Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2016 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 13

I was trying to hold out until you finished this story before I started to read.  No such luck.  I couldn't wait.  I love this story and your writing style.  What a lovely life they have worked hard for, looking forward to the birth of the twins.

Dee Dee

Author's Response:

Hi Dee Dee, thanks for the very nice review.  I am happy to know you are enjoying the story.  I promise not to leave you hanging but I know it is a drag to wait for each update.  I am hoping to wrap this story up about 5 more chapters.  That should take us through New Years!!  The next story will have the arrival of the twins.  Thanks again for taking time to review I love to hear from the readers, especially when they are as flattering as you.  I do realize that is shallow of me.  Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2016 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 13

Well, it's Monday, so here I am. :)

Terrific as usual. So glad that our boys were able to work things out properly. Everything can't be completely smooth sailing with those 2. Would make for a very boring life. (and story. lol) I do like a fairly quick fix though, especially in a fic such as this, where the angst is at a minimum between them.

Joan really isi her own worst enemy. I wonder how long it will take for her to see things even slightly differently, if at all. I get the slight impression that you may be headed in that direction, but then she opens her mouth and that idea tend to go down the tubes. ;/  Perhaps John adn Peter will have a greater influence on her than anyone else? Who knows.

It's good for the boys to also see slight h=mishaps between B&J as well. It allows them to see that while they may dissagree adn at times act childish, they work things out adn talk out their issues. Makes them see what a healthy relationship is all about rather than what they've grown up to see.

Such excitement over the twins!! Looking forward to reading their invovlement during this time with Eden. Getting prepared and all. how the rest of teh family will react etc.

As always, it's such a perk and bright spot to my day to be able to sit down adn read and update of yours. Of course, will eagerly await your next installment.

Thank you.

Cheers,

Elaine

Author's Response:

You always make my Mondays more pleasant!!!  This is truly a low angst story.  I think B&J really love each other so they are anxious to resolve difference.  They resolve to communicate better but I'm betting they run into trouble in the future.  I just posted a little story on "What Joan Thinks".  She has a unique way of looking at life!  I agree it is good for John & Peter to see how couples resolve differences.  I don't think they saw much of that with Claire.  I think the twins will give us lots of storylines.  Your reviews always bring a bright spot to my day so looks like we are even!!!!  Thanks for the review!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2016 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 13

Hi,

    Thanks for another terrific chapter.  There were many things I

liked until we got to the part when Brian and Justin took Joan her

meal.  What she said was very hurtful.  This was a time for her to

say nothing.  I understand, for religious reason, she feels the way

she feels.  Ok, but no need to say anything when her son and

Justin are obvious giving her, what to them is wonderful news.  If I

could have, I would have drove through the screen, taken her

food dish and trashed it, packed her bags, and sent her home to

live or die alone. 

    I know, I know, this is only a fictional story.  But geeez……

    DavidR

Author's Response:

Gald you enjoyed te latest chapter except for Joan.  I think Joan looks at the world in her own unique way.  She doesn't much care what other people think.  Quite a compliment for you to get so worked up, Thanks!!!!  I appreciate the comments and you lnow I love reviews!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: June 17, 2016 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 13

Hello my sweet Baboo,  In answer to your question, last time, I'm still coloring. A stiff neck or shoulder tells me I need to color for 30 or 45 minutes to ease the stress. And this week has been stressful, with the senseless killings in Orlando. I think back to Matthew Shepard who died in 1998, and the qaf series end of season one with the bashing...don't we read and see enough on tv the hate and violence hopefully the children of today won't revisit these hate crimes. I'm straight but have many gay friends and I worry for their safety. Assalt weapons belong in wars not on street corners. I've ranted enough, now about the update, Brian and Justin love each other and their family a blow up  between them is normal and healthy. I pity Joan, she's alone and not well and doesn't have a friend in the world, she may not be happy about the twins, but everyone else is (mikey and Lindsay don't count) I still visualize a mud pit with Jen and Alice taking on Joanie. I love your story and need more. Your Sally   

Author's Response:

 My Darling Sally, glad to know you are still indulging your artistic sensibilities!!!!  What an excellent way to relieve stress.  The bad thing about today's world is it is impossible to escape from the news - TV, the internet even the old fashioned newspaper keep us informed, somtimes more than I would like!!   I agree about assault rifles, I can't understand why we can't ban their sale.  No one NEEDS and assualt rifle.  Guess that angers any NRA readers but somehow I don't think I have that many.  I agree about B&J they love each other but little blowups occur in all relationships.  I imagine Brian is still harboring that fantasy about back yard mud wrestling but it will have to wait until Joan is all healed.  Joan has a sad life but mostly that is her own fault.  She and Mikey are the truly unchanging characters in my story.  Always happy to read your comments.  Next up I have a little one chapter story that I think will be fun.  After that HH will continue.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 17, 2016 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 13

Feeling much better now having read this chapter. It was good to see both Brian and Justin each admit where they went wrong. I thought Brian's effort to explain his feelings was a good reflection of his struggles with emotions and, of course, his childhood trauma. I thought it was remarkably mature of Brian to help take dinner to his mother, not that he got any thanks from her for it. I could rattle on about B & J's reunion, but I'll stop. Glad that Brian showed Alice his appreciation. Super excited to hear about the twins. Really enjoyed the writing in this chapter...you had me laughing and chuckling quite a bit, especially the ending line. Looking forward to the next installment. BTW, hope you are continuing to feel well. Thanks!

Author's Response:

Happy to know I was able to relieve your anxiety.  B&J are usually pretty honest with each other and they were both wrong.  Their issues seem to come when they aren't honest.  I imagine finding out that Justin actually had betrayed him would be the worse thing that could happen to Brian.  The good thing I can't imagine that ever happening.  This is very conceited to say but I amused myself when I wrote that last line.  I thought it was a perfect reflection of Brian & Justin's relationship.  Thanks for the nice review, always make me happy to hear from the readers!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2016 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 13

I am always happy to see a new chapter but this one has me a little I don't know not happy not unhappy maybe just a little weirded out maybe it's reading it in the middle of the night. I am just not sure I am happy with it don't get me wrong I am glad Brian and Justin talked and seem to be back to being them. Maybe it's Joan's reaction to the babies but that was what I expected. I can't put my finger on what I did not like about this but there is something. I will figure it out, I guess I will just say thanks for giving us another chapter and I hope the next one is about the show in New York. I think maybe the fix in this chapter was too easy I am back to wanting drama major major drama not Brian and Justin fighting drama just some kind of something I am not even making sense to me so I am going to end this with my usual request of more soon

Author's Response:

I am reading this review in the morning and it leaves me a little wierded out.  Sorry this update disappointed you but I guess you can't please all the people all the time.  Thanks for letting me know how you feel.  I think Brian & Justin really care deeply about each other and that is why the fix was "too easy".  I felt like they were honest with each other about what happened but everyone has the right to their own opinion.  I hope you find the next chapter more enjoable.  THanks for the review I always like to hear from the readers and truly appreciate your honesty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2016 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 12

Wow! That was angsty. Glad Brian got his act together in time.

