Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2020 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 12: For the Better or For the Worse

I thing Deb is wrong.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2019 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 19: Final Chapter

Love it.  going for the sequel

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2012 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 19: Final Chapter

Great little fic! Thanks for writing. TAG

Author's Response:

And, that you for taking the time to read and enjoying.

 

Thank you,  Delores

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2012 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 14: Good Graces

Okay, nobody liked Thomas before, but now we really HATE the slimy weasel! TAG

Author's Response:

I thought I'd give Chris Hobbs a break and make Thomas the real mad man for a chance.

 

Thanks again, Tagsit; Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2012 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 3: Returning The Wallet to (Father Time/Uncle Sam)

Just came across this older fic while I was randomly browsing through titles. The premise is intriguing. Can't wait to read more. TAG

Author's Response:

Hi, Tagsit:

 

I was away on vacation at the Jersey Shore and I was so excited to come home and find that you read and commented on so much of my stuff.  I'm equally happy that you like my stuff.  I really enjoyed writinig the Cherist series but some people say the last one was kind of confusing.  I hope you didn't find it to confusing but I apologize for that.  it was one of my earliest writing and I made some major mistakes with that one.  However, I feel I've improved over time so you might not have to suffer that kind of fiasco again.

 

Thanks again so much.  Now I'm going to read all your other comments.

 

Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 12: For the Better or For the Worse

"A fling with Brian could only make things worst." or not...

Debbie doesn't always know best... she rarely knows best...

Later ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Hi, Kathleen, U R being back so many memories about this story!  I hope U continue 2 like it.

Reviewer: lougenessis (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2008 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 19: Final Chapter

Oh No!!!  That's all?  I want MORE!!!  Your story was great.  More please

Author's Response: There is more.... Cherished The Moment is the sequel.  Enjoy have fun.... and thank U so much for letting me know how much you like it.  Read on and have fun!

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2008 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 19: Final Chapter

Hey you...finally got to finish this one...just intime for your sequel...good job!

Author's Response:

  Whattttt.... I thou U been finished that one!  Glad U enjoyed it. lOL  hav fun w/sequel.

 

Reviewer: Jersey (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2008 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 19: Final Chapter

That was quite an amazing end to the story ! I love it a lot !

It put a fresh whole new perspective about the house and of our dearest couple relationship !

Hope there is a sequel... ?

Well done BW ! Jersey 

Author's Response:

Thank U so much.  I was hoping U like that ending.  I was sort of nervous about it  feared that some readers might think it was a bit rush... but really I didn't think it was but I know people see things differently so I was afraid readers might see it that way.  But I'm so glad you like it.  Hav Fun!  And I hope you find another one of my stories entertaining that I might post in the future.  You were an incredible audience!  Bye for now.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 18: Well, I'll Be...

I knew Brian would take Justin home. He's in Protective Brian mode now. He's going to do everything in his power to help Justin now.

 

Author's Response: Oh, yeah... this Brian was a lot older and lonlier when he met Justin.  And he could relate to Justin's loss as well, he had a similAr loss, and he had the utmost admiration for Justin and as always in awe of (or should I say in love with) his artwork.  He was definitely growing tired of the club scene.... AND THEN LIKE IN THE ORIG. QAF... JUSTIN WAS ALMOST KILLED BEFORE HIS EYES.  And then Debbie had gave him her stamp of APPROVAL.... What could he do but admit  he's Heads over hells.

Reviewer: Magda (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2008 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 19: Final Chapter

I really enjoyed the story, every single chapter :) Your work is amazing

Author's Response: Awwww! Magda.... that is soooo sweet,,, (TEARS, TEARS, TEARS!!!)  Thank you so much, especially 4 taking the time 2 tell me.  Hav Fun always!  Bye for now.

Reviewer: Gerri (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2008 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 17: Violence At The Work Place

Thankgod Justin is oing to be OK> Uncle huh, ok...how is Brian goig to react now, his love for the boy so obvious.

