Reviewer: Beth (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2025 10:35 AM · On: My Warrior. My King.
Need an update on this so much. I really hope your still writing :)
Author's Response: Today, mark my words. It's coming out. Just so you know. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2023 08:46 AM · On: My Warrior. My King.
OMG!!! Loved the way you wrote the dying Scene for Abe with everything being revealed to him as he lay dying!! And them eating him at the end PRICELESS!!!!!!!!
I’m said about losing some of our Boys but I knew that everyone was not gonna make it.☹️
Ok Pack pull it together and save our Boy! Holding my breath for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting, it helps me keep going. Sorry, that I have been away. Between getting sick and the kids, I couldn't see the light at the end of the tunnel. I almost didn't let this happen and was going to wait much longer but there is so much that is about to happen that I thought it was a good point on the story to get rid of Abe. I will be posting more chapters soon enough. Thanks for all your words and for reading my stuff.
Reviewer: Beth (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2023 10:01 PM · On: My Warrior. My King.
So I just went and read chapter 5 again, because I don't know why but I thought Justin was the one that broke up with Brian like brokd the engagement off and said he couldn't marry him, so that made me go back and reread thinking I mustve got mixed up and now I am like whatttttt after reading that about Justin being gone and that being under the heading present time.....Nooooo! So chapter 6 technically happened before the present time in chapter 5?
So this is where Brian being the witch comes in right right? Hes got all this power and somehow cures his mate. Tyler commented Brian is stronger than them all thats why they knocked him out, so come on Brian wake up and get all witchy please haha. Can I say how happy I am that Dylan has Dante now and seems to understand Brian and Justin are meant to be haha how did I miss that or did I miss a chapter, who knows perhaps I will go back and do a reread of it because you are just too good at hiding details :) what needs to happen is the next chapter posted asap no pressure though ;)
Author's Response: Yeah, the story moves from present to past. Justin keep track of the headings to know where you are at. The next chapter will be coming out soon. I see that you're asking for Brian to save his mate but I think you missed something in chapter six after Justin almost died...
"Remember this," Tyler told them. "You got only twenty four hours to be put to rest. So, if you get killed, you better hope you're among your kin."
"And follow the rules," Cody told them.
"Rules?" Brian asked with a frown.
"You have to remove the bullets or knives or whatever they used to kill you," Tyler pointed out. "Or however you died."
"And you got to be in one piece," Justin told them. "Not even your pinky toe missing, not a thing."
.....
"I thought I would never see you again," Justin told him as he caressed Brian face.
"You would have come back," Brian pointed out. Right?
"No," Justin said softly. "Got to be in one piece, baby."
Brian held him tighter as he just realized that he truly could have lost Justin. You would have burnt to ashes. Oh God!
That might post wrong, but you can go to the chapter and read it better.
Reviewer: Beth (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2023 12:32 AM · On: My Warrior. My King.
O M G and also O M G
You did it again, you shocked me! Brian as the witch well that was a twist and the whitest fur and the purple eyes perfect! I felt so bad for Brian feeling so alone and not a priority with Justin spending time and getting with Dylan. So when Brian shifted and was angry AF it was very funny and kind of deserved because none of them seem to understand how Brian was hurting seeing his man hooking up with everyone.
Excited to see where this goes now. Evans and Bo are cute together and hopefully Brian and Justin can be happy together now. Now we know Brian is special the others better not get too close to his mate haha. I think its cool you've made Brian the witch so he can keep Justin in line. We need to get Dylan someone else to focus on. When Brandon found out who Tyler was awwwww they are too cute. Next chapter soon pleaseeeeee :)
Author's Response: I want you to always know the museum in my head does these things. Lol. I am just the messenger. Lol. Yes, it's a miracle Brian didn't kill them all. He will change slowly and everyone should be scared of him. Rian has always been special. So special that Justin mated with him when the man was still human. Brandon and Tyler forever! Dylan found Dante but I think you caught on. These chapters are huge and it's easy to miss the little details.