Author's Response:

I think Brian was pretty upset to think his Sunshine migth betray him.  Once they talk I think all will be well!!  Thanks for the review, you know I appreciate them a lot!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: June 09, 2016 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 12

My Sweet Baboo:  I was so glad to see your update. I read some of the reviews and one of them had me laughing all day the phrase "Holy Shitballs !". I think it's really no ones fault just a set of circumstances coming together. Brian went off half-cocked, he knows that Justin would never betray him. I think it was good Alice let Jus know the pool house was a good idea that B & J would never have to see her and she would see to her meals to make sure she ate, the best thing after John's experiment with liqour, the liqour is under lock and key and by the time she healed she would dry out, a plus for her health and relief for Brian. Justin never needs Brian to say he's sorry, he loves him enough not to humble Bri, but it's time for Bri to man up and apology is in order. The fact that Joan tells her grandsons the food is wonderful and smiles and even acts like a human being. I guess she agreed to live there because she was all alone and was scared she might die alone and no one would ever find out for days. Alice is tough but she was quite truthful with Joan. I understand Brian not wanting her there because of Gus, and the twins. I still think Brian is tired of Debbie as a mother, and as much as loves Jenn they someone elses mother he wants a mother he can call his own. As long as they both are alive there is hope. I love this story and so glad it is continuing. Your Sally Always 

Author's Response:

My darling Sally, I am always glad to see your review!!  Another reviewer once wrote that they liked reading the reviews and my replies almost as much as the story.  I think Joanie was sharp enough to bring at least some vodka with her.  After all her years of drinking alcohol I'm not sure it would be good for her to go cold tukey but with Alice on duty Joan will certainly drink less.  I think B&J will have a good talk and decide there were mistakes made on both sides.  Brian's biggest mistake was refusing to let Justin now he was safe after he rushed away from home.  I think Alice convinced Joan that the pool house was her best option.  I'm not sure Brian wants to have a mother/son realtionship with Joan but he can't ignore her.  Thanks for all your nice comments and thanls for always being such a faithful reviewer!!!  Hope the coloring is gong well and you are still having fun with it!!!!  your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2016 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 12

You really had me scared at the end of the last chapter. Do not do that anymore .I am glad Alice talked some sense into Brian. A boy and a girl that is great.

Author's Response:

Happy I was able to calm your fears.  I did think aout letting the estrangement continue for a little while but I just couldn't do it.  I think a baby girl in the midst of men & boys will be interesting.  Thanks for taking the time to review!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2016 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 12

Go, Alice! Love the strong women in this story.

Alice uses just the right tone in setting Brian straight, letting him know Justin didn't betray him and acknowledging it may have been a mistake not to call Brian in Chicago to let him know what was happening and get his input.

Thank goodness Alice does light a fire under Brian. He'd regret not being at the hospital with Justin to learn the sex of their children.

A boy and a girl will be joining the Taylor Kinney household. Hooray! 😊

Thanks for yet another wonderful chapter!

Author's Response:

Another member for the pro Alice team.  The important thing is B&J are talking again and they were both there to learn they were having a daughter & a son.  Happy to know you are still enjoying the story, thanks for your nice comment.  I appreciate all your reviews I love to hear from the readers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 06, 2016 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 12

I still think Justin should have told Brian what was going on, instead of trying to spare him because of Brian's business trip. I think Brian should have allowed Justin an opportunity to explain instead of storming out. But, I can understand his immediate reaction, even to the point of giving him a few hours to calm down. Staying out all night and refusing to even text Justin a brief "I'm okay" was taking it too far. Given all of this, I have to be relieved that Alice confronted Brian. I see her action here as less butting in and more as wanting to set the record straight that it was her idea to bring Joan to their home. Alice is a wise woman and I wouldn't be surprised if she learns a lesson from this and decides that from here on out that she will let B&J work out their own problems. I'm a fan of Alice (and see her as more of a family member, rather than an employee) and especially of Jennifer. I like how you portray these strong women. Nobody is perfect--not Brian, not Justin, not Alice or anybody else. Everyone deserves some latitude from time to time for the mistakes they make. I'm glad you fixed this. I never enjoy seeing B&J at odds. You can see that I am way too wound up in your story. Always glad to see a new chapter. Thanks!

Author's Response:

I agree the main issue here is the failure of Justin and Brian to communicate.  You are in the pro Alice camp but if you have read the reviews there is disagreement over Alice's role in all this.  As I have written several times I am really enjoying the reviews for this chapter since the readers have such a variety of opinions.  This is a low angst story, there is no danger of any permanent break between B&J.  As Jennifer has said they are true soulmates.  I am always glad to see a new review so thanks back to you for posting one.  I love to get reviews and they are what keeps me writing the story!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2016 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 12

Fantastic, and Alice was wonderful, happy she is stubborn and let Brian have it.

Lets hope some of the angst between Brian and Justin is gone.  Hopefully Joanie will keep quiet and heal quickly so she ca return home.   Very exciting news about the twins, boy and girl cann't asked for any happier news.

Already looking forward to the next update, thanks for sharing.

Forever a fanfic reader ,

JoAnn

Author's Response:

Hi JoAnn, hope you are feeling great!!!!  You are a member of the pro Alice team.  The reviews are very mixed on Alice and her role in this chapter.  I think B&J will work out any lingering issues.  I think they are both pretty stoked about the baby news.  A little princess to rule over all that testosterone!  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2016 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 12

I have to say that I love Alice!

Author's Response:

Me too but that is NOT a unanimous opinion!!!  Thanks for the review!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2016 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 12

Hi Bill  :  ) Okay, I just have to say this – Brian is being an idiot, but I’m glad Alice made him listen to what she had to say and that he went to the sonogram. Hopefully now he’ll pull his head out of his rear and listen to Justin. Looking forward to the next chapter :  ) *Hugs* Janet

Author's Response:

Hi Janet, I think Brian is a victim of his insecurities.  He was upset to think that Justin would side with someone beside him.  I agree he acted like an idiot, he should have stayed and heard what Justin had to say.  As they say "alls well that ends well"!  B&J are talking and that is good!!   Thanks for reviewing!!!!    Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2016 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 12

You handled this very well.  Only Alice could do and say those things and get away with it.  I wouldn't want her turning in her resignation either.  All those great meals!  Love how Peter and John did their best to cheer Justin up and didn't make any stupid jokes.  Then we find out there is going to be a little boy and girl in the Taylor-Kinney household.  The boys outnumber girls though.  Names, we need to learn their names.