Author's Response:

And 'thank you'.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2008 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 17: Violence At The Work Place

Great chapter. Hilarious how Kip is dodging everyone. Thanks for not cliff hanging who gets hurt. Now we can just worry about Brian hurting Kip, how bad is Justin hurt etc. Looking forward to tying up the loose end of Kip.... Justin's recovery, the story of his family (I assume Brian or Cynthia gets his wallet) (haha Cynthia meeting Ted while getting Justin's wallet hehehe)

Author's Response: Tu so much alys... Kip was a mess... wasn't he... just couldn't get out of that office without chaos (well, he TRIED LOL!)

Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2008 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 16: How's It Going, Mr. Taylor?

Amazing story.  I just wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying it. 

 

Just what was Justin thinking of facing a guy with a hunting knife?  Then again, he probably was simply
reacting to so much of what has happened to him. Let’s hope Brian with his strength, size, and athletic

ability is able to subdue Kip or better yet – let Kip go and get Justin to a hospital – like now!

 

I will be out here waiting for the next chapter(s) to see how it all plays out.

 Thanks again, the story has really been good reading.

DavidR

Author's Response: With a review like that I couldn't make you wait a minute later, here it is!  Hav Fun! Enjoy.... and ty so much 4 taking the time to comment.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2008 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 3: Returning The Wallet to (Father Time/Uncle Sam)

okay okay i'm gonna keep reading and comment at the last chapter but the laughter and comments that i needed to make were killing me.

 First off i found it so funny that someone finally said something about Brian's unibrow.  His eyebrows are so growing together on the disc one box of season four of Qaf and i wondered was i the only one to notice that.

i also liked when he said that in no  way was he handsome man at all.  Off to read the rest.

Author's Response: Galesgal, U R cracking my sides.... I'm laughing so hard my jaws hurting.  Luv U Girl... HAV FUN!

Reviewer: Kiddo (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2008 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 16: How's It Going, Mr. Taylor?

oh what a chliffhanger...

how comes that everybody loves to write them but also everybody hates to read them? *lol*

i hope the next chapter comes really soon...

Author's Response:

Everybody loves to write them to hear this ... 'i hope the next chapter comes really soon...'  LOL.  Hav Fun and stay w/me.

Thx so much 4 taking the time to comment. 

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2008 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 15: Don't Leave Town

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Ty U very much and have FUN!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 15: Don't Leave Town

i don't know, i like alys' review. maybe carl can be on his way into kinnetic to talk to either justin or brian and kip could be running out of the building. they bump into each other, kip's briefcase falls to the ground, opens up and wonders of wonders guess what pops out. the hunting knife. then those pretty bracelets would be needed.

Author's Response: I Luv U guys... and U know I do... and I just luv the way U'r trying 2 write my story for me LOL... but U know how bad of a girl I am.  LUV u guys LOL< Hav Fun!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 15: Don't Leave Town

maybe kip should just take a jump in the river and save himself from going crazy. i want a face to face.

Author's Response: Kip is such a guilt complex emotional wreck he just might do that in one of sense or another.  LOL.  However, he's seems to be avoid at all turns come face to face w/Justin.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2008 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 13: It Amazes Him

Aww, thanks! I've thought about writing and I actually have an idea or two. But I'm so nervous to do it, I would want to do justice to the characters and the QAF fan fic community.

Author's Response: Don't fear... nothing to fear give it a shot.  Start out small... with a story that's just one chapter long.  My first posting was the story "Detention Day" that posted at that "mighty sword" site (it was just one chapter long) after I got fed back on it, it motivated me to do other stories.  I didn't know I had it in me (every time I finished one chapter, I feared I'll never be able to do the next.. but somehow you  manage... now it seems to flow so much easier)  It's hard for me to stop now.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2008 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 13: It Amazes Him

He's so gone its not even funny! Wait...yes it is! LOL! Brian Kinney should just give it up, while Justin gave back his wallet and money, he did indeed steal something...Brian's heart!

Great chapter!

