Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2019 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Last chapter

So happy everything ended well and they are happy <3 

Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2019 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 14

Emmet is amazing like always. Calling Debbie on her bullshit. 

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2019 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Last chapter

loved i.. Thank you

Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2019 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Last chapter

Wow this was a perfect end to this story you have done yourself very proud. I loved the notes and the romantic way Brian was. I think Justin joining the hotline was brilliant and I would love to see a story about his time doing that and the people he gets to help like that younge man he talked getting kicked out of his home. Thank you for writing this story I think you have helped many by writing this. 

Author's Response:

I think I can be pretty proud of me about this story lol. I thought it could be a little too romantic for Brian to act this way, but as I always said my Brian is always more romantic than in the show. I always have the feeling that if he wanted to show his love, he could do many crazy things like this one lol. 

Justin joining the hotline was pretty much a sure fact from the beginning for me. Feeling better and building up a new life, he would try to make people realise that things can get better. 

I'm glad you liked my story and I hope that it could help some people maybe. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2018 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Last chapter

     Thank you so much for this wonderful story.  It isn’t so much

about your writing ability, but your wonderful creativity and some

of the very clever issues discussed and resolved.   It was very

important to me that Chris was given jail time.  The story righted a

QAF wrong. 

     So thanks again, and happy holidays.

DavidR

 

Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your very kind words. I tried to tackle those serious issues in the best way I can. They were sensitive ones and I tried to do my best. 

That's right that Chris didn't get what he truly deserved in the show. I wanted it to be different this time. 

Thanks for reading and happy holidays to you too. 

Audrey

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2018 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Last chapter

Audrey,  Thank you for this wonderful story.  Whenever or where ever you write, I am sure it will be fantastic.  You have a gift that many people do not have.  I am sure that when work allows it and your inspiration returns, you will write something amazing.  So I, also, wish you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your very kind words and your support. 

I hope that whenever I'll write again, it'll be as good as my previous stories. I don't know if I have a gift but I discovered that I love writing. 

My inspiration isn't good at the moment so I don't know when I'll be back here.

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you!

 

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2018 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Last chapter

Fantastic Story...i liked it very much.

Thank u for another romantic story of our Favorite Britin.

Merry Christmas to u too.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you loved it so much.

Thank you for all your support on every story I wrote, it means a lot :-)

Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2018 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 32

I could feel Justin’s nervous at facing Chris in court. I couldn’t blame him I think I would have been the very same. He was so lucky to have such amazing support of his lover friends and family there. I’m glad Chris got what he did it would have been terrible if he got away with it. You did an amazing job with this chapter. 

Author's Response:

I tried to make us feel Justin's nervousness the best I could. I think everyone would have been in the same state. 

He was very fortunate to have such great support, in this new family he got thanks to Brian. For the first time, he's surrender by other gay people who are opened and happy with who they are. He will make him proud to be who he is in the end. 

Thanks for your review ;-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2018 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 32

Dommage d'arriver au bout de cette histoire elle m'a vraiment plu. Après l'angoisse du procès c'est bien qu'ils soient aller sur la tombe de Michael , Brian avait besoin de cette fermeture et Justin a su trouver les mots. Merci pour ce chapitre en attendant le dernier sniff!!

Author's Response:

Je suis contente qu'elle t'ais plu mais toute bonne chose a une fin lol. Brian avait, en effet, besoin de clotûrer ce chapitre de sa vie et de faire partager cette partie de sa vie avec Justin. Avec le procès, l'enfermement de Hobbs et leur amour, ils peuvent vraiment recommencer une nouvelle vie à 2.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2018 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 31

A love confession How romantic...now that was a lovely update...thanks.

Author's Response:

It was about time for a love confession lol. Everything is going so perfectly between them now.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2018 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 31

C'était un très bon moment. Ta scène de sexe est super bien écrite et je sais que tu avais du mal avec ça.. Merci pour ce chapitre.

Author's Response:

Un moment plein d'amour et de joie. J'avais du mal effectivement mais à force, on prend le coup lol et j'ai aussi eu de super betas qui m'ont beaucoup aidé à m'améliorer pour ces scènes.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2018 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 30

Terrific update.  Great writing.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your kind words and for the review :-)

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2018 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 30

Thanks for the chapter.  I’ve enjoyed the way Brian and Justin

treat each other.  The love just flows and flows.  It is almost like a

Christmas story.