Author's Response:

My friend, you know I neer consider a chapter complete until I read your review!!! You are on the pro Alice team, not a universally approved position.  I wasn't sure about the resignation threat, it kind of came and went and then stayed as part of the story.  Glad you enjoyed the concerned nephews.  I think they were worrid about being part of another broken home.  I think thier daughter os going to be the princess or queen of the household.  Jennifer will go ballistic with a granddaughter at last!  You know I appreciate all your support for my story.  Thanks for the review, you know I love to get them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!    Bill

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2016 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 12

I'm so glad to see that Brian didn't return to his old tricks of pain management. Obviously they still need to talk, but at least they got to share the experience of seeing their son and daughter together for the first time...

Hugs ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

I didn't speciifcally say it but I think there was some Beam consumed at the loft.  I kind of thought of Brian like a bear going back in his cave where he felt safe.  I think it was important fro them to share the sonogram moment. That is an opportunity that would never come again.  Glad to know you are still enjoying the story.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!  Waiting for more storues from you!!!  Hugs back to you,  Bill

Reviewer: Cassenoisettes (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2016 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 12

I don't like the way Alice is putting her nose in B&J business and how she makes Brian the bad guy. Who does she think she is ?

Justin may had the best intentions but he has no rights. Brian was never shy about his need to be far away from Joan. I can't imagine Brian (or Melanie) wanting Joan near Gus. If she's there, Gus won't be and I want more of Gus and Kevin friendship at Britin.

What if Brian did the same with Craig ? It's Justin who brought Joan. Well, let him deal with her and let Brian not having any interaction with her. Justin is hurt because Brian used the word "betrayed" but it's what he did. Bringing Joan home wasn't in Brian's interest. I really want for Brian to tell Justin he wants Joan out and Justin has to tell her. Justin has to fix what he did.

Author's Response:

I always enjoy hearing from the readers.  The reviews for this chapter are particularly interesting because there is a big variety of opinions on Joan coming to stay, Justin acting without telling Brian and Alice's role in the whole situation.  I find it kind of fascinatiing.  Thanks for taking time to leave comments, I appreciate your point of view.  I am pretty pro Alice so the variety of viewpoints are great to see.  I agree 100% that JUstin should have told Brian what was going on.  I think B&J have a history of getting into trouble when they are not honest and try to "protect" the other person.  I'm not sure of Brian's final decision on Joan but if he wants her gone I agree Justin has to tell her.

Thank you very much for you review!!!!!  I love to get them!!!   Bill

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2016 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 11

Hi,

  That was an intense chapter.  I am still bothered by the way

Claire is being treated.  I just can’t see how the boys will visit Joan

but not Claire.  There were a few comments which tried to explain

it, but I just don’t see it.  Yes, there were calls and emails with

Claire, and since she refuses to ‘own-up’ to her failures the boys are keeping their distance.  Has not Joan done exactly the same

thing.  Joan is only their grandmother, while Claire is their

mother.  So it’s mother vs. grandmother, and to me Claire is more important.  Maybe that is the answer, a mother is more difficult

to forgive.  Maybe?

  Each time either Justin or Brian does something important,

trying to protect the other without telling the other that always

becomes a problem.  I don’t know if Brian feels betrayed because

he feels Justin and Joan conspires against him. Justin meant well.

 Betrayal is a strong word. To me it is more that Britin is Brian’s

castle, his refuge, and Justin bringing Joan there destroys that.  It

is all explainable, and it sure will be interesting how all this plays out.  There sure is a lot of explaining to do.

  Once again, thanks for the chapter and the story.  Things

certainly have gotten complicated.

 DavidR

Author's Response:

Hello my friend, I was womdering why I hadn't heard from you.  Happy to know you are stlll reading the story.  I belive John & Peter think their Mother actually harmed them by ignoring their needs and moving them in with Paul  Joan wasn't exactly a model grandmother but she never actually did them any harm.  She didn't take them in to her home but they didn't want to be there either.  Claure actually choose her drug dealer wishes over Peter safety and the brothers want an apology.  They haven't cut her off completely.  Claire knows her sons want her to accept responsibility for what she did and an apology, so far she hasn't done either. 

I agree B&J trying to protect the other by withholding information usually turns out to be a big problem.  Justin didn't want to talk about lunch at Joan's so Brian could think plans were made there to have her move in while he was out of town.  Brian doesn't even know that Joan reinjured herself fired her in home helpers.  Complicated makes for a better story!!!  Thanks, as always, for your support.  You always bring up interesting points and give me food for thought.  I appreciate it!!!    Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: May 30, 2016 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 11

My dear, dear Sweet Baboo      PLEASE don't let Brian go to mikey and tell of Justins ''betrayel'' That little smug asshole will tell everyone he knows, maybe Cynthia or Ted can calm Brian down and let him think clearly and don't let him trick he knows the best sex ever has always been Justin. Maybe the terrific duo of Alice and Jennifer can ease Brian's mind. You are worrying your Sally, not nice. 

Author's Response:

Sally, you know that expression "into eah life a little rain must fall"  well B&J are having a thunderstorm right now, hopefully it doesn't turn into a hurricane named Mikey.  We will have to wait and see what a "betrayed" Brian might do.  I will try and update soon!  sweet B

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2016 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 11

Hi, Bill!  First of all, congrats on getting your 200th review!:) 

As for the story, wow, just when I think Joan can't be any more obstinate and unreasonable, you prove me wrong - ha!  But perhaps they have finally arrived at an equitable solution (hopefully).  Alice is quickly becoming a favorite character of mine. Love that woman! 

But, boy, that cliffhanger! Bad Bill - LOL!  Something tells me that Brian will be eating crow in the near future (not sure if that is low-carb or not). 

As always, a great and enjoyable read.  And don't worry; I love angst, and I know you will leave these two in a happier place in the future. Thanks for the update!  ~Kim

Author's Response:

Hello my friend, thanks for the congrats on 200 reviews.  You know how much I LOVE reviews!!!  Even though I tell myself it is egotisical and shallow of me to be so focused on reviews I can't help myself.  I console myself by saying there are worse things to be addicted to.  Joan is focused on things being her way for sure.  I think Alice can even keep Joanie behaving.  It seems to me that you have left us hanging in your stories more than once.  A little suffering is good for the soul.  Our stories have that in common, it all comes out happy in the end!!  Thanks as always for being such a support to me.  Anyone who enjoys my stories really owes it to your inspiration and mentoring.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2016 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 11

Justin is one feisty man, and Brian is as stubborn as Joan. Hopefully a drive in the country will help Brian relax and accept Joan's brief stay at Britin... Or will this become more of a permanent situation? Hugs ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Justin is always ready to step up to defend Brian.  Of cousre Brian doesn't kone what Justin said to Joan.  All Brian knows is he went out of town and came home to Joan staying in their house.  We'll habe to wait and see how this works out.  Hugs back to my you!!!  Bill

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2016 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 11

