He has bad side, though. Everybody has both side: good and bad ^_^

I'm glad that you love the ending ^_^  Thanks for your reviews sweetie.

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2015 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 6: Crash that wall

Wow, how much updates I missed! Now I have to catch up :) You do write quickly, how do you manage that??

I love the way Brian and Justin's relationship develops. They're beautiful together. I start to dislike Michael, though - yes, Justin was rude to him, maybe he deserves it a little, but Michael starts becoming worse and worse.

I hate Craig and I hate Jack! They should have married each other and go to some deserted island, so to never bother other people ever again.

 

Author's Response:

Hi Katrin! Love to hear from you again :) I didn't have beta last month and I have so much inspiration when I write about Britin so I wrote these chapters and just post  them without waiting for the beta so you guys didn't need to wait. But I post the chapters again when the beta finished them ^_^ So, it's good.

I love to write Brian and Justin so much Arghhhh >"< They're cute together haha. Michael is just a whiny spoiling one child brat!

Oh, you gave me this wild idea about letting Craig and Jack married so Brian and Justin will be stepbrothers haha :p

 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2015 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 9: With you through hardship

Thanks for puttinh this up so soon.

Author's Response:

You're welcome :) I just have lots of inspiration these days :D

Reviewer: beddy (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2015 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 8: You make me so agitated

Can hardly wait read more. The grammer is a little strange, but nothing to hard to understand.  Pleae continue.

Author's Response:

Thank you beddy! :)

I'm sorry I try to write. I'm not English native and my grammar has mistakes. I'm so glad that you can understand what I wrote. :D

I'm finding a beta and defenitely will post the chapters again after it fixed. I'm posting Raw version chapter first so you guys don't need to wait for too long. It's kind of the spoiler lol

I just finished the next chapter and hope I can post the spoiler raw version tonight. Thanks for reading :D

 

 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 11, 2015 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 8: You make me so agitated

Happy to get a new chapter.

Author's Response:

Yay thank you :D

Reviewer: sasha (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2015 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 7: I know you

craig is an asshole, i hate him, he deserves no chances! loved how brian kept repeating justin is his boyfriend, he's so sproud of  him. justin really needs him.

Author's Response:

Craig is a pathetic human being. Woa, I really love that about Brian, too. High five. haha. Brian is really proud of his blond angel. Brian and Justin need each other in their life ^_^

Reviewer: steff (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2015 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful stranger

Oh, so sad! Poor Justin! I Read the three last chapters in a row. Cant wait for more ... and a very, very, very happy ending ;-) Hope things get better soon for the boy. Such a horrible life! (See, your writing really got me).  Make Justins life better soon, please, will you?  Some friends and a disappearing father would be nice ... My heart hurts for him. Brian's there for now, but will he stay? I remember his father treatend to send him away ... So I have to wait and see what you are coming up with. With or without Brian, I would really like to see this nightmarish life of his to change.

Thanks for sharing!!! Can't imagine how hard it has to be to write something in English when you are not a native speeker. I'm not, too, and even writing a review isn't easy for me. It takes for ever ;-) But if you can write a hole story, I at least can try and thank you. So here it goes: Thank you!!! :-)

 

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review, Steff :) Everyone love happy ending these days haha. Actually, I love happy ending, too :p I'm so glad that you still read my story althought English is hard to read for you and my English is bad. But I really love writing and Brian and Justin so I'll write this story until the end. ;) The ending is still very far and the boy's life and love still have a very very long road to go. I can't reveal now but pls keep reading. I love how a story can make readers happy and sad. It's a good feeling combine. ^_^

I'm writing chapter 7 and hope I can post it tomorrow before the weekend :). Thanks again for reading my story and reviewing :D

Reviewer: Gabby (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2015 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful stranger

Hi! I find this story very interesting and I hope everyone who has wronged Justin will pay for their behaviour in the end. 

I hope I don't hurt your feelings by suggesting a beta. There are so many grammatical mistakes (I'd pay attention to tenses) that it takes away from enjoying the story. Please don't be discouraged, though! I want to know how this ends! :)

Author's Response:

Hi Gabby. Thanks for your review. :) Thanks so much to suggest a beta. I'm not hurt because I really know my English is not good :( It's really hard to find betas these days because everyone is so busy with their own things to sit down and fix someone's writing of 12000 words. :) So I have to be by myself at the moment and If I can find any betas in the future I'll post the fixed chapters again for sure.