        But, but, but.

There is a dark cloud hanging over each chapter.  That black cloud

has a name:  Chris Hobbs.  I have to wonder what Chris’s reaction

is going to be when he is contacted by the police.  Oh I know, like

Justin, I’m sure Chris will blame it all on Justin.  I can deal with

that.  I am concerned that Chris is mean enough to now go after

Justin.  Is Daphne safe?  Is Jennifer and Molly safe?  Is Chris crazy

enough to hurt them?  That is why a see a black cloud.  Brian and

Justin are doing great, but there is possible bad things about to

happen.  Maybe?

Once again, thanks for the story.

DavidR 

Author's Response:

The love just flows as you said. They're finally happy after being sad and unable to think about love again. 

The dark cloud hanging will be solve soon, don't worry. We'll have the final word about Chris very soon.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2018 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 30

Hello, Audrey!  I have been very remiss in not reviewing with me being so busy, but first of all, I want to congratulate you on your 200th review! That's great!  And I also want you to know that I look forward to each chapter you post.  I love how caring and loving the two are toward each other.  I am holding my breath now, waiting to see if somehow Chris retaliates for what Justin did, but Justin was very courageous in going to the police.

I also want to say I admire how you are writing in a foreign language. I am sure that is not easy to do, but this story is both unique and entertaining.  Thank you for being one of our writers on here, Audrey.  We are glad you are here. :)  ~Kim

Author's Response:

Hello Kim! I'm glad to see you reviewing on my story. 

200 reviews is really amazing, I'm very happy of it :-). Brian and Justin are taking care of each other now after suffering on their own for a long time. Chris' topic will be solved soon lol, don't worry. Justin was very courageous to do it indeed but I think he felt the need to, to rebuild himself now.

Thanks for your amazing words about my writing. I'm doing my best but I also always had great betas to help me. It wouldn't be that good without Gloria and Dag Mar. I'm thankful to be a writer here :-)

Thank you very much Kim :-)

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2018 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 29

Thanks for update

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2018 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 29

That was beautiful, I loved them showing affection to each other as they walked down the street. I loved the boys reaction to them as well. It’s so great to see love like theirs it brings a smile to your face. 

Author's Response:

Now they're only sharing love after sharing their sadness over the phone. The boys reaction was good indeed and we'll make them free to be happy. I'm glad I made you smile.

Thanks for the review :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2018 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 29

It's good that Deb has come around.  Hope PIFA is in the card and Chris is punished.

Author's Response:

Debbie finally realised that she went too far and that Brian needs to be happy and in love. 

To know is Justin's future will be really brighter, you have to wait a little

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2018 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 29

C'était agréable de passer ce WE merveilleux avec eux. les quatre amis s'entendent bien et Debbie est heureuse aussi. Il ne reste plus qu'a attendre la punition de Hobbs.

Author's Response:

Oui ils ont passé un très bon moment ensemble, apprenant à se connaître et aimer de nouveau. Tout le monde est heureux pour eux même le réfractaire Emmett lol.

La punition va venir, ne t'en fais pas.

Bon dimanche et merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2018 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 28

It’s nice that both boys are feeling the love but I suspect trouble is ahead still

Author's Response:

It's nice for once indeed but why always think that new troubles might comes? lol. Maybe this time, things are going to really get better for our boys...

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2018 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 28

Has Emmett met Justin before?

Author's Response:

Hmm maybe, you'll see lol

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2018 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 28

This made me smile so much and laugh. They are so cute together. They are like giddy teenagers in love. I loved the gym scenes with the guys that was funny and the banter was perfect. I can’t wait for more of this incredible story. 

Author's Response:

I'm glad it made you feel happy. You're right, theu look like two teenagers falling crazy in love. They're cute and unable to take their hands off each other lol. It seems that they'll all get along pretty well. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2018 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

"Yeah, you don't want things to happen?" Justin uttered, shyly, looking at his feet.

