Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Kiss me alright
Reviewer: Brenda (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2009 02:55 AM · On: Kiss me alright - Part I

I don't know if you are still writing, but if you are, I would like to see how this would end.  This is probably one of the best I have read.

Reviewer: Hello (Anonymous) · Date: October 17, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Kiss me alright - Part I

You all can find here the full story.

 

http://www.elyxer.co.uk/cleverdevilfanfic/KMAChapters.html

Reviewer: fwmammd (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Green Wisdoms

What a wonderful story, thank you for posting. Brian and the frog are a nice couple, very funny !

Reviewer: stella (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Kiss me alright - Part I

Please more...I miss them very very much and they deserve an end...an happy end togheter...come on jerksbitch, do it, finish this beautiful, tender, sweet fic...

Reviewer: haachang (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2009 11:34 PM · On: Once Upon A Time

Just discovered it. It's intriguing. Please update soon.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Kiss me alright - Part I

Dieses ist ausgezeichnetes Schreiben. Danke für Ihre Arbeit.

~JTSecrets

"Embraced"

"The Future of Brian and Justin"

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 11:51 AM · On: The way that I feel

I can't tell you how happy I am that you are continuing the story here!

Reviewer: EstherGreenwood (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 05:44 AM · On: Once Upon A Time

This is one of my favorite fics of all time. I hope you consider writing more. :)

Reviewer: Sarah (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Talk to me softly

that was fucking amazing!!!!u r truely talented!!!!please, more!!!!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: arlessiar (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Once Upon A Time

Found this story three days ago and since then I read all the chapters you published in every free minute I had. I adore this story, it's the first QaF AU so far that really, really excites me and captured me right from the start. I think it's written perfectly and so beautifully! It made me laugh and cry, and I love the way in which Justin looks at this world and how he understands his surroundings, and how he slowly crawls into Brian's heart.

I saw in some other people's comments that apparently more chapters of this story already exist - is there any chance that you'll publish them here in the near future, or is there a way I can read them somewhere else?  Honestly, now that I started reading it I'm dying to know how the story continues. I nearly never write reviews as I don't have much time for fanfic, but in this case I had to, as this story is brillliant. So I also even dare to beg a bit
 - please, please continue posting new chapters!!!

 All the best,

A. 

Reviewer: roswell evans (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2008 02:39 AM · On: Talk to me softly

hi.....

i absolutely adore this fic of yours.

kinda wondering when you're gonna post the remaining chapters? *blush*

i'm so excited to find out what's gonna happen to brian & justin. ^^

Reviewer: viky (Anonymous) · Date: October 15, 2008 07:34 PM · On: Talk to me softly

Oh! I like your story. Justin is so adorable. And 'Fuck off' is so funny!!

Reviewer: JTee (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2008 07:11 AM · On: Once Upon A Time

Hi,It's a shame someone posted those chapters of KMA without your permission. There is such a thing as fandom etiquette that everyone should follow. However, as I said in a review to that posting, I don't think that anon. person posted the actual epilogue? Not even sure the chapters were correct. I truly hope you will put us out of our misery and post the complete story up and the hopefully happy ending. Please do this for the faithful KMA fans.

Reviewer: Cait (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2008 09:55 PM · On: Talk to me softly

Please post the rest of this- I'm getting deperate!!!! I've searched the entire internet for it in desperation and can't find it completed anywhere :-( It's sooo sooo good and I am literally dying to see what happens :-)

Reviewer: Gloria (Anonymous) · Date: July 07, 2008 03:37 AM · On: Once Upon A Time

Wow! I just finished reading this story on http://www.elyxer.co.uk/cleverdevilfanfic/

Well if that is the very end ( with them leaving the park)?

 Anyway, I read the first 7 chapters and thought it was the weirdest/midly disturbing thing I had ever read. So I stopped reading and looked for something else, and then my curiousity peaked and I had to go back to read more, and from there have spent the past 10 hours reading profusely. I'm so glad I gave it a second chance because it's one of the most heartbreakingly beautiful fanfics I've ever read, I cried, laughed, etc. all the way throughout.

 I love it when Justin has his little moments, like when he refers to lemon bars as fruit salad bars, or thinks Brian is eating his finger, or when he steals his 'terrific cookie'. And how Brian teaches him to say 'fuck off', or to sue people.