Hi Bill  :  ) I can see having Joan at the pool house would be beneficial for her in the long run, she’s already proven that she’s too headstrong and stubborn to do what’s best for her recovery.  LOL, love the way Justin puts her in her place. I wish Brian had waited for Justin to explain why she’s there instead of running off like that though, but we know where he gets his stubbornness from - Ha.  Looking forward to the next chapter  :  ) *Hugs* Janet  

Author's Response:

Hi Janet, thanks for psoting a review!!!!  Brian gets his stubborness and his annoyed facial expression from Joan.  You just can get away from genetics.  Justin did defend Brian and point out all Joan's failings but he didn't tell Brian.  All Brian sees is JOan now under his roof. Glad to know you enjoyed this chapter.  Hope all is good with you.  Hugs back,  Bill

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2016 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 11

Well, Joan is one difficult woman - so glad I don't have to deal with her. Alice will be excellent with her - her no nonsense attitude won't put up with Joan's attitude. It's obvious where Brian gets his 'high drama' behaviour from....LOL. Poor Justin - not only has he to deal with Joan but now Brian. Brian had better wake up to the fact Justin must have an excellent reason for doing this and he should make the time to find out why or getting back into Justin's good graces might take a while....

Author's Response:

Joan is not an easy person to like.  Alice will have no trouble handling Joan.  If Brian feels betrayed there is no telling what he will do.  Hope he doesn't do something he regrets like go tricking at Babylon.  Glad to know you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for psoting a review!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 11

My heart sunk - poor Justin, caught between a rock and a hard place. Brian's reaction was sadly predictable but I must admit I had hoped he would surpise Justin by being more willing to listen to the reasons behind this unwelcome turn of events:-(

Author's Response:

Justin thought he was doing the right thing but Brian doesn't seem to agree.  Thanks for the review, I love to hear from the readers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 11

:)

 

Author's Response:

Love reviews!  :)

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: May 24, 2016 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 10

Sorry my dear sweet baboo, I forgot to mention the lovely scene with Kevin and Gus spending the night with Brian and Justin. They are the sweetest charactors I've ever read about. I felt bad about the little accident Kevin had but no one reacted badley, Patrick was upset but talked with Justin out of ear shot of Kevin, the boys loved the finger-painting Justin has such patience with both boys and Brian showers the boys with love and tenderness, no wonder that Kevin feels like he is a cousin.The boys are so ex-cited about the twins, they can't wait and neither can I.  Your Sally  

Author's Response:

My wonderful Sally, NEVER apologize for double reviews!!!!!!!!!!!  I LOVE all reviews, it is extremely shallow of me to get a serious thrill from how many revews I get.  I should probably join some "Reviewer Anonymus" group and do a 12 step to get over my reviews obsession.  I do enjoy writing about Gus & Kevin.  I am really happy about how many people seem to enjoy them as well.  I hope it shows that kids are kids despite whatever issues they have to deal with.  I also like how accepting Gus is and how much he enjoys spending time with Kevin.  Growing up I one of our neighbors often used to babysit a friend's Down's syndrone son.  I remember the neighbor telling my Mom that her frieds had trouble finding people willing to babysit their son.  We will learn the sex of the twins soon.  Thanks for all your support!!!!!  your swett Baboo

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2016 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 10

Brilliant update!

Mikey has such simple mind, to think Ben will forgive and forget what he did.

Kevin and Gus are such a pleasure to read.  Gus is so loving and caring.

Looking forward to see what the twins sex is.

Justin and the nephews are going to have an interesting time with Joanie.

Cont. to love this verse and fic.  Thanks for sharing.

JoAnn

Author's Response:

Hi JoAnn, I am going to guess and say you are a Monile reader.  I'm pretty sure Mikey is wromg about Ben changing his mind about the conditions for staying together. I love Gus & Kevin's relationship, which makes sense since I created it. Would be sad if I didn't like it.  You didn't state your preference for the twin's sexes, that isn't written yet. It might be possible to influence me!! I agree that the visit with Joanie will be interesting. Thanks for the nice comments!!!!! Always glad to read your reviews!!!!!!!!!! Thanks, Bill

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2016 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 10

I had been away, how nice to come back to 2 new chapters!

I know that they have their stressful days, but it is so restorative to read about a couple in love and caring for each other. It helps balance my day when there are new chapters.

Thank you.

Author's Response:

I hope yu had fun while you wera away.  I am happy to know you enjoyed the last two chapters.  Hope to continue to keep your days balanced.  Thanks for taking time to review, you know I appreciate the support!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2016 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 10

    Thanks for another terrific chapter.  A lot was revealed about

Michael.  For me, the most interesting remark was when Ben finally

understood that not only did Michael not support the household, and

didn’t financially support his daughter not because he couldn’t, no no

no.  He didn’t because “Michael felt no obligation to contribute.”  How

is that possible?  Though only implied, is a gambling aspect to

Michael’s actions.  Buy ‘something’ with the expectation of selling it at

a higher price. The thrill or bidding and selling on the Internet.  That is

complicated by his need to 'collect'. Finally, I have to wonder, thought

Ben seems really upset at Michael being so very irresponsible, it is

that the irresponsibility and dependency Ben finds so attractive about

Michael.  Maybe? I wonder what is in store for Michael.  The future

does not look good.

   Once again, thanks for the chapter and thanks for the story.

DavidR

Author's Response:

Happy to know you are still enjoying the story.  I always enjoy redng your comments!!!!  I think Michael liked "being taken care of" and Ben liked "taking care of him".  They are kind of co-dependant, each getting what they wanted out of the relationship but not really having a healthy relationship.  The problem came when Michael started dipping into the household money.  Ben was happy if Michael played at the comic book store and supported his own playtime but not interested in paying for Michael's playtime.  I like your idea of equating the collectable buying to gambling.  I hadm't thought of that but it is similar, trying to get rich without a lot of work.   You are correct that Mikey getting a real job and making his own living may change their relationship but maybe it will get better???  Maybe not!!!  You'll just have to keep reading to see what happens.  Thanks for the review, you know I LOVE reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2016 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 10

Joan is quite the primadonna.  There is no pleasing her.

Author's Response:

Joan is not a happy person and seems determined to try her best to bes ure no one else is happy either.  Thanks for the review!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2016 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 10

Hi, Bill! Had a few minutes to get caught up.  I'm glad Ben laid the law down, so to speak, with Michael. Now let's see if he really follows through. I have my doubts.

And I can just imagine Joan in my mind's eye with those 'helpers,' and the daycare - ha!  That was so IC for her.  What a piece of work!

I continue to really like all the small details you put into this story - even down to what their menu is.  Thank you for posting this very entertaining sequel to your other story on here, Bill; it is deeply appreciated.   ~Kim

Author's Response:

Hi Kim, always glad to hear from you.  I don't think Ben will back down but will Mikey step up and grow up that is the big question.  More Joan drama to come, those "helpers" are not going to work out.  Thanks for taking tiem to review!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2016 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 10

So first question of the day how did Gus disappear with the O'Brien boys how come he did not go out to dinner with Brian and Justin. 