Brian smiled, curling his lips in. Justin was just so cute at this moment and Brian felt a wave of love and tenderness rushed into him. 

SUCH A LOVING MOMENT...SO SWEET.

GREAT CHAPTER ...AS ALWAYS.THANK YOU

Author's Response:

For once I wanted them to have a sweet and loving moment with nothing to come between. They both needed a break and to feel love only.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2018 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 27

Super chapitre. Justin est prêt a porter plainte et tout avance avec Brian peut-être qu'il pourra lui trouver un travail pour payer PIFA ?

Author's Response:

Justin est enfin prêt à prendre des mesure contre Chris. Avec Brian, les choses avancent même vite et leur amour ne cesse de grandir. 

Hmm attends un peu et tu verras pour PIFA lol.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2018 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 27

I’m so glad that Justin opened up to his therapist about his feelings and what he intended to do about the attack he really needed to. Lol his mom was so funny telling him to use condoms that made me laugh. She was only be caring but it made me chuckle. I love that Justin helped Brian with his project I hope he gets to do more of that. They are so in love it is beautiful.

Author's Response:

Yes it's good for him that he found someone beside Brian, to talk with. I know, Jennifer being like every mum lol. Safety first lol. 

Their love is growing as they also become intimate, and it's gonna be healing for both of them.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2018 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 26

Happy chapter...lots of happiness...they are cute together..loving it.

Author's Response:

Finally an happy chapter for both of them. Happiness and love are starting to blossom between our two guys.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2018 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 26

J'ai beaucoup aimé ce chapitre. Ils se rapprochent de plus en plus et sont bien ensemble. J'espère que Justin trouvera la force de porter plainte. Et voyons comment il va gérer son désir de PIFA.et so financement.

Author's Response:

Ils se rapprochent de plus en plus et leur relation semble partir sur de bonnes bases. Comme tu le dis, ils sont bien ensemble. Ils se font confiance et arrive à se parler ouvertement.

Pour la plainte, je ne peux rien te dire lol, de même que pour le PIFA lol.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2018 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 26

Here's wishing that Justin manages to find a way to go to PIFA.

Author's Response:

Of course he will, don't worry.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2018 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 25

Thank you

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2018 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 25

Splendid ..very emotional chapter..thanks.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your kind words and your review :-)

 

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2018 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 25

Great chapter.   Finally they meet and start to move forward.  Terrific writing.

Author's Response:

Finally, they have a real meeting and were able to talk face to face and open up about hard things. They began a new chapter of their life together and they both needed this. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2018 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 25

Beau chapitre et Justin est en train de prendre les bonnes décisions : porter plainte et voir un psy. Avec Brian il sera prêt pour affronter tout ça.

Author's Response:

Justin est en train de réaliser qu'après cette attaque, rien ne s'arrangera. S'il veut continuer à vivre, il faut que Chris soit appréhender et qu'il se fasse aider. Son début de relation va l'aider à ouvrir les yeux, et bien sûr, Brian sera à ses côtés. 

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2018 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 24

    Terrific story, but like a many here, I just about had it with Chris.  I hope something is done and soon.  It is getting frustrating.  I don’t know what.  I don’t know how.  I do hope that whatever happens to Chris, Brian and Justin don’t get into serious trouble.

DavidR

Author's Response:

Don't worry about Chris, his time will come lol. I won't let him behind. 

Brian and Justin are on a good way, they'll be strong together. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2018 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 24

Great chapter.  Hopefully they will find some happiness.  Wonderful writing.

Author's Response:

Of course that now they finally met, things are going to get better for both of them. 

Thanks for the kind words about the writing and for your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2018 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 24

That was wonderful so emotional yet beautiful. I glad his mother understands now what her son was feeling and isn’t mad at him or anything. Brian turnitup to visit made me smile and their conversation was perfect they really did share some feelings and that was needed. I loved the song by the way a good Irish band so good on Brian for giving the mp3 to Justin I’m sure that lifted his spirits more then he could say. 

Author's Response:

Finally they meet and talk to each other. His mother understood and how could she mad at him? I think she would be mad at herself maybe. Brian and Justin exchanged for the first time face to face and their growing feeling s for each other already shown. 