So all in all AMAZING!! I think you should write a sequel ;) When was this originally written by the way?

Reviewer: michele659 (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2008 04:22 AM · On: Talk to me softly

I didn't realize this site was back up but I took a chance because I was hoping to find your story here. I'm so happy to see it is,and that you've updated recently! I LOVE this story and I hope you continue and post all of it. This is a difficult theme and you write it very convincingly. I can see this happening the way you have written it. It also has a beautiful,romantic quality to it,and alot of tenderness. I like the way Justin is slowly coming out of his "tower",both figuratively and literally,and how much Brian is helping him. I like that Brian doesn't want Justin to change,and how he understands Justin the way he is. I also like that Justin understands Brian. and is helping him be more open as well.

 Even under circumstances such as these they still are connected.

Please update as soon as possible!

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2008 05:49 AM · On: Once Upon A Time

I am sorry but this story is extremely disturbing.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2008 01:57 PM · On: Talk to me softly

I really need to go to sleep, but couldn't help reading this new chapter!! I am loving this story and love the connection Brian and Justin have. Brian is the only person Justin seems to really trust and communicate with. The bond they share is amazing!

Reviewer: Jacky M (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2008 12:04 PM · On: Talk to me softly

You did it, I couldn't believe you'd do it but you did and I'm sure I'm amoung many, many who love this story. Thank-you so much. One of my favorites even if it makes me cry so much. Love Jacky M

Reviewer: balki85 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2008 05:51 AM · On: Talk to me softly

Loved this chapter! Brian got him the best Christmas gist I love Brain Age as well!

Reviewer: sunny (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2008 01:03 PM · On: Talk to me softly

Love this story and your rendition.  Brian and Justin are so good together in this story.  This is one of my favorite stories.  It is beautiful.

Reviewer: balki85 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2008 10:41 AM · On: The need in me

I absolutelt love this fic. It is my favorite B/J fic ever and I have read so many. I was sad when you stopped updating a few weeks ago but am so glad to see you back and posting numerous chapters at a time. So, thank you for the amazing fic. I always look forward to reading it and it is one of the few stories that has even made me cry  (like a baby when Brian didn't show up when he told Justin he would and he got upset) so please keep the chapters coming.

Reviewer: boltgirl426 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2008 10:32 PM · On: Talk to me softly

That was just fantastic.  I completely love how Brian is with Justin and how calm he is in Brian's presence.  Totally wonderful and I can't wait till the next update!!!

Reviewer: Jacky M (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2008 05:27 PM · On: The need in me

This chapter portrays a difficult subject in a delightful way with incredible gentleness. It is impossible to imagine it being written with more tenderness. So well done.

Reviewer: Kaylee (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2008 10:41 AM · On: Wonderful Things

I still love it! I'm still waiting for the other shoe to drop as it were. Update soon.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2008 05:27 AM · On: Once Upon A Time

I can't stop thinking about this story! I was soo happy to see that you added more chapters today...and of course I've read them all! Looking forward to reading the rest of this story of Justin and his Prian!

Reviewer: Kaylee (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2008 08:25 AM · On: Kitty Naptime

Awwwww! Prian wants to take Justin to Pritin! I can't wait to see how he gets to do this. Is their relationship going to be found out?

Reviewer: Katrina (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2008 03:58 AM · On: Kitty Naptime

I am loving this story! Please post the rest of it soon. I'm gonna go through withdrawls. I need to see what happens next!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2008 01:09 AM · On: Kitty Naptime

Sweet chapter. In his way Brian understands Justin's mind.

Reviewer: franki (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2008 07:33 PM · On: Green Wisdoms

I started reading this story right before MW crashed, I was devastated when it disappeared. Thank you so much for posting it again! I have never read anything more touching and wonderfully creative. I love this version of Brian and Justin, it literally makes me weep at times. I can't wait for more chapters!!

Reviewer: 6frog (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2008 02:57 PM · On: The right thing to do

This is the most poignant and sweet chapter in a delightful story. Five stars

Reviewer: pfodge (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2008 02:55 AM · On: Green Wisdoms

I can't thank you enough for reposting this story.  It is my all time favorite. 

Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2008 10:46 PM · On: Once Upon A Time

Uiiiiii 

This story is back!

I'm happy!

