Can't wait for more.

Wow small steps but in. Reality huge steps to reconciliation and forgiveness

I'm glad that Jennifer's visit worked out.  With Aiden there how else could it go!

It's good that Mikey is being supportive.  I still worry about Lindsay, but having Mel there to keep an eye on her sounds like a good idea.

Good chapter.  Brian still has to fight his feelings, but I feel he will come around.  Well, at least I hope so.  Great writing.

Well, the meeting with Jennifer went better than I thought it would.   At least Craig is no longer in the picture.  

really, really like this story.  Can't wait for the next chapter lol.

Did Jennifer ever get to see her son and grandson?  It's a shame that Brian is not as patient as he should be with Justin.  Loved this chapter.

I was so happy to see this new chapter.  I'm not sure I'd trust Lindsay considering the length she was going to to get Aiden.  I'm not sure Mel does either, since she was kept in the dark.  It's good to know that Brian is baby friendly.  Going to see Justin's mom will only work if Craig is not there.

You do love finishing on a little cliffhangers. So I wonder why Brian is at Jennifer’s without Justin? I cannot be,I’ve Brian and Justin let Lindsay off so easy though

Seems Brian is getting the hang of taking care of two babies. I think Daph better move in. It isn't always going to be peaceful and quiet. He'll have the family to help, but with Justin on crutches he's going to need an extra pair of feet to come and go.

I would have refused Lindsay coming to the loft and just take him back to Mel. What is she going to do apologize? Won't mean anything. She's still going to try and get Aiden by any means possible. Wouldn't trust her.

I'm glad that Brian decided to have Lindsay talk with both Brian and Justin together and have Daphne take care of Aiden elsewhere.   I don't trust Lindsay at all, and I for sure know that Brian doesn't either.  

Great chapter.  Now the ugly that is Lindsay will appear.  Love this story.  Sorry that RL has gotten in your way, but we will all be patient and wait for each update.  We all have to face RL even if we prefer fiction.  LOL

I really want to know what Lindsay is going to invent. it's good that Brian can count on Debbie and Michael and that everything will be fine for them with Aiden and Gus.

Will Michael be a true friend in this story? Not sure ! Lindsay is really a bitch Melanie is right to watch her closely.

Always great to see an update to this story!  I don't buy Lindsay's story for a second; I hope no one else is snookered by her tale of 'selflessness.'  To not tell Brian at all what was happening was just inexcusable.  I dare say she will not be happy with the legal action about to occur.  And Michael?  I have never known him to keep ANY secret, so I don't think this will be any different. 

Really enjoying this story, along with your other one! Thank you so much for posting these on MW.  ~Kim 

Melanie is right not to fully trust Lindsay; she's got a long way to go as far as I'm concerned.   And poor Brian.   She was going to make him keep the same schedule for Aiden as he has with Gus - one weekend a month.  Who is she to play god with his baby?   

Great chapter.  Lindsay doesn't look to be getting away with anything.  Michael is being pretty good about this.  Maybe the baby having his name helped.

Superb progress..grear chapter.

Great chapter!!!   Lindsay is out of her ever loving mind!!!   Did she really think that Mel and Brian would realy be okay with everything she did?   She basically prayed upon Justin's worst fears and talked him into giving up his own son.   And then to remind Brian about Jack and basically saying he could be like him - goodness!!    I can't wait to see what happens next!!

I hope Lindsay is not going to hurt the baby or Justin when they get home. She looks determined to have Aiden. Why did she have Gus who is still young and why did she hide all this from Melanie?

I love a mpreg stories and yours hit the ground running. I hope Linds gets the chance to explain the reason for her actions before Brian rips her head off.

Was she going to tell Mel she found the baby in a cabbage patch or that he was delivered  via stork? 

Any who, would I be reaching if I fee thatl Justin's accident may have been intentional?

Looking forward to your update.

Love how Brian has everything planned out.  It's great that Justin is keeping little Aiden, not sure I care about the Michael.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Things seem to be going well for Brian and Justin. Good to have Mel on their side. Definitely looking forward to Lindsay getting back - all hell is going reign down on her head.

I'm so glad Justin has changed his mind, and wants to keep the baby.  And I'm happy that he and Brian are working together as a team now.

I can't wait to see the confrontation between Lindsay, Mel, and Brian.  That should be a doozy! 

Thanks again for posting this wonderful story on here!  ~Kim

This is such an engrossing story!  I'm hanging on each word.  I'm so glad that Brian is there for Justin.  I'm sure there will be a lot of angst in this story, but I really like some drama with romance. ;)  Looking forward eagerly to reading the rest of this!  Thank you for posting this on here!  ~Kim

Oh dear poor Justin feeling sore and confused and wanting his baby but thinks he is giving him away

 

I like that Brian is ready to make changes to accommodate Justin, his new son and Gus. Can't wait for the confrontation with Lindsay - bet it's going to be explosive!!!!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

Great chapter.  This story is so good.  Can't wait until the meeting with Linds!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

Wow Lindsay has explanations to give. I hope that in your story Brian and Justin will be the parents of this baby with the help of Melanie. Very interesting beginning I love, thank you

I am so glad that Daphne is there to set the record straight and fill in the blank spots.  I'm even gladder that Brian is wanting proof so he has a say in the new baby's future.

Omg that was full of drama wasn’t it, I hope Mel helps Justin keep his baby. Lindsey really is a bitch isn’t she. Please make sure Justin keeps the baby and let him be ok. 

 

Excellent work x

This is marvelous story ...so loving it..great chapter..thanks.

This story has me on the edge of my seat!!!     Lindsay has absolutely no idea what awaits her upon her arrival back in town.   Between Brian, Mel, Daphne and probably Justin as well - she has a ton of explaining to do!!     

Oh wow. the promises to be really good! Terrific plot line! Am already very intrigued and looking forward to what's to come.

Great start

Elaine

Very interesting start. Lindsay certainly has a lot of explaining to do. Brian's attitude towards Justin makes me wonder if she's told lies about him. And was the car swerving deliberate or just an accident. Can't wait to find out.

Love the beginning and looking forward to Sunday so I can read the next chapter. Definitely exciting so far and so many questions to answer. Cants wait to see how Lindsey explains this and what Brian’s reaction is about another baby.

Now this is a story plot that I can get behind.  How was Lindsay going to explain it to Mel once the baby was born?  Can't wait to find out Brian's reaction.

Hi, Starr! First of all,  welcome to Midnight Whispers!  We're delighted to have a new member, m but especially a writer! As for the story, wow, this is very different!  Will be interesting to get the back story about how this all transpired.

 

Great 1st chapter!  I'll be looking forward to reading more.  Welcome again, and thanks for posting your story on here.  a86; ~Kim

Omg...that is one freaking fabulous Plot...damn...i am super excited about it...cant wait to read more...wow..linds is a bitch...i hate her already..looking forward for more.

Thank you for sharing.