Thanks for your courage. I'll keep writing. I'm writing the next chapter and will post it as soon as it finished. Well, the beta problem is a big issue but I'll try my best to improve. :D

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2015 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 5: What you do to me

Poor Justin.  I would like to see him have some happiness.  I don't like Chris and I fear where you are heading with this.

Author's Response:

:( I feel sorry for little Justin too. Sigh I really love angst so my stories will be sad and stuff but keep reading. As long as the chapters give you different emotions, it's good :) Yeah I make Chris a bad guy in here and the story will be dark later exactly what I had warned in the beginning. Anyway, it's good to see you again after such a long time :)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2014 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 4: Not your Cinderfella

very interesting story! thank you for writing it, i want to see more, it is so unusual, i really want to know what will happen next. want to see more of justin and brian!

Author's Response:

I'm very happy that you like it ^_^ I'm really happy to write this story too :) you will see more of Brian and Justin in the next chapter but we have to wait for a while until my beta finish fixing it :D

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 15, 2014 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 4: Not your Cinderfella

thanks for a new chapter

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it :) The next chapter will take a while to post but I'll post it as soon as possible . Thanks for reading and reviewing :D

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2014 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 4: Not your Cinderfella

Hi, Meoly - I skimmed over your chapter for content.  I'm not sure if you are planning on this, but in light of how dark and violent your story is, I just wanted to caution you that we do have rules regarding story submissions, and one of them is a prohibition against sex between older adults and underage minors, including incest. I am not sure if you are intending to have Craig assault his son in this manner, but just in case I wanted to make sure you are aware that it would not be considered acceptable under our submission rules.  Just wanted to point that out.  Thanks.  ~Kim, Admin

Author's Response:

Hi Kim. Thanks for your concern :) I read about the rules and knew about it. In my categories has no incest so it'll be none. I don't want to think about Craig and Justin... uhm. I mean I had read stories about them.. but It won't be in my stories even the stories are very dark and violence etc. Thanks for your remind anyway and Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and all the MW admins :D

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2014 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 3: Cinderfella, the stepbrother and the hero

Hi!:) I was so happy to see this new chapter – the fact that updates are more rare now only excites me more, lets all the anticipation build :) I loved this, of course – and it was so pleasantly long! Brian is so protective already, so caring – I loved how he grabbed Justin and practically dragged him to canteen.

Hmm, it’s good that Debbie told Michael to spend money on both him and Justin, but I think it’s humiliating, especially for someone as independent as Justin. 

Oh, I love Brian and Justin’s interactions so much!:) It’s so cute, how Brian flirts with him in his own unique style, and how Justin isn’t sure what to think of him. Justin is distrustful and his hackles are rising almost automatically every time he communicates with someone, but his inner vulnerability is obvious. I liked how upset he got when Brian left with Michael. Brian felt humiliated – I can understand that too, but he needs more patience when dealing with someone like Justin.

I loved how Brian rushed to help Justin, and how they both barely, but ran away. Brian was so caring and gentle – I’m glad Justin has him to protect him.

Thank you! I’m looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi :D You really got everything I wrote and described exactly every emotions, every words ^_^ I'm so glad and we seem really thinking so much alike :p

I'm so sorry to make you guys who like this story wait because I have to wait for beta but It's better with proper English to read more pleasant, right? :D So I'll post really long chapter (around 10000 words everytime) now for sorry to make you wait :D

Debbie is very generous and tries to treat both sons equally. But she was unintend to make Justin feel humiliated. She's so far away and was lack of sensitive sense in that.

Brian and Justin will have more intense, cute and hectic interactions throughout the story ^_^ Brian is just 17 years old now so he hasn't got any experience to deal with someone as compliacted as Justin at the moment.

Thanks for your thoughful review! Chapter 4 will be longer and has many events. Pls wait and be patient :D It'll be worthy! I promise ;)

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2014 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 3: Cinderfella, the stepbrother and the hero

What a great idea with the music!  