Author's Response: OH, so well put Kat!  Why aren't u writing here lOl... I'll definitely read your stuff.  Hav Fun and ty so much 4 always taking the time to comment.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2008 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 13: It Amazes Him

boy, he's got it bad.

Author's Response: LOL!   And it's a first too, does he has any idea how to deal with it... and it seems (at least at this point) Deb's isn't willing to help him any.  Hav Fun... and tx as always 4 commenting.

Reviewer: Suse (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2008 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 11: A Heavy Cross To Bear

Ok with your previous explanation of why Justin couldn't be a suspect and after reading this I will concede. You did point out logical reasons why he wouldn't be considered, but I figure Kip Thomas is such a snake and because he shoots below the belt (tongue in cheek) I wouldn't put anything past him. I love Horvath's thoughts on Debbie. Being from that generation I always did think he was kind of cute. Just a great big ole teddy bear.

Author's Response: Amen, Suse!!!!  Very few stories here give Deb any action LOL... I tho I'll give her a little for a change LOL!  Oh, yeah... Kip's a monster LOL!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2008 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 12: For the Better or For the Worse

Loved the last two chapters. So, Horvath has Kip Thomas' name and will start looking into that. Brilliant questioning on his part.

I can't believe Deb busted in on Brian and Justin! Doesn't she realize by now that teenage boys don't like the parental units just walking in on them. I can see her point that now is not a good time for he and Brian to get too involved.

Now as for Monday when Justin and Kip start at work, I can just imagine the look and reaction Justin will have. Or if he doesn't see Kip but hears his name in some aspect...I hope he tells Brian. Or will they keep missing each other and then in some dramatic form run into one another? hee hee! Either way, I'm looking forward to it! Can't wait for the next chapter(s).

Author's Response:

Hi, Kat, slow down there, Girl!  LOL!  okay, let's see... Ty 4 loving the 2 chapters.  Deb bursting in on B/J... she was bursting in on Michael up until he was thirty and finally moved out.  Remember the scene when Michael has the magazine out reminiscing when he and Brian was fourteen and she came in the bedroom with the laundry while he was self-manipulating himself.  That was a funny scene boy!   Then she drove Vic and new boyfriend crazy bursting in on them all the time.... Vic moved out.... and then she tho she was going over to his place and do the same thing LOL.... that was so funny.

Now Kip and Justin at work?????@@@@#####!!!!!!!  Luv U guys... enjoy/hav fun

 

 

Reviewer: sarahrei (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 12: For the Better or For the Worse

UGH! Debbie...she knows how to ruin a good thing!

I am hoping that Justin comes face-to-face with Kip Thomas Monday at work and is strong enough to deal with it.

Can't wait for the next posting!

Author's Response:

Hi, Sarah, Having fun or what???  WHY, WHY, WHY, COULDN'T JUSTIN AND BRIAN HAD KNOCKED THAT DAMN DOOR!!!!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 12: For the Better or For the Worse

 "a fling with Brian could only make things worst." a fling with brian could only make it better. why doesn't she just butt out for a change?

is carl going to look into kip and bring him in for questioning or is he going to wait until kip tries to hurt justin at work?

Author's Response:

Hi, sjm thx as always 4 commenting... I look 4ward 2 it.  Unfortunately I think Brian feels the exact way Deb feels. 

Reviewer: Shadow1290 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 10: Jagged Edge

I love the story!! Are you gonna update?  A lot of people arent updating on this site anymore and this story is really good!

Please update soon!!

~shadow

Author's Response: Ty so much Shadow, and welcome aboard.... I update pretty often I think.  HAV FUN!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2008 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 10: Jagged Edge

Great chapter.

Author's Response: Ty Lynn for responding... Have Fun!

Reviewer: Suse (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2008 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 9: Dumpster Boy

Brian wanting to rip Justin's clothes off and go to town is classic. So Brian. LOL You crack me up.

Why am I smelling trouble over the fact Kip Thomas used a knife with the initials JT on it to kill Hunter. Can we only hope Kip drown on his sailing trip before he can cause our boy anymore trouble.? I'm getting nervous already.