The song will really help Justin to feel better and as you said Brian couldn't have say better words to comfort Justin. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2018 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 23

Nice that Brian and Justin text each other letting the other know they care.

Author's Response:

Yes they're keeping their bound with each other. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2018 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 23

Lovely update...so grateful they all are good for now...thank u.

Author's Response:

They're all good now and it will stay that way. They will help each other even more that they met in person. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2018 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 23

je suis contente que Justin aille bien après son agression qu'il n'y ait pas de maux irréversibles. Jennifer comprend qu'elle pourra faire confiance à Brian et l'aidera pour son fils. j'aime leur conversation par textos au moins ils restent en contact et Brian donne de la force à Justin pour se battre et continuer. J'ai hate de voir ce que va faire la police. Merci d'avoir publier aujourd'hui j'étais déjà en train de m'exciter parce ce que demain il y aurait la suite et quelle bonne surprise!! Bon dimanche et bonne semaine.

Author's Response:

Non il n'aura pas de séquelles graves. Je ne voulais pas lui infliger ça en plus lol. Jennifer réalise que Brian a été le seul en qui Justin a eu confiance et elle ne peut pas le rejeter et l'éloigner de son fils, au risque de perdre de nouveau Justin. 

Brian est le premier soutien de Justin depuis le début, et cela va continuer bien sûr. Les choses vont se mettre en place pour Chris Hobbs. 

Les chapitres seront publier le dimance dorénavant. 

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2018 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 22

Omg..i was so happy..that i forgot to add more in my last review..lol...wow..now that was one dramatic turn of events...i liked it very much..so romantic.

Author's Response:

No problem lol. It was dramatic but as you said, it ended being pretty romantic too surprisingly. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 22

Could Hobbs finally get what he deserves?

Author's Response:

He will don't worry.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2018 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 22

OMG, I feel so sorry for Justin. I’m glad Brian was on time. Wonderful chapter, needed a  tissue. 

Author's Response:

Justin was lucky that Brian was on time to save him. I'm sorry, I didn't think about the warning tissue lol.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: britinmanor (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2018 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 22

Shame On You!  You forgot the TISSUE WARNING!  So very happy Brian found Justin in time. I hope nothing is wrong internally. At least anything more serious than broken ribs. But there needs to be something medically wrong in order for the police to get a conviction of assault. Sure, Chris didn't do much during the actual beating, but he ordered it, but he did hit Justin in the stomach and kicked him in the leg.  So Chris was a part of the beating bullies. I am so waiting for Chris and Company to get what should be coming to them. Maybe they could share a jail cell with a couple of queer bears. Ones who will know the exact reason the 'queer hating boys' are gracing that fine establishment.  hehe... (I know I sound vindictive)... but hey! I have the right to feel this way, and a girl has the right to dream.

I'm anxious to see Jennifer's reaction to this turn of events. I don't think she been a very supportive mother of a gay son, especially when she knows there have been problems of him being bullied in school. I'm sure we will have an outraged Debbie when she learns of the events that took place in Justin's life that night.

Thank you for this wonderful update, and so looking forward to the next chapter following this cliffhanger.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Author's Response:

I know I'm sorry, I didn't warn lol, but I didn't want to give the tone of the chapter too soon lol. Brian showing up on time is a way to redeem himself. He couldn't save Michael but he saved Justin as he always hoped to. 

We'll learn about Justin's state in the next chapter. For Chris and his band, things will change after this attack. Some decisions will be taken. 

About Jennifer, I know you can see her as not very supportive mom but Justin is also of age and helping him against his will isn't easy. You can't really help someone if they don't want to and the rare time Jennifer tried, Justin pushed her away. 

Thanks for your review Cathy. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2018 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 21

Heeeeeeey you left me hanging girl I was waiting for the big meet up. They are so cute flirting like that over text. I can feel the nerves heck I’m nervous for them. I love how Justin is with his sister as well it’s great they get along. Please hurry and show us them meetitup. 

