Reviewer: Estrelinha97 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2021 11:52 PM · On: The Rescue
So different so good
i like it
Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2013 12:36 PM · On: While You Were Sleeping
Love this story! All the twists and turns! However, there are a lot of typing errors and missing words. Makes it hard to read.
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: February 29, 2012 09:24 PM · On: Welcome to The Family
I like your introduction of Brian. I'm a little confused on the ages, though. If Gus is 16, that would make Brian about 35? Justin 23?
Author's Response: No it will be explained later that they are the ages they were after justin graduated high school but yea brian is about thirty five I hope you enjoy the rest of the story
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: February 29, 2012 08:33 PM · On: The Rescue
I'm always hesitant about reading any fics by writers with Gale in the name. I'm afraid of Justin bashing. It seems that some writers that love Brian, hate Justin. I decided to give this a go anyway because I love your premises and that you wrote on a Kindle. That takes dedication. I was pleasantly surprised with this first chapter. Apparently, I have been missing out on some some very entertaining writing. I love Brian and Justin in movie remakes and this one does well with the storyline so far.
Well, off to take the kid to school and then back to the story.
Author's Response: holy shit can't believe i'm just replying to this comment. That was one hell of a comment. I love Brian and Justin and I"m glad you enjoyed this 10 years ago!
Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 11:53 AM · On: While You Were Sleeping
loved it
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 01, 2011 04:07 AM · On: While You Were Sleeping
Your story is awesome,I never saw the movie but I think you story is better anyway :)
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it.
Reviewer: FallBackTrick (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 12:28 PM · On: It's a Mystery
You are a genius. Have my babies. Or I'll have yours, just want my children to have a chance at eing something other than a janitor when they grow up.
Reviewer: FallBackTrick (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 11:35 AM · On: The Set Up
*TEARS*
Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2011 07:55 AM · On: While You Were Sleeping
I'm so mad at you...I've been sick with a cold for 4 days and I'm finally getting over the sniffing, sneezing, fever, headaches, and now I have to add weepy to my list of symptoms...Wow! I love this story and the ending was hopelessly romantic and yes I cried in the end...sigh...I'll miss this story!
Author's Response: It was time for it to end dont you think. I love that you read all my stories. Comments like yours keep me going.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 06:47 AM · On: A Shocking Discovery
i think the chapter went fine except for michael deciding to go with david instead of staying with ben. justin and brian will get on the right track so enough and so will gus and brian. claire coming to brian's for dinner will be a shock to everyone. i can't wait. hope things are going much better in your life now.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 05:12 AM · On: A Shocking Discovery
Girl this was a GREAT chapter! So Joan is really Claire! I figured that out with the last response you gave me (previous chapter). WOW! David is a beast, I actually feel bad for Michael (for once). Justin has to find Brian now that he's seen that artwork! I'm sorry to hear about you and your family being sick. I hope you all are doing much better!!
Author's Response: thanks for your kind words. We are all doing better now.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2008 04:28 AM · On: A Shocking Discovery
Didn't like David back in the scene, but never liked David anyway. Love how Ben connected the dots and 'Joan' caught on. Hope the eventual reunion is not too tramatic. Excellant how Jennifer tried to talk w/ Brian. Hope Justin catches up w/ Brian soon and clarifies everything. Also like how Em tried to point out to Deb how she treats her boys differently. Also how Mel and Gus are in this chapter, how they both are trying so hard to help, understand etc. Great chapter. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Glad you're still with me and that well i'm back and soon they'll be more and then theyll be a chirstmas story as well.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2008 03:37 AM · On: The Awakening
Please come back!! I need an update...I'm wheeping so hard that I can't see the screen!!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 11, 2008 07:41 AM · On: The Awakening
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: My beta has disappeared on me. Hopefully this weekend like todya or tomorrow i'm so sorry
Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2008 03:57 AM · On: The Awakening
Such thrills and chills in this great chapter!! Please, doing leave us on the edge too llong...update !! update!! UPDATE!!!!!!