Author's Response:

Hi, Suse, dear ty so much 4 commenting as usual.  HAVE FUN! 

I don't think Justin would be in any trouble because of the knife.  He already told Deb and Brian he gave the life to Hunter, and I'm sure he'd tell Det. Horvath the same thing.  Also, he's been confined to quarantine while he recovers from TB.  NO reason whatsoever for Justin to be accused... NO MOTIVE.  Hunter was his best friend he loved him.

And another thing, Det. Horvath would have to ask himself, 'since the weapon has not been recovered, if Justin did this thing why would he give so much detail about the potential murder weapon (esp. since it hasn't been found... makes no sense).  It would be the opposite, Justin would be trying to hide/dispose of the weapon pretty much like Kip.  However, he's giving the police a sufficient lead.  They know now to look out for that weapon. 

Also, Several of Hunter's friends (the other hustlers) can probably confirm that Hunter carries the knife every where he goes.  And most if anyone of them had asked, I don't see why Hunter wouldn't have told them that it was a present from Justin. Based on this I don't see Justin being a suspect in Hunter's death.... at least not the key suspect... maybe somewhat on a small scale maybe, but no more so than Horvath suspecting one of the other hustlers might have killed Hunter.  I think at this point Horvath probably suspects a trick killed Hunter.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2008 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 10: Jagged Edge

I'm so glad Justin finally told Brian and Deb the truth about everything! And only Deb would figure out that Brian had fallen in love with Justin.

Now I wonder if Brian is going to open up to Justin about his car accident that killed Michael.  

Author's Response: Stay w/me Kat thx so much.  HAV FUN

Reviewer: Jersey (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2008 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 10: Jagged Edge

I love how you manage to twist everything around ! It makes the story much more interesting to read and gives it a whole new life of its own !

I am sad that Hunter is dead though... Sunshine went trough so much already !

I just wish you would have taken more time to get Justin to open up... It seems to me like you rushed it to get it done. I just think Justins admission would have been more meaningful and have more impact if taken more slowly!

But I do love your story anyway !Update soon please!

See ya !!! Jersey :))

Author's Response: Hi, Jersey, thx U so much 4 taking the time 2 comment.  However, I'm surprize U think I rushed Justin to open up. Let's break it down.  1) He's been carrying this burden for seven months.  2) He's been with Debbie for 23 days... and she been badgering him... he's tired of her probing as well as tired of lying to Brian and Deb  3) he (just) was SHOCKED with the news of the violent death of his best friend... that's a WHIRL WIND of emotion 4) In a sense he felt like he was still homeless, the agreement was to stay with Deb unitl he recovers.  5) He's sick with TB,  6) Add the emotions he feels for Brian.... 7) The immense guilt  8) What must be feeling lying to these 2 people who seem to care about him so much.  9) I think the way he opened up was a slip of the tongue during an extreme emotional moment was very appropriate (I've had things like this happen in my RL... you aren't ready but you have an emotional moment where it all flows out).  10) Justin's very young.  11)Justin by nature is a person to open up... by nature it's not like him to hold things inside (that's more Brian's forte).   Do you see my point... however, it just a matter of opinion (laugh out loud).   Hav Fun!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2008 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 8: Finding a New Home...

Brian is defintel lost to Justin's charms. *g* Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Lol, ty you Lynn.. stay w/me and hav fun.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 7: What's Wrong w/Him Doc?

Protective Brian to the rescue! Poor Justin, TB! I hope he decides to be honest with Brian about his living situation. I can imagine he won't do it anytime soon, but eventually he will have to.

Now, I wonder where Brian is going to find a place for Justin to live. He can't stay with Brian from what the doctor said and I wonder how he will react to the face that he won't be able to see Brian for almost a month!  

Author's Response: Lol, Kat, great questions.... stay tuned 4 the answers.... and HAV FUN... ty some much 4 always taking the time to comment.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 5: Our First Place

Damn Kip Thomas! My heart broke when I found out he stole that money from those kids. I was just so happy that they would be getting out of that abandoned bus and then you pull the rug from under me!