Then I guess I have to mention Michael so glad Ben finally called him on all his shit I hope Ben gets something from the sales to pay back the money he stole but I am doubtful. 

Joan ugg you filled this chapter with the icky people. Is it wrong to hope the alcohol causes more issues ok it's wrong but I don't like her and want someone to go through the house and throw out all the vodka.

i like how Brian and Justin handle Kevin's issues they figure out what he can do and work with that it seems like his family and probably most people who work with Kevin just do it for him rather than letting him see there is so much he can do for himself. The now man I take care of (17 plus years severe autism) is coddled by his parents and most caregivers like that luckily some of his caregivers know what he is capable of and make him do somethings for himself.

i like how John and Peter are learning to go with the flow of where they live talking about school helping with dinner knowing when to make themselves scarce they know they are home I like it.

Baby time one of each please 

Justin's show in New York I almost feel like there should be some drama there this story has been to calm for Brian and Justin

Author's Response:

Okay, I'm going to say that Gus went to dinner with the everyone else but I just didn't mention him by name. That's night not be strictly true but that is my story and I'm sticking with it!  I think Ben will get some of his money back frm the sale of the comic book store contents but not $6,000.  He will need to get the rest of the money from Mikey's paychecks at his new job.  Where do you suppose MIkey might get a job??????  Who might his mother beg to give him a job????  I think when people really love someone it is sometimes hard to push them to expand their limits, they want to protect them and take care of them.  Like you I have seen it happen.  It happens for noble motives but it happens.  I think B&J try their best to treat Kevin the same way they treat Gus.  That might get more difficult as Gus gets older.  Kevin helping with the babies may help his self esteem.  Might be a little angst in the next chapter.  I agree that we need a little drama, I have been thinking about that, you are in mind again.  Thanks my friend for your comments, they always make me think!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Elaine (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2016 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 10

Hey there. I can't seem to sign in for some reason since the roll over to .net. Not sure why not. Oh well.

Did my usual happy dance seeing the update!! Fantfriggintastic chapter! 

Am starting to wonder if Joan wil begin to thaw a bit. If she finally realizes her lonliness is due to her own actions, her own judgments. Hopefully the care she's receiving will eventually get her to stop drinking, and she'll have even a small epiphany, without the haze of alcohol. Perhaps the boys will eventually be able to show her how truly happy they are and she'll appreciate what B&J have done for then rather than be in fear of what they'll do to them. Or...........she'll just remain the heinous bitch she is. ;)

And then there's Micheal. to say he's in trouble is an understatement! YIKES! He brought it all upon himself though. Really glad to see that Ben has come to the realization that he also was an enabler to Micheal's way of thinking. Hopfully this will be a turn around for them, but for some reason..........I just don't see it. LOL. I think Micheal will always be a snivelling little whiny bitch whio will always need his ass wiped for him rather than do it himself. 

Excellent update!! wonderful interactions with all the kids! Everyone encouraging Kevin is terrific. He's come so far!! It's a part of this story that I'm loving so very much! 

thanks again!! 

Cheers,

Elaine

Author's Response:

Hi Elaine, sorry you are having trouble signing in to the .net site. You do need to enter your password the first time you sign in to .net.  Do you have the "Contact Us" option at the top of the page.  If you have that option let the admin know you need help signing on, maybe they can tell you what your password is or reset it.  Glad you enjoyed the update, sorry I made you wait so long for it.  I think there is more drama coming from Joan.I don'tthink Ben is going to back down on his demands for Mikey.  Ben relizes he has enabled Mikey to ecade adult responsibilities.  I enjoy the Gus/Kevin story line, glad to know you love it!!

Hope you get your signon issues resolved.  Thanks for reviewing!!!!!!!  Bill

 

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2016 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 9

Good plot development chapter. Michael is such an idiot.

:)

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2016 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 7

I never thought I'd say it but I can relate to Joan here. Fell a year ago and broke a collar bone.

:)

Author's Response:

I had a friend who broke his collarbone a few years ago.  That gave me the idea for Joan's injury.  I hope the injury is the only way you relate to Joanie.  Bill

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2016 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 5

Via speed reading, this is truly going to be an interesting story.

:)

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2016 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 3

Me can tell this is going to be a very good story.

:)

Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2016 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

When things calm down I plan to come back and read this one. But for now this has to do so I can let you know I'm thinking about you.

:)

Author's Response:

! appreciate the good thoughts and the review!  Bill

Reviewer: BlueButterfly (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2016 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 10

Glad Joan got assigned to someone who won't take her bull.

Sadly, it dosn't sound like Mikey learned anything. He's still buying toys?! And it sounds like he's just playing along to bide time until Ben lets his guard down. "He hoped that things would settle down and Ben would relax some of his demands." Seriously? At least Ben is starting to open his eyes that Mikey is not an equal. He's still Deb's little boy. A husband shouldn't have to make rules for his spouse.

Author's Response:

I don't think the Joan situation is settled yet.  Mikey may hope that Ben relaxes his demands but I'm not thinking that will happen any time soon.  It may be time for Mikey to grow up a little.  Glad you enjoyed the chapter, thanks for the review!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2016 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 10

I'm  glad that Michael is being forced to face the music at last in this universe. Everything else is adorable as usual.

Author's Response:

I think Michael may finally have to grow up.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for the review.  Bill

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2016 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 9

I haven’t had the use of a PC for a while now.  I go all the way back to Claire.  There seems to be a total write off of her, and her needs.  In this chapter, B & J have made

very careful arrangements for Joan’s care.  We even hear that John and Peter, after a short time, intend to visit Joan.  What about their mother?  I am not trying excuse Claire, but she is just as much as their mother, as Joan is to Brian.   

 

Michael is probably not poor.  Collectors may not have cash. but they certainly can raise

cash by selling off their collectables.  When Brian refused to give him money, just look how easily Michael was able to sell some of his “stuff” and raise enough money to pay

his rent.  How much more “stuff” does Michael have that he can sell?  That is where all his money is. 

 

Thanks for these last 4 or 5 chapters.  The story rolls along just fine.  As a compliment to you, I did not miss reading any chapters.  I found a way.

 

DavidR 

Author's Response:

Glad to read your comments, I have missed hearing from you.  Glad you were able to stay up to date on the story.  Well Michael might have made some cash from his collectables if he hadn't left them unprotected.  Now the thief may make some cash from them.  I am glad you are still enjoying the story and thanks for the review!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2016 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 9

Makes my day when I see a new chapter posted:-)

Author's Response:

Thanks!!  Makes my day to see a new review!!!  Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2016 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 9

Poor stupid Michael . He is such a loser. Brian and Justin are great as all ways.

Author's Response:

You are correct, now that Michael left his collectables unguarded he is both porr & stupid. He is going to be in a lot of trouble when Ben find out what Michale did! B&J are an unbeatable team. Thanks for the review!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2016 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 9

Yay. Weekend reading. Happy girl again.