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2022 09:13 PM · On: Feeling Betrayed
Oh yeah I also forgot to say “THIS STORY IS SO FREAKING GOOD IM LITERALLY ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT READING IT. MY NAILS DISAPPEARED SOME WHERE ALONG THE LAST CHAPTER IN, IM WORKING ON NUBS NOW! and yes I ’ percent blame you.
Author's Response: You're telling me. It will get more action too. Maybe not the next chapter, bit it's definitely coming. I am so happy that you're reading this and are so into it. Hugs, T.
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2022 09:01 PM · On: Feeling Betrayed
😲😲😠🫤😤🫣😭🤬😮😡😫😱
OMG! WTH! WTF!
That should sum up ALL the EMOTIONS I’m feeling RIGHT NOW!!
I don’t know WHERE to Begin!!! I knew they were SOMETHING!! I just didn’t know what!!!!WAIT! SO ARE THEY DEAD???? PLEASE FIX THIS! I just don’t have Words yet!
Author's Response: A lot of emotions but the fact that I'm laughing, crying, mad, sad, etc. when writing this, I can understand where you're coming from. No, they are not dead. They are very much alive, so alive they can't die... with certain rules of course. The vampires in this story are dead though. Much more will be explain soon. The craziness hasn't even started. Lol.
Reviewer: Beth (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2022 11:03 PM · On: One Of A Kind
Ok, so my mind is blown. So many details in there I know I've probably missed and will have to read again to catch them all. Your just too clever! Dylan and Evans were annoying me and I just wanted them to go away lol and then I was happy Brian and Justin were together just them and then Justin decides to be a shit and go and cheat. Rude. And even ruder that hes not using any protection, poor abrian doesn't deserve that. Justin needs to wake up to himself. It's gonna blow up in his face when Evans gets jealous and tells Brian and then Brian won't have any trust in Justin anymore. Ok so clues. I got the orange juice thing so if only Brians drinking that are the others all some sort of creature and don't drink juice or did I read too much in to that hahahaha. Also maybe Justin has magical powers. If so maybe him and Tyler can work together to sort Abe out. Write fast and update please haha 😁
Author's Response: The crazy part is that when you figure it all out, you will have to go back to the very first chapter and read the whole thing again because trust me, it will be a read in a different light because you will know what really going on. lmao. they drink juice, not orange because of the citrus. Remember what Max was thinking about the chocolate bars. Slap the title of the story there in that mix and you're closer to the truth. Some of the lyrics are clues too, some aren't. lol. how it goes back in time, middle, past. it's a giant puzzle and you have to put it together. Justin fucking Brian in a hammock that couldn't support his weight! I am throwing clues left and right. the almost accident! Don't worry, chapter five is almost done.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2022 02:22 PM · On: Truly, Evil, To The Core
Abe sure is horrible. Hoping Justin and Tyler can stop him. Can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response: Sorry it took a little while. So much happening in my life. Hope you enjoy the next installment. Let me know.
Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2021 05:32 PM · On: Bad Boys At Work
That was....interesting
Author's Response: And it's going to get wilder. Lol. Don't know why the muse is making me write this story. lol. But.... I'm having fun.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2021 11:17 PM · On: Bad Boys At Work
This is great! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Great because there will be more. I can't wait to post it to know what you think.
Reviewer: Estrelinha97 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2021 11:00 AM · On: Bad Boys At Work
IM NOT KIDDING IM ALWAYS READING YOUR THINGS AND MAKE ME HAPPY TO SEE THAT YOU ARE BACK
DELICIOUS TORMENT AND DREAMING ABOUT US ones are MY CONFORT 😋
Author's Response: I loved Dreaming About Us. There is a sequel in hiatus and hopefully I can get it out soon. Delicious Torment also has one and I got to work in it. Thanks so much for reading and letting me know all this.
Reviewer: Estrelinha97 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2021 09:40 AM · On: Bad Boys At Work
Uhhhhhhhhhhh how i love your stories . Please just please continue 🤭😈
Author's Response: I am having more time now a days. You will see a lot more stuff from me. Thanks for reviewing. I love that!!
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