Loved Hunter's pep talk, its exactly what Justin needs to hear and I hope he takes heed to what his friend says.

Still too funny that Justin thinks Brian isn't easy on the eyes! He's gonna stop breathing when he finally sees the real Brian Kinney! 

Author's Response: Lol, U guess it about the stop breathing part.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2008 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 8: Finding a New Home...

Oh geez, after working a very long day now I am sitting here with the tears  ahem excuse me allergies acting up. LOL  Talk about sentimental hags.

Author's Response: LOL, cheer up babe.... IT GETS MORE TEARY.... LOL.... HAV FUN

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 8: Finding a New Home...

this kip thomas is going to cause so much trouble, for everyone.

justin is just what debbie needs and the same goes for him.

brian's heart is bigger than he thinks. i hope he doesn't get involved with kip. that would so wrong.

Author's Response:

It's already established that Brian doesn't do his employees.... that's one thing that's nagging him about Justin.  Brian has no problem whatsoever resisting Kip but Justin's an entire differently situation (can Brian keep his hands offo of the mysterious, feisty liitle intern, LOL????).  Also, mind you this is an AU.... Kip may or may not be gay in this universe.

Ty, Sjm 4 always taking the time 2 comment.  HAV fUn! 

 

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2008 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 6: The Job Interview???

Poor Justin! I hope he be okay. Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Hi, Lynn... glad U still w/me... thx 4 commenting and HAV FUn LOL!  Luv U guys!

Reviewer: sarahrei (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2008 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 1: Tragic

Ahh, poor Justin. Your heart just breaks when you find out he was scammed. He was so positive and now back to sleeping in the dirty bus. GD that Kip Thomas.

I absolutely love your description of Justin finding Brian on the sofa and finally seeing Brian's true beauty. YUM!

And of course, as always you know how to leave us hanging at the end of a chapter. UGH! But, it does leave us wanting more. I can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: OH, shit... wouldn't you just love to find Gale Harold sleeping 0n your couch LOL!

Reviewer: sarahrei (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2008 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 1: Tragic

Justin doesn't seem to think Brian is all that good looking, huh...

Boy he is going to be in for a rude awakening (or should I say a stimulating one) when he shows up for his interview.

I was surprised that Jus returned the wallet with the money. But, it totally makes sense that he is looking ahead. Too often we see the character living in the moment and there is no foresight. I was half expecting Hunter to take off with the dough.

I loved that Jus was so honest with Bri about why he returned the $. I also like that Bri still had his same attitude and didn't believe Jus was committing a self-less act.

I was a bit disturbed by the description of Bri's appearance. I loved that the UPS guy wasn't interested. I also liked that Debbie went into full mother mode even before she knew about the prescription drugs (not recreational).

I continue to wonder where the majority of the angst is going to come from...is it simply the situation they both find themselves (survivors of horrific vehicle accidents) or will there be some outside pressures (family, trust, etc).

This is going to be an interesting ride. You always have such imaginative stories...I can't wait to read more. Post more soon-please!

Author's Response: Sarah, am i LOVING U OR WHAT, LOL!  HAV FUN!  LUV u Guys!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2008 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 4: Brian and Deb

Yeah! Brian and Deb worked things out. I was hoping that she would see that what happened to Michael was killing him as much as it was killing her.

And hurray for the removal of the unibrow and grizzley adams look! Wait til Justin sees him now.

So glad you updated a new chapter!  

Author's Response: LOl, Girl.... enjoy! Hav fun ty 4 commenting.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2008 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 4: Brian and Deb

sweet chapter. glad the misunderstanding and brian are all cleaned up. justin probably won't recognize him.

Author's Response: Lol, Hi, sjm... HAV FUN and tx so much 4 commenting as always. really look 4ward 2 it.