You know, a teensy weensy part of me almost wants to feel sorry for Micheal. Not so much for what he's going through, but because he's just so STUPID!! lol. I mean, one really should feel bad that someone is really capable of being just so oblivious to everything around then and so self involved. It cracked me up where he was so proud that he's going to be able to tell everyone that he managed his crisis on his own. DUDE!! Your like 35!! I should bloody well hope so! LOL!! Poor baby lost his toys. I have very little patince for people thqat have no common sense. A person doesn;t necessarily have to be book smart, but those without common sense....drives me inseane. Micheal in this....wow!! would send me over the edge! :)

Joan is in for an interesting time of it. My heart melted when John and Peter explained how thery were beginning to understand Joan more and that they wanted to visit etc. Those boys are amazing and I know that B&J had a major part of their vastly imporved attitude towards life and those in it. Amazing and very inpressive.

Exceelent chapter as per usual. Am always excited to have an update, particularly over the weekend when I can legitimately take the time to read rather than sneaking it in while at work. (I really don't mind that either. ;)  )

cheers,

Elaine

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed this chapter.  I thought about having Mikey's precious action figures not being worth much when he went to sell them or just havng them stolen.  Either way he is a loser.  I know someone who used to say common sense wasn't very common, which is kind of true.  I suspect Ben is NOT going to be very happy with his husband,  Mikey may finally have to grow up some.  John & Peter are good kids, kind of amazing since their mother is such a shit.  Those Kinney genes do let people rise aboce their troubled lives if they get some encouragement.  I think maybe Joan issues may be interesting for a bunch of people.  Happy that I don't have to feel guilty about taking you away from your work!!  Thanks for always reviewing!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2016 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 9

Wow 4 chapters so fast I feel like I should pay you. I know not to expect that especially since one day soon it will get warm and your garden will again scream your name. One can dream even if one knows better.

I loved Justin noting the same expression on Joan and Brian's face it actually made me laugh.  Loved protective Brian in the parking garage. I like how Peter and John know just how good they have it now but still wish their grandmother had some happiness in  her life. 

Michael Ugggg I am almost glad he got robbed sad that it will affect Ben but it seems like just what he deserves. 

I love what they are getting for Jennifer for Christmas and I can't wait to see what everyone else gets.

Babies I can't wait to find out what sex the twins are still hoping for one of each.

thanks again for writing so much so fast I almost note the almost feel guilty for asking for more soon

Author's Response:

You do pay me with all your reviews!!!  I do want you to know that the weather here in the Pacific Northwest has been warmer than normal with lost of sunshine.  So I want you to know that I have been working in the garden.  I have had to mow my lawn 6 times already this year.  Broke several records for high temps in April but I still got you your 4th story for April.   It was by the skin of my teeth but it still posted in April! 

I thought that little Brian & Joan have similarities and their reaction was pretty funny.  I think Brian can help being protective Brian, he loves his Sunshine and wants him to be safe.  Ben is not going to be very happy with his husband.  Perhaps Mikey will finally start to grow up and accept adult reponsibilities.  I bet Jennifer will love all her gifts too.  I think we may find out the sex of the twins in the next chapter.  Always happy to hear from you.  You were my inspiration for getting this chapter polished up and posted yesterday.  Some challenges do get things accomplished.  Thanks for you continued support!!!!!!!  My review numbers are down so I appreciate my loyal reviewers even more.  Bill

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2016 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 9

I really feel sorry for Michael...in a way. He created his own problems but he was trying to make an effort to make it right. Hopefully the police can catch the thieves and he can finally tell Ben the truth about everything. 

The boy's visit with Joan should prove to be very interesting. Maybe she can keep her ill thoughts to herself for once.

Author's Response:

You are a nice person to feek sorry to Mikey.  You seem to be in the minority there.  Even I felt a little bad when I wrote about the robbery.  Not much good news comng for Mikey in the nexy chapter but maybe a path to growing up and accepting adult reponsibility.  I wouldn't count on Joan becming too loving and giving, even on pain medication,  Thanks for your support, you know I love to get reviews!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2016 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 9

My dear Sweet Baboo: Enjoyed this chapter quite alot. At last Brian told his mother how things were going to be and she agreed to his demands, that she did finally speak to Justin and even smiled when Brian said Justin was sometimes annoying. She may not like the caregivers and senior day care, but I think she was really frighten by her injury and no one to to help her for three days. I hope things go well, she really has no one. Karma has finally zapped mikeys ass and no one deserves  it more, he has lost his toys and taken money without telling Ben--and basically no one cares what happens to him, he has called wolf to many times. I thought it was quiet generous that Justin is having Joan's house cleaned and that he sent flowers to her things move slow with Joan and Justin and that's a good thing.My sweet I loved this chapter and can't wait for an update. Love you, your Sally. 

Author's Response:

Darling Sally, always so happy to see your comments!!!!  Joan didn't have a lot of options so she agreed.  We'll have to wait and see how that works out.  She had lots of time to think about her life spending all that time stuck in the tub.  Michael is going to have to do some growing up.  I think Ben is going to lay down some demands.  Justin is a good guy and he made sure Brian knew he was firmly on his side.  Thanks for your review!!!!!!!  Your sweet Baboo!!

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2016 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 9

Well now, Michael is in a 'shit load' of trouble. It's not good that someone stole from him but Karma can be such a bitch and he is about to suffer some serious karma. Can't wait to read the upcoming consequences of his quite childish and immature decisions. Not paying his rent is bad enough but not paying his business insurance just to buy his 'toys' is totally idiotic. He really is getting what he deserves. Ben, however doesn't deserve what's coming - hoping to see him lose his cool (even it's just a little bit) - it would do Michael good to realize everyone is not going to come to his rescue and he's going to have to pay for his bad decisions - or if they do help he should still be held accountable - it's well past time for him to grow up.

Jennifer is going to get such a lovely Christmas present - and Jennifer being Jennifer will recognize the love and care that will go into the carve jewellery box and definitely appreciate it.

Author's Response:

I think Ben is going to have some demends for Mikey.  May be time for him to grow up or face serious consequences.  I think you are correct about Grandmom Jen loving her gift from Patrick & Kevin.  I imagin she will like the jewelry too.  Always good to hear from you.  Thanks for the review.  Bill

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2016 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 8

I suspect Michael's woes aren't over--and they shouldn't be. Good for Deb for finally saying "no" to Michael and looking out for herself. I can't imagine Ben's going to be happy when he finds out why Michael needed to withdraw so much money from their account. If Michael's unwilling to sell any of his valuables, there's no way he'll be able to rent another storefront. He's seriously deluded if he thinks Brian (and Justin) are going to lend him money, much less give to him.

Good for Brian for making Marilu sweat. The parish may be revising their optinion of St. Joan if they have to put up with her all day, every day. It would serve them right.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks again for this wonderful story.