Author's Response: lol soon i promise.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 08:17 PM · On: The Awakening
very exciting chapter. justin helped brian with the kip problem, michael woke up and claire is 'joan', named her children after her brother. how is it that they haven't run into each other all these years. can't wait for that reunion. then michael had to go and ruin it for him. justin's got alot of explaining to do. why isn't ben around?
Author's Response: Ben's around. Hopefully the next chapter will be posted tomorrow so you'll get to find out the truth the story is almost over and i want to thank those who have been along for the ride.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 01:17 PM · On: The Awakening
I don't even know where to start! My gawd there was a lot of action in this one. And can I safely say that "Joan" is Brian's mom! OMGoodness! Michael woke up and recognized Justin and Brian thinks he looked at him with love in his eyes. But it has to be something else. Wow, this was just great!
Author's Response: lol yea this was a good and long one. Oh and well get ready cause it's about to come out and good guess about Joan being Brian's mom but wouldn't that be too obvious. think again.,
Reviewer: Buffyess (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2008 12:41 PM · On: The Awakening
thanks for the update and it was a gret one please please update as soon as you can. I really hope that Brian and Justin will end up together because they love and need each other very much. Many Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: don't worry in all my stories brian and justin end up together cause brian and justin love makes the world go round
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 12:09 PM · On: Touch
What a tragic story! Just heartbreaking! I'm glad Brian let Justin comfort him.
Author's Response: Yea they will comfort each other. Oh this is ur comment on touch, i posted a new chapter.
Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2008 07:31 AM · On: Touch
You must update this story soon!!
Author's Response: lol i promise an update is coming in the next couple of days a big one so get ready
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2008 10:00 PM · On: Touch
OMFG! poor brian. his mother trying to save him from jack. the accident and her death, claire's too. he has to live with that? justin to hold him and love him as he is. why hide him? yeah i know he didn't want to cause anymore pain for anyone, especially debbie. the truth has to come out soon. the dream was bought on by gus' question? he has to tell gus the truth. i may do him some good. this was a fantastic chapter.
Author's Response: i'm glad you liked it and yes the dream was bought on by gus' question and they will have a conversation about it. As for Claire. Are you sure she's dead? I mean our guy needs some kind of happiness.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2008 12:28 AM · On: Let the Games Begin
LOL! Brian sure does get a kick out of messing with Justin. Now Mother Taylor is mixed in this mess as well. It was out of control before and it just keeps spinning. OK, so our lil Em knows the truth and I think that's good b/c maybe he'll try to do something to get Brian/Justin together. This should be interesting. I hope Gus and Brian can have their talk and I hope Brian further explainsto Justin, what happened to his mother. Great to see an update, hope all is well!
Author's Response: all is well and hopetfully they'll be an update really soon.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2008 09:20 PM · On: Let the Games Begin
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: currrently writing the next chapter to expect it in the next few days
Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2008 06:16 AM · On: Let the Games Begin
Good chapter... I really like the parts w/Gus in them. Loving he story... keep it coming.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2008 05:03 AM · On: Let the Games Begin
He quickly shot Brian the death glare, followed by mouthing the words ‘you’re going to pay’. Brian put on his best smirk and mouthed ‘god, I hope so’. now, that's what i'm waiting for. good for gus. got his father across the bridge without him freaking out and also behind the wheel without hand brakes. who was it that easedropped on ben? kip there already planning trouble before brian even opened his mouth. what had gus heard? if emmett thinks justin is good for brian then that's a good thing. more please.
Author's Response: more soon i promise it was emmett who heard ben i thought i made that clear sorry. more sooner than later i promise.
Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 09:44 PM · On: The Rescue
This is a great story...have to say I guessed about the leg...so sue me!...I like the interplay between Brian and Mel...it's good that she is his beat friend and not Lindz...Love that Em is a Doctor but still our Em...great job so far...update soon please.