 

Brilliant chapter x

Author's Response:

I love cliffhangers you know that lol. I wanted a little more suspens lol. They start a relationship more or less dating over text and they feel happy about it. They are both nervous of course. I like to write about Justin and his sister in this story. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: britinmanor (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2018 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 21

Good chapter. Brian is becoming more upbeat than we've been seeing him in past chapters. I suppose Justin is stressing over what to wear tonight, too. It would be awesome if there was some way Mikey could give Brian a sign. (Maybe Deb has found something in Mikey's room and never gave it to Brian before.)  I don't know... I just believe something needs to show Brian that Mikey wouldn't want him pining away and putting his life on hold. To quit holding onto him. Wanting to see him live a whole life without hanging on to the death of Mikey's memory, which Brian desperately needs to let go of. He's got to quit talking to pictures of Mikey.  It's not healthy. It's been why too long. Brian apparently needs counseling. I lost my husband of 28 years, six years ago, who suddenly died one morning from a heart attack while still in bed. He had had a physical the day before, and was given a clean bill of health. If I found myself still acting the way Brian is towards Mikey's death, my children would have me committed. Maybe the arrival of Justin will help him heal. Let him see there's more to life than hanging onto Mikey. He desperately needs a wake up call.

So I'm looking forward to the next chapter and the meeting and developing friendship of Brian and Justin.

Thank you for this awesome and informative story.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Author's Response:

Justin is also stressing about his outfit, of course lol. I agree with you, it's about for Brian to let it go and open himself to someone new. Times flied and keeping a feeling of guilt won't bring Mikey back and will just prevent him to move forward. Brian has finally a reason to go on through Justin. Maybe Brian would have need some counseling too. 

I'm so sorry about the loss of your husband and what you might went through after this. Even if it's hard to handle, you have too keep going at least for the persons who are still here, around you. 

Thank you for your review and your kind words :-)

Audrey

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2018 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 21

CLIFFHANGER !!!!!, But, that's ok it just makes it more special when the next chapter gets posted.  Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Cliffhanger again, I know lol. I'm devilish lol. I love them, I can't help. I promise the next chapter is the meeting one lol.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2018 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 21

Yaaaayyyyy cant wait...lol..awesome chapter.

Author's Response:

I know, be a little more patient lol. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: britinmanor (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2018 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 20

Very happy Ted voiced his opinion and that Brian took him up on it. It's a step in the right direction for both Justin and Brian. It's been nine years since Mikey died, and I don't think it's healthy for Brian that he keeps talking to pictures of him. That's too long to have your life on hold. It's like Brian is half dead. So, it's good that he not only gave Justin his phone number, but they are gonna finally meet. Something they both really need in their life right now.

Maybe Brian can talk some sense into Justin that he needs to go to the police for help if the school continues to do nothing to help one of their students. Chris can't be allowed to keep doing what he is doing, expecially now when he has taken his hatred for Jusin outside of the college grounds. What if Chris catches Justin someplace when there wouldn't be any help for Justin if he needed it?  Nobody did anything in canon, and we know how well that turned out. And with his actions getting worse, Justin needs to get a stop put to it.

Maybe Justin and Brian should seek the help of a therapist.

Will Debbie be in the diner? What will her reaction be when she sees Brian with Justin, and can tell there's feelings between the two men?

Thank you so much for this update. I didn't realize that you updated this amazing story every Monday, until you mentioned it in your response to my last review. So thank you for that. You just made my Monday's brighter.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Author's Response:

Brian made the good choice for listening to Ted. It was about for him, to follow his heart and accept to bring someone else in his life. 9 years went by since Michael's death and as you said it's like Brian is half dead, keeping this grudge on himself for not being to save his friend. They both needed this meeting to happen at least. 

We'll see what's going to happen for their meeting. Will fate be on their side? Many things will happen. I can't answer to much to your questions and say if you're right or wrong in your review lol. I have to keep the mystery around this chapter. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Audrey 

 

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2018 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 20

Cliffhanger !!!!!!!!!!!!!  But, finally they will meet.  Absolutely wonderful.

Author's Response:

Cliffhanger once again, I love them too much lol. Finally, it was about time for them lol. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2018 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 20

Ah enfin ! Ted et emmett ont vraiment pousser Brian a faire quelque chose et finalement ça pourra faire du bien pour son boulot aussi puisque la situation de Justin le perturbe beaucoup. ils vont se rencontrer, j'espère que tout va bien se passer. Vivement lundi prochain!!!

