Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2021 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 12
This was amazing. Love how Brian finallly has a father that loves him unconditionally. I am so happy Emmett and James are finally married and that Ronni and Dante have as well.
Looking forward to the next installment in this series.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it. I think you will enjoy a Son's Admiration. There will be a spinoff series in the future called Legacy.
Reviewer: Rixa (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2021 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 12
I have to admit that I’ve really come to dislike Tom and the relationship between him and Nate because Tom is trying to have his cake and eat it too as the saying goes. Tom is a Catholic priest and priests are supposed to be celibate regardless if they’re heterosexual or homosexual. If Tom wants to be the priest he committed to being when he took his vows he should not be having sex and if he wants to have sex he should leave the priesthood. What’s also puzzling me is that pretty much everyone in the family who knows about the sexual relationship between Tom and Nate is okay with it. When Father Kevin says “No, when I made my vows to the big guy I committed. I don’t hold it against any priest that has relationships. It’s not for everyone.” it may be supposed to come off as tolerant but to me it just comes off as wishy washy. Replace the words ‘big guy’ and ‘priest’ with ‘husband’ or ‘wife’ and see how it reads as if Kevin is okay with anyone in a committed relationship having extra marital affairs. Whether one has committed to God or a human spouse having extra marita relationships do matter and, unless the couple is in an open relationship, is not okay! Would Nate be having a sexual relationship with Tom if he was married to a human spouse? I would like to think that Nate would know better than to do that so it puzzles me that he’s okay with having a relationship with Tom who’s in a relationship that’s as sacred as marriage just not to a person. So even though I have a feeling that Tom and Nathan/Natalia will end up together, even if Tom leaves the priesthood/church, I’m just over this relationship.
Author's Response: You may want to quit reading my stories since you obviously don't enjoy them. You have pointed out, very politely and with no disrespect to me, that you don't like most of what I write. Maybe you need to find an author who writes more to your tastes. I don't mean this to sound snippy. I just don't know why you would read something you don't enjoy. And if you do keep reading my work, I hope you find something you enjoy about it.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2021 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 12
Nathan transitioning is not easy. You are giving us a reality of the situation. Thanks for the look at the future.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2021 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 11
It's amazing how well Anna Claire took to meeting Kevin again. Kevin seems to become friends with everyone he meets. Brian is going to miss him. In fact everyone who has met him will miss him.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2021 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 10
What a wonderful wedding. And with happy endings for everyone.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2021 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 9
It's amazing how you intertwine the new characters with the old. I'm sure Ted will be there for Emmett but will Mikey?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2021 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 8
Can't wait for the wedding. It will be interesting when Tom meets Kevin.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2021 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 7
Oh my. They haven't told Tom about Natalia have they.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2021 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 6
More new people to add to the family. This is so much fun.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2021 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 5
Tom and Nate are doing well together.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2021 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 4
So much going on. Justin and Tom looking for Brian's father. Tom and Nate? Gus and Aaron have so many people who care for them.
Author's Response: They are lucky kids. They will never wonder if they are loved.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2021 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 12
Wow Brian has a real father JustTom and Nate have broken up, Ronnie and Dante married and Yay Emmett is married. I am looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: Lots more to come.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2021 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 12
You know how reach off the page and grab a persons heart don't you. I had so many awe moments reading this. I love how Brian was with Nate he knew what to say. Justin I think maybe get a bit broody and if they ever add to the family it will be blessed. Gus made me smile with his care for everyone and making that painting. I can't wait for their trip to Atlanta.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2021 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 12
You know how reach off the page and grab a persons heart don't you. I had so many awe moments reading this. I love how Brian was with Nate he knew what to say. Justin I think maybe get a bit broody and if they ever add to the family it will be blessed. Gus made me smile with his care for everyone and making that painting. I can't wait for their trip to Atlanta.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2021 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 11
Wow where Em and James are on Honeymoon looks breathtaking and so peaceful. My heart is so happy for Brian he now has the dad meant for him. I love how well they are getting on it's a beautiful thing to watch. Kevin is so great in how he wants to help Nate as well I think it's what he needs and Tom as well to have that ear to speak to I'm sure helps. I loved everything about this chapter. I cannot wait for more.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2021 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 10
The wedding was so perfect and the wedding blessings blew me away at how truly beautiful it was. As for the witches I'm sorry but even if Lindsey does move back I hope Gus never goes to live with her. He has a far more stable life with his dads. Em's dad was so nice and Kevin was fantastic. Man I'm in love with this story so much.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2021 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 9
Gus seriously stole the show here. He has so much love in him and sharing that with others is like his life's mission. Kevin is perfect and I wish his girls were there with him so everyone could meet them. I love that Brian called Kevin dad, that really melted my heart. As for the wicked witches I've no words, they make me so angry. They better not take Gus. You did an incredible job with this chapter x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2021 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 8
Happy tears, so many happy tears. Brian meeting his dad was perfect and I could feel his heart beat for the first time for a parent and one that loves him for him. There was so many incredible moments in this and you hit every note perfectly. Kevin meeting Joan again and Brian saying what he wanted to was so powerful. I held my breath for every word they both said. Then Em omg even more happy tears. You got me emotional this morning. Fantastic work x
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2021 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 8
Yay Kevin and Brian United in slaying the dragon bitch. Emmett and Brian getting their daddies back
Author's Response: Glad you could see my vision. And both fathers feel remorse for their own faults. Both sons have enough love to accept them as they are.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2021 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 7
Still loving this story. Keep writing.
