Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) ·  Date: March 31, 2016 04:40 AM ·  On: Chapter 5
 Wow!  Powerful chapter. 
  Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time out to read this thing. Thanks so much! I owe it all to the hours upon hours I spent watching Grey's Anatomy. lol.  
Olivia.   
 
Reviewer: Tasha   (Anonymous) ·  Date: March 30, 2016 10:27 PM ·  On: Chapter 5
 It been awhile since I've read this Wheres Justin  
  Author's Response: I know...I'm so sorry about the long wait. Justin will be in the story soon. All will be revealed next chapter...well a little will be revealed. 
Thanks so much for continuing to stick it out with this story and for reviewing!!!! 
Olivia.   
 
Reviewer: Tagsit  (Anonymous) ·  Date: March 30, 2016 09:49 PM ·  On: Chapter 5
 So glad to see more of this story. Thanks. TAG 
  Author's Response: Thanks a lot for taking the time to read this! I'm extremely happy as well that I was able to finish this chapter! Hopefully there will be more.  
Olivia.  
 
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) ·  Date: March 30, 2016 03:34 PM ·  On: Chapter 5
 I gotta side with Melanie on this.  They waited too long as it was to tell him the truth.  Now he's really in pain and there is nothing Brian can do.  
  Author's Response: I know right! It's been too long of a wait, but I can definitely see why Linds would want to hold offf. Hmmm, hopefully Brian will probably will be able to mediate the situation. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.  
Olivia.   
 
Reviewer: charming1  (Anonymous) ·  Date: March 30, 2016 03:04 PM ·  On: Chapter 5
 :) 
  Author's Response: Thanks so much for your help!  
  
Olivia  
 
Reviewer: Larka (Signed) ·  Date: December 25, 2015 05:00 PM ·  On: Chapter 4
 So interesting.  I'm trying to figure out his"mom's " angle for kidnapping him.  His real sibling has red hair?  That's interesting if Brian is the father. 
  Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'm happy that you think it's interesting- I worry about that from time to time.  
Yeah, Sarah has red hair- I was watching Doctor Who season 5 ep 1 and I was like 'oh that little girl would be perfect as Sarah.'- she has red hair too.  
Anyways thanks for reading again & hope you stay tuned for the next chapter! 
Olivia   
 
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) ·  Date: December 24, 2015 04:23 AM ·  On: Chapter 4
 This is really interesting.  Melanie and Lindsay have two other children?  Is Mikey and Mel still JR's parents?  Is Brian the little redhead's bio-father?  When does Brian show up.  
  Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews! 
Yeah Mel and Linds have JR and Sarah. Mikey and Mel are still JR's parents. Everything is canon up until season 4 and then things start to become a little wobbly and wiggly. 
For the other two questions...hm. I don't want to give too much away. All will be revealed in the next chapter...sort of.  
Olivia  
 
Reviewer: dany  (Anonymous) ·  Date: December 24, 2015 03:32 AM ·  On: Chapter 4
 me encanto la historia, escrives increible y la trama es buenisima. siguela porfavor, espero el siguiente capitulo. Brian y justin aparecen el el proximo capitulo? y como Gus va a reaccionar a ellos?.  
Exelente!!!!! 
  Author's Response: THANK YOU!!! I apperciate your review! I hope the next chapter will be done soon. I can't answer your other questions because I don't want to spoil anything, but all will be revealed in the next chapter. I should call it the "big revealing" or something. :)) I don't know. 
Thanks a lot though.  
Olivia  
 
Reviewer: zelldrake (Signed) ·  Date: December 24, 2015 12:25 AM ·  On: Chapter 4
 i can't wait to see what the others do 
  Author's Response: Me too! I feeling ridiculously excited about this story all of sudden! 
Thanks for reading chapter 4! :D 
Olivia  
 
Reviewer: ME  (Anonymous) ·  Date: November 28, 2015 12:15 AM ·  On: Chapter 3
 Can't wait for more! 
  
  Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! It's going to take at least another week or two before I can post another chapter.  
Finals are killers. The rest of the December though will be pure Dylan!!! 
Olivia  
 
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) ·  Date: October 25, 2015 01:26 PM ·  On: Chapter 3
 Well this is certainly a different spin on our favorite family I am interested to see where this goes
  Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I really appreciate it! I'm also very excited to see where it goes.   
I hope you stick around for the next chapter! 
Olivia  
 
Reviewer: zelldrake (Signed) ·  Date: October 24, 2015 02:13 AM ·  On: Chapter 3
 great i love it 
  Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :D 
  Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :D  
 
Reviewer: zelldrake (Signed) ·  Date: October 24, 2015 02:12 AM ·  On: Chapter 3
 great i love it 
  Author's Response: Thanks so much for continuing to read this story and your support!  
I hope you stick around for the next chapter 
Olivia   
 
Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining  (Anonymous) ·  Date: October 22, 2015 10:29 PM ·  On: Chapter 3
 Judging by the person hiding behind the pillar having the same colour of eyes and hair as Gus and Gus not having thought about that person all day - it is obviously one of his 'family' who has survived. Perhaps to tell him the bad news about the rest of them.  Fascinated to see where this goes. 
  Author's Response: :))) thanks for the second review! I love that you are trying to predict what will happen next! 
All I'm going to say is that you'll just have to see... ;) 
Olivia  
 
Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining  (Anonymous) ·  Date: October 22, 2015 07:10 PM ·  On: Chapter 3
 Defintely Brian Kinney's kid. Thinks his mothers are crazed lesbos. This is brilliant! Gus is reacting totally as one would expect (I'd imagine) for someone who has lost the family he thought he knew only to find all his certainties in life are an illusion. 
  Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUCH! This is like the biggest compliment I could get for this chapter. One of the reasons why it took me so long to update this things was because I fretting over Dylan/Gus's reaction to the kidnapped thing. I stressed over like crazy. So thanks a lot and I hope you keep reading.   
 
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) ·  Date: October 22, 2015 03:02 PM ·  On: Chapter 3
 While I can't blame Dylan for how he feels, I think they should tell him about what happened.  What if Lindsay and Mel say no to his seeing his sibling?  Who is it behind the pillar.  Doesn't Brian have hazel eyes?  Really want to read more!!! 
  Author's Response: I agree- I feel like Linds and Mel should be honest with him too. You can't start a relationship based on lies. All of your questions will be answered in the next chapter, I swear! Thanks for reading!  
 
Reviewer: zelldrake (Signed) ·  Date: September 07, 2015 09:30 PM ·  On: Chapter 2
 please give us more  
 
Reviewer: zelldrake (Signed) ·  Date: July 04, 2015 05:05 PM ·  On: Chapter 2
 i would like to read more 
  Author's Response: I hope you enjoy the new chapter! :D Sorry it took so long!  
 
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) ·  Date: July 02, 2015 05:12 AM ·  On: Chapter 2
 Hopefully when Brian gets there things will straighten out.  Did everyone in Dylan's family perish?  I ask because moving him in with a fighting Lindsay and Mel will not bode well. 
  Author's Response: I hope so too! No, not everyone dies in his family, which will be revealed in the next chapter. Yeah, Lindsay and Mel really need to get it together for the sake of their son. 
Thanks for reading! 
Olivia  
 
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