Author's Response: really you guessed about the leg? How did you know? I want to know if u picked up on the clues that i dropped? Email me at cullensbiotch@aol.com and let me know how u knew.
Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2008 07:32 AM · On: Too Many Thoughts
Such a good chapter and so heartbreaking (sob)! Also I would have never guessed that Brian had lost his leg...WOW!! i can't wait for the update...it will be soon right...and more sunshine andl less pain!! LOL
Author's Response: yea they'll be an update today for you tomorrow for me because it's still thursday where i sit and i see it's friday for you.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2008 10:05 PM · On: Too Many Thoughts
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: i'm glad u like it. Comments keep me going.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2008 01:24 PM · On: Too Many Thoughts
WOW! I didn't see that coming, Brian losing a leg. And now Gus knows about it. Wonder when he'll try to talk to Brian about it. I hope Justin is going to be ok. I know that flashing lights can be a trigger of seziures. I know that Brian is thinking of taking his life, but I hope that he and Justin start to develop some sort of relationship soon so he can end that train of thought. Great chapter!
Author's Response: yea no one saw the no leg coming. the ultimate twist. yea so next chapter they finally get close.
Reviewer: Buffytesss (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2008 12:56 PM · On: Too Many Thoughts
thanks for the update i love this fic and i hope that they can be togheter soon because i sense that Brian need "his" Justin. Please update soon. Many Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: yea the moment we've been wiating for comes in the next chapter. oh man are u a buffy fan. because i love the name.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2008 10:59 AM · On: Too Many Thoughts
Love this story/ chapter. Everyone is keeping Brian chained in the handicap persona it seems, although they are more loving. Hope Justin is following Brian to his room and they talk.... ;
Author's Response: you never know. look for the update tomorrow.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2008 09:52 AM · On: Too Many Thoughts
marvelous chapter. brian is ashamed of being an amputee? i can't believe it. that's not our brian. he should be glad he made it out alive if anything. ben is so wrong about his perception of brian. brian made some deal with michael. about justin? what was it about the lights that made justin collaspe and go into convultions? residuals from the bashing? more soon please.
Author's Response: he's not ashamed. Thats the thing you'll find out in the next chapter. HE feels that he should be because of Claire. But he's not, he's ashamed cause he's not ashamed. isn't that weird. Don't worry our Brian will be back on track real soon.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2008 09:31 AM · On: Too Many Thoughts
i loveee it keep updating
Author's Response: i will and i'm glad u liked it.
Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2008 09:26 AM · On: Too Many Thoughts
Awww, G-gal that was too sad (tears, tears, tears). Good chap. Looking 4ward 4 more.
Author's Response: okay good i thought i might loose readers when it came to the one legged wonder but i promise the story is going to be great. Thanks for the kind words. YOur kind words keep me going.
Reviewer: sarahrei (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2008 08:16 AM · On: Too Many Thoughts
Jesus...Bri/Jus are quite the messed up pair. I would like for Bri to find out what is going on w/ Jus. I think it would be kind of nice for Bri to be in on the deal (know about Ben) but the family (except for Vic) still not know. I kind of like those secrets where you sneak around. Makes for some interesting interludes and good reading.
Author's Response: Hey you stop reading my mind Maybe that's what's gonna happen u never know. You gotta wait until tomorrow.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2008 03:44 AM · On: The Rescue
hi love da story plz update soon
Author's Response: your wish is my command updating now.
Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2008 07:03 AM · On: It's a Mystery
I just wanted to let you know that I read this whole story in one sitting and I just love it!! I saw the movie so many times til it wasn't funny so I was really impressed by the way you put a QAF twist to this romantic story...I just ache for both Brian and Justin...I can't wait to see what happen on that bridge...What is the other injury that Brian has is the other mystery!! Oh please hurry and update...Also I love that Emmet is a doctor..you go boy!! LOL
Author's Response: i'm glad that you liked it. And yes i made Em a doctor don't you think it's swell that i made him something else that not so womanly. He's always an designer or stuff like that. I'm going to make him be his flamboyant loving self and be a respected professional.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2008 06:02 AM · On: The Rescue
oaky why r u making us suffer plz do one chap hell do half a chap as long as u post it can u give us something of this wonderful story we ok I NEED AN UPDATE SOON cuz im deing without it jk lol im a bit of a drama princess lol i got that from watching qaf 5 yrs strait UPDATE UPDATE HUGS AND KISSES p.s. sry if a sound rude i dont mean to it just that i lovee dis
Author's Response: Well i'm glad that you like it and i promise that soon i'm going to update. It'll probably be tomorrow though but it'll be worth the wait.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2008 01:21 AM · On: It's a Mystery
Oh my! So Brian has a bad hand and something tragic happened on the bridge involving his mother, father and sister? That was so heartbreaking seeing him in such pain while near the bridge with Justin. I wonder if he even remembers what happened and that Justin was witness to it? Love that our little Em is a doctor!! And so much for Vic telling Deb the truth! How can anyone tell her anything when she spazzes out like that all the time! =) Great update, looking forward to the next!
Author's Response: you know Deb always the drama and then no one can tell her anything. I think deep down she knows that Mikey isn't wiht Justin she's just hoping.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 06:28 AM · On: It's a Mystery
jack did something on that bridge that killed joan, and maybe claire and caused brian to be burned. why would brian think it was his fault. was there an accident that he thinks he may have caused to happen? justin has to get through to him and i think by ignoring the burn scars he's going to. if only justin could stop the charade of this thing with michael then brian wouldn't have to be alone. now the mystery is, what was in the crate and what did gus find in the box that he feels he should tell his mother about? why didn't vic tell debbie the truth?
Author's Response: yes something awful happened up there on that bridge. To be explained really soon.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 06:19 AM · On: It's a Mystery
Excellent chapter! This story just keeps getting better. Love how you're weaving it, giving us little hints and clues into Brian's past. Can't wait till the next update!
Author's Response: yea that's how i draw you in. hopefully a new update tomorrow.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2008 04:48 AM · On: The Rescue
hi just curious r u updating the story today grate chapter i love it plz write more than 1 chapter a day
Author's Response: hi i meant to but not going to be able to cause My Mikey which is my son. He just got a dog so now he thinks he a dog and i'm not going to be able to but tomorrow i promise and it'll be EXTRA LONG. thanks for reading keep on coming back.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2008 03:05 AM · On: It's a Mystery
ayyyy poor brian i fell so sad for him im glad that ur still wit us i thought u have forgotten us lol i love dis plz update soon dont keep us waiting sooo mush
Author's Response: i promise the next update will be faster
Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 02:24 AM · On: It's a Mystery
Wow! This chap was intense... I'm really looking 4ward 2 next chap. Curiosity if building.
Author's Response: yea the next chapter will be full of a lot so be ready to have to hold on
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2008 04:37 AM · On: The Set Up
hi galesgal where r u? why r you making us misarable i want to read more plz update asap plz like rite now i dieing here
Author's Response: real life is taking over with avengenace so if u haven't take the time to check out my story Whisper... and i promise the update for this is well worth the wait it's all lengthy and everything.
Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 08:03 AM · On: The Set Up
This is so cool update soon plz
Author's Response: i'm glad you're feeling the story and i'll update soon i promise.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2008 02:37 AM · On: The Set Up
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: more to come just keep coming back and they'll always be more well until it's done and then you'll ask for a sequel.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2008 01:02 AM · On: The Set Up
omgomgomg now this is wat i call a story its great i loveeeeeeeeeee it dont stop keep goingg we wont get mad if you keep going lol
Author's Response: well i'm a feedback junkie if i get feedback i'll continue and i'm getting feedback so i'm going to do everything in my power to continue.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 12:26 AM · On: The Set Up
I'm so curious to know what happened to Brian to cause his PTSD. So he is onto Justin, this will be interesting. Glad to see an update, understand about RL. We'll patiently await the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yea we learn about Brian's PTSD in the next chapter, well not exactly but you learn another piece of the puzzle. I'm glad that you guys are enjoying this one.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2008 10:08 PM · On: The Set Up
i am so confused. what happened to brian that he can walk but from i gather not well, but can't drive a car without hand controls. why is emmett still living with him? i enjoyed this chapter but am still lost. going back over previous chapters.