Reviewer: Suse (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2008 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 3: Returning The Wallet to (Father Time/Uncle Sam)

Well now that's a first "He's not a handsome man at all"  hahaha Justin what a ride you are in for. This is so AU, I love it.

 

Author's Response: Thank U so much, Suse, 1 of mine fav. people no doubt LOL.  Hav Fun!  And I agree 100% w/U .... Justin's definitely in 4 a helluva RIDE!!!!

Reviewer: Chelly (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2008 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 4: Brian and Deb

Thanks for updating so soon!  This story is sooo good.  I'm glad Deb saw that Brian was in as much pain as she was over Michael's death and they came together as Mother and Son.

Author's Response: Tu Chelly I'm so glad U enjoying yourself and take the time to comment every time. I look forward to your comments as much as you look forward to the updates ... ty so much.  HAV Fun LUV U guys!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2008 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 3: Returning The Wallet to (Father Time/Uncle Sam)

Well once Brian cuts his hair and shaves his beard off. He be gorgeous. *g* Looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Hi, Lynn glad 2 C U R still w/us. LOL... HAV FUN!  Justin is in for the SURPRISE of his life time LOL!

Reviewer: Chelly (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2008 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 3: Returning The Wallet to (Father Time/Uncle Sam)

Thanks for updating so soon.  I really love this story!  You have an amazing ability to make your readers actually "see" the story as they read it!  I love it!

Smooches!

Author's Response: Oh, Chelly thank U so much for that compliment... U R so kind!  Continue to enjoy the story... LUV U Guys!  LOL.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2008 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 3: Returning The Wallet to (Father Time/Uncle Sam)

boy is justin in for a surprise when he sees brian clean shaven and with a haircut. i like the fact that he stood up to him too.

off to a good start.

Author's Response:

OH, Sjm.... can U imagine when he sees Brian at the interview in two week, normal weight returned, tanned, shave and that incredible great haircut of his.  He's already in love with the eyes and the voice.... WATCH OUT LOL!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2008 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 2: Where's My Wallet?

I hate what Mickey's death is doing to Brian and Deb. I hope she allows Em to tell her the whole story. Knowing her she will yell plenty before Em even gets a word out. I'm hoping that at some point she will realize that Brian would never purposely put Michael in harms way; that in all the years they've know each other and partied together that he would never drive under the influence with Michael in the car.

I'm glad Justin didn't let Hunter talk him into taking Brian's money. I'm looking forward to these two meeting, although with Brian's mind frame at this point I wonder how their first meeting will be. Will he haved shaved before Sunshine arrives??? ;) 

Author's Response: LOL, Kat my dear.... a lot of good points and questions too...thank U 4 that... LOL... I'll post tomorrow tho.  Thx again 4 commenting, it's so much appreciated... I don't think I can express that enuff.  Enjoy... HAV FUN

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2008 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 2: Where's My Wallet?

As usual, Brian gets blamed for something. Even though the accident wasn't Brian's fault, Deb still blames him. *sigh* I am looking forward to the meeting between Brian and Justin. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi, Lynn... thx 4 joing me... hope U have fun LOL...

Let's hope when Em talks to Deb and tht she will see things in a whole different light afterwards.  The meeting btw Justin and Brian might be posted something tomorrow. 

 

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2008 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 1: Tragic

so a new story?...great opening chapter...you are so good!   I am sure there will be some twists and turns and am looking forward to reading it.

Author's Response: Heyyyy! Carbon69.... THX U SO MUCH 4 the beautiful compliment.  And Hav FUN Plz.  Luv U guys... oh, and thx so much 4 sticking in there w/me to the very end of COBDWM.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2008 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 1: Tragic

You started a new story!! This one is starting off really well. Can't wait for you to update more.

I'm glad Justin decided to return Brian's wallet to him, looking forward to these two finally meeting. Both of them are just in a bad way right now.  

Author's Response: HI, Kat welcome... I hope U have fun and ty 4 sticking w/me to the complete COBDWM series.  It was so much fun.  I hope you have fun here as well.  Luv U guys!