Reviewer: Joy (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2016 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In
fu***ng bastard Brian how can he do this to Justin he not only broken his promise but bottom for Evan for 2night ass hole I think Justin should leave a pieces of shit I really hate this story now how that happen to Justin who love that ass hole & he is bottoming to some1 & saying to hide it yaak it's sticks
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2016 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 11: Over-thinking
Evan is one dangerous SOB. Justin is going to be devastated. Physical lust can cause people to make mistakes but No still means NO. I know that in Brian's mind he wouldn't even think along these lines but does he realize that basically Evan molested him. Stomping off to the bedroom won't stop Evan - for both Brian and Justin's sake I hope it doesn't go further. Need more....
Author's Response: Hmm I never saw it like this. You might be right, and true...Brian caved because he was curious, because he was hanging on a ghost of his past...who he thought he had a relationship, when it reality Evan treated thim worse than Brian ever treated Justin.
Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2016 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 11: Over-thinking
So I told myself again and again that I needed to stop reading because I wasnt going to like where this was going. I still couldn't stop myself. You deserve credit for that. I'm officially onboard. I can't wait to see how Brian fails next.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you. I guess. Chapter 12 is the apogee of Brian hurting Justin, then it's on to rebuild their relaitonship.
Reviewer: Oliviatheolive (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2016 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 8: Admissions
Justin has every right to be jealous- I know I would be. It's obvious that there is something still there between Brian and Evan- we all know how easy it is for Brian to be over people or not give a shit. Brian definitely gives a shit about his old fling- also it's so funny how you can see the parallels between Justin and Brian's relationship and Evan and Brian's relationship- at least in the beginning.
Olivia
Reviewer: Oliviatheolive (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2016 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 7: Fireworks
Brian is definitely evading Justin- which makes me think that Evan and Brian have a sinister past. This was great though-Izzy walking in on Justin and Brian was great!
Olivia
Reviewer: Oliviatheolive (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2016 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 6: An Insistent Admirer
And the plot thickens!!!!!! You gave me inch when all I wanted was a foot----- I need more. This Evan is amazing- stirring up drama with his secret past romance with Brian and making Justin jealous!!! Yessssssss. A jealous Justin is my favorite type of Justin. And Justin was being so nasty too Evans. :) I'm so happy right now.
Olivia
Reviewer: Oliviatheolive (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2016 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 5: Sunshine's Crap
Brian is so perfect! Giving Justin an emergency card! Sending his bracelet- I can't handle this. I can't wait to see what happens next with Evans- he's definitely an interesting character.
Olivia
Reviewer: Oliviatheolive (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2016 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 4: Ghosts of Past
Oh goodness! I'm so interested in this Evan creature! Is he just a rude, narcissistic and pushy in the books? I want to know Brian's connection with him? Is he really 39? Your picture on your banner makes him look slightly older- like 40/50- i bet he's lying. I have so many question. I can't wait for the next chapter. Yessss!
Olivia
Reviewer: Oliviatheolive (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2016 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 3: The New Job
I all about just died when Brian said 'I miss you' to Justin- literally dying, dying. It was so well-placed and just perfect. What kind of relationship do Justin and Brian have? Are they like committed or still open? Oliver seems like a nice guy. I hope Justin will be able to manage the job with his hand and all. Another amazing chapter. I like that your chapters are short- I don't have the time to be reading long ones- attention span is shitty.
Olivia
Reviewer: Oliviatheolive (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2016 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In
I'm so surprised that I've never tried to read this before- I really like where this is going. Izzy is pretty cool. I don't think I've ever read the qaf books- I wonder where Evan comes in.
Okay off to the next chapter!
Olivia
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2016 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 8: Admissions
The tension thickens indeed. I have a feeling Brian is not as unaffected as he wants to appear in front of Justin. I can smell drama coming, big times. Well, I can't wait ;)
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2016 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 8: Admissions
I really don't like Evan. He'd better not come between Brian and Justin. Brian was a bottom, hmm?
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2016 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 8: Admissions
As you say Brian was honest but I am with Justin they need Evan out of their life
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 29, 2016 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 8: Admissions
Strange how Evan left to go to New York, just like Brian almost did to Justin. Justin is soooo jeaaaalous.