Author's Response: you didn't miss anything. It's part of the back story. You know that in my story i like to have two things going on at once. it's part of the back story. See Justin feels that he can't accomplish anything or can be capable of anything because of what happened too him. When he figure sut what happened with Brian and in spite of all that what Brian has accomplished it's going to help him want to get his life back. Which will make him fall even more in love with Brian which will make things worse once our sleeping beauty wakes up.
Reviewer: Rachel (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2008 09:17 PM · On: The Set Up
poor Brian thinking he looks disfigured, I wonder whats with his legs that he has hand controls in the car, and what happened when he was 14 Im sure we will find out soon, great chapter
Author's Response: yes all will be revealed soon please keep reading.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2008 09:08 PM · On: The Set Up
Loved the twist of Mel and Linds. You have sooo many things happening, Ben, Brian's scar & his car controls, Vic knowing, Justin Great chapter, can't wait to see how everything goes.
Author's Response: Yea more to come with Brian's scar. It's not just on the face.
Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2008 04:20 PM · On: The Rescue
enjoying the story...good job! i like the different way the characters are interacting-especially Mel and Brian! I don't find the idea of Michael and Justin yucky-as the characters are usually out of character it does not really matter does it?-I know I may be in the minority here! I read most stories(not too keen on Mpregs though!) regardless of which pairings are involved...I enjoy exploring other pairings...I am working on one now that will put the cat amongst the pidgeons, I am sure! hah hah! I view them as stories from the writers imagination and as such I enjoy going to places I have not been before. i do lean towards Brian/Justin but if someone has taken the time to write them with someone else i tend to give the story a chance. oops looks like i turned this review into a rant...apologies.x anyway thanx and update soon.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it and i hope you take the time to read the rest of it.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2008 02:14 AM · On: Welcome to The Family
OMG YOU ARE KILLING ME HERE THIS IS A GREAT STORY SO FAR BUT PLEASEEEEEEEEEE COULD YOU WRITE MORE THAN ONE CHAPTER A DAY EACH TIME THAT I FINISHED READING THE 1 CH I ALMOST FAINTED AND DONT GET ME STARTED IN CHAPTER 2 ITS GREAT BUT IM AFRAID ILL HAVE I HEART ATTACK IF YOU KEEP WIRTTING LITTLE BY LITTLE THANKS KEEP UP THE GOOD JOB
Author's Response: lol. Didn't they tell you i'm tease i love that you are loving this. i'm enjoying all my responses. So okay okay maybe i'll try and make it two chapters aday. Well keep watching the new chapter will be up soon.
Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2008 06:27 AM · On: The Rescue
Hi, gg I adore this story for some many reasons: 1) great job on blending several of the QAF characters in one biological family (everyone so appropriate placed in the family) 2) Excellent job on combing QAF bashing with the While U Sleeping stories. 3) I just love the Ben on the sideline twist. Seems this is going to be a fun story. Looking 4ward 2 updates. '
Author's Response: Yea well there's going to be good twists. Big twists and turns thats what it's all about. Keep looking cause there's more to come and it will blow you away.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2008 09:22 PM · On: Welcome to The Family
I am really interested in this story. *g* Looking forward for more.
Author's Response: i'm glad that you are liking this story. i'm going to try and update everyday so keep checking back.