Unfortunately I had to listen to it sepearately as I am always reading on my cell.

This chapter was pretty angsty and fast speed.  Keep on the good stuff! 

Author's Response:

Thanks! :) I love to listen to music while doing everything. I'm a music addict and QAF addict :D I wrote while listening to those songs too so I love to share my pleasurable experience with you guys!

Oh it's a really pity that you couldn't listen while reading those scenes. It really enjoyed ^_^ When you have time, listen again with those scenes in your laptop or pc. It'll make you feel rapid and intense with the action and epic music combine, like you're watching a thrilling, action movie ;) I also  read on my cell too, and my laptop. It depends.

Next chapter will have cute scenes with our boy and girl teenagers (can you guess who? ;D), sad and romantic stuff etc. I'll post it as soon as my beta finished fixing ^_^

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2014 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 2: St. James Academy

I *loved* Brian’s reaction at the table – he already feels protective of Justin, despite everything. And I changed my mind – I really hate Craig now. He’s an asshole, no sorrow can take the blame for his moronic actions.

Justin, I think, is way too interested in Brian, though he tries to act like he doesn’t like him. Maybe that’s also the reason he’s treating Mikey like that? He feels a little jealous. I love him here, no matter how bratty and stubborn he is – I’m sorry he had such a shitty childhood. And he’s still kind and vulnerable under the surface.

I loved this chapter, I’m really interested in your idea and this concept. Liked Daphne, she’s adorable :) Can’t wait for the next installment! And you said it will be dark? Wow, now I really can’t wait!  

Author's Response:

Haha Brian is a cool character in here. I love to write and describe him and Justin. They're our main characters ^_^

I hate Craig always and forever haha. He is an asshole! He is basicly a bastard. =.=

Justin is interested in Brian and he hides his emotion. You're right about that dear :) And he hates Mikey because he's jealous about what Mikey has and be Brian's best friend... He's basically a kind heart person and vulnerable. You'll be very surprise about him more in the future. ;)

I'm very glad that you love this chapter and the idea. Daphne is cool. Chapter 3 is already sent to my mom and she announced: "I'm too busy this week! Will beta in the weekend!" So I have to wait and will post the next chapter next week, don't know what day yet but it's good that she'll take time to fix it well. :)

The story will be bright and dark and bright and dark.... =.= next chapter is both bright and dark so...just wait for next week then :p you'll be enthral hehe

Reviewer: cuty (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2014 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful stranger

cute story , love whore justin

Author's Response:

Thanks. Rebel, bad, slutty, jealous, dark and angelic Justin (of course :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2014 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 2: St. James Academy

At least Mikey is nice to Justin.  So Daphne is there, and we'll get to meet Emmett, Ted, Mel and Lindsey.  Sounds like fun.  I'm wondering who was responsible for Jennifer's death.  And why she had to die.  I hope that Deb learns she married a dickwad and gives him the boot. 

Author's Response:

Yeah all the teenagers will be there (later you will meet more :) It will be fun and sad and dark and bright.... like a roller coaster hehe. :D Jennifer's dead will be revealed later but long long later :) About Deb and Jennifer stuff you have to wait to read all the chapters but it will be exciting for that. I'll post chapter 3 next week because beta is so busy this week :(

Reviewer: sabyya (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2014 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful stranger

Howcome Michael is nice in general and Justin is so awfully rude towards him hmm .. anyways that scene with Craig staring at Justin's nakedness was really uncalled for ... It made me uncomfortable and Craig a paedophile ..

 waiting for more 

Author's Response:

Hi sabyya, thanks for your review and thought :)

Haha I really don't hate Michael and kind of find he's cute in the show so I love to write a nice Michael. Is it weird? :D Justin is rude to anyone because of his life and situation (was abused by his dad and was not loved...) He is like a porcupinish. He will be very rebelled and hatefull but it can change :) Craig is not gay or a rapist, or a child molester so he didn't or won't do anything like that to Justin. Anyway, I need that scene to describe Craig's thought of how different his son had changed and grown up  to prepare for the most important event later :)

I sent chapter 3 to beta and will post it next week. It'll be long and has many events in there. I don't know how you will take it but I wrote as I felt and wanted to describe :D