* hugs *
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2021 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 7
I want to clap so loud and cheer at the same time at how Brian handled that phone call. Those girls don't deserve Gus.Brian going to see Bennet was so perfect as he was in a similar situation and knows what it's like. I do hope and pray he comes to the wedding. I have a feeling that Nate and Tom are truly falling in love no matter what they say and as for Nates revelation I think everyone will support him all the way. Fantastic work x
Reviewer: Rixa (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2021 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 6
In the second chapter Nathan says that he is a transexual and that he hopes to transition soon. But after that chapter nothing else is mentioned about transitioning. Is Nathan planning to transition from male to female?
Author's Response: I do plan to but I don't like having too much going on at once. After the wedding is over I will probably start working on that. I have to admit, I better start some research.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2021 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 6
I was giddy with happiness reading this. Kevin is awesome and I think he will be a blessing for Brian and the family. It's just what he needs after the horror that was Jack. plus the girls who Kevin helped are amazing. I hope now as well for Emmet that his dad comes to his wedding my heart aches for him. You did an incredible job with this chapter.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2021 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 5
Poor Justin those headaches are killing him. I love that Ronni is helping him deal with him. Brian worry's naturally and more help is definitely needed there. I think Tom and Nate are good for each other I think more than anything they could be best friends. Brian has such a huge heart and what he did for Ted and Cynthia was amazing. This was a fantastic chapter.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2021 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 4
Another fantastic chapter and filled with emotions. I love Justin and Tom teaming up like that to track down Kevin. It's hard and rocky road but they are not giving up for Brian. That shows true love right there. I feel for Brian being stuck in the city and now that snow is not going to help. Plus now I hope for Em that his dad and family show up for the wedding he needs that more than he even truly knows. Fantastic work as always x
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2021 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 3
Emmett came out well in this story. A lover, knowing his mom cared, and family.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2021 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 3
That was so moving. I'm so glad it went well for Em I was worried for him. Nate seems so nice and I awe of what he is seeing and experiencing so far. Lol Brian's jealous head out already. This is gonna be good . Brilliant work x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2021 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 2
Awe Em I want to hug him so badly. He needs to feel loved and to know his mum does truly touched me. I like Nate already and I'm curious to know what happens next with him. Fantastic and emotional x
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2021 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 2
What a nice chapter. Enid's passing was easier knowing that Em was aware of how she felt.
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2021 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 1
Seems to me that Emmett and Brian have more in common than they knew. Is Katie taking lessons from Claire? Glad Em got to see his mama and sit with her. James was right about times changing.
Don't know and can't imagine how Emmett's father is going to react with not only Em being there but also James, Brian, Justin invading the South. Let's hope he has changed too.
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2021 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 1
Seems to me that Emmett and Brian have more in common than they knew. Is Katie taking lessons from Claire? Glad Em got to see his mama and sit with her. James was right about times changing.
Don't know and can't imagine how Emmett's father is going to react with not only Em being there but also James, Brian, Justin invading the South. Let's hope he has changed too.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2021 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
Love how you managed to get Emmett seeing his mother. I'm sure she'll set the rest of her ungrateful children straight. Good chapter.
Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2021 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
A very interesting and original plot - well done.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2021 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 1
This was a fantastic and emotional first chapter. My heart bleed for Em. His family needs to learn respect. Thank goodness for James and the boys. They truly know how to love and support each other. I felt everything they did. Brilliant work as always x
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