Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For The Love You Take
Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2015 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

nice story! :) there are perfect together :) thanks

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2015 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

I wandered over from the underwear story.

This is nice, really nice.

A happy Brian warms my cockles.

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2015 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 1

nice story

thank you for sharing

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2015 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

I loved Brian's timing. He always has a plan. It might have taken them a while - well a BIG while - but they got there in the end. Loved the end - nicely done. Looking forward to more of your work

Reviewer: Ran (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2015 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

By the way it dose not take 6 hour from Ny to P just saying 



Author's Response:

Hmmm, based on Google Maps, from Manhattan to Pittsburgh it is 6 houts and 13 minutes.

Having personally driven the route from NE NJ to Harrisburgh - I know that's 4 hours.

By plane, definitely not 6 hours, but car? ...

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2015 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nice to see new stories from someone who's been a member for a while. Fun little story - I like Brian's very in character explanation as to why now is the time for them to get married after all. I also like the way, even tho Brian and Justin have been apart forever, they just seem able to slide back into their love. That's perfect for these two. Thanks for writing. TAG

P.S. Check out the way your story posted. Looks like there was a glitch - the text is a bit messed up and the main body of the text shows up twice (interrupting the ending). Makes it hard to read. Fix that and I'm sure you'll have more happy readers! ;)



Author's Response:

thanks for letting me know on the formatting thing - there does seem to be some issue with Chrome and Word - I fixed it.

I'm glad you enjoyed it the fic - I used to have some of my stuff here, but after two crashes I gave up.

I'm in the process of moving my stuff off of LJ to here and AOO.

So, you'll be seeing quite a backlog.

I'm trying to post every few days or so.

Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2015 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

"Sure, they weren’t one hundred percent anonymous. '

Sorry to ask, what do you mean by it?

 

PS. The story is repeated twice



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know - the formatting has been fixed.

Anonymous was a typo - it should have been Monogamous - this has been corrected.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2015 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

I know this is a B/j fic but,  this Pennsylvania gay marriage thing is WAY, WAY more relevent for Ben and Michaem and Mel and Linds.  Yet these couples are barely mentioned.

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