Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Come Home to Me
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2024 11:00 AM · On: THE EPILOGUE

This was great, from start to finish!!   I loved it!

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2024 01:47 AM · On: THE EPILOGUE

Perfect! Thank you!☺️

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2024 01:47 AM · On: THE EPILOGUE

Perfect! Thank you!☺️

Reviewer: Slugger07 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2024 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 45

I really like this chapter. I love that Brian and Ted are the butch ones, LOL. I mean Brian definitely. Horses, dogs and marriage, saddle up boys!

Reviewer: Slugger07 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2024 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 17

This was a really good chapter. I like how they realize they had to go through all the junk to realize and appreciate where they are now.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2024 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 55 C

Loved this chapter! And throwing the bouquet to Gus was very funny! Really enjoyed the bantering between B and J, as well as the adoption. Nick's character is so cute and sassy!  Thank you for such an enjoyable read. Will miss reading more updates after the epilogue.

P.S. There is a song called "Dancing in the Sheets" from the Footloose soundtrack. It would have been perfect for their dance conversation - lol.

~Kim

Reviewer: Blue77 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2024 11:54 PM · On: THE EPILOGUE

Beautiful story :) Maybe writing a sequel would be a good idea, to let us know what happened to the people who killed Ethan. They surely were messed up individuals who should be behind bars.

Reviewer: Juditka (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2024 09:25 PM · On: THE EPILOGUE

I really liked the story. I always looked forward to the updates. Fortunately, we didn't have to wait long. Thanks for sharing with the fans and I enjoyed reading it.

With love, Judit from Hungary    

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2024 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 54

Another great chapter! Loved the bantering here, as well as Emmets's queen out. This is a wonderful 'verse you have created. I'm really enjoying it Thanks for sharing it.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2024 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 53

I am so enjoying this story! I love this little family unit you have created. Love the banter between B and J. And Nick is a hoot!  Full of sass. So funny! Thank you for sharing this. I always look forward to updates. ~Kim

Reviewer: Mystere (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2024 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 50

Oh poor Brian. Maybe they got together too soon?

Why does he let Justin doing this to him?

Reviewer: Blue77 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2024 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 39

I loved this chapter and, honestly, I was expecting something like this because there were some hints in the previous chapters :) You wrote that Molly had a boyfriend working in the same field as Hobbs, and it seemed like she was reluctant about him meeting her family. I connected the dots :) While I really don't like Hobbs (and I'm sure nobody who visits this website does :D), I think it's an interesting twist and it shows people can change for the better. I also appreciate Justin's attitude here :) 

 

Reviewer: GammaB (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2024 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great first chapter

Reviewer: GammaB (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2024 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great first chapter

Reviewer: GammaB (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2024 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great first chapter

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2023 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 27

Loved this chapter, especially about the chicken - lol. And glad that Nick has bonded with Brian. Really enjoying this story. Thank you for posting it. ~Kim

Reviewer: Blue77 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2023 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 25

Wow! I loved this chapter but I almost got scared when Brian wanted to leave the bathtub. Good thing he didn't :) :) I sooo love this story, it has an overall optimistic note. Justin can't plan a "secret" party, can he?

Reviewer: SLHR (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2023 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 10

One thing I don't really get, Justin tells him that Ethan shoved him and Justin accidently fell into the knob and door jam and Brian is ready to bring Ethan back to the dead and kill him all over again. He pushes Justin down the stairs and he only minorally feels guilty? 

Reviewer: SLHR (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2023 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 9

Disappointed in Justin here, he didn't even tell Brian he was leaving. You can't just leave your kid and assume someone will take care of them. How can Brian watch him if he doesn't know he's watching him? Sure he said he has to go but I read that as back to the room until he left. 

Reviewer: SLHR (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2023 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 8

The chat with Jennifer will be interesting. 

Reviewer: SLHR (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2023 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 7

I'm really trying to like Brian here but it's been a week. I don't care if it's the worst relationship in the world, when one spouse dies the other one greives, and they have a greiving child. Brian is being really selfish here all about how different Justin is but is determinded to make him dependent on him again. 