Author's Response:

A leur manière, Ted et Emmett ont amener Brian à réfléchir et à se remettre en question. Il pense constamment à Justin et à comment lui venir en aide. Il commence à en tomber amoureux et il était temps que les choses avancent. 

Pour savoir si tout va bien se passer, rendez-vous lundi lol.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2018 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 18

Shame Brian can't share that Deb is coming around with Justin.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2018 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 19

Great update.  This story is so true to what must be happening to so many people in the world today who are facing such situations. 

Author's Response:

I'm glad that you think this story is true to what people might go through in real life. I tried to tackle these sensitive topics the best I could and in respectful way for the people who are going through this. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: purpledee (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2018 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 18

Hi, I really like this story.

I know this is fiction and I don't wish to be critical. However, you have set this story in college/university not high school.  All the protagonists are adults and as such Justin would easily have recourse through the police for assault, harrassment and vandalism. He has witnesses in Daphne and Molly.  Also a Dean of a college/university could not simply ignore these things happening in his college as this too would be illegal and would not only jepardize his reputation/job but also the college.

Sos I had to say that cos it was bugging me.

But I can't wait to read more!

Thanks

Deb

Author's Response:

Hi!

I know and I got your point. I didn't want my story to be set in High school for Justin to be older. I know that some actions I described sound more like High School and I know that it can't make sense at some point. About Justin having easy recourses, I agree but he has to be agree to use them. Same for the witnenesses. Daphne knows that Justin doesn't want to talk, and even if she doesn't understand it, she doesn't want to be the one who will reveal everything. It can be hard to understand but I think it can be a way of seeing things. Just like Brian and Michael who never talked and never did anything when they were young.

Don't worry, I have nothing about criticisms lol.

Thanks for your review :-)

Audrey

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2018 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 19

Ah I think we are about to take this from the phone to the outside

Author's Response:

Hmm you could be right lol. We have to wait and see lol, but they will meet one day of course.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2018 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 18

The story is going great..i like it...justim trusts brian i hope he soon will trust his mother too and tell her about his condition.

Author's Response:

Brian is the only person Justin really trusts. About his mother, it's going to take some time but maybe things will change. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2018 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 18

Time to make some changes.  If Deb can see where she was wrong, maybe Brian can do what he couldn't for Michael.

Author's Response:

Some changes are about to come. Deb finally recognise that she was wrong all those years and things will start to be better between her and Brian. For Brian, we'll see if he'll be able to do what he couldn't for Michael. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2018 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 18

C'était encore un chapitre intense. Après ce que Brian lui a dit j'espère que Justin va continuer a l'appeler et lui parler. Les choses changent avec Debbie aussi c'est bien.

Author's Response:

Un chapitre intense au niveau leurs émotions. Justin va continuer car Brian est le seul sur qui il peut vraiment compter. Les choses s'arrangent enfin avec Debbie, il était temps. 

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2018 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 17

Heart is bleeding...damn...emotinal chapter.

Thank you for the update..i hope brian can help justin...soon.

Author's Response:

Sorry for such an emotional chapter but Justin is slowly going into a dark place. Fortunately, Brian will try his best to make him feel better. Things will accelerate from then on. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2018 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 17

I can relate to Justin wanting it to just go away.  Can Brian help?

Author's Response:

I think, regarding the situation, we can all relate to Justin and his wish to see everything ends. You have to keep reading to knwo about Brian. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2018 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 17

😢😢😢😢😢💔💔💔 OMG Justin, sweet Justin I hate you were pushed that car. I can feel your dispear I have thought about doing what you did. Like you I didn’t because I didn’t want to do that to my family. I hope you get to meet Brian I think you need the comfort of his arms as well as his voice. I could feel Brian’s panic when the call wasn’t coming in. 

 

Such an incredible emotional chapter. Fantastic work x

Author's Response:

Justin is slowly pushed to his limits and who knows if he'll be alright from then on. Oh my sweet Vicki, I didn't know you went through that kind of thoughts yourself. Sorry for bringing such bad memories again to you. Things will kind of accelerate themselves from this chapter. Brian was really worried seeing Justin was late. 