Karynn, aka eureka1

Author's Response:

I'm sure you are correct about Michael, more woes to come.  I think Brian and Justin's generousity made her realize her son should be helping her not vice versa.  Hard to predict how valuable Mikey's collectables are and how much is his wishful thinking.  B&J have enough outlays of money they are not looking for more.Marilu got a good lesson in the world being round, what goes around, comes around.  I think Brian was being sarcastic bout how Joan is viewed at Good Shepherd.  Thanks Karynn for all the reviews, you know I love to read them.  I am happy to know you are still enjoying the story!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2016 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 6

Thank you for this heartwarming Thanksgiving chapter! With their announcement of twins, Brian and Justin added even more cause for celebration.

I love how Brian and Justin, followed by Jen, did their best to make Gus, Peter, John--and Kevin--know that they would be loved just as much as before, that the twins would only add to the love everyone would receive. They are, indeed, a "family of love".

Looks like the Kinney household will be hosting future Thanksgiving dinners. Brian may protest, but I think he's secretly pleased. He like to do good deeds; he's just uncomfortable with praise.

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the Turkey Day celebration, lots of people, lots of food.  I think it was important to let the "boys"know the twins were not going to replace them.  I think Kevin is used to being taken care of so he is happy to think there are going to be new babies that he can help care for.  Brian probably realizes this was not a one time event and has made his peace with it.  As long as he can "disappear" when he has had enough I think you are correct, he is pleased by it.  Thanks for catching up on reviews as well as reading!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2016 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 4

What a marvelous chapter!

I like how Brian firmly dealt with Joan in regard to Claire. Carole was right to distinguish between Joan and Jen. Jen's the real mother than Joan doesn't care to be.

Squeeing with happiness over the twins for Justin and Brian. :)

I love the way Justin insisted on hearing what happened to Peter at school directly from Peter. He knows he can trust Peter to tell him the truth (vs. the administrators who might slant the story to suit their own interests).

Justin and Brian stay strong in their anti-bullying stance, not accepting any excuses from school administrators, Joe, or Joe's parents. Sad that Frank has molded his son into a bully in his own image, one who's 'forceful' to get his own way. Without intervention, Joe's not going to change; it may already be too late.

Wow! Those mighty women: Cynthia, Jennifer, and Alice! Cynthia makes the best suggestion about approaching Harkins' Tires chief competitor to advertise for them. She delights in telling Frank that he's no longer a Kinnetik client.

The extended family and Kinnetik employees, as well as many parents of Peter's classmates all rally behind the Peter, Justin, and Brian, just as they should.

I'm behind in reading my favorite QaF stories, of which yours is definitely one. The upside is that I have four more chapters of reading enjoyment before I'm caught up. Yum!

Author's Response:

Brian usually doesn't have any trouble lettng his mother know how he feels.  Joan mostly lives in her own reality that doesn't really translate well to real life.  Justin has had some unpleasant experience with bullying and school adminstrators so he was smart to go to the source for his information.  The ladies are always looking out for B&J.  I think it will be interesting to see B&J dealing with twins.  Hope you enjoy all the chapters as you catch up on the story.  Thanks for the review!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2016 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 8

Now Marilu and Joan totally deserve each other.....hope they make each other's life hell...... Michael, Michael, Michael - can't wait until Ben finds out - I wonder if he'll lose his 'cool' - would definitely like to see that. Really enjoying Ted's friendship and loyalty to the boys and very happy to see that Debbie is standing up to Michael - about time. Looking forward to the next instalment.

Author's Response:

I think both of them having to deal with snarky Brian may be punishment enough for them.  I think there is a pretty good chance of Ben losing his cool!!!  I think Debbie's other "sons" easing her financial burden may have opened her eyes a little to Mikey's shortcomings and need to grow up and stand on his own two feet.  Thanks for taking time to review!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2016 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 8

I can't wait until Ben finds out Mikey withdrew all of that money!

Author's Response:

I don't think Ben will be very understanding about what his husband did!  Thanks for the review!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2016 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 8

Wow 3 in a month and I did not expect this one until next week if it happened at all. So thank you make me almost want to ask for a fourth but I will just be happy with 3. I don't see Joan dealing very well with a stranger helping her out. And my obvious and only complaint with this chapter way too much Mikey and Ben is going to kill him or if he is smart sell Michael's toys to get back the money my bet is that money was for something and not to get Michael's rent paid. Kind of hope Ben just leaves and first he takes Michael of the account. I like the present Ted, Blake and Emmett are getting Deb it's a great idea.  I wonder what the boys will think when Brian and Justin tell them about Joan. I loved how Justin kept up a stream of calming babble because he knew that Brian just needed to know he was there and that was the best way. Can't wait for more thanks again for the 3

Author's Response:

I am glad not to have disappointed you.  I believe you are correct about Joanie but what will the solution be???  Ben kills Mikey - that would be an interesting plot twist.  I'll have to think about that.  He could sell all the "collectables" for his defense fund.  You are right about the money in the joint account having a purpose - like paying the house bills.  New stove, new counters and door fronts, Debbie will be in heaven.  I think John & Peter actually love their grandmother and will be concerned about her. She has been a big part of their lives even if it wasn't always a purely pleasant part.  Glad you enjoyed at least part of thei chapter.  Alway look forward to reading your comments!!!!  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!     Bill

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2016 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 8

This was a fun read, especially of Justin and Brian over Joanie.

Can't wait to hear of Ben takes to Mikey wiping out their joint bank account, hope Ben gains some sense.

Love how Ted stood up to Mikey, he is such a "shite".

Love how you brought back Marilu, and Brian remembering her.

Fantastic update, thanks for sharing!

Always your fan, JoAnn

Author's Response:

Hi JoAnn, happy to know you enjoyed this chapter.  I don't think Ben will be thrilled to have his money (mostly) not only paying household expenses but also the rent on Mikey's store.  Ted has gotten much more sure of himself.  And Marilu remembered Brian!!!!  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2016 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 8

LOL!! I had to laugh when the Social Services rep was none other than Marilu! funny that you brought her back in. Perhaps with all this she'll figure out exactly what type of person Joan really is! And when Brian told her that many in the parish considered her a saint...bwahaha! You must've been chuckling yourselfwhen you wrote that.

Micheal....well we all keep saying that Micheal is just micheal, but really....he's gone completely over the top now! He has this sense of entitlement that is terrible. Between you me and the lampost...that is one of my pet peeves i people. when they think they deserve things, or opportunities or even forgiveness. Drives me insane!!

The way he treats people is deplorable, yet he expects then to help him. He insinuated once again that ted may not be trustworthy, yet turns around an hour later asking for a hand out. (via Brian) and still insults him. Ugh...

And poor Deb! I mean really...how pathetic is this man. running to mommy for help! Buying more bloody toys, then draining his and Ben's joint account. I think somehow that in particualr will turn around and bite him in the ass!

