Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2019 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 3
good one
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2016 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 3
I just caught up with this sequel. So much going on. I've never actually watched NCIS so I only know the characters from your previous story. It's great that the old family home is filled with children, love and laughter. It's also great 'evil' got what 'evil' deserved - for all 3 of them. Enjoyable read.
Author's Response: Thanks for the great comment. A house is not a home without laughter. NCIS is one of my favorite shows. I love writing crime stories.
Jane
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2016 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 2
One other thing, wasn't Gibbs a Marine?
Author's Response: Thank you YumYum for pointing that out. I fixed it to say marines.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2016 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 2
Wow! What a lot going on. First Gibbs and Tony adopt a baby girl, then Mel and Lindsay have a fatal accident leaving Brian and Justin with Gus. We learn that Lindsay and Mel were having problems and Mel had a daughter. Those journals of Lindsay's should make for interesting reading. So that's two girls and a boy added to the family, wait three girls if you count Molly. You have everything wrapped up neatly and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'll post the next chapter tomorrow night. There are more surprises in the next one. This chapter had a lot going on. Thanks for the lovely review.
Jane
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2016 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 1
What a wonderful new story. I'm glad to see you were able to rescue Molly in this first chapter. Tony and Gibbs parents! Who would have thought. I look forward to reading the next chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely comment. I wanted Gibbs and Tony as parents. I think you will like the next chapters. There are a few surprises. I also wanted the kidnapping to take place in the first chapter. I hate to have crime take up a whole story.
Jane
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2016 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hi, Jane! Great to see you posting a new story! Just an FYI, I noticed we didn't have an NCIS category, so I created one and added it to your story. If you want me to add some characters from there, also, please let me know, and I will be happy to add those as well to our database. Thanks for posting this one here! ~Kim
Author's Response: Thanks Kim for doing this. I wanted this story to be more QAF but it didn't turn out that way.
Jane
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