Reviewer: SLHR (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2023 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 6

Everything was sweet in this chapter except Brian squeezing Justin arm where he knew the bruise was, it all felt very controlling and boarding on abusive. Justin hit Brian's leg at the diner but he had forgotten that it was hurt. Brian knew exactly what he was doing. Also while he's been nice to Nick about Ethan every time he discredits Justin's relationship with him it hurts Justin but he still doesn't stop. I hope he realizes what a jerk he's being. 

Reviewer: SLHR (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2023 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 5

As much as I love Brian he's being a huge hypocrite here. He did get physcial with Justin, the same time frame as Justin knocking him down. He physcially tossed Justin out of the loft. Not only that the things he has said to Justin over the years are mental and emotionally abusive. Not saying Justin is innocent in that part either, you were right a few chapters ago, they were very toxic. But Justin never made Brian feel like he was worthless and pathetic just to make himself feel better.

Reviewer: SLHR (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2023 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 4

I hope Nick doesn't hear Brian talk about Ethan badly, it'd break his little heart. Brian needs to give Justin space. Not only did his husband just die but he was murdered. That adds a whole nother level of horribleness. If my math is right, and I hope it is, you seem to be basing this around SCOTUS verdict legalizing gay marriage in the states meaning Mel and Lindsay can come back and bring Gus. 

Reviewer: SLHR (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2023 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 3

Micheal wanting them to get together quick, how different. I'm hoping Justin doesn't give in for a while because it will be too much of a reboundish thing. He's holding up better than I thought but that can't continue, sometime it has to break. 

Reviewer: SLHR (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2023 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 2

I actually like the more standoffish Justin because it seems they have switched with Brian being more open on his feelings. Nick asking why Ethan wasn't there and did he do something wrong broke my heart. 

Reviewer: SLHR (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2023 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 1

I stop reading fanfictions when my own got too out of control. But I'm trying to start reading again. You're is the first I've read in a long time. I'm a few chapters in but I'll start with this one. 

 

I'm surprised Justin went completely MIA to everyone except Daph. I can't wait to see what exactly was said during the Jennifer fight. Nick sounds so cute and I've never been a Ethan hater, just never liked him with Justin. But his death really made me sad. I hope we find out what happened to the people that murdered him. 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2023 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 16

Still enjoying this story immensely!  I like the slow growing toward their reconciliation, and I think it's realistic in light of what happened and the time frame. Looking forward to the rest. ~Kim

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2023 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 12

I am really enjoying this story, and I love Nick's sassiness! "You have to fix this." LOL! Looking forward to reading the rest of this. Thank you for posting it. ~Kim

Reviewer: Mystere (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2023 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 9

Woh excited! Oh I hope Brian doesn't give in too easy. Justin surely first has

some explaining to do. Hmm still not sure but hopeful you will change my mind 😉

Reviewer: Blue77 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2023 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 9

Maybe it's just me, but I think the scene on the stairs was hot :) Can't wait to read the update. 

Reviewer: Mystere (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2023 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 6

First I love the story, I really do.

But I have my doubts if Brian and Justin should really be back together. I don't know. Brian has his faults but the way Justin acted right after their break up, don't know , especially with Ethan after all. Brian deserves to find his own love/husband and maybe have Justin as a good friend. Their opportunity passed and Justin fell immediately in Ethan's arms again. But that's my feeling now, maybe it changes throught the story? Maybe some things why will clear up? Looking forward to the next chapter 😉

Reviewer: Blue77 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2023 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 6

I bet it's not going to be easy for Brian to get Justin back, but I think it's mostly because Justin is still suffering after Ethan's death. Only time will tell :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2023 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 4

Loving this story, my friend!  Love the humor, the angst, and the (re)developing relationship between B and J. I like this strong Justin. But will he be able to avoid his past and his attraction to Brian, especially under the same roof? I can't wait to find out! Looking forward to reading more. Thanks for posting this on here. ~Kim

Reviewer: Ilovelife19 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2023 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 4

I am so glad you are writing this story! I am enjoying it very much!!!

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2023 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 2

” this a Justin I’ve never seen before. more please🙂

Reviewer: Blue77 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2023 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 2

I'm beginning to love this story :) Brian and Nick already get along very well!

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