Once again, I'm here with verbal diahhrea. Sorry. 

Excellent chapter. It went by so quickly! 

cheers

Elaine

Author's Response:

Hi Elaine, always happy to see your comments.  I did chuckle about Brian's description of his mother.  Michael seems to be doing his best to alienate everyone in his life.  I don't think Ben will be very understanding when he finds out Mikey hit the joint accoint for his store rent.  Glad you enjoyed the latest chapter.  Thanks for all your support, I lOVE reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2016 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 8

Happy, happy, happy.  I love your story and this chapter gave us a lot.  It's nice that B&J are paying off Deb's mortgage.  She deserves not having to work so hard.  Joanie - while we didn't get to see much of her, she figured prominantly.  She's still got her nose in the air, not wanting people to know about her drinking habits.  After all the work Marilu went to getting Joanie set for recuperation, do you think Joanie will appreciate it?  Then you threw Mikey at us.  The nerve of him asking his mother for money, for staying home instead of opening the store just so he could by more toys!  First he tries to get Brian to 'loan' him money by going through Ted.  Fortunately Ted has more sense.  I wonder what will happen when Ben finds out he withdrew the money from their joint account?  Things do not bode well for Mikey.  Your story makes me very happy!!!!

Author's Response:

Hello my friend, I do not see Joanie being happy about anything that is being done for her.  I have a suspicion it is not all going to work out as planned.  Mikey is spreading happiness and joy where ever he goes.  I am thinking Ben is going to be less than pleased about the outlay of cash from their "joint" account.  Thanks for the nice review, always glad to hear from you!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2016 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 7

Mikey is still a B-----d, always complaining about how much of Brian's money Justin spends.  Don't think even if Mikey was shown a bank balance of Justin's he still would insist that Brian gave it to Justin.  So love how Brian stood up for himself and Justin,but as usual it flew right over Mikey's head.  Blake was right onto Mikey's verbal assult regarding Ted,supporting him and stating how ethical an effecient he is with his job, also letting Mikey know that they are friends as well as Ted being an employee of Brian's. Like some other readers I don't understand Ben's attraction to Mikey,especially with Mikey being so selfish and rude.

The boys can't seem to get a break, now Joanie. Can't see her going back and living alone.  Going to be some hard times when it comes towhere she will go.

I'm with Brian on Justin's decision in letting Linz help him with the mural. Know he has good intentions but I don't trust Linz.  Even with her therapy, I have a feeling she would still stab you in the back and especially now that she and the rest of the family knows about the Twins. Hate to say I expect the worst from her,plus Mikey.

Fantastic update, plus the whole fic.  Thanks for sharing!

JoAnn

Author's Response:

Hi JoAnn, always great to hear from you.  Mikey operates in a different universe than the rest of us.  Reality has little meaning to him.  I think Brian's words may have made a little chink in Mikey's self delusion armour.  I think Ben enjoys having someon dependent on him and knows Brian has no romantic interest in Michael.  The options of where Jona can go are very limited.  Justin likes to look for the good in people and Brian is always suspicious.  Might be a good idea to be a little suspicious of Lindsay's motives but maybe it will work out well for everyone????   Glad to know you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2016 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 7

The Joan situation is scary.  I'm so glad to that Brian told Michael off.  I don't trust Lindsay's motive in wanting to help Justin.

Author's Response:

Let's be honest, everything about Joan is scary.  Hope it penetrated into Mikey world.  Justin thinks the best, we will have to wait and see how that painting together works out.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2016 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 7

My Sweet Baboo, this chapter was terrific! As sure as death and taxes mikey was once again an ass. The way he talked to Ted, it was apalling that anyone even speaks to that clown. I thought that Kevin was so cute when telling his mom and dad about the babies, how they would be his cousins  and the uncles said he could help. The Kinneys and the Taylors have shown such love and care and Kevin justs blooms when they are together. I guess I'm a cynic, I think Lindz is only being nice to Justin to please Brian so he will take her side on some hidden agenda. As for Joan I feel bad for her she pushes everyone away, at the same time I hurt for Brian--he tries but she won't give an inch, I guess there is always hope. More chapters please. Love, your Sally       

Author's Response:

Darling Sally, Always happy to hear from you!  We can always count on Mikey although a review on another site was extremely unhappy with my take on Mikey.  I enjoy the Kevin character a lot, he is all about love!!!!!  Kevin is used to needing help so I think it is a big thrill fro him to have an opportunity to help.  I think we are all wondering about Lindsay and what her plans are.  Justin is being Justin and looking on the sunny side of the street.  More on Joan in the next chapter.  I think  your mother is always yur mother even if you wish that was not true!!!  Thanks for all your comments and support!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Sweet B

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2016 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 7

great update-   Poor Brian-   he dislikes his mother but is the only one who can help-  Of course, his mother hates him so it should be interesting

Author's Response:

I think the Brian & Joan saga could be very interesting.  You are correct there is no one else to deal with Joan.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2016 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 7

Thanksgiving and the news of the twins was wonderful news for everyone. Being congratulated hugged and kissed is it any wonder Brian took off before it could start again with all the good-byes. Michael Michael Michael. Not only is he going to lose Brian's friendship, but probably Ted's too and if not careful maybe his husband. I'm with Brian, Lindsay helping on the murals is definitely asking for trouble. Have a feeling Brian and Justin are going to be having a house guest for a short while. And Christmas is right around the corner. Think there will be a change in Joan's thinking once she sees how Brian lives his life with Justin?

Author's Response:

It was good Thanksgiving and I agree Brian took as much as he could and needed time away from hugs and emotions.  Mikey is Mikey.  I think LIndsay and Justin paiting murals could prove to be very interesting.  Hmmmmmmmmmmmm  Joan staying with B&J now there is a surpirse plot twist!!!!!!   That could be really interesting.  Gald you enjoyed the latest chapter.  Thanks for taking time to review!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2016 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 7

Michael, Michael, Michael... It sounds like Thanksgiving was a success, and everyone is thrilled about the twins, well almost everyone...

Maybe with Joan being in the tub for days, it might be a good time for her to check into rehab...

Great Update!

Hugs ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Mikey is never changing.  It is nice to have things in life that we can count on!  I'm not sure that Joan is incapacitated enough for them to force her into rehab.  Nothing wrong with her legs, she can still run and kick.  Glad you enjoyed the update. 

Hugs back,  Bill

Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2016 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 7

I love of your stories there are too many angst fics out there between the boys I want to thank you for that anywho . This chapter was awesome I love how Blake put Michael in his place and Lindsey lol what is she up too I got a bad feeling about this 

Author's Response:

This is a low angst story, glad you enjoy that.  The problem is Michael keeps excaping from his plave when people put him there.  I agree Lindsay needs careful watching!!  Thanks for taking time to review, I appreciate it!!!!!!!!   Bill