Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviews For On Liberty Avenue

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2018 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 7

Brian is a trip!!! I think he complains a lot, but really doesn't truly mind!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2018 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 7

Brian did remarkably well considering.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2018 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 7

Great update. Always like Brian & Jennifer scenes. Something special between them even if they denied it.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2018 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 6

LOL, it sure didn't take much for Justin to cave.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2018 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 6

Little bit by little bit we see other characters in a different POV. Nice.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2018 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 6

Good update. So David gone, Ben here. Good idea.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2018 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 5

Such a different take. So Hank will stay with Michael while Dave goes off to Hawaii? And Mikey's going to be a father again? Wow.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2018 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 5

You gotta love Brian and Justin - making the most of any extra time!! LOL

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2018 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 5

Brian's kind of party. Like how you have David & Hank in this story, but in a different way.. Great job.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2018 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 4

Love how you got Justin and Michael to get along. That's probably the only way it would have worked.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2018 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 3

Nice little get together. Nobody likes shots.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2018 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 4

a different take on Michael which is nice for a change. Happy to see a new chapter.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2018 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 4

Great chapter and a really different look at Brian & Justin. Love the reference to a "12 year age " difference. Keep writing and doing such a good job.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2018 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 4

Wow, poor Justin. But at least he and Michael seemed to have patched things up after Justin saving him.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2018 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 3

I like this story. Waiting for the new chapter. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2018 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 3

That's nice that they all try and get together and talk about stuff and just catch up with each other.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2018 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 3

Great chapter. Love it.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2018 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 2

Cool chapter; its nice to get a little more of the family dynamic.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2018 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 2

Interesting background. Love that Vic is still around, but with Mikey having a kid with Lindsay does that mean no Gus?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2018 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting start. So we have a baby and it has a name. So who carried?

Reviewer: Lori (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2018 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 2

Think I am really going to like this story..

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2018 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 2

Great update. Love how the main characters are the same with different kids. Great idea.

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2018 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 2

And the plot thickens. Thank you for another chapter so quickly.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2018 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 2

Lots of babies. I must admit I do miss Gus. Really enjoying the story. I was happy to see a new chapter posted.

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2018 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 1

Fun read, more please. I want some more.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2018 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great Start, looking forward to more!!! Bill

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2018 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm liking the story!! I am curious about the whole Brian / Jennifer relationship, and the reason he avoids being around when she is there.... And I'm glad that they finally decided on a name, especially after 3 days!! LOL

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2018 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh what a great first chapter. Can't wait to see where you go with this story.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2018 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

So delighted to see a new writer on here! I noticed you've been a member for a while, but I'm very glad you made the leap from MW member to a writer!
This is an great start. Will be eager to read the rest of this. Thanks for posting it on here. :)

FYI - I have validated you as an author, so from now on when you post another chapter it should show up right away. ~Kim

Author's Response:
Thank you! :)

Yeah it took me a while to feel comfortable enough to share my writing.

- Blue :)

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