Reviewer: chouchou (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2016 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In
So, Brian bottomed for Evan. Good for Justin to know that now. And like Sunshine I don't trust Evan but I don't know what to hink about Brian yet...
Reviewer: The SNO (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2016 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 8: Admissions
So far so good; like Justin, I don't trust Evan.
Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2016 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 7: Fireworks
I really love how you write their interactions. Completely in character. I want more :D
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2016 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 6: An Insistent Admirer
So I was wrong about the scarf. I thought of the drawing Brian had bought at the LGBT center
Let the drama begin indeed. I'm very curious now :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2016 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 7: Fireworks
A new bed. Just what Justin needed. We difinately know Justin's state of mind, don't we. I'd say poor Izzy, but I don't think hiding in her room will help.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2016 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 7: Fireworks
I think Brian has temporarily missed a bullet but the Justin anger train is about to get a head of steam!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2016 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 6: An Insistent Admirer
Aha. We have a mystery and I hope Brian explains soon, cause I don't think Justin's going to wait too long.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2016 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 6: An Insistent Admirer
I'm really enjoying your story, and the angst in the plot. How ironic that Evan is pursuing Justin now, rather than Brian. Of course, up until now he had no idea of their relationship. I love stories that contain jealousy, so I'm going to be very interested to see just who Evan goes after now - Brian or Justin - and how each man reacts to it.
I think I recall the other story that was written, and it was Justin who was (needlessly) worried about his relationship with Brian at the time being in jeopardy when he saw the two of them together. I'm going to enjoy seeing how this one progresses, and who Evan decides he wants more: his former lover, or the blond who intrigues him.
Thanks for writing this one! ~Kim
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2016 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 6: An Insistent Admirer
I'm not liking Evan at all.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2016 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 6: An Insistent Admirer
Justin is going to be vigilant with Evan it looks like he isn't worried if it is Brian or Justin he goes after!
Reviewer: The SNO (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2016 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 6: An Insistent Admirer
Dark clouds on the horizon ...
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2016 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 5: Sunshine's Crap
I love the complicity you manage to create between Brian and Justin. Sunshine's crap, that's a good one, too :) And I have a guess about what Brian have, but not sure it's accurate ;)
Author's Response: Thank you. The secret of what Brian has of Justin's will be revealed in an author note next chapter.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2016 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 5: Sunshine's Crap
Brian caring for Justin in his own way and always one step ahead knowing his think is a independent soul
Author's Response: True. Brian was sneaky that way. He knew Justin would rebel :)
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2016 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 5: Sunshine's Crap
Brian always caring for his twink but very aware of his fiercely independent streak xx
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2016 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 5: Sunshine's Crap
Just caught up with the last 2 chapters. Evan sounds like a big problem. Love that Brian is still taking care of Justin and Justin is, of course, rebelling against that. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Evan IS a big problem.
Of course, Justin is as independent as ever.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2016 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 5: Sunshine's Crap
Love that Brian sent him the AmEx card. I'm laughing that he kept something of Justin's. Wait till he finds out about Evan.
Author's Response: It was only fair for Justin to have something of Brian's..when Brian had something of Justin's for years. I thnk the AmEx was a great idea. hehe
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2016 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 5: Sunshine's Crap
Great to see an update. It was a nice moment. I'm sure there will be enough angst to follow. Brian always keeps a lot to himself. I'm sure he won't forget Justin's mention of a 'stalker' despite the jokes. I enjoyed the chat. It was easy to here their voices. Thanks for updating. Looking forward to more! :)
Author's Response: You got it right. Brian keeps a lot to himself. =)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2016 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 5: Sunshine's Crap
Haha. That phone call was funny and so them.
Author's Response: Hehe! Thanks. I want ot keep it light and funny...until it won't be light and funny anymore. :)
Reviewer: The SNO (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2016 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 5: Sunshine's Crap
Yeah, the cowry shells bracelet is back !
Are you talking about Justin's nipple ring ?
