Bye bye, Ian. :)

Hilarious!

Will Hunter become a part of this story as well? Like he and Jon keep in touch or what? Also, when will Jon meet his little brother Gus? I hope this whole drama gets over with soon, so we could read cute/fluff/family/and smut! ;) Update soon please! 

Nooooooooo!! You can't stop now!!! OMG! I won't be able to rest till I know who it is now! **pout** I'm waiting... **soften a bit** It was a very good chapter thought... **return to pouting** But why the hell did you stop like that- I mean I know why, but it is not fair... You're mean... Yeah, I know I'm childlike but, I sooooooooooo want to know...

Arghh..what a spot to leave off!!!!  Glad you are back can't wait for more.

nothing like asking for trouble with those two.

okay, what else is going to happen? can you keep mikey in jail for a while?

Author's Response:

I wish I could keep him in jail forever :)

I could feel it. The pressure was dropping, the wind picking up, the water rising, and wispy strands of clouds passing overhead. A hurricane was coming, but I had no idea from where and thus what hatches to batten down. Of course, it happened a lot sooner than I expected and was a lot worse than even I imagined.

Very nice imagery & foreshadowing! :)

 And the fact that a blow job blew their cover - hilarious! :)

Author's Response:

Your review got me beaming :D :D :D

I'm happy you liked my use of the BJ

great chapter. what a domestic scene. if only brian could see it.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Whoo hoo! My lucky number ;-D

 

WEll, actually it's pretty much EVERYONE'S lucky number... lol :D

Brian should recognize that "mask of indifference" that Jon is wearing. I'm glad Jon opened up to Em about everything, he really is just a scared kid.

Author's Response:

Yes, indeed he should (and maybe he has :) :) :) )

hilarious, love Emmy

Author's Response:

I'm so happy you enjoyed this chapter :) :) :)

Excellent chapter. Keep up the great work!

XOXOXOXOXOXO

Ok, a final detailed analysis of your work. The plot is very entertaining; your volume of adjectives is breathtaking and a joy to read; your characters are so in sync especially Emmett; the drift from canon very believable; the assertive Justin makes you want to stand up and cheer for him "You go girl".

I suspect the hustler will  replace Justin at Debbie's when Justin moves out (me quessing here). Stockwell is going to be dangerous for our lovers so you set up for some intense drama in the future; the peeping tom Emmett is so funny and his corny lines so like him I laughed till my side hurt with some of them.

The sex scenes have only one answer: you were a gay man in a past lifetime or you have a very good correct imagination for details how we boys get it on; we love it rough and most girl writers don't show that but you proudly do and with accurate details. The neck biting is very popular for real.

I'm very glad I took the time this afternoon to study why your work is loved and I totally enjoyed myself with a well deserved break from writing. Thank you! 

Author's Response:

I think you just made my month :D :D :D

fluffy sweet surrender

Author's Response:

I hope it seemed in character for Brian given the circumstances.

The part about Come What May is one of the many tidbits from my life that end up in my stories (sometimes in Justin's mouth/background, sometimes in Brian's). That part of the song always makes me cry and for the very same reason it gives Justin a bad case of allergies. I was so worried that people would find that super cheesy.

the plot thickens and wonder how this turns out for B and J

Author's Response: This was one of my unplanned developments :)

woooooooooooooo.....

Author's Response: This was my first action scene (I think ever). I was super nervous.

We call that ramming it in without lube honey. great job.

Author's Response: Thanks! I love tormenting Ian.

I'm so enjoying this story

Author's Response: I'm glad. I was anxious about the whole date part.

LMFAO! good smut!

Author's Response: I'm happy you enjoyed it :) :) :)

great plot development.

loved the ending too.

Author's Response: That's great to hear :) I know it starts off goofy.

I want to smoke what you're smoking.

Author's Response: That's a nice way of saying that I'm a freak. lol. I know I am :D

Damn you; I'm not writing if I'm reading. I'll have to steal your adjectives to make up for the lost time. Towel warning worthy chapter here.

Author's Response: I was a little nervous about this one. I'm too shy to be flirty in R/L, so my imagination is always working overtime when I try to make one of my characters flirty.