Reviewer: Isabelle (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2008 02:53 PM · On: Welcome to The Family
Brian seemed so lost and damaged, and Justin also seems very lost and damaged so they will be good for each other. I like Emmett and Brians friendship, on the show I always liked Brian and Mikeys friendship because they were so close and would do anything for each other but it wasnt a sexual relationship and that kind of seems how Emmett and Brian are in this story. I cant imagine Justin having the hots for Mikey but thats just imo. Gus being 16 is so cool, I love fics where Gus is a teenager and the fact that Brian doesnt let barely anyone touch him but he lets Gus was so sweet and adorable. I hope Gus helps Brian and Justin get together. Ben was adorable in this too he loves Mikey so much
Author's Response: Yea i like stories where Gus is older also because he can interact with the rest of the players better and yes he will partly be playing matchmaker.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 02:14 PM · On: Welcome to The Family
a bit confusing but fun. now let me get it all straight. brian lives in WV with emmett. michael was or is dating david, but is having an affair with ben. mel is rich, gus is sixteen, and i don't know about lindsay. brian is justin's dream guy and fell in love at first site. do i have that right?
Author's Response: yea Melanie is not rich she's more settled like Brian. Cause in this world Brian and Melanie are Gus' biological parents. it'll be explained in the next chapter. Yea i made him older cause he's going to be helping justin with his lie without even knowing it.
Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2008 01:55 PM · On: Welcome to The Family
This is getting so interesting! What's the deal with Brian and Emmett? I'm can't wait to see Brian and Justin interact!
Author's Response: there interactions begin in the next chapter. Emmett and Brian have an interesting relationship and then it's not a relationship at all.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2008 01:06 PM · On: Welcome to The Family
Love that Brian and Em are roommates. Can't wait for more of that story. I sense more to the last line of this chapter 'No Mikey wouldn't do something like that could he No way' Perhaps Brian likes blonds?, or Brian has had premonitions about blonds..... Great story.
Author's Response: Yes there's definately more to that line. You'll get the picture in the next chapter i'm glad people are enjoying this one.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 12:39 PM · On: Welcome to The Family
Loving this story! Love the twist you put on it. It appears Brian is a tragic character in this, lots of issues, Love it. I love that you like to tear down your characters then build them up again. It's angsty, and makes the story more intriguing to me. I will definately be following this one!
Author's Response: Yea i'm all about the building you up and breaking you down. It's just how i operate. Yea Brian has a lot of problems which will be revealed. He's different too as in his appearance and that'll be explained later. Yea i'm all about the angst. I'm glad u like it.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 12:36 PM · On: Welcome to The Family
This is really good. I look forward to reading more! So Brian has set his sights on Justin, wait until Justin sees Brian!
Reviewer: Rachel (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2008 12:11 PM · On: Welcome to The Family
wow, does Brian and Justin know each other, cause when Justin looked in Gus' eyes he thought they looked familiar and why would Brian say Mikey wouldnt do that when they said Justin was his fiance? Im so relieved that Ben knows that Justin isnt really engaged to Mikey or he would have been so hurt, but I wish Ben would tell Justin he is with Mikey so its all out in the open well between them two atleast. I cannot stand to wait for the next update, I am hooked!
Author's Response: okay well yea it would be better if justin knew about ben. and usually i'm not one about blowing things but i'll help you out. okay so justin said that gus' eyes were familliar, and then brian said that brian wouldn't do that to him. okay you have to go back to other parts of the story. remember justin said that a man had saved him after he was bashed rode in the ambulance with him but he was to good looking to be real? oh and remmeber justin said that when she would come to the hospital to see justin a guy was there covered in blood but he'd run? it was brian. Brian knows a little about Justin Taylor. He has problems of his own if u hadn't noticed the little crumbs i left to state that fact.
Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 10:03 PM · On: The Rescue
Hi, Galesgale, out of respect for you I deleted my discussion reviews from your space after the discussion between me and another review was resolve NOW LET"S ALL HAVE SOME Fun lol.
Author's Response: yes please let the fun begin.
Reviewer: Lauren (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2008 09:47 PM · On: The Rescue
OMG luv it! While M is in a coma and his famiy thinks they are engaged will J know they arent? like J will know but feel like he cant say anything? Then he will meet B and they will fall in love and oh the tension will be on fire. Squeeling with delight
Author's Response: Okay i agree maybe she didn't have to call her a name but i agree with everything else that she says. and yea you'll love the movie.