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2016 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 4: Ghosts of Past
Evan seems... interesting. And I have a feeling he will get what he wants eventually... I can't wait wait to learn more about what you had planned for this, whatever it might be :)
Author's Response: Oh, I have planned a lot of drama for our boys.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2016 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 4: Ghosts of Past
Yes! Very interesting! Can't wait to read more! Evan has my interest now.
Author's Response: I bet. Evan is very hard, yet interesting to write. :)
Reviewer: The SNO (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2016 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 4: Ghosts of Past
Very creepy, but I guess it's the goal.
Is Brian the schmuck who stole the account from Evan ?
So so hard to have to wait every week for an update.
However, it's worth it.
Author's Response: hehe! Nope, not Brian. Evan was simply lamenting about his bad day.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2016 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 4: Ghosts of Past
Oh dear Evan thinks Justin is a tasty morsel he can snack on! Back off buddy he's taken!
Author's Response: Of course he thinks so, but Justin can protect himself.
Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2016 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In
I'm trying to get myself to read your story
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2016 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 4: Ghosts of Past
Hello there! I don't get a great deal of reading time, but this premise intrigued me, and after reading all that you've written so far, my interest has only increased. Quite obviously we know I love darker fics, and the angst is always a plus too. This has the potential to excel in both categories. It was good meeting Evan, even if he does creepy very well. I'm very much looking forward to where you go with this next. :)
Author's Response: Hello! A honor to have you as a reader, confused_bliss! :) I hope you enjoy (well, as much as possible) my little story. :)
Yup, dark fic have a special appeal.
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2016 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 4: Ghosts of Past
Evan's going to be a pain in the ass and cause trouble. He better tell Brian about Evan in the morning. That must be who Brian knows. I already don't like where I think this may be going.
Author's Response: Like I said...there will be drama.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2016 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 4: Ghosts of Past
Evan seems to be someone to be wary of. Tell me, did Brian get a new account by chance?
Author's Response: Hehe! Nope. Brian has nothing to do with Evan's foul mood.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2016 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 4: Ghosts of Past
Finally had a chance to catch up on this, and I'm intrigued! Especially with this ending. Hmm...will definitely be looking forward to what happens next! Thanks for the update. ~Kim
Author's Response: Thanks for still reading. I hope to keep everyone intrigued until hate mails come...soon. hehehe :)
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2016 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 3: The New Job
I love Izzy so far. And I loved Justin and Brian's conversation. Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response: Izzy is great. :)
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2016 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 3: The New Job
Wow Brian is really showing Justin how much he loves him and being open. The good thing is Justin is showing Brian he has to chase his dream for himself and to ensure Brian knows when they are fully together they come as equals
Author's Response: Couln't have worded it better :) Thank you
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2016 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 3: The New Job
Oliver seems like he's going to be a great boss. Still love Izzy. It's great that Brian can admit he misses Justin.
Author's Response: Yeah, Oliver is a great boss.
Brian has come a long way since he met Justin.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2016 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 3: The New Job
I'm enjoying this so far. I am anxious to see the connection between Oliver and Brian.
Author's Response: There's no connection between Oliver and Brian. Oliver is only Justin's boss. ;)
Reviewer: Manado (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2016 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In
Hello there, this story is interesting, the plot about someone from Brian's past is always intriguing and as far as I know, there are 3 authors who wrote about Brian Kinney-Evan Steele, you, Blissink, and Ashleigh, the last mentioned author didn't like the idea B/J together at the end of story, so I hope Brian and Justin will eventually do end up together in your story, thank you.
Author's Response: Hi! :)
I found this Brian-Evan background story fascinating so I had to tackle the idea. I promise it has a HEA for our boys.
I hope to hear from you as the story progresses and see what you think of it.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2016 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 3: The New Job
I'm impressed that Brian actually told Justin he missed him. Nicely done. Looks like Justin is starting out great. Like Oliver and Lizzy.
Author's Response: Of course, he told Justin he missed him. Brian has changed :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2016 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In
One day there and he has a line on a job. Not bad.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Yeah, he's lucky like that.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2016 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In
Great start. Love Izzy. Love the flip flop killing the bug (which I assume was a cockroach) I can see the two of them getting into all sorts of trouble.....LOL Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Izzy is going to be a great friend.