I am really enjoying this story.  I find it interesting that you have the character of Emmett seeing everything.  It makes sense since in a lot of ways.  The way the character was Justin's friend in the series. etc.

Can't wait to see what you have Michael (and Brian's reaction to Michael) do next....

Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying Em's pov. It's certainly been a blast writing it :) :) :)

LOVE my Emmy Lou!! Michael had that coming to him for a long, long, long time!! I might read this again =)

Author's Response:

I'm so happy you enjoyed this part :D :D :D

I couldn't agree more (that Mikey had it coming)!

Oh yeah! See Brian, that wasn't so difficult. I'm glad they worked that out.

Author's Response:

Brian does always make mountains out of mole hills (in the romance department)...

I'm so glad you enjoyed this part :)

Justin better say yes! He knows how Brian is, Em was right...this was Brian's golden opportunity to ask Justin to move back in.

I'm so loving this story! I love that its in Em's POV. I think out of anyone in the family, he would be the one to really see and understand the dynamic that is Brian and Justin the most. He's also the only one who wouldn't tell Justin that Brian would never change or try to keep Brian in his "Stud of Liberty Avenue" mode. He's a great and supportive friend to both of them. Man, I just love this idea!! Can you tell? LOL!

 

LMAO!!! Only Brian and Justin could pull off something like that. Too funny! I always thought Em had a slight crush on Justin...cute =)

Obviously not, silly Justin. I love it when Brian takes charge even if the poeple he takes charge of don't, hello what are they thinking?

This is so cool, another one of your fics I have now caught up on, go me. Do you intend to finnish or add to this one, just so I can keep track. I hope you do, I love it.

Author's Response: Yes I do plan to finish this one. I actually need to update it soon (it's been too long). I'm so happy you are liking it.

Brian is being so sweet, he does the date thing really well :)

omg how awful ethan being there when their date was going so well!

Author's Response: I hope you like what I did with Ethan :D

I love Brian wanting it to be a good date for Justin. He could give him flowers, chocolates and be really attentive to him making sure he has everythinh he needs, holding hands hands, kissing his check etc, update soon

hi, I love it, they are soooooo cute and hot, and see justin fucking so hard to brian is heaven and more when brian beging for he to do it.

poor emmet he has to be are eyes for this and I see how much he is suffer jiji =)

 kisses

now emmett knows why brian and justin are just so perfect for each other.

i hope joshua helps emmett out.

Author's Response: Indeed :) Joshua will definitely 'help' Em out :D

i can't wait to see it all go down.

Author's Response: I'm so happy that you are excited about what is to come :)

Hmm, very suspicious. I wonder who they really are.

Author's Response: I won't keep you in suspense too long :)

so they are but they aren't the masked duo. let the craziness of having emmett join them begin.

Author's Response: Yeah, Emmett always livens up the party :)

I finally understood why Justin used to put up with Brian’s tricking and why he still put up with Michael’s nonsense. At the end of the day, in the darkness, words fade to silence and the tricks, into nothingness, leaving only electricity, heat generated deep within, and bodies that speak “You’re the air that I breathe.”

I absolutely love that. This chapter was exceptionally hot! Love Emmett the voyeur and I cheered for Brian right along with him!

Author's Response: That's so great to hear :D

Awww! Way to go Justin!

Author's Response: The boy does have skills :)

Nice. A new and very inovtive way of pissing off Stockwell.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like B/J's form of political engagement :D

I love this. Is there more chapters to come?

Author's Response: Yes, there will be. Very soon.

Loved what Brian said to Michael...and I love Emmett's POV. Update soon please.

Author's Response: Brian's outburst was so much fun to write (yes, I am evil). Glad you like Emmett's POV. He really is the perfect narrator...always optimistic (or nearly always) and a hopless romantic.

I liked your story:) Can't help but wonder if Brain ever really becomes tempted and what he would do if he was?

Author's Response: I'm so glad your enjoying this fic :) I'm not sure I know what you mean by tempted? Tempted to trick again? To tell Michael where to go? To be monogamous?