 

xmao

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2008 08:04 PM · On: Green Wisdoms

Sweet. Brian visting and understanding Justin..... so typical Brian.

Reviewer: Kaylee (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2008 04:50 PM · On: Green Wisdoms

I really love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter. And I really can't wait to see how you end this! I wonder if Blake will ever earn back his 'P'?

Reviewer: We_Dreamerz (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2008 09:47 AM · On: Stomach Stones

I have no words for the sweetness of this story... Brian is so tender. I'm just loving it!

Reviewer: We_Dreamerz (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2008 08:59 AM · On: Dream of Prian

*happy sigh* I have no idea where this is going... but I am so adicted!

 

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2008 09:28 PM · On: Two on the wall

Beautiful chapter. Enjoying the interactions of everyone.

Reviewer: gerri (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2008 08:14 PM · On: Once Upon A Time

As others have said and will always say this is without a doubt one of the best fics ever written. It's dramatic, beautiful and so creative and individual that AU and OOC haters be dambed cause it just too good to judge it in that way. I will rerea this story to the end of time and I would be forever grateful if you posted the ending for us all. I dept to your genious, thankyou.

Reviewer: metka (Anonymous) · Date: June 07, 2008 03:02 PM · On: Two on the wall

Hi, I like your story with soft and loving Brian, but I'm wondering if the all 30 chapters will be posted here on MW?

Reviewer: ss.minno (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2008 03:39 AM · On: Once Upon A Time

I'm so HAPPY THIS WAS NOT LOST!!!!! BEST STORY PERIOD!!!!

THANK U THANK U THANK U FOR SAVING THIS MW!!!!

Reviewer: sunny (Anonymous) · Date: April 23, 2008 06:24 PM · On: Once Upon A Time

I am so happy to have this story again.  It is my very favorite.  I hope you can post the 2nd part of the epilogue as I waited and checked for it daily hoping.  I love Justin and Brian in this story.  I am happy that it is not gone forever, because I reread it all the time.  It gives me a great deal of reading pleasure.  It is a very well written story and certainly keeps the reader's interest.  Good job!

Reviewer: Eliriel (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2008 02:23 AM · On: Once Upon A Time

This is the best fic, ever.I always loved it , and I am very happy to see it again, here.MW would not be the same without Kiss me Alright in it.Every time I need to cheer me up, I read this fic.

Thank you for posting it again.

Liri

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2008 02:26 PM · On: Two on the wall

So very happy you are reposting this fic! I adore it! Now I get to read it all over again! Hope all is well with you! :)

Reviewer: ucgurl001 (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2008 09:08 PM · On: Once Upon A Time

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! for reposting this.  Its one of my favorite fics ever and I was having problems finding it posted anywhere else. I hope you post the 2nd part of the epilogue this time.

Reviewer: balki85 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2008 05:45 PM · On: Cream cheese for my princess

Hi, I have read a ton of BJ fanfic but I hardly ever review. This fic however is so great that I registered with this site just to leave you a review. This story is truly amazing and I can't wait to see what happens.

Reviewer: Mariana Wieder (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2008 06:03 AM · On: Once Upon A Time

I'm so glad you repost it. This is my favorite fic ever. I only hope that you'r going to  include the final chapter this time.

Reviewer: berrynutz (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2008 07:58 AM · On: Once Upon A Time

I'm so glad to see this reposted I have read it at least a half dozen times, and have enjoyed it every single time. It would have been a shame to have had this one lost.

Reviewer: pfodge (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2008 01:08 AM · On: Once Upon A Time

I am so glad you are re-posting this.  I read it not to long ago and it is one of the best fics I have read

Thank you

Patty

Reviewer: Carrie (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2008 11:01 PM · On: Once Upon A Time

Yeahy!!! Thank-you, Thank-you, Thank-you

 Love this story.

Reviewer: Cris Paiva (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2008 04:05 PM · On: Once Upon A Time

"Kiss me Alright" is back!!!!

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!!!

 

Reviewer: Sally (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2008 02:05 PM · On: Once Upon A Time

I just wanted to let you know I absolutely love this story, I read it on the old site and its one of the best stories I have ever read, its so touching and sweet the way brian is with justin and justin is just adorable

Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2008 01:44 PM · On: Once Upon A Time

THANK YOU THANK YOU for putting this back up - I read it every now and then just to make me smile at the way Brian is with Justin

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