Reviewer: The SNO (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2016 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In
So far, I like this story.
But it's not a surprise as I loved all stories I read from you; the short and the long ones. I just finished "The Inevitable", which I read in almost one shot. It's my favorite from all I found on MW.
You're very talented.
You keep the characters in line with the original ones.
You can write very funny, very hot and very moving things. The banters, the emails, the IM on facebook ...
I'm so happy to read recent "whispers" about Brian and Justin, and the family.
The problem is that all your stories were completed so it will be hard to wait for new chapters on this one.
Keep going, it will be a pleasure to follow this new story.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you enjoy it. This is going to be different from anything else I worte.
Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2016 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In
WOW, where is this coming from?
I wrote only 2 sentences.
The first one was to indicate the author, because I really thought Kim and you don't remember who she was. And I love her writing - I'm not gonna apologise for that.
When was I mean exactly?
You didn't think that before, when I was praising your work, did you?
The second sentence was to wish you good luck with your story.
I apologise to everyone, who is stuck to witness our conversation and believe the mods will erase it, if I overstepped the rules.
Author's Response: That's the way it sounded to me when I read it. I'm sure you know how interpretative thing you say on the internet can be.
I know you love my work, that's why I was surprised the see those words. Maybe the quotation marks, of you quoting me threw me off and made me think you were mean.
Well, now you decide if to stick around to read or not.
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2016 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In
loving Izzy - and anxious to see where you take us with this one
Charle
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll take it to places...I don't even know about.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2016 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In
I really like it so far. It seems like Izzy and Justin will be good roommates.
Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah, they'll get along very well.
Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2016 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In
Well, "someone else used him in a story on livejournal" is actually the famous and briliant Bliss Ink.
Good luck with your story.
Author's Response: You don't have to be condescending about it (that's how it sounds).
I read that story on live journal. It was great, true, but you don't have to be mean to me because I this idea for a lot longer than before I discovered that story. I was surprised someone else had used Evan in a fic.
And praising Bliss Ink as if my writing is shit, it's not okay. You should at least give my story a try. If you don't like if, don't read, but don't start criticizing me. I don't know if you write, but writers pour a lot of time in creating something and it fucking hurts to have such words thrown without second thought.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2016 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In
Well, first of all, it takes courage to set up Brian with Evan again, if it's who I think it is. I believe I remember him from reading another author's stories. So kudos to you on that.
BTW, just a suggestion. If it IS from the other stories I remember, at the very least I would ask that you credit the other author and the stories as a courtesy, since it involves a character he/she created. Perhaps provide a link so readers might get some background into the character as well?
And I may have missed it, but please make sure you place a story disclaimer on this if you haven't.;) One last (admin) thing - if you want to email me the banner, I'll get it posted for you.;)
Now onto the story! Very interesting beginning! Like Izzy's quirky character, and especially the way she greeted Justin with the bug squashing - ha! Nice set up happening with where Izzy is working. I'll be interested in seeing how Evan, Brian, and even Ethan fit into this picture. Looking forward to more.;) ~Kim
Author's Response:
Evan is from the original QaF books, I mentioned it in the authoer note. I know someone else used him in a story on livejournal. It gave me courage to share my idea too.
Ooops. I keep forgetting about the disclaimer. Will add it up.
Sure, I'll email you the banner - but what email address? :)
I'm glad you like the beginning, I hope you'll enjoy the rest of it....when Evan makes an appearance.
Is his last name Steele or some variation of that? If so, some author must have used it in another QAF fan fiction story I read, or it may just be a coincidence. Perhaps list the titles of the books and the author, then, just to avoid any issues. You could include it in your disclaimer, BTW, with something along the lines of 'the character of Ethan is based upon the books (insert titles) by (insert author's name). No copyright infringement is intended, etc...
As for the email address, I'll send you one based upon the email you registered under, and you can then reply with the banner. May take me a few hours, though, since I have to run out for a while. Any questions, let me know.;) ~Kim
Reviewer: Tania (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2016 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In
awwwwww I don't think I be able to read this story but good luck on this story d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;
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