Reviewer: Aimee (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2008 09:37 PM · On: The Rescue
This is the last comment I will make I dont want to take up space, Brianwriter I was referring to you name calling the other reviewer, I am in no way saying what they did was right but name calling isnt needed, I see your points but name calling is just silly, we should be nice to each other and that goes for everyone. Galesgal I wanted to add that I am going to see this movie next chance I have it sounds fascinating
Author's Response: damn i did that again so now i have to answer the other post on ur answer. Yea no one will know about the no engagement for justin it will lead to lots of confusion and tension.
Reviewer: Milly (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2008 08:53 PM · On: The Rescue
Never heard of this movie but after reading this I think I will go see it if its anything like your story it should be a good nights viewing
Author's Response: Expect chapter 2 later today if i can get out and yes it's funny as hell.
Reviewer: Aimee (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2008 08:47 PM · On: The Rescue
I have to admit I read the reviews before reading as Michael and Justin is not something I would want to read but the story idea sounded fantastic so I read the reviews and saw your replies to earlier comments and am excited to read more and see where you take this, I have been reading your other story on here and am very much enjoying that one. Brianwriter should chill out so what if someone said they though Michael and Justin would be yuck together heck there will be alot of people who think that, the summary was slightly confusing in the sense it didnt actually let the reader know if they would be together and I will admit I am happy to find out they wont because the story line for this really is amazing but whatever the stories are meant to be fun people should stop getting so serious in the reviews and insulting people and telling them to eat a lemon relax and have some chocolate. When can we have chapter 2? Its funny too because Ben being Justins uncle is something I can really see, it suits them
Reviewer: Maxie (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2008 04:07 PM · On: The Rescue
This is an amazing story idea! I can't believe no one has done this before now! I can't wait to see how you finish the rest of the story!
Author's Response: Thanks Maxie. Actually someone else did one that i just finished reading but they didn't follow the movie format. Mine does, in there version they put Brian in the coma and they made him wake up but mine will find the format of the movie. Keep checking back updates to come shortly.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2008 02:31 PM · On: The Rescue
oh my god... I like this. please update soon :-)) rose
Reviewer: Sasha (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2008 02:13 PM · On: The Rescue
I havent seen the movie so Im unsure of the plot so is this right Justin is in love and going out with Michael but then he falls in love with Brian which is Michaels brother? Am I brave enough to read Justin and Michael together I wish I was because thats an awesome plot but I wish it was someone else that was Brians brother I just cant take Michael and Justin and I dont understand how anyone could think Michael was hot, Im not a Michael hater but I still dont think hes hot at all
Author's Response: Justin is in love with Michael from afar. He's never actually been with him just crushing on him. He saves his life and because of comments made by others people think they are together. It's all about assumptions. Brian comes into the picture and is sure that mikey can't be dating justin. while trying to prove that he's right and they are not dating he's slowlly falling in love with justin and vice versa.
Reviewer: Katie (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2008 02:07 PM · On: The Rescue
justin thinking mikey is hot and having a crush on him = yucky, lol its sad because I really wanted to read this but when I saw that i just couldnt read it!
Author's Response: okay first of that's not what the movie was about. See in the movie the person was in love with the guy they saved without actually being with them. He's family thought they were together but truth be told they never were. Just like in this story Michael and Justin are never together people just think they are. He meets Brian and falls for Brian all while trying to keep the lie that he and mikey are together going. Please give the story a chance you'll like it.
Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 01:41 PM · On: The Rescue
Hey! You... You're a beautiful writer... so easy to read... modern style (i.e., fast pace and doesn't bore the reading... keeps the reader's attention, reader can easily visualize the events going on). Can't wait 4 next chapter. I'm on board! And here's 5 stars to you.
Author's Response: why thank you for such kind words.
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