Thanks for your nice words and for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2018 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 17

Wow c'était un chapitre intense!!! Heureusement Justin s'est arrêté à temps mais s'il y a une prochaine fois... J'espère qu'il va parler à Brian de ce qu'il a fait et qu'il arrivera à le convaincre de faire quelque chose contre Hobbs. Merci pour ce chapitre vraiment bouleversant. Bonne semaine.

Author's Response:

Effectivement, il a été aussi intense à écrire. Justin s'est arrêté car pour le moment, malgré tout, il a encore des choses qui le retienne. Leur conversation sera au prochain chapitre. Les choses vont s'accélerer suite à ce chapitre.

Merci pour ton commentaire. Bonne semaine à toi.

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2018 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 16

    Thank you for this terrific story.  Enough – now is the time for someone to take some action helping Justin. His locker fire is the last straw for me. This bullying is escalating, no surprise there.  Actually something needed to done a few chapters ago.

   Where is Jennifer? She knows there is a problem, then do something and now.  Brian is not doing the job he should be doing.  He probably has lots of people around him at the Phone Line.  There must be a social worker or even a line to the police. Turn Justin’s case over to them.  He should have done this the first time Hobbs physically abused Justin.  Even Daphne should do something.  What?  I don’t know.  Maybe go to the police or stand on the school steps and scream “BULLY”.  But do something.

   As you can see, your story has gotten to me.  Take that as a compliment it is meant to be.

DavidR

Author's Response:

Hello David. Thanks for your compliment on my story. 

Now, about Jennifer, she feels something is going wrong but how can you help when your son is closing himself to you, pushing you away? The more she insists to know,the more Justin is closing himself to her. She's going to be involved more soon. I would say that for Brian and Daphne is kind of the same thing. Brian is here to listen and advise but if Justin doesn't want to talk and reveal what he's living, he can't go against his will. It'll be a source of conflict between them by the way. Daphne is trying on her scale to do something but again, Justin is the only one who can decide to speak and take actions against Chris. 

Moreover, when writers have special ideas for their story, they might sound not always logical lol. I had precise ideas I wanted to deal with Justin and on the way the guys would meet so I have to build my story around this, even if it can sound surprising that nobody is moving. I watched the movie of Randy "Bang bang you're dead" and got some inspirations from it. People are most of the time, very alone in those bullying cases. 

Anyway, thanks for your long review and I'm glad my story has gotten to you. 

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2018 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 16

OMG, poor Justin. I hope someone will help him soon.

Author's Response:

We all hope that someone will finally reach him enough, for our blond to accept any kind of help. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2018 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 16

OMG I want to cry for Justin, why oh why are people so cruel to himself he has done nothing wrong. He is kind, caring and loveable. Chris needs to be thought a lesson in a big way. Poor Justin feels so alone even though he has Daphne and Brian. 

You have done such an amazing job of showing the emotions here I could feel it so strong gripping my heart. 

Author's Response:

Of course he did nothing wrong but some people in this world are just cruel and stupid. Chris needs a big lesson but will he have it? You have to keep reading lol. Justin is really lost at the moment, feeling terribly lonely even with Brian and Daphne by his side.

Thank you very much for your kind words and for your review :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2018 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 16

Such a sad chapter, but this happens in RL and you wrote it so well.

Author's Response:

Unfortunately this happens in real life and it's horrible and hard to think that sometimes, no one seems to care about the distress of other people. 

I'm happy you loved the way I wrote it and thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2018 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 15

What a prick..that hobbs is..Poor molly..justin is ashmed and scared ..he needs to speak up...he had to stand up for his own safety and now also for molly..what if it happens again...jeez...i hate people like hobbs...great chapter..molly and justin are very cute sibllings.

Thank u for the update.

Author's Response:

Hobbs is an horrible prick indeed. Justin is ashamed you're right, that's also the reason why he's not talking yet. I think everyone hate people like Hobbs. I loved writing about Molly and Justin's bond. I never did it before but I enjoyed it. 